[Report This]Date: 15 Aug 2012 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 1
great story please update soon
Date: 17 Feb 2012 11:42 AM Title: Chapter 7
I am loving this story :) please keep updating...I'm hooked!
[Report This]Date: 16 Jan 2012 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 7
Evert couple of months I have to read this story again. It is wonderful please can we have chaper eight before Easter? X
[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2011 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 7
Sad, but great!
[Report This]Date: 04 Nov 2011 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 7
Loved the story so far, can't wait to read more of it;).
Date: 28 Oct 2011 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 7
Hmm Very interesting, when is edward and bella going to reunite, I assume it won't be too long seen as the kids know.
[Report This]Date: 25 Oct 2011 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 7
well i feel bad for drew. but i am glad bella is with him and hopefully going to be taking him with her. he will be well loved. maybe he will get his fight back or maybe they decide to turn him to stop the pain and be able to live a life cancer free. it will be good for the family to be together in full. i am looking forward to how seth acts around nessie. see how well papa edward deals. he is just happy he has kids and gets a chance to make a mends
look out bella alot of surprises for her. so love this story. can't wait till the next chapter is up. thanx for writing
[Report This]Date: 25 Oct 2011 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 7
Hey, why couldn't Drew be turned? That is, if he wanted to be.
*rolls eyes* I can just imagine Charlie's reaction to seeing the Cullens, and especially Edward.
You are writing such a great story. I love all the different characters you've created, and the storyline is great. Once again, thanks for writing. I'll look forward to your next update; I'm excited to see what happens next. =)
[Report This]Date: 25 Oct 2011 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 6
This just keeps getting better and better. =)
[Report This]Date: 25 Oct 2011 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 5
I'm just so wrapped up in your story! I even got teary eyed when Edward met his children and they called him daddy. Awww =)
[Report This]Date: 25 Oct 2011 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 4
I'm so excited; I can't wait to see how things go. =)
[Report This]Date: 25 Oct 2011 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 3
Your story is so awesome! I'm so glad that you're writing it. I can't wait to see the reactions of both E/B when they see each other for the first time in so long and the emotion of Edward seeing his children for the first time. I'm so excited! I'm not so excited, but definately curious to see who is obviously after Bella, and probably her children too. I have a few theories about that, but I think I'll just keep them to myself. Thanks again for writing. =)
[Report This]Date: 25 Oct 2011 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 2
Oh my gosh; I absolutely love your story. It is so good, and It really owns me! I'm so glad that I found it. =)
[Report This]Date: 25 Oct 2011 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hi there!
I hadn't planned on starting this story right now, but you sucked me right in! I loved this first chapter and have so many questions. I can't wait to read and find out the answers. Thanks for writing. =)
[Report This]Date: 21 Oct 2011 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 3
wow so much
i am curious as to who is after her if james, laurent and victoria are dead. maybe one of them had someone to carry the grudge for bella
my having kids losing edward and going through cancer man tough
she is a wonderful artist cool that esme has her painting
looking forward to the kids meeting their family
[Report This]Date: 21 Oct 2011 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 2
WOW I like how you tweak the story
seems edward has an uphill battle. i hope he is able to work things out. i can't wait to find out that renesme has an imprint
[Report This]Date: 21 Oct 2011 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 1
very interesting
looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2011 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 7
I was so excited to see this update and no worries, at least you updated. This chapter unfolded a lot of answers. Very good chapter.
[Report This]Date: 17 Oct 2011 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 7
Really liking your story here!!!!! I just came across it, please keep it up, it is very interesting!!!!
Date: 17 Oct 2011 11:09 AM Title: Chapter 7
I feel so sad about Drew. I keep wondering if there will even be anything that can be done for him. I knew Edward would step up and help get the guys to Bella. It is a great idea for Charlie and Sue to be there too. Edward will answer for his mistakes. I hope everyone can be happy that the kids will finally have both their parents in their lives. Great job...thanks so much!!!
Date: 17 Oct 2011 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 7
Yay!!! You updated!!! Please... please... please update more often. I really love your story!!!
Date: 17 Oct 2011 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 7
I really love it! Can`t wait to see the family reunion! Please update soon!
Date: 17 Oct 2011 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 7
looking forward to more of this story, so glad you updated.
Date: 17 Oct 2011 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 7
Thanks for the update, enjoying your story
Date: 16 Oct 2011 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 7
looking forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2011 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 7
great chapter. So glad bella is there for drew. Ah a little more info on the doc and her family. hmm Charlie and all coming. That will be hard and cool at the same time.
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2011 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 7
oh so happy about a new chapter thank you so much.. I will be patient and always excited when you update... we certainly do learn alot this chapter I must say... oh so very anxious for Bella and Edwards reunion for sure... such a wonderful story ... you have a very creative mind...
[Report This]Date: 06 Sep 2011 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 6
Ohh I really do hope you update this fic soon it was wonderful to read so far. :) Great job.
Date: 22 Aug 2011 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 6
I've been enjoying this story and can't wait for more.
Date: 04 Aug 2011 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 6
WOW...What can i say...
bloody fantastic writing,
I just couldnt stop reading to review each chapter,im so into this story that ive checked in three times today to see if you have updated ...Brilliant ..cant wait for more.xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
[Report This]Date: 04 Aug 2011 11:53 AM Title: Chapter 6
O.M.G., this is one of the most original stories I've read. I am so in love with it. Amazing storyline and great details putting this together. I so look forward to your updates.
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2011 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 6
On noes its a cliffy. I cannot wait for the next update.
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2011 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 5
Another very sweet chapter.
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2011 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 4
Every enjoyable chapter.
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2011 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 2
That was a sweet chapter.
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2011 12:15 PM Title: Chapter 6
Well I am very glad that you are back irregardless of the delay, and extremely happy that I found this story, its wonderful... Watch it turn out that Dr. Lawson is a Hybred vampire or something... no just kidding... anyway... can't wait for more...
Date: 03 Aug 2011 11:11 AM Title: Chapter 1
Very interesting. I can't wait to get caught up! Thanks!!!
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2011 10:59 AM Title: Chapter 5
I loved this chapter soooooo much!!!! Loved how Daddy had to get Mommy's look in order to paint! LOL!!!! Loved the messy hair!
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2011 10:40 AM Title: Chapter 4
You just have to love Emmett! And Rose in this story! More please~~~
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2011 10:18 AM Title: Chapter 3
Great Chapter!!! Really Really hope that you keep going with this....
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2011 9:55 AM Title: Chapter 2
Wow! I have been only reading FF's for a little over a year now. I am one humble reviewer, but I must say... I am in awe of this story. Truly Magnificant! I can not wait to read more.
The painting was right there!!! With the children. Wow! This is so good!
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2011 9:18 AM Title: Chapter 1
so far I am indeed Intrigued. Please keep going with this
Date: 03 Aug 2011 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 6
Love the chapter and look forward to the next. Great story.
Date: 03 Aug 2011 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 6
I absolutely love your story... please...please...please continue!!!
Date: 03 Aug 2011 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 6
I just finished reading all six chapters tonight and I am really liking this story. Please keep the chapters coming.
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2011 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 6
Great chapter. Bella always was ovservitant. Poor Drew.
Date: 03 Aug 2011 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 6
i look foward to this story and im loooking foward to what happens next
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2011 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 1
fuck love this first chapter and the plot is amazing
Date: 06 Mar 2011 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 5
Just think what this could have been!
Date: 06 Mar 2011 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 4
Love the story. THink about starting back up.
Date: 06 Mar 2011 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 3
I can not believe you abandond this. IT is way more interesting that Breaking Dawn and it was the better of the 4. The children coming in as human then changing later. Makes more sense. Also Bella with cancer adds to the drama. My only problem is my dislike for the way Edward treated her. That is not undying love.
Date: 06 Mar 2011 12:13 PM Title: Chapter 2
Well I am not a fan of Edward at this point. He lied etc. So. He clearly has not hurt enough. I am ready.. so Okay you get to reap what that poor woman endured with just three words.
Nice story so far, by the way. I see you have not finished this.
[Report This]Date: 20 Jan 2011 9:14 AM Title: Chapter 5
what a wondrerfull story
please update
[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2010 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 5
aww!! this chapters sooo cute! i cant wait til the next chapter. :D
Date: 26 Nov 2010 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 5
That was really sweet I really iked it.
Date: 25 Nov 2010 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 5
this is such a good story. i can't for bella's reaction to everything.
Date: 24 Nov 2010 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 5
Ang is such a cool girl
Date: 24 Nov 2010 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 5
Oh my...I have so loved this story.. thankyou for updating... please keep going...
[Report This]Date: 23 Nov 2010 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 5
I am really enjoying your story. Love all the different pov that move the story forward. It is lovely that Bella gave her children love and told them of their whole family.
Wonderful chapter.
[Report This]Date: 23 Nov 2010 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 4
Oh I hope Bella is not mad she wanted this loved it very much thanks for sharing.....
[Report This]Date: 23 Nov 2010 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 3
Great chapter it was very moving can't wait for more....
Date: 23 Nov 2010 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 5
I love this story! So glad they finally met the kids now can't wait to see what happens with Mommy!
[Report This]Date: 23 Nov 2010 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 2
Wow that was a moving chapter loved it thanks for sharing....
[Report This]Date: 23 Nov 2010 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
Once I catch up I go back reread and review I hope your OK with that.....
[Report This]Date: 23 Nov 2010 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 5
Wow I am new to your story but so far I really like it thanks for sharing it and update when you can.....
Date: 20 Sep 2010 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 4
Thank you for updating. Loved Emmett and Alice's field trip.
[Report This]Date: 20 Sep 2010 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 4
Yes loving your story. Great chapter looking forward to the Cullen's meeting the kids.
Date: 19 Sep 2010 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 4
well im getting excited for the meeting of the family cant wait till the next chapter
Date: 19 Sep 2010 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 4
I have loved this story so far. Please keep going and update soon.... I love the way Emmett is acting... he is so funny, but a fierce protector of Bella.. the only concern I have is.... is this going to be a Happy ever after???? Please say yes!!!! I can't wait to see the family with the kids....uncle Emmett!!! To see Rosalie with them, she will finally get the chance to watch children grow up and be a part of their life...
Date: 11 Aug 2010 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 3
Oh my goodness... what a tear jerker... I'm so glad that Bella has a friend like Angela with her. I hope that she and Edward can work through this and be happy... don't let Edward be a dumn dumn twice. Update soon....please
Date: 10 Aug 2010 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 3
cant wait till the next chapter !!!! hopefuly bella will know that the cullens are there ! keep them comming
[Report This]Date: 10 Aug 2010 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 3
Awesome story so far! All I can say is more please, more... :~)
Date: 10 Aug 2010 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 3
lovin your story....can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: 10 Aug 2010 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 3
woohoo loving it cant wait for more
Date: 10 Aug 2010 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 3
hmmm if not the Denali's then I wonder who...... Nauel's Dad maybe? trying to steal Masen???
Date: 10 Aug 2010 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 2
OMG this story is amazing! I LOVE it!!!!!!!! I'm hooked and looking for an update. Soon please.
Date: 10 Aug 2010 9:20 AM Title: Chapter 2
oh i am soo in love with this story i cant wait to read more please keep them coming
Date: 10 Aug 2010 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 2
cant wait till the next chapter i want to see what happens next !
Date: 10 Aug 2010 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 2
That was great! Can't wait for more!
Date: 09 Aug 2010 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 1
looks to be an interesting take.
Date: 08 Aug 2010 11:09 AM Title: Chapter 1
i like it looking foward to more chapter ! cant wait to see what happens next
Date: 08 Aug 2010 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 1
Like it, looking forward to more.