[Report This]Date: 05 Oct 2012 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 38
Something tells me we're heading for some fucked up angst?
Date: 06 Aug 2012 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 38
Awesome. Looking forward to more.
Date: 10 Jun 2012 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 6
I just started reading this and really like the concept. Quick question though, did the americanized adaptation Chole, have any way of influncing this story?
Date: 25 Apr 2012 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 38
Good Chapter.....
Date: 24 Apr 2012 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 38
That was really sweet, and I totally agree with your reason for ending where you did.
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2012 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 38
the family is dealing with alot
i am still waiting for the other shoe to drop
how cool carlisle will walk bella down the aisle
edward and bella are so in love and ready to start their lives
the family has alot to be happy about
alot of changes
love it
Date: 24 Apr 2012 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 38
don't need the details. Just the idea.
Date: 24 Apr 2012 11:46 AM Title: Chapter 38
looking forward to more
Date: 03 Apr 2012 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 37
Thanks for the update! You sure packed a lot of questions in this chapter! I'm sure the guy following Bella ties to Tanya somehow. As far as the family stuff, you have me stumped here!
Date: 31 Mar 2012 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 37
Please update soon
Date: 31 Mar 2012 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 37
tanya or Her family are after Bella..
Ed will ask her to marry him next.
[Report This]Date: 31 Mar 2012 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 37
i am thinking he proposes
i feel so bad the family is dealing with losing the head of their family
wow a tough one
love it
Date: 30 Mar 2012 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 37
Good Chapter......
[Report This]Date: 30 Mar 2012 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 37
Did not see that coming at all. My mouth is still on the floor.
[Report This]Date: 30 Mar 2012 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 37
omg this is crazy!!!!! i love it hope everything will be ok!!!! love it!!!!!
Date: 30 Mar 2012 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 37
looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 30 Mar 2012 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 37
Pretty scary that someone is following Bella. Love that he is gonna ask her the "will you marry me" question. Can't wait for the next update.
Date: 13 Mar 2012 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 36 Extra love scene
That was delicious too! I cannot say which one I liked better, but I am grateful to have read both! Thanks!!!
Date: 13 Mar 2012 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 35
So hottttt! I love that they get to have crazy sexy times now! I am with Edward - let's see what's in the box!!!! Who Is that creeping around on her?! They deserve happy! I hope whoever it is gets outed soon!
Date: 10 Mar 2012 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 36 Extra love scene
:)
Date: 10 Mar 2012 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 35
that was sooo hot :)
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2012 10:59 AM Title: Chapter 34
awe the date sounds amazing!!!
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2012 10:53 AM Title: Chapter 32
amazing as always!!!
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2012 10:51 AM Title: Chapter 31
i love it!!! amaing as always!!
Date: 10 Mar 2012 10:02 AM Title: Chapter 35
Excellent chapter. I have so many gueses who could be following her. I want more clues :) Can't wait for the next update.
Date: 10 Mar 2012 9:51 AM Title: Chapter 36 Extra love scene
totally hot
Date: 10 Mar 2012 9:32 AM Title: Chapter 35
looking forward to the next hcapter
Date: 10 Mar 2012 9:18 AM Title: Chapter 35
wow!!! i'm so intrigued its unbelieveable all along ive been guessing the idenity of the mystery person.. You have me so hooked. I mean such phenominal writing...iuntil next update
Date: 10 Mar 2012 8:57 AM Title: Chapter 35
That was a fab scene!! i cant wait to figure out the other pov
Date: 10 Mar 2012 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 35
Wonder who's following? Is it her ex Jacob?? Or maybe Carlise? He's always freaky.... Looking forward to the next update.
Date: 10 Mar 2012 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 1
Very nice!I think its her dad?
Date: 10 Mar 2012 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 35
I like the bit of humor in this love scene. The very last line was perfect. I think the person following her could be her father. But then the reviewer who said it may be Jacob could be right too. Although, I'm not sure Jacob would be all that happy that it was Edward that protects her.
Maria
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2012 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 35
well my first instinct is to say that jake is the one in the shadows but then i was thinking maybe her dad.
i am just taking a guess
my goodness this too are the engergizer bunnies on steroids, wow
love it
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2012 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 35
Who knew what kind of kinny was inside both Bella and Edward. That was hot. It is always nice to bring toys into the bedroom. All you need is an open mind.
The anonymous point of view has to be Jacob, but if he loves her so much, why did he hurt her so badly? Is he a member of the mob, too? So many questions and answers litlle by little every chapter.
Date: 03 Mar 2012 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 34
What a totally romantic and perfect evening! I guess it was not too soon to ask her to move in! Good for her for accepting that she deserves to be loved!
Date: 02 Mar 2012 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 34
sweet date love it
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2012 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 33
ahhhhhh i love it!!!!!!!! amazing!! cant wait for the next!!!
[Report This]Date: 01 Mar 2012 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 34
going to the next step
the night was perfect
love it
[Report This]Date: 01 Mar 2012 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 34
So sweet. The calm before the storm.
Date: 01 Mar 2012 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 34
looking forward to the next chatper
Date: 25 Feb 2012 9:14 AM Title: Chapter 33
wow we have come along way here. I keep thinking Tanya is not gone just standing around waiting to make someone miserable again.
Author's Response:
you may be on to somethign there....
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2012 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 33
Everyone is happy so that means that the shit is about to hit the fan. The shit I talk about is Tanya's families revenge on the Cullens. Especially, Tanya wanting to take care of Bella and Edward personally.
I hope that the outsider who has been technically stalking Bella will play a part in keeping her safe. He has people watching her 24/7. They should be able to know exactly when Bella is in trouble and do something to help.
Author's Response:
There is so much planned, we just need to hope it all works out...
Date: 24 Feb 2012 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 33
loved the chapter looking forward to more
Date: 24 Feb 2012 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 33
Hooray! They have surpassed several major hurdles. I was surprised by Bella's decision to continue taking thing slow, but I agree with it! They have not been able to explore a life together, and they need to.
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2012 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 33
wow i am glad they decided on honesty
thank god he is rid of the skank. but we all know she is going to be a pain. he may have divorced her but he is not rid of her. i sure hope they are careful where she is concerned.
thrilled dinner went well
Date: 24 Feb 2012 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 33
loved this chapter
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2012 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 32
I personally loved it!!!! Very good
Date: 16 Feb 2012 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 32
Well the story is progressing, trust me in FF that is rare. I hate the going backwards business. In some situations is is warranted, but just to prolong a story it makes it nerve wracking.
Next time..........she is not Tanya. Must be his family.
[Report This]Date: 15 Feb 2012 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 32
Wow, I think their first time was just what they both needed. very sensual, loving. What they did by waiting, being friends, confidants, before being lovers created a strong base for their relationship. I hope Tanya and her family can't destroy it.
Date: 15 Feb 2012 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 32
That was a beautiful first time and perfect for them. They have waited so long! They both needed that perfect honesty and they bared all.
[Report This]Date: 15 Feb 2012 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 32
That was so beautiful. It made me cry right along with the characters.
Bravo!
Author's Response:
I am so glad the emotion came through the way i wanted it. thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 08 Feb 2012 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 31
These thoughts are completely natural! I do hope she finds the strength to face her fears and ask Edward the hard questions. Esme was fantastic, and by sending her over Edward showed her how much he loves her.
[Report This]Date: 07 Feb 2012 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 31
I just hope they can withstand what Tanys and her family throw at them. :)
[Report This]Date: 07 Feb 2012 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 31
i am thrilled that edward sent esme over. that was greatly needed seems bella got a few answers
they just need to talk and i pray edward is honest with her. bella is not stupid and for their relationship to b strong they need truth. they have it now i hope they don't go backwards. love it
[Report This]Date: 06 Feb 2012 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 31
great chapter
[Report This]Date: 06 Feb 2012 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 31
I can't wait to see what happens next. I do want Tanya divorced, and I want her to get hers. Not let her hurt Edward or Bella. I hope that the mystery man stalking Bella will handle that situation or let them know what may be going down.
Date: 06 Feb 2012 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 31
looking forward to the next chatper
Date: 30 Jan 2012 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 30
hmmm wonder what happen there
Date: 30 Jan 2012 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 30
I will be so happy when they string Tanya up! I hope Bella gets a hand in doing it. This chapter created more questions! I am looking forward to a few answers.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2012 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 30
tanya is crazy......i love it!!!!!! i really hope bella comes to her senses!!! of course they're soooo good together!!!!
Date: 29 Jan 2012 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 30
Now that little burb up there has us all going.. evil you
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2012 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 30
they have come so far. things are going so well
divorce is on the rise i am getting excited. but they should know i hope that it won't be that easy to get rid of tanya
my oh my so much more to look at coming there way
the next chapter scares the hell out of me and what's to come
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2012 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 30
what a vicous Viper! Tanya I mean
Date: 29 Jan 2012 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 30
looking forward to the next one
Date: 29 Jan 2012 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 30
This is great please update soon I cannot wait to see what happens next
Date: 28 Jan 2012 9:15 AM Title: Chapter 29
I am so glad the truth is finally out, but what is Tanya playing at now?! It is straight up time for someone to level her!!!
Date: 26 Jan 2012 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 29
has a beautiful daughter still wants revenage..sad
Date: 26 Jan 2012 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 29
Well the climax on Tanya and said baby.
[Report This]Date: 26 Jan 2012 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 29
omg.............i love it!!!!! its amazing as alwasy tanya is a luny
Date: 25 Jan 2012 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 29
loved the chapter looking forward to the next one
[Report This]Date: 23 Jan 2012 10:37 AM Title: Chapter 28
ahhh i cant believe this!!!!!!! love it cant wait for the next!!!!
[Report This]Date: 22 Jan 2012 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 28
well i am glad bella and edward keep open communication
they are good together.
tanya man i hope you get what you deserve
i am not sure what has happened. cliff hanger. wow
not sure if the baby didn't make it or you can truly tell the baby is alec's. hmmmm what a way to stump us.
love it
Date: 22 Jan 2012 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 28
Good Chapter.....
Date: 22 Jan 2012 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 28
hmmmm i think tanya plan has back fired?
Date: 22 Jan 2012 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 28
looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 22 Jan 2012 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 28
ugh he has to go in there? DRAMA. He really should NOT be at the hospital. He has not lived with her in how long? Filed for divorce, baby may not be his. Well if this baby is his all hell breaks loose again.
[Report This]Date: 22 Jan 2012 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 28
That sneak peek sounds like Bella might be meeting the Cullens.
I am not sure what to think about Tanya's mother coming out and saying that Edward better go in the room. Is Tanya going to die? Did the baby die? Does the baby even look like him? If the baby is dead or alive, I would still want the DNA test.
Thank you for the update. In your mind, how long will this story wind up being? Just curious. Not ready for it to end yet, ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you for the great review. We find out all the answers to your question in the next chapter. I'm not sure how many more chapters. but i can tell you that i ahve up to chapter 34 written and there are still a few major events coming. so its not ending any time soon.
Date: 22 Jan 2012 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 28
Great cliffy! I can't wait to read what happens next!
Date: 20 Jan 2012 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 27
I suppose he should go to the hospital, just in case the baby is his.
Author's Response:
just in case... We still don't know for sure who the baby daddy is
Date: 20 Jan 2012 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 27
hmmm i think tanya doesn't know whos baby belongs to.... it would be fun if it was neither hahaha
Author's Response:
That would be so funny. thanks for the review.
Date: 20 Jan 2012 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 27
Great chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review.
Date: 20 Jan 2012 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 27
What could Tanya possibly be at that door for?!! She is daft if she thinks she can talk her way out of this! I am glad the teaser says she is going into labor. Bring on the DNA test!
Author's Response:
She is a bit out of her mind isn't she. thanks for the review.
Date: 20 Jan 2012 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 26
I am definitely curious about who would be following Bella! The fact that they know the truth about stupid Tanya is great, but how will they help things out. I am glad she has some protection because Tanya would not hesitate to get Bella removed! I liked Alice, and love that she will not let the baby wear any of her clothes because she knows it is not Edward's!
Date: 20 Jan 2012 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 27
You know this happens in R/L women do this and it is sad. It seems to me when they do this they deserve some jail time for the conflict and strife they cause.. LIES
Author's Response: I agree it is verry very sad.
[Report This]Date: 19 Jan 2012 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 27
wow i had a feeling he found out.
too bad he didn't see tanya's boy toy leaving the house. wow when that goes down look out.
tanya man what a case of worms
i sure hope edward follows through and takes her skanky ass to court
love it
Author's Response:
So glad you liked it.
Date: 19 Jan 2012 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 27
update soon please
Date: 19 Jan 2012 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 27
Good Chapter......