Date: 03 Feb 2013 10:14 PM Title: Alex Outtake
Oh CC, children really are payback. I can't wait for more from him. Poor Alex, she definitely has issues, maybe Dr. Dan can help. Ugh, yuck Jacob, at least he did the right thing this time. Bella needs to explain what he did.
Date: 25 Dec 2012 5:49 PM Title: A day in the life of Bella Cullen
Even after having reread that story more times than I can count I still adore it. I usually really dislike multiple POVs but you manage to give each character its own voice. I wish there were more outtakes to this story since I just can't get enough of your characters. Its real, its gritty at times but everybody who has grown up in a big family can identify with parts of it.
Date: 09 Dec 2012 11:10 AM Title: Alex Outtake
I must apologize for not reviewing more but your story got me so captivated I just had to read on. I LOVE this story, it's entertaining, moving, you really get into the head of your characters and despite the hair-raising things they're sometimes up to they are always believable and true to themselves. I could read about the razy bunch forever. Thank you for writing and sharing.
Date: 29 Nov 2012 1:14 PM Title: Smells like Teen Spirit Part Two
Robin is really something else: first CC, then Edward Sr., then she tries to see Debbie's boobs .... good for CC to ditch her and try to get with Sheila again.
The limo saw a lot of action that night.
Date: 29 Nov 2012 12:43 PM Title: Unchained Melody
I'm glad Bella and Edward are good again, your explanation why she couldn't get to normal immediately after forgiving him makes sense. Didn't like Rose and especially Alice's relationship advice, they took it too far. Maybe going to the dojo isn't such a bad idea after all, those two can work off some frustrations - theway they reacted to Seth was so embarrassing. Leave it to EJ to score a date with Grace in the wink of an eye. Feel sorry for him, he didn't deserve being beaten up. What if Emmett had called the police? Sal is such a dumb punk.
Date: 29 Nov 2012 12:06 PM Title: Choices
EJ and Debbie act like kindergarteners :D. Either EJ or CC let their emotions get the better of him. Edward's sex-talk with Michael was so much fun, I just love the kid. Too bad the day ended in a fight, EJ and Edward just don't know when to stop.
Date: 28 Nov 2012 10:18 AM Title: That's Amore
Debbie seems a lot different than the other girls who are throwing themselves at EJ. Despite all Dina said I think we didn't see the last of her, she was thrilled that EJ was interested in spending time with her and he showed her how great sex can be. Sal can go fluff himself, I hate double standards so the beating was well deserved.
Date: 28 Nov 2012 10:10 AM Title: Party like a Rock star
Michael is just too adorable! EJ is always putting up this hot-jock-front but he's always looking out for his family, gotta love him. His reaction upon seeing his mother and aunt from behind was priceless. You have a great way of getting into the muddled minds of the teenagers - makes me glad I left that behind.
Date: 28 Aug 2012 9:27 PM Title: Thump, thump, thump
I FUCKING LOVE THIS FAMILY!!!! I have laughed so hard that I am crying and my husband is wondering what the hell I am laughing at. Bless you and thankyou for this wonderful story. I don't want it to ever end. Keep it up!
Date: 26 Aug 2012 2:29 AM Title: A day in the life of Bella Cullen
Loved it!! I love the kids! EJ and CC are hilarious! On the last chapter of SoU it
wouldnt let me review! Stupid technology. So I loved the epi
And thank you for sharing your stories with us! I absolutely
love your writing! You are da BOMB! Lol
Date: 22 Aug 2012 2:17 PM Title: Unchained Melody
another spot on chapter. this feels like real stuff. i think that's one mark of exceptional writing. your characters always feel real, not just on the page, but 3 dimentional. thanks for this story. i am reading 1 chapter a day. hopefully....
Date: 14 Aug 2012 6:47 PM Title: That's Amore
I really liked this chapter! EJ seemed different, or maybe you showed us more of his internal dialogue. I did catch the Twilight references. You made cute use of them. EJ seemed to fall for the one that didn't fall all over him.....Love CC and Sheila too! They're so cute when the puppy love all over the story! LOL! This is thoroughly enjoyable so far!
Date: 13 Aug 2012 12:22 AM Title: Party like a Rock star
OMG I'm so glad that I finished raising my kids already because I don't think I could cope with how soon the get into sex these days!! Great story! EJ is such a guy like the ones I knew when I was young in that he has sex with anyone who want to....CC is more like a one person at a time kind of guy. He plays music and is smart and different. Just like the ones I would have liked then. I love that the boys' friends called Bella a milf.....so cute!
Date: 10 Aug 2012 4:44 PM Title: A day in the life of Bella Cullen
its been a while since I finished The Story Of Us, so it took me a while to remember just what the details of each character were. It's about time to start this and I will read slowly and savor each chapter....I love EJ and CC and how each are so different, you share similar traits. If I were a teenage girl, I would be attracted more to CC. These are well defined and solid characters and the story is always good. It's also really great to see E and B's passion is as hot as always! Love that the boys are both grateful that their parents still love each other and are uncomfortable with their PDA's. Just fucking hilarious!!
Date: 23 Jul 2012 2:46 PM Title: BIG girl panties
This situation has made me so torn! I was furious with Bella but she's a mom and thought she was protecting her child. And I don't condone domestic violence at all, but she deserved to be slapped! Ah! You have created so many emotions in me!