Salut, j'aurai vraiment aimé lire cette fic mais je ne lis pas l'anglais et je pensai pouvoir la lire en français vu quelle est mise en language anglais, français ?????
Je dois dire que j'ai du mal à comprendre pourquoi, d'autant que tu n'es pas la seule dans ce cas. Dommage!!
Wow, that was GREAT! I loved it :) I loved The Brave Little Toaster when I was younger too :) I am so happy they kissed again :) Cannot wait to see what happens next!
Thank you, did you know The Brave Little Toaster is also a book? I know weird but I found this out when I researched to see what year the movie came out.
Oh those Edward kisses are so hot but what they lead to is down right steamy!
Thank you hahaha
Heads up we're going to have a few songs that are just going to go along with some scenes if you catch my drift. ;)
I love this story. i like the way you have Bella & Edward interact. Always keeping what's good for Xavier first and formost!! Well done. I am partial to the stories that feature Edward as a father.
Have a great week!
Wow, that was amazing! I really loved it! I think the two of them will be hitting it off soon ;) I was only concered with Bella's schedule that Xavier is going to bed so late...maybe it's because he takes long naps during the day or just can't sleep but for a 2 year old, almost 11:00 P.M. is late ;)
I know, but I'm just taking a note from Celine Dion here she said her son was sort of a night owl because during the Vegas show she didn't get home till very late, and as you can see throughout the chapter he was asleep during the rehearsal and was half asleep as they returned home.
Wow, that was GREAT, unfortunately, you mentioned this, "We had done everything from The Early Show to Regis & Kelley". In 1992, Regis did not do the show with Kelly Ripa, he did it with Kathie Lee (who is know Kathie Lee Gifford). So, you just need to change that and the chapter will be perfect! I love this story so much :) I love how much Bella cares for Xavier :)
Thank you and I should have known that, I watched a video of someone singing on the show from that time and I didn't even catch it. xD
Wow, that wasw AMAZING :) I really am happy she is trying for Beauty and the Beast :) Amazing movie :) I am also happy they kissed :) Hopefully Edward will tell her plans for divorce soon...I mean Lauren is wanting full custody, so they must have started divorce proceedings, right? Cannot wait for more!
Wow, that was amazing, once again :) I really loved it so much :) I only found a problem here "Thanks. Again, I can't thank you enough. You're taking a big chance on me," I sighed.
"Isabella, I wanted to get rid of that house. Since my wife left me, trust me, it was a favor really," he replied." Only becuase it seems like Edward is RANDOMLY mentioning his house...there is no lead in to him talking about it. Hope this makes sense :)
Wow, that was amazing :) Really loved it! The only problem I found was this "For our second year anniversary in Hawaii," if Edward and Lauren got married in 1988, their 2nd wedding anniversary would be March 1990, so Xavier wouldn't be born until late 1990. Maybe you should have said for "shortly after our first year" (because if he found out in March...Lauren would have been 2 months pregnant and there is no way she could have had Xavier in January). Hope this makes sense...just message me if it doesn't :)
Well I hope for your sake there´s internet privileges in the big house! Lol! Try not to hurt anybody! :) I loved the chapter and the kiss was perfect... I can´t wait to see what happens next! Missed you and the story, but I understand the RL comes first, but just know we´ll still be here when you get back! Great chapter and stay out of trouble!
Thank you, I'll try not to, but our school is itching for a fight!!!!
We're not giving up in what we believe, not when they kept a drunk and abusive football coach for 7 years.
Oooo weee... I thought for sure that they were about to kiss. Booo! No Kiss! Lol! But I´m a sucker for Xavier, so that makes up for the almost kiss. Tour time, I can´t wait. Lot´s of time on a tour bus with Edward and xavier... sweet! I love that Edward thinks of Bella as his surrogate mother and she is happy to fill the role. Dinner with the Swans was a hoot! Still wannna runn Lauren through a wood chipper! Haha! GReat chapter!
What can I say, I like to build tension. CH 7 teaser might make up for it or it might not. Coming at you right now!
Yeah, so, is it wrong of me to want to kick Lauren in the teeth? I soooo hate her for the way she did Xavier! She is such a biotch! I´m just glad that Bella was there to pick up the pieces. She´s so good for Xavier and Edward. I was nervous that Lauren would see her and she would want to get them back. Great chapter! Can´t wait for the next one!
Thank you so much for the review.
i love this story i wish your chapters were longer.
Thank you for the reviw, and I'm trying to make them longer. I just haven't had a day where I could just forget everything and just write continiously.
Wooo hooo! Little Xavier is so going to bring these two together. I love how he´s taken to Bella. Poor little guy, I hope she helps in the mending of his broken little heart by his skank of a mother! Update when you can. My prayers are with you and all who suffered a loss during the tornadoes. My family is in Mississippi and thank God they were not harmed. Great chapter!
I believe I have a favorite reviewer now!!! lol
Thank you for the thoughts and prayers and I'm glad your family wasn't harmed during these storms.
I like your story. My prayers to you and your family, friends and neighbors. i live in Texas. Here inTexas having the worst drought that have caused the worst fires in history.
Thank you so much!!!