Reviewer: michele_my_bella Signed
29 Mar 2012
Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Nicknames
I love how he has become protective of his "new family". Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing His Cimmerian View. Edward’s view is improving, and he is learning quickly that he is not able to function to his fullest at Aro’s club. Aro’s club and Aro and some of his girls will remain a vital part of this story. Having Edward putting on one of Bella’s newly gifted bras was such a fun thing to write about, we hope you all found it just as amusing as we did. This story has a long way to go. We have been asked when things will pick up between Bella and Edward. Well we promise they will be together, but Edward is just learning to change and before he could give himself to her fully, he has to let go of a few things from the past. There are a few more bricks that need to come down off that wall he has built. As for Bella, her pure innocence alone is a good reason for things between them to simmer slowly into a boil. I will tell you this, there first kiss is written already...and Lordy I needed some ice water after that one. WOOOWHOO! I know the weekly updates, seem like forever, but if we get things wrapped up and have the story done on our side then we will post faster. Right now Nikky is working on 25 and I am working on 24 and we know that there will be at least 30-35 chapters. Thanks again for the story love. This story is dedicated to those of you who care enough to review! With our love, and until next week. Kasi and (Nikky)
Chapter 13 teaser...subject to changes during beta process.
I hear the beep of a horn, and know that the car is here. I grab my overcoat, and I head out for my painful evening.
“Good evening, everyone,” I say as I close the limo door.
“Hello Edward, I see you still haven’t tied your bowtie, Siobhan can tie it for you if you’d like; she’s really good at them.”
I turn to face Alice, trying not to scream at her. “No Alice, I can manage myself, thank you very much. I will tie it right before we arrive at the Autumn Ball.” I feel eyes on me, and my head turn’s to see who else is in the limo. There sits Siobhan, in a…dress? Fuck, it leaves nothing to the imagination, the dress… if that is what you call it. It’s more like a sheer piece in the front, glued to her skin. There doesn’t appear to be any cloth on the sides of her entire body at all. She cannot be possibly wearing anything under the dress. I can see from her armpit to the sole of her foot in the clear stiletto shoes she is wearing, there is nothing but skin. She looks like she should be working for Aro, what a trashy high class whore! I am sure she thinks it’s attractive, and I am sure everyone will know she is going commando. I mean I like women to go commando, but I also like to be the only one that knows. If I wanted my date to not wear panties, I wouldn’t want every other person in the general vicinity to know too. I don’t want to share! Thank God she isn’t my date! There is another reason on the list of why I won’t date her, or any other women.
“Wow, Edward, you look really good,” Siobhan smirks at me before crossing her legs. She lets her dress fall to the side, I am sure if I was looking I would have seen her pussy. The way she was right now I, or anyone for that matter, could finger fuck her here and now for all to see. I turn my head in disgust at her behavior.
“Edward, are you going to tell us how we all look?” I look back at Alice, with a broad smile on my face. “Sorry, forgive my rudeness. Alice, Rose, Esme, you all look very beautiful.” I give them my best smile that almost says, see I can do nice.
“Siobhan, your dress is very…nice?” I make my statement sound like a question because I real don’t know what she has on. Siobhan laughs and goes to touch my arm, and I shrug away from her. I see she’s about to speak, so I jumped in first. “And of course Charlotte, you look beautiful as always. Peter is an extremely lucky guy, and if he does not mind me stealing you for a few minutes tonight, I would like to ask you something?”