Date: 14 Aug 2012 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 19
i dont like leaving negative reviews because i know you put your heart into what your writing but bella has to be either mature or imature. seeing jacob and hiding it is extremely imature. whichever way you choose to write bellas character is the right way, it just has to be consistent through out the whole story. thank you for putting your story out there though. i am enjoying it.
Date: 12 Aug 2012 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 13
well if we are going with honesty, im glad the kidnapping is resolved. when i read a story, i know that i am intrusting you, the writer, with my emotions. i dont mind angst, but when it comes to little kids, i like it resolved quickly. i would have enjoyed a more creative way in which emma was found, but i think you are doing a good job telling the story, thank you for sharing it with us.
Date: 07 Apr 2012 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 20
Oh I absolutely LOVED IT! And what happened to the others stories? I want to read them SOOSOOOOOO BAD! But they'll never be finished and I really wish you could. I hated when u started aging them up to 7 years. I was afraid it was gonna be one of THOSE endings. You know the ones that they get all old and then the readers left feeling like I need a better story for next time lol. Hope you will someday continue . . .
Date: 14 Aug 2011 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 16
Oh shit. Things are going to get scary aren't they? I think Bella is acting pretty much the same way a lot of us would in the same situation. JMO. There has been so much going on with everything, and she's got to be going stir crazy being in the house all the time. I know she wanted to take back the lie she told Edward, and I have a bad feeling about that. xo
Date: 14 Aug 2011 11:37 AM Title: Chapter 11
I feel so tense, this is killing me! You've written such a good story. xo
I hate Kate so much, she is so selfish. She's convinced herself that what she's doing is justified, she doesn't really care about her daughter or she wouldn't be pulling this bullshit! Arggggg!
Date: 14 Aug 2011 10:51 AM Title: Chapter 10
I knew it! I had the feeling this was going to happen. I was on the edge of my seat this whole chapter just waiting for this to go down. That fuckin Kate; I want to kill her, even though she's just a fictional character. I'm so emotionally tied up in your story that sometimes I forget that! =)
Date: 14 Aug 2011 8:20 AM Title: Chapter 5
My heart kind of aches for these two. I swear it's so easy to misunderstand things and jump to conclusions, especially when you are so far away from the person you need to talk to. I am just so wrapped up in your story; I absolutely love it. =)
Date: 14 Aug 2011 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 3
I don't know if this is the right word to descibe your story, but I think it's so sweet. I know E/B have quite large obstacles to overcome, but of course anything worth having is never that easy, it takes work. **Then we have the Jake factor; I wonder how he's going to try and screw things up.**I'm still in love with your story, by the way. =)
Date: 18 Jan 2011 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 20
Robicorn this story was great and i really, really , really loved it. I'v alway loved your work!!!!!! This is the first time i've been on this site,,,,, i'm alway on fanfiction reading and i read your work as well. You never disappoint!!
Date: 08 Nov 2010 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 20
So I really liked the story a lot. Although there are a few things that left me confused. In the beginning Emma's middle name was Grace then it changed to Antonia. And twice in the middle of the story Emmett went from being a Cullen to being a McCarty and back to a Cullen. I guess I am still not sure who the real sibling is, Emmett or Rosalie. Other than that, it was fun to read.
Date: 01 Nov 2010 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 20
I liked how E & B got together so quickly and didn't deny themselves each other for very long. the middle of the story was kinda frustrating. I didn't like how the story revolved around sadness most of the chapters with the kidnapping then dealing with Emma's issues from Kate and then Bella's difficult depression. I know that life isn't a nice box of chocolates, but sometimes you just want E & B to be happy.
This was a good story. I like that it was Kate and not Tanya getting mixed up with Edward. Tanya is so evil and frustrating usually.
Thanks for writing this.
Date: 20 Oct 2010 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 20
I am glad this story ended on such a good note. It was hard to read the last couple of chapters...I thought they would never get through it all! Bella said it right about being imperfectly perfect. I enjoyed how you wrote this last chapter through the years. I enjoyed your story overall...but got a little weighted down with all the stuff that happened to them. I'm a wuss! Thank you for writing.
Date: 20 Oct 2010 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 17
I think mothers of preemie babies have a tendency to feel guilty because they didn't deliver a term baby. Please don't have Bella go through baby blues! I am glad that Edward came to his senses...even if it had to be yelled into him.
Date: 20 Oct 2010 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 16
Sometime we forget that Bella is only 19 yrs old....she is tempting fate with her denial. Preeclampsia can be so dangerous. To her and the baby. Damn. More problems...no insurance now. Why couldn't her parents pay the COBRA until their grandbaby was born?! They suck! I can only imagine all the stress these two are facing...I'm stressed and I'm just reading! LOL!
Date: 20 Oct 2010 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 15
Bella and Edward are just not getting any breaks are they? Bella bought the dog to make Emma happy and then she won't talk to her the next day... Edward is stressed by work and money and now feeling he has to pick up even more at home because of Bella's condition. How can Bella not be stressed? This has been an awful year for them. Sigh!
Date: 20 Oct 2010 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 14
I thought it was going to take time for Emma. Kate hurt her terribly and as a 4 year old she just doesn't understand. I am glad that Bella trys to stay positive. It's difficult when you are constantly being rejected. It's tough for all of them.
Date: 20 Oct 2010 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 12
Kate has got to screw up some way. Poor Emma thinks her Daddy doesn't want her anymore. Sad. Bella being pregnant is so bittersweet for them. It would be hard to be happy when your first baby has been kidnapped. I hope they get her back soon.
Date: 20 Oct 2010 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 11
I hope that Riley turns Kate in. Though it has been two weeks, so it doesn't seem as though he will. I am glad Bella is there for Edward. Poor little Emma. At least Kate didn't tell her that Edward was dead. Will Emma try to escape and find her daddy? enjoying.
Date: 20 Oct 2010 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 10
Love this twist. I briefly thought that Kate would try to take Emma when she was so pissed about Edward taking her to Philadelphia...but I thought she took the money for drugs. Way to surprise me! Oh and Bella came to support Edward. Yes! I hope they find Emma soon, Edward is already falling apart. Loved the way you wrote his emotions.
Date: 20 Oct 2010 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 9
I hope that Bella cleans up her drinking. I hope it's just the momentary depression over Edward. Edward doesn't need that, especially with the way Kate just acted. Sounds like she's back to using. I love how concerned Carlisle is about Bella and her relationship with Edward and Emma. After Kate who wouldn't be? I hope that Edward gets his internship in PA and that he and Bella keep talking. They still have a lot to go over. enjoying.
Date: 20 Oct 2010 11:01 AM Title: Chapter 8
I am glad they talked and Bella told Edward about the abortion. She was only 16...a kid having a kid...Edward is right...all that happened in the past brought them to the present. Edward said he loved Bella and she loved him. So will Edward get the internship in PA? Poor Drunkella! LOL!
Date: 20 Oct 2010 8:59 AM Title: Chapter 7
I love your Jasper...he really got Bella to make the decision to call Edward. She wanted to...but Jasper gave her that boost of confidence. I wonder when Bella will tell Edward about Mike and the abortion? Edward knows, I am glad he's waiting for her to tell him and that they are trying to take it slow. Emma is so cute! So is Kate really backing off of Edward? She wants to watch Emma...I would worry about that, I guess. Enjoying!