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Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2010 7:41 PM Title: 30. Halloween Part I

Holy crap!  I am finally caught up with your chapters!  This is one hell of a monster you are writing, but I am really enjoying it.

I really hope that is Alice in the dark and not anything worth screaming at.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2010 7:23 PM Title: 29. Friend or Foe

One of the things I love most about this story is how you have Edward doing things he would have never done as a vampire.  He would have never made friends and gone to a beach party (especially at first beach).  It really helps the reader to grasp Edward the human instead of Edward the vampire.

I love the scene with him and Bella floating on the board after the rescue.  And I am so glad the wolves are not being hostile towards him.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2010 7:20 PM Title: 28. Past and Present

I loved seeing Edward go through parts of his past, but it is sad to know that his family is really gone.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2010 12:05 AM Title: 27. It goes on

So the Cullens are really gone.  That is so sad for Edward to be an orphan.  But I understand it probably is safer for him and Bella if they are not close by.  One thing though, does Edward not know about Aro's power?  It really doesn't matter how much distance there is between them.  If Aro touches any of the Cullens, he will know about Edward.



Author's Response:

He knows, but he's still not going to lay every worry on Bella, however much he's trying to share with her now...

Thanks for reading and reviewing. Glad you're still enjoying it!

Ria

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2010 8:56 PM Title: 26. If you Love Something, Set it Free

Ok, I feel bad for calling Edward a jackass. LOL.  I am so glad they found him in the woods before he got any worse. 

And Bella is going to say yes?!?  I am doing a little happy dance!  I can't wait to see how Edward proposes.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2010 7:48 PM Title: 25. A Foolish Consistency

Edward is a jackass.  Human or vampire, he is still a selfish jackass for putting Bella through that.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 9:57 PM Title: 24. Agony

Well I am glad that Edward did not get bitten, but if that idiot thinks things will be better if he leaves Bella...I hope Alice kicks his ass.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 9:31 PM Title: 23. Eighteen

Holy shit!!!!  Please tell me someone did not bite him?!?

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 6:42 PM Title: 22. The Last First Day

Excellent chapter!  I love the fact that Edward is making new friends.  It is too cute!  And the fact that he smacked Mike with the basketball was perfection!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 4:48 PM Title: 21. A Bear with a Sore Head

How can anyone not love Emmett?  It is so cute that he wanted to use Edward as unicorn bait. LMAO!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 4:06 PM Title: 20. Desperate Measures

Yea!!!  Edward is no longer part of the treaty!  I think I was freaking out almost as much as they were to think of poor Edward alone with his dreams.

I know I have said this before, but Charlie rocks!  They way he is with Edward is just too awesome for words.

That was smart of Edward to cut himself in front of Billy.  Loved the visual of Bella waving the bloody tissue in the air. LOL

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 4:03 PM Title: 19. Desperate Times

This sucks.  Can't they tell he isn't all vampy anymore?  Stupid mutts!

Loved the kitchen sex...very, very hot!!!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 4:02 PM Title: 18. Treaty

I love the way he went to Esme.  That was just awesome.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 4:01 PM Title: 17. Pancakes

Poor Edward.  He never realized the beauty of being a vampire.  It sucks because he can't have it both ways.  He wants to keep her safe, but he wants to be human with her too.  If he would have changed her when he was still a vamp, this wouldn't be an issue.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2010 10:46 PM Title: 16. Changing Key

I loved it!  You can lay out the best plans for the perfect evening and if something goes wrong it kills the mood.  Here you have two 'teenagers' home alone and horney as hell, I think it was a perfect first time. ;)  I loved when they said to each other, "My first… my last…. my only".  That was absolutely beautiful!

Reviewer: Jadiona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2010 1:49 PM Title: 30. Halloween Part I

Alice is back, or perhaps its Emmett. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2010 10:51 PM Title: 30. Halloween Part I

I wonder if it was maybe Alice, Emmit or Jazzy......hummmmmm ;-)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2010 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 15 Outtake - Renee phones Charlie

OMG!  I love Charlie!!!  He is the best dad ever the way he watches out for not only Bella, but for Edward as well.  I am so glad he didn't give into mommy dearest's manipulations.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2010 11:03 PM Title: 15. Mothers and Daughters

Damn, Renee is such a selfish bitch!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2010 5:38 PM Title: 14. Florida

Renee bought him porn?  That is too funny.  Though it did have the desired effects. ;)

So the marriage thing is still an issue with these two, huh?  Bella's argument against it neither here nor in SM's world ever really made sense to me.  She was willing to bind herself to him for an eternity, but not willing to be his wife???  It is a bit silly if you ask me.



Author's Response:

I agree, I always thought the marriage argument was a bit contrived. "Kill me so we can be together forever, but a big sparkly ring? Argh!!!!!!! (runs for the hills)". .... Nah.

I'm sure you've got past the point by now where she realises it's a bit silly herself!

Glad you're still enjoying it. You'd be surprised how many people freaked out about the unicorn!

Ria

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2010 5:35 PM Title: 13. Q&A

LOL, I don't think I would want to admit to drinking from a unicorn if I was in Edward's shoes.  But seriously, they are already aware that there are vampires and shape shifters...why not mythical animals like unicorns?  I think it was very creative of you to come up with the idea.  It makes mythical sense since the animal is supposed to have healing powers.  When Edward admitted it was something he ate, I almost thought it was a pheonix for the same reason.  The virgin part was a nice touch. ;)

Reviewer: imyoursweet666 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2010 5:51 AM Title: 30. Halloween Part I

haha one of my fav chaps so far! cant wait for part 2



Author's Response:

The Teaser:

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Bella

Before I could reach for the switch, the hall light suddenly flicked on, and I screamed as Edward jumped, and grabbed me tightly around my shoulders.

“And just where have you two been?”

Edward and I stood in shocked silence for a moment, hardly daring to move in case we were dreaming. In the end, I was the first to react.

ALICE!!!” I shrieked, as I threw myself at her. I wrapped my arms around her and squealed in delight, as I bounced up and down. She stiffened in my arms, even more so than was normal, and I suddenly remembered the fact that I stank.

“Oh my God, Bella, what is that all over you?” I stepped away from her, and Alice glanced down at herself. In the light of the single bulb that hung in our hallway, I could see a large, dirty, wet patch on her pale blue jacket. “And all over me!” she wailed shrilly.

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Of course it was Alice! That wasn't a real cliffie, I just like to tease ;).

I was going to do this in a pm, but my lappy's being slow as anything today, so I'm having to do it this way....

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Ria

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2010 9:23 PM Title: 30. Halloween Part I

I agree with Edward. I hate Halloween. People loose all of their common sense. They drink way too much and act like fools.



Author's Response:

The Teaser:

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Bella

Before I could reach for the switch, the hall light suddenly flicked on, and I screamed as Edward jumped, and grabbed me tightly around my shoulders.

“And just where have you two been?”

Edward and I stood in shocked silence for a moment, hardly daring to move in case we were dreaming. In the end, I was the first to react.

ALICE!!!” I shrieked, as I threw myself at her. I wrapped my arms around her and squealed in delight, as I bounced up and down. She stiffened in my arms, even more so than was normal, and I suddenly remembered the fact that I stank.

“Oh my God, Bella, what is that all over you?” I stepped away from her, and Alice glanced down at herself. In the light of the single bulb that hung in our hallway, I could see a large, dirty, wet patch on her pale blue jacket. “And all over me!” she wailed shrilly.

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Of course it was Alice! That wasn't a real cliffie, I just like to tease ;).

I was going to do this in a pm, but my lappy's being slow as anything today, so I'm having to do it this way....

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Ria

Reviewer: edward4life Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2010 6:14 PM Title: 30. Halloween Part I

great chapter



Author's Response:

The Teaser:

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Bella

Before I could reach for the switch, the hall light suddenly flicked on, and I screamed as Edward jumped, and grabbed me tightly around my shoulders.

“And just where have you two been?”

Edward and I stood in shocked silence for a moment, hardly daring to move in case we were dreaming. In the end, I was the first to react.

ALICE!!!” I shrieked, as I threw myself at her. I wrapped my arms around her and squealed in delight, as I bounced up and down. She stiffened in my arms, even more so than was normal, and I suddenly remembered the fact that I stank.

“Oh my God, Bella, what is that all over you?” I stepped away from her, and Alice glanced down at herself. In the light of the single bulb that hung in our hallway, I could see a large, dirty, wet patch on her pale blue jacket. “And all over me!” she wailed shrilly.

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Of course it was Alice! That wasn't a real cliffie, I just like to tease ;).

I was going to do this in a pm, but my lappy's being slow as anything today, so I'm having to do it this way....

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Ria

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2010 10:36 AM Title: 30. Halloween Part I

I love, love, love that Edward had to dress as a vampire.  Ben telling him “Cool costume, by the way. You make a good vampire.”  I laughed!!!  Charlie asking Bella if her costume was a rabbit or a bunny was funny too.  I love Charlie!

Everyone falling in the pond was funny too!  I actully feel bad for Mike.  This turned into way more then he barained for. 

I can't wait to find out who is at the house.  I really hope it is Alice!  Great job...thanks so much!!!



Author's Response:

The Teaser:

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Bella

Before I could reach for the switch, the hall light suddenly flicked on, and I screamed as Edward jumped, and grabbed me tightly around my shoulders.

“And just where have you two been?”

Edward and I stood in shocked silence for a moment, hardly daring to move in case we were dreaming. In the end, I was the first to react.

ALICE!!!” I shrieked, as I threw myself at her. I wrapped my arms around her and squealed in delight, as I bounced up and down. She stiffened in my arms, even more so than was normal, and I suddenly remembered the fact that I stank.

“Oh my God, Bella, what is that all over you?” I stepped away from her, and Alice glanced down at herself. In the light of the single bulb that hung in our hallway, I could see a large, dirty, wet patch on her pale blue jacket. “And all over me!” she wailed shrilly.

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Of course it was Alice! That wasn't a real cliffie, I just like to tease ;).

I was going to do this in a pm, but my lappy's being slow as anything today, so I'm having to do it this way....

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Ria

Reviewer: PJAustin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2010 12:42 AM Title: 30. Halloween Part I

Your side-splitting wit just leaves me gasping for breath!

The pond. That was priceless!

Please tell me that it's Alice at the Swan house!?!?

Love ya bb - Pam



Author's Response:

The Teaser:

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Bella

Before I could reach for the switch, the hall light suddenly flicked on, and I screamed as Edward jumped, and grabbed me tightly around my shoulders.

“And just where have you two been?”

Edward and I stood in shocked silence for a moment, hardly daring to move in case we were dreaming. In the end, I was the first to react.

ALICE!!!” I shrieked, as I threw myself at her. I wrapped my arms around her and squealed in delight, as I bounced up and down. She stiffened in my arms, even more so than was normal, and I suddenly remembered the fact that I stank.

“Oh my God, Bella, what is that all over you?” I stepped away from her, and Alice glanced down at herself. In the light of the single bulb that hung in our hallway, I could see a large, dirty, wet patch on her pale blue jacket. “And all over me!” she wailed shrilly.

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Of course it was Alice! That wasn't a real cliffie, I just like to tease ;).

I was going to do this in a pm, but my lappy's being slow as anything today, so I'm having to do it this way....

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Ria

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2010 12:37 AM Title: 12. Acceptance

Ahhh, the part where Charlie patted him on the shoulder was very sweet and very fatherly. :)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2010 12:05 AM Title: 11. A new man

He is such a teenager!!!  I love it!

I thought Bella's conversation with Renee was too funny.

And please tell me we are going to find out how Edward returned to being human???

Reviewer: Mora-Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2010 11:59 PM Title: 30. Halloween Part I

LOL



Author's Response:

The Teaser:

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Bella

Before I could reach for the switch, the hall light suddenly flicked on, and I screamed as Edward jumped, and grabbed me tightly around my shoulders.

“And just where have you two been?”

Edward and I stood in shocked silence for a moment, hardly daring to move in case we were dreaming. In the end, I was the first to react.

ALICE!!!” I shrieked, as I threw myself at her. I wrapped my arms around her and squealed in delight, as I bounced up and down. She stiffened in my arms, even more so than was normal, and I suddenly remembered the fact that I stank.

“Oh my God, Bella, what is that all over you?” I stepped away from her, and Alice glanced down at herself. In the light of the single bulb that hung in our hallway, I could see a large, dirty, wet patch on her pale blue jacket. “And all over me!” she wailed shrilly.

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Of course it was Alice! That wasn't a real cliffie, I just like to tease ;).

I was going to do this in a pm, but my lappy's being slow as anything today, so I'm having to do it this way....

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Ria

Reviewer: patch138 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2010 11:50 PM Title: 30. Halloween Part I

I love charlie in this...and his relationship with Edward is great!

 

~Tiffany



Author's Response:

The Teaser:

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Bella

Before I could reach for the switch, the hall light suddenly flicked on, and I screamed as Edward jumped, and grabbed me tightly around my shoulders.

“And just where have you two been?”

Edward and I stood in shocked silence for a moment, hardly daring to move in case we were dreaming. In the end, I was the first to react.

ALICE!!!” I shrieked, as I threw myself at her. I wrapped my arms around her and squealed in delight, as I bounced up and down. She stiffened in my arms, even more so than was normal, and I suddenly remembered the fact that I stank.

“Oh my God, Bella, what is that all over you?” I stepped away from her, and Alice glanced down at herself. In the light of the single bulb that hung in our hallway, I could see a large, dirty, wet patch on her pale blue jacket. “And all over me!” she wailed shrilly.

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Of course it was Alice! That wasn't a real cliffie, I just like to tease ;).

I was going to do this in a pm, but my lappy's being slow as anything today, so I'm having to do it this way....

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Ria

Reviewer: Applefromatree Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2010 11:47 PM Title: 30. Halloween Part I

Very very very good :)



Author's Response:

The Teaser:

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Bella

Before I could reach for the switch, the hall light suddenly flicked on, and I screamed as Edward jumped, and grabbed me tightly around my shoulders.

“And just where have you two been?”

Edward and I stood in shocked silence for a moment, hardly daring to move in case we were dreaming. In the end, I was the first to react.

ALICE!!!” I shrieked, as I threw myself at her. I wrapped my arms around her and squealed in delight, as I bounced up and down. She stiffened in my arms, even more so than was normal, and I suddenly remembered the fact that I stank.

“Oh my God, Bella, what is that all over you?” I stepped away from her, and Alice glanced down at herself. In the light of the single bulb that hung in our hallway, I could see a large, dirty, wet patch on her pale blue jacket. “And all over me!” she wailed shrilly.

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Of course it was Alice! That wasn't a real cliffie, I just like to tease ;).

I was going to do this in a pm, but my lappy's being slow as anything today, so I'm having to do it this way....

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Ria

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2010 11:16 PM Title: 10. Upstairs Downstairs

That last line about the ammunition was classic!  LMAO!!!  So, Edward is going shopping with Alice...this could be interesting.

I am curious to see how Charlie handles the sleeping arrangements. Hmmm.

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2010 10:52 PM Title: 30. Halloween Part I

We get a teaser? really? lol that's awesome. seriously I can't wait to find out what happens next and who turned the light on. my money is on either one of the Cullens (Alice maybe) or Charlie. keep up the great work. i can't wait for more. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

The Teaser:

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Bella

Before I could reach for the switch, the hall light suddenly flicked on, and I screamed as Edward jumped, and grabbed me tightly around my shoulders.

“And just where have you two been?”

Edward and I stood in shocked silence for a moment, hardly daring to move in case we were dreaming. In the end, I was the first to react.

ALICE!!!” I shrieked, as I threw myself at her. I wrapped my arms around her and squealed in delight, as I bounced up and down. She stiffened in my arms, even more so than was normal, and I suddenly remembered the fact that I stank.

“Oh my God, Bella, what is that all over you?” I stepped away from her, and Alice glanced down at herself. In the light of the single bulb that hung in our hallway, I could see a large, dirty, wet patch on her pale blue jacket. “And all over me!” she wailed shrilly.

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Of course it was Alice! That wasn't a real cliffie, I just like to tease ;).

I was going to do this in a pm, but my lappy's being slow as anything today, so I'm having to do it this way....

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Ria

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2010 10:33 PM Title: 9. Not the meadow

Thank God!!!  The Berlin Wall Edward has built around his viginity may actually be coming down!!!  LOL.  I can't wait to see what happens next time opportunity presents itself. ;)

Reviewer: summerskyys Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2010 10:25 PM Title: 30. Halloween Part I

Amazing chapter : ) hmm..i really do wonder who turned the lights on



Author's Response:

The Teaser:

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Bella

Before I could reach for the switch, the hall light suddenly flicked on, and I screamed as Edward jumped, and grabbed me tightly around my shoulders.

“And just where have you two been?”

Edward and I stood in shocked silence for a moment, hardly daring to move in case we were dreaming. In the end, I was the first to react.

ALICE!!!” I shrieked, as I threw myself at her. I wrapped my arms around her and squealed in delight, as I bounced up and down. She stiffened in my arms, even more so than was normal, and I suddenly remembered the fact that I stank.

“Oh my God, Bella, what is that all over you?” I stepped away from her, and Alice glanced down at herself. In the light of the single bulb that hung in our hallway, I could see a large, dirty, wet patch on her pale blue jacket. “And all over me!” she wailed shrilly.

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Of course it was Alice! That wasn't a real cliffie, I just like to tease ;).

I was going to do this in a pm, but my lappy's being slow as anything today, so I'm having to do it this way....

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Ria

Reviewer: frekles Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2010 8:38 PM Title: 30. Halloween Part I

love it! Vampire Edward and the  realism of a very real high school party gone bad....brought back some memories from a long time ago.......well done.



Author's Response:

The Teaser:

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Bella

Before I could reach for the switch, the hall light suddenly flicked on, and I screamed as Edward jumped, and grabbed me tightly around my shoulders.

“And just where have you two been?”

Edward and I stood in shocked silence for a moment, hardly daring to move in case we were dreaming. In the end, I was the first to react.

ALICE!!!” I shrieked, as I threw myself at her. I wrapped my arms around her and squealed in delight, as I bounced up and down. She stiffened in my arms, even more so than was normal, and I suddenly remembered the fact that I stank.

“Oh my God, Bella, what is that all over you?” I stepped away from her, and Alice glanced down at herself. In the light of the single bulb that hung in our hallway, I could see a large, dirty, wet patch on her pale blue jacket. “And all over me!” she wailed shrilly.

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Of course it was Alice! That wasn't a real cliffie, I just like to tease ;). Yes, I went to a few of these parties as well... can you tell? lol

I was going to do this in a pm, but my lappy's being slow as anything today, so I'm having to do it this way....

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Ria

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2010 8:01 PM Title: 30. Halloween Part I

Good lord, what a chapter!!!!   That party was giving me the creeps.  It was just one bad thing after another.   Poor Mike, his parents are going to kill him.   Those people basically destroyed his house!!!   But we did get a little Edward and Bella time, which was pretty cool - I've missed that.



Author's Response:

The Teaser:

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Bella

Before I could reach for the switch, the hall light suddenly flicked on, and I screamed as Edward jumped, and grabbed me tightly around my shoulders.

“And just where have you two been?”

Edward and I stood in shocked silence for a moment, hardly daring to move in case we were dreaming. In the end, I was the first to react.

ALICE!!!” I shrieked, as I threw myself at her. I wrapped my arms around her and squealed in delight, as I bounced up and down. She stiffened in my arms, even more so than was normal, and I suddenly remembered the fact that I stank.

“Oh my God, Bella, what is that all over you?” I stepped away from her, and Alice glanced down at herself. In the light of the single bulb that hung in our hallway, I could see a large, dirty, wet patch on her pale blue jacket. “And all over me!” she wailed shrilly.

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Of course it was Alice! That wasn't a real cliffie, I just like to tease ;).

I was going to do this in a pm, but my lappy's being slow as anything today, so I'm having to do it this way....

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Ria

Reviewer: laylieb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2010 7:45 PM Title: 30. Halloween Part I

Sooo glad for the perviness of this chapter!! Thanx for that!! Poor Eddie...I thought he was gonna explode!! LOL!!! I can't wait to find out who was in the house...Alice maybe?? I have a bad feeling about them not answering their phones!!! Waiting anxiously for the next chapter!!! And my teaser....;)

Author's Response:

The Teaser:

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Bella

Before I could reach for the switch, the hall light suddenly flicked on, and I screamed as Edward jumped, and grabbed me tightly around my shoulders.

“And just where have you two been?”

Edward and I stood in shocked silence for a moment, hardly daring to move in case we were dreaming. In the end, I was the first to react.

ALICE!!!” I shrieked, as I threw myself at her. I wrapped my arms around her and squealed in delight, as I bounced up and down. She stiffened in my arms, even more so than was normal, and I suddenly remembered the fact that I stank.

“Oh my God, Bella, what is that all over you?” I stepped away from her, and Alice glanced down at herself. In the light of the single bulb that hung in our hallway, I could see a large, dirty, wet patch on her pale blue jacket. “And all over me!” she wailed shrilly.

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Of course it was Alice! That wasn't a real cliffie, I just like to tease ;). I always enjoy a bit of perviness too, bit of vampire role play... I'm seriously considering a conan the barbarian outtake too...

I was going to do this in a pm, but my lappy's being slow as anything today, so I'm having to do it this way....

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Ria

Reviewer: mousekemom Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2010 7:37 PM Title: 30. Halloween Part I

that was hilarious!!!!  It has been too long since you updated, but you made it worth the wait!  My husband is chuckling about it as I write this, so know you have at least two of us a good laugh.  Edward in a vamp outfit and biting Bella, too funny!  Thanks again for sharing your talent with us and we look forward to the rest of the story!



Author's Response:

The Teaser:

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Bella

Before I could reach for the switch, the hall light suddenly flicked on, and I screamed as Edward jumped, and grabbed me tightly around my shoulders.

“And just where have you two been?”

Edward and I stood in shocked silence for a moment, hardly daring to move in case we were dreaming. In the end, I was the first to react.

ALICE!!!” I shrieked, as I threw myself at her. I wrapped my arms around her and squealed in delight, as I bounced up and down. She stiffened in my arms, even more so than was normal, and I suddenly remembered the fact that I stank.

“Oh my God, Bella, what is that all over you?” I stepped away from her, and Alice glanced down at herself. In the light of the single bulb that hung in our hallway, I could see a large, dirty, wet patch on her pale blue jacket. “And all over me!” she wailed shrilly.

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Of course it was Alice! That wasn't a real cliffie, I just like to tease ;).

I was going to do this in a pm, but my lappy's being slow as anything today, so I'm having to do it this way....

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Ria

Reviewer: Brown Eyed Girl 18 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2010 6:27 PM Title: 30. Halloween Part I

LOL what a crazy night!!   Humm...I think it's Alice!

I love this story! ;)



Author's Response:

The Teaser:

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Bella

Before I could reach for the switch, the hall light suddenly flicked on, and I screamed as Edward jumped, and grabbed me tightly around my shoulders.

“And just where have you two been?”

Edward and I stood in shocked silence for a moment, hardly daring to move in case we were dreaming. In the end, I was the first to react.

ALICE!!!” I shrieked, as I threw myself at her. I wrapped my arms around her and squealed in delight, as I bounced up and down. She stiffened in my arms, even more so than was normal, and I suddenly remembered the fact that I stank.

“Oh my God, Bella, what is that all over you?” I stepped away from her, and Alice glanced down at herself. In the light of the single bulb that hung in our hallway, I could see a large, dirty, wet patch on her pale blue jacket. “And all over me!” she wailed shrilly.

****************************

Of course it was Alice! That wasn't a real cliffie, I just like to tease ;).

I was going to do this in a pm, but my lappy's being slow as anything today, so I'm having to do it this way....

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Ria

Reviewer: fanfictionfeedn_the_addiction Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2010 6:11 PM Title: 30. Halloween Part I

Finally...  an update!!  You know how I love humanward.  Hmmm.. maybe it was Alice?



Author's Response:

The Teaser:

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Bella

Before I could reach for the switch, the hall light suddenly flicked on, and I screamed as Edward jumped, and grabbed me tightly around my shoulders.

“And just where have you two been?”

Edward and I stood in shocked silence for a moment, hardly daring to move in case we were dreaming. In the end, I was the first to react.

ALICE!!!” I shrieked, as I threw myself at her. I wrapped my arms around her and squealed in delight, as I bounced up and down. She stiffened in my arms, even more so than was normal, and I suddenly remembered the fact that I stank.

“Oh my God, Bella, what is that all over you?” I stepped away from her, and Alice glanced down at herself. In the light of the single bulb that hung in our hallway, I could see a large, dirty, wet patch on her pale blue jacket. “And all over me!” she wailed shrilly.

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Of course it was Alice! That wasn't a real cliffie, I just like to tease ;).

I was going to do this in a pm, but my lappy's being slow as anything today, so I'm having to do it this way....

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Ria

Reviewer: Jadedtigger Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2010 5:38 PM Title: 30. Halloween Part I

The only way I could have laughed harder at this chapter is if Edward would have had to wear a werewolf costume! Love it!!! I am going to aventure a guess that Alice is waiting for them at the house :-)



Author's Response:

The Teaser:

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Bella

Before I could reach for the switch, the hall light suddenly flicked on, and I screamed as Edward jumped, and grabbed me tightly around my shoulders.

“And just where have you two been?”

Edward and I stood in shocked silence for a moment, hardly daring to move in case we were dreaming. In the end, I was the first to react.

ALICE!!!” I shrieked, as I threw myself at her. I wrapped my arms around her and squealed in delight, as I bounced up and down. She stiffened in my arms, even more so than was normal, and I suddenly remembered the fact that I stank.

“Oh my God, Bella, what is that all over you?” I stepped away from her, and Alice glanced down at herself. In the light of the single bulb that hung in our hallway, I could see a large, dirty, wet patch on her pale blue jacket. “And all over me!” she wailed shrilly.

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Of course it was Alice! That wasn't a real cliffie, I just like to tease ;).

I was going to do this in a pm, but my lappy's being slow as anything today, so I'm having to do it this way....

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Ria

Reviewer: figarocat Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2010 4:01 PM Title: 30. Halloween Part I

Really enjoying your story and can't wait to read on!  My money is on Alice being there!



Author's Response:

The Teaser:

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Bella

Before I could reach for the switch, the hall light suddenly flicked on, and I screamed as Edward jumped, and grabbed me tightly around my shoulders.

“And just where have you two been?”

Edward and I stood in shocked silence for a moment, hardly daring to move in case we were dreaming. In the end, I was the first to react.

ALICE!!!” I shrieked, as I threw myself at her. I wrapped my arms around her and squealed in delight, as I bounced up and down. She stiffened in my arms, even more so than was normal, and I suddenly remembered the fact that I stank.

“Oh my God, Bella, what is that all over you?” I stepped away from her, and Alice glanced down at herself. In the light of the single bulb that hung in our hallway, I could see a large, dirty, wet patch on her pale blue jacket. “And all over me!” she wailed shrilly.

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Of course it was Alice! That wasn't a real cliffie, I just like to tease ;).

I was going to do this in a pm, but my lappy's being slow as anything today, so I'm having to do it this way....

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Ria

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2010 9:42 PM Title: 8. Balance of Power

This has been my favorite chapter thus far.  You wrote Carlisle's POV so perfectly.  When he asked Charlie to watch over Edward it broke my heart.  I am completely torn on how I would like to see this story go.  As much as it is a dream come true for Edward to be human, it also is so sad for him to lose his vampire family.



Author's Response:

Hi!

It's nice to see your comments here, I feel like I'm reading it along with you!

You're right in that there is going to have to be a choice somewhere along the line. Bella proved to us in canon already that a human can't live alongside the supernatural for long, so something has to give.

I hope you keep enjoying it, you have lots to go, and Chapter 30 is going up imminently.

Ria

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2010 9:09 PM Title: 7. First night Blues

87 years of nightmares to catch up on is quite a lot.  I don't know if Edward or Bella can handle that.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2010 8:45 PM Title: 6. Isn't it Ironic?

Damn, cockblocked by being born in 1901!  It just isn't right, but it is Edward.  By the way, love the visual of a drunk, grabby Edward.  Too funny!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2010 7:15 PM Title: 5. The Search for Equilibrium

Hopefully never!  I love horney teenager Edward!!!  I don't hear Bella complaining either. ;)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2010 6:57 PM Title: 4. What Control?

Poor Edward.  It has to be hard being a newborn fully grown human.

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Date: 12 Jun 2010 1:10 AM Title: 3. Being Human

ROFLMFAO!!!  That part where Edward was raiding the kitchen cracked me up!  I can totally visualize him taking bites out of everything and setting them aside.  I can only imagine the scene that Bella walked in on after her shower.  Too funny!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2010 12:43 AM Title: 2. Waking Up with Bella

He'll probably want something sweet. 

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2010 12:24 AM Title: 1. Waking Up with Edward

Very interesting begining.  I like the premis of the story.  It is sad to see Edward afraid of Carlisle.  And in a way, he is like an orphen now.  He has no family.  He can't stay with Bella and he can't go home.  It makes you wonder if after the shock of everything wears off, will he chose to go back to his vampiric life?

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2010 9:08 AM Title: 29. Friend or Foe

Very interesting first time to the beach with friends like that.  I love it that Bella enjoyed surfing.  You have me a little worried...I am afraid a wolf was imprinting on Bella with that look and all.  Am I way off??? 

I can't wait to see what happens next!!!  Great job...thanks so much!!!



Author's Response:

No, don't worry. Bella and Sam merely caught each other's eye, as he's still watching Edward. Sam and Emily have already imprinted by this point.

Ria

Reviewer: Slim2None Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2010 8:22 PM Title: 29. Friend or Foe

I just found this story and I was instantly hooked!  I'm totally loving this story!  Your writing style makes me feel like I'm right there with them - completely immersed.  Thank you for sharing it.  Can't wait to see what happens next.

 

-Cindy

p.s. And thanks for the additional recommendations in the author's notes.  I'll be looking those up!



Author's Response:

Thank you! Glad you're enjoying it, Halloween should be up by the end of the week.

Ria

Reviewer: Leibeezer Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2010 11:35 PM Title: 29. Friend or Foe

I'm really hoping that Jake's not going to cause a problem.



Author's Response:

There will be no love triangle in this story. Edward never left, so Jake and Bella will never have the chance to get that close.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Ria

Reviewer: Lillie Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2010 8:43 PM Title: 29. Friend or Foe

I am still loving this story :)

Reviewer: fanfictionfeedn_the_addiction Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2010 5:28 PM Title: 29. Friend or Foe

That was good.  For a second toward the end there I thought he was starting to regret being human haha.  Then the last sentence put me at ease.

I laughed at Bella's thought about her near drowning being Edward's leather jacket's fault. and making her stupid.  ol

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2010 5:24 AM Title: 29. Friend or Foe

This was a good lesson for both of them. I think though that Bella would have had all of the Cullen's phone number's in her phone as well. Plus Edward would have all their number's memorized and would have known to take the sims card out and put in a new phone.



Author's Response:

Bella didn't have a phone in canon, and still doesn't (yet!). There will be more attempts to contact the Cullens in the next chapter, but when a vamp wants to vanish, they do it well....

 

Reviewer: PJAustin Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2010 8:04 PM Title: 29. Friend or Foe

It must really put Edward's drawers in a twist to have been saved by a shifter no less! har har

Reviewer: edward4life Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2010 1:11 AM Title: 29. Friend or Foe

great chapter

Reviewer: patch138 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2010 10:28 PM Title: 29. Friend or Foe

Had to read this chapter before i settled in for the last chapter of MOTU...makes me teary eyed just thinking about it! cant wait to see whats planned for his first halloween as a human in 90 years...wonder if he'll remember anything from when he was human in 1918...

 

~Tiffany

Reviewer: Mora-Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2010 10:22 PM Title: 29. Friend or Foe

Bella actually surfed?!



Author's Response:

Yes!

I have a theory that a lot of Bella's clumsiness is realted to her poor self confidence, which is much improved after a month with Human Edward...

Plus, I'm also totally rubbish at sport, but I can surf...

Ria

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2010 10:11 PM Title: 29. Friend or Foe

:)  Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: laylieb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2010 9:47 PM Title: 29. Friend or Foe

Good chapter! Ready for some more lovin!!!  I know.....I'm pervy!!!  ;)



Author's Response:

Don't worry, so am I.... some mega pervy, vaguely kinky Halloween lovin' on it's way...

Ria

Reviewer: PJAustin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2010 9:34 PM Title: 28. Past and Present

I can imagine the sadness that Edward is feeling right now. Not to be able to even call them? So, so very sad.

Reviewer: PJAustin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2010 8:59 PM Title: 27. It goes on

I think I can safely say that we ALL loved Caveward coming out to play!

Reviewer: Jadiona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2010 5:31 PM Title: 29. Friend or Foe

I actually enjoyed the chapter, fluffy, but it was fun reading. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2010 5:20 PM Title: 29. Friend or Foe

wow they almost died! poor guy. Edward is totally going to pull an "Edward" and go back to being a vampire to protect dear Bella. (rolls eyes) that guy worries too much. lol keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: Leibeezer Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2010 3:48 PM Title: 28. Past and Present

Are you going to update soon?

Reviewer: BlueDiamond Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2010 9:17 PM Title: 25. A Foolish Consistency

Glad you are not going to pull a New Moon and have Edward absent for six months.  When I was reading that I was so pissed, I skip all those months and went ahead til Bella went after Edward.



Author's Response:

Yeah me too :)

And I always felt like if she'd just not believed him, he'd have stayed...

Ria

Reviewer: BlueDiamond Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2010 7:05 AM Title: 10. Upstairs Downstairs

Enjoying your story.  Although I like the thought of Edward dressing more in jeans and t-shirt, I rather he not be totally confused with Rpattz.  I love how Rob transitions into the role of Edward, he does it perfectly, yet Rob personnally is not Edward.  I like them separetly.



Author's Response:

Hi, thanks for reading and reviewing! I'm glad you're enjoying it.

If you need a mental picture of the way Edward has changed his look, think of Edward in Twilight, rather than RPattz. I liked the rather James Dean way they dressed him in Twilight, much better than some of the clothes he wore in New Moon...

Ria

Reviewer: BlueDiamond Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2010 9:22 PM Title: 7. First night Blues

The Banner you ended up using for this story is what drew me to it at first.  I believe they do help to promote a story.  You are doing a great job with this story.

Reviewer: BlueDiamond Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2010 5:05 PM Title: 3. Being Human

LMAO.  This was too funny.  The food tasting and picture taking was great and the thought of Emmett would love to hear what he says about it.

Reviewer: edward4life Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2010 11:30 PM Title: 28. Past and Present

great chapter

Reviewer: Jadiona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2010 10:35 PM Title: 28. Past and Present

Another great chapter I hope the next one is up soon.

Reviewer: Mora-Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2010 10:02 PM Title: 28. Past and Present

:-)

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2010 6:58 PM Title: 28. Past and Present

Well I like it. I'm excited for more. thanks again bye!

Reviewer: snowball64 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2010 4:41 PM Title: 28. Past and Present

Lovely. You get a real feeling of the lonely life Edward lead before Bella even though he has a deep connection and love for his family.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2010 11:47 AM Title: 28. Past and Present

This story is so sad. Edward has basically lost his family. I hope his being human is only temporary. He is a better vampire if that means he gets to have all his family. Bella should realize this also. She is being selfish. In Twilight, Edward never wanted Bella to give up her family. It was all her choice.

Reviewer: amwine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2010 11:07 AM Title: 28. Past and Present

What a great chapter!  I love having Edward take a look back at his life.  He has seen and lived through so much.  He may be starting over, but these things will always be a part of him.  Great job...I really love it...thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: patch138 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2010 9:07 AM Title: 28. Past and Present

wonder why Alice never called him back...even if she cut off her phone, she would have seen it....

 

~Tiffany

Reviewer: MyriadProBold Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2010 12:21 AM Title: 28. Past and Present

That was a terrific trip down Edwards memory lane. I do feel sad that his family left him behind with no forwarding address. I have a feeling he's going to need them again before too long.

Reviewer: frekles Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2010 10:14 PM Title: 28. Past and Present

I apsolutely love this story-Edward as a human is adorable, but still good old angsty Edward. Keep up the great work, your writing is incredible, so realistic and flowing.

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2010 7:32 PM Title: 28. Past and Present

Aww, i can't believe they left him without a goodbye, that's kind of crappy. Hope you update again soon

Reviewer: fanfictionfeedn_the_addiction Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2010 7:13 PM Title: 28. Past and Present

I was laughing quite a few times this chapter.  Especially when Edward was analyzing his self through his journal entries haha.. and the creepy hair collection. lol

 

Reviewer: Leibeezer Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2010 5:29 AM Title: 27. It goes on

can you please update soon?



Author's Response:

Next chapter is with my beta, and should be up within the next day or two, depending on her now!

I'm having a bit of RL fail at the moment, so this one's taken me ages to get right! Hope you like it...

Ria

Reviewer: fanfictionfeedn_the_addiction Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2010 3:19 PM Title: 27. It goes on

lol   A friend of mine recommended Emancipation Proclamation to read and I really enjoy and love it.  and yeah its long.  I havent gotten up to date yet either and i started 2 weeks ago haha.

It took me soo long to read this particular chapter.  I kept getting interupted it was insane.  I didn't finish reading this 1 chapter until today and I started it 2 days ago.  lol.  Mostly because my son was sick @ home and I had to nurse him and do other chores.   

keep it up!

 

Reviewer: tima Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2010 11:14 AM Title: 27. It goes on

fantastic chapter. I'm glad Charlie was accepting, but warning in his talk with Edward. He's a great dad, that's for sure! :)

And I was waiting to see what everyone's reaction to Edward staying with them would be! I wasn't disappointed!

Take care, and looking forward to more! :)

Reviewer: doll69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2010 8:41 AM Title: 27. It goes on

If I haven't said it before I'm saying it now. I love the way you write Charlie. He is, without a doubt, one of my favorite side characters from Twilight. I really love the way you show his deep affection for Bella but also his ability to quietly think things through. He is not a person who acts without thinking and his capacity for empathy and forgiveness is something most fic writers don't choose to emphasize. Very nice work. Also, your lemons are very hot--I especially like the way you write Edwards inner thoughts while in the throes of passion.

Reviewer: snowball64 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2010 12:51 AM Title: 27. It goes on

Humanward is so cute, funny and horny. I can't wait for the next update.

Reviewer: Applefromatree Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2010 11:51 PM Title: 27. It goes on

I LOVE the chapter :)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2010 11:09 PM Title: 27. It goes on

i totally love that story i started it on ff.net but when it got booted i was totally pissed ! but i love your story and im happy that they are happy for now but i know somethings a bruewing! 

Reviewer: edward4life Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2010 10:35 PM Title: 27. It goes on

great chapter

 

Reviewer: Mora-Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2010 10:24 PM Title: 27. It goes on

loved it thouroughly!

Reviewer: MyriadProBold Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2010 10:15 PM Title: 27. It goes on

I think charlie's talk with Edward was very generous. I'm glad they had it.

All the volturi talk leads me to believe we will be seeing them in the next year or so of their lives.

I feel bad that Edward is missing Alice.

Nice job.

Reviewer: patch138 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2010 10:06 PM Title: 27. It goes on

i loved the convo with charlie...went well..wonder if Alice will keep in touch with them...

~Tiffany

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2010 7:54 PM Title: 27. It goes on

Excellent as usual.   I loved Edward's talk with Charlie and that Charlie was okay with Edward staying at the house, though he was definitely right about one thing - that Edward needs to involve Bella with things that bother him; he just can't make decisions based on what he thinks is best.   But I'm very happy that Edward told Bella about the Volturi.  Hopefully, since the Cullen's have moved away, they won't have a need to investigate, though I do think that Edward came up with a good plan with the possible name change.   Maybe he'll think about that some more.

Reviewer: Jadiona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2010 7:39 PM Title: 27. It goes on

Great chapter it's amazing

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2010 6:30 PM Title: 27. It goes on

wow that hot and steamy sex scene was just that, hot and steamy. lol I loved it. i can't wait to find out what happens next. I'm sad to see the Cullens leave but hopefully they make a return soon. :( Speaking of Emancipation Proclaimation, I just got caught up to date about 3 months ago and it is totally worth it. Very awesome story. i dont think I've cried, or laughed harder. keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2010 5:41 PM Title: 27. It goes on

I know Edward loves Bella, but I hate that he has to be without his family.

Reviewer: MyriadProBold Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2010 2:16 PM Title: 26. If you Love Something, Set it Free

I'm so glad you didn't pull a full out new moon. Just enough to let edward know what a dope he was for trying to leave. I really like where you left this chapter. Update soon.

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