Date: 12 Jun 2013 10:25 PM Title: Thump, thump, thump
LMAO!!!!
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Date: 08 Apr 2013 1:29 PM Title: Alex Outtake
Hello,
Thank you, this story was amazing! I wish it could never end....
Thats definitely one of my favorite fanfic stories!
Where can I find the other outtakes?
Thank you for your answer.
Love,
Sarra, Paris, France.
Date: 05 Apr 2013 3:29 PM Title: Baby Got Back
Too Funny! Loved it! ;)
Date: 26 Mar 2013 9:41 AM Title: The Hills Have Thighs
WOW!!! The Cullens, they really think highly of themselves, I bet its okay for them to be violent, but not other people. Well, everybody deserve second chance, even they don't have money or name.
Date: 26 Feb 2013 5:44 PM Title: Alex Outtake
I adored this story. I didn't think I would enjoy reading about B & E's children. How very wrong I was! You cracked me up so many times. Keep up the good writing.
Date: 06 Feb 2013 10:09 AM Title: A day in the life of Bella Cullen
Loved it!
Date: 03 Feb 2013 10:14 PM Title: Alex Outtake
Oh CC, children really are payback. I can't wait for more from him. Poor Alex, she definitely has issues, maybe Dr. Dan can help. Ugh, yuck Jacob, at least he did the right thing this time. Bella needs to explain what he did.
Date: 25 Jan 2013 4:30 AM Title: Epilogue
Yay for CC and Bethany, EJ and Cecilia, and for Alex quitting the boyfriend/boss ofhers! I know I'll love the outtakes, just like the rest of this story!!!
Date: 10 Jan 2013 5:17 PM Title: Wild Thing
I agree with that: "sometimes what happens in real life is better than making up some wild scenario." And, we're all sex freaks...in one way or another!!!
[Report This]Date: 30 Dec 2012 7:39 AM Title: Epilogue
Awesome as usual!!!
Date: 25 Dec 2012 5:49 PM Title: A day in the life of Bella Cullen
Even after having reread that story more times than I can count I still adore it. I usually really dislike multiple POVs but you manage to give each character its own voice. I wish there were more outtakes to this story since I just can't get enough of your characters. Its real, its gritty at times but everybody who has grown up in a big family can identify with parts of it.
Date: 09 Dec 2012 11:10 AM Title: Alex Outtake
I must apologize for not reviewing more but your story got me so captivated I just had to read on. I LOVE this story, it's entertaining, moving, you really get into the head of your characters and despite the hair-raising things they're sometimes up to they are always believable and true to themselves. I could read about the razy bunch forever. Thank you for writing and sharing.
Date: 29 Nov 2012 1:33 PM Title: Wild Thing
Carlisle is incorrigible, he passed his womanizing ways on to his grandsons, just like Robin got the evil from her daddy what a douche.
Date: 29 Nov 2012 1:25 PM Title: Half moon
Bella thoroughly surprised me, didn't expect her to give in to CC's insane request. It worked out well, surprisingly. So much fun to read and imagine ninja-mom behind that tree.
Date: 29 Nov 2012 1:14 PM Title: Smells like Teen Spirit Part Two
Robin is really something else: first CC, then Edward Sr., then she tries to see Debbie's boobs .... good for CC to ditch her and try to get with Sheila again.
The limo saw a lot of action that night.
Date: 29 Nov 2012 1:06 PM Title: Smells like Teen Spirit Part One
The kids are looking all grown up and the 'rents are placing bets - what a crazy bunch.
Date: 29 Nov 2012 1:03 PM Title: Kill Bill
I don't like violence but CC needessome sense smacked into his thick emo skull.
Date: 29 Nov 2012 12:58 PM Title: Asshole
Drama, drama, drama - will we see the day when both Cullen boys are happy in ther relationships? What's Sheila's problem? At leat EJ and Debbie'sdatewent really well.
Date: 29 Nov 2012 12:51 PM Title: Big Poppa
Aww, how sweet, Edward's trying so hard to give Bella everything she wants.
Seth is gay, hitting on Edward - do Rose and Alice know ;D
Date: 29 Nov 2012 12:47 PM Title: Peanut
not a dull day in the Cullen household
Date: 29 Nov 2012 12:43 PM Title: Unchained Melody
I'm glad Bella and Edward are good again, your explanation why she couldn't get to normal immediately after forgiving him makes sense. Didn't like Rose and especially Alice's relationship advice, they took it too far. Maybe going to the dojo isn't such a bad idea after all, those two can work off some frustrations - theway they reacted to Seth was so embarrassing. Leave it to EJ to score a date with Grace in the wink of an eye. Feel sorry for him, he didn't deserve being beaten up. What if Emmett had called the police? Sal is such a dumb punk.
Date: 29 Nov 2012 12:06 PM Title: Choices
EJ and Debbie act like kindergarteners :D. Either EJ or CC let their emotions get the better of him. Edward's sex-talk with Michael was so much fun, I just love the kid. Too bad the day ended in a fight, EJ and Edward just don't know when to stop.
Date: 28 Nov 2012 10:18 AM Title: That's Amore
Debbie seems a lot different than the other girls who are throwing themselves at EJ. Despite all Dina said I think we didn't see the last of her, she was thrilled that EJ was interested in spending time with her and he showed her how great sex can be. Sal can go fluff himself, I hate double standards so the beating was well deserved.
Date: 28 Nov 2012 10:10 AM Title: Party like a Rock star
Michael is just too adorable! EJ is always putting up this hot-jock-front but he's always looking out for his family, gotta love him. His reaction upon seeing his mother and aunt from behind was priceless. You have a great way of getting into the muddled minds of the teenagers - makes me glad I left that behind.
Date: 28 Nov 2012 10:01 AM Title: A day in the life of Bella Cullen
The Cullen house is a mad-house - all the hormonal teenagers. EJ is such a mommie-boy, great idea to take off the door. She and Edward have their hands full with their offspring.
Date: 09 Nov 2012 7:55 AM Title: Alex Outtake
I LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS STORY... CAN´T WAIT FOR MORE GLIMSES INTO THE LIFE OF THIS BIG CRAZY FAMILY!! THANK YOU!!! GREAT STORY AS ALWAYS!!!
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2012 7:41 PM Title: A day in the life of Bella Cullen
I love this story. I hope you do a trilogy :)
Date: 07 Sep 2012 12:56 PM Title: West Side Story Part One
Edward smoking dope. I hope it doesn't become a habit. I don't like the thought of Edward doing that.
I'm begining to not like this Edward in this story and I use to love him :(
[Report This]Date: 06 Sep 2012 11:44 PM Title: Alex Outtake
Aww I feel for Alex!! I hope things go good with Dr. Dan!!
She needs some good in her life! Loved it! Looking forward
to CC's outtake!!
[Report This]Date: 06 Sep 2012 10:46 PM Title: Epilogue
I loved it!! Thank you for writing such an incredible story!!
I love all your stories!!! Lol
[Report This]Date: 06 Sep 2012 9:27 PM Title: The Best Years
Omg!!! That speech was awesome!!! Loved it all!!!
[Report This]Date: 06 Sep 2012 8:22 PM Title: Thor, Loki, and the gang
Loved it!!!
[Report This]Date: 06 Sep 2012 6:33 PM Title: Testing Testing
Lol!! Loved it!! My cousins husband was fixed after his first marriage, and now she is on baby # 3!!!!
[Report This]Date: 06 Sep 2012 4:07 AM Title: Spring is in the air part two
Lol poor Bella!!! Loved it!
[Report This]Date: 06 Sep 2012 2:46 AM Title: Spring is in the air pt one
Lol loved it!!!
[Report This]Date: 06 Sep 2012 1:54 AM Title: Happiest Place on Earth
Lmao!!! Daisy Duck fucked him and ducked him!!!! Lol!!!!
Loved it!!!
[Report This]Date: 05 Sep 2012 11:18 PM Title: Imagine that
ROLMFAO!! I loved the end of this!! Badass Bella rocks!!!
Loved it! Oh I read Quiet Storm, Weather the Storm, and now
The third one! ( I forgot what u named it!!) lol
[Report This]Date: 05 Sep 2012 7:57 PM Title: West Side Story part two
Loved it!!
[Report This]Date: 05 Sep 2012 5:55 PM Title: West Side Story Part One
Loved it!!
[Report This]Date: 05 Sep 2012 4:01 PM Title: Romeo and Juliet
I absolutely love Al and AJ!! I hope everyone gives them a chance to
explain everything!! Loved it!!
[Report This]Date: 05 Sep 2012 1:44 PM Title: love taps
Loved it! Gabe is an asshole, and Emily needs to dump his
sorry ass, and then have Emmett Sr and Jr kick it!!!! Lol
[Report This]Date: 05 Sep 2012 2:16 AM Title: SOngs from the heart
Absolutely LOVED it!!!! Lol
[Report This]Date: 05 Sep 2012 12:37 AM Title: Shut up and Drive part two
Damn! Poor EJ. Roni is a jealous beotch!!!
Loved it!!!
[Report This]Date: 04 Sep 2012 7:41 PM Title: Shut up and Drive part one
Is Emily cheating on Gabe??? That would suck!!!! Loved it!!!
[Report This]Date: 04 Sep 2012 2:56 PM Title: Long Day
I loved that I can't believe CC and Natalie in a diner at that. Food fetish love it xx
[Report This]Date: 04 Sep 2012 12:34 PM Title: The Hills Have Thighs
I tried to watch the video, but it says it doesn't exist! If u could send it to me
that would great!!!! Loved the chap!!
[Report This]Date: 04 Sep 2012 11:05 AM Title: Back in the day
Loved it!!! Oh and u make me feel old!! I graduated in 95!! Lol
[Report This]Date: 03 Sep 2012 8:54 PM Title: Stupid Cupid
Poor EJ!!!! Lol loved it!!
[Report This]Date: 03 Sep 2012 6:15 PM Title: Mr. LoverMan
I wonder what Roni said EJ? Loved it!!
Date: 03 Sep 2012 11:18 AM Title: BIG girl panties
I hat this how can Edward leave Bella. She through herself in front of a bullet to save him I think he is really been silly
Date: 03 Sep 2012 10:10 AM Title: Thump, thump, thump
Go CC love the boy. I think that Bella should just tell Edward what was said.
This sounds like Christmas when I was a teenager Love it xx
Date: 03 Sep 2012 7:23 AM Title: At a loss
I cried like a baby at 5 am not been to sleep. Poor CC xx
Date: 03 Sep 2012 7:20 AM Title: DNA
Bella should tell Edward about Randall. There will be tears before bedtime xx
Date: 02 Sep 2012 8:28 AM Title: Big Poppa
I really don't understand US education system *Shrug pull hair*
Is EJ really intellegent we don't have GPS
But Iloved this but I'm not sure about Seth liking Edward. I hope he doesn't try it on.
Date: 02 Sep 2012 12:05 AM Title: Road to redemption
I knew it was Roni that was Jakes daughter!!! Loved it!!
[Report This]Date: 01 Sep 2012 8:44 PM Title: Rescue Me
Absolutely loved it!!!
Date: 01 Sep 2012 4:34 PM Title: Choices
I don't like Edward and Bella arguing. I like a happy Edward and Bella. I hope things get back to normal soon. I don't want to think about a seperation or a divorce
[Report This]Date: 01 Sep 2012 3:54 AM Title: Long Day
Lol. Loved it!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 31 Aug 2012 5:03 AM Title: Flanked by your side
Lol. Loved it!!!!
[Report This]Date: 31 Aug 2012 3:35 AM Title: Back to basics
Lmao!!! She drove off!!!! Lol loved it!!
[Report This]Date: 31 Aug 2012 1:42 AM Title: Baby Got Back
I love Natalie!! She is perfect for CC! And CC is adorable drunk!!
Loved it!!!
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2012 10:06 PM Title: Holidaze part two
I loved the ending!!!! Lmao!! Hilarious!!!
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2012 7:21 PM Title: Holidaze part one
Lol Loved it!!!
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2012 3:52 PM Title: Flowers in the Attic
Loved it!!! Lol
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2012 2:58 PM Title: Gray Matter
Loved it!!!!
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2012 6:25 AM Title: BIG girl panties
Oh damn! That was intense.
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2012 5:34 AM Title: Thump, thump, thump
ROLMFAO!!!! That was epic!!!! Loved it!! Oh and GO Carlisle!!! Get some old man!!!! Lol
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2012 4:43 AM Title: DNA
Lmao!!! Poor Carlisle!! No sex! Loved the chapter!!!
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2012 2:48 AM Title: Saint Corduroy
I feel so sorry for EJ and CC! Michael keeps getting them in
trouble and no one seems to notice!!! Lol. Loved it!
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2012 12:46 AM Title: At a loss
Damn!! Poor CC! And I feel so bad for Shelia! Way to go Bella
for sticking up for her! Loved it!!
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2012 11:46 PM Title: So cold
I feel so sorry for CC! Edward should have listened to him.
And asked Michael. Bella is going to either kick Edward out till CC
comes home or she is going to go search for him, then kick Edward
out!!
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2012 3:24 PM Title: Wild Thing
OMG!!! Lol. I love horny flirty Carlisle!! Lol Loved it!!!
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2012 1:36 PM Title: Half moon
CC better fix what he did!!! Poor EJ and Debbie!! I hope Carlisle will
be alright. Loved it!!
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2012 4:22 AM Title: Smells like Teen Spirit Part Two
Loved it!!!
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2012 3:25 AM Title: Smells like Teen Spirit Part One
LMAO!! That was hilarious!! Loved it!!
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2012 2:46 AM Title: Kill Bill
Holy shit!!!! Damn those boys are violent! But I loved that Bella sOaked them
with the hose!! Awesome!!! Loved it all!!!
Date: 28 Aug 2012 9:27 PM Title: Thump, thump, thump
I FUCKING LOVE THIS FAMILY!!!! I have laughed so hard that I am crying and my husband is wondering what the hell I am laughing at. Bless you and thankyou for this wonderful story. I don't want it to ever end. Keep it up!
[Report This]Date: 28 Aug 2012 6:45 PM Title: Asshole
Damn CC has got a pair of brass balls to talk to Edward Sr like that!
Great chapter!!
[Report This]Date: 28 Aug 2012 4:10 PM Title: Big Poppa
NO Seth cant be gay!!! Lol it IS always the georgous ones!! Lol
Awww EJ is finally seeing the light!!! Loved it!!!
[Report This]Date: 28 Aug 2012 4:08 PM Title: Peanut
Sexy Olderward has still got it!!! Lol
Loved it!!
[Report This]Date: 28 Aug 2012 12:11 AM Title: Unchained Melody
Omg!! If I was Bella I would go over to Sal's and open a can of woop-ass on them all!!
Lol loved it! I'm happy that they are working on their relationship!!!
[Report This]Date: 27 Aug 2012 8:36 PM Title: Choices
Oh Edward! You really put your whole leg in your mouth this time!!
Loved it!
[Report This]Date: 27 Aug 2012 8:33 PM Title: That's Amore
Loved it!!! I like Debbie. She is gonna make EJ nuts!! Lol
[Report This]Date: 27 Aug 2012 2:31 PM Title: Party like a Rock star
Damn!! Loved it!!
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2012 2:29 AM Title: A day in the life of Bella Cullen
Loved it!! I love the kids! EJ and CC are hilarious! On the last chapter of SoU it
wouldnt let me review! Stupid technology. So I loved the epi
And thank you for sharing your stories with us! I absolutely
love your writing! You are da BOMB! Lol
Date: 22 Aug 2012 2:17 PM Title: Unchained Melody
another spot on chapter. this feels like real stuff. i think that's one mark of exceptional writing. your characters always feel real, not just on the page, but 3 dimentional. thanks for this story. i am reading 1 chapter a day. hopefully....
Date: 21 Aug 2012 10:00 PM Title: Choices
This chapter ended up being scary and sad. I guess marriages are not perfect, I wouldn't know because mine was spent trying to keep a cheating husband with me. How Edward told Michael about sex was so precious....
Date: 14 Aug 2012 6:47 PM Title: That's Amore
I really liked this chapter! EJ seemed different, or maybe you showed us more of his internal dialogue. I did catch the Twilight references. You made cute use of them. EJ seemed to fall for the one that didn't fall all over him.....Love CC and Sheila too! They're so cute when the puppy love all over the story! LOL! This is thoroughly enjoyable so far!
Date: 13 Aug 2012 12:22 AM Title: Party like a Rock star
OMG I'm so glad that I finished raising my kids already because I don't think I could cope with how soon the get into sex these days!! Great story! EJ is such a guy like the ones I knew when I was young in that he has sex with anyone who want to....CC is more like a one person at a time kind of guy. He plays music and is smart and different. Just like the ones I would have liked then. I love that the boys' friends called Bella a milf.....so cute!
Date: 10 Aug 2012 4:44 PM Title: A day in the life of Bella Cullen
its been a while since I finished The Story Of Us, so it took me a while to remember just what the details of each character were. It's about time to start this and I will read slowly and savor each chapter....I love EJ and CC and how each are so different, you share similar traits. If I were a teenage girl, I would be attracted more to CC. These are well defined and solid characters and the story is always good. It's also really great to see E and B's passion is as hot as always! Love that the boys are both grateful that their parents still love each other and are uncomfortable with their PDA's. Just fucking hilarious!!
Date: 07 Aug 2012 1:22 AM Title: That's Amore
Heck yeah should! Nice resembelence to Bella BTW!
Date: 23 Jul 2012 2:46 PM Title: BIG girl panties
This situation has made me so torn! I was furious with Bella but she's a mom and thought she was protecting her child. And I don't condone domestic violence at all, but she deserved to be slapped! Ah! You have created so many emotions in me!
Date: 23 Jul 2012 1:35 PM Title: Thump, thump, thump
Knowing what is coming between Bella and Randall has me on edge! I'm such a dork! ;)
Date: 21 Jul 2012 2:36 PM Title: Choices
Aw poor Edward! I just wanna hug him and squeeze him so tight!
Date: 21 Jul 2012 1:07 PM Title: That's Amore
I love how EJ is a cocky little shit, so full of himself but that he has a good heart and is a total mama's boy!
Date: 21 Jul 2012 12:14 PM Title: Party like a Rock star
EJ and CC are too damn much! They crack me up
Date: 21 Jul 2012 10:47 AM Title: A day in the life of Bella Cullen
I love these two as parents! They are insane!
[Report This]Date: 12 Jul 2012 2:48 PM Title: Alex Outtake
heeeey@ i just re-read your story agian i was reading on ffnet and then you pulled it down :D ill go back and re read it again i love this story so much i hope you do post that CC outtake!!!
Date: 08 Jul 2012 11:30 AM Title: A day in the life of Bella Cullen
I really hope you write more about Alex and CC. You are a great writer ... had me either laughing or mad throughout the story.