Date: 20 May 2013 4:10 AM Title: Coming Out
I love this, it is very interesting to know that Esmeand Rosalie are having problems to except Bella right away. Unlike other stories I read where Esme accepts Bella into the family. Please update soon!!!! I really want to know what happens next And if Esme and Rosalie will cause problems to Edward and Bella just as the others from the University, Kate, Tanya and Jacob N his Dom's entourage. Please, please, please update soon!!!!:)
Date: 10 Apr 2013 10:23 PM Title: September's Entries
loved it i hope u update soon...
Date: 10 Mar 2013 12:43 AM Title: September's Entries
Update again soon please :)
Date: 05 Feb 2013 12:10 PM Title: Suspicions
Enjoyed this one. Hope you will feel the need to continue this one soon. Thanks.
[Report This]Date: 07 Dec 2012 12:27 PM Title: Coming Out
I absolutely love this story, I first read it on fanfiction and I have read it over and over while waiting on updates before finding it on here. I hope you can update it again soon.
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2012 6:03 PM Title: Coming Out
Love this story the best I have read in this category. Hope it is going to be updated and completed......
Date: 20 Nov 2012 5:03 AM Title: September's Entries
This is a fantastic story. Are you going to publish more chapters?
[Report This]Date: 06 Oct 2012 4:12 PM Title: Brunch
Yeah E, about time you cut those apron strings!
[Report This]Date: 06 Oct 2012 2:26 PM Title: Hide
Wow, mosey family to the nth degree!?
[Report This]Date: 06 Oct 2012 10:47 AM Title: First Weekend
Just wonderful :-)
[Report This]Date: 06 Oct 2012 8:51 AM Title: Outtake BPOV
Hot and good
[Report This]Date: 06 Oct 2012 1:47 AM Title: Contracts & Limits
Lovely chapter
[Report This]Date: 06 Oct 2012 12:55 AM Title: Last Trial
Ahhh, all better:-)
[Report This]Date: 05 Oct 2012 9:49 PM Title: Trial Scene
Thrilled to learn there are more chapters!,,, ;-)
[Report This]Date: 05 Oct 2012 8:50 PM Title: December's Entries
Major risk, he's whipped already ;-)
[Report This]Date: 05 Oct 2012 8:14 PM Title: November's Entries
Excellent. Denial vs fear of rejection..?
[Report This]Date: 05 Oct 2012 7:15 PM Title: October's Entries
Fascinating. I had a wonderful, adventuresome boyfriend at 19, as I am much older now, I realize he was amazing and taught me so much.
[Report This]Date: 05 Oct 2012 5:36 PM Title: September's Entries
Delightful :-)
Date: 20 Sep 2012 9:58 PM Title: Coming Out
love the story cant wait to find out what happens next!!
Date: 08 Sep 2012 8:09 PM Title: Coming Out
cuando la actualizacion
esperando
Date: 20 Aug 2012 5:54 PM Title: Coming Out
I hope that this story has not been stopped for some reason. I think that you have a very inventive plot line and I would like to read more. Please update soon.
Date: 01 Aug 2012 8:51 PM Title: Coming Out
excellent chapter
Date: 01 Aug 2012 5:26 AM Title: Suspicions
excellent chapter thanks
Date: 31 Jul 2012 3:52 AM Title: First Weekend
excellent chapter thanks
Date: 30 Jul 2012 10:50 PM Title: Friday
very intersting thanks
Date: 05 Jul 2012 3:24 PM Title: September's Entries
I love this story so far..I'm impatiently waiting for an update
Date: 23 Jun 2012 7:30 PM Title: September's Entries
Very interesting...
Date: 10 Jun 2012 10:52 PM Title: Coming Out
Damn!!! All those lemons in one chapter? I love you! And I love possessive Edward. I can't wait to read more. Thanks again. Bye for now
[Report This]Date: 10 Jun 2012 4:13 PM Title: Coming Out
I'm abosuletly in love with this story.
It's really amazing and I hope you update soon.
Date: 26 May 2012 10:11 PM Title: Coming Out
Loved it. Wonder how black is going to treat Bella when her Dom is not with her
Date: 19 May 2012 6:44 AM Title: Coming Out
great chapter. very dynamic and erotic.
Date: 13 May 2012 3:43 PM Title: Coming Out
Black is a pig. His crew too apparently.
Hmmm....all I can say is that must be some kind of lotion! LOL!
Love Bella's word vomit there at the end! LOL!
Keye
Date: 01 May 2012 12:32 PM Title: Coming Out
Oh I so love your story. Loved Edward being so possessive.
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2012 2:52 PM Title: Coming Out
Some of the people at the club are just rude. Since it is a private club, maybe they need to have a meeting and discuss basic manners and rules again. Bella was so funny how she broke the ice at lunch. She can be so ackward in social situations, so she gets it all out at once.
Date: 27 Apr 2012 2:18 PM Title: Coming Out
'Really enjoy this story. It's going to be interesting, seeing how Edward and Bella handle the chanllenges all the others throw at them. Please keep writing. I look for an update every week. Thanks!
Date: 26 Apr 2012 11:26 PM Title: September's Entries
I like the idea of the scenerio and and how you start off with a narrative point of view. I haven't seen anyone write this clearly by storytelling from two points of perspective at the same time to where I get an understanding from their writing. So good job..
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2012 7:10 PM Title: Coming Out
Their physical encounters are so intense. Is that because they as still new to their Dom/sub relationship or just the fact that they are like minded in their desires?
Edward's progression towards falling in love is obvious to us, but is it to Isabella?
The feeding exercise showed a great need to please her master. Her sadness from hesitation displeased her more than him. He has faith in her ability to grow into the sub he desires her to be. Maybe when they are completely out in society there will be less pressure and more pleasing.
Date: 26 Apr 2012 4:01 PM Title: Coming Out
How not to fall in love with her? He can't. She is perfect for him. She is doing such a big effort in following all his rules and orders, even whet it's difficult. Both in the playroom and out of it she is giving all she can to make him proud. Edward has realized it and it's grateful for it. However the outside's response to them has it's cosequences on them. At the club it was clear and made Edward feel extremely possessive and even made him worry about Bella in her everyday life.
Will anyone really try to aproach her outside of the lifestyle? Wouldn't it jeopardize their place in it?
I loved her rant with Jasper and Alice, it was what was needed even if it surprised everyone.
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2012 7:59 AM Title: Coming Out
Brilliant as ever!!
Date: 26 Apr 2012 1:08 AM Title: Coming Out
Love this story! Thank you - Cheri
Date: 25 Apr 2012 11:19 PM Title: Coming Out
woah. such a great story.
Date: 25 Apr 2012 7:13 PM Title: September's Entries
Great chapter. Looking forward to see Afton's face when he realizes E&B are together. And I'm sure Jacob and Co. will cause a lot of trouble as well... Love your Bella. Thanks for the update.
Date: 25 Apr 2012 3:00 PM Title: Coming Out
Excellent chapter!
[Report This]Date: 25 Apr 2012 2:39 PM Title: Coming Out
Bella kicks them all and shows her maturity. Great that she could stand above those noisy girls in the club but also above the scrutiny of Edwards family.
Date: 25 Apr 2012 12:15 PM Title: Coming Out
As always I get so excited to see you have updated, and you never disapoint! Great chapter....am curious to see what's in store for these two. I have a really bad feeling about Jacob and his bunch...could be trouble.
Date: 25 Apr 2012 8:33 AM Title: Coming Out
I was really happy when I saw this chapter. This story is very unique and a pleasure to read.
I was a little shocked about Jasper and Alice's confession about looking into the lifestyle that could be a very interesting complication.
I lived how Edward handled everyone at the club. But I know it can't be that easy. I can't wait to see how things turn out.
Date: 25 Apr 2012 5:56 AM Title: Coming Out
ooo excellent as always can't wait to see what's next for these two
[Report This]Date: 25 Apr 2012 5:32 AM Title: Coming Out
I am always happy to see an update and a great update it was.
Date: 25 Apr 2012 12:52 AM Title: Coming Out
Seems like E will have to have a pretty explicit scene with her at the club, get everybody worked up, then Black and his crowd will get her away from E and have their way with her... right? Thanks for aother update.
Date: 24 Apr 2012 10:15 PM Title: Coming Out
Great chapter. Glad you are back, have missed it.
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2012 10:01 PM Title: Coming Out
Glad Jasper and Alice are trying to make amends. I think Carlisle is going to be in the same boat as Em as far as E&B are concerned. Grr Jake and his cronies are going to be an issue again I think. Yummy lemons.
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2012 9:32 PM Title: Coming Out
it'll be interesting to see if Alice and Bella will ever be more than just civil with each other. i doubt Rose will ever come around
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2012 8:41 PM Title: Coming Out
Thank you for the update. What a chapter, as always you never fail. Sweet and steamy. A good read to pick up my spirits.
Date: 24 Apr 2012 8:17 PM Title: Coming Out
looking forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2012 8:05 PM Title: Coming Out
glad for the update. Liked Bella/s rant Sex was great too
Date: 24 Apr 2012 6:41 PM Title: Coming Out
I'm happy they started to come out as a couple. I really hope things will be OK with Alice and Jasper. Thank you for your update. I really enjoy your stories.
Date: 24 Apr 2012 6:35 PM Title: Coming Out
Great chapter. Please update soon, I can't wait to read Afton's reaction to seeing them at lunch
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2012 6:12 PM Title: Coming Out
It was lovely to get an update. I have to say that some of Bella's training surprised me. She is supposed to have had 2 previous dom's wouldn't a lot of that already been ingrained in her, or does Edward had different demands? On a personal level, I don't get why someone would want someone else to tell you what you can and cannot say/do; wear or not wear while accounting for all your moments and thoughts but then I guess that why I am not a sub. Sorry I digress. I look forward to the next update when you can.
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2012 5:34 PM Title: Coming Out
OMG I love these two, they just get each other and don't let other people issues bring them down. I just want Bella to really put Rose in her place, let her know that Edward is with her and to stop trying to hook him up. Is been long, glad that you are back, that was all kinds of hot.
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2012 5:17 PM Title: Coming Out
This is one of my all time favorites....why did I not have a Prof. Cullen when I was in school......
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2012 4:58 PM Title: Coming Out
I loved this chapter! You know that I always look forward to hearing from you and this chapter was awesome. I especially enjoy the way that Edward is able to seperate his feelings as a boyfriend to his responsibilities as a Dom.
Date: 24 Apr 2012 4:13 PM Title: Coming Out
he is a caveman isn't he...how very nice for Bella lol! Good for Jasper and Alice to try to make amends, lets hope they see how very good they are. Those ppl at the club better step off lol, He-man Cullen is going to be very on top (snort, pun intended) of her for a while.
Date: 24 Apr 2012 3:38 PM Title: Coming Out
I've been a crappy, lurking reader for the past few years not reviewing the fics I've read, but I've made a concious effort to review what I read this year.
This was a great chapter with tons of new info for the plot to thicken & extend! And Edward is falling in love with Bella Swan. Swoon.
Thanks for writing! :D
Date: 24 Apr 2012 3:10 PM Title: Coming Out
I was wondering about this story the other day. I was nicely surprised to see you had updated. I really like t. Can you remind me again how old Edward an Bella are. Thank you! Update often please!
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2012 2:42 PM Title: Coming Out
Well i'm just glad that Alice and Jasper are actually nice people. I hope Bella and Alice can become good friends. Especially if Alice and Jasper took the house near Edward's place! Bella seems much better suited to Alice than Rosalie.
Date: 31 Mar 2012 10:53 PM Title: Suspicions
Great chapter thanks for writing.
Date: 07 Mar 2012 3:55 PM Title: Suspicions
I can't wait until everyone sees them having lunch together. I bet Edward has a special treat for Isabella for Valentine's Day. I can't wait until the next update.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading - Beth
Date: 22 Feb 2012 9:33 AM Title: Suspicions
I'm a little surprised by no one calling him. I hope they come around, because I'm afraid if they don't Bella will walk away not wanting to put a break between Edward and his family.
This story is really great and I'm sorry I didn't find it sooner.
Author's Response:
Glad you like it and thanks for reading - Beth
Date: 22 Feb 2012 9:05 AM Title: Brunch
I'm so glad that happened. I know that must sound weird, but now that it is out in the open his family can see for themselves how much Edward really cares and hopefully they will come to at least respect his choices even if they do not agree.
Author's Response:
Some people always feel they know best - no mattr what. Thanks for reading - Beth
Date: 22 Feb 2012 8:22 AM Title: Hide
Well I never. Those little sneaks Alice and Rosalie were up to no good. God this brunch is going to be brutal. I can see it.
Author's Response:
Yes they are - thanks for reading - Beth
Date: 21 Feb 2012 10:59 PM Title: Wednesday
The amount of care that Edward takes with Bella is just beautiful.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading - Beth