Date: 27 Oct 2013 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 33
I can't believe the story has ended. This has been one of the best stories that I have read. How can you not love all of these characters. Looking forward to anything new that you have coming up. I truely enjoy your writing.
Date: 21 Oct 2013 9:24 AM Title: Chapter 31
I know Bella doesnt' mean to be so stubborn, but she still isn't listening to her doctor. All she needs to do is lay in that bed and heal. She doesn't need to tear anything by moving. Everybody knows that when someone says fine that it is a lie. You would think that she would learn. I love the names.
Date: 17 Oct 2013 9:15 AM Title: Chapter 30
I am so happy that Bella is doing ok. Edward would not have made it through another death. After this experience, I don't think they were going to have anymore pregnancies. Having a hysterectomy is not the worse thing, when it could have been death. They have 4 healthy children. Bella needs to concentrate on that then what she lost.
Date: 16 Oct 2013 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 29
Is Bella hemorrhaging ?? Sounds like what happened to a couple of friends of mine right after delivery and its scary shit especially when your a nurse/physician and know what's going on! I'd rather be like Bella and be unaware. Can't wait for next update!
Date: 09 Oct 2013 7:23 AM Title: Chapter 27
You had me worried for a minute there...did Edward get into an accident.... Was Bella's water going to break... Whew every body is okay but since babies pick storms for birthdays I'm guessing the twins make an appearance next chapter . ;-)
Date: 17 May 2013 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 25
I'm glad that as much as it sucks Bella is trying to be pleasant about her bed rest. The guys are all so sweet. My heart still goes out to them all bedrest is horrible. I was on bedrest for a while and that was before fan fiction. Lol
Date: 17 May 2013 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 25
BB - Great chapter. I get that this is hard for Bella, she is always the caretaker, but I probably tend to agree with the "selfish" reviewers. For being such a caretaker she was being pretty whiny. I know its hard. Great chatper though,. I love all the effort that Edward is making. So sweet.
Date: 30 Apr 2013 11:20 AM Title: Chapter 24
I have to say that to be honest you don't owe us readers nothing, you write for yourself and don't let anyone tell you different, I get it, you update when you can and its all good, I hope your son is feeling better and that your book edit went smoothly, I love the chapter
Date: 30 Apr 2013 8:11 AM Title: Chapter 24
Bella needs to grow up and stop being selfish. She is in the hospital because she wasn't taking care of herself and her babies. Their health is what is important. I am sorry she is inconvenienced , but the babies are important.
Date: 29 Apr 2013 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 24
I really love your stories so thanks for not taking them down. They r your stories so update when u can and ignore the people who pester you or just tell them that good things come to those who wait. Personally I think people need to learn how to wait and be patient. :)
Date: 29 Apr 2013 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 24
Thank you for keeping your stories up, this one is great. Life is not easy, and I think we owe you some patience and a thank you for the stories you write.
It's amazing how avlive your characters are, I can almost feel Edward's tierdness, and how much Bella wants and need to go home. Looking forward to the next uppdate.
Date: 05 Feb 2013 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 22
Poor Edward. He is going to have to calm down or else he's going to go insane. I bet it's safe to say there will be no more babies after these two. There is no way Edward would be able to handle another pregnancy no matter how good the outcome.
Bella needs to really start putting herself and the babies first. I know she is worried about the boys and Edward but they would never survive losing her. They are all lost too much already.
Date: 25 Jan 2013 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 21
She really needs to stop being do stubborn. Esward really is goj g to have a stroke when they find her. It looks like they are going to have Christmas babies. New Year babies at the latest. I can't see the doctors letting her go longer then a week she is defently in full blown preeclampsia by now.