Date: 20 Apr 2013 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 20
A couple years ago I began to read this story. However I ended up forgetting the name of this story. A few days ago I stumbled upon it again and was excited that there were chapters I had not read yet. I know that you haven't written anything for this story in quite awhile. However, I hope you have it within you to come back and continue on with this story. You are a great writer and I seriously want to know how things will turn out for these two characters.
-A long time fan :)
Date: 10 Mar 2013 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 22
Well it's about time she tries to make an effort. Edward has tried so hard over the past few months. Bella needs to go and see a therapist, she has way too much baggage and has been carrying it around since she was very young. She really doesn't know how to deal with emotions. Even if she hadn't entered into the arrangement with Edward she would have struggled with a normal relationship. She just used to tie it down with working so hard and being so tired with school and work. Once she figures that out then she will start to move forward. What a pair these two are, both too fucked up for their own good. Thks for the updates, Debbie
Date: 09 Mar 2013 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 22
Bella and Edward seem to be sparring as to which has the most miserable life. Neither makes their needs known, and Bella looks for guidance from the strange behaviors of Edward and Renee. Great role models they are not
Date: 06 Mar 2013 10:19 AM Title: Chapter 22
The bomb is certainly ticking in Bella...how long before Edward finds out about her LOVELY parents...and how long before Bella goes off the deep end? Love how Bella is slowly letting Edward in and in need of his friendship..she needs to cling to him and maybe both of them will have a chance!!! Awesome chapter...please keep them coming!!! xo
Date: 06 Mar 2013 10:01 AM Title: Chapter 22
I want to envelope both of them in a huge hug.
My heart goes out for Bella. Nobodys beloved daughter. Nobodys wife... Such a lonely life. Edward and Bella can complete the holes in each others lives if they can just take a leap. Bella must make the first step.
I wonder if Edward remembers the same things Bella does, at least with the same longing? Is it only remorse he feels?
such a great story. Can not wait for more.
Date: 06 Mar 2013 8:41 AM Title: Chapter 22
Woww..amazing chapter and thanks for update! Many revelations ... I like Edward more open ... Bella just missing that step. I want to know more about them .. I want to make friends .. so I'm very eagerly awaiting the next chapter! ;) Thank you for this wonderful story! xoxo
Date: 02 Feb 2013 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 14
This writing covers so many important points from a side not heard. Except for Renee's explanation. Some of Edward's actions as he explains is getting past Bella's defensive barriers and she is just a little angry. Good for her!
Date: 31 Jan 2013 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 5
Bella found a large elephant in the room at the Cullens. And surely Alice will share with Esme. Then Bella finds a bigger elephant in the supply closet. Knowing she enjoys the lack of reality when she is with Edward is healthy.
Date: 21 Jan 2013 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 19
This fic is so good, sorry I haven't reviewed so far but I just couldn't stop reading it. I'm all caught up now in two nights. Looking forward to how this plays out, will Bella get the therapy she needs or will she just keep trudging along. Hopefully by the time they end up back in bed together Edward will be able to stand her touching and kissing him. Thks for sharing, Debbie
Date: 11 Dec 2012 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 19
I just came across this story today and could not put it down. It sucked me in from the beginning. I am trying to form words in my head to explain the love for this story. It's not working at the moment,however I just finished catching up so I may need some time to digest the story. Excellent writing and visuals.
Date: 04 Nov 2012 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 19
Just checking back in to see if you added to it. I read this early this year an has been sucked in to their world and dying to find out what their future holds. I'm also added registered on your the story blog. Please let me know if you are going to finish.
Date: 05 Oct 2012 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 18
i knew something happened in charlies death n renee is obv holdin that against bella but damn that was hard to read ugh she is always the child in that situation no matter how oldshe getshe is always the child damn i cant stand renee
Date: 05 Oct 2012 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 13
o my word i wuda went over to his penthouse and threw that negative energy back at him b4 he cud come back and mess up the energy in my house again like wholly hell bella u werent his whore then and u sure as hell arent now u were his release his escape his safe place he needed u more than u needed his money
Date: 05 Oct 2012 11:15 AM Title: Chapter 9
o my that was completly heartbreaking i can believe she was able to stand there i wudve balled my eyes out. thats a piece of edward that is dead forever and poor esme something happened and se lost her grandchild, edward lost his child ugh so sad please please finish this story
Date: 28 Jul 2012 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 19
I hate Works in Progress. I found this story in an a/n from TheSaintsMistress in Terms and Conditions Apply, came here to check it out to see if I wanted to save it for later. HAH. Got caught up in the prologue and 19 chapters later, I'm pissed that I'm caught up in yet another WIP that I have to constantly check my email for updates for.
Excellent story, excellent writing. Can't wait for the next update!