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Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2014 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 48

Three of each makes for a big, noisy, happy family! This was a lot of fun to read and I did so much enjoy it all!

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Date: 15 Jan 2014 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 47

Good Grief! Why not discuss this with the person who will carry and give birth to this wanted baby?

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Date: 15 Jan 2014 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 46

I knew that was going to work out well, and I'm not even psychic!

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Date: 15 Jan 2014 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 45

Gee, why would he worry about chemicals in the pool? There weren't bodily fluids in there, were there? Oh my!

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Date: 15 Jan 2014 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 44

Strikes me as eminently sensible plus a lot of fun! Who cares if the gossips get to crane their necks and snoop?

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Date: 15 Jan 2014 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 43

He knew exactly which button to push to receive the answer he wanted, the little dickens! Of course it makes sense to me too, to combine the kids and everyone have the same last name.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2014 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 42

Relax and enjoy your woman and your new son and quit worrying about who saw what!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2014 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 41

Poor Edward, he's going to develop a complex about getting shot with BB pistols! The plans to merge their two homes is actually a pretty good idea! Silly that she won't marry him, though.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2014 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 40

Super sperm strikes super egg= super baby! I actually think it's kind of neat. It's just a sign they are meant to be together.

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Date: 15 Jan 2014 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 38

Ten years! Oh the poor little thing! I feel so bad for her, and see why she is pretty much justified for being with Edward!

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Date: 15 Jan 2014 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 37

I think perhaps Bella has been celibate too long? Poor little deprived girl!

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Date: 15 Jan 2014 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 36

I'm sorry, but I kind of had to laugh. Mr. Winky and Miss Veronica? Come on, that's too cute! 

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Date: 15 Jan 2014 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 35

Role reversal, that's different, it's usually the woman talking slow down, not the man! I like it!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2014 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 34

It has to be difficult having children smarter than some of their teachers! Especially when it disturbs your love life! Poor Bella!

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Date: 15 Jan 2014 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 33

At least it's a start. They have been dancing around each other for a while!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2014 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 32

Atta girl, let him chase you until you catch him!

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Date: 15 Jan 2014 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 31

Come on, Bella you know you want to! Go ahead, one little kiss on the cheek won't hurt!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2014 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 30

That must have scared Edward half to  death, when he woke up and found Mattie gone!

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Date: 15 Jan 2014 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 29

Few things more embarassing than an old woman with no mouth-filter!

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Date: 15 Jan 2014 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 28

Mattie's dad finds this amusing, does he? I think Bella may not be amused.

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Date: 15 Jan 2014 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 27

Atta a girl, Bella, put a bit of fear on him!

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Date: 15 Jan 2014 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 26

Of course, my dear! The "ladies" are all jealous! Guess they will settle for news second hand.

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Date: 15 Jan 2014 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 25

Oh yes, the more I read about them, the more I like this crazy family. My kind of people, definitely!

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Date: 15 Jan 2014 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 24

This sounds like some different and unusual family they think she's a part of now she's dating Edward.

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Date: 15 Jan 2014 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 23

Rose and Emmett own the bar, that sounds like a lot of fun! Those two together at work is always interesting.

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Date: 15 Jan 2014 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 22

The girl wasn't kidding when she said accident, it's a wonder she didn't die!

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Date: 15 Jan 2014 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 21

So, are the children Jake's, or Alec's? Ten months apart, that is rough!

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Date: 15 Jan 2014 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 20

Sure no way to begin an evening out, with pictures of a melting Alice Cooper running through you rhead!

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Date: 15 Jan 2014 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 19

Poor Alice, always doomed to have a best friend who doesn't share her love of clothes and fashion!

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Date: 15 Jan 2014 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 18

I can tell they are friends just by the way they snipe at each other!

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Date: 15 Jan 2014 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 17

Can't wait to see if he thinks she sounds like a dying cat! That really kind of sounds bad.

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Date: 14 Jan 2014 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 16

Must be karaoke as well as family night. This ought to be fun!

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Date: 14 Jan 2014 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 15

Oh please! Was there ever any doubt in your minds that she would date him at least once? Not in mine, I knew it was going to happen!

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Date: 14 Jan 2014 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 14

She was honest with him, it seems, but it hurt him, and that in turn hurts her!

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Date: 14 Jan 2014 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 13

Poor girl, sounds like a case for letting the charm work it's magic, to me. What a way to sweep out the cobwebs!

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Date: 14 Jan 2014 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 12

Her children appear to be too smart for their mother's peace of mind.

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Date: 14 Jan 2014 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 11

Kind of makes me feel sorry for Edward, being thought of that way. Never happens to a woman, right?

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Date: 14 Jan 2014 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 10

Oops! I missed that one, it isn't two boys, it's one of each!

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Date: 14 Jan 2014 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 9

Sounds like Bella has a couple of wild and wooly little boys!

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Date: 14 Jan 2014 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 8

She defineitely has a bad case of Cullen obsession!

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Date: 14 Jan 2014 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 7

Oh yeah, Bella is crushing hard on Edward's magnificent bod! Good for you, girl!

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Date: 14 Jan 2014 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 6

Probably not the best introduction to ever have happened! Sure made his mama smile, though!

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Date: 14 Jan 2014 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 5

Dare I hope that Edward and Bella have met? If so, it sure doesn't sound like either of them is very happy about it!

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Date: 13 Jan 2014 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 4

A fun vibe between the three women, as well as affection.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2014 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 3

I like the girls, one a daughter and the other nearly so.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2014 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 2

Like mother, like daughter I suppose. Some dandy heritage!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2014 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 1

Never had much use for Lauren Mallory, she's a troublemaker and snotty into the bargain!

Reviewer: loventherussian17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2013 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 48

Loved it

Reviewer: gatorgrl91 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2013 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 48

This was the best!!! "Fraped" - loved it!! Quick but wonderful. Loved their snark. :)
Thx!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2013 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 48

very cute, loved the kids !!!

Reviewer: Wants2BeACullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2013 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 48

Loved it!!!

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2012 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 48

A truly fitting ending.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2012 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 40

Got to love kids...

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2012 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 39

Hahahahahaahahahahahahahhaahahahahahhaahahahahahaha...of course.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2012 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 36

Go Edward...

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2012 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 35

Yea Bella... go girl.

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Date: 01 Dec 2012 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 31

Well thats one way to start.

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Date: 01 Dec 2012 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 29

Hahahaahahahaahahaha...

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Date: 01 Dec 2012 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 21

great chapter, amazing amount of info in few words.

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Date: 01 Dec 2012 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 17

She is so gone ...

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Date: 01 Dec 2012 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 14

He is so good at this...

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Date: 01 Dec 2012 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 10

They definetly sound like fun.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2012 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 9

They sound like fun.

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Date: 01 Dec 2012 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 7

She is a gonner...

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Date: 01 Dec 2012 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 6

Hahahahahahaahahaha, painful.

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Date: 01 Dec 2012 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 3

This looks like fun.

Reviewer: marini03 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2012 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 48

8D AWWW!!! SO CUTE! That whole story is so amazing! I LOVE when one or both of them are single parents and they're just adorable as hell together. :D I love all of your work. Everything you write is perfect.

Reviewer: Terrabella Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2012 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 48

Very fun! Loved it!!!

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Date: 24 Sep 2012 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 13

Hahahahha the visual!

Reviewer: sweetmeadow Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 10:34 AM Title: Chapter 48

Just read this one for about the third time, giggled all the way through great read :)

Reviewer: tululah Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2012 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 48

Great fic. Very funny.

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Date: 10 Jul 2012 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 3

I'm loving Esme's POV...never read that before.  This is so good.

Reviewer: mimimgr Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2012 12:00 PM Title: Chapter 48

great cute sweet story

Reviewer: dwright Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 48

Great story. Too funny. Thanks for writing.

Reviewer: ObessedMama Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 48

Wonderful!

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2012 10:38 AM Title: Chapter 48

That was awesome. He admits to being horny better then most guys. Loved this story.

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2012 10:35 AM Title: Chapter 47

Throw away her pills so you can have another baby yeah smart.

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Date: 25 Jun 2012 10:33 AM Title: Chapter 46

Awww so cute. Mattie really wanted a mom.

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Date: 25 Jun 2012 10:32 AM Title: Chapter 45

Oh naughty times in the pool.

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Date: 25 Jun 2012 10:31 AM Title: Chapter 44

Interesting honeymoon there.

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Date: 25 Jun 2012 10:30 AM Title: Chapter 43

Yay they are getting married.

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Date: 25 Jun 2012 10:29 AM Title: Chapter 42

Oh my gosh what a thing to think about.

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Date: 25 Jun 2012 10:26 AM Title: Chapter 41

Oh poor Edward and his abused butt.

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Date: 25 Jun 2012 10:25 AM Title: Chapter 40

That is too funny if he is outnumbered he was moving out. Wow first time and she gets pregnant way to go Cullen.

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Date: 25 Jun 2012 10:22 AM Title: Chapter 39

Oops. He is such a guy. Mattie is so cute happy they had a sleepover lol.

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Date: 25 Jun 2012 10:19 AM Title: Chapter 38

Wow that is a long time to go with out. But Edward got the job done.

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Date: 25 Jun 2012 10:16 AM Title: Chapter 37

Oh wow she is quite vocal once things got naughty.

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Date: 25 Jun 2012 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 36

That is funny mr. Winkie and mrs. Veronica I love the names he picked out.

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Date: 25 Jun 2012 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 35

He want to slow down how sweet.

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Date: 25 Jun 2012 10:11 AM Title: Chapter 34

That is too funny she is to smart for her own good.

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Date: 25 Jun 2012 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 33

Finally a kiss. A yummy kiss ruin by the phone.

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Date: 25 Jun 2012 10:07 AM Title: Chapter 32

Of that was too cute.

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Date: 25 Jun 2012 10:06 AM Title: Chapter 31

Sweaty shirtless Edward ugh poor Bella and another pair of ruined panties.

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Date: 25 Jun 2012 10:04 AM Title: Chapter 30

She is so cute coming over to sleep with her new best friend. Really ladies thinking she is pregnant already sheesh.

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Date: 25 Jun 2012 9:46 AM Title: Chapter 29

Yeah a very cute ass indeed. These ladies are crazy.

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Date: 25 Jun 2012 9:44 AM Title: Chapter 28

That is so too funny. I won't be outnumbered mom. Mattie is so cute.

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Date: 25 Jun 2012 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 27

Are you sure they don't live on cougar island. Cause that is just wrong.

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Date: 25 Jun 2012 9:38 AM Title: Chapter 26

I am glad they are getting along so well. Now to deal with the vultures.

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Date: 25 Jun 2012 9:35 AM Title: Chapter 25

Oh that was mean poor Emmett.

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Date: 25 Jun 2012 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 24

She fits in quite well.

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