Date: 23 Oct 2012 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 64
I have read my share of Twilight fanfiction. I truly enjoy yours. Not too sappy but in a very fictional way as close to real life as fanfiction can get! Thanks for taking the time to write about the characters we all love so much.
Date: 31 Jul 2012 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 64
you MUST have a way with words. "old people" making love generally grosses me out, but somehow i'm not appalled at these two. their children sound very interesting, but i guess they had to be since their parents always lived/loved together and never married. this was a good ending. it just took me a while to come back to the story and finish it.
Date: 10 Jul 2012 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 64
This was really really good. It is one of the few stories that kept me up all night reading them because I just couldn't not find out what was to happen, thus me writing this at 4:58 in the morning. Well done though, this is some great work!
Date: 11 Jun 2012 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 64
Yeah that was a nice story & ending. What can I say, I'm a whimp, I was putting off reading these last couple chapters after Alice & Carlisle I wasn't quite trusting where this story would go. I'm glad I came back & finished it.
Thanks for writing:-))
Date: 10 Jun 2012 12:09 PM Title: Chapter 39
I like that you wrote about her sleep talking habits. Far too often, people tend to look over that. I feel that it softens her. It's one of the few vulnerabilities she has no control over. She can't recognize it and immediately "switch gears".
Me likey. :)
Date: 02 Jun 2012 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 17
I really don't know what to think about Carlisle. It's like he loves his blowjobs and gets off with Bella, but with Esme, it's like he's hesitant for some reason. Is it because of the cancer or he doesn't like to see Esme on her knees in front of him. I don't have a frickin' clue!