



[Report This]Date: 25 Oct 2012 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 90: Epilogue
Hello damsell,
I usually don't review nor comment on the stories I read but with this one I am compelled to do so. I am hispanic living in a town in which I am the only Hispanic so the fact that you wrote some of it in Spanish was a treat for me!
This story not only has a well thoughtout outline but It was developed nicely. Words fail me, Es una de las mejores historias que he leido. Gracias! = It is one of the best stories I have read. Thank you!
Sincerely yours,
Vilma L. DiGilio




[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2012 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 90: Epilogue
:) Brilliant story
Date: 25 Jul 2012 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 90: Epilogue
Hahaha! I literally loved your last chapter :D
The story is awesome, but the end is not some cliché, it's refreshing :)
Tha,k you for your imagination!
From France,
Bisous :)
Date: 18 Jul 2012 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 90: Epilogue
What a hilarious way to end it! Bella was sooo bad!
Date: 18 Jul 2012 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 65
I am very curious how Emmett will combat these thieves and cattle killers.
Date: 18 Jul 2012 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 53
Bella was so sweet to hear his confession with such understanding.
Date: 18 Jul 2012 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 33
I was glad that Bella was accepting of Rose.
Date: 17 Jul 2012 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 24
Love Alice! I liked how she handled Emmett and gave advice to Bella.
Date: 17 Jul 2012 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 21
I wonder how the ride will go. I wonder if Alice sees that Emmett is distracted.
Date: 17 Jul 2012 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 20
I wonder what he will say to Jasper.
Date: 17 Jul 2012 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 19
I wonder if Bella and Alice will find out about Rose.
Date: 17 Jul 2012 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 18
Loving the image of a tiny Alice.