Date: 24 Feb 2011 11:04 AM Title: Confessions - BPOV
she is not going to be with edward right??
i dont like edward he is super heartless, a taken girl is off limits no matter what you feel i understand bella view now and edward is a butt
Date: 17 Aug 2010 8:35 PM Title: Confessions - BPOV
I hurt for poor Em and B, they had an awful childhood. Great chapter.
I know, they had such sad childhoods, but Emmett is happier now and Bella is getting there :)
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Date: 17 Aug 2010 7:12 AM Title: Fix it - RPOV
:-/ oh no don't be sad jazzy! And Rosalie is the peacemaker how cute!
She was acting peacemaker, but she also wasn't that nice to Bella, really, the way she was doubting Bella (Rightfully so) and asking Emmett to tell on her ...
I know right! Poor Jazz!!
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Date: 16 Aug 2010 6:09 AM Title: Fix it - RPOV
Rose was very confusing to me in this chapter.....It's almost like she already knows but going through the motions like a friend should.. I dont' I mean when she talked to Bella she more or less admitted she didn't believe her. .When she talked to Emmett she just kept demanding to know if they slept together..Why wouldn't she want to know if they've been doing anything.??Or is kissing and touching Not cheating to Rose......i don't know her conversation with Emmett was odd..... But then she turned around and defended Bella to Jasper but when Jasper more or less called her a slut (talking about how she was before they meant her) Rose didn't say that's not true....Can't wait to see how Bella acts towards Edward now...... HE did nothing wrong so this better not be thrown back at him...he didn't know Bella had a boyfriend at first.. This is all Bella's fault.. Maybe Jasper and Edward should talk ... cuz they both were kind of lied too.. Great story can't wait for next chapter.
Hello Sexy Lady!!
Rose knows what Bella was like before they met her maybe better than Jasper. She was messed up. She knows that Kissing and touching is cheating, and she's pissed at that, but as well as being worried about the cheating she's worried about B and what it could mean for her. Well, pissed and worried. Bella's backstory - well parts of it - come out in the next chapter and then hopefully you'll be able to understand how Rose is worried about Bella.
Jasper and Edward will talk ... or I suppose 'communicate' would be a better word ...there isn't so much actual talking going on.
Bella and Edward will definetly be seeing each other again.... I mean, they go to the same school and have the same friends. We shall see what happens! ... There are a lot more people campaigning for Team Edward!!
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Date: 09 Jul 2010 10:56 AM Title: Tacos are Better - BPOV
OMG Bella is playing a very dangerous game.. i mean she is either in very huge denial.. or she is just the biggest liar in the world........ I mean she did cheat on him.. Yes they never had sex, then say we never had sex........I have had sex with no one but you.. if you don't want to admit to messing around...... she didn't have sex she almost did but Jacob disrupted them......
But damn she has managed to fuck up 4 lives... i mean Rose and her will never be the same. Jasper is heartbroken, Edward is lost not knowing what games she is playing and Emmett will be caught in the middle between his loyality to his best friend Edward, his possible new girlfriend Rose... or the new friendship he has developed with Bella...... Actually Alice is about the only one who will not be directly hurt but even then she won't like that Bella played with Edwards emotions like that....... i don't know... this is so messed up it's like Bella feels she can live two different lives one with Jasper and one with Edward and now she realized she can't........ I mean i don't even know what to say.......i mean anyone with eyes saw how Bella was with Edward she never hid it ....... and she damn well knew Jasper was coming to that party but yet she still hang on him... I think she needs to realize she has more then lust for Edward because you don't act like she did knowing it would get back to Jasper.. I mean all he has to do is ask people around town .. the way she acted at schools and parties and leaving with him.. and the truth or dare....... not cool.. Poor Jasper and Poor Edward..... i feel bad for both of them.....
Date: 08 Jul 2010 2:45 PM Title: Wild Nights! - BPOV
OK well that answered that question... Rose got her in ass about Edward..
Now i forgot to say on the last chapter what's up with Edward won't kiss Lauren on the mouth but he fucked her without a condom??? WTF....
I will be honest I kind of skimmed over the sex with Jasper and Bella.. so i can not comment if it was hot or not....(sorry).. i am the totally B & E girl but i really do like Jasper.. just not doing Bella...
Now what was that with little miss Alice...... and how she acted when she saw Jasper.......and the blushing...... (all embarassed).....hmm interesting.. although I don't think Jasper noticed Alice......he seemed a bit pieced off over Bella's reaction and looks towards Edward.....had to laugh a bit how he noticed Bella wanted to know who was behind that door and beat some bitchs ass.
poor Edward seemed so hurt.... i felt bad for him. i really do cuz Bella is playing games with Edward big time.. she is leading him on.. . yes he knows (now ) that she has a boyfriend but when she is all hanging on him and kissing him and asking him please to fuck her...... what is he suppose to do ..and now when her man is back she flauts her relationship with Jasper in his face.........and that is bullshit........... and Bella needs to stop...it's not fair to either Jasper or Edward........SO i say dump Jasper and run to Edward.. lol
He did use a condom ... it was like movie sex - you just don't see it ...
<3 Jasper! All Jasper sex is hot! I could rec you so many hot and awesome stories with Jazz!!
Poor Jasper! Don't you feel bad for him... moving all the way out there and then seeing Bella all over this other guy?! Poor baby!
Nooo!!! I say keep Jazz and leave Edward!! .... You cheer Team E and I'll be Team Jazz ... we'll see what happens .. it's a hard choice! Hell, you can always console Edward and I'll make Jasper better if it goes wrong for them ...
Date: 08 Jul 2010 1:49 PM Title: Wankward Returns EPOV
OK i was going to ask and kept forgetting did Edward even know she had a boyfriend?? Cuz i didn't think it had every came up before with him.. and now she just told him.....after he said she was a tease....
So umm ya Bella is a bit slutty but only with Edward so I guess that's OK , it's kind of funny reading how Alice doesn't know how "to dress right" in this story and it's Bella helping her with the fashion......lol... what a twist
So is James a 'good guy' in this story or is he a piece of shit in diguise??
It's hard to see James as a good guy.........Alice has to hate him for a reason..eh?
So Wankward huh?? Sounds like he spanks a lot.. like whacking off...lol
OK so Rose isn't a fan of Edwards huh.? Big shocker there...lol
But ya know it's NOT Edwards fault he ISn't the ONE in a relationship... She is , she is Wrong... so Rose can keep her judging to where it belongs and it belongs on the one cheating on her brother............plus like i said i believe Edward just now found out she has a bf. but anyways Jasper is nothing to him .........So yep before Rose decides Edward is Satan she needs to put the blame on the one who broke her brothers heart......i am so sick of everyone blaming Edward when anything happens in any of this stories between Bella and Edward.....OK my rant is over........can't wait to read next chapter.
She hasn't told him out right, but Emmett and Alice know, so he knows through them. He doesn't think too much of it before she tells him though ... I mean why would he really? If she hasn't told him, then as far as he knows she is gonna break it off with the boyfriend ... that make sense??
I wanted this story to be different lol .. That;s why Ali can't dress well, and Bella and Rose are BBFs and Alice is with the guy she will be with ,...
I kinda like James! He's hot! He's not that good ... he likes to cause trouble ... but he's not exactly bad either... He's just fun.
Lmao!! I would have told you to calm down, If I hadn't read your other comment already!
Date: 08 Jul 2010 11:48 AM Title: Lust's Passion - BPOV
Holy shit..........that girl can't control herself around Edward can she.. I mean her loyality just flies right out the window and she knew Edward for what one day?? And only left Jasper what week ago?? Ha.. not that i am complaining I love Edward and Bella together and they are hot.........that up against the wall shit......hot as fuck....... but i am dying to know what Edward said to the mutt to get him to run with his tail between his legs......
So Edward can sing and he sang a really good song and she just now figured out he was singing it for her?????? Lol
Damn so i bet Bella is wishing she wouldn't have invited Rose and Jasper down for the party...... in a couple of days.........lol
Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Date: 08 Jul 2010 9:39 AM Title: Fun Fun Fun - BPOV
Alright damn that was a pretty fucking hot kiss for a dare.........damn.. but ya i can totally understand why she got all upset afterwards.. I mean not only did she just cheat on her boyfriend but then he text and said how much he loved and missed her so ya i can see why she left crying.
so Emmett is acting really weird with Bella...... but he isn't attracted to her that way .... i was wondering if Bella was gonna remember to take a picture for Rose of Emmett.......
OK Jacob is a creepy fucker.. I mean hello they haven't seen each other in years.. they were friends when they were kids.. and he is all frowning and sad cuz she said she wants to be 'friends " then he kicked his tire..........damn get a grip weirdo... seriously.. he gives me the creeps.. did he think she would run away and marry his ass....lmao..
so damn now what will Bella do.?? stay away from Edward, avoid him..?? I hope not. that would suck.
Lol, wouldn't you kiss Edward like that if it was your dare though?? I would! Yeah, how sweet is Jazz! *sigh*
Rosie needs her picture of Emmett .... she needs to see how hot Emmy is... And, Bella wouldn't forget her friends - she does anything for them!
You'll never like a Jake though, lol. He is kinda creepy though ...
How could Bella stay away from Edward? Come on! Look at him ... It's a hard choice between him and Jazz .. I know who I'd choose though ... and it's not the same person as you :P
Date: 08 Jul 2010 7:59 AM Title: Bad Girl - BPOV
Damn phone sex was good but hard to imagine between Bella and Jasper but it was good..... It is gonna take me a bit to get use to Bella's umm what do u call it.......her forwardness towards people.. I mean i would say she was rude to Alice but i guess that is just her and she didn't mean it to be as mean as it was.. So where did Emmett and Edward go.. i mean she got a phone call and the they were gone??
That's the way i would like to wake up Edwards hard bulge in my face......lol
SO in 4 days Jasper is coming and Bella can't stop thinking about Edward... hmm interesting........ and Alice said Jasper is hot.... things could get interesting very fast........
Aww, what's wrong with Jazz... just think about how incredibly hot he is and you'll be fine with it! You do have some Bella and Edward to keep you going :P
She wasn't being rude - it was just her nature .. .I guess calling it her 'forwardness' is a good way of describing it.
Edward and Emmett left when Bella got a phone from Jazz - Edward didn't know he was her boyfriend by then really, but he didn't like the way she was talking on the phone .. he's very jealous. And Emmett wanted to grill him about what was happening with him and Bella in the car ... we all know Em has this weird protection thing going on with B...
Alice thinks he's hot - who doesn't!- but she has a thing going on with another guy, which will come out later.
Date: 08 Jul 2010 7:25 AM Title: Black and White Town - EPOV
OK what is Emmett's damage?? I mean i understand daddy is in prison but WTH , i mean he just meant Bella and he is damaging Edwards car because Edward made and comment the he starts crying?? I don't get it.
Too funny with Jessica but if Edward doesn't like the 'girls' in forks why doesn't he drive up to Port Angles or Seattle......and meant some girls.
Ok so Edward and Alice's dad is never around ... that isn't good i assume this happened after the mother died??
Emmett's mother could to him? Is she around?
UM Bella is quite the handful isn't she........first day of school and bailing.. lol
And what were her and Edward doing in the car........just like holding hands tripping on E while she sat on his lap??? Didn't quite get that part.....
You know about Emmett's issues now right?? Sorry I told you! You can punish me later!
I don't know, I guess he's lazy ... you'll have to ask him that :P He doesn't need to now he has Bella though ...
Yeah, he couldn't handle with the death of their mummy. :( Emmett's mum is around, and she'll be coming into the story later - like in the next few chapters ...
I think Bella is awesome! I wish I had the balls to walk out of school as much as she did! I could only do it a few times a week! And I always sneaked out - I didn't talk to the teachers!
Yep, they were just chilling out and taking E... you can't really ... or don't ... have sex on E - touching and stuff is all you can really do. If they weren't on E they probably be fucking there on the front seat!
Date: 07 Jul 2010 6:12 AM Title: Troublemaker - BPOV
Ok Bella is kind of a bitch huh.. now i mean i don't know the history between her and Charlie but come on that is her dad and she was also pretty rude to her mother too.. i mean she is a trouble maker admitted troublemaker but being totally disrepectful to your parents isn't cool......and she has no respect for her dad.. like to find out what's going on there...
So Emmett and Alice are not related.?? Cuz she said me and my brother Edward and Emmett introduced her as Alice Cullen .. so Emmett is dating Alice?? Or they are just good friends?
Bella invited Rose and Jasper to the welcome party? So they are going to drive all the way from AZ to Forks this weekend just to come to a party..?? Damn that's true friends cuz that is a awful long drive.......
Yeah I guess she is a bitch ... but she can be real nice as well ... what she's done for Rose is nice - she love her friends. Does that make up for the snarky bitchiness??? Bella and Charlie's relationship will be an important part of the story later on ... I think their main problem is that they just don't know each other at all.
Nope, Alice and Emmett are not related - Edward and Alice are brother and sister and they met Emmett when they moved to Forks. They're just friends - not dating!
Yep, they are dedicated friends! They love Bella and wanted to see her again - they didn't really have any reasons to not go either I guess. Jazz couldn't leave his car behind either, just like Bella.
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Date: 06 Jul 2010 11:24 PM Title: Leaving Town Alive - BPOV
Hmm so Bella lived in AZ with Renee and Phil and she did something to get her sent to her dad's but she really didn't do it Rose did and she is covering for her?? Interesting... I can't believe Rose was able to talk her dad into moving to Forks does he not know that is where Bella is moving too .. Or maybe he doesn't care...
Phil is a druggie huh damn i agree i would hate to be Renee when he goes through drug withdraw.......lol.
I can't believe they trusted Bella to drive to Forks.. So i wonder how Bella and her dad get along.. She has been to Forks before right to visit her dad? Or is he really a dead beat and she never has been to visit.. this could be very interesting.... and Jasper and Rose will be done there in 3 weeks that isn't to bad........this is really weird having Bella and Jasper in a relationship together......i am a totally Bella and Edward girl so this is kind of hard for me to read but....... since i love u i am going to continue it.
Yeah Rose did it. But Bella took the fall so Rose could still get into the good college she was supposed to. Bella was already in trouble anyway, so it didn't matter that much to her. Rosalie isn't happy about it though ... she feels mega guilt!
Yeah, I may have to do a one -shot or outtake or something of how Renee got on with Cold Turkey Phil! lol
Well, Bella had to drive, she wouldn't leave her car behind! Bella's seen her dad a few times - but not for long and they were never really close or got on well.
Aw, come on, give Jazz a chance ... he's hot! There will be some Edward/Bella moments to keep you going! I love you for reading it even though its not all Edward!
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Date: 07 May 2010 9:14 PM Title: Lust's Passion - BPOV
Cant wait to see what happens when Jasper arrives. Loving this story.
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing Troublemaker. I love reviews :)
I'm so happy you are liking thi story ... I love writing it.
Jazz will be back in the next chapter :D