[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2013 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 65
what a outstanding story.. i loved how much you tried to keep up with the books, i love these type of stories and the lemons were tastful making sure to show how the two were so in love. i love long chapter stories with bella and edward and read fanfiction here and twilighted can u recommend any.. thank u for ur time and effert.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing.
I'm glad you stuck with the story past the first few chapters (which were blatant copies of the book with a few lemons thrown in). I love long chapters too. I hate cutting off and leaving the chapter hanging. I appreciate your comments about the lemons. I have a community set up on my FFN with lots of E/B stories I read or want to read someday. You could check it out to see if anything sparks your interest. I've also begun a sequel to LAFS on FFN called Happily Ever After. I think I'm into chapter 20 now. If you're interested you could check it out. I haven't had time to upload it here yet.
This site usually has lots of recs and reviews. If you subscribe, you'll get their weekly emails - http://www.fictionators.com/
A great Edward/Bella story is "For whom the bell tolls". I think it's on both FFN and Twilighted. I haven't had time to keep up with my reading because I try not to read anything while I have a WIP. I don't want anyone's writing (besides Stephanie) to influence my story.
My penname on FFN is deslyncullen - http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2468121/deslyncullen. I'll try to update this site with the other stories on my FFN account.
Thanks again,
DC :)
Date: 31 Mar 2012 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 65
So sad it had to end. I loved every single chapter of this story.
Author's Response:
I'm very lucky to have had wonderful readers who loved the twist and turns my mind took over the past 65 chapters. I had no outcome in mind when I started the story but it all turned out well. Thanks for sticking with the story and giving it a chance after the rough begining.
DC :)
Date: 30 Mar 2012 9:30 AM Title: Chapter 65
One of the most wonderful canon stories I've ever read. This was a brilliant work of fiction and I look forward to other pieces of your writing style in the near future. Great story.
Jukie
Author's Response:
Thanks for sticking with the story. Sorry it had to end but they reached a good place for that to happen. I'm glad you enjoyed my twist on the classic. I'm doing a few contest then it's back to serious writing - I hope.
DC :)
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2012 9:52 AM Title: Chapter 19
Bella will be too
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2012 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 18
the word spank and Edward in the same sentence gives me goosies
Author's Response:
It turned out OK. We know he would never hurt her.
Thanks for reviewing,
DC :)
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2012 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 15
hope the cannon doesn't go to deep
Author's Response:
Hi,
thanks for the reviews and welcome to the world of the lovebirds. I'm not sure what chapter, maybe 20 but the story moves away from the book at some point and the kids do normal teenage stuff. Of course I always go back to the book but it's not too much of the material as the begining of the story.
Thanks for reviewing.
DC :)
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2012 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 13
That was hot!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2012 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 12
you add great spice
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2012 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 61
fab chapter.aww the babies sound so cute.hope she gets her fantasy.update soon
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thanks for all the reviews. Welcome to the lovebirds club. You got caught up quickly. I'm always happy to welcome another fan of the lovebirds.
I'm sure that fantasy will come soon. I'll have to go back to biology to refresh my memory so I get all the details right.
Have a great weekend.
DC :)
Date: 03 Mar 2012 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 60
Soooooo cool !! The have 4 little ones instead of just 2. Can't wait for the final few chapters to be posted. I have enjoyed this story so much :-)
Author's Response:
Hi,
This is an extraordinary pregnancy so I thought I'd add some drama by having 4 instead of 2. They have enough hands in the house to help take care of them. Four times the fun.
Thanks again for reviewing.
have a great weekend.
DC :)
[Report This]Date: 03 Mar 2012 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 14
yea who knew lol.fab chapter.
[Report This]Date: 03 Mar 2012 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 13
wow that was so hot and romantic.fantastic chapter.
[Report This]Date: 03 Mar 2012 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 12
fab chapter.hes such a hot vampire.
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2012 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 10
fab chapter that was a hot day dream.
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2012 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 7
wow that was a hot dream.fab chapter.
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2012 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 5
fab chapter can't wait for the dreams to become real.
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2012 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 3
fab chapter.poor bella.
Date: 02 Mar 2012 9:39 AM Title: Chapter 60
ooooh awesome chappy to take the sting out of a 16 hr work day:) ummmmm you can do as many epis as you want :)
Author's Response:
Hi,
thanks for reviewing. I'm glad the chapter provided some stress relief after a long day of work and it's a pleasure to know that even as the story is winding down, it hasn't lost its appeal.
Have a great weekend.
DC :)
Date: 25 Feb 2012 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 59
I loved the Hawiian Baby Shower theme......too cute :-)
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thanks for reviewing.
I wanted to do an unusual baby shower and something with a pool so I was very excited when I found the luau baby shower theme. It fit in perfectly.
Have a great weekend.
DC :)
Date: 19 Feb 2012 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 58
great chapter.
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thanks for reviewing.
It was my second time writing Valentine's Day for the lovebirds so I tried to mix it up a bit.
Have a great weekend.
DC :)
Date: 19 Feb 2012 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 57
cute ideas..gj
Author's Response:
Hi,
This was my second VD chapter so I wanted it to be different and creating a tent seemed like a good idea. Difinitely different from the usual candles and rose petals.
Thanks for sticking with the story.
DC :)
Date: 19 Feb 2012 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 53
I am so glad you wrote them doing community service. If they don't need money then they can use their time to help others. GJ
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thanks for reviewing. I'm a strong believer in giving back and doing something good for others. I wanted my characters - even if they are ficticious to have that same mindframe.
DC :)
[Report This]Date: 09 Feb 2012 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 56
Aweesome chapter.. My only thing is about this surprise is what if Edward has a surprise too? mmm. I just have a feel some goes a missed.. it always has for her. haha. mmm.
Fantastic chapter. Lots of love and care was in this chapter.. Oh and sweet Emse how can you not want her has a mom.. or least a second mom..
Hugs Leona..
Author's Response:
Hi Leona,
Thanks for reviewing.
Yes Esme is the greatest. She definitely has the good Mom genes.
It would be fun if he does have a surprise but I'm sure they'll both have fun.
Hugs and kissed from the lovebirds.
DC :)
[Report This]Date: 04 Feb 2012 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 55
You wrote this chapter beautiful.. your a awesome writer..
The spontanuse getway was wonderful for them.. the sexual tension threw super oh my god..
I just want to say, Bella thinks Edward is a tease.. But she tease me though dinner even she she does not realise it..
The time is coming fast.. hope all works out.. I can't wait to see what Bella powers are full blown has a vampire..
mm..
Hugs Leona
Author's Response:
Hi Leona,
Thank you for reviewing and for the high praise.
I know what you maean about Bella being a tease. She was just adding to the sexual tension during the meal.
Still can't decide on the timing for her transformation but everything else is falling into place so it's coming.
thanks again.
DC :)
[Report This]Date: 31 Jan 2012 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 54
So there is a great proablity that she is having twins? mmmm
this chapter you just want to cry.. so full of emotions..
Loved it ..
Author's Response:
Yes, we're hoping for at least 2 babies. I know, I'm devious but think of the fun they'll have. :)
Thanks for sticking with the story.
Have a great weekend.
DC :)
[Report This]Date: 20 Jan 2012 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 53
Awesome!
She is wicked.. The only thing about Bella is she wants to do so much.. Will she end up burning out? I know I would...
But I loved her Ideas's. they were excellent..
Excellent chapter.. But I waiting for the other foot to drop! It killing me.. hahahah
Author's Response:
Hi,
She has Edward to keep her on track. He'll never let her over exert herself and endanger her health or the health of the baby.
I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter.
DC :)
Date: 07 Jan 2012 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 52
Happy New Year ,thanks for the update ,I'm hoping for triplets ...for B & E of course ;)
Author's Response:
Hi,
LOL.....
I'm glad you're not having triplets. The lovebirds could have triplets because they have so many people in the house to help change diapers and feed the babies. I haven't decided on the number yet. I keep changing my mind and I'll be undecided until I actually post that chapter.
thanks for reviewing.
DC :)
[Report This]Date: 07 Jan 2012 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 52
Has long has she keeps her promise, I think Edward will be okay.
God this was a awesome chapter. I like that it was 50/50, not blamed on one person or one thing.. it is a commeration of things..
and comparmize is always the best way to solve tuff..
But I do feel like she is going to get worse phyically and that will scary Edward..
And you are very divesouse.... Love it..
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thanks for reviewing. Yes, compromise is the key.
There is so much going on besides the pregnancy. Unlike the book when her life was put on hold because of the baby, I didn't want to do that to them but I didn't just want to talk about her symptoms and Edward's reaction. They are young, I want them to enjoy the pregnancy as much as possible.
Like any other couple, they'll have their ups and down but it's finding a solution to the problem and working out conflicts that keeps the relationship steady.
Glad you enjoyed it.
DC :)
Date: 06 Jan 2012 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 52
Loved the chapter ;-)
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thanks for reviewing. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter.
DC :)
[Report This]Date: 26 Dec 2011 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 51
Wish you a Merry Christmas and a happy New Year!
This was a wonderful chapter.. If she is emotional now. what will she be in a month or 2. Wow..
I feel sorry for her..
Love it cant wait for the next.. when you get time to do it.
Author's Response:
Hi,
Happy New Year to you too.
thanks for reviewing. I feel sorry for her myself, me and my devious mind. LOL This pregnancy will be a rollercoaster ride.
DC :)
Date: 25 Dec 2011 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 51
good chapter.
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thanks for reviewing.
DC :)
Date: 25 Dec 2011 12:20 PM Title: Chapter 9
well okay.. pretty close to twilight still except this is M rated..
Date: 25 Dec 2011 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 6
well close to twilight, more grown up. Of course believable since most teenagers that are as old as she is are thinking about sex.
Author's Response:
Hi,
yes, the begining is close to Twilight. It makes a detour later on. If you stick with it, you'll get there.
Thanks for reviewing.
DC :)
Date: 25 Dec 2011 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 3
okay I agree, too much influence is not healthy. Finally normal people and vamps.. Ha ha what is normal with Edward............................NOTHING
Author's Response:
Hi,
Welcome aboard. You're right, nothing is normal with Edward but he keeps us happy even when we want to kill him.
DC :)
Date: 24 Dec 2011 8:45 AM Title: Chapter 51
I Love this story so far. Another awesome chapter. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year
Jukie
Author's Response:
Hi Jukie,
Thanks for reviewing. Happy New Year to you too.
DC :)
[Report This]Date: 18 Dec 2011 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 50
That is so wonderful to go and buy gifts and have some or all the proceds go to chariable organitions.. (sorry for the spelling)
My sister got my mom snowflakes for christmas and all of the money was donated to the food bank here. So cool. 2 birds with one stone.
I buy childerns hostipal bears. one goes for someone I want to give it too. the other goes to a sick child at the hostipal and the money for help looking after them.
this was a wonderful chapter. this story has become one of my favor it's. So beautiful and caring .. You are a special person with a heart of gold, I can feel it.
Merry Christmas.
<3 Leona :)
Author's Response:
It's great what you and your family do. It's so much easier to spend money when you know it's going to a cause and not lining someone's pocket. Thanks for the compliments but we all have to do what we can.
Enjoy the holiday.
Hugs and kisses from the lovebirds.
DC :)
[Report This]Date: 17 Dec 2011 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 49
This was a Beautiful chapter.. I 'm so happy for them.. I can not wait to see how the 3 mo go bye.
I have to say the last 5 or 6 chapter have been very emotional. so intense feels that were writen.
Your a fantastic author..
Wish a Happy Christmas and New year.
I caught up. Every min I spent reading your story was worth it.. It was so nice to read a very Happy story around this time of year.. Excellent..
Hugs <3 Leona :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the positive feedback. The characters have really grown and I love writing about them. I hated all the drama in the books and I'm trying to limit it as much as possible in this story.
Marry Christmas and Happy New Year too.
DC:)
[Report This]Date: 17 Dec 2011 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 46
That was our college hollween them for 3 yrs in a row. Rocky horro show.. Fantasic..
All the stuff she is doing is amazing.. You can get so wond up in volunting that you forget to go home. haha. To give to others is very rewarding..
awesome story.. I love where you have taking it. it Beautiful..
Author's Response:
glad you like the RHPS reference. It was amazing the amount of information I found online for it. I agree, it's very rewarding to give back.
Dc :)
[Report This]Date: 17 Dec 2011 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 44
I never been to NY or USA.. the close I been is when I was in nigra fall', canada. Tried talking my dad to let my go over to the other side. haha. not!. I was 17yrs old and my cousins were 21yrs or older. So it was a no. That the last time I was there.
Just love my Northern BC place.. Maybe one day. it sounds like a lot of fun and history. awesome chapter..
Author's Response:
Hi,
You have your hole future ahead of you. You'll probably get another chance to come to NY. I went to Canada once. I spent a weekend there and we took the ferry to Center Island and had a magical day.
thanks for reviewing.
DC :)
[Report This]Date: 15 Dec 2011 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 39
this is awesome! I like the way they went to talk to the half breed. and now their going to prepared. instead of not knowing..
Love love love it..
I have a question, I went to check out the cottage and it was not their. you have lots of picture there, but not this one. and 2 of your site are blank..
Is there and way of see the cottage!
Author's Response:
I want them to have all the information they need to make all the right choices when the time comes.
I'll check the site to see what's wrong and update it this weekend. I admit, I've been neglecting the site. Hopefully it will be fixed by the end of the weekend.
Thanks again for reviewing.
DC :)
[Report This]Date: 14 Dec 2011 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 35
I went to the poem site. it looks awesome. thank you.
This a wonderful story.. I 'm over half way caught up. haha.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you stuck with the story. The lovebirds really grows on you if you give them a chance. You're almost there.
thanks for the positive feedback. I just posted another chapter. Enjoy
DC :)
[Report This]Date: 14 Dec 2011 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 24
Beautiful done!
Author's Response:
LOL.........no papercut, no drama = no Jacob. :)
[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2011 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 20
I just want to let you know, I listen to the song, I love you like that .. it was perfected for this story.....
Author's Response:
Hi,
I searched lots of songs before I settled on that one. It was perfect for them.
DC :)
[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2011 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 18
I love how you changed the story a little here.. Because he only promised to stay if she is safe.. this is totally different. and Victoria is dead.. mmm. can't wait to see what happens nexted. mmm.
[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2011 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 15
I like what you did, to get Bella out of town, with out hurting charlie.. that was awesome!..
Author's Response:
Hi,
I never liked how that was handled in the book so I changed it to make it less painful for him.
DC :)
[Report This]Date: 11 Dec 2011 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 1
So far it looks fantastic.. I can't wait for the rest of the chapters..
I will rank them.. but I 'm going to review on the last chapter up dated.
this is awesome!
Author's Response:
welcome aboard. I'm glad you like the lovebirds.
DC :)
Date: 10 Dec 2011 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 48
Bella must be pregnant, but is she pregnant with twins ;o
Author's Response:
LOL.......Can't spoil the surprise. I'm sure you'd rather read about it in the story.
Thanks for reviewing.
DC :)
Date: 07 Dec 2011 9:12 AM Title: Chapter 46
Well done , Thanks
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you're enjoying their activities.
DC :)
Date: 29 Nov 2011 11:12 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love this!!! Update soon!
Date: 28 Nov 2011 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 46
Wonderful experience! I love NY! I wish I got to have something like that! Update soon!
Author's Response:
Hi,
I'm glad you enjoyed the NY trip. There is so much to see and do it was hard to pick.
Thanks for reviewing.
DC :)
Date: 12 Nov 2011 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 43
Hey,
nice chapter, I'm really glad that they decided on having a baby and I hope that Bella will get pregnant soon and that everything will be fine.
Please go on soon!
Author's Response:
Hi,
Everything will turn out alright. They are making all the preperations. Sorry I forgot to post the last chapter to this site so as a bonus you have 2 chapters this week.
Enjoy
Date: 11 Nov 2011 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 43
W O W !!!!!!! ;-)
Author's Response:
LOL
DC :)
Date: 29 Oct 2011 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 40
Hey,
the last two chapters were great! I'm glad that Bella likes college and I'm happy that they want to try to have a baby, I hope that it'll work.
Please go on soon!
Author's Response:
Hi,
Everything will work out. Every necessary precaution will be taken to ensure Bella is safe.
Thanks for reviewing.
DC :)
Date: 29 Oct 2011 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 1
Looks like a very interesting start:)
Date: 22 Oct 2011 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 38
Loved this chapter..........my my, such inventive positions. Think I'll check out the sexinfo101 website ;-)
Author's Response:
You see, not only are we following the lovebirds on their journey, they are theaching us new things. My research is very extensive. People would get bored if I have the same position in every chapter. Next chapter posted.
Thanks for reviewing.
DC :)
Date: 22 Oct 2011 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 38
Hey,
wow, again a wonderful chapter! The honeymoon was so great, very romantic and full of emotions.
I'm glad they talked about the baby topic again and I liked the way you linked Kaure in this chapter to their problem. I hope they try to have a baby and that it will work. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thanks again for reviewing. They both deserved a fantastic honeymoon after all the time they spend being physical in the story.
I'm paving the way for them. This way, if she gets pregnant they have all the information on hand. No drama with a half starved Bella. Next chapter posted. Enjoy
Thanks,
DC :)
Date: 17 Oct 2011 9:44 AM Title: Chapter 37
Hey,
wow, this chapter was amazing! The wedding night was wonderful and the cottage is very beautiful. But most of all I liked the way you linked so many quotations from "Breaking Dawn" in this chapter, it was really good! Please go on soon!
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thanks for the wonderful feedback. I thought it was better to have the wedding night at the cottage instead. They both needed some alone time before their long trip to the island.
Honeymoon chapter posted. Enjoy.
DC :)
Date: 11 Oct 2011 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 36
Beautiful wedding chapter.......keep 'em comin' :-)
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thanks for reviewing. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. They deserved a beautiful wedding. Especially Edward. Poor guy was alone for all those years. Wedding night posted. Enjoy
DC :)
Date: 11 Oct 2011 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 36
Hey,
wow, the chapter was amazing! The wedding was so perfect and I'm so happy for Bella and Edward. I really liked it but now I'm looking forward to the honeymoon and of course the time afterwards.
Please go on soon!
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thanks for reviewing. I'm looking forward to the honeymoon too. I'm not sure about after because eventually I'll have to say goodbye to the lovebirds. The wedding night is posted. Honeymoon coming soon. Enjoy
DC :)
Date: 10 Oct 2011 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 35
hey,
great chapter, it was so peaceful and romantic too and I liked that the 6 had so much fun together! Now I'm really looking forward to the wedding!
Please go on soon!
Author's Response:
After all the planning for the wedding. They needed some down time. This sounded perfect.
Thanks for reviewing.
DC :)
Date: 04 Oct 2011 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 34
Dirty Dancing
Author's Response:
LOL
Date: 26 Sep 2011 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 33
Omg!!!!! Love the lemon!!! Come on down wedding day!!! Update soon!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. Yes wedding is on the way. I'll try to do a bonus chapter this week to get there sooner. Thanks for the feedback.
DC :)
Date: 24 Sep 2011 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 33
HOT car sex! Edward is so kinky.
Author's Response:
I know. Edward keep a smile on my face. Thanks for the feedback.
DC :)
Date: 18 Sep 2011 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 32
This is an awesome chap! Update soon!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. Hopepully the next one is just as good.
Thanks for reviewing.
DC :)
Date: 18 Sep 2011 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 32
Hey,
great chapter, I really liked it that they talked about the possibility of a pregnancy because if they plan on having a baby Edward will be hopefully more relaxed during the pregnancy. I'm curious if they want to have a baby after the wedding and I hope you'll go on soon!
Author's Response:
Hi,
Yes, that's my reason for wanting this information revealed before she gets pregnant. I want both of them to enjoy it when/if it happens.
Thanks for reviewing.
DC :)
Date: 13 Sep 2011 10:39 AM Title: Chapter 31
I like how this story is turning out so far. Keep up the incredible job you're doing.
jukie
Author's Response:
I'm glad the story is still going well. Thanks for the positive feedback.
DC :)
Date: 11 Sep 2011 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 31
Awwwww how cute. *looks @ boyfriend* gosh babe! Y don't u sing me to sleep! *boyfriend shrugs* update soon!
Author's Response:
LOL :)
Date: 08 Sep 2011 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 30
Awwww... I love that song! Great chap! Update soon!!!
Author's Response:
I love putting songs in the story. When I started, I didn't plan on using songs but after the first perfectly placed song, I think of more and more love songs I'd like to use but only if I could find the perfect place in the story.
Thanks for reviewing.
DC :)
Date: 06 Sep 2011 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 30
Hey,
great chapter, I'm sure the wedding will be wonderful and the suprise with the hotel was very sweet. I liked it!
Author's Response:
Hi,
I'm looking forward to the wedding too. I don't know what I'll do when the wedding is over.
I enjoyed writing their time at the hotel. Conecting like they usually do. Enjoying being together. That's why they are my lovebirds. LOL
Thanks for reviewing.
DC :)
Date: 28 Aug 2011 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 29
Awesome, awesome, awesome! Update soon!
Author's Response:
Great praise. LOL Hope you like the next chapter too because I finally updated.
Thanks,
DC :)
Date: 27 Aug 2011 10:49 AM Title: Chapter 29
Hey,
great chapter. I can totally understand Bella because I'm really looking forward to the weding too. I'm sure it will be wonderful!
Please go on soon!
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed the chapter,
yes, the wedding is going to be out of this world. I have a good chapter in the book to build on.
Thanks for sticking with the story and letting me know your thoughts and for the encouragement.
DC :)
Date: 25 Aug 2011 12:15 PM Title: Chapter 28
Ahhhh!!!!! Awesome story! Update soon!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you're enjoying the story. I'm having fun with the lovebirds and it's good to know that people are relating to them and following the story.
DC :)
Date: 23 Aug 2011 11:33 AM Title: Chapter 28
Hey,
wow, two wonderful chapters! Valentine's Day was so great and especially Edward's gifts were so wonderful. They really showed his love for Bella...it was so sweet and I'm really happy ;-)
I hope you'll go on soon!
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed the Valentines chapters. It was their first Valentine's Day and we know how Edward looks for any oportunity to tell her how he feels and to lavish her with gifts so I wanted her to do the same. To make it just as special for him too.
Thanks for reviewing.
DC :)
[Report This]Date: 22 Aug 2011 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 20
Best chapter yet!
Author's Response:
This is one of my favorites too. I love making the marriage propasal special for both of them. I really didn't like the way it was in the book. Thank God he loved her enough to keep asking and even when she did agree to marry him it was so business like. I love the romance of this night.
Thanks for reviewing.
DC :)
[Report This]Date: 22 Aug 2011 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 5
Love E's pov!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you enjoyed EPOV. I thought it was necessary at that point. We all wanted to kill him so he had to explain why he was acting like an idiot.
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
DC :)
Date: 20 Aug 2011 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 26
hey,
great chapter! the vacation was wonderful. The cabin was very beautiful and especially the massage was so sweet and hot.
I hope you'll go on soon!
Author's Response:
Hello agin,
Thanks for the review,
I liked the massage also. I've been thinking of it for a while but I couldn't think of a place for it until the ski trip. They all had fun. I even had fun remembering my ski trip.
New two chapters uploaded. Enjoy
DC :)
Date: 13 Aug 2011 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 25
Hey,
the idea with the diary is great and the hallucination was very interesting. Great chapter, all the memories were so nice and I hope you'll go on soon!
Author's Response:
We didn't get much details from the book about those months and what SM gave us was not working for my lovebirds so I had to be creative. I'll glad it came across OK. Although I'm not using most of NM, there are a few things I wanted to explore from that book. The hallucinations was one.
Thanks for reviewing.
DC :)
Date: 09 Aug 2011 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 24
i like thi b-day;0
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you liked the party. Hope the rest of the story works for you.
Date: 08 Aug 2011 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 24
hey,
wonderful chapter, the birthday was so great! In the original I hated that it was destroyed by the paper cut but now I'm really happy. Bella is so much easier with her age, it's really great!
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thanks again for another great review. Edward had to reassure her about her importance in his life for her to get to that point, but now she has no doubts.
As you know I hate most of NM so there was no papercut. This way Edward stays and Jacob does not get to make a move on her.
DC :)
Date: 07 Aug 2011 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love the way you did the birthday party. Keep up the cool work!!!!!
jukie
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you liked the b'day party.
DC :)
Date: 04 Aug 2011 12:19 PM Title: Chapter 23
hey,
great chapters. I'm glad the trip to Alaska went so well and Laurent is a good guy. I was impressed about Rose's little speech and it was very helpful for Bella to understand Edward better.
I hope you'll go on soon!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review,
Yes, I'm eliminating all the obsticles in their way.
I know Edward should have had more faith in her and explain himself but we know he doesn't always think straight when it comes to Bella. Having Rose as the big sister came in handy here. Bella found out the reason Edward is being so protective and she didn't have to fight with him over it.
DC :)
Date: 02 Aug 2011 10:10 AM Title: Chapter 23
I like this so far I just hope the birthday party will go better than the book and movie. I never did like having Jake getting to involved in Bella's life.
jukie
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review, I hate the whole Jake triangle so I don't intend for him to get a chance to be involved in their lives.
DC :)
Date: 27 Jul 2011 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 21
hey,
great chapter, I'm glad that Charlie and Renée were so positive about the wedding and I'm curious to know what will happen in Alaska.
I hope you'll go on soon!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. I want everyone on board for the wedding and their future. Hopefully it will be smooth sailing for them from now on.
Sorry for the late post. I'm putting up 2 chapters to make up for it.
Date: 18 Jul 2011 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 10
I really like this version so far. I love how you took the all information from the book and made it really steamy love story. Keep up the great work.
jukie
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. Yes that was my intent. Keep the integrity of the story just spice it up a bit. I'm glad you're enjoying it.
Thanks, DC :)
Date: 17 Jul 2011 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 20
I like your version of Twilight......please keep the chapters coming.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. I'm glad you're enjoying the changes.
Thanks,
DC :)
Date: 17 Jul 2011 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 20
Hey,
wow, I didn't expect you to update so soon but this chapter was so wonderful! I'm so glad that Bella accepted Edward's proposal immediately I hated the long time of waiting in the book.
I'm very happy that you don't want to end the story so soon because it's one of my favorites and I hope to read more...it's good that they talked about the children aspect because I found it silly that they didn't realised it sooner in the book that woman are able to become pregnant by vampires...so I'm curious how your story will go on!
Author's Response:
Hi,
I didn't like the long wait either and when she finally accepted, it was more of a business proposition. I think my Edward deserved better than that. :)
I not sure if I'm doing the whole pregnancy drama so I wanted them to be safe until I decided.
Glad you enjoyed the chapter.
Thanks, DC :)
Date: 17 Jul 2011 9:48 AM Title: Chapter 19
Hey,
it's great that the Cullens take care of Bella and Charlie so well. I like that she's integrated in the family and even Rosalie isn't such a bitch than in the books.
The talk between Bella and Edward was great too because he accepted the fact that he would torture her if he left her and that she blongs to his world.
I love your writing style and I hope you'll go on soon!
Author's Response:
Hello,
We know how caring Esme is so it's only natural for her to want to take care of Bella and Charlie.
Bella spends a lot of time at the Cullens. I want her to have fun there and I want her to have a good relationship with all of them. This is going to be her family.
Since I'm not doing the whole disappearing act like in NM, I wanted to get that conversation out of the way. Let both of them know exactly where they stand with each other.
Thanks again for reviewing,
DC :)
Date: 10 Jul 2011 7:51 AM Title: Chapter 18
Hey,
the chapters were very nice...It's so good that Edward promised to stay forever and the talk with Renée was good too. I hope Bella will be fine soon and Edward can speak with her about the transformation etc.
I hope you'll go on soon!
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thanks for the review.
Nonw that James and Victoria are out of the way, we could move on to the serious stuff. Transformation stories, timing and expectations. Surprise coming up.
DC :)
Date: 04 Jul 2011 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 16
Hey
wow, it's great that you posted so soon and I like the chapter because Alice is so much more smarter than in the bood. I don't know either why she didn't see it then but in your version it's very logical.
I'm sure that Edward will be able to save Bella and I'm looking forward to read the next chapter ;-)
Author's Response:
Hi,
yes, SM didn't use Alice's visions for that scene. She had her reasons but I wanted Edward and his family to have a better chance of getting to her before James did too much damage.
Thanks for the review,
DC :)
Date: 03 Jul 2011 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 15
hey,
wow, the chapter was wonderful. Especially the scene when Edward and Bella talked about eternity...I love it that he isn't against the possibility of changing her and that he isn't scared of losing her soul.
I hope the plan will work and Bella won't get hurt but I liked it that she hadn't to hurt Charlie.
I'm very curious to read the next chapter! ;-)
Author's Response:
Hello,
I hated the whole stomping on Charlie's heart scene so I decided to leave it out.
Yeah, Edward knows Bella is his mate, if she's willing to join him, why say no?
I had to use Alice's visions. Why didn't she figure this out in the book?
Posting new chapter soon.
Thanks,
DC :)
Date: 02 Jul 2011 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 14
hey,
the chapter was very good like always ;-) It's so wonderful how you connect the scenes of the book in a different way. I like that Edward isn't so regretful after their first time, I hated this part in the book and now I'm very curious about the baseball match and the visitors.
I've also read chapter 11 but unfortunately I couldn't leave another review. It's good that you fixed it now and it was nice to read ;-)
I hope you'll go on so soon again!
Author's Response:
Thanks again for reading and reviewing. I know, in the book he went totally over board. I hope the don't have him that uptight in the movie. Bella already had self esteem problems and that's the last thing she needed.
DC :)
Date: 29 Jun 2011 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 13
hey,
thanks for your answers. I found it very funny because when I watch New Moon I skip all scenes without Edward too and I don't like the wolves either ;-)
It's good that you changed some things but I think chapter 13 is posted after chapter 10 as chapter 11 and then again at it's right place after chapter 12. Between chapter 10 and chapter 12 there's a part missing so maybe you could check this and I'm very curious to read the next chapter ;-)
Author's Response:
I think I fixed it. I'll print the whole story and read it on the train to make sure everything is in the right place. Thanks for catching.
Date: 25 Jun 2011 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 12
now I'm a bit confused because I think the chapters aren't in the right order...maybe you can have a look and change it
Author's Response:
Originally, I posted 13 before 12 but I fixed that. I also switched things in my story a little. I wanted Charlie to meet Edward before their first date and I also wanted to get Jacob & Billy's meetings over with so I combined both of their scenes from the book into one. Trying to avoid the wolves as much as possible for now.
DC :)
Date: 25 Jun 2011 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 11
Wow, the chapter was so wonderful! Their first time was very special and I like the way Edward is seeing himself now and that he doesn't think at leaving her or other stupid things. He doesn't understimate her feelings and I'm curious if they will meet the nomads and what will happen.
Also the way you connected phrases of "Twilight" with "Breaking Dawn" and "Eclipse" was very good and I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response:
Thanks again for reviewing. Yes, I wanted to make both Edward and Bella stronger and more confident. Yeah, I like taking parts of all the books to get my point across. Just having fun. You won't see much of NM. I always skip through the part of the movie where there no Edward. :)
I have to bring James in, don't know how big a role he'll play yet. I don't want to cause too much angst for the lovebirds.
DC:)
Date: 19 Jun 2011 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 10
hey,
the last chapters were very good, I liked the way their relationship changed and I hope that Saturday will be a wonderful day.
Hope you'll go on soon!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. I'm glad you are enjoyed the chapters. From the book we could see that they were so into each other. I love exploring that. Letting the characters have fun. Hope you like the new chapter.
DC :)
Date: 14 Jun 2011 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 9
wow love this story thanks :) please keep updating !
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you liked the story. I love Edward so I'm having fun with this.
Date: 04 Jun 2011 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 7
hey, it's nice that Bella is so happy and of course it doesn't matter to her that Edward is a vampire.
I hope you'll go on soon!
Author's Response:
I think they are perfect for each other. Both finding love when they least expected.