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Reviewer: sifi1977 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2010 5:50 PM Title: One step forward two steps back

love it so far... please more!

nice approach ...creepy eddi, something else...

Reviewer: Chiisuture Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2010 1:55 PM Title: One step forward two steps back

this chapter is sweet.. i can't wait for the rest i hope you make the next chapter a bit longer

Reviewer: Coleen561 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2010 10:48 AM Title: Chapter 1

I like your story and look forward to future chapters.

Please don't take offense, but it's a little rough (typos, mixed verb tense, etc.).  Perhaps it could use one more proof-reading pass before posting?  Again, if I didn't like your story, I wouldn't bother reviewing or making this suggestion, so I hope this is helpful.

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2010 10:31 AM Title: One step forward two steps back

yes and SO ARE YOU!! lol thanks for leaving us just like Edward wanting more. :( I can't wait for another update. him holding baby Bella was too cute. thanks again bye

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2010 6:03 AM Title: One step forward two steps back

Awww poor Edward.

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2010 5:03 PM Title: The day the earth stood still

ooh I can tell he's going to be possessive already, YES! I'm so excited. I can't wait till they finally start being a couple. :D keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2010 3:33 PM Title: The day the earth stood still

Awww Edward is in love.  Will he be by-passing the bloodlust thing?

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2010 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 1

Popular girl.

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2010 10:04 AM Title: Chapter 1

well you've got my interest peaked! keep it up. I can't wait to see what happens next. thanks bye

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