Date: 23 Jan 2012 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 23
They are so cute. I am glad that Edward finally was brave enough to take the big step toward initimacy. It was very sweet, but hopefully with practise these two can spice it up a bit. Edward is doing so well coming out of his shell. I hope his confidence continues to build.
Date: 11 Jan 2012 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 22
I'm so glad your back I missed these two.
Great chapter, not liking the clffie thou, it's a tad cruel after such a long wait! (haha) and only 3 chapter till the end - boohoo :-(
Can't wait for the next chapter, it's been such a long wait for Bella (and us).
Loving this story, Pimm x
Date: 10 Jan 2012 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 22
Yay for non-awkward "meet the parents" dinners!!! Thanks for sharing! Oh, and I think you planned the chapter break perfectly; even though it may be a bit cliff-hanger-like, you wouldn't have been able to do it justice by continuing it in this chapter, nor would we, as readers, be able to devote the proper energy to reading it carefully.
Date: 09 Dec 2011 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 2
I think your description of Edward's hair color is the best one I have ever read! Also, I like how you give just enough tidbits to make me die of curiosity :)
Date: 15 Nov 2011 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 20
I love their time with Esme. I love how Bella said...We didn't change each other, we helped each other change ourselves...that is so ture. Bottom line is these two are much happier people since they met each other. Great job...thanks so much!!!
Date: 15 Nov 2011 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 14
I love it! I am so glad Bella and Edward finally talked and got everything out in the open. It was time and they are both ready. I am glad Rose is safe, but I am sure Alice is going crazy wondering where she is. Great job..thanks so much!!!