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Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2013 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 48

very cute, loved the kids !!!

Reviewer: Wants2BeACullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2013 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 48

Loved it!!!

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Date: 01 Dec 2012 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 48

A truly fitting ending.

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Date: 01 Dec 2012 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 40

Got to love kids...

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Date: 01 Dec 2012 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 39

Hahahahahaahahahahahahahhaahahahahahhaahahahahahaha...of course.

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Date: 01 Dec 2012 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 36

Go Edward...

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Date: 01 Dec 2012 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 35

Yea Bella... go girl.

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Date: 01 Dec 2012 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 31

Well thats one way to start.

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Date: 01 Dec 2012 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 29

Hahahaahahahaahahaha...

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Date: 01 Dec 2012 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 21

great chapter, amazing amount of info in few words.

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Date: 01 Dec 2012 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 17

She is so gone ...

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Date: 01 Dec 2012 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 14

He is so good at this...

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Date: 01 Dec 2012 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 10

They definetly sound like fun.

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Date: 01 Dec 2012 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 9

They sound like fun.

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Date: 01 Dec 2012 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 7

She is a gonner...

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Date: 01 Dec 2012 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 6

Hahahahahahaahahaha, painful.

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Date: 01 Dec 2012 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 3

This looks like fun.

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Date: 25 Nov 2012 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 48

8D AWWW!!! SO CUTE! That whole story is so amazing! I LOVE when one or both of them are single parents and they're just adorable as hell together. :D I love all of your work. Everything you write is perfect.

Reviewer: Terrabella Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2012 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 48

Very fun! Loved it!!!

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Date: 24 Sep 2012 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 13

Hahahahha the visual!

Reviewer: sweetmeadow Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 10:34 AM Title: Chapter 48

Just read this one for about the third time, giggled all the way through great read :)

Reviewer: tululah Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2012 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 48

Great fic. Very funny.

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Date: 10 Jul 2012 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 3

I'm loving Esme's POV...never read that before. This is so good.

Reviewer: mimimgr Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2012 12:00 PM Title: Chapter 48

great cute sweet story

Reviewer: dwright Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 48

Great story. Too funny. Thanks for writing.

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Date: 26 Jun 2012 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 48

Wonderful!

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed

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Date: 25 Jun 2012 10:38 AM Title: Chapter 48

That was awesome. He admits to being horny better then most guys. Loved this story.

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Date: 25 Jun 2012 10:35 AM Title: Chapter 47

Throw away her pills so you can have another baby yeah smart.

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Date: 25 Jun 2012 10:33 AM Title: Chapter 46

Awww so cute. Mattie really wanted a mom.

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Date: 25 Jun 2012 10:32 AM Title: Chapter 45

Oh naughty times in the pool.

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Date: 25 Jun 2012 10:31 AM Title: Chapter 44

Interesting honeymoon there.

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Date: 25 Jun 2012 10:30 AM Title: Chapter 43

Yay they are getting married.

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Date: 25 Jun 2012 10:29 AM Title: Chapter 42

Oh my gosh what a thing to think about.

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Date: 25 Jun 2012 10:26 AM Title: Chapter 41

Oh poor Edward and his abused butt.

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Date: 25 Jun 2012 10:25 AM Title: Chapter 40

That is too funny if he is outnumbered he was moving out. Wow first time and she gets pregnant way to go Cullen.

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Date: 25 Jun 2012 10:22 AM Title: Chapter 39

Oops. He is such a guy. Mattie is so cute happy they had a sleepover lol.

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Date: 25 Jun 2012 10:19 AM Title: Chapter 38

Wow that is a long time to go with out. But Edward got the job done.

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Date: 25 Jun 2012 10:16 AM Title: Chapter 37

Oh wow she is quite vocal once things got naughty.

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Date: 25 Jun 2012 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 36

That is funny mr. Winkie and mrs. Veronica I love the names he picked out.

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Date: 25 Jun 2012 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 35

He want to slow down how sweet.

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Date: 25 Jun 2012 10:11 AM Title: Chapter 34

That is too funny she is to smart for her own good.

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Date: 25 Jun 2012 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 33

Finally a kiss. A yummy kiss ruin by the phone.

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Date: 25 Jun 2012 10:07 AM Title: Chapter 32

Of that was too cute.

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Date: 25 Jun 2012 10:06 AM Title: Chapter 31

Sweaty shirtless Edward ugh poor Bella and another pair of ruined panties.

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Date: 25 Jun 2012 10:04 AM Title: Chapter 30

She is so cute coming over to sleep with her new best friend. Really ladies thinking she is pregnant already sheesh.

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Date: 25 Jun 2012 9:46 AM Title: Chapter 29

Yeah a very cute ass indeed. These ladies are crazy.

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Date: 25 Jun 2012 9:44 AM Title: Chapter 28

That is so too funny. I won't be outnumbered mom. Mattie is so cute.

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Date: 25 Jun 2012 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 27

Are you sure they don't live on cougar island. Cause that is just wrong.

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Date: 25 Jun 2012 9:38 AM Title: Chapter 26

I am glad they are getting along so well. Now to deal with the vultures.

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Date: 25 Jun 2012 9:35 AM Title: Chapter 25

Oh that was mean poor Emmett.

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Date: 25 Jun 2012 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 24

She fits in quite well.

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Date: 25 Jun 2012 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 23

Rose spelling out shit was too cute. Emmett treating her like a rag doll is just to much lol.

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Date: 25 Jun 2012 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 22

Wow that is alot of family to up and move they must be close.

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Date: 25 Jun 2012 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 21

Gay daddy interesting. I like where this is going.

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Date: 25 Jun 2012 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 20

Hehe a makeover gone really bad is all I can picture.

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Date: 25 Jun 2012 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 19

Love the Cullen pout. It works wonders.

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Date: 25 Jun 2012 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 18

Oh gosh I love Alice.

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Date: 25 Jun 2012 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 17

She is so cute drooling over him.

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Date: 25 Jun 2012 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 16

Lol that was funny.

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Date: 25 Jun 2012 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 15

Awww how sad is he. I hope they have fun.

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Date: 25 Jun 2012 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 14

At least she was honest with him.

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Date: 25 Jun 2012 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 13

Quite the visual there. If he pinned her up against the truck that would be fodder for the masses for months.

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Date: 25 Jun 2012 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 12

Kids are so funny and blatenly honest.

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Date: 25 Jun 2012 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 11

One of the main reasons to hate small towns.

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Date: 25 Jun 2012 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 10

Wow she is smart probably get bored with school.

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Date: 25 Jun 2012 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 9

Oh my gosh I feel sorry for her.

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Date: 25 Jun 2012 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 8

Must be some good dreams :)

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Date: 25 Jun 2012 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 7

Nice description of our Edward.

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Date: 25 Jun 2012 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 6

I like that "hi idiot". What was he doing on her property lol.

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Date: 22 Jun 2012 8:55 AM Title: Chapter 4

Adorable I love the playful banter.

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Date: 22 Jun 2012 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 3

Don't you just love small towns where everyone knows your business.

Reviewer: aussieKayz Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2012 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 48

Love the story. great plot.

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Date: 21 Jun 2012 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 48

What a cute story! I love it!!

Reviewer: ADAdancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2012 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 48

Great story! Thanks for sharing!

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Date: 21 Jun 2012 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 47

Haha!!! I love this chapter.

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Date: 21 Jun 2012 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 31

Thanks for the update.

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Date: 21 Jun 2012 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 30

Thanks for the update.

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Date: 21 Jun 2012 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 29

Thanks for the update.

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Date: 21 Jun 2012 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 28

Thanks for the update!

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Date: 21 Jun 2012 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 27

Great chapter.

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Date: 21 Jun 2012 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 26

Thanks for the update!

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Date: 21 Jun 2012 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 25

Great chapter.

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Date: 21 Jun 2012 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 24

Great update!

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Date: 21 Jun 2012 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 23

Great chapter.

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Date: 21 Jun 2012 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 22

Thanks for the update.

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Date: 21 Jun 2012 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 21

Great chapter.

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Date: 19 Jun 2012 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 48

LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Date: 19 Jun 2012 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 48

I loved it!

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Date: 19 Jun 2012 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 39

ooops

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 38

loved it

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Date: 19 Jun 2012 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 29

facepalms*

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 28

the entire town is crazy - including the kids!!

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 26

here we go

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Date: 19 Jun 2012 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 25

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Date: 19 Jun 2012 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 24

smmmmooooth bastard!

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Date: 19 Jun 2012 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 21

aaahh - so mystery solved!

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Date: 19 Jun 2012 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 20

oh my - that image is funny!

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Date: 19 Jun 2012 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 48

OMG I loved this one. I almost fell out of my chair laughing a few times.

Reviewer: tds88 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 29

Bahahahaha.

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Date: 19 Jun 2012 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 27

OMG that's fantastical! It sounds like something my grandma would do.

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