Date: 09 Aug 2012 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 27
I just love this Bella. If she can't zzzap them into submission, she'll just kill 'em the good old fashioned way. She doesn't seem to mind.
LOLs when she went to flip them off and Edward's taking the time to correct her just before the death match. Good for Edward in figuring out he can fight back with his own mad skills. Bless Esme for her foresight.
Love the updates! Keep on truckin with those edits and keep your eyes on the prize.
Date: 09 Aug 2012 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 26
Wait, what? How did I miss this update? I'll blame being out of town. So sorry!
I found Jane's discussion of Ancient vs. Elder vampire very interesting. Have I missed it before? I love hearing things about these different vamps.
The Scooby gang are on their way to help, yay!
Date: 24 Jul 2012 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 25
They brainwashed the serialkiller and made him confess all his crimes. Tanya's death, too, what a great idea. Way better than kill him.
Oh, the Volturi already found Bella. Curious what happened next.
Thanks for your update!!!!
Date: 24 Jul 2012 10:26 AM Title: Chapter 25
I loved the visual of Yorkie trying to type. Sounded like many a friend in the USAF trying to type their reports. Nice way to tie up their alibi for Tanya's death.
Big Hmmmm, on Em's chat with Jake. I know he means well, but...
Loved the update! Thank you, Lissa! Huggles and smooches!!
Date: 07 Jun 2012 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 18
Great story. I am confused is this an orginal story or a fanfic. I keep seeing "orginal story" but then I see E/B name.
I wrote two versions of this story. This one is called the "original version" because it's the one I began posting on FFN. I ultimately decided that I should do both versions, so there's the "original" version (E/J/B) and the "E/B" version. Until just a day ago, I only had the "original" version on this site, but due to concerns about the story possibly being taken down, I decided to post both of them here and update only these ones until all of the turmoil died down over at FFN.
Date: 07 Jun 2012 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 18
Oh dear! I was wondering when they would be outed as a "threesome" to others. Shit is definitely hitting the fan! Time to get the hell outta Dodge.
Poor Alice has never had a normal relationship in her life and now she nearly gets fried. Is she going to have some sort of "Come to Goddess" moment now, some sort of epiphany? One can only hope. That and maybe Esme will realize these people aren't her friends and aren't important enough to keep subjecting Edward to their shit.
Loved it, BTW. Also loved that someone used the word "instinctive". No one uses it anymore. It bugs the crap out of me that EVERYone uses the word "instinctual" no matter what. /rant
Date: 06 Jun 2012 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 18
Oh, that Bella is such a trip! I love that she wanted to give a Bentley to the (formerly) homeless guy. Jacob has terrible timing, but I kind of think Esme deserves it for forcing her parties, her friends, her lifestyle upon them. Bella being the Lady of the rain makes more sense now :)
Date: 10 May 2012 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 13
I really like your story, you know how to keep me interested and waiting impatently for next part... I wold tell you much more, but since english isn't my homelanguage i don't know how to express myself as much as in estonian... but i really like your story a lot. :D
You expressed yourself quite well, and I'm very glad you're enjoying the story. Thank you for the compliment!
Date: 02 May 2012 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 12
Aww! She sang for Edwurr... <3
PIE was wondering how you'd get Alice into the mix, and Jasper! You dog, you!
"Bella looked at all three men, wearing identical hostile expressions. She reached over and smacked Jasper on the back of the head.
Bwahahahahahaha! Love Bella! Don't mess with her guys. Shell mess you up!
Tanya keeps digging herself further down. Good place for her!
Love this! Thanks for the update when you have editing to do.
Date: 30 Apr 2012 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 11
"Need a cigar?" oh yeah, he knows what happend and it seems he is fine with it.
I'm amazed by Esme!!
Oh noooo, she can't be pregnant! This must be a lie!!! Poor Edward. Hmm, when I remember right, they didn't have much of a sexlife before Tanja ended the engagement.
Thank you so much for your quick updates, love this story, very unique :-)
Date: 29 Apr 2012 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 11
First off, I love the nod to 2001: A Space Odyssey!
Apparently a small potato put in a microwave for 10 minutes will also erupt into flames. Or so my friend tells me. I've not tried this at home.
Edward is accepting of Bella and Jake having relations, but I'm looking forward to their discussion of the situation. It's a no-brainier for Bella, but not for them in their lives as they've been raised. There has to be some kind of talk.
Who/what DOESN'T Esme know?!