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Reviewer: Soccer1023 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2014 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 11: Baby Steps are Still Steps...

I absolutely love this story. I just found it and read from the beginning to the latest update. It's my fav!!!!!!  Love your style of writing. I just wish there was a little bit more of the "talking through the night into the early morning" when they originally saw each other again. What was said and each's reaction. But still can't wait for your next update. 

Reviewer: MsTorres Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2014 1:07 AM Title: Prologue

Holy fuck like WTF???

Ok so the little girl is Edwards, Bella is pregnant with a boy, Is Bella's son Edward's? Edward and his daughter are leaving, Bella has passed the fuck out which I'm guessing is due to elevated blood pressure from the undue stress.....This is some shit huh?


Ms Torres
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Reviewer: Melcat Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2014 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 11: Baby Steps are Still Steps...

Finally, they're back together.

Reviewer: grneyedgrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2013 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 11: Baby Steps are Still Steps...

Love this story!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2013 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 11: Baby Steps are Still Steps...

Loved it! Can't wait to see what will happen next!

Reviewer: Christofine Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2013 10:16 AM Title: Chapter 11: Baby Steps are Still Steps...

yeh ! finally, I can't wait to hear more about the trials and tribs of this family getting together!!!

Reviewer: goodgirl24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2013 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 11: Baby Steps are Still Steps...

So Parker is Edward's.n I just hope that there is not a tragedy for them to put it all together.

Reviewer: Kimmiesan Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2013 10:11 AM Title: Chapter 11: Baby Steps are Still Steps...

Lovin this story!

Reviewer: hughug Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2013 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 11: Baby Steps are Still Steps...

Just started reading this story and I love it. Can't wait to see where Mac and Parker take this family next lol.  Good to see Bella and Edward pulling there heads out of there butts.

Reviewer: Love to drive like a vampire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2013 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 10 How About a Compromise...

I love that they are going to give a relationship and their little family a fighting chance! I can't wait for the next chapters to see where their relationship will lead.

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Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2013 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 11: Baby Steps are Still Steps...

It's soooo nice to see them trying. Not only with their demons but with there relationship as well. 

Reviewer: ddhayes30 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2013 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 11: Baby Steps are Still Steps...

I love this story. I felt so many different emotions while reading at one point I almost stopped because my heart hurt so much for all of them. You are a fantastic writer. Please update soon.

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2013 10:43 AM Title: Chapter 11: Baby Steps are Still Steps...

thrilled. i have waited awhile and am thilled she is letting him in. he didn't deserve it a first but they have both changed and come so far.

family is together and working on it

love it

Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2013 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 8: The Aftermath of a Nightmare...

Holy hell, I can't believe he had the gall to put his name on the birth certificate. I would have torn it up and demanded a new one on the spot. He is unbelievable!

Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2013 12:18 PM Title: Chapter 7: Somethings... You Can´t Take Back...

If I were Bella, I'd fight for custody of Mac and get all three of them the hell away from Edward permanently. What a self-absorbed psycho.

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2013 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 9: The First Step to Getting Help...Is Admitting That There´s a Problem…

Thanks good chapel

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2013 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 11: Baby Steps are Still Steps...

The costumes if Monsters Inc. was a nice touch. Haha.
Nice to read the changes in behavior and the slow relinquishing of fear created by the pain from their past mistakes, leading to a new beginning.
How is MAC going to respond to Daddy being there when she wakes up?

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2013 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 11: Baby Steps are Still Steps...

Cute...

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2013 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 11: Baby Steps are Still Steps...

Loved the chapter. Can't wait for more. I missed the story.

Reviewer: slc6548 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2013 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 11: Baby Steps are Still Steps...

Good chapter!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2013 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 11: Baby Steps are Still Steps...

LOVE IT!!!!!!! Thanks for updating

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2013 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 11: Baby Steps are Still Steps...

loved the chatper 

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2013 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 11: Baby Steps are Still Steps...

I love it! I am so glad they are finally getting to where they both want to be. They finally have their family together. Great job....thanks!!!

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2013 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 11: Baby Steps are Still Steps...

So happy that this family is coming back together!

Reviewer: roseblossome Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2013 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 11: Baby Steps are Still Steps...

I'm so glad they are back together again!  I can't wait for a wedding and more children.  love the story!

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2013 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 11: Baby Steps are Still Steps...

Oh, he groveled a lot and rightfully so but he finally made it and I'm glad for the kids as well as for Bella's sake.  Pleade don't mess this up E.

 

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2013 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 11: Baby Steps are Still Steps...

Aww I love it!  please more!!!

Reviewer: charv241 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2012 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 10 How About a Compromise...

Really enjoyed the story so far!!!...keep up the good work and can't wait for the next chapter!!

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2012 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 10 How About a Compromise...

Thank God! I'm really glad that Bella is letting him in. Because as strong as Mac is she was really suffering. Having to chose Bella over her father couldn't of been easy on her. But she was so afraid for Bella that she was willing to give up her happiness with her dad. That was heartbreaking. 

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2012 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 10 How About a Compromise...

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2012 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 9: The First Step to Getting Help...Is Admitting That There´s a Problem…

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2012 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 8: The Aftermath of a Nightmare...

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2012 12:00 PM Title: Chapter 7: Somethings... You Can´t Take Back...

loved it! poor bella!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2012 10:52 AM Title: Chapter 6: When the Music...

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2012 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 5: Surviving the Storm...

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2012 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 4: What Happens... When the Fog is Lifted...

poor edward! loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2012 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 3: Memories of the Past... and Uninvited Guests...

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2012 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 2: Life After the Pain...

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2012 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Start of a New Life...

loved it!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2012 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 10 How About a Compromise...

I am so glad that Bella finally showed some kindness toward Edward. He has been blaming himself for everything. Bella should be ashamed of herself. Did Edward not blame himself for enough stuff that was not his doing? Claire made all these sef-sacrificing decisions without talking to Edward and when she and their baby died he blamed himself. It was all Claires choice. She wanted the baby so bad. She thought it was worth her life. She did not expect the baby to die as well. Edward did not get a voice in the matter. Claire would not have listened even if he did voice his concern. She was determined to get pregnant. Now Bella is letting Edward walk around thinking he is the keeping is family apart because he can't be forgiven. That is so selfish of Bella. She should of told Edward or at least Esme that he is forgiven, but she has some demons to deal with before they can be a healthy family. That is what you do when you love someone.

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2012 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 10 How About a Compromise...

THAT WAS A GREAT CHAPTER AFTER SO LONG I THOUGHT YOU GAVE UP ON YOUR STORY I AM SO HAPPY TO BE WRONG I LOOK FORWARD TO READING YOUR NEXT UP DATE

Reviewer: keemastcloud Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2012 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 10 How About a Compromise...

I love it! Pls continue!

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2012 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 10 How About a Compromise...

Thanks good chapters

Reviewer: jacqueline3508 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2012 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 10 How About a Compromise...

I'm still here...and it was worth the wait...yet I prefer not to wait that long..lol

Reviewer: yourstokeep Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2012 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 10 How About a Compromise...

I am! Still with you, that is. :)

Reviewer: lb8931 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2012 9:49 AM Title: Chapter 10 How About a Compromise...

Still here.

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2012 6:21 AM Title: Prologue

loved it!

Reviewer: Cockerspanmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2012 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 10 How About a Compromise...

that was so sad about Claire and his second son dying like that. I love this story very much.

Reviewer: lovingrobpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2012 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 10 How About a Compromise...

Loved the chapter. I'm so glad things are turning around. Can't wait for more !!!! 

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2012 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 10 How About a Compromise...

That it was...move it along very, very nicely...like Mac's POV.

Reviewer: slc6548 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2012 7:50 AM Title: Chapter 10 How About a Compromise...

Excellent chapter - missed ya!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2012 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 10 How About a Compromise...

Still here and enjoying the ride.
Bella's history has helped fill in the behavioral/emotional problems she is struggling to keep under control. I always wondered why the artificial insemination method was chosen.
Mac is a beautiful, cunning little girl. Glad aunt Alice is will to keep her secret.
Chuckled at Bella bold approach to answering the door, but remember the discomfort when time had lapsed between feedings. She was just ready for relief. Not quite the greeting Edward was expecting. That would be a nice side note........his thoughts on a lusciously full boob be served up at the door. Haha.

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2012 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 10 How About a Compromise...

Well worth the wait.  Wonderful!

Reviewer: jomik1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2012 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 10 How About a Compromise...

God yes, I'm still with you!! So excited to see the update. Wow, that chapter had me laughing and crying and just so happy that they are starting to move forward. Can't wait for th next update. 

Reviewer: jeena Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2012 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 10 How About a Compromise...

It was really great to see your update. Thank you...

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2012 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 10 How About a Compromise...

oh it was worth the wait

i am thrilled the mac wants her family so bad and she did something

bella is making a compromise and it seems to be working

these guys just need a chance

oh love it

Reviewer: BigBsMom Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2012 9:32 PM Title: Prologue

Still here

Reviewer: Foreverpeetaslove Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2012 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 10 How About a Compromise...

I'm still here and I'm am soooo glad those two finally decided to get their crap together. It's about time!  

Reviewer: Ashmerlin Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2012 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 10 How About a Compromise...

Loved it.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2012 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 10 How About a Compromise...

great chapter, they have come a long way hope they cont. to get better together

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2012 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 10 How About a Compromise...

looking foward to more  

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2012 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 8: The Aftermath of a Nightmare...

yes put on your big girl panties and forgive him, he is trying so hard..

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2012 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 10 How About a Compromise...

missed this story  so glad you are back

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2012 7:21 PM Title: Prologue

wow that was a strong chapter, what happened to make edward act that way and the words he used were hurt full

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2012 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 10 How About a Compromise...

Still with you!  Thank God she is letting him have a second chance... they really need to get it together for the children's sake and their own.. They have a lot of love to give one another as well as the chidlren.

Reviewer: twilightlover127 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2012 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 10 How About a Compromise...

EEEEEEEEPPPPPPPPPPPPPP LOVED IT!!!!!!!!! SUPER HAPPY THAT YOU'RE FINALLY BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: kvgamble Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2012 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 10 How About a Compromise...

Love this story, update soon

 

Reviewer: aurowanfinn Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2012 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 10 How About a Compromise...

Poor Bella...glad she seeking help.

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2012 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 10 How About a Compromise...

great chapter, cant wait to read more... hope to see more soon.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2012 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 10 How About a Compromise...

SO amazing :)  I really loved it!  I cannot wait to see what happens next! 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2012 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 10 How About a Compromise...

Did you post this on fanfiction earlier?? I have read this before. I am assuming it was on fanficition. GREAT GREAT JOB!!!!! Hope we hear from you soon. 

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2012 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 10 How About a Compromise...

I am so glad they are finally talking. Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2012 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 10 How About a Compromise...

oh yes, heck yes, still here and so sorry that life has been out of wack for you lately...koas is sometimes something we learn to live with and through, right?!?!? Hang in there and know that I, for one will be here reading when you post...onky the grave will prevent me from that.... all the best and deepest regards.... Kathy.....

Yippee!  Mac! for your Young Female "in-training" Oscar performance.....well done little one!!!

Reviewer: ChristineDaee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2012 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 9: The First Step to Getting Help...Is Admitting That There´s a Problem…

LOVE THIS CHAPTER! CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE!

Reviewer: luvyateamedward Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2012 9:57 PM Title: Prologue

Holy crap! Can't wait to read more of this!

Reviewer: Cockerspanmom Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2012 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 9: The First Step to Getting Help...Is Admitting That There´s a Problem…

Very sad for Edward. Bella should forgive him soon, right? Love the story.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2012 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 9: The First Step to Getting Help...Is Admitting That There´s a Problem…

I'm so glad that Edward is doing so well for himself. I still can't believe he has given up Mac as much as he has but it's great that they are together at least part time. 

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2012 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 9: The First Step to Getting Help...Is Admitting That There´s a Problem…

Poor Eddiekins!! :-( More please!! :-)

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2012 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 9: The First Step to Getting Help...Is Admitting That There´s a Problem…

I'm seeing the light at the end of the tunnel! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: twilightlover127 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 9: The First Step to Getting Help...Is Admitting That There´s a Problem…

Damn, I have so many thoughts running around in my head it's crazy!! I mean to go from that almost catatonic state to actually being able to open up to what made you like that and to finally be able to show your daughter that you do truely love her and be able to start over with your daughter and son and hopefully Bella sometime soon it's just crazy. Btw is Parker really Edward's biological son or is he not??? Love the story!!!!!!

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2012 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 9: The First Step to Getting Help...Is Admitting That There´s a Problem…

I can't wait to read how Edward and Bella's story goes from here.  He's got a lot of groveling to do.

Great chapter!

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2012 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 9: The First Step to Getting Help...Is Admitting That There´s a Problem…

Everything that could go wrong, did go wrong for Edward. Not only with his love for Claire, but also now with Bella. I don't say, that I excuse his behaviour, because, he has eaten all his guilt inside, without really talking about his feelings. But afterwards everybody is wiser, but at least he is getting help now and tries to get better for himself and for his family.

That he has a long way to go is clear, but perhaps Bella will somehow really need him, so that they can reconcile a little faster.

Reviewer: vickic Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2012 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 9: The First Step to Getting Help...Is Admitting That There´s a Problem…

wow those memories are hard to hear. Poor Edward. I hate that something so aweful was what it took to wake him up tho. He could have lost it all then.
good luck dear boy I think you are going to need it.

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2012 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 9: The First Step to Getting Help...Is Admitting That There´s a Problem…

I love this story and I thinik that Bella will come around.  hopefully she can understand someof what Edward was going through but at least she is letting him spend time with the kids and I believe she will let him back into her life soon.  She has got to know that he loves them with all his heart..

Reviewer: AylaCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2012 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 9: The First Step to Getting Help...Is Admitting That There´s a Problem…

Awww in love that you see Julie  Andrews as Siobhan. It's great to see why Edward has closed himself with that happened to Claire and his sons. Now all he needs now that he has let go of his past, is to have Bella back into his life. Hopefully she doesn't stay away too long.

Reviewer: AylaCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2012 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 8: The Aftermath of a Nightmare...

A great chapter as always. Just one thing that irked me about Bella's emotions on what is occurring with Edward and that is her getting upset with Edward and putting his name on Parker's birth certificate. If Bella could, she would have done the same thing herself without Edward's go ahead. In a way, she has assumed the role of mother without Edward's permission as well. So she has kind of contradicted herself.

Hopefully she can make amends with Edward soon so they came a big family together.

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2012 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 9: The First Step to Getting Help...Is Admitting That There´s a Problem…

goodness Krazi - WTF Edward, you swwet man, awh heck that would be trying for anyone.... Listen to Carlilse, give her time.... TY Edward for giving Mac and Bella the time they need also!  Remember when you can you will, great chapter... loved the pics....  till next time...

Reviewer: Twilighter17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2012 11:41 AM Title: Chapter 9: The First Step to Getting Help...Is Admitting That There´s a Problem…

It's easier to understand Edward's mental state related to Claire's death and his feelings for Bella.  Granted he should have sought help long ago but it's good that he finally is and making great progress. Think it would be a great idea for them to go together but Bella has her own issues and needs to see Siobhan or someone.  Wonder what the odds are that Parker's going to be a real Cullen, that would be a great twist we didn't see coming. 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2012 11:33 AM Title: Chapter 9: The First Step to Getting Help...Is Admitting That There´s a Problem…

I love this story. I think Edward is doing everything he can possibly do. Bella needs to look in the mirror. She is far from perfect. She must have a heart of stone, if she can be so unforgiving. Bella needs to get her own therapy. Edward needs his kids and he is being very generous for letting Mac stay with Bella. I think she needs to come back to his house if Bella doesn't start thawing out that ice cold heart of hers. School will be starting soon and Edward should be the one who helps Mac in the evenings and hears about her days. Bella can get her right after school, if Edward is at work, Then Edward can pick her up and take her home for the night. Edward needs to work on their bond as well.

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2012 11:10 AM Title: Chapter 9: The First Step to Getting Help...Is Admitting That There´s a Problem…

Marvelous!  Sorry for the delay in reviewing, but My family and I were away.  Then RL rears its head.  Now that I'm caught up, I think Edward is absolutely doing the right thing for Mac by letting her stay with Bella!  They have a bond - one Mac needed desperatley, and the healthiest thing for her now is to let her be with her "mom" and baby brother.  Also, having Mac around and the baby will give Bella the impetus to thrive again.  Loved it!

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2012 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 9: The First Step to Getting Help...Is Admitting That There´s a Problem…

Great chapter, well put together and really moves the story along, explains a lot.

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2012 10:58 AM Title: Chapter 9: The First Step to Getting Help...Is Admitting That There´s a Problem…

WOW, a lot to digest.  He is only human and I couldn't imagine going through what he did.  That being said, I am glad he's finally getting help.  It seems to be improving his mental state.  She he make Mac come home, not a good ideal.  He would have to have someone keeping her because of his profession.  He also allowed her to stay with Bella in Forks.  She and her bother have bonded and that would just set her back.  As for Bella and Edward, thely both should go to counseling together.  Bella needs to understand where this behavior was coming from and need to ensure that it would not happen again.  She was also hurt badly without understanding why.  She they become a family, well only if she loves him and truly wants that.  

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2012 10:45 AM Title: Chapter 9: The First Step to Getting Help...Is Admitting That There´s a Problem…

looking forward to more ! 

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2012 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 9: The First Step to Getting Help...Is Admitting That There´s a Problem…

OH WOW...SO intense and amazing at the same time...even if I did beta this, it is still AMAZING :D  LOVED IT!

Reviewer: slc6548 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2012 8:45 AM Title: Chapter 9: The First Step to Getting Help...Is Admitting That There´s a Problem…

Wonderful chapter! So much info - was good to finally see what all he went through and why he acted the way he did.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2012 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 9: The First Step to Getting Help...Is Admitting That There´s a Problem…

Has Bella been going through a similar set of therapy sessions? Is Mac bringing back stories of how her daddy is changing?
What, in Bella's mind, will open the doors of communication and begin to restore her heart where Edward is concerned?
Progress, its slow but leaves the heart desiring more!

Reviewer: liliAnnRose Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2012 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 9: The First Step to Getting Help...Is Admitting That There´s a Problem…

Amazing, truely amazing! I love your story, I couldn't believe it when I saw the update. Thank you so much!

I have a question, Is Parker Edward's biological son, from the sperm donation, I didn't notice anything from that?

 

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2012 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 9: The First Step to Getting Help...Is Admitting That There´s a Problem…

Another great chapter, cant wait to read more...

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2012 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 8: The Aftermath of a Nightmare...

Wonderful!  I think Bella's reactions are quite realistic - if not reasonable.  She went through several major traumas all at once and it's going to take some doing to gt her on an even keel again.  I understand her not wanting to medicate, but sometimes, like in my case, it is the best and only choice.  My seizure disorder required my medication during pregnancy, but after was another thing; so for me bottle feelings and formula worked the best.  I'm so glad to see your update!!  Watching Bella healfrom all Edward's abuses -  her writing counts too -  and it should be very interesting watching how they work things out!

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2012 4:05 PM Title: Prologue

THIS LOOKS LIKE A GREAT READ

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