Date: 13 Apr 2012 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 51
This story was, well honestly I cried during most of it. It was empowering and a true inspiration, though it's just a story I find it made me think about my relationship evaluate it and realize that I have a great man, and that we need to make sure that our daughter knows that she is lived and when she grows up, a baby now, what a loving boyfriend/husband she deserves. My husband and I realized that this happens more and more in our society and we need to be an examPle of what she deserves and wha a real and healthy relationship looks like. Thank you.
Thank you so much for your kind words.
Date: 09 Aug 2011 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 23
Thinking about the Casey Anthony trial, I wonder if Mrs. Newton wouldn't be charged with not only lying to law enforcement officials, but also for perjury on the stand. I also wonder if Mr. Newton pressed domestic abuse or assault charges against her. She's clearly deranged. Perhaps she ran. The police should be looking for her.
I like that Bella has "issues" after the years of abuse (emotional, mental, and physical). I think it makes her character very realistic. No one could recover quickly after an ordeal like she suffered.
You're right, Bella does have issues. There's no way she can't.
Date: 05 Apr 2011 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 1
Omg I just stumbled on this story and I was surprised to see that you placed the setting of the town in Clarendon, Tx hahaha I live about 30 miles away from there. Great story by the way!
Where do you live? I actually live in Clarendon.
Date: 05 Apr 2011 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 50
BB~ that was just incredible, when Edward told her about seeing her at the lake and how he nearly left that day... **sniffles** well that was just perfect, had me in tears. The sweetness of Charlie and Mary and the encouragement of Bella for her Father to go on with his life, as it's far from over, Renee would want that for him... that was perfect...
This has been a wonderful journey for Our wondeful Edward and Bella, and the incorporation of a Smaller (not Small, but Smaller) Texas Town; and the fell of the life in such a town was wonderful. Really felt a kinship and warmth in this story that I don't alway achieve in other stories. Not to say that I don't enjoy all of the ones I do read, but I'm just trying to let you know that you DID indeed achieve success here.. Hope all of that made sense to you.... Please be encouraged in your FF writing abilities and hope you have a desire to create more. Yes, Yes,,,,, I know you have more working and I must find time to catch up, and I will... :-) Will be anxious for the Epilouge... Here's to you!!!! ***cheer, cheer, cheet***
Laters BB Kathy xoxoxoxo
Thank you so much:) It means a lot.
Date: 24 Mar 2011 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 49
Holy shit balls batman! WTF?!
That was a very tense chapter! Poor Peter, he was just trying to help :)
Gotta love Peter!
This story rocks, and its a tense time now, I am eagerly looking forward to the nest chapter :)
Date: 24 Mar 2011 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 49
This is kinda scary..... My baby was born six weeks early, I know exactly hows shes feeling as far as not knowing whats going to happen next, and all the ivs and such..... it's almost like you took what i went through and redone it to fit ur story.... Love this story though, keep up the great work, looking forward to seeing what happens next
Date: 22 Mar 2011 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 22
Total mortification I would say for our poor Charlie!! "tighty whitey kind a Guy"
Charlie and Carlilse teasing E & B about kissing all the time, that's just plan adorable. Love this story.. Just leaves you feeling joyful with slight sadness. in these last few chapters.. Well especially since Asshat is dead, now that makes a person remember that Karma is a Bitch.... huh!
Date: 22 Mar 2011 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 20
Loved, Loved how she did not let "that" Salesman.. No! hell no! scratch that.. "Those" Car Salesmen get to her!!! You go girl!!! So many times women feel looked down upon and the weaker sex when in situatios like simply buying a car, she really stood up for herself here.. Good Chapter! No GREAT chapter!
Date: 22 Mar 2011 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 18
awwwhhh!!! She is starting to live her life! yay! So you are from there that's amazing.. My ex-in-laws have relatives in that area. Every Labor Day weekend for years we would always go to what I referred to as the Panhandle from the Gulf Coast south of Houston where we lived then. His mother's family had a Family reunion, of all places Quail... very tiny town, right! My ex was from Dumas so whenever we would go their from Houston we always went 287, and therefore straight through your town...Small world wouldn't you say? Love you story and will be reading more of them.. Liked your Blog as well!
Laters BB Kathy xoxoxoxoxoxo
lol, Quial is a very small town, if it's even considered a town anymore.
Date: 22 Mar 2011 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 17
I haven't been reviewing every chapter and I apologize this is just so a consuming story and you just keep hitting the next button...
It's really a great story, I am pretty familiar with the area that you are writing about in this story too, so that's rather comical for me.. Really great story!
Reallly? I'm from this area, too. Clarendon, in fact:)
Date: 18 Mar 2011 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 48
I have caught up with all your stories now bar one... I am heading there now. Loving the story and the chapters.
Fiorella is my name it means little flower in Italian if you wan a unique name for the baby girls middle name.
Antonia is another, was my fathers mums name. It means priceless.
Gabriella - It means "God Is My Strength." It is the feminine version of Gabriel
Date: 18 Mar 2011 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 48
*grabs you in a fierce bear hug*
Oh, you want us to believe you are all mean and stuff, especially with these evil cliffies and such. But you're not! You fluffy and cuddly! I just want to squeeze you!
I loved this chapter, and I am looking forward to the next even more! :)
Date: 16 Mar 2011 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 47
What a wonderful Christmas for the Cullens and Swans. It will be even crazier next year. Edward and Bella will have to have a truck next year for all of the presents the two grandkids will get.
Date: 08 Mar 2011 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 46
So Charlie found out first and kept it a secret. It is a good thing he is a quiet man. Of course, they had the Emmett and Rose comic relief to take some pressure off of Charlie. Give Alice a few minutes and she will remember to ask Charlie about his present.
Date: 06 Mar 2011 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 46
Ugh, you know how to take away the aches and pains of being sick :)
I loved this chapter and I cant wait to see what happens when the others find out about the twins, you have me dear.
*cocks head to the side trying to figure it out looking like a confused puppy*
Date: 18 Feb 2011 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 45
I love my Kindle. It is so easy to handle and I can make notes and underline information that I want to remember. The free books are fun too.
Thank you for writing your stories.
Thank you, Sweetie!
Date: 18 Feb 2011 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 45
Betty, I love my Kindle. I can get on this site from anywhere. Not so much with FanFiction. I'm loving this story. Twins, huh? Well didn't see that coming. Can't wait.
I am so addicted to mine! tHank you:)
Date: 18 Feb 2011 11:47 AM Title: Chapter 45
OMG, I have a nook :) I know what you mean!! *giggles*
Great chapter! What a surprise!!! Yee Haw!!!!
I didnt see that one coming! No wonder Charlote was trying to hide back her smile and laughter lol.
Love it, BB!!!!
Don't you love it! Thank you:)
Date: 18 Feb 2011 11:44 AM Title: Chapter 45
I love your story, sorry not much for reviewing I read so many its hard to keep them strait. This story hits home for me. I too, found my happily ever after with an old friend after a few years of a very bad relationship. I don't have a kindle by I do have an Ipad with the kindle app and I just love it.
Thank you, Sweetie!
Date: 18 Feb 2011 11:10 AM Title: Chapter 45
Ha ha! Put that Kindle down and get to writing ma´am! Lol! I know how distracting a good story can be... I should be writing as I type this to you! Lol! Great chapter!
Hehe, it's so pretty......
Date: 28 Jan 2011 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 44
Aww BB.... don't beat yourself up. It was a great chapter and I'm really glad Jessica went peacefully, I would hate to have to slap a biotch!! Lol! Great chapter... thanks for the update!!
Thank you, Sweetie:)
Date: 12 Jan 2011 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 43
I was absolutely thrilled when I saw the update for this story BB!!!
I enjoyed their girls night out, they had just enough fun to ease a bit of stress.
And it is so cool that Rose and Emmett are there, at the point they can talk about marriage.
Their wedding is going to be wonderful!
Love it! I cant wait to vote for you!
Date: 02 Jan 2011 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 42
Whew!! I thought something was wrong with the baby there for a minute. I'm glad all is well and these two had some drama free time. Lol! They so deserve it! Great chapter!
Happy New Year!
Date: 01 Jan 2011 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 42
It is good to know that the baby is alright! Something tells me that this girls night out is going to be one for the books because they are all keyed up and in need for some time with the girls.
Yeah, I think it's going to be exciting:)
Date: 29 Dec 2010 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 41
Whoo hooo! I´m now caught up too! Now what shall I do while catching up on Taking Chances? Hmmm... guess I´ll just go catch up on some of your other great stories! Lol! I´m glad that everything worked out in the end, and the wedding took place. How funny was it that Edward cried over an a minus? Lol! Great chapter! Hope your cold gets better!
Thank you, sweeite:) I am working on the next chapter to this one right now so hopefully, I will be able to update it tomorrow.
Date: 29 Dec 2010 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 40
OMG... what the hell was that? How could you do that to Bella on her wedding day. I´m glad the next chapter´s up and I don´t have to sit here suffering trying to figure out what´s going to happen! That was mean! Lol! Great chapter!
Date: 29 Dec 2010 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 34
That was just perfect! I couldn´t help but laugh at Esme assuming that they were fighting and it was automatically Edward´s fault. Can´t wait til they break all the good news, that was a sweet proposal, this Bella doesn´t need all the bells and whistles. Great chapter!
Date: 29 Dec 2010 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 32
Haha! Mind blowing sex + no condom + antibiotics = baby!!! Whoo hoo! Let´s just see how this one plays out!! Great chapter! Sorry I´m behind in my reviews been reading mostly from my phone!
P.S. Hope you had a wonderful Christmas as well as you little girl, hope she´s doing much better! Happy New Year!
Date: 27 Dec 2010 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 41
Jessica has some nerve. I hope she never returns to town. She wasnever good enough for Edward. I think Edward and Bella always loved each other, but neither was brave enough to speak the words. They both just settled until they were.