Date: 17 Feb 2014 12:06 AM Title: Date Night
Edward is SO stupid, for even agreeing to anything with Jessica, or any of her other so-called "friends". They're NO better than Bella, or how she done him...in fact, they are probably worse!
I just HOPE that he doesn't do something stupid like sleep with that nasty skank Jessica, or God forbid, fall in love! If he does, then all hope will be lost for him & Bella. :(
Can't wait for more! ;)
Date: 16 Feb 2014 7:16 AM Title: Date Night
I love a very confident Edward and everyone knows he deserves some happiness but it almost sounds as if he is turning into one of those people that his given him the most grief through out his life. I know Bella was wrong and she needed to do some major groveling but Edward seems to have placed all the blame on her. He is making his peace with all the negative that was in his life but he is really coming across as an ass lately.
I'm so invested in this story and have always loved it so I'm gonna keep trusting you to not let him get taken in by Jessica, who is nothing more than a bitch. And to not let him lose the good at heart person that he was.
Is this a HEA for Bella and Edward? Keep up the great work!
Date: 24 Dec 2013 9:17 PM Title: Into The Lions Den
Awesome gift. I love the new confident Edward. Glad to see you back!
THANK YOU SO MUCH!! I really thought that alot of people would have flounced it's been so long since the last update. I love the new confident Edward, this all part of a larger plan.... :-)
Date: 06 May 2013 12:30 AM Title: It's Good To Talk, Isn't It?
THIS IS SUCH AN EMOTIONABLE CHAPTER! I THINK EDWARD NEEDS TO APOLOGISE MORE TO BELLA MORE,HE WAS REALLY HARD ON HER. I WANT THEM TOGETHER BUT EDWARD NEEDS TO SUFFER MORE. ALSO HE NEEDS TO STOP ACTING LIKE TANYA IS A VICTIM TO,SHE IS A SLUTTY BITCHAND HE NEEDS TO GET HER OUT OF HIS LIFE BEFORE BELLA AND HE CAN BEGIN TO REPAIR THEIR RELASHONSHIP. PLZ UPDATE SOON I LOVE YOU!
Date: 07 Apr 2013 7:38 PM Title: White Flag
Glad you're back! I really hope they can find each other again. I hate when Edward feels lost.
Thank you!! I am glad to be back, it's been a while and it's been hard that's for sure.
There are more ups and downs to come from these two.
Date: 11 Feb 2013 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 35
Wow, with everything that has happened it's no wondered he tried to killed himself twice. I know he has to deal with things (well should deal with them, I'm a runner. If I can run from something or pretend it didn't happen I will.) but honestly I think what will help the most is moving away. Starting over somewhere else.
Date: 14 Jan 2013 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 35
Glad you're back. I love this story.
Thank you so much! I had agentle nudge from a friend and reader she told me she missed him. I wanted to have this beta'd but decided I couldn't wait!
thanks for sticking with me x
Date: 11 Oct 2012 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 33
Wow, what a mess. If this was me I think I would want nothing more than to leave town. No matter what he's the laughing stock of the town. Anywhere he goes he runs into someone wants to laugh & rub it in his face. Finish out the year in home school & leave to college somewhere they don't know you.
Thanks for the review and for reading.
This is a mess, and as much as he wants to run he feels like he can't. Not too sure where this will take him but the journey will teach him alot x
Date: 22 Aug 2012 7:47 AM Title: Shattered Dreams
WAT THE CRAP Y IS JACOB AT BELLAS HOUSE THAT LATE AT NIGHT I SWEAR IF THEYRE DATING IM GOING TO KILL SOMONE!!!!!!!!!!!!! THEY BTTR BE JUST FRIENDS OR HELL FRENEMIES I DONT CARE BUT THEY BTTR NOT BE DATING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 16 Aug 2012 4:14 PM Title: Shattered Dreams
OMG, NOOOOOOOO!!!!! I can't be caught up. There has to be more. I think I might go crazy not knowing if my adorkable little Edward is going to be okay.
I just know nothing is going on with Bella and Jake. I have a feeling they bonded over finding Edward. That is something you don't just get over.
I hope you update regularly. It's going to drive me nuts not knowing what happens next.
Date: 16 Aug 2012 2:31 PM Title: A Mothers Love
Thanks for that Esme POV. It was nice to see her reaction to everything. I was really upset with Esme from the beginning of this story for not listening to Edward or even giving him the benefit of the doubt with the Bella situation. It broke my heart to see her so helpless with everything her child was going through. You redeemed her in my eyes with this chapter.
Date: 16 Aug 2012 12:50 PM Title: Puzzle Pieces
Hmm, so how much of Tanya being a bitch was James making her? That's really got me thinking now.
I just want Edward to be happy. As much as it kills me to say this, I feel sorry for Bella. I know her whole world has crumbled and she doesn't have anyone to support her through this crap.
Date: 16 Aug 2012 12:01 PM Title: In & Out Of Conciousness
Okay, I can breathe a sigh of relief. Edward is awake and appears to be fine.
Oh, how I loved Rose ripping into Bella. Yeah, Bella was stupid with how she handled everything at the dance but I think it was good for her to get the ire in her direction for the fall out. I'm wondering if Rose has talked with Tanya and now has a better idea what the truth of EVERYTHING is.
Date: 16 Aug 2012 11:32 AM Title: Regrets & Decisions
I'm in tears for Edward. I was afraid that all of this would end this way. It breaks my heart to see him go from being so happy and in love to feel that there was no other way out.
Thank F*CK I don't have to wait for an update!
Date: 16 Aug 2012 11:07 AM Title: Chasing Cars
*sigh* You just had to crush that little inkling of like and hope I had for Tanya, didn't you? I should've realized something was up when she insisted on the diner in town.
I just wonder where Edward has left to go from here.
Date: 16 Aug 2012 10:51 AM Title: Chapter 20
My biggest question is why didn't Bella embrace her relationship with Edward when Jessica revealed it. Wasn't that what she initially wanted? I really hope Bella gives us a good explanation.
I have a feeling both B&E are having a bit of miscommunication. It seems like they both want to be public with their relationship but they think the other person does not want it. Almost like they are ashamed of being together.
Date: 16 Aug 2012 10:39 AM Title: Chapter 19
Yeah, I knew their secret relationship would come back to bite Edward in the arse. I just can't figure out what is the real Bella. Is the secret Bella with Edward the real girl or is the girl on stage saying it was all a bet with James the real girl? You've done a good job keeping me wondering.
Was that why Tanya was calling Edward? If this was a bet then she could have figured it out. You've really got me questioning what is real and what is not. Great job with that :)
Date: 16 Aug 2012 9:34 AM Title: Chapter 14
Awe, I love Em even more for jumping in and beating the crap out of James.
I don't trust Tanya. I'm not quite sure if she was screwing around on Edward. I can't quite figure it out.
I love seeing him and Bella slowly get closer. Wonder if anyone else other than Tanya noticed them together.
Date: 16 Aug 2012 9:20 AM Title: Chapter 13
I don't even know where to go with what I'm thinking/feeling about Edward right now. I get that he's confused because he has these feelings for Tanya that never mattered before now and has stronger feelings for Bella. I just hate that he did that to both Bella and Tanya. I wonder if Tanya was just giving him the run around about James. I just have this sick feeling that last little interlude with Tanya could come back to bite him in the arse in multiple ways.
You have done a great job getting me to love and hate this characters :)
Date: 16 Aug 2012 9:05 AM Title: First Time
I'm so relieved he had called Bella and not Tanya. I couldn't see him going to her with the conflicted feelings he's beein having for Bella and the fact that he felt guilty for their last encounter.
Bella is quite the interesting character. I love how she gets by in her crowd by not correcting their assumptions.
Edward's little jealous streak about Tanya was quite interesting. If he hadn't had his encouters with Bella and had already been falling for her I would say that jealousy might have pushed him to go for a commitment with Tanya.
LOL, I love that the Chief interrupted their afterglow. Fun times :)
Date: 16 Aug 2012 8:10 AM Title: Decisions, Decisions
It seems Bella might be as confused about what is happening between her and Edward as he is.
Ruh roh. It seems like Tanya is falling for our adorkable little Eddie. That cannot end well at all.
Yay for Em! He's awesome :)
Date: 16 Aug 2012 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Dinner Dates & Discussions
Holy hell. Bella can be quite the evil bitch can't she? I would love to know what is going through Bella's head. She has me so confused. Seeing how she treats Edward this could work one of two ways. Either she is truly attracted to him and is trying to find a way to act on it. Or she is setting him up for the biggest ridicule he could ever face. I'm going to go with the attraction bit seeing how the first chapter went.
Date: 16 Aug 2012 1:32 AM Title: Mount Esme
Oh my damn! I did not see that coming from Momma Es. The thing I hate about all of this is that no one is listening to Edward. Right now they think Bella is this sweet girl. Hello, Edward brought her home drunk. Yeah, real sweet girl there. I just want to give Edward a big hug right now.
Date: 16 Aug 2012 12:56 AM Title: Mr Brightside
Okay, if Edward would have punched someone at school like that I have a feeling they might back off of him a bit. Then again, probably not. Poor baby. Life is just so hard and confusing for him right now. Wonder how long he will be alone on the beach.
Date: 28 Jun 2012 12:29 AM Title: Contemplation & Reflection
Well Edward sure has a lot to work through. I really think he was a victim in most of this. He never said or acted like he wanted a relationship with Tanya. He never expected anything, but the honestly he thought he was getting from Bella. So I think he's taking on a lot of guilt needlessly. Great chap Hun.
Date: 18 Jun 2012 4:58 PM Title: An Evening With Mr Jack
Very enjoyable so far. That having been said, Jack Daniel's is from Lynchburg, Tennessee, not Kentucky. And trust me, both Kentuckians and Tennessians take that stuff seriously!
Thanks for reaading so far and DAMN my mistake, I am in the UK and my beta had not noticed this either so thanks for letting me know. So far you are the only person to spot that! Will get it changed. Lou x
Date: 16 Jun 2012 5:36 PM Title: The Morning After The Night Before
Oh, this is getting good. A geek who acts like his tormentors behind closed doors? Why, I think we might have a three-dimensional character here, folks!
WOW! Thank you so much, that is a massive compliment and has made me smile. I hope that you continue to enjoy it!
Date: 23 Apr 2012 10:22 PM Title: Revelations
Poor Edward..........He's never going to be the same. Hope he's able to at least talk to Bella and apologize to her. Let her know that they were both victims of James and Victoria's actions.
Thanks for reading and reviewing, yeah Edward might not be the same. Yup they are both victims here, and things are not going to be easy but thanks for sticking with me.
Date: 22 Apr 2012 11:32 PM Title: Revelations
Wow pretty amazing chapter! Well done...you put so much information into that chapter, and yet it was so clearly written and easy to understand. Great job..
Thanks for reading and reviewing. Thanks for your kind words, it was a pretty action packed chapter and I'm glad that you feel it worked.
Date: 22 Apr 2012 10:27 PM Title: Revelations
He had to remember. Now Carlisle needs to file a civil suit against James & Tanya. She needs to have a restraining order keeping her away from all of them.
Poor little Bella for what she did was make bad choices. She has been hurt as well.
Okay... write away
Thanks for reading and reviewing as always. Yup he had to remember, it just took a small push in the right direction to open those floodgates. His parents will not do anything until they have had chance to discuss this as a family. The next chapter is done and with beta, one after that is also nearly done!
Date: 04 Apr 2012 4:46 PM Title: Home Sweet Home
I think Esme is an awful mom. I really can't stand her. I can't believe she still thinks Bella is good person, and not believer Rose, her own daughter. That is f*cked up. I would love to give Esme a smack in the face, and tell her that Bella is the reason that her son is in the hospital.
Date: 03 Apr 2012 11:16 AM Title: Home Sweet Home
Did no one see James beat up on Edward in that parking lot? I hope Edward remembers that part soon very soon. I want Rose to tear into Tanya when she finds out. Great story, please update soon.
Thanks for another review! Nope, no-one saw OR would stand up to him, he is a tough cookie. Edwards memory... I promose that things will start to become clearer, and I promise that you will get to see Rose in action in the upcoming chapters! Update is on the horizon I promise!
Date: 03 Apr 2012 8:52 AM Title: Chasing Cars
Poor Edward!! I don't agree with Bella denying their relationship but what Tanya did was beyond horrible. I think Bella was so shocked that it took her completely off guard-not justifying it though. But Tanya set up someone she "loved" knowing what it could do to him then watch James beat him up just to get some kind of twisted revenge. Don't even get me started on the following sick stalker aspect of her involvement. I hope her, James and Jessica get a payback.
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! Yup Bella should NOT have denied it, but she is a teenage girl and just wanted to fit in, she was shocked. Hmmm Tanya, that will unravel soon as to why she did what she did.
Date: 21 Mar 2012 8:45 AM Title: Home Sweet Home
Ohhh man I am kind of scared of where this story is going... I really thought they would work it out, specially after what happend with James and Tanya : (
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. Don't be scared! Also don't forget that Edward only has what Jake told him to go off regarding who did what at the dance, he doesn't know about the fight at the cafe and what led Edward to do what he did.
Date: 05 Mar 2012 3:14 PM Title: Friends Will Be Friends
what do I think. Charlie needs to make Bella stay at home after school. He needs to be a father first for a while. If she needs to go to a school that will help her deal with what she has done then so be it. She needs to leave the Cullen family alone.
Tanya and James need to be exposed for what they did. Edward needs to understand that sex with people change them. Tanya got attached. She is jealous and dangerous. Next Jessica needs to do community service for what she has done to spread lies and hurt people.
Edward needs his mother and father to help him. His dad to help him about the sexual part. Rose needs to hear her little friend Tanya played a huge part in all this.
Date: 28 Feb 2012 12:10 PM Title: In & Out Of Conciousness
I see why Rose and now JAke are upset with Bella, but come the fuck on, edward did that because of Tanya and James too, not just Bella or is that something that they choose not to see? I hope all this gets cleared up and soon.
*GIGGLES* Ah you made me laught with that one! Bear in mind at this point they do not know about James & Tanya's involvement in the events leading to him being in hospital at this stage so please do bear with them, they will find out the truth though ;-)
Date: 20 Feb 2012 9:10 AM Title: Regrets & Decisions
omgg! ... i seriously can not wait for thre next chapter! if you can update soon i might owe you my life :)
OOH will have to see what I can do then! I am beta dependant the coming weeks chapter has not been done yet. Hope you survive the week!
Date: 19 Feb 2012 9:24 AM Title: Regrets & Decisions
Powerful chapter...this gives good insight as to why teens don't think they have any other choice than to kill themselves. Your heart really breaks for both of these characters..an anxious to see what you have planned for these two in the next update.
Thank you so much! That is what I was looking to do, make it powerful and judging from the reviews I did that.
Date: 19 Feb 2012 8:37 AM Title: Regrets & Decisions
Well even Edward can only take so much. He is young and all this hurts. He needs a place to heal. Parents take over. Get him in a new school and help him so he does not do destructive behaviour again.
No Tanya and Definetly no Bella.
He can and he really has reached the end of his tether as we would say in the UK. He will need time and space to heal from this, and I intend to give him what he needs.