Date: 01 Dec 2012 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 10: Of Raspberry Jam and Rivalry
I'm not gonna lie, I got a bit teary at they end bit with Carlisle. He just needs an Esme so badly.
Also I was really hoping to get to go to sleep at a reasonable time tonight. It's total bullshit that your story is this amazing. :D
Date: 01 Sep 2012 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 24: Of Wishes and Watches
What the heck?!
Yeah, I got a feeling that that scenario probably wouldn't be too far off the mark. It's easy to imagine he would do anything & give up anything before he's actually lost anything. In the midst of his loss it doesn't feel the same.
Date: 30 Aug 2012 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 1: Of Rituals and Really Big D***s
"Sounds like fun,” I sighed, then at the sight of his toothy grin, I felt my own mouth curve into a smile. “Do I get my own drum?” Heh. He said member.Very funny & light hearted intro & then 'bam'. What a great start. I can't wait to read more.
Date: 15 Jul 2012 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 30: Of Fear and Fate
i dont kno any mother tht would risk exposing their childs life by asking them to come home to a house where they it is almost guaranteed he will get sick ...i am enjoying this story but i cldnt not say anything about tht.
Date: 21 Jan 2012 11:58 PM Title: Epilogue, Part II: Of Marriage and Memories
Soo....I was supposed to be writing and doing constructive things, but instead I read till one am yesterday and all day today up until midnight. It was so awesome!! Great job! I love how you twisted things just so. Brilliant!
Date: 26 Jun 2011 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 8: Of Butting Heads and Birthday Parties
I am having such a good time reading this! I wasn't sure I wanted to read historical fiction, but I just love the chemistry between modern-day Bella and 1918 Edward. I laughed out loud at the banter before the sack race and am still snorting over her falling down. Thanks for writing!
Date: 05 Jun 2011 7:07 AM Title: Epilogue, Part II: Of Marriage and Memories
aww that was a sweet chapter and as much as I didn't care for Carlisle and his feelings for Bella I did enjoy listening to his take on it. That was very heart felt and I really did like reading it from his thoughts.....
Date: 03 Dec 2010 12:39 PM Title: Epilogue - Of Final Farewells and Facing the Future
Wonderful story absolutelybeautifully written. It had everything I could possibly want in a story - drama, suspense, humour, I laughed out loud at times, pathos, a lump in my throat once or twice. I'm sad it's finished but oh how I enjoyed reading it & congratulate you on your excellent storytelling skills.
Date: 28 Nov 2010 4:56 PM Title: Epilogue - Of Final Farewells and Facing the Future
You did an VERY GOOD job with this story! Have so enjoyed it all! I look forward to any and all upcoming stories you do! Keep up the good work and again THANK YOU for this excellent story!
Date: 28 Nov 2010 9:30 AM Title: Epilogue - Of Final Farewells and Facing the Future
LOVED It.. don't know what else to say but I loved it.. how you wrapped eveything up perfect like that.. tying all lose ends.. and the part with Maggies..family ohh perfect... just enjoyed this story so much from the beginning til the end.. thank you so much for taking us on this journey.. so sad it's over.. but it ended. perfect.. just loved it.......... wish she would have found her first ring though.. *stands up and claps loudly.* whoot whoot.
Date: 27 Nov 2010 10:35 PM Title: Epilogue - Of Final Farewells and Facing the Future
Thank you for writing this story. IT has been a joy to read and the curiosity killed me for most of it. I loved your characters and I loved the ending.
Please Please and outtake or two.
Date: 27 Nov 2010 10:31 PM Title: Epilogue - Of Final Farewells and Facing the Future
Loved this story and I am sorry to see if finish. I thought for sure something would have happened to Bella's contraceptive method in 1918 and she'd some how end up pregnant in the future. You're ending I like too.
Date: 27 Nov 2010 8:19 PM Title: Epilogue - Of Final Farewells and Facing the Future
I loved this story from start to finish! I am sad to see it end.
I really hope that you do another period piece. You have a real talent.
Miriam stood and approached me, holding out the wooden box. “This belongs to you,” she said. “I know Gran would be thrilled to know you finally got it back.” I took the box from her, trailing my fingers over the warm inlaid wood. Unable to control my curiosity, I flipped open the top of the box, gasping when I saw its contents.
Maggie had kept my things. My mementos of my time in 1918…my time with Edward.
On top was the framed photograph of Edward and me at our wedding that I’d kept on my dresser. I couldn’t hold back my smile at the look on his face, so joyful and eager, just as I remembered. I handed it to Edward and he studied it for a moment.
“This is how you knew us,” he said to Miriam, and she nodded.
I smiled, feeling a heaviness in my chest as I pulled out one treasure after another – the silk purse I’d bought when I first came to Chicago, still with a handful of coins inside…the lace handkerchief Edward’s mother had loaned me for the “something borrowed” at my wedding. She’d died before I could return it. The pearl necklace Edward gave me on our wedding day. The silver hair combs Samantha had given me…the blue garters I’d worn under my wedding dress. I smiled as I handed them to Edward, realizing this was truly the first time he’d actually seen them.
I told the story behind each item as I revealed it, a little embarrassed at sharing some of the more private ones with Miriam and Mary, but so grateful that they’d kept my belongings I couldn’t keep the information from them.
“We kept your car for years,” Miriam told Edward at one point. “Gran really fought us when Dad wanted to sell it, but she finally gave in. I’ve kept track of it, though. A collector in Michigan bought it in 1962. He donated it to a museum in Detroit when he passed away, if you’d like to see it sometime.”
Edward nodded, thanking her for the information as he looked through the little pile of remembrances in front of him. I turned back to the box.
There was only one item left – a silver disk gleaming dully on the red velvet lining…a chain curled lazily around it. Unsheddable tears gathered in my throat as I lifted it reverently.
“This is yours,” I said to Edward softly as I handed him his pocket watch. His eyes flashed to mine briefly before returning to the watch. He took it from me tentatively, smiling as he flipped open the lid.
“I gave that to you for your birthday,” I told him. I was aware of Miriam and Mary leaving the room quietly, as if realizing we needed a moment alone. It appeared at least a portion of Maggie’s vision had been passed on to her descendants.
Edward read the inscription under his breath. “To Edward…with all my love, Bella. Beyond Time.” He smiled at me. “That seems appropriate.”
I laughed lightly, laying my head on his shoulder as I watched his fingers brush over the watch. “Yes. Even more than I thought when I gave it to you the first time.”
Date: 27 Nov 2010 5:37 PM Title: Epilogue - Of Final Farewells and Facing the Future
so good.. what an absolutely perfect last chapter... Thank you so much for your creativity and dedication to your story. It was a wonderful journey, and I will miss the updates in my in box.
Date: 27 Nov 2010 4:37 PM Title: Epilogue - Of Final Farewells and Facing the Future
So sad to see it end but love how you did bring it all to a close. It was fitting to have her visit Maggie's grave. I kept waiting for Bella to pull her wedding ring out of the box Maggie had been saving for her.
Anway, I loved this story and can't wait to see what you come up with next.
Date: 27 Nov 2010 4:22 PM Title: Epilogue - Of Final Farewells and Facing the Future
Great ending to a wonderful story. Thanks for putting something on fan fiction that is intelligent and well written. There were no "lags" in this story and it never lost steam, as many others do. I've read quite a few stories, and this one is certainly at the top of my list!! Thanks again for a great story. I'll look forward to seeing more from you!!!
Date: 14 Nov 2010 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 20: Of Making Out and Missing Persons
Whew...ok- an intense chapter!!! I have to admit I kinda shared a tear...maybe two.... when it came to Alice´s goodbye! That really was sad!
And OMG- the whole James incident! Effing James!!!^^
Date: 14 Nov 2010 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 17: Of Hot Kisses and Horrifying Visions
Uhm...ok...first of all- The Edward/Bella make-out sessions are absolutely hot! ^^^
Alice´s visions are really freaking me out,though!!! And I guess it´s safe to say I´m a bit confused also but that is more due to my brain than to your story ;D
I don´t know why but I get the feeling that Alistair could be the guy in the alley or is at least up to something else...maybe...?!?!
Really love this story
Date: 14 Nov 2010 9:47 AM Title: Chapter 35: Of Confessions and Committments
*stands up clapping * yay.. thank you for explaining a few things I was confused about and wondering. And thank you so much for letting us know what happened to everyone... after Bella left.. Loved the whole part with Emmett being Liz's step son... it is a small world
I'm so glad Edward and Bella worked their problems out and so glad they got to have sex again cause that would have sucked not getting it then getting it all the time when he was human to not getting it again..lol
Loved this story so sad the end is coming but all good things must come to a end huh...
Date: 14 Nov 2010 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 14: Of Squealing Fangirls and Surprise Visitors
DId Alice really just appear in 1918?!?! ;D
This is just getting bette and better!!! I´m really curious about how evrthing will turn out! All this excitement here!!! And a drunk Edward to top it all ;D