Date: 26 Dec 2011 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 16
Holy shit.. Not a happy Dad! special after what happen that day. Not Cool..
To be honest, I do not think JC is the dad but if he is, then he will look after the child. with love and Care..
but what scarries me is this Jeff guy I can't get it out of my mind about Amber dream alittle while ago, about the wolvies and stuff. I wonder if this is it.. and Jeff might try and hurt them all more.
This has been great story. I basical caught up except for your out take. your a great writer.
<3 Leona :)
Date: 16 Oct 2011 3:32 PM Title: Author's Note
I sad to see this story being set aside. I think it has a ton of potential and really hope that someday you will pick it back up and give us loyal readers and fans of this story and its prequel the finished product someday. I am more of an all human story kind of girl, but if it is catchy i will read it. Most likely would wait to read it until it is finished, because unfortunetly i have been burned one too many times by getting hooked into a story and have the author drop it like a hot rock adn walk away. I try to stay away from that, kind of like once bitten twice shy. Keeping this on my favorites in hopes that someday I will see resolution in it.
Date: 18 Mar 2011 5:23 AM Title: Outtake Part I
Those boys need to be reined in fast. They have not learned a thing from the earlier situation. They wear condoms, but JC is still waiting to find out if his life is changed forever. I would hate for my children male or female to be whores. I think Edward was very generous to take his whole family to Disney. It is my favorite place on Earth. I can't imagine 2 weeks there.
Date: 09 Mar 2011 11:27 AM Title: Chapter 16
Glad you are back. I hope they get a dna test. I bet the girl had sex with many boys since she was with all three of the Cullen boys. Her momma just doesn't know it. I hope it is not his child. He is trying so hard to improve himself.
Date: 28 Dec 2010 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 15
I love this story and you are doing a great job with it. I'm sorry that RL is kicking you in the butt lately. I hope that your family can begin to heal. I look forward to seeing where the story goes when you are able to resume your writing.
Date: 22 Sep 2010 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 15
Oh wow!! I really hope that nothing happens to the boys or Kevin because they can all get into trouble for lying. And Happy Birthday to your little girl 2 is quite an age my 2 1/2 year old fractured his ankle on Sunday so it is going to be a fun 3 weeks with his leg in a splint but today after he got it on all I heard my stepmom say on the phone when I called from work was "Jayden stop hitting the wall, Jayden stop hitting the wall!" Good times I hope that you have an easier time because I think that this is the first of many broken bones for that little boy with no fear.
Date: 21 Sep 2010 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 15
That Jeff kid is crazy. You don't practically rape someone because your cousin is a slut and had a 4 way at 14. She did not tell her age and it sounded like she thought it would be fun. Plus she certainly was not a virgin to partake in that type of activity.
Date: 21 Sep 2010 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 15
Happy Birthday to your baby My baby girl is going to be 2 on the 25 they grow up way to fast. Dont mean to nit pick but what year is the story in now because if it is 2010 the boys are only 10 and 11 LOL.
It's the year 2017. Thanks for reviewing and reading.
Date: 21 Sep 2010 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 15
wow... just wow... hmmm... still not sure on how I feel about the lying... yes I am totally team Masen... but wow what a mess!! I don't agree with eye for an eye at all... JC and Ethan were wrong having sex with Kristy. But Ethan was still 17 right? so really JC would be the only one in trouble... what a mess can't wait to read the next chapter!!
Date: 21 Sep 2010 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 15
It's so incredibly fucked up that the cop told them to lie, and that Edward went along with it. That is the worst message, and it's total hypocrisy on their part. I mean, complete and utter hypocrisy. It makes me sick (of course I realize they are imaginary characters.) If that guy is going to jail for having consensual sex with Hanna, then the boys should without a doubt go to jail for the three/foursome. What entitles them to be above the law? I'm pissed off at this chapter.
dont worry, justice will be served coming up. J.C. and Ethan will get some punishment. Thanks for reading.
Date: 13 Sep 2010 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 14
How sad is it that teenage boys actually think like this!! Not saying that they all do or will act like this but to use someone that you don't likes little sister like that is just sick. I really hope that he gets punnished for this even though she agreed to it.
Date: 12 Sep 2010 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 14
Hanna's brothers have a lot to pay for. I know that they didn't hurt her themsleves but if they were more respectful of girls she wouldn't think it was ok for some guy to fuck her at achool during a football match. I mean yeah she wasn't raped as such but she was definitley assulted i kind of hope the guy is 18 and the chagre him with statutory rape.
I can't wait to see what happens next.
Please update soon
Date: 12 Sep 2010 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 14
I was so afaid this was going to happen to Hannah. She just wouldn't listen though. I am worried what this will do to her. I have a feeling that Edward is going to press charges and I hope he does! Great job...thanks!
Date: 09 Sep 2010 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 13
i really like the story..... but i think the kids are getting off easy.....if i ever did these things or my siblings we would have our asses handed to us.... i rhink edward and bella need to step up more on the punishment department...harsher.....
Date: 07 Sep 2010 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 13
That is terrible that you are going through all of that I hope that she is ok and that things get better for all of you. Hanna is really trying to get her brother in serious trouble isn't she? I think that she should listen to what people are trying to tell her around her but I don't think that she is going to.
Date: 07 Sep 2010 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 13
They crack me up. I wish my parents would have been like "not while we're home..." mine were like, "not until you're 30!" But hey, E/B at least make sure they aren't going to be grandparents any time soon.
They are having a whole lot of sex up in that house. And Ethan fucking the flight attendant? Priceless.
I want more Megan and Brea!! (Just to see them around)
Date: 03 Sep 2010 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 12
What the hell is going on???? I can't wait to find out.
I can't believe Edward did that to JC. I am glad JC said something at lunch.
I am so glad that Bella talked to Danielle. She is going to need all the support she can get. Ethan has to tell her the truth. He has to trust that she will stand by him. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 03 Sep 2010 8:54 AM Title: Chapter 12
Loving the story you are doing agreat job sorry to hear about your home stress. I totally understand about stress. I hope things get to a more even running for you soon. I am excited abotu the story you are doing such a AWESOME job with it and I so look forward to the next update!
Date: 01 Sep 2010 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 10
I think it's better to have the translations right after. For me, it makes the story flow more smoothly.
I like the continuation of these characters :)
Date: 29 Aug 2010 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 11
ok first of all I love your story I post to you each chapter and I know you are busy but I have to ask WHY MOLINE IL? I am asking for selfish reasons.
This was touching and they just keep adding to the family don't they?
I really do <3 this story!!!
I really really really want to knwo why Moline, Il though so if you could answer that I would be greatful.
Date: 28 Aug 2010 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 10
It is good that all of the kids seem to be having fun in school. I remember that I liked school when I was that age I don't know when it changed I think that it was in 5 or6th grade when I had a teacher that I didn't like and made school hard for me.
Date: 26 Aug 2010 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 10
I think right after but that is just me....lol as for the translations that is.
I loved reading the kids days that was a nice touch.
Loving the story as always and looking forward to see where you take this one.