Date: 12 Sep 2010 5:50 PM Title: One step forward two steps back
love it so far... please more!
nice approach ...creepy eddi, something else...
Date: 08 Sep 2010 1:55 PM Title: One step forward two steps back
this chapter is sweet.. i can't wait for the rest i hope you make the next chapter a bit longer
Date: 08 Sep 2010 10:48 AM Title: Chapter 1
I like your story and look forward to future chapters.
Please don't take offense, but it's a little rough (typos, mixed verb tense, etc.). Perhaps it could use one more proof-reading pass before posting? Again, if I didn't like your story, I wouldn't bother reviewing or making this suggestion, so I hope this is helpful.
Date: 08 Sep 2010 10:31 AM Title: One step forward two steps back
yes and SO ARE YOU!! lol thanks for leaving us just like Edward wanting more. :( I can't wait for another update. him holding baby Bella was too cute. thanks again bye
[Report This]Date: 08 Sep 2010 6:03 AM Title: One step forward two steps back
Awww poor Edward.
Date: 02 Sep 2010 5:03 PM Title: The day the earth stood still
ooh I can tell he's going to be possessive already, YES! I'm so excited. I can't wait till they finally start being a couple. :D keep up the great work. thanks again bye
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2010 3:33 PM Title: The day the earth stood still
Awww Edward is in love. Will he be by-passing the bloodlust thing?
Date: 31 Aug 2010 10:04 AM Title: Chapter 1
well you've got my interest peaked! keep it up. I can't wait to see what happens next. thanks bye