Date: 18 Oct 2011 10:44 AM Title: Chapter 1
I really enjoy this story. I really enjoy that the characters are different from the originals and that you gave them a new identity! I'm eager to see how each coming chapter unfolds. Keep writing! I'm eagerly waiting for your next update!
Date: 12 Oct 2011 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 21
"I've always liked that, you know; when you call me Bell. I don't know why."
I suppose I have to chalk it up to my fondness for Beauty and the Beast, but I like the nickname Bell. Now "Bells" drives me crazy. I totally HATE it. Why would someone with a beautiful name like Isabella or Bella want to be called "Bells," but Bell, yeah, that's ok. Funny how much of a difference one "s" can make.
Date: 12 Oct 2011 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 21
Thanx for updating, but please NO on the epilogue.!!! I cannot imagine being w/o this one. I loved First of the Month and it finished way too soon. :(. Are u starting a new story anytime soon? I really hope so. See u Friday. ;)
Date: 11 Sep 2011 10:46 AM Title: Chapter 20
Edward is a good person. I hope he sees that at some point. He just needs to believe in himself more. I can't wait to see what happens with Gram. Also I hope Edward doen't lose his job since he just left that afternoon. Great job...thanks!
Date: 10 Sep 2011 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 20
He is so much better w acquired feelings...don't worry. ;). Well I'm actually worried about the only two chapters left that's not good...I'm going to miss u
You are precious! I say two chapters but you never know. That boy likes to yack so maybe it will be 3 or 4. But his time is ending, yeah. I will be around though!
Date: 03 Sep 2011 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 19
I don't blame Edward for being so mad at Emmett, but he could have confronted him differently. All he did was make Bella feel bad and run again. I am glad she still will talk to him but asked for him leave her alone during finals. I hope they can work this out. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 26 Aug 2011 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 18
yay!! I love Marty McFly! lol!!!
awesome chapter, thought Bella's reaction to Edward and James fighting was very realistic, kinda wished they would've got it on in the bathroom... although I'm sure that'd be an interesting position for them to get caught by the police, lol
can't wait to read more!!
Date: 22 Aug 2011 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 17
I am glad they are talking again. I can't wait to see what Bella's reaction is to Edward getting the job. Edward going to talk to Esme was awesome! That was a long itme coming. Also Edward standing up for wanting to stay Seth's Big Brother was priceless. Great chatper...thanks so much!!!
Date: 20 Aug 2011 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 16
ok, Alice & Jasper are too funny! I don'tknow if I would appreciate their brand of advice..but they do seem to know Bella like no other
Yeah, you definitely have to take their advice with a grain of salt haha...
Date: 17 Aug 2011 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 16
I love Alice and Jasper!!! Alice is right though. She can't help Bella anymore. This is up to her and Edward now. I hope he will talk to her. If he reallly loves her he will. He has to! I can't wait to see what Alice and Jasper bet on next. Great chapter...thanks!!!
Date: 17 Aug 2011 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 16
yay!!! we're getting closer to her discovering her feelings!!!
glad that her grandmother regonized her and not her mother, that obviously helped her a lot!
Loved Alice's and Jasper's little intervention at the end, Bella so deserved it.
can't wait to read more! =)
Date: 14 Aug 2011 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 15
This actually made me cry. Or is it making me cry right now? I'm unsure, but either way, there are teartracks on my cheecks, and it's because of your story! I'm really impressed with Edward's foolish bravery in coming over, and trying to make up for his shitty past behavior. It's got to be terrifying for him to really open up to someone, even if he does so in such a clumsy way. This chapter kind of reminds me of Mr. Darcy's effed up proposal in Pride and Prejudice; he doesn't ever really open up, so when he does, it's both shocking and not very well-formulated. Poor Edward! Poor Bella! Awesome Alice (I know, she wasn't in this chapter, but she deserves an honorable mention)!
Not that I want you to cry, but...I kind I do. I cry all the time while reading fic haha. Now that you mention it, it does remind me of the proposal scene in P&P. Thank you so much for this kind review. :)