Date: 16 Nov 2011 10:46 AM Title: Chapter 30: Unedited
I have caught up with this story and I love it. I love the more mature Bella. I hope there is no heart break in this story. They already had their time apart and hated it. They know they love and need each other. They make each other so happy and that is what is important.
Date: 12 Nov 2011 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 30: Unedited
Early in this chapter. I was going to say, I Hope I live long enough for them to be together in the sense of marriage/physical and her changing. He has to love her that much he puts away his feelings on that. It should be her choice after all. We do miss you when you don't update. I look for you on FF & twilighted.
Date: 12 Nov 2011 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 30: Unedited
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Date: 11 Nov 2011 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 30: Unedited
I really loved this chapter........I think Bella is coming around now and realizes that she cannot bear to be seperated without her Edward. So lovely ;-)
Date: 11 Nov 2011 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 30: Unedited
They are too cute together
[Report This]Date: 11 Nov 2011 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 30: Unedited
Aw - too cute!! And the toddler-speak - "Maybe waiter"!! ROTFL!! MORE PLEASE?! :-D
[Report This]Date: 04 Sep 2011 11:17 AM Title: Chapter 29: Vows & Vicoprofen
Fantastic story, more please.
[Report This]Date: 03 Sep 2011 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 11: Deals Off
Aw, I loved how joking Jared was, and Embry's astute observations. What the hey is going on with Jacob's lack of presence in this story this far? I hope he's just been detained, not otherwise absent...
Date: 03 Sep 2011 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 17: Decisions Part 1
I ran across your story while browsing one day. So far I've read through Ch. 17, Decisions Pt 1. Every chapter has been well thought out and well written. It baffles me the low number of reviews it has received. If I were a writer I would "pimp" your story to everybody but since I'm not I'll have to do some thinking to figure out how to make it more known so others can find it and enjoy as I am. Thank you for taking the time to create something that is so entertaining
Date: 03 Sep 2011 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 29: Vows & Vicoprofen
Nice twist on the original story
Date: 02 Sep 2011 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 29: Vows & Vicoprofen
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Date: 02 Sep 2011 9:57 AM Title: Chapter 29: Vows & Vicoprofen
Wonderful wedding. Glad B isnt hurt too bad. Aren't drugs a wonderful thing sometimes? Hee Hee
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2011 9:30 AM Title: Chapter 27: Loose Ends
angela always was sweet. Glad Jake is behaving himself.
Date: 02 Sep 2011 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 28: Wedding Bells
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Date: 02 Sep 2011 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 27: Loose Ends
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Date: 05 Jun 2011 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 26: Victoria
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Date: 05 Jun 2011 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 25: Fire & Icy Water
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Date: 05 Jun 2011 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 23: The Cullens- Part 2
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Date: 22 May 2011 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 22: The Cullens- Part 1
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Date: 22 May 2011 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 21: Anger, Denial, and A Dog
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Date: 22 May 2011 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 20: In The Sun
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Date: 20 May 2011 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 19: Choosing Sides
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Date: 20 May 2011 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 18: Decisions Part 2
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Date: 20 May 2011 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 17: Decisions Part 1
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Date: 19 May 2011 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 16: Picnics & Promises
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[Report This]Date: 17 May 2011 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 26: Victoria
woo hoo the wicked witch is dead. Glad the wolves and the C's got along well enough to kill her.
Author's Response:
Thank you for all the lovely reviews, my dear!! Yeah, ding dong the witch is dead...
See you next update!! -Ginnie
[Report This]Date: 17 May 2011 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 25: Fire & Icy Water
Great chapter. He needs to tell her though. Agree with Rose onthis one.
HEA for Leah. Yeah Think she would have left at earliest opportunity.
Date: 17 May 2011 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 24: Changes
Poor seth. Hope he'll make it through ok.
Date: 17 May 2011 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 23: The Cullens- Part 2
Awwww wanted to see an em bear hug. Lol. Great chapter
Date: 17 May 2011 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 22: The Cullens- Part 1
great start to her first visit.
Date: 17 May 2011 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 21: Anger, Denial, and A Dog
Great chapter hun. Glad jake didn't try to kiss her again.
Date: 17 May 2011 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 20: In The Sun
ah here comes the argument...
Date: 17 May 2011 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 19: Choosing Sides
Sue's got real nerve. Hope bella threw her out on her ass. But I know she wouldnt...Wonder if Charlie notices B was upset later.
Date: 17 May 2011 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 18: Decisions Part 2
was waiting to see if they'd sic Sue on her.
Date: 17 May 2011 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 17: Decisions Part 1
always though rose was too self absorbed... Her whole speech was so self important.
[Report This]Date: 16 May 2011 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 15: Happy
I just found this story and I love it so far. Maybe I missed this while I was reading or it was implied.......
Is Bella still a virgin at the age of 22, or did she have sex with Jake?
Is Edward sill a virgin?
Can't wait until I am caught up with all 25 chapters :)
Author's Response:
LOL, these sorts of questions make me giggle, but I wonder the same thing when I read other people's stories. So, this topic will be brought up between B & E very soon. I kind of hate to spoil it, but my Bella & Edward are meant to be as close to canon as possible, so you might be able to guess the answer. ;-) If it's really bugging you not to know, PM me.
Thx! Ginnie
PS- Questions about B's relationship with Jake can be answered in one of the outtakes available on my profile! :-)
Date: 16 May 2011 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 23: The Cullens- Part 2
MORE. PLEASE. ASAP!! :-D
[Report This]Date: 16 May 2011 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 21: Anger, Denial, and A Dog
"Alright, little lamb. Off to the lion's den we go." - Funniest. Twilight. joke. ever!! :-D
Author's Response:
LOL! Glad you liked it. :D
[Report This]Date: 16 May 2011 12:35 PM Title: Chapter 20: In The Sun
ANOTHER update just popped into my inbox!! I'm feeling so spoiled I could kiss you!! M-WAH!! :-D
Author's Response:
I'm trying hard to get this caught up to that OTHER fanfiction site. Fortunately, I had some time today.
Thanks for reading, and for all the wonderful reviews. :)
Ginnie
Date: 16 May 2011 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 19: Choosing Sides
As for predictions, I'm betting one of those pesky wolves barges in..... That and she's just as shocked as in Twilight - basically a jaw-dropping moment.... *chuckles*
Date: 16 May 2011 11:17 AM Title: Chapter 17: Decisions Part 1
Heh-heh!! More soon please?! :-D
Date: 16 May 2011 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 16: Picnics & Promises
Dang - I cant' remember how they got here.... Recap A/N next Ch. please?!
Date: 15 May 2011 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 16: Picnics & Promises
sweeyt first date. Not sure I recognized anything from MS though. Ah well been awhile since I read it.
[Report This]Date: 15 May 2011 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 15: Happy
Virginia, It totally sucks that you have so few reviews. Your writing of WDH is a certified slow building of the story of the love that Bella and Edward have. It is a pleasure that there is so much romance in this story. It wouldn't be about the two if it wasn't. Keep up the good work.
Date: 23 Apr 2011 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 13: My Only Exception
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Date: 23 Apr 2011 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 15: Happy
*happy shout* MORE PLEASE!?! :-D
Date: 23 Apr 2011 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 15: Happy
hmmm a weekend at charlies......wonder what the wolves are gonna pull......cause you know they are.
Date: 22 Apr 2011 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 8: Reunion
HOLY. FREAKIN'. MACKEREL!! Can you say 'Crazy'?! :-?
Date: 22 Apr 2011 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 14: Sway
They are too cute together.
Date: 22 Apr 2011 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 11: Deals Off
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Date: 22 Apr 2011 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 13: My Only Exception
glad they are talking and getting to know each other.
Date: 22 Apr 2011 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 12: Stay
aww they are so cute together.
Date: 22 Apr 2011 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 11: Deals Off
Bella needs to be firm with those Q-Boys.
Date: 31 Dec 2010 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 10: Me & You
Well okay now we both know we love each other and we can not seem to find that feeling elsewhere, so now what is next? You can not live apart can not live together as she is now. She is changeable he is not. This is really not that hard to figure out. How long does it take them?
I swear if you love something that much, you want to be able to be together.
Date: 31 Dec 2010 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 9: Riding In My Car
WELL DONE BELLA...
Date: 31 Dec 2010 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 10: Me & You
Happy new year!
Date: 31 Dec 2010 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 9: Riding In My Car
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Date: 31 Dec 2010 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 8: Reunion
You know it seems teadious to keep rehashing " I am not safe for you Bella". Either work up another relationship and damn well mean it or leave her alone. If another Vampire kills her then too bad she is NOT your problem. Edward drives me crazy with his crap.
Date: 31 Dec 2010 5:33 PM Title: Chap 4- Eye to Eye
ok Woopie he is back and still not wanting to be with her because of the same thing. So he needs to leave her alone and not even let her see him. She is better off thinking he never came back. Don't hold out for someone that will not give up everything for you. sigh..
Date: 31 Dec 2010 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 10: Me & You
I love it. The Pack is such a pain.
Date: 31 Dec 2010 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 7: Protector
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Date: 31 Dec 2010 11:36 AM Title: Chapter 10: Me & You
aww very sweet dinner.
Date: 31 Dec 2010 11:36 AM Title: Chapter 9: Riding In My Car
yup he did get off easy so far.
Date: 31 Dec 2010 11:35 AM Title: Chapter 8: Reunion
awww protective Em and a mad Carlisle
Date: 31 Dec 2010 11:34 AM Title: Chapter 7: Protector
well that last has to be embry cause I dont think Seth would have phased yet but ya never know.
Date: 31 Dec 2010 9:49 AM Title: Chap 6- Visions & Vacillations
guessing the "accident" bella spoke of was James and Laurant going after B?
Date: 31 Dec 2010 9:49 AM Title: Chap 5- Ghosts of the Past
hmmm interesting seeing her side of it. I'm usually not one for duplicate POVs on the same dialogue, but I think it was needed in this case
Date: 31 Dec 2010 9:48 AM Title: Chap 4- Eye to Eye
hmmm some of the wolves still should have changed I think so she may know what they are... maybe?
Date: 31 Dec 2010 9:46 AM Title: Chap 3- Running, Climbing, Falling
theories... hmmm I have a few
1) Charlie is dead and one or more of the wolves lives with her, hence no vision for alice
2) Bella lives on the res for some reason, no vision
3) Bella lives in town near work and school with wolves, no visions
4) the kid is either renee and phil or is the child of one of the res families...maybe angela/ben too
Date: 31 Dec 2010 9:46 AM Title: Chap 2- Homecoming
awww poor baby... his car smells like his dream girl
Date: 31 Dec 2010 9:45 AM Title: Chap 1- The Prodigal
hmmm wonder what rose's ultimatum exactly was.
Date: 31 Dec 2010 9:45 AM Title: Prologue: Bella
interesting twist. I think I'll like this one.
Date: 09 Dec 2010 2:46 PM Title: Chap 6- Visions & Vacillations
:)
Date: 09 Dec 2010 2:29 PM Title: Chap 5- Ghosts of the Past
she knows his a vampire.......! :)
Date: 08 Dec 2010 5:30 PM Title: Chap 3- Running, Climbing, Falling
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Date: 08 Dec 2010 12:11 PM Title: Chap 6- Visions & Vacillations
Great chapter!
Date: 08 Dec 2010 11:21 AM Title: Chap 6- Visions & Vacillations
Oh wow. I am dying to know
Author's Response:
Thanks, I will upload again soon. :-) Nice to have you reading!!
Date: 08 Dec 2010 10:55 AM Title: Chap 5- Ghosts of the Past
HOLY SHIT!!!! I didn't see that coming...at ALL!
Author's Response:
LOL! Glad I could surprise you. ;-) Thanks for the review too!!
Date: 08 Dec 2010 9:31 AM Title: Prologue: Bella
Well I went from dating a sailor to married to a Jacob and a mortgage payment....so yea wild child to soccer mom minus the kid...
Author's Response:
Ha.. I went from shy band geek to shockingly well-liked and out-going sorority girl. Believe me, I never expected that to happen. The five years post-grad changed me a lot more than that though. Now I'm the soccer mom with kids married to a sailor/firefighter. LOL!! Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 07 Dec 2010 10:42 PM Title: Chap 5- Ghosts of the Past
I dont know what she knows but it would be to her advantage to find SOMEONE ELSE.
Edward needs to stay with MAMA.. 110 years more.
Author's Response:
I'm sorry, but I have to say this is the strangest review I've gotten yet. Team Jacob? Just curious.
Thank you for the review nevertheless. :-)
Date: 07 Dec 2010 10:29 PM Title: Chap 5- Ghosts of the Past
The pack and Bella hmmmm. :)
Author's Response:
Hmm, indeed. Thank you for reading!
Date: 07 Dec 2010 5:02 PM Title: Chap 3- Running, Climbing, Falling
Poor guy - is she having a child with a wolf?
Author's Response:
Oh no, no, no! No wolf-pups in this story, LOL! Thanx for reviewing! :-)
Date: 11 Nov 2010 1:22 PM Title: Chap 1- The Prodigal
Hmmm, well - he will get his car and the essence of bella will be there, right? she's matured in 5 years (god, how much did I change in college - alot and that's why I appreciate that authors such as yourself give us fun sotiries like this).
Excited to see where this goes. Cannot imagine what edward has been doing the last 5 years. Glad that he has decided to come back to his family. Did I miss where they are? Seattle?
Liked your bio as well. and my eyes are really as blue as they are - not contacts either.
waiting patiently for more!!!
mic
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. Sorry for the late reply, I didn't have email alerts turned on. OOPS>
Date: 09 Nov 2010 4:58 PM Title: Chap 1- The Prodigal
:)
Author's Response:
Thx :-)
Date: 09 Nov 2010 4:43 PM Title: Prologue: Bella
:)
Author's Response:
Thx! :-)
Date: 09 Nov 2010 4:32 PM Title: Chap 1- The Prodigal
oh wow - more
Author's Response:
Thank you bunches. Sorry for the late reply, I had to turn on email alerts apparently. :-)