Date: 21 Mar 2013 6:00 PM Title: Devious minds.
Interesting story with lots of unanswered questions. Do you plan on finishing?
Date: 09 Aug 2012 4:22 PM Title: Devious minds.
Please update!!
[Report This]Date: 29 Mar 2012 5:04 PM Title: Devious minds.
loved this chapter and story so far! can't wait to read more of this story later!
[Report This]Date: 19 Dec 2011 7:26 AM Title: Devious minds.
PLEASE PLEASE update soon! i love this story! its so wicked! ♥
dont give up on us please :( *serious pouting*
Date: 29 Apr 2011 10:31 PM Title: Devious minds.
This story is awesome, please continue on....
[Report This]Date: 20 Feb 2011 1:48 AM Title: Devious minds.
A lot of secrets, twists and turns. I'm anxious to see how this turns out. I know Bella has some sort of plan up her sleeve. I hope she gets the Hell away from both Edward and Robert. They have some serious issues. Granted, Edward is being manipulated by Robert but come on, he's clearly fucked up too.
Date: 03 Feb 2011 5:26 AM Title: Devious minds.
Have you dumped this story? I have not read anything quite like it, and would love for it to be continued. Could you let us know?
Many thanks, Debra.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2011 5:28 PM Title: Devious minds.
Rob is a dick. Hurry and write more... sometimes having a Beta can help... it gives you someone to bounce ideas off of and help develop/perfect your story. Just remember... we're here for you and obviously, from the reviews; people like your story!
~xoxoxox~
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2011 5:03 PM Title: Only Way
Oooooh that Robert is a devious SOB!!! I can only image what poor Bella is going to do or say when i hit the little 'next' button!!!
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2011 4:16 PM Title: Twisted.
well we all need a little f*cked up past, now don't we...???
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2011 4:13 PM Title: Dead.
you did it magnificantly... sadly but brilliantly. you should be very proud of this chapter! i felt everything Bella was feeling as I read it. THAT IS IMPRESSIVE! 10++++++++++
~xoxoxoxox~
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2011 4:05 PM Title: The more, the merrier.
OMG... can you say spontanesous combustion?! wow... Wow... WOW!!!
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2011 3:50 PM Title: Rob makes three.
ROB Is soooO bad. So he's the influencer in this, huh? Does Mom and Pop know about the brothers little fetish? Will they share Bella openly in front of their family? Wow... this could get really twisted, huh? Cool story. Seriously... very interesting concept and well written. It doens't make your skin crawl the way I was afraid it might... (that's meant as a compliement but not sure it sounded like one... )???
~xoxoxox~
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2011 3:39 PM Title: Married: Continued.
Gee... this Edward is kind of a twisted, sick f*ck... I LIKE IT!
Very curious to see where this goes... I am pimping to all my friends; with your disclaimer of course but I'm sure they can handle it!
~xoxoxox~
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2011 3:48 AM Title: Prologue.
wow... twisted but sexy as hell. reminds of a the movie "Dead Ringers" with Jeremy Irons... any chance you recall it? OR... I might be telling my age... ROFL...
Either way; I'm very curious to see what direction you take this very sensitive subject!
~xoxoxox~
[Report This]Date: 15 Jan 2011 5:48 AM Title: Devious minds.
Although this is some twisted shit I am loving it!!
WTF is going on with Carlise and Esme? Was the baby Jaspers. I hope there is NO sex with Robert and Edward that would just be so very wrong. Why don't they (R & E) know that Esme is not their biological Mother? And what the hell happened to Aro and Elizabeth?
You know you can write your azz off with some really let's just say some very special erotic stories. Love it!!!!!!
Snuffy10/LaShaun
Date: 03 Jan 2011 1:04 PM Title: Devious minds.
wow.... i wonder how bella feel
Date: 29 Dec 2010 8:48 AM Title: Devious minds.
Please update, I usually hate BDSM! BUT your devious Bella has caught my attention.
Date: 02 Dec 2010 12:18 AM Title: Devious minds.
I like this stiry))
and i hope you continue this story
Date: 28 Nov 2010 4:49 AM Title: Devious minds.
I hadn't realized that you had continued this story. Just happened to find out on Twitter. So glad to have found it.
Keye
Date: 27 Nov 2010 6:07 PM Title: Devious minds.
Just found this story! And can I tell you how addicted I am?
Date: 22 Nov 2010 12:30 PM Title: Devious minds.
I just read all 16 chapters in like two hours could not stop reading it! So intriguing can't wait for the next chapter
Date: 29 Oct 2010 10:51 PM Title: Devious minds.
love it please update soon
Date: 28 Oct 2010 1:34 PM Title: Devious minds.
wow.
So ready for the next chapter please.
Don't back-off now.
Date: 21 Oct 2010 8:38 PM Title: Prologue.
Hey are you ever going to finish this story
Date: 24 Sep 2010 10:32 PM Title: Devious minds.
This story is so different from anything that I have read. It was VERY interesting. Hope to get an update soon. Thanks for writing for us.
Date: 08 Sep 2010 12:56 PM Title: Devious minds.
Love the story, but God, I'm really hating Rob. Edward is so oblivious of everything going on between them, I hope he figures things out quickly or Bella is going to be bruised and bitten beyond endurance. Please update soon.
Date: 04 Sep 2010 7:46 PM Title: Devious minds.
Rob seems like a right wee shit. I think I really love this story. You've portrayed interesting dynamics between all the characters. The little snippits of information regarding past events definitely holds the reader's attention and has been very well written.
An excellent concept that has been portrayed brilliantly!
~Anna-Margaret
xx
Date: 20 Aug 2010 1:44 PM Title: Devious minds.
Wow..... I love it
Date: 17 Aug 2010 5:45 PM Title: Devious minds.
excellent chapter.. Robert is so fucked up.. Please continue..
Date: 09 Aug 2010 5:58 PM Title: Prologue.
Wow... that was really fucked up! But, I kinda like it ;)
Date: 08 Aug 2010 12:05 PM Title: Devious minds.
Rob is taking his frustrations out on Bella because he can't have what he wants. He doesn't surprise me that he is so rough with her. Great chapter!
freakybella
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2010 6:33 PM Title: Devious minds.
Rob is twisted! Maybe they will get lucky and he will have an accident?!
Date: 29 Jul 2010 2:55 PM Title: Devious minds.
I feel bad for Rob. I mean I cant even imagine the connection between twins but I think I can and I can understand his jealousy. He just wants to be loved too. I actualy like the threesome. I wish Bella would enjoy it more.
Date: 29 Jul 2010 2:20 PM Title: Only Way
I knew it was Robert all along. Well thats strange that she cant tell the difference.
Date: 29 Jul 2010 1:30 PM Title: The more, the merrier.
again just a repeat chapter. But at least Rob described the shock he felt when he touched her. So I am going to stand by my thought in this is going to backfire on Edward.
Date: 29 Jul 2010 1:17 PM Title: Rob makes three.
WEll this chapter was basically the same thing only in Rob's pov. But at least we know that he is the aggressor.
Date: 29 Jul 2010 1:09 PM Title: Married: Continued.
yeah that was mean to cut it off right there. lol. But I guess you know best.
Date: 29 Jul 2010 12:35 PM Title: Courting.
WEll he sure sucked her in. He was very manipulative. But what shocked me most was that Jasper killed Alice? Gosh I have never read that in a story before.
Date: 29 Jul 2010 12:18 PM Title: Fantasy.
wow what a fantasy, but I bet in comes true.
Date: 29 Jul 2010 12:07 PM Title: First Sight.
well this chapter was short. Plus I really dont like to read flashback chapters it takes away from the experience I think. I cant wait to get back to the present.
Date: 29 Jul 2010 11:57 AM Title: Prologue.
WOW well I am sure Bella got the surprise of her life. But I am willing to bet that this might backfire on Edward. I think maybe Rob might fall in love with her and want her for himself. I guess only time will tell.
Date: 28 Jul 2010 4:13 AM Title: Devious minds.
Wow..this story is really hot but quite disturbing. I see were you going with this and I would really like to see it to the end. So PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update as soon as possible!
Mahalo!!!
Date: 25 Jul 2010 11:02 AM Title: Devious minds.
WOW! :)
Date: 24 Jul 2010 7:45 AM Title: Devious minds.
rob is one seriously disturbed boy, i cant imagine how this is going to work out for bella and edward, thanks tracy
Date: 24 Jul 2010 12:28 AM Title: Devious minds.
wow good story
Date: 23 Jul 2010 10:33 PM Title: Devious minds.
well it would seem that bella's pov in this one would nt have been emotionless but filled with rage. and it looks like both rob and bell are trying to steer eddie in their direction, ed is gonna have to choose at some point. i wonder what it will come down to?
Date: 23 Jul 2010 10:17 PM Title: Questions.
well that was kinda fucked up. it seems miss bella is a keen observer, and is seeing a lot more than anyone is giving her credit for.
as for the robbeing bi well in theory that is cool and could be hot, especially ina threesome but ewwww he likes eddie that way!?!?! that is icky i mean it is not only his brother which is just wrong but he is his twin, i mean that is just...ewwww!!!
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2010 6:18 PM Title: Devious minds.
Robert needs help and Edward needs to wise up.
Author's Response:
Hi there :). Thanks for the reviews...the characters are not going to end up all wonderful by the time the story ends, but hopefully everyone will understand where they are all coming from.
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2010 6:07 PM Title: Questions.
So Robert is in love with his twin? That a bit sick but lets face it they are both sick. I am so glad Bella is keeping them at a distance even if she is having sex with them. They do not deserve her love.
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2010 5:58 PM Title: In the mind.
What a mess. I love to see how this pans out.
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2010 5:54 PM Title: Only Way
Robert is just down right evil.
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2010 5:47 PM Title: Emotions
I am so glad Bella is not such a wimp.
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2010 5:42 PM Title: Secrets.
Robert certainly seems to be the more crazy of the 2 but they are all fairly insane. I wonder what Bella has done?
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2010 5:35 PM Title: Twisted.
Gosh all the Cullen's are completely f-uped.
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2010 5:29 PM Title: Dead.
Come on Bella do not kill yourself over those 2 a-holess. Edward fooled you bit he put a lot of time and effort into it.
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2010 5:24 PM Title: The more, the merrier.
What's up with these two they are just not normal. Lets hope Bella gets to enjoy them both as its obvious they will not let her go.
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2010 5:16 PM Title: Rob makes three.
Interesting chapter. What does Robert mean he moulded Edward?
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2010 5:12 PM Title: Married: Continued.
Hmmm I find your Edward really creepy. Lets hope Bella enjoys it rough.
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2010 5:05 PM Title: Married.
Wow the whole family seems to be insane. Run Bella run.
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2010 4:56 PM Title: Courting.
Edward is down right scary. Liked the Alice/Jasper reference.
Date: 23 Jul 2010 4:34 PM Title: In the mind.
<3
Author's Response:
<3...lol, love the reviews :D.
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2010 4:31 PM Title: First Sight.
Are Rob and Edward mentally ill?
Date: 23 Jul 2010 4:19 PM Title: The more, the merrier.
<3
Date: 23 Jul 2010 4:16 PM Title: Rob makes three.
<3
Date: 23 Jul 2010 4:13 PM Title: Married: Continued.
<3
Date: 23 Jul 2010 3:55 PM Title: First Sight.
<3
Date: 23 Jul 2010 2:51 PM Title: Devious minds.
great update - worth waiting for! :)
Date: 22 Jul 2010 3:53 PM Title: Devious minds.
What a screwed up relationship. Great job on Rob's POV
Date: 22 Jul 2010 5:44 AM Title: Devious minds.
Wow, "Devious minds" is right. I'm sure I'm completely alone out there in feeling a little sorry for Rob, he's devious, but he's messed up from witnessing that tragedy. It's like his obsession with Edward is about loving and protecting that innocent part of himself. Of course he went and corrupted that part{Edward}, which kinda destroys that exact angle. ha So Bella was a bit devious this chapter herself, which is probably good for her, so she can regain some of her sanity that I think was slipping and her relationship with Edward.
Can't wait for next chapter, thanks for update.
Date: 22 Jul 2010 2:30 AM Title: Devious minds.
Love the story so original
Date: 22 Jul 2010 1:49 AM Title: Devious minds.
wow good story confusing though write more:))
Date: 22 Jul 2010 1:09 AM Title: Devious minds.
Mean mean person!
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2010 10:30 PM Title: Devious minds.
Holy crap! Rob has some serious fucking issues! This story always leaves me with my jaw on the desk.
Date: 21 Jul 2010 10:14 PM Title: Devious minds.
I think he's in denile. Yup, said it.
Date: 21 Jul 2010 7:59 PM Title: Devious minds.
Rob sounds very manipulative and he says Bella is being manipulative? I like the story, but I really don't like Rob at all.
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2010 5:48 PM Title: Devious minds.
This story is well worth the wait and is totally unforgettable. I've never read a story anything like this so beside being totally unique remains hot and intense-very intense. Rob's anger coupled with his love for Edward and desire and anger for Bella raise the intensity level tenfold.
Date: 21 Jul 2010 5:22 PM Title: Devious minds.
that is the first time I receive a update, is so good to see you dont abandoned this story !!! this chapter was hot and I´m crazy to see where this is going lol but now I wanted kill Robert!!! please update soon??? ;D
Date: 21 Jul 2010 5:19 PM Title: Devious minds.
Rob is one evil dude. Hopefully Edward will see just how bad he is and defend Bella.
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2010 3:14 PM Title: Devious minds.
That was intense!!! Love this story.
Date: 21 Jul 2010 2:14 PM Title: Devious minds.
its been so long and spaced out I don't remember the questions that I had...I know Carlisle is a bit of an odd one and esme is in denial or shock or something...but its been too long for me to remember what is going on and what I need to be looking for
Date: 21 Jul 2010 2:09 PM Title: Devious minds.
God, this story is so dark and twisted. I feel so bad for Bella. Can't blame her for trying to off herself at first. I wonder if Edward will ever figure out how messed in the head his brother really is. Robert is truly sadistic.
Cheers,
Balti K
Date: 21 Jul 2010 1:28 PM Title: Devious minds.
Rob has a mean mind and character. But he isn't the only one, apparently Bella is determined to follow her plan, what ever that plan might be, it is still unclear. All we have for now are Rob's conclusions and ideas.
Edward is naive, or he simply prefers to see what he wants, and nothing else.
Rob has conflicting emotions towards Bella, he seems to hate and need her at the same time. Can it be that in is strange way he is falling for her?
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2010 9:05 AM Title: Devious minds.
Damn Rob really has issues poor Bella and Edward. I think Alice's murder really fucked up Rob and Esme to an extreme degree. Rob in the family business this should be interesting. Until next time. No problem I'm just glad for the update to tell you the truth. I'm glad Edward stood up to Rob a little bit anyway.
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2010 7:01 AM Title: Devious minds.
ROB need to die!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2010 7:00 AM Title: Devious minds.
Wonderful update!!!!! Loved it!
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2010 6:42 AM Title: Devious minds.
thanks good chapter