Date: 07 May 2013 10:27 PM Title: A Tight Fit
I dont know if you still read your reviews but i just had to let you know how AWESOME i think you are! Your story is AMAZING and im so sorry you have gotten terrible reviews. I for one can not put your story down.y husband has even fussed at me because i was reading in the theater before iron man 3 came on. Apparently i was supposed to be spending time with him lol. You write in such a way that i dont feel like im reading about twlight chatscters and i mean that as a compliment. You have made these characters your own and its brilliant. So i say fu** those that dont like it. This south carolina girl LOVES IT!
Date: 07 Apr 2013 4:43 PM Title: A Tight Fit
I can't even begin to describe how much of an amazing writer you are! I've been absolutely hooked on this story and of course quiet storm! Seriously, you have simply blown me away with this story and all the twists and turns you use are simply amazing. I plan to read all your stories, I just can't get enough of them. You have definitely inspired me :)
Date: 27 Mar 2013 5:21 PM Title: Come Hell or High Water: Part Two
Do you say stuff like that to get attention ("this story has a slow start. Have faith in me")? This is anything but a slow start. This story is marvelous, and how can you not love their kids. Sonny is great and smart, Damian is silly and funny and Kylie is just adorable. I'm going to have to read slower so I can savor it all.
Date: 24 Mar 2013 1:51 AM Title: This Woman's Work
I have no idea if I reviewed this when I first read it, but I'm into it just as much as the first time......this story caused me to see the sun come up more than once because I could not stop reading and go to bed........love your Skip
Date: 22 Feb 2013 7:26 AM Title: Part 3 Announcement
This has been my umpteenth time reading this trilogy & I find something different each time to enjoy, laugh at or a character I wish I could bitch slap.
I admire your talent very much. Thank you for selflessly sharing it with us.
Date: 21 Feb 2013 11:37 AM Title: Thou Mayest
Well, I'm sdo sorry for Aro, he is really broken about that lauren bullshit.
Well, and Casrlisle - after reading so much of Whorlisle, I still have Problems understanding him. I did read that outtake about gail, and now with Candance it seems to be the same shit - and he always says he loves them all! Thats not possible! I always hope he will change - like his Father did, but only after Woman No 3, so maybe it will also take like 30 Years....
And Esme? well, in quiet Storm I did feel sorry for her - but now? Not so anymore.
She knows he cheates on her, but she's doing the same (or wants to) , but still she wants another child? To me, she's just some brat, feeling sorry for herself! And taking Amnthony from his Mother, just so she can get her son? Woah, What? Thats kind of sick!
After her daddy died, she did had a possibility to divorce, Carlisle would have let her. But no, she wants his money and his kids, but please, not the hubby staying in his brother's buiseneess---
And now she tries again with Aro? That man is only sorry because his marriage broke - but why the hell did he have to call her? And now, I'm realls frightened for his life.
Well, at least Edward and Bella are happy in their own crazy way - and even if I think its funny but caotic how they raise their children, they do love each other and their kids - and so it will work.
Date: 06 Feb 2013 10:07 PM Title: Long Day
She is fucking annoying!!!!! Honestly, it's like she wants the man to just be in her ass 24/7 and it's really pissing me off. She is soooo fucking needy. DAMN!!!!!! How much more does the man half to do. She know's the life fuck give the man a break. She just nags, nags, nags, all the fucking time. Sorry for the language but she's annoying!
Date: 06 Feb 2013 3:34 AM Title: Come Hell or High Water: Part Two
Omg....I am enjoying these two and their kids!!!! This has me just cracking up! I LOVE Edward and his parenting....between the porn and the wine this has me snorting out loud....truly loving this....
Date: 04 Feb 2013 8:10 AM Title: Long Drive
I really don't like how Bella hasn't grown up. She still act's like a child. Manipulating Edward for him to get at his brother! Total bullshit!!!!! She's nosey and just aggravates me most of the time and Edward say's he sorry for being an ass when it was really her that should be sorry for being an ass!
Date: 31 Jan 2013 6:19 PM Title: Well Enough
Couldn't wait till the end of this story to say how amazing it is. It's had me crying with laughter, cringing in fright and crying in sympathy. Would recommend this story to anyone who likes to keep it real. Excellent story teller. Well done and keep up the good work.
Date: 14 Dec 2012 6:16 PM Title: Long Drive
Child sex abuse is an important topic to raise. Hopefully other victims will realize that they are not alone and hopefully let the authorities know...even anonymously--so that others may be saved from the same fate. Mothers--believe your children and support them!
glad you shared Alice's story.
Date: 21 Nov 2012 1:45 PM Title: A Tight Fit
Just found your stories and I love them bread the quiet storm and now this one. I can't put them down. Read when I'm supposed to be working. I think your brilliant!!! I love that Bella put Viagra in his coffee. That's classic!!
Date: 31 Oct 2012 12:12 AM Title: The Twilight Zone
Loved this chap! The whole bedroom scene and Bella fake snoring was hilarious! Unexpected reaction. This entire series has been soo good! I'm sorry for all the drama I'm reading about after the fact 'cuz it such a good story.
Date: 30 Oct 2012 11:14 PM Title: Two Weeks Later
Wow!! Just fucking Wow!! I was not expecting that at all...Hope those two can get past this situation soon. I am certainly glad that Aro is still alive & you are still doing an awesome job at writing this story your way!!
Date: 29 Oct 2012 4:12 PM Title: Bucked Up
reading quiet storm and weather the storm for the 2nd time before reading the next story, really love them will proberly keep reading over and over, totaly lovin your version of edward and bella, totaly want to marry this edward. thanks for writing them. :-)
Date: 10 Oct 2012 6:06 PM Title: Wag the Dog
Jeez - I soooo didn't see that one coming! What a great scene with Bella, but poor Bella. I couldn't figure out what was going on at first. I wanted to cry myself after the fact. (I found your story - stories- nearly two weeks ago and have been reading, reading, reading - sucking all the goodness in. I'm loving it!! Thank you!
Date: 08 Oct 2012 2:44 PM Title: A Tight Fit
I don't understand the haters, but I think it's only jealousy. We can't deny that you are VERY talented, and I LOVE your fictions MOBWARD and OFFBEAT. I'm a French reader and a huge fan of your fine work. I love what you have done with the characters. Thank you so much for sharing your wonderful skills at writing with us.
Date: 29 Sep 2012 10:55 AM Title: The Cupid Shuffle Part One
hot scene at the end. I bet that Bella can give Edward good blow jobs. I wish that they can have just one more kid. The way they love each other, I think they can survive with just one more youngster in the house.
Date: 26 Sep 2012 12:36 PM Title: Beach Blanket Bingo Part Two
THere has not been a lot of fucking and getting it on. I love reading about them having sex. It's so nice. Make it kinky like when they have anal sex. I can just imagine both of them having sex. They are such a hot couple. Can u tone it down on all the fights they have. I don't think the real Edward and Bella fought that much. It is kind of scary sometimes.
Date: 22 Sep 2012 9:27 AM Title: The Twilight Zone
about time one of their kids catch them having sex. Are they going to go back to fucking like rabbits before all the drama? I find it so hot reading about e&b having sex or fucking like wild animals. Fucking awesome!
Date: 20 Sep 2012 6:34 PM Title: Part 3 Announcement
So happy that you are continuing this story! I was getting disappointed that this was finally ending - and now it's not! I've really liked how you've had Edward and Bella evolve over time and how their kids have such great, developed personalities! Off to read part III. Thanks for sharing your great story!
Date: 18 Sep 2012 3:57 AM Title: Come Hell or High Water: Part Two
You know what the wine thing in Europe they allow children to drink wine with their meals & have younger drinking ages.
The United states has always had a love/hate relationship when it comes to alocholic beverages.
Personally my mother is an alocholic so I have not let my children have anything until they are of legal age.
Like anything when it comes to raising your kids as long as you are not abusing, endangering, neglicting your children you should raise them how you want to raise them.
Date: 14 Sep 2012 12:34 AM Title: Chapel Bells
Aww. What a cute ending.
Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful story with us. And I can't wait to get to read the third installment!! Excited to read about the kids. How many chapters are there going to be in total for that one? Same length as these two?
Date: 10 Sep 2012 11:26 PM Title: Craft of the Father
Whoa.. Mama bear. I understand she's upset, but Bella's not like that.. I'm interested in seeing if he gives her those ten minutes.. Is she gonna be strong enough to torture someone?
Sad chapter. Made me cry.. :(
Thanks for sharing. I love this story. The ups and downs, and everything inbetween.. :)
Date: 10 Sep 2012 7:19 PM Title: Thanksgiving
Yeah, you can definitely tell Edward isn't interested. He's as you said, "jeolous of anyone who comes between them". In one chapter, he even mentioned that he loved Bella more than his own kids!!
He also hates it when Alex is over. I think her not talking to him and "being rude" is just an excuse he uses to reason with his not liking her.. he doesn't like "rude" people. :P
Another great chapter. I'm curious though.. What's going on with the whole Sonny/Alex thing... I mean, I'm not a boy, so I can't understand, but is this just a little crush. You've mentioned it several times, so I'm just curious as to where that's going.. She's only 12 years older than him.. :P
Thanks for sharing! I love this story. Also, you said that the third installment for this series is going to be short.. What do you mean by that exactly? I mean, these last two were over 40 chapters... And the third one is in the teens.. I haven't started it yet, but is it almost finished? How long is it going to be exactly? I'd like it to be close to finished before I start it. :)
Date: 05 Sep 2012 11:49 PM Title: Too Many Movies
Holy shit! It's Esme isn't it? Who hired that guy to kill Candance and Carlisle? Wow.. When that happened, I thought about this, but it was more of a "Lol.. What if Esme were to set that up" kinda thing.. That's funny. I guess she really just wanted a son after all, huh? :P
Great story. Thanks for sharing. :)
Date: 05 Sep 2012 10:08 PM Title: Two Weeks Later
Oh gosh. This chapter.. I cried. Really hard. I had to stop reading for a minute or two. I don't exactly know where you're going with this, but I'll trust when you say that everything you write is for a reason. Considering I'm reading this SEQUEL, and still love it, that's gotta mean something good. :)
Thanks for sharing.
Date: 05 Sep 2012 9:28 PM Title: Bitter Fruit Part Two
I'm sorry to have to ask this question, but it's been a while since I read Quiet Storm, and while I should have read that before I started this, I was so excited I just HAD to start this one. Therefore, I'm a little confused on some things and was hoping you could help me out. Was Bella pregnant before she met Edward, and had a miscarriage. Edward mentions that that last miscarriage they had after Damion was born was HIS second and HER third. His because they also had one before Sonny was born, in their first year of marriage.
Also, how old are they? Edward was 25 and Bella was 23 at the start of QS, so.. Two years passed in that book (right?) and then the epilogue was 9 years after that, and this is 2 years after THAT. So, what... Edward is (25+2+9+2) 38 years old? And Bella 36? Is that it. Sorry but I just like to get people's ages right, when I try to picture them and the story in my head.
Great story. I love this. Thank you so much for sharing with us! I can't wait to finish this and start the third one. Their kids, all grown up. Aww! :)
Date: 04 Sep 2012 11:57 PM Title: Thou Mayest
Lol.. It seems that only Edward and Bella will be the last couple standing. What happened to these guys? They have so many kids. And it's weird that Carlisle would do this. I still think of the book Carlisle.. Where he's all loving and doting to Esme. It's weird to read about them like this. :P
Another great chapter though. I love this. Your characters are awesome! :)
Also, I saw that you wrote a third installment to this.. That sounds interesting. I can't wait to read that as well! :)
By the way.. Can you please tell me what year this takes place in? I'm thinking way into the future. (iPhone 6? :P) So.. Did the first book take place during present time, or maybe a couple years ago... then this is 12 years into the future? Is that how it is.. So almost 2020? And what, the third takes place in the 2030s?
Thanks for sharing. :)
Date: 04 Sep 2012 8:52 PM Title: Indemnity
So.. Candace is the 16 year old girl Carlisle slept with, before Quiet Storm even began? So, 13 years later... She's what? 29 years old now? And she had Anthony at 26? Then how come [I think it was Aro who] said that she had a baby at such a young age...? That kinda confused me a bit..
Aww. Poor Bella. Carlisle really messed things up, huh? I hope he tells Esme. And soon! I remember you said in an AN or something that he isn't done messing up yet, and now I'm wondering if this is what you meant, or if he's gonna do more stupid shit. Also, I cheated and looked on your blog at things for this story. I saw the collage of pictures you put of the people, and you put one of Carlisle and a 'Alexandra' all by themselves. And Esme wasn't in the one of all the characters. Makes me sad.. Is she gonna kill herself or something? And Carlisle meets someone he actually loves?
Anyways.. Great story. Just wanted to say that really. I haven't left a review here before, but I'll try to from now on. Your stories are great and you deserve to know it!Thanks for sharing your wonderful words!!! Your Edward/Bella from this Storm series are one of my all-time favourites. They are amazing together! :) :)
Date: 31 Aug 2012 10:49 AM Title: A Tight Fit
I realized that after starting the 3rd sequel that fir some reason i never read the 2nd one. So I'm doing that now. I have to say you are doing an amazing job. I may not agree with everything that Bella and Edward do but I love the story and you should always write the way you want. If someone doesn't like it they don't have to read it. Now that I've gotten that off my chest on to the next chapter.
Date: 28 Aug 2012 8:40 PM Title: Too Many Movies
Okay. I've been reading this straight through the past couple of days. And can I say that I absolutely LOVE this! I had a mini heart attack when Edward Sai he killed aro. I wanted to cry. And now with esme!!! All I can say is that bitch!!!
Well I love your stories. All of them. And ignore those haters! You're wonderful!
Date: 28 Aug 2012 1:16 AM Title: Eclipse
You are a great writer, very exciting and powerful story. Please do not let others bring you down. Stay strong and stay with it. I have not had 2 stories keep my interest like this ever b4! I was to busy reading to post a BIG THANK YOU. Please do not sugar coat it into boring PLEASE