Date: 11 Jun 2013 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 1
I am wondering if you plan on finishing this story. I really like it and hope that there is a happy ending.
[Report This]Date: 26 Dec 2011 1:42 PM Title: Outtake Part I
Man it sounds like a true loving family.. Your story is a trypical family, Love it..
[Report This]Date: 26 Dec 2011 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 16
Holy shit.. Not a happy Dad! special after what happen that day. Not Cool..
To be honest, I do not think JC is the dad but if he is, then he will look after the child. with love and Care..
but what scarries me is this Jeff guy I can't get it out of my mind about Amber dream alittle while ago, about the wolvies and stuff. I wonder if this is it.. and Jeff might try and hurt them all more.
This has been great story. I basical caught up except for your out take. your a great writer.
<3 Leona :)
[Report This]Date: 05 Dec 2011 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 6
That was a sweet lullaby, This is a typical family. love it.
[Report This]Date: 05 Dec 2011 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 2
That was awesome chapter. it was great to hear the one of their children pov.. awesome..
[Report This]Date: 08 Nov 2011 2:18 PM Title: Outtake Part I
i'm really loving this ff very much
[Report This]Date: 08 Nov 2011 11:52 AM Title: Chapter 12
geez sorry this was just the funniest chapter I was rolling out laughing... Edward's prank on JC and then JC getting him back priceless... then the ending.. oh boy.....**evil snickers**
[Report This]Date: 08 Nov 2011 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 7
yeah poor Josh his mother certainly is a lug short...
[Report This]Date: 08 Nov 2011 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 6
wonderful chapter and I love seeing the bonding of this family
[Report This]Date: 08 Nov 2011 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 5
i'm glad she got caught the first time... maybe she will think... and hopefully the boys will see girls in a different light too!!!
[Report This]Date: 08 Nov 2011 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 4
damn kids!!!! teenagers shit that was dumb Hanna!!!! LOL!!!
[Report This]Date: 08 Nov 2011 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 3
thank the Lord the boy opened up!!! the snickers bar was damn funny
[Report This]Date: 07 Nov 2011 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 2
JC has issues and he just needs to buck up and listen, it seems he was smart enough to realize he didn't want to be kicked out so I think there is hope for him.
[Report This]Date: 07 Nov 2011 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
holy shit the year 2017 is definitely not a year of sexual innocence... wow I just knew that Matt's secret Girlfriend had to be Katelyn.... holy hell this is going to be good I can tell right now...
Date: 17 Oct 2011 1:23 PM Title: Author's Note
I love this story and truly hope that you are able to finish it soon.
Date: 16 Oct 2011 6:16 PM Title: Author's Note
post as you like. Maybe you'll get inspiration for this story if you let it go for awhuile
Date: 16 Oct 2011 3:32 PM Title: Author's Note
I sad to see this story being set aside. I think it has a ton of potential and really hope that someday you will pick it back up and give us loyal readers and fans of this story and its prequel the finished product someday. I am more of an all human story kind of girl, but if it is catchy i will read it. Most likely would wait to read it until it is finished, because unfortunetly i have been burned one too many times by getting hooked into a story and have the author drop it like a hot rock adn walk away. I try to stay away from that, kind of like once bitten twice shy. Keeping this on my favorites in hopes that someday I will see resolution in it.
Kasi~
Date: 26 Mar 2011 3:38 PM Title: Outtake Part I
sorry to hear about your niece love the story,
Date: 18 Mar 2011 5:23 AM Title: Outtake Part I
Those boys need to be reined in fast. They have not learned a thing from the earlier situation. They wear condoms, but JC is still waiting to find out if his life is changed forever. I would hate for my children male or female to be whores. I think Edward was very generous to take his whole family to Disney. It is my favorite place on Earth. I can't imagine 2 weeks there.
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2011 10:47 PM Title: Outtake Part I
my goodness what a vacation they are in for. i wish all the adults the best of luck, thye will need it. love the parental advice he gave to meg. they have always had a special relationship.
Date: 15 Mar 2011 9:18 PM Title: Outtake Part I
This was fun to read and good luck with your niece!
Date: 15 Mar 2011 8:39 PM Title: Outtake Part I
well im excited to see how their trip goes
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2011 5:48 PM Title: Outtake Part I
very great out take chapter and sorry abotu the stuff with your niece
Date: 15 Mar 2011 4:54 PM Title: Outtake Part I
ethan is a real horndog
Date: 14 Mar 2011 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 16
I am so glad that u r back.. Like this chapter and can't wait for more...
Date: 09 Mar 2011 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 16
I'm really glad your back :)
Great chapter, Looking forward to see what Edward is going to say to Ethan and Danielle.
Date: 09 Mar 2011 11:27 AM Title: Chapter 16
Glad you are back. I hope they get a dna test. I bet the girl had sex with many boys since she was with all three of the Cullen boys. Her momma just doesn't know it. I hope it is not his child. He is trying so hard to improve himself.
Date: 09 Mar 2011 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 16
I'm glad to see that your family is doing well enough now for you to get back to writing. I look forward to your updates whenever you have the time.
Date: 09 Mar 2011 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 16
So Glad to see you back :) I am so glad they didn't lie!! Good for Charlie! Uh-oh Ethan and Danielle! What is Edward going to say?!?! I can't wait!!
Date: 08 Mar 2011 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 16
oops. papa bear waiting for them
Glad Charlie talked them into telling the truth.
[Report This]Date: 08 Mar 2011 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 16
Bad Kids welcome back I have missed you and I love the chapter you did an awesome job....Thanks for sharing!
Date: 08 Mar 2011 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 16
Loved it!
Date: 08 Mar 2011 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 16
Wow...this family is going through so much! I don't believe that the baby will be JC's, but I guess we will have to see. I hope Hannah is going to be okay. Great job...thanks so much!!!
Date: 08 Mar 2011 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 16
well now i cant wiat to see who the baby daddy is! keep the updates comming
Date: 28 Dec 2010 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 15
I love this story and you are doing a great job with it. I'm sorry that RL is kicking you in the butt lately. I hope that your family can begin to heal. I look forward to seeing where the story goes when you are able to resume your writing.
Date: 26 Sep 2010 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 15
Wow...that was a twist I was not expecting. Why do things like this have to happen for people to have their eyes open. I can't wait to see what happens. Great job as always...thanks so much!!!
Date: 22 Sep 2010 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 15
wow. that's all i can say
Date: 22 Sep 2010 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 15
Oh wow!! I really hope that nothing happens to the boys or Kevin because they can all get into trouble for lying. And Happy Birthday to your little girl 2 is quite an age my 2 1/2 year old fractured his ankle on Sunday so it is going to be a fun 3 weeks with his leg in a splint but today after he got it on all I heard my stepmom say on the phone when I called from work was "Jayden stop hitting the wall, Jayden stop hitting the wall!" Good times I hope that you have an easier time because I think that this is the first of many broken bones for that little boy with no fear.
Date: 21 Sep 2010 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 15
hmmm so a cop got them to lie....not good. Esp if they can prove they knew her.
[Report This]Date: 21 Sep 2010 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 15
Happy birthday to your lil one and thanks for the update love the story!!!
Date: 21 Sep 2010 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 15
happy birthday to her ! i loved it and their mistakes are coming back to bite them!! can not wait for more!
Date: 21 Sep 2010 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 15
That Jeff kid is crazy. You don't practically rape someone because your cousin is a slut and had a 4 way at 14. She did not tell her age and it sounded like she thought it would be fun. Plus she certainly was not a virgin to partake in that type of activity.
Date: 21 Sep 2010 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 15
Happy Birthday to your baby My baby girl is going to be 2 on the 25 they grow up way to fast. Dont mean to nit pick but what year is the story in now because if it is 2010 the boys are only 10 and 11 LOL.
Author's Response:
It's the year 2017. Thanks for reviewing and reading.
badkids3
Date: 21 Sep 2010 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 15
wow... just wow... hmmm... still not sure on how I feel about the lying... yes I am totally team Masen... but wow what a mess!! I don't agree with eye for an eye at all... JC and Ethan were wrong having sex with Kristy. But Ethan was still 17 right? so really JC would be the only one in trouble... what a mess can't wait to read the next chapter!!
Date: 21 Sep 2010 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 15
It's so incredibly fucked up that the cop told them to lie, and that Edward went along with it. That is the worst message, and it's total hypocrisy on their part. I mean, complete and utter hypocrisy. It makes me sick (of course I realize they are imaginary characters.) If that guy is going to jail for having consensual sex with Hanna, then the boys should without a doubt go to jail for the three/foursome. What entitles them to be above the law? I'm pissed off at this chapter.
Author's Response:
dont worry, justice will be served coming up. J.C. and Ethan will get some punishment. Thanks for reading.
badkids3
Date: 14 Sep 2010 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 14
poor little thing.
[Report This]Date: 14 Sep 2010 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 14
wow that is a hard chapter, I bet writing it was not easy either.. I love the story and you are doing a wonderful job.
thanks for sharing this story with us all!
Date: 13 Sep 2010 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 14
How sad is it that teenage boys actually think like this!! Not saying that they all do or will act like this but to use someone that you don't likes little sister like that is just sick. I really hope that he gets punnished for this even though she agreed to it.
Date: 13 Sep 2010 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 14
Poor Hanna but ibhope that this helps turn around and appreciate her family can not wait for more!
Date: 13 Sep 2010 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 14
Hannah was so stupid to go with that guy. Little girls try to grow up so fast. He was in the wrong, but she knew she should not be with him. I hope they can put that idiot in jail.
Date: 13 Sep 2010 9:04 AM Title: Chapter 14
I hope he gets charged wt ih statutory rape and assault.
Date: 13 Sep 2010 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 14
That boy in in deep shit. Poor Hanna talk about being used just because she was a Masen she was a sport for all the assholes to see who would win.
Date: 12 Sep 2010 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 14
oh wow! that is horrible! what a dick!! I hope he is 18 and they get him for stagatory!!
Date: 12 Sep 2010 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 14
wow, I didn't see that happening. I hope they get the guy
Date: 12 Sep 2010 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 14
Hanna's brothers have a lot to pay for. I know that they didn't hurt her themsleves but if they were more respectful of girls she wouldn't think it was ok for some guy to fuck her at achool during a football match. I mean yeah she wasn't raped as such but she was definitley assulted i kind of hope the guy is 18 and the chagre him with statutory rape.
I can't wait to see what happens next.
Please update soon
Date: 12 Sep 2010 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 14
I was so afaid this was going to happen to Hannah. She just wouldn't listen though. I am worried what this will do to her. I have a feeling that Edward is going to press charges and I hope he does! Great job...thanks!
Date: 12 Sep 2010 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 14
well i hope that everything will be ok with her! keep the chapters comming
Date: 09 Sep 2010 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 13
i really like the story..... but i think the kids are getting off easy.....if i ever did these things or my siblings we would have our asses handed to us.... i rhink edward and bella need to step up more on the punishment department...harsher.....
Date: 08 Sep 2010 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 13
A family that loses its mind together will find it together I hope :)
Date: 07 Sep 2010 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 13
Great chapter, I'm loving Ethan and Danielle.
Date: 07 Sep 2010 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 13
day in the life of horney teenagers ! cant wait till the next chapter
Date: 07 Sep 2010 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 13
That is terrible that you are going through all of that I hope that she is ok and that things get better for all of you. Hanna is really trying to get her brother in serious trouble isn't she? I think that she should listen to what people are trying to tell her around her but I don't think that she is going to.
Date: 07 Sep 2010 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 13
What a day indeed! I don't know how they make it sometime!!! Great job...thanks so much!!!
Date: 07 Sep 2010 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 13
hanna is just being a brat
Date: 07 Sep 2010 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 13
he had a threesome with his brother!!?? i liked the talk, and i like that danielle is changing him, i can not wait for more!
Date: 07 Sep 2010 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 13
They crack me up. I wish my parents would have been like "not while we're home..." mine were like, "not until you're 30!" But hey, E/B at least make sure they aren't going to be grandparents any time soon.
They are having a whole lot of sex up in that house. And Ethan fucking the flight attendant? Priceless.
I want more Megan and Brea!! (Just to see them around)
Date: 07 Sep 2010 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 13
i wanna know what is goning on with hanna.
Date: 07 Sep 2010 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 13
Totally loved this chapter.
Please tell me we are going to find out what the fuck is going on with Hanna soon. She seems to be being to bratty, but i am sure there is something triggering it.
[Report This]Date: 07 Sep 2010 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 13
Hanna is quite the little cock blocker isn't she!
Date: 06 Sep 2010 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 12
Sounds like another fun filled day LOL
Date: 03 Sep 2010 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 12
What the hell is going on???? I can't wait to find out.
I can't believe Edward did that to JC. I am glad JC said something at lunch.
I am so glad that Bella talked to Danielle. She is going to need all the support she can get. Ethan has to tell her the truth. He has to trust that she will stand by him. Great job...thanks!!!
[Report This]Date: 03 Sep 2010 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 12
Good chapter. Hope you have a better week.
[Report This]Date: 03 Sep 2010 11:37 AM Title: Chapter 12
this story always has twist and turns love the story.
[Report This]Date: 03 Sep 2010 8:54 AM Title: Chapter 12
Hey there~
Loving the story you are doing agreat job sorry to hear about your home stress. I totally understand about stress. I hope things get to a more even running for you soon. I am excited abotu the story you are doing such a AWESOME job with it and I so look forward to the next update!
YAY!!!!
TAT~
Date: 03 Sep 2010 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 12
That stunt that Edward pulled on JC was brilliant! I cracked up at that. I feel sorry for Danielle at this point. She must think that everyone in that house is nuts!
Date: 02 Sep 2010 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 12
I was worried but I was so happy to see an update I loved it and I can't wait to see what happened and ethan and danielles talk!
Date: 02 Sep 2010 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 12
hmmm wow world war III. cant wait to see this one.
Date: 02 Sep 2010 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 8
hmmmm mitchell is going to be a problem I think,
Date: 02 Sep 2010 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 12
what a scene to walk into ! cant wait till the next chapter
Date: 02 Sep 2010 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 5
hmmm I would have done a drug test. who knows what the boy slipped in the drink,
Date: 02 Sep 2010 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 4
uh oh. big brothers on the prowl
Date: 02 Sep 2010 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 1
hmmmm boys are soooo much trouble.
Date: 02 Sep 2010 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 12
No Stress is not needed. Lovely chapter.
[Report This]Date: 01 Sep 2010 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 10
I think it's better to have the translations right after. For me, it makes the story flow more smoothly.
I like the continuation of these characters :)
Date: 30 Aug 2010 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 11
It is to bad that Ethan had to see it happen to understand better what Bella went through and that she did not ask for it.
Date: 29 Aug 2010 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 11
Wow...poor Danielle. I am glad she has to Cullens there to help her. Great job...thanks so much!!!
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2010 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 11
ok first of all I love your story I post to you each chapter and I know you are busy but I have to ask WHY MOLINE IL? I am asking for selfish reasons.
This was touching and they just keep adding to the family don't they?
I really do <3 this story!!!
I really really really want to knwo why Moline, Il though so if you could answer that I would be greatful.
Date: 29 Aug 2010 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 11
Oh I feel so bad for Danielle! Oh course Edward and Bella are helping her :) Great chap! Can't wait for JC to find his girl :)
Date: 29 Aug 2010 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 11
That is so sad that Danielle was getting abused by her father but I am thinking that she isn't going to have to worry about that anymore because Edward and Bella aren't going to let anything happen to her.
Date: 28 Aug 2010 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 10
It is good that all of the kids seem to be having fun in school. I remember that I liked school when I was that age I don't know when it changed I think that it was in 5 or6th grade when I had a teacher that I didn't like and made school hard for me.
Date: 28 Aug 2010 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 11
I loved it I feel bad for danielle but Ethan and her are so cute I love it and cannot wait fit more!
Date: 27 Aug 2010 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 10
Fun school days getting ready for my own kids to go back we dont go back until Aug 2.
Date: 26 Aug 2010 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 10
AFter works better. Cute story
Date: 26 Aug 2010 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 10
W so cute and yeah maybe right after
Date: 26 Aug 2010 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 9
I am really glad that you included the translations of what was said in the language classes because I was lost. I took 4 years of spanish but that was a while ago...
Date: 26 Aug 2010 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 10
Amber and E are so cute!!! I like the translations right after. That way I know while I am reading it. Great job...thanks!!!
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2010 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 10
I think right after but that is just me....lol as for the translations that is.
I loved reading the kids days that was a nice touch.
Loving the story as always and looking forward to see where you take this one.
Date: 26 Aug 2010 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 9
I had to catch myself up. I found Broken Hearts Combined the other day and couldn't stop till I was finished. Now I'm finally caught up on the sequel. I love your story a lot! :) Keep up the great work.
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2010 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 9
Love it ! this is a great story! keep up the good job!