Date: 01 Aug 2011 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 39
Wow thank you so much for the new chapter. I love this story. I would love a sequal. It is one of my favorites. I often reread it. I love how much Edward changed. This chapter was a great insight into both Edward and Bella. Thanks again.
Date: 01 Aug 2011 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 39
I don't have much to bribe you with, but promise to review every chapter if you decide to continue. I've always wanted to see Phantom. I'm been to the theater many times and absolutely love it but Phantom is one of the last shows I've yet to see.
It certainly is hard when you want to control your dreams and can't. Even when you know it is just a dream it seems like you can't get out of it until it lets you. I think Edward did exactly what he needed to, even if he didn't feel like he was doing anything. The constant reminding her of his happiness and love helped her, since that is what the dreams were opposing, but I think this end scene is what really let her see. It showed that he remembered what she said when they were first dating and he was being standoffish. He may not have made it seem so but now he could show her that everything she wants matters to him.
Date: 01 Aug 2011 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 39
do a part 2!!! do a part 2!! haha this is one of my favorite stories and i would love to see it continued :) Edward is so sweet. it sucks that Bella is plagued with nightmares right now. loved this chapter :):)
Date: 29 Jul 2011 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 37
Since I didn't think there was going to be more, I'm super excited that this was posted. I would love to read more. I'm a greedy reader, so I take what I can get. I love reading the story of how ExB get to their HEA so it's icing on the cake when I get a look into the after. I'm just going to throw this out there but with another baby on the way have you thought about making a sequel with Edward getting his business off the ground and they go through another pregnancy?
Date: 20 Jul 2011 11:26 AM Title: Chapter 1
I was actually surfing Fanfiction when I stubled on the memo that someone was looking for this story, they're simple discription absolutly drew me in and here I am now...
It was a good beginning I cant wait to read the rest,
Date: 24 Jun 2011 1:46 PM Title: Extra (takeout)
Absolutely a beautiful story. I was hoping there would be an epilogue or even just a closing chapter that wraps everything up, but I saw that this story is listed as complete so I guess that's it.
I have to admit I'm a little confused on the whole "baby scandal". Kate was behind it?
I'm glad to see Charles was able to finally say his peace and really apologize to Bella like he should. I loved seeing the different POVs too. I think it was important to see how certain characters were feeling and thinking for some of the events in the story.
I hope to see one last chapter posted but if not, this was still a great story with amazing writing.
Date: 23 Jun 2011 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 19
I was going to stop at last chapter to go to bed, but of course it had to be a cliffhanger. So I had to keep going through this chapter to make sure she was ok. I am now incredibly tired and emotional and have to try to fall asleep without whipping out my laptop or phone to keep reading. It helps that I know I'll be able to come back to it tomorrow, though. Here's hoping...
Date: 19 May 2011 1:06 AM Title: Charles POV
I have been reading this all day and i must say this chapter was beautifully written as well as others. I wanted to hate charles, even at the end of this but i couldn't... not after reading your authors note. Bravo babes beautifully done! Very emotion fiction and i love it! every chapter i wanted more. I couldn't help but continue to read.This is Absolute perfection!!!!
Date: 04 Apr 2011 12:26 PM Title: Carlisle's POV
I'm really proud of Carlisle. It was such a relief to find that Carlisle did not end up being just like his father, Charles. I hope all ends well for Edward and Bella. He did the right thing, finally, and now he is being punished by his grandfather. Everything in this world comes with a price or a sacrifice. Nothing is ever free.
Date: 04 Apr 2011 11:38 AM Title: Chapter 9
Wow! What a day. I'm so glad that Edward finally admitted Isabella and their baby to his family but most importantly, to hisself. I'm happy that he stood by her side and did the right thing and defend his "family" to his grandfather. Asshole! I surely hope his father, Carlisle, will do the right thing, too. I know Esme will, she already has.
Date: 26 Mar 2011 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 35
it was kate that made that girl do that... witch to think she could get him back. thanks for the story i loved it!! as you can see i read it one night!
Ive loved all your reviews :) Its fun seeing how a reader learns to love the characters! Thanks so much for the devotion and for reading everything in one night!