Date: 12 Jun 2012 5:52 AM Title: Day-to-Day
the dick!!!! and of course i'm talking of carlisle!! the selfish, manipulative prick!!! he already ruined esme (and every other woman he said he loved btw!) and now he did that to alex??? he trapped her and betrayed her?? someone has to do something about it... he can't go on and on making people do whatever he wants! she should kill him while he sleeps, just to show him how much she's happy of being treated like a puppet!!! and i'm totally sure he doesn't even know what love is because when you really love someone, you only want them happy and if it means letting go, you have to do it!! and you don't trick them into marry you!! that's abuse and selfishness!!! i said it before and i'm going to say it until the end... he doesn't deserve alex, he doesn't deserve anything!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 12 Jun 2012 12:27 AM Title: Day-to-Day
i like that edward and sonnys relationship has changed i feel bad for what he went through but im glad theres a change with them together? idk. is it weird i hope that carlisle does right this time? not messing around and stuff... though i dont know if itll happen... i still hope
Date: 11 Jun 2012 10:37 PM Title: Day-to-Day
all is well with the world now.
Luke I don't trust.
DJ is a retired cop. He has lots of time and he has a reason, brother and son. So that combination is bad. I think if I was Bella I would just keep him at arms length. She will have a hard time knowing what his son did and being all sweet with the family that is morning and worrying about where he is.
I agree Carlisle and marriage, want a bad mixture.
Alex is being pushed into marriage by her parents. So when is she going to go ape!
Aro is the most level headed.
Date: 11 Jun 2012 8:53 PM Title: Day-to-Day
Thanks for updating early Lexi. Loved the chapter. Yeah, I don't know what to think of Alex and Carlise. I mean, she is being forced to have the baby and get married. Its what he wants, but I don't think she wants that.
Curious to read the outcome of all that.
Date: 11 Jun 2012 8:33 PM Title: Day-to-Day
*sniff* I...I can't...almost over? Wha? *sniff*
That last shit was hot by the way...love me some Takeward. I could totally see the smirk he had at the end too. Love your writing!
Please tell me you plan on writing more stories? Not this particular one of course, because it's been written. But, continue to blow us away with your mad storytelling skills. Your public demands it! :)
Date: 11 Jun 2012 8:20 PM Title: Day-to-Day
Haha! Such a big ego. I love these two and going to miss them so.
Carlisle is getting marry, go luck Alex, you are going to need it. Now it just Aro, he needs a girl pronto. It feels right but you can't help to be a bit sad about the ending of the story. I grown to love these characters.
Date: 11 Jun 2012 8:14 PM Title: Long Drive
What should happen to Alice's so-called father? I like Edward's idea of shoving a gun up his ass.....maybe a cock or 2 first? Cut off his balls? I amaze myself with these thoughts....I really love Edward and Bella, with all their strengths and faults....even if he is a murderous, dangerous man. They're why I keep coming back to this story.
Date: 11 Jun 2012 6:09 PM Title: Day-to-Day
First let me say that I did not see what "Carlilse revealed" to Edward, coming!!!! He set Alex up to get pregnant... Holy shit Carlilse!!! Oh, and I don't trust Luke(Jersey) or the Albannian's either... I love Sonny and that wonderful bonding both Father and son had.... rock that kitty!!!!! TY SLC.....
Date: 11 Jun 2012 4:30 PM Title: Day-to-Day
"I-I'll make you what-whatever. Just don't stop." - my thoughts to you Lexi, please don't ever stop writing WTS. We lov eit too much. Loved the chapter, Carlise new in-laws gonna be a trip, Loved the Sonny and Edward close moment, and Dames too even if was Edward just carrying him to bed. I give it a ten !!!!!!
Date: 11 Jun 2012 3:58 PM Title: Day-to-Day
I love reading this story and all the characters. That Sonny & Dad scene was so adorable and sweet that their relationship is good again. I think Edward is a great Dad to his kids.
Not sure what to think of Carlisle, I really want him to be the guy he wants to be but with his past & everyone's attitude about him it's kinda heard to have a lot of faith that he'll stay true to his current course with Alex.
Im kinda sad that this is coming to an end. I could just keep reading & hear about the kids growing up. I've felt that way about your other stories and the non main characters.
Thanks for writing;-))
Date: 11 Jun 2012 3:42 PM Title: Day-to-Day
Alex still irks the shit out of me lol Carlisle and his delusional ass too...This shit it bound to blow up in their faces, I could just picture Alex getting an abortion anyways just to run from it. I'm tired of them already lol it's like the entire last half of WTS was about Alex -_-
Anyhooo unto the good stuff lol I'm kind of sad it's coming to an end, but it seems like the right time I guess, I hope you have a new fic you're working on, or ideas, I love you're stories and characters, except Alex, lol.
Date: 11 Jun 2012 1:41 AM Title: Logic
I reread this. I read it on FFtion. I swear I am starting to get old. Well I am glad they are back together together. How stupid it matters so much to me. to worry about it. I know you don't want to write this forever. WHY I don't know. Edward is something else, but his love for his wife and hers for him makes me feel all is okay if they are okay.
you wrote these last 3 chapters and they were hard I am sure and great. Bella is a mother that was living the nightmare we mothers all worry about secretly. The loss of a child. She was so frightened. She had to heap on to that they wanted to kill her husband as well. I get her wanting to have at them first. I am not sure I could kill anyone but in the act of defending myself or my family you betcha I could. Later maybe not. I do understand her feelings. MAMABEAR is in the HOUSE!... Love ya Lexy.
Date: 11 Jun 2012 1:20 AM Title: NuMb
whew! the bodies are piling up....I am glad that Esme is alive althought I don't know why....I must be one crazy MF to because I can so see the attraction of Edward. He's both a murderous psychopath and a loving family man. An interesting juxtaposition....I have ALWAYS been attracted to bad boys and this just takes it a whole giant step farther!
Date: 11 Jun 2012 12:49 AM Title: Breaking Dawn
wow! the 2 kills were so gruesome! cutting out his tongue and gouging out his eyeball! Fuck. I winced and felt slightly nauseous but couldn't stop reading! Telling Bella about it during sex....just no words! You were right! This chapter was the most graphic ever. JFC Lexi! You outdid yourself this time. These are not nice characters but they are well written and stand out off the page real. I'm in 'til the end...
Date: 10 Jun 2012 1:27 AM Title: The Twilight Zone
Almost a fluffy chapter here! LOL! It's good that they talked about the real reason Edward avoided sex. I hope they're past it now. They don't see as much themselves when they're not always hot for each other. I guess couples in their 30's have those problems when they've been together so long but didn't think our E and B would. Silly me.
Date: 10 Jun 2012 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 22
I don't know what to say anymore. I don't know why readers give you such a hard time. You tell a fascinating and expertly written story. It's just entertainment. When I read this chapter, I knew Edward wasn't going for any lap dances or blowjobs because I always remember that they don't cheat on each other. You wouldn't say that if you didn't write it that way. Jesus fucking Christ! Grow the fuck up, people. I love this story!
Date: 10 Jun 2012 12:03 AM Title: Blondie
This is a fine mess. Esme has to go? I'm glad Edward left it up to Carlisle. It was an amusing moment to think of Edward taking care of his 2 sick buddies, one brother and one right hand man.....Is this story complete yet? How can I tell on this site? I tried to add it to my Favorites but couldn't get that to work. Damn...
Date: 09 Jun 2012 11:28 PM Title: Too Many Movies
So Esme hired someone to kill Candace? Wow that shit is so fucking sad. Edward will have to take her out, won't he, if that's true. That remark you made a few chapters back in your A/N about Edward loving Bella but she is still just a possession.....I have been thinking about that now for a while.....that kind of throws me....
Date: 09 Jun 2012 4:47 PM Title: A Tight Fit
Are you kidding me?? What Bella did was so in character for her! It was also quite hilarious and hot! She has always needed Edwards cock, so why would now be any different! Relax, Lexi, we who truly love your work KNOW that you are a creatively gifted writer. At lease I do. These stories are a very effective form of escapism for me. I love it when I am transported away from RL and can live vicariously through these characters. My favorites are always the baddest, most vile, disgusting ones. LOL! That's just me and I can find redeeming qualities about each and every one....Thank you for sticking with US!
Date: 09 Jun 2012 3:57 PM Title: Eclipse
I love this fucking great epic story. Real flawed people who love each other! Please don't stop writing! You have a gift. Fuck those who don't get it!
Please finish Have Mercy Baby and Made In The Shades!! I love them too, in their own way. But these 2, Quiet Storm and Weather The Storm, are 2 of the greatest tales ever! You had me on this Bella and Edward from chapter 1 of QS! I have recommended them to everyone I know who reads fan fic!!!
I'm so glad Aro got his memory back. The exchange between Edward and Aro in this chapter was intimate and touching. I do hope it stays in the past for both of them!!
Date: 09 Jun 2012 2:22 AM Title: Two Weeks Later
The most intense chapter yet! I'm so glad he didn't kill Aro. For the part of this chapter that I thought he did, until you set that right, I was devistated. Edward is so scary the few times I have seen him get like that. Bella knows him so well that she let him rape her, then let it go. What a love they have! Twisted and sick and strong as hell! I wish I could love, and be loved by, someone like that. I would certainly give up all for it!
Date: 08 Jun 2012 11:03 PM Title: Chasing Regret
This is some serious shit. Edward is fucking scary when he it working but a different, completely different, man with his family. I hope Aro makes it. I like him a lot. Would he really take out Edward if need be? I will be reading this all weekend as I am not going on FFN again until Monday to honor the boycott.
Date: 07 Jun 2012 7:24 PM Title: Thou Mayest
Yeah, I'm definitely still here. All this interaction between couples feels like real life. Things like this happen all the time. Real interests me. This is all good shit and I love it! Thanks for writing real characters with real problems...
Date: 07 Jun 2012 6:26 PM Title: Misery Loves Company
What a fucking great chapter what with the cussing out, the baby cussing, the women calling out each other, Edward smiling through it all and then hot as hell fuck in the bathroom! Whew! I loved it all and laughed out loud to myself all the way through! Fuck!!
Date: 07 Jun 2012 3:36 PM Title: Logic
Oh how I really needed Bebella from Edward. Yes, I had no doubt they would be OK!! But just to hear him call her that makes all the bad go away!
Yea, he let Lou off light...but whatever. He'll screw up somewhere else and just disappear.
Loves you hard <3
Date: 06 Jun 2012 9:27 PM Title: This Time Around
I love all your fics. I read Made in the Shades up to chapter 18 and you haven't updated in a while. I know you said it's almost done so I wait for the rest of it. Meanwhile I read you and CaraNo, like 3 or 4 stories each every chance I get.
What will happen to Anthony if Carlisle and/or Candace get fucked up? Sometimes I forget just how much violence is a part of all their lives because I get caught up in the kids or the sex. There are just so many facets to your tales. I love it all. I live for a good story!!
Date: 06 Jun 2012 8:21 PM Title: Wag the Dog
wow that was some chapter. Bella and Edward both get crazy jealous. I don't blame her a bit! If that was me, I know I would react the same. Hell I chased my ex around our back yard with a knife when I came home from work one day thinking I was miscarrying and found him fucking his drummer in our garage. I get it! I love these 2. There's nothing each wouldn't do for, or even to, the other in the name of love.....
Date: 06 Jun 2012 8:10 PM Title: In Like Flynn
Just wanted to congratulate you for winning The Eclipse award for both "Quiet Storm" and "Weather the Storm". I absolutely adore Quiet Storm--I have read so many times I think I can do dialogue. I have not read Weather the Storm all the way through--I tend to read backwards--LOL. I have read probably the first two chapters of Weather the Storm and the last four chapters posted. Anyways, when the weather is crap, I sit down and read "Weather the Storm" from beginning to end.
Again, I have read all of your Fictions and am absolutely amazed by your writing. I am looking forward to reading the new fiction that you mentioned a few chapters back in "Weather the Storm" in the A/N.
Thank you for reading and reviewing. I'm so glad you've enjoyed Quiet Storm, although I sincerely hope you read Weather the Storm entirely. You're missing out on A LOT. LOL.
Date: 06 Jun 2012 7:09 PM Title: Knee-Jerk Reaction
you always keep it real here. he would never cheat, you told us so, but he's human and he thinks about doing stuff that ultimately he never does. is she really insecure about his fidelity after all these years? i can see where she might have her moments...i love this wicked and crooked tale.
Date: 06 Jun 2012 10:43 AM Title: Logic
Bella knows that everything that goes on is Edward's business. Alex is pretty stupid not to know that fact and should not have come to his house if she didn't want to follow the rules. Edward should tell Carlisle. It is the right thing to do. Murdering an innocent child is never the right thing to do. Alex is an adult who knows what causes a baby. She is a nurse and can support a child. She wanted sex, so she gets a baby. She needs to grow up and face the facts. She is part of the family and she better start following the rules. She needs to stop acting like an idiot. Edward has to many idiots to deal with on a daily basis. Edward needs to tell Bella that it is time for her to clue Alex in on the reality of the family. She needs to marry Carlisle have the child and stop playing around. It is time for Bella to show Edward how much she supports him by her actions. She needs to help him fix this mess with Alex and Carlisle. Bella needs to put the family first before her friendship with Alex.
Date: 06 Jun 2012 5:03 AM Title: Eclipse
Hey, another incredible chapter! I'm from a huge Italian family. Your story hits the mark in so many ways. Family ties, friendships, power struggles and the amazing love story though it all. I think Bella & Edward are closer than ever, given all of the trials and tribulations they've suffered and pulled each other through. So very good.
I've followed from Capt 1 of Quiet Storm, hanging on every word then, and since. I was so thrilled you planned this sequel as your characters had so much more to experience, and its more than lived up to the fantastic start in Quiet Storm. Remember, you have far more people out here who love your story and appreciate the incredible amount of work and creative skill it takes to write such a strong and successful result!
Date: 05 Jun 2012 11:42 PM Title: Come Hell or High Water: Part Two
I'm not a PC mom, never was. My youngest son's dad gave him alcohol when he was about 5 and I lost it. I always wanted my kids to smoke pot with me when they were teens but they never did. They waited until they were with friends to do anything like that. Was I a good parent? Generally speaking I think so. What Edward did was poor judgement but in the context of what was happening, and who he is, understandable. Love the story.
Date: 05 Jun 2012 11:20 PM Title: Come Hell or High Water Part One
So is Edward going to tell Sonny the truth, or some part of the truth, about who he really is? This is heavy stuff. Kids finding out stuff at such an early age. I hope Edward doesn't hurt Roger. That he is related must mean something...I love all of your work that I have read so far, Lexi.
Date: 05 Jun 2012 10:42 PM Title: Conformity
I love this family. From the first chapter of Quiet Fire, I was hooked. I wanted to wait to read this until it was finished but had to start. Love Edward, Bella, and the kids! Sonny and Kate kissing at age 11! Yikes!
Date: 05 Jun 2012 7:52 PM Title: Logic
I'm so loving ur writing. I have read many hours instead of working :). It's killing me to wait for this to be finished. I usually don't read wip but this one has me hooked. I can't wait until next week! Keep up the good work! Off to start INI.
Date: 05 Jun 2012 2:51 PM Title: Logic
Great chapter. I really don't have such a bias about abortion but for someone to get one when one of the parents does have ethical or religious conflict with it to go forward with that just seems so wrong. I can't wait to read what you write.
I loved Edward's comment, "if she's going to act like a kid she gets treated like one."
Thanks for writing, can't wait to read more;-))
Date: 05 Jun 2012 2:14 PM Title: Logic
Lexi, I love you and your ff but WHAT THE HELL? No, no, no, that was horrible! Baby, what are you doing? Where are your balls? Come on... With all respect to your talent this chapter was the worst of all that you have been written until today... Please, DO NOT pull this on forever if you have no idea what to do with them... Don't screw up almost 3000 pages of fantastic story with terrible end. I hope you understand what I mean. Hugs :)) Love ya :))
Wow . . . Thanks for reading? I actually loved that chapter. Things WILL be slowing down since the end of the story is VERY near. All I can say is, thank you for reading, reviewing, but if you do not like where the story is going maybe you should stop reading? Don't waste your time, or feel obligated to continue reading.
Date: 05 Jun 2012 12:38 PM Title: Logic
Awww...they finally made up! Now we need "makeup sex"!! LOL
I don't want this story to ever, ever, EVER END!!!!! Just sayin...
But like all good things...blah, blah, blah
I just love these two and the journey has been awesome!! Thanks for all the hard work and time that you have put into Quiet Storm and this one! I really appreciate it and have enjoyed it immensely!!
So, I am back to reading & reviewing over here because of the bullshit that FF is pulling...in case you didn't notice!
I first started reading & reviewing your stories here, and then because FF had seemed to stop with it's fucking nonsense I had gone back over there to read & review, but alas the bullshit never ends! I am just extremely happy that you post here too!
Great update as always!
Date: 05 Jun 2012 10:39 AM Title: Logic
I will be so sad when this ends. I love, love, love this story. The characters are great, and I love a good mafia story. I am reading some other "crime family" stories that were inspired by you. You are a fantastic author who has inspired fantastic authors...it's good to be you! Thank you for the wonderful story.
Date: 05 Jun 2012 6:42 AM Title: Logic
Thank you so much for the early update. Loved this chapter and breathed a sigh of relief that Bella & Edward are working it all out - ahhh. Love this story and I wish it could go on forever, but I know that's not possible. I need to come to terms with the fact that you have a life outside of these characters :)
Date: 05 Jun 2012 2:50 AM Title: Logic
"Go watch TV with Sonny." I pointed down the hall.
"Edward!" Bella stomped her foot.
I didn't say a word until Alex left the kitchen. Then I advanced toward my wife. "If she wants to act like a kid, I'll treat her like one."
Date: 05 Jun 2012 2:26 AM Title: Logic
My daughter repeated my bad words when she was little but I before she went to school which was at age 3 she knew that some words I said where bad and not to be said outside our house. She understood and I never got a call from a teacher. I'm very lucky. Enough about me. Edward is so going to tell Carlisle about Alex being pregnant cuz he is such a gossip.
Date: 05 Jun 2012 2:11 AM Title: Logic
Love love LOVE THIS! My must read fic and now I am reading this while drying my hair before work so I can finish it!!
Read on here so I don't miss anything and I love how Edward is trying SO hard to be all things to all men, husband, father, skip, brother.
You always manage to put something amazing outta your hat.
LOVE IT| & YOU!