Date: 30 Dec 2012 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 15
OMG AFTER READING ALL OF THIS I JUST SEEN YOU HAVEN'T UP DATED SENCE MAY 2011 SO I'M GUESSING YOU DON'T PLAN ON WRITING ANY MORE OF THIS STORY. HOW SAD WE DON'T GET TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENED TO BELLA OR EDWARD, THAT REALLY ISN'T FAIR TO ALL OF US WHO READ ALL OF YOUR STORYS. YOU HAVE ONE MORE UP AND FINISHED I PLAN ON READING PLEASE, PLEASE SEND ME SOMETHING AND TELL ME IF THERE IS A CHANCE YOU WILL EVER FINISH THHIS ONE. THANK YOU
Date: 29 Dec 2012 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 12
SHIT I REALLY DON'T BLAME ALICE SHE WAS IN A PANIC AS WELL ONLY AFTER LETTING EDWARD KNOW WHAT TAYNA WAS ABOUT TO DO DID SHE KNOW SHE SHOULDN'T HAVE TOLD HIM NOW IT'S TO LATE WHAT WILL IT DO TO HIM WILL HE BE ABLE TO GET PAST IT IN TIME? WILL IT BREAK HIM AND BELLA UP? WILL KATEY BLAME EDWARD FOR WHAT TAYNA DID? THIS IS SO SAD.
Date: 29 Dec 2012 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 10
EDWARD'S GOING TO LEAVE THE TEAM ISN'T HE? I BET IT'S NOT BELLA HE LEAVE I REALLY DON'T GET WHY BELLA IS ALWAYS BLAMED FOR WHAT EVER HAPPEN THAT IS BAD. HELL FOR THAT MATTER REMEMBER EMMETT SAYING IT WAY BELLA FAULT TAYNA CAME AFTER EDWARD ON THE FIELD WELL DIDN'T HE KNOW BELLA WASN'T THE ONLY ONE THERE SO WHY BLAME HER? WHY NOT BLAME EMMETT OR JASPER OR ANY OTHER PERSON THERE?
Date: 29 Dec 2012 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 6
I DON'T THINK BELLA IS DOING ANYTHING AND EDWARD IS AN ASS FOR THE WAY HE JUST TREATED HER SHE IS NEW AT THERE SCHOOL AND HE SHOULD BE NICE TO HER NOT BLAME HER FOR HIS BAD LUCK EVERY ONE HAS DAYS WITH BAD LUCK SOMETIMES.
Date: 08 Jan 2012 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 14
PLEASE DON'T FORGET THIS STORY!!!!!!! I now have a burning desire to find out how this finishes. I know it's not been updated since May but they have to be hiding in your guest room somewhere. Check under the bed and in the back corners of the closet. This can NOT be the end of this story! PLEASE!!!!!!!!
ps: I read this entire work in a couple of hours tonight. May I just say that this is one of only three fanfics that have EVER made me cry. I am (in equal parts) hating you, loving you, and in awe of your mastery of emotion right now.
Date: 29 Nov 2011 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 1
wow how sad to be the barer of the bad seed. does bella realize that wherever she goes she causes harm to someone? i wonder if she causes harm to anyone or just a specific person?
well hmmm edward just expierence bella swan.
looking forward to an interaction while not being drunk and seeing where it goes.
Date: 12 Nov 2011 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 15
I just read this story straight though. It is very captivating. I like the way you take the charaters and always make them something different. Edward is completely different in everyone of your stories that I have read.
As I said, very much enjoying this story and hoping that you finish it soon.
Can't wait for the innocent couple to finally express their physical love, and hopefully without too much damage. :)
Thanks for the entertainment and the sharing of your talent.
Date: 30 Jun 2011 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 8
Oh this is sooo cute, I am loving it! So sweet. I love that Edward stood up for her while they were at the lodge but I am a bit concerned that Alice see's Bella as dangerous for Edward, I am curious to know where that is going. This last little revelation about Edward being able to see into Bella's mind but only while she sleeps is very interesting and I can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: 03 Jun 2011 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 15
OMG I am LMAO. Your view and depiction of the twilight series is hysterical. You did just state the facts and sadly I can't argue with you view.
As for the story so far I am loving it. I will warn you that if you kill off Edward or Bella I will have to search and find you to hurt you. LOL
I have read your other stories and I think you told me you are a HEA believer. I hope this is true.
Can't wait for next update to see if my favorite couple pulls through.
Date: 03 Jun 2011 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 3
I love the perspective you are writing from. I like the little hints of what is to come as in "little did he know..." :)
Wow, I am anxious to see what this decision is going to cost Edward...
I am also curious as to what Tonya did...
I am ALSO curious about Katey Kat...
Date: 03 Jun 2011 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 2
Man, I really like the way this is going. I like how you have brought Edward's and Alice's vampiric traits to the AUH side :) This story is very intriguing :)
Date: 03 Jun 2011 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow...the lightning strike is certainly foreshadowing things to come, isn't it? It's also quite symbolic and I can tell you that if I didn't already want to know (which I do) what happened next, the lightning strike scene would have been the clincher!
Date: 01 Jun 2011 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 2
Ooooh, I am loving this RHM, very different to your vamp Edwards - but so so good. I love how you get the feeling that even though they don't really know each other, they are destined for each other .. *sigh*.. OK, I am off to read more!! AV oxo
Date: 01 Jun 2011 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 14
love love love all your stories but this one is bloody fantastic...i can almost read anything you throw in this story just as long as it's a HEA in the end??? *crosses fingers*
keep writing you make the world a better place :)