[Report This]Date: 03 Jan 2013 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 15
I absolutely love this and cant wait to read more, please update this soon, it's going to drive me nuts waiting to see what happens next!
[Report This]Date: 30 Dec 2012 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 15
OMG AFTER READING ALL OF THIS I JUST SEEN YOU HAVEN'T UP DATED SENCE MAY 2011 SO I'M GUESSING YOU DON'T PLAN ON WRITING ANY MORE OF THIS STORY. HOW SAD WE DON'T GET TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENED TO BELLA OR EDWARD, THAT REALLY ISN'T FAIR TO ALL OF US WHO READ ALL OF YOUR STORYS. YOU HAVE ONE MORE UP AND FINISHED I PLAN ON READING PLEASE, PLEASE SEND ME SOMETHING AND TELL ME IF THERE IS A CHANCE YOU WILL EVER FINISH THHIS ONE. THANK YOU
[Report This]Date: 30 Dec 2012 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 14
GOD PLEASE DON'T LET EATHER OF THEM DIE.
[Report This]Date: 30 Dec 2012 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 13
SHIT NOW WHAT HAPPENED I HOPE BELLA AND EDWARD ARE OK.
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2012 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 12
SHIT I REALLY DON'T BLAME ALICE SHE WAS IN A PANIC AS WELL ONLY AFTER LETTING EDWARD KNOW WHAT TAYNA WAS ABOUT TO DO DID SHE KNOW SHE SHOULDN'T HAVE TOLD HIM NOW IT'S TO LATE WHAT WILL IT DO TO HIM WILL HE BE ABLE TO GET PAST IT IN TIME? WILL IT BREAK HIM AND BELLA UP? WILL KATEY BLAME EDWARD FOR WHAT TAYNA DID? THIS IS SO SAD.
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2012 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 11
WHO'S GOING TO DIE? IS IT TAYNA?
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2012 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 10
EDWARD'S GOING TO LEAVE THE TEAM ISN'T HE? I BET IT'S NOT BELLA HE LEAVE I REALLY DON'T GET WHY BELLA IS ALWAYS BLAMED FOR WHAT EVER HAPPEN THAT IS BAD. HELL FOR THAT MATTER REMEMBER EMMETT SAYING IT WAY BELLA FAULT TAYNA CAME AFTER EDWARD ON THE FIELD WELL DIDN'T HE KNOW BELLA WASN'T THE ONLY ONE THERE SO WHY BLAME HER? WHY NOT BLAME EMMETT OR JASPER OR ANY OTHER PERSON THERE?
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2012 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 9
IS EDWARD STARTING TO FALL FOR BELLA IF SO HE NEEDS TO GIVE A CUE TO THE TWO BITCHES TO TAKE A LONG WALK OFF A SHORT PIER.
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2012 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 8
OH EDWARD THAT IS NOT FAIR TO GO WHERE HE SHOULDN'T BELLA MAY BE PISSED IF SHE FINDS OUT
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2012 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 6
I DON'T THINK BELLA IS DOING ANYTHING AND EDWARD IS AN ASS FOR THE WAY HE JUST TREATED HER SHE IS NEW AT THERE SCHOOL AND HE SHOULD BE NICE TO HER NOT BLAME HER FOR HIS BAD LUCK EVERY ONE HAS DAYS WITH BAD LUCK SOMETIMES.
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2012 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 5
POOR EDWARD GOT HIS HEART BROKEN AND IS THAT WHY HE IS A TEEN MAN WHORE?
[Report This]Date: 28 Dec 2012 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 4
BELLA'S NOT REALLY MAKING THE BAD THINGS HAPPEN TO EDWARD IS SHE HER BAD LUCK RUBBING OFF ON HIM.
[Report This]Date: 28 Dec 2012 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 3
WHERE IS BELLA HAS SHE BEEN ONE OF THE PEOPLE WATCHING EDWARD WITH THE BITCHES?
[Report This]Date: 28 Dec 2012 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 2
YES AND SO IS HE THANK GOD.
[Report This]Date: 28 Dec 2012 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
DAMN IT BOUNCED OFF OF BELLA AND HIT EDWARD THEY COULD HAVE BOTH DIED. SO WHY ISN'T JAKE, SAM AND THE OTHERS OUT THERE TO TAKE THEM BOTH INSIDE.
Date: 07 Oct 2012 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 15
please tell me this story isn't finished i love that it is diffrent
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2012 11:11 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow I love this story its so good!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 09 Jun 2012 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 15
Ok honey, you have left us hanging long enough. It's time to give your readers ehat they want.
Please update! xx
Date: 05 Jun 2012 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 15
Love this story please update !
Date: 19 Mar 2012 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 15
Just out of curiosity, are you still working on this story?
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2012 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loving this story! Please continue!!!!!! Please Please please!!!! Xx :)
Date: 14 Jan 2012 11:47 AM Title: Chapter 1
I am really interested in reading this story but I see you haven't updated in almost a year ... Are you going to finish it? I don't want to start reading if you aren't going to I won't start reading it.
Date: 08 Jan 2012 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 14
PLEASE DON'T FORGET THIS STORY!!!!!!! I now have a burning desire to find out how this finishes. I know it's not been updated since May but they have to be hiding in your guest room somewhere. Check under the bed and in the back corners of the closet. This can NOT be the end of this story! PLEASE!!!!!!!!
ps: I read this entire work in a couple of hours tonight. May I just say that this is one of only three fanfics that have EVER made me cry. I am (in equal parts) hating you, loving you, and in awe of your mastery of emotion right now.
[Report This]Date: 30 Nov 2011 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 2
so it seems bella knows bad follows her
edward in the wrong place
gets you hooked
[Report This]Date: 29 Nov 2011 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 1
wow how sad to be the barer of the bad seed. does bella realize that wherever she goes she causes harm to someone? i wonder if she causes harm to anyone or just a specific person?
well hmmm edward just expierence bella swan.
looking forward to an interaction while not being drunk and seeing where it goes.
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2011 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 15
I just read this story straight though. It is very captivating. I like the way you take the charaters and always make them something different. Edward is completely different in everyone of your stories that I have read.
As I said, very much enjoying this story and hoping that you finish it soon.
Can't wait for the innocent couple to finally express their physical love, and hopefully without too much damage. :)
Thanks for the entertainment and the sharing of your talent.
VR13
[Report This]Date: 11 Nov 2011 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 15
OK now you need to write at least one more chapter to finish this or more preferably...great read so far really enjoyed it.
[Report This]Date: 11 Nov 2011 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 8
Very well played...they are done for.
[Report This]Date: 11 Nov 2011 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 1
Doing a small bit of reorganisation having just finished 'Inviegled by Beauty', when I came across this little nugget. This is an excellently crafted piece of writing and I am really enjoying it.
Date: 24 Oct 2011 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 15
Hope to read soon what's going to happen..
Date: 26 Sep 2011 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 15
EXCELLENT STORY WITH OUT-OF-THE WORLD STANDARD OF BAD LUCKS;
PLEASE UPDATE ON PATIENT'S CONDITION
"STILL BITING NAILS ON EDGE OF THE SEAT"
Date: 13 Jul 2011 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 3
Hmmmm not to fond of player Edward
Date: 13 Jul 2011 11:12 AM Title: Chapter 2
Getting sooooooo good
Date: 13 Jul 2011 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 1
Look forward yo reading it its verygood
[Report This]Date: 30 Jun 2011 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 8
Oh this is sooo cute, I am loving it! So sweet. I love that Edward stood up for her while they were at the lodge but I am a bit concerned that Alice see's Bella as dangerous for Edward, I am curious to know where that is going. This last little revelation about Edward being able to see into Bella's mind but only while she sleeps is very interesting and I can't wait to see what happens next.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2011 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 2
Aaawwwwwhhhh! this story is so stinkin cute! I love it thank you!
Date: 13 Jun 2011 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 1
love your stories
thanks for sharing them with us
Date: 03 Jun 2011 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 15
Aww man, this wasn't even a real chapter! Evil cliffie!
[Report This]Date: 03 Jun 2011 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 14
OMG, noooooooo!
[Report This]Date: 03 Jun 2011 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 15
OMG I am LMAO. Your view and depiction of the twilight series is hysterical. You did just state the facts and sadly I can't argue with you view.
As for the story so far I am loving it. I will warn you that if you kill off Edward or Bella I will have to search and find you to hurt you. LOL
I have read your other stories and I think you told me you are a HEA believer. I hope this is true.
Can't wait for next update to see if my favorite couple pulls through.
Mwah
Barb
[Report This]Date: 03 Jun 2011 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 3
I love the perspective you are writing from. I like the little hints of what is to come as in "little did he know..." :)
Wow, I am anxious to see what this decision is going to cost Edward...
I am also curious as to what Tonya did...
I am ALSO curious about Katey Kat...
[Report This]Date: 03 Jun 2011 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 2
Man, I really like the way this is going. I like how you have brought Edward's and Alice's vampiric traits to the AUH side :) This story is very intriguing :)
[Report This]Date: 03 Jun 2011 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow...the lightning strike is certainly foreshadowing things to come, isn't it? It's also quite symbolic and I can tell you that if I didn't already want to know (which I do) what happened next, the lightning strike scene would have been the clincher!
[Report This]Date: 03 Jun 2011 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 7
Great chapter, loved it!
[Report This]Date: 02 Jun 2011 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 4
Ok I guess that is his punishment for the two skanks : )
Date: 02 Jun 2011 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 15
your story is great. hurry and update. i need to know what's up next
[Report This]Date: 02 Jun 2011 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 3
Uh.......eewww. All for threesomes, but not those two, LOL!
[Report This]Date: 02 Jun 2011 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
Intriguing so far : )
Date: 02 Jun 2011 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 15
I can't wait...I really love the premise of this story can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: 02 Jun 2011 12:12 PM Title: Chapter 5
Slowly catching up on this story; and I'm really enjoying it. You have a way of drawing us in to your wonderful stories. Keep up the great work!
Date: 01 Jun 2011 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 15
You are kidding me, right? This is an update?
Date: 01 Jun 2011 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 2
I'm really intrigued by your new story. Can't wait to see what happens between E & B. Thanks for sharing with us.
Date: 01 Jun 2011 10:45 AM Title: Chapter 15
LOL NICE!!
[Report This]Date: 01 Jun 2011 9:01 AM Title: Chapter 6
Oops - poor Bella, in the wrong place at the wrong time....
Rosalie "outing" Tanya was pretty funny though!!
[Report This]Date: 01 Jun 2011 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 5
No wonder Edward reacted the way he did to Tanya - she bloody deserves it too, imagine cheating on Edward Cullen! No freaking way!! Thanks for this little flashback RHM - very enlightening!! oxo AV
[Report This]Date: 01 Jun 2011 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 4
Hmm, it does seem that Bella is dangerous for Edward (but then again, maybe he deserved a cracked rib for being with two skanks??) hehe
Heading for another chapter now :-)
[Report This]Date: 01 Jun 2011 8:37 AM Title: Chapter 3
Jeez, this is getting more complex, and mysterious!! I can't wait to unravel this, it is fabulous!! oxo AV
[Report This]Date: 01 Jun 2011 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 2
Ooooh, I am loving this RHM, very different to your vamp Edwards - but so so good. I love how you get the feeling that even though they don't really know each other, they are destined for each other .. *sigh*.. OK, I am off to read more!! AV oxo
Date: 01 Jun 2011 7:46 AM Title: Chapter 15
Bad things happen go good people all the time. No one is to blame.
Date: 01 Jun 2011 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 14
Is he Edward Masen or Edward Cullen?
[Report This]Date: 01 Jun 2011 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 14
love love love all your stories but this one is bloody fantastic...i can almost read anything you throw in this story just as long as it's a HEA in the end??? *crosses fingers*
keep writing you make the world a better place :)
Date: 01 Jun 2011 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 15
Love this story! Oh man this is quite some accident. I'm on the edge of my seat!
[Report This]Date: 01 Jun 2011 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 15
have loved the last couple of chapters, this story is seriously blowing my mind and then you go ahead and post chapter 15...... you make me laugh so damn hard.... I love your 'here it is' attitude :
cant wait for more
[Report This]Date: 01 Jun 2011 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 15
I see how you are thinking, and I think I may foresee how this story will end. '
I have already read the first 15 chapters on ff.net, but I am ready to see what you will come up with next.
Date: 01 Jun 2011 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loves this new fic!
[Report This]Date: 31 May 2011 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 14
Loved EPOV's. Praying they both are okay.
[Report This]Date: 31 May 2011 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 14
Jeez......!! One catastrophie after another.
Date: 31 May 2011 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 14
love this story but I would love a HEA she lets try to get one OK :)
Date: 31 May 2011 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 14
wow great story thanks :)
Date: 31 May 2011 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 14
Please don't kill Edward off... They need their HEA. Love your story
Date: 31 May 2011 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 14
OH MY GOSH! Poor Bella and Edward! Please let the two of them be ok. Also, let them defy the odds once again about Bella being bad luck.
Date: 31 May 2011 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 14
this too sad! hope both Edward & Bella survive.
Date: 31 May 2011 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 14
So good - please don't take our Edward from us or make him second guess his relationship with Bella.
Date: 31 May 2011 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 13
OH my gosh, what happened now! I am so anxious!
Date: 31 May 2011 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 12
OH MY GOSH! I really cannot believe that it happened! Poor Katey and Edward! I cannot wait to see what happens next!
Date: 31 May 2011 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 11
Oh my gosh, ominous much? I really hope that they can make it through this pain! Please?
[Report This]Date: 31 May 2011 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hi RHM, I am loving your new story! This is right up my alley :-) So looking forward to seeing where you go with this one and I am so glad I can be here from first chapter onwards!! *big hugs* AV oxo
Date: 31 May 2011 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 13
Oh no! What now?
[Report This]Date: 31 May 2011 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 13
Awww mannnnnn....too short, too short!! Cliffies are bad....hmmmm Maybe I read too fast. RATS!
Just started this story this morning and am totally HOOKED.
[Report This]Date: 31 May 2011 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 12
Committing suicide is the ultimate betrayal and the most selfish thing you can do. I feel so much for Katey and Edward. Loved it
Date: 31 May 2011 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 11
Aww Edward is so sweet. Loved it. Thank you for another excellent update
[Report This]Date: 31 May 2011 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 13
Goodness I hope it's not another death. Loved the chapter. Thank you
[Report This]Date: 31 May 2011 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 11
See, selfish Tanya is going to kill herself because Edward doesn't want her. She cheated....he found out....too bad. Some "mistakes" just can't be forgiven.
Date: 31 May 2011 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 12
poor Alice, poor Edward :(
Date: 31 May 2011 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 11
oh shit, what a foreboding build up :(
great idea with the frogs, by the way.
Date: 31 May 2011 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 9
Does Tanya know about his gift?
Date: 31 May 2011 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 9
yay!! go Edward, go Edward! I love the little bits of familiar dialogue and filmed action that you're slipping in here and there.
Date: 31 May 2011 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 8
awwww that's dead romantic!
Date: 31 May 2011 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 7
intriguing chapter. I love the dialogue exchanges - I can picture it all very well and hear their voices too. excellent writing.