Date: 10 Feb 2014 5:26 PM Title: Coming Out
I absolutely love this story and the increasing desire & love they have for one another. I do hope all is well with you and that we can see how this relationship plays out. I hope the new year is treating you well and that writing is still giving you pleasure.
Date: 20 May 2013 4:10 AM Title: Coming Out
I love this, it is very interesting to know that Esmeand Rosalie are having problems to except Bella right away. Unlike other stories I read where Esme accepts Bella into the family. Please update soon!!!! I really want to know what happens next And if Esme and Rosalie will cause problems to Edward and Bella just as the others from the University, Kate, Tanya and Jacob N his Dom's entourage. Please, please, please update soon!!!!:)
Date: 27 Apr 2012 2:52 PM Title: Coming Out
Some of the people at the club are just rude. Since it is a private club, maybe they need to have a meeting and discuss basic manners and rules again. Bella was so funny how she broke the ice at lunch. She can be so ackward in social situations, so she gets it all out at once.
Date: 26 Apr 2012 11:26 PM Title: September's Entries
I like the idea of the scenerio and and how you start off with a narrative point of view. I haven't seen anyone write this clearly by storytelling from two points of perspective at the same time to where I get an understanding from their writing. So good job..
Date: 26 Apr 2012 7:10 PM Title: Coming Out
Their physical encounters are so intense. Is that because they as still new to their Dom/sub relationship or just the fact that they are like minded in their desires?
Edward's progression towards falling in love is obvious to us, but is it to Isabella?
The feeding exercise showed a great need to please her master. Her sadness from hesitation displeased her more than him. He has faith in her ability to grow into the sub he desires her to be. Maybe when they are completely out in society there will be less pressure and more pleasing.
Date: 26 Apr 2012 4:01 PM Title: Coming Out
How not to fall in love with her? He can't. She is perfect for him. She is doing such a big effort in following all his rules and orders, even whet it's difficult. Both in the playroom and out of it she is giving all she can to make him proud. Edward has realized it and it's grateful for it. However the outside's response to them has it's cosequences on them. At the club it was clear and made Edward feel extremely possessive and even made him worry about Bella in her everyday life.
Will anyone really try to aproach her outside of the lifestyle? Wouldn't it jeopardize their place in it?
I loved her rant with Jasper and Alice, it was what was needed even if it surprised everyone.
Date: 25 Apr 2012 12:15 PM Title: Coming Out
As always I get so excited to see you have updated, and you never disapoint! Great chapter....am curious to see what's in store for these two. I have a really bad feeling about Jacob and his bunch...could be trouble.
Date: 25 Apr 2012 8:33 AM Title: Coming Out
I was really happy when I saw this chapter. This story is very unique and a pleasure to read.
I was a little shocked about Jasper and Alice's confession about looking into the lifestyle that could be a very interesting complication.
I lived how Edward handled everyone at the club. But I know it can't be that easy. I can't wait to see how things turn out.
Date: 25 Apr 2012 12:52 AM Title: Coming Out
Seems like E will have to have a pretty explicit scene with her at the club, get everybody worked up, then Black and his crowd will get her away from E and have their way with her... right? Thanks for aother update.
Date: 24 Apr 2012 6:12 PM Title: Coming Out
It was lovely to get an update. I have to say that some of Bella's training surprised me. She is supposed to have had 2 previous dom's wouldn't a lot of that already been ingrained in her, or does Edward had different demands? On a personal level, I don't get why someone would want someone else to tell you what you can and cannot say/do; wear or not wear while accounting for all your moments and thoughts but then I guess that why I am not a sub. Sorry I digress. I look forward to the next update when you can.
Date: 24 Apr 2012 5:34 PM Title: Coming Out
OMG I love these two, they just get each other and don't let other people issues bring them down. I just want Bella to really put Rose in her place, let her know that Edward is with her and to stop trying to hook him up. Is been long, glad that you are back, that was all kinds of hot.
Date: 24 Apr 2012 4:58 PM Title: Coming Out
I loved this chapter! You know that I always look forward to hearing from you and this chapter was awesome. I especially enjoy the way that Edward is able to seperate his feelings as a boyfriend to his responsibilities as a Dom.
Date: 24 Apr 2012 4:13 PM Title: Coming Out
he is a caveman isn't he...how very nice for Bella lol! Good for Jasper and Alice to try to make amends, lets hope they see how very good they are. Those ppl at the club better step off lol, He-man Cullen is going to be very on top (snort, pun intended) of her for a while.
Date: 24 Apr 2012 3:38 PM Title: Coming Out
I've been a crappy, lurking reader for the past few years not reviewing the fics I've read, but I've made a concious effort to review what I read this year.
This was a great chapter with tons of new info for the plot to thicken & extend! And Edward is falling in love with Bella Swan. Swoon.
Thanks for writing! :D