Date: 05 Jun 2013 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 8: Bella - DAYS 3 & 4
This is crazy. There is no way that Bella cannot have more control over herself. It is unrealistic. If a woman is afraid and in distress, there is NO WAY IN HELL that she could be able to get turned on and cum on top of it. I know that this fiction but come on. So not happening. I'm a little frustrated to tell you the truth.
Date: 05 Jun 2013 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 6: Bella - DAY 3 PART B
Why is Edward sucking of Carlisle any man for a matter of fact. Shouldn't he be with a mistress and not a master unless he is bi or gay. I don't see the reasoning behind putting him in such a scene!
Date: 12 May 2013 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 4: Bella - DAY 3 PART A
when she receives pleasure from something she hates and despises to have to be done to her that means james isnt the one she's meant to be .. whether being in that school was right or wrong for her , james is DEFINITELY wrong for her ~~
Date: 11 May 2013 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 1: Bella - DAY 1
can i please shake some sense into her .. i get that this is a fic but there are millions of Bellas like this one in the world .. it's one thing to enter such a world willingly and complete acceptance and to be forced into it like that ..
Date: 08 Mar 2013 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 52: James DAY 20 PART B
I've enjoyed this story so far, but I'm itching to see something happen to this poor excuse for a human. If I had my druthers, I'd hang him from his heels, castrate him with a dull rusty knife, then stake him out, spreadeagle, on a fire ant hill in the middle of the desert.
Date: 08 Dec 2012 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 1: Bella - DAY 1
I can't read past the first chapter, the website send me to the warning page with age consent when I click on "next" and then it send me back on chapter one and if I choose another chapter among the chapters list it just send me back on the warning page....Is that normal?
Date: 18 Sep 2012 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 78
Okay...so I couldn't stop reading long enough to comment on individual chapters ;p. Let it suffice to say that...oh my your brain scares me! Even scarier is how much of a turn on it was! What a ride - Whew-ee! Thanks for sharing!
Date: 16 Jul 2012 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 15: Edward - DAY 7 PART A
God, I feel so late to the party.
Tell me, fine friends, what should I read next if I'm a FSOG fan who's following the fantastic redredred (sunandsurf here) and also love to bits this story?
What next? I wait your command.
Date: 15 Jul 2012 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 9: James - DAY 4
I am only on chapter 10, but I am surprising myself at how much I'm enjoying this read. I'm on my iPhone, at the beach, and the best news is that there are 30 more chapters still to come.
You have pleased me.
Date: 20 Jun 2012 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 78
This is my first time responding to a story I have read. I just finished reading The Training School and I wanted to let you know that I have spent the last six months trying to find a story that engrossed me as much as 50 Shades of Grey did. I finally did!
Your story was the best one I have read....thank you for taking the time to write, build the characters and sharing the story!
Date: 03 May 2012 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 18: Edward - DAY 7 PART B
I don't know if you still get reviews for this story, but if you do, I just wanted you to know that I can't help myself. I had to read it again. I've missed you terribly for the longest time, and I'm so, so proud of all you've accomplished with TWCS! Congratulations and job well done!
Date: 12 Jun 2011 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 58: Edward DAY 21
Poor Victoria...I can't even begin to imaginf waht she must've been through being tied up on a bed with a ball gag and nothing to eat or drink in almost 2 days...Always afraid of James coming back and forcing her to have an abortion...
Date: 12 Jun 2011 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 57: James DAY 20 PART C
Oh this is better than I could've imagined!! Now he gets to taste his own medicine!! *evil chuckle*
I hope they will make his every second there a nightmare...
Bella and Edward should get a go on him, too...!
But what about Victoria?? Will she be found on time?? But I guess Bella will save her, she knew James was not there, when her mother broke in but knew that someone was...Bet she'll think about that the nbext morning and have someone look in or she'll go herself with Edward...
Date: 11 Jun 2011 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 49: James DAY 20 PART A
How can one person be so ful off himself?? He really thinks he is godlike and perfect?? He so far from that and so far from being a "real man" like he puts it, it's not even funny anymore...This stupid little shit.
Oh yeah. The baby gives Victoria strenght. Now she just needs an opportunity to get awy from him. And if she does I get the feeling she will go straight to Charlie to tell him what James did. This be great...!
Date: 11 Jun 2011 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 44: James DAY 17
Omg, he can't have a kid. He is in no way able to be a father or anything to anyone...He is just too fucked up!!
Plus he just hit another low for deciding to not even tell her about her pregnancy. Didn't expect him to turn around his attitude or even giving her a choice in the matter, but not even telling her? Asshole...
Date: 11 Jun 2011 6:27 AM Title: Interview with the Master
That was a funny chapter! I loved the interview. And I'm glad to know that Carlisle was a little suspicious from the beginning and even more so since the meeting. I loke him a hell of a lot more. =)
Date: 11 Jun 2011 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 43: Bella DAY 17 PART A
She should really start to look around. I get why she's feeling the way she is, all alone not able to trust. But the freinds she's seeking are right in front of her eyes - Angela and Alice. And if she thought really haard about it, the school wouldn't seem half as bad to her if she realized that the others are here on their own accord and enjoying it. She just can't enjoy it cause it wasn't her wish to go there and she didn't know what to expect...Poor girl.
Date: 11 Jun 2011 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 42: Edward DAY 16 PART B
Mike got exactly what he deserves...He really didn't understand what it means to be a dom...He proved that with his "You fuck women who don't want it all the time. I thought that's the fucking point."
He rally thought they give him a free pass to rape women...Stupid jackass...
Date: 11 Jun 2011 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 41: James DAY 16 PART B
Oh please let him get suspicious...No one can be that blind to not see Bella is afraid to death of him and not at all pleased with the thought of pain play and being branded...
And this call to her father...He simply needs to doubt her words and go in looking for her...
Date: 07 Jun 2011 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 32: James - DAY 12 PART B
I can't believe how smoothly everything went for him so far...But with his ever growing ego he made a couple mistakes like the meeting with Carlisle and getting the needle from the vet by saying he was a friend of one of the doctors...I hope they'll be noticed soon and all comes crashing down around him...
Date: 06 Jun 2011 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 29: James - DAY 12 PART A
I hate James more wwith every chapter in his POV...
I sincerely hope Renee and Charlie will be able to blow this abusive fucker's cover.
Good to know Victoria still has a tiny bit of sense left in her...It won't so her any good since it will only make him increase his efforts to break her, but nevertheless it good...Hopefully he won't be able to break her comletely...
Date: 06 Jun 2011 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 28: Bella - DAY 12 PART A
I loved the lesson Bella had with Edward. I could totally understand her frustration with Esme, she would have tried my patience too if I were in her shoes...
I hate that stupid as fuck Mike...I hope he'll be caught in time and get the shit beaten out of him...!
Date: 06 Jun 2011 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 27: Edward - DAY 11
I had guessed Alice was into pain from her reaction in the dungeon, but I was a little surprised at the extent. But I think it suits her and Jasper. =)
But I guess Bella wouldn't like the intense pain of clips...but who knows what she'd explore with Edward...?! =)
Date: 05 Jun 2011 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 13: James - DAY 6
What a sick fuck he is even thinking about dog tags with a chip in them...But this is so like him it shouldn't even surprise me...
He'd need a lesson in submission at the school, too. He should experience for himself what he wants the women to do for him. He'd appreciate it a hell of a lot more...
Date: 05 Apr 2011 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 1: Bella - DAY 1
Wow. Great story. I'm glad that I stuck with it because it sure was hard to take at times. James was a disgrace and deserved everything he got! And I have to say, Carlisle & Esme both disgusted me for most of the story. I realize they had no clue that Bella was not there of her own free will...but their behavior was atrocious as well..Esme had no compassion,,, I wanted to sock her & beat Carlisle senseless for his disgusting attacks on Bella!! :(