Date: 08 Jan 2011 11:30 AM Title: Chapter 1: Alice Is Wearing Us Out
Will there be more to the series? Really want to know how your version will end. I'm hooked.
If it ever ends, I will be the amazed one. I just passed the 1 million words posted mark on ffnet, with 19 stories, 7 of which are running concurrently in progress. That's why I'm struggling to keep up. RL is a little problem right now. lol Absolutely, there is more already that you haven't seen if you only read on this site. I love the layout on this site, but I get more feedback on ff net so it's my main one. There, IH has almost 1100 reviews, and 23K reader a month. Come see me there :)
Date: 23 May 2010 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 4: Charlie, No, Please! Don't Shoot Me!
"Oh, no. He’s going to speak to my parents. Oh, God, not that. Anything but that." Dear JMolly ..This is hysterical. I am on the floor .. laughing so much. Poor Edward. LMAO. This is too great! I'm reading it for the 2nd time it's so so funny!
I am so glad you got a good laugh. i laughed like a maniac, writing it.
Date: 14 May 2010 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 4: Charlie, No, Please! Don't Shoot Me!
omg! My stomach hurts from laughing so hard!!!!!!!!!!!!!
here's a Cullen, there's a Cullen, here's a little fuzzy Cullen...
Hello. Glad I made you laugh. My mission accomplished:) Please keep in touch.
Date: 30 Apr 2010 10:02 AM Title: Chapter 4: Charlie, No, Please! Don't Shoot Me!
This has me puzzled. Vampires should be impervious to bullets. In Canon and in all fanfiction it is so. Edward should be terrified by the fact that a bullet would not pierce his skin and that wouold give the secret away ...
You are thoroughly right. But Edward (at least my Edward) is always thinking of others, not himself. So he is more afraid that the bullet will ricochet off of him and into someone else, which would also lead to discovery. My Edward is just too selfless to have fear of discovery as his first thought.
Date: 30 Apr 2010 9:58 AM Title: Chapter 3: Bad Idea
Unleashing the monster.... He has reason to be alwayi nervous.
While reviewing the other story - which happens after this one . You should mark them clearly n. 1, 2. 3 etc - I missed telling you how much I appreciate that you never forget that Edward IS a vampire. So many authors forget it, so that lovemaking scen seem to happen between two humans. In that story hot chapter (the one with the duct tape) both their actions during and in the aftermath are so convincing, and moving ...
Sometime I'll go back and mark the story sequence. Thanks for the suggestion:)
I'm very conscious that E is not human, and is challenged by his instincts all the time. So I'm glad you like the way I write that.
Date: 18 Apr 2010 12:21 PM Title: Chapter 6: Setting the Record Straight
excellent cover story! that was great
Thank you:) It was important to incorporate truth with the lies. Then, they are believable. Who would have dreamed Carlisle would be a good liar? LOL
Date: 10 Apr 2010 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 4: Charlie, No, Please! Don't Shoot Me!
This was one of the best chapters I have ever read anywhere, it was not only erotic, but I was LMAO after Charlie arrived.
Yeah! teen hormones that have been dormant for more than 90 years are great, poor Bella, so close yet so far, and damn Charlie he needs to gert a life for heavnes sake their getting married!!
Great story I'm really enjoying it though I just discovered it today.
I'm so glad you enjoyed the story. Please keep reading the series. When I have 5 mins to put together, I must upload more of the books here. I'm currently writing book 6, and posting on ffnet. Anyhoo, one of these days when I'm done spring cleaning, I'll get back to posting. LOL
Look forward to hearing from you again. Happy reading:)
Date: 07 Mar 2010 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 4: Charlie, No, Please! Don't Shoot Me!
Oh lord! Edward in his underwear being escorted home to his parents' house! Priceless!
Thanks so much for your kind review. Glad you enjoyed it. I just love humiliating poor Edward. He's so cute when he squirms.
Hope you keep reading. I have 10 fics over on ffnet that I'm gradually going to post here.