Date: 13 Nov 2013 7:23 AM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights
I wonder what would of happened if Bella never went back to see Edward at lunch. Would of he of tried to see her to make things right. I love Edward but he seem to get away with treating Bella badly.
Date: 13 Nov 2013 12:44 AM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights
I really like how you have made bellas recovery realistic. In other ff where e is hurt... bella quickly is fine. But going through any loss would hv effects. Especially bella in tjis story! I looooove this fic! One of my gaves going in my list of all time faves!
Date: 09 Sep 2013 11:14 AM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights
I think your story is great but unfortunately I am calling it quits. I made it all the way to the Friday night chapter but damn this site is so annoying with constantly having to affirm my age, I'm just over it.
Congrats on a great story, (what I read).
Date: 02 Aug 2013 6:18 PM Title: Fold Your Wings
Well...I think I've been waiting for like...over a year? I bookmarked this so I could come back when you insisted the Tory? Why is it taking soooooooooo long? I started this when it wa till on ff. I was devastated when they bloked you...found you here and the rest is (a very long) history...I f-ing love this story from its beginning to oe (although I'm starting to get fed up with Bella's ' I don't know how I feel')...think TVD's and Elena's constant waffling. Gah. Enough with the angst and 'waffling'! Does she or doesn't she. Get to it!,
PLEASE...enough already...please get these two very damaged souls together so they can be "perfectly imperfect together".
I do love this story...cannot fathom why people would go ape-shit! I KNEW from the start this was headed in an incredible (god) direction...plus "freedom of speech" and all that
you go, girl!
Date: 27 Jul 2013 6:04 PM Title: Control
Really enjoyed your story, just the right mix of detail to paint an awful picture but not so much it made you feel sick, if you know what i mean. Actually loved the Paul twist at end, bless that was sweet. If I was to critique I would say edward fell too quick was hard to see the depth of his feelings. Your emmet was adorable, and loved the 'mercs' they were really well written, and the torture bit again just the right amount of info. Really good story, thank you x x x
Date: 31 May 2013 10:17 AM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights
Just wanted to let you know how much I am enjoying the story - I usually don't review until the end, but I really had to say how hooked I am. You have been rec'd repeatedly by various people on the FB page for 'Sarge's Girls' and I couldn't hold off any longer. (The poor to-be-read list got a shake up, I'm afraid.) ;)
Don't know how you feel about this, but in case you don't mind and would like to know I used Flagfic to get a copy of the story so I could read on my Kindle when I can't access the computer. Everything was fine, I thought, until one day when I came back to the laptop and realized I was not getting the chapter end notes. Evidently, Flagfic is not picking those up as part of the 'story' or chapters. Some people complain bitterly about author's notes and would probably be thrilled - I'm not. I like the A/N's and was disturbed to realize I wasn't getting them. Thought about going through Fanfiction.net, but your notes there say it's been edited. We can't have that! :) Anyhoo, I'll drop a line to someone who works here (an admin I think) and I know is a fan of Flagfic, but I thought you might like to know as well.
Loving the story and I know you'll hear from me again. Thanks for all the hard work and putting it out for me to enjoy,
Date: 20 Apr 2013 8:49 PM Title: Fold Your Wings
A couple years ago I began to read this story. However I ended up forgetting the name of this story. A few days ago I stumbled upon it again and was excited that there were chapters I had not read yet. I know that you haven't written anything for this story in quite awhile. However, I hope you have it within you to come back and continue on with this story. You are a great writer and I seriously want to know how things will turn out for these two characters.
-A long time fan :)
Date: 10 Apr 2013 6:10 PM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights
if i wanted super informative medical knowledge i would read a medical journal. its fan fiction people, you read because of the stoty not the jargon about cystic fibrosis for fucks sake! some people are wierd, enjoy the story, stop sweating the small stuff people...
Date: 10 Mar 2013 6:18 PM Title: Fold Your Wings
Well it's about time she tries to make an effort. Edward has tried so hard over the past few months. Bella needs to go and see a therapist, she has way too much baggage and has been carrying it around since she was very young. She really doesn't know how to deal with emotions. Even if she hadn't entered into the arrangement with Edward she would have struggled with a normal relationship. She just used to tie it down with working so hard and being so tired with school and work. Once she figures that out then she will start to move forward. What a pair these two are, both too fucked up for their own good. Thks for the updates, Debbie
Date: 09 Mar 2013 12:23 AM Title: Fold Your Wings
Bella and Edward seem to be sparring as to which has the most miserable life. Neither makes their needs known, and Bella looks for guidance from the strange behaviors of Edward and Renee. Great role models they are not
Date: 06 Mar 2013 10:19 AM Title: Fold Your Wings
The bomb is certainly ticking in Bella...how long before Edward finds out about her LOVELY parents...and how long before Bella goes off the deep end? Love how Bella is slowly letting Edward in and in need of his friendship..she needs to cling to him and maybe both of them will have a chance!!! Awesome chapter...please keep them coming!!! xo
Date: 06 Mar 2013 10:01 AM Title: Fold Your Wings
I want to envelope both of them in a huge hug.
My heart goes out for Bella. Nobodys beloved daughter. Nobodys wife... Such a lonely life. Edward and Bella can complete the holes in each others lives if they can just take a leap. Bella must make the first step.
I wonder if Edward remembers the same things Bella does, at least with the same longing? Is it only remorse he feels?
such a great story. Can not wait for more.
Date: 06 Mar 2013 8:41 AM Title: Fold Your Wings
Woww..amazing chapter and thanks for update! Many revelations ... I like Edward more open ... Bella just missing that step. I want to know more about them .. I want to make friends .. so I'm very eagerly awaiting the next chapter! ;) Thank you for this wonderful story! xoxo
Date: 05 Mar 2013 7:42 PM Title: Fold Your Wings
So that explains a lot. Jane took him for a ride big time. He killed himself to support himself, Jane and the baby, that he adored. And it turns out that she played him huge. Sounds like the biological father has custody of her after all he did. No wonder he felt angry about what happened! He hated himself for being taken advantageous of and was heartbroken to have the baby taken away from him. Wow! Like I said, that explains sooooooooo much.
Date: 05 Mar 2013 6:29 PM Title: Fold Your Wings
An update, an update, an update!! *runs around room jumping and squealing *. Thank you. I love this story and want so very, very much to see it completed. Of course now I have lots of questions that HAVE to be answered. Just keeps getting better and better. Thanks again
Date: 10 Feb 2013 2:05 AM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights
I hope he's starting to ask himself questions so he can get a clue because his idea of explaining what was going on with the Bimbo surely won't make Bella feel better about him or how she feels.
Date: 02 Feb 2013 2:06 AM Title: Fold Your Wings
This writing covers so many important points from a side not heard. Except for Renee's explanation. Some of Edward's actions as he explains is getting past Bella's defensive barriers and she is just a little angry. Good for her!
Date: 31 Jan 2013 5:07 PM Title: Fold Your Wings
Bella found a large elephant in the room at the Cullens. And surely Alice will share with Esme. Then Bella finds a bigger elephant in the supply closet. Knowing she enjoys the lack of reality when she is with Edward is healthy.
Date: 28 Jan 2013 10:22 AM Title: Control
What a story!! You told the difficult story of what Bella endured very well. Everything, good & bad,
had a purpose and needed to be said. Your talent showed even more when you were able to pull off some "funny" in the midst of it all.
P.S. LOVED how u put polyvore links for all the pics right inside each chapter!! I WISH more authors would do that. Makes it so easy to visualize & so easy to click on it right away!! Thx!
Date: 21 Jan 2013 7:43 PM Title: Fold Your Wings
This fic is so good, sorry I haven't reviewed so far but I just couldn't stop reading it. I'm all caught up now in two nights. Looking forward to how this plays out, will Bella get the therapy she needs or will she just keep trudging along. Hopefully by the time they end up back in bed together Edward will be able to stand her touching and kissing him. Thks for sharing, Debbie
Date: 11 Dec 2012 5:06 PM Title: Fold Your Wings
I just came across this story today and could not put it down. It sucked me in from the beginning. I am trying to form words in my head to explain the love for this story. It's not working at the moment,however I just finished catching up so I may need some time to digest the story. Excellent writing and visuals.