Penname: Rhiannon5 [Contact] Real name: Rachel
Member Since: 25 May 2010
Membership status: Member
Bio:

Hi will let you know more later x


 


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Reviews by Rhiannon5
Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 268299
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Life

Hi, Loving the story, the pace, and intimacy.  

Please update soon.  Waiting for the world to unfold further.

 

Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Edward is so selfless - offering his life for Bella.  Aro's mad.  I hope Charlie can save both Edward and Bella.

The Gift by KariAnn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

What if – and I’ll leave the exact circumstance up to the reader’s imagination – Edward had somehow found a way to become human in order to be with Bella, instead of the other way around?  What if Renesmee was a normal human child – normal for a prodigy, anyway?  This is just a glimpse at what that life might be like.

Thanks so much to achelle131 for the gorgeous banner!


Categories: Alternate Universe, Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4643 Read Count: 336
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 09 Feb 2010
Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Gift

Loved your one shot -  Edward turning Human - your story was a lovley gift this rainy summers day.

Summary:

Bella and Alice have been friends with benefits for ten years. When they meet Edward and Jasper, they find their missing peices. How will their families deal with their relationships? NC-17 for Lots of lemons: E/B, A/J, B/J, A/E, A/B, E/J, E/B/A/J

Banner by rpattz1990

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: Bella/Alice/Jasper/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, The Awakenings Saga
Chapters: 56 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 102918 Read Count: 170813
[Report This] Published: 13 Feb 2010 Updated: 18 Apr 2010
Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

thank you for the story, I have laughed and cried.  Aspects of the story telling have felt hurried at times and more background would have been great.  I am looking forward to the sequel. 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Summary:

Life in a maternity unit is full of ups and downs!  

Bella Swan, an experienced midwife at Forks Hospital meets the new obstetrician, Edward Cullen and the attraction is instant.

As their hands touched, she gasped softly as she felt the shock of electricity that seemed to pass through their skin.  Dropping his hand abruptly, her brown eyes wide in surprise, Bella stepped back.  Without volition, Bella felt her face flame with another cursed blush.  Damn, she was 26 years old.  When was she going to stop blushing like a schoolgirl?

 

A HUGE thank you to colorguard_girl for my new updated banner

All Human/Alternate Universe


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 222356 Read Count: 58977
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 10 Sep 2010
Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Epilogue

Thanks for a wonderful epiloge, you finished the story wonderfully.

PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3948]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 762245
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 May 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Cliff hangers love them! Looking forward to the next instalment.  This is my first review of your story - like how you woven in Twilightisms and your take on Bella and Edwards flawed loverable characters.

Thank you. x



Author's Response:

thank you so much for reviewing!! I HATE cliff hangers - I am always tempted to carry on... I couldn't stop writing after I ended the last chapter and so I am about half way through the next one!

Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2010 Title: PEOPLE LIKE US

Well you have definately set the scene. I have goose bumps already.

Author's Response:

thank you so much

Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 02 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

I was suprised Carlise lost it, it was interesting not to see the cool Dr.  Way to go Rose.

Good chapter, worth the hard work.

Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 45

Another great chapter.  Letting everything out, when you have been trained not to is difficult, you gave Bella the courage to face her father and her father the courage to listen.  Not many do.



Author's Response:

thank you for your great review and comments.

Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Loved the Christmas with the Cullens. Limits on cost of present or having home made are the best. Charlie's picture I teared up, a real gift. Christmas Traditions and family traditions can be wonderful as long as they are safe sane and consensual. My Dad always has to have all the Christmas decorations up the first weekend in December = he's a bit like Emmett.

Author's Response:

Your dad sounds adorable! thanks for the review

Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

loved this chapter the transition from christmas, the interview, private presents and the training session.  It has left me wondering about Jamie and Jeff.  edward and bella have both learned a lot this chapter and i look forward to reading where it takes them.

thank you.



Author's Response:

thank you, thank you, thank you!!!

You are far too generous with those complements. Don't worry about Jaimie and Jeff (although we may meet Jeff at fashion week....family road trip???) thinking about it - don't tell anyone

Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed
Date: 27 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

Bella realises that she is one not two people - great chapter.



Author's Response:

She's beginning to get the picture - thanks for the review

Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

I loved this chapter - I love the interplay between Bella and Edward.  Interesting to see how Bella reacts when her shows are a success.

Have a lovely Chirstmas and I look forward to the coming chapters.



Author's Response:

thank you so much. the outtake will be up in the week

Summary:

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Bella Swan gets a job as a personal assistant to the "The Sexiest Man Alive" Edward Masen while attending USC.  Sparks fly between her much older boss and her, but they soon find that temptation is too hard to fight.

 

It's a coming of age story with Bella, who learns to embrace herself as well as the life she's found herself thrown into, and a little Britward on the side.

 

*WARNING:  Rated NC-17 for language, lemons, and adult sit.*


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 298638 Read Count: 99056
[Report This] Published: 14 Mar 2010 Updated: 15 Dec 2010
Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 11 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loving the story - Edward's  English Slang made me chortle - bye for now need to pop to the loo (TMI).

 

Summary:

This is the story of young Domme Isabella who is looking for a new sub. Her old master Carlisle was the one to introduce her to the BDSM-community of Chicago and he is also helping her find a new sub to train.

On her way to meeting her new sub, she thinks back on her last ten years in the BDSM community and relieves some very hot moments from her life both as a sub and Domme.

At the same time we meet Edward, strong and confident boss of his own firm until the day he discovers a hidden submissive side of himself. We follow him on his journey and maybe one day Domme Isabella and submissive Edward will meet?

Strong content and lots of lemons, be warned!

This is not a BDSM-how-to, so please just read it as the smutty fanfic it is ment to be, thanks! Always wear a condom and take good care of yourself, Edward would!

 

Beta'ed by the lovely MarchHare5


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, Bdsm stories only, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 59156 Read Count: 33584
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2010 Updated: 01 Sep 2010
Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed
Date: 27 May 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Crush

Loving your story so far, the development of the universe and back story of B & E.

Thanks for not deleting it.  loving forward to the next posting.

 

 

Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 04 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Awakening

The last chapter was hard with Tanya and Edward - so pleased Edward has so far trusted Bella to look after him.  I am loving your story - the build up, pace and language.  So calm.

Thanks.

Collide by Robicorn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 127]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Collide Banner

We alone, a little flock,
The few who still remain,
Are exiles wandering through the land
In sorrow and in pain...
We wander in the forests dark,
With dogs upon our track;
And like the captive, silent lamb
Men bring us, prisoners, back.
They point to us, amid the throng,
And with their taunts offend,
And long to let the sharpened ax
On heretics descend

 

Two lost souls trying to figure out where they belong, collide. What happens when Isabella wants out of the plain life she leads that Edward wants to be accepted into? Will Edward face what he is running from to leave with Bella? Or will Bella surrender and embrace her culture?


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 57683 Read Count: 9113
[Report This] Published: 16 Apr 2010 Updated: 04 Sep 2010
Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Edward is definatly lost, then so is Bella - i love this story, at this point i am hoping they chose to become Amish.  It has changed with the almost every other chapter.

Summary:

Sequel to Lustful Awakings. When Bella wakes up from her coma with no memory of her life with Edward, Jasper, and Alice, will they be able to help her remember? Will she still want them if she does remember? Same pairings as in LA. NC-17

Banner by rpattz1990

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Categories: Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Alice/Jasper/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My Favorite Stories, The Awakenings Saga
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 153264 Read Count: 95873
[Report This] Published: 18 Apr 2010 Updated: 14 Sep 2010
Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

loved it



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 28 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

loving this story - the way you are letting the plot unfold - i wonder what is coming up next.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 13 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

Wow what a lot has happened in a year.  Loved your story. 



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

thank you love the chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Summary: Bella is sent on a misson from Dumbledore to protect the Cullens from Lord Voldemort and the Death Eaters.
Hopefully some Naughtyness will be here soon!! Just so you know this is an Edward an Bella story.
Categories: Harry Potter, Twilight, Alternate Universe, Crossover
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 32849 Read Count: 4632
[Report This] Published: 19 Apr 2010 Updated: 20 Jul 2010
Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Just found your story -don't normally like crossovers but i have enjoyed yours - occassionally disjointed and jumpy - jet i am really looking forward to the next installment.  I love the idea of Charlie and Mr W working together - I would love to be a fly on the wall during their work day.

As usual I am in awe with any one with creative ability - who is able to put it out there for the world to see - I know what i like but sadly no ablility.



Author's Response:

Thanks, I somewhat agree about creating something, yet i have a few ideas so i thought i would try....  its an interesting process.....

about the jumpyness i needed to move time along quickly sorry if i didnt do it so smoothly   :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is a student at UW who lives a routine, struggled life, but that changes when she meets Edward Cullen,CEO of his Company. How exactly do they meet? What happens when their lifes collide? Does Bella uncover Edwards darkest secrets or does Edward learn Bellas hidden truths first. D/S Material

 Thanks to bjelaja for taking the time to make this awesome banner! (:

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 38146 Read Count: 62599
[Report This] Published: 24 Apr 2010 Updated: 11 May 2011
Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I am loving the story wonder what is going to happen with tanya, peter and their relationship.  looking forward to the next update.

 

after by unicorngirl Rated: M starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 37]
Summary:

when the cullens move to forks they are told to stay away from bella. but is there more to bella than everyone knows. bad summary good story. all human rated m for language rape and physical abuse


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13586 Read Count: 5751
[Report This] Published: 05 May 2010 Updated: 18 Apr 2011
Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 12 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

just found your story - police, rape and fear - i look forward to Edward & Co helping bella

Chapters shot and to the point - not much back ground - emotional feel low  - i am interested in how your story develops

Summary:

 

 

Lizzie Black left La Push the moment she turned 18, determined to outrun the pain that she felt after her Dad and siblings were hit straight on by a drunk driver and killed. Three years later she's returned, having been called home after her mother committed suicide. While packing up her Mom's room she finds her bucket list, along wth letters to Edward. She decides to do all of the things on the list her Mom never got to, finishing it for her.

Edward Cullen has lived as a nomad since he left Bella. His family and he have little contact, but that could be about to change. Who knew one little list could mean so much?


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 not updated in 6mo reads
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 28904 Read Count: 7046
[Report This] Published: 06 May 2010 Updated: 09 Mar 2011
Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Firsts and more Sorrys

thank you for this chapter - emotional as ever. Go Esme.

Fuggiasco by kdc2239 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 854]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Edward, homeless since age twelve is used to the gritty, hard life. Now twenty, his main goal is to make it in the world, and off the streets. What happens when a girl who seems to be broken beyond repair becomes his new shadow, and needs help more than he can possibly know? 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 153298 Read Count: 65653
[Report This] Published: 10 May 2010 Updated: 22 Jan 2012
Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 The Only One

I am loving your story - I hope the Cullen's are still in Forks and Edward and Bella have an easier time.

Summary:

 

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*WINNER OF HOPELESS ROMANTIC AWARD FOR BEST BABY BELLY*

Thank you to all who nominated and voted for us!!

Esme loves her family, but something is missing. Her familiar world finally comes crashing down when Renesmee and Jacob return from their honeymoon at Isle Esme with the news that they are expecting. What secrets are hidden on the Isle?  Rated for future lemons.

Thanks to Christine for her beautiful banner!


Categories: Twilight, Canon
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 72808 Read Count: 8100
[Report This] Published: 09 Jun 2010 Updated: 24 Sep 2011
Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

What a lovely read.  I've just read all ten chapters - love Esma's point of view.  Such a gental loving women, and a wonderful insight into herself and her family.  Really hope she is able to have what she wants and needs.  I'll keep reading this unfolding story.



Author's Response:

thank you sooo much Rhiannon5!  i have to say i like reading a chunk of a story first, then get updates...it seems to stick in the mind a little better especially when i have so many alerted lol.  i'm so happy you're enjoying this read.  esme's pov is rarely written, and so we thought it was time it was.  thank you for following this story, and we'd love to hear your opinion on it whenever you can.  i will be starting the next chapter in the next day or two, so we hope to not leave too much time between updates.  thanks xx

Summary:

Bella Swan is in for the shock of her life when Edward Cullen comes back into her life 7 years after graduation.  Can the scars from her past be healed by the reclusive musician or will she shut him out like she has everyone else since the fateful accident four years ago. 

Thanks to evilangel813 for my beautiful banner!!

TRIBE won The Emerging Swan Award!


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 124446 Read Count: 27229
[Report This] Published: 10 Jun 2010 Updated: 03 Aug 2011
Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Epilogue #1

Today is a good day for a HEA ending so i'll not read the other.  Thank you.



Author's Response:

No problem... that's why I gave you the option, I didnt' want anyone upset without fair warning.  Thanks for the review!  Hope your day goes well.

My Boys by ButterflyBetty Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 575]
Summary:

Bella Swan hasn't seen her boys, Emmett, Jasper, and Edward Cullen, in over thirteen years. Just when they find each other again, an outside threat nearly tears them apart. B/E, A/J,R/EM. NC-17 for lemons and language.

Banner by Mkystich

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My Boys Saga
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 115498 Read Count: 74628
[Report This] Published: 10 Jun 2010 Updated: 30 Jul 2010
Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

love Rose's point of view - afterall your title is my boys - hearing about Em and J will be wonderful.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Summary:

Story Banner

Isabella Swan knew her past would be back, and that the secrets she kept from her new family would bite her in the ass. She never expected though for her to end up married and pregnant by the time it did. Then again, when it concerns a Potter anything that can happen, will happen. Now that war is taking off Isabella Swan can finally stop pretending to be someone else, and be her true self, Isabelle Lily Potter, the-girl-who-lived.

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Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author.  The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise.  No copyright infringement is intended.

Spoilers for all Harry Potter books and Breaking Dawn, assuming not everyone has already read them.

 


Categories: Harry Potter, Twilight, Hogwarts, Alternate Universe, Crossover
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 19757 Read Count: 3515
[Report This] Published: 12 Jun 2010 Updated: 15 Jul 2010
Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 12 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Come Clean

Interesting Crossover, the first i've liked.  looking forward to England.

Uprising by allforkedup Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 434]
Summary:

Kidnapped into slavery, Edward tries his best to work diligently in order to avoid punishment and keep his wife safe. Nothing about his life is his own, not even the intimacy between him and his Bella... and she, too, could be taken away at any time. What happens when he has no choice but to make a big 'mistake'? What will the punishment be? Will it break him? Inspired by the song 'Uprising' by Muse (which I think has a stupid video).

Contains adult situations and language; please do not read if you are under 18.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished
Chapters: 51 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 181405 Read Count: 50410
[Report This] Published: 14 Jun 2010 Updated: 09 Oct 2011
Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

sweet chapter - like all the coming home chapters of sweet cheeks friends. 

Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I hope someone stops Edward before he leaves - or the issue of the guard and Royce is discussed with Charlie.

The story keeps moving on. good chapter

Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 09 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Wonderful chapter - Still hope that Edward will not leave his wife.

Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Will Edward have sympthy symptoms with Bella? Love they way the story is progressing adapting back just has hard as the enslavement.

 



Author's Response:

I don't think so; our poor boy has suffered enough.

Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Loved the Oprah show and info on the foundation, where can we "donate"?

Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 13 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Whats next?

Summary:

Bella falls pregnant by a womanizing Edward and he wants nothing to do with her or the baby. At least he doesn't think he does, but actions speak louder than words. A story about the beauty and pain of love.

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, To Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126181 Read Count: 187548
[Report This] Published: 16 Jun 2010 Updated: 01 Aug 2011
Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 16 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loving the story, its pace, the plot so far - looking forward to the next instalment.



Author's Response:

So glad to hear that you like it! I posted about ten more chapters... enjoy!

Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1932]
Summary: Past Featured Story

parachute

After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 170944
[Report This] Published: 20 Jun 2010 Updated: 03 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

Loved this chapter - the memory of chocolate pudding.  Please update quickly looking forward to Edward finally seeing his son again.

Thank you. x



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! For those of you who are new to the story, I update every Friday and post teasers on Mondays. The latest teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/) as we speak. I know everyone's excited about Edward finally showing up! I am too, lol! I love reading your reactions to the chapter and answering your questions!


<3  Shel

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"I could have left him at that police station and let the damn state take care of it, but I didn't. I stood up and chose to do it. I had to make difficult decisions on a daily basis. Things that I shouldn't have had to worry about, but I did. Because I loved him. For the past five goddamned years, I've loved him and I've made sure that he was fed and clothed and taken care of. I made sure that he had to best education that I could afford and that he knew that he was loved. I've bled, sweat and cried over this child. So screw you, Mr. Cullen, and the horse you rode in on," she seethed in fury.    

Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

wow what a day



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! For those of you who are new to the story, I update every Friday and post teasers on Mondays. The latest teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/) as we speak, along with some new pictures from this upcoming chapter! We're up to 428 reviews here, so I wanted to remind everyone that the 500th reviewer here will get to pick the subject of one of the Outtakes, just like the 1000th on FFnet and the 500th on Twilighted did. Thank you again for all of your love and support!


XoXo

Shel


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"Wait, you're staying in his house instead of the hotel? Bella, is that really safe? I mean, I know you want to make everyone happy, but you've gotta think about your own safely, seriously!" Alice chastised.

"Calm down, woman. It's his parents house, which is enormous and beautiful. I figured it would be fine, since I was calling you and Dad to let you know where I would be. Just in case you needed somewhere to start looking for the body."

"Bella, do not joke about this! I am going on record as saying that I completely disagree with this decision."

"Duly noted, Alice."

Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

Great Chapter - music, scrapbook and adoption + tears



Author's Response:

 

Thank you so much for your review! Just in case you're unaware, the story updates every Friday and I post teasers on Mondays; the latest teases are up on the Parachute Blog as we speak!

My computer is having issues at the moment, but I don't anticipate any delays for Friday! I normally respond to reviews on Monday afternoons, but said computer issues kept me from it until today! 

Hope you enjoy the teasers!

XoXo  Shel


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The pair got lost in each other's eyes until they were interrupted by the pounding of feet on steps.

Jack skidded to a halt in the hallway at the top of the stairs. He looked between his parents curiously, not quite sure what to make of them standing so close to each other. He walked over to his mother's side and looked up at his father. 

"Is everything okay here, Mom?" he asked Bella, while never taking his eyes off of Edward. 

Bella suppressed a giggle at Jack's attempt at bravado. She placed a hand on her son's shoulder, which caused him to look up at her. She smiled at him and nodded. 

"Everything is just fine, Jack. We were just about to head outside."

 

Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 03 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

What a fun chapter - I wonder about Em and what a cliffy with J.  Keep up the good writing .

 



Author's Response:

 

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak! PLease come join us for the Twitter #readalong on Friday at 8:00 pm, CST! Directions are up on the Blog! Don't hesitate because you've never done one before, neither have I, but I'm going to be there! I'll be happy to answer any questions or if anyone needs anything clarified! 

Love you guys! See you all on Friday with Chapter 15!

XoXo

Shel


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Bella sat down next to Edward on one of the front porch swings. She turned and leaned her back against the side, pulling her right leg up and underneath of her. He turned his head slightly and smirked at her.

"How does it feel to be an old man?" she asked, trying to hide her smile.

He smiled widely and shook his head. "I'm not old."

Bella laughed and shook her head. She noticed that his smile fell as he stared off into the sunset. She nudged him with her foot and he turned to give her a small, sad smile.

"In my mind, I feel like I'm still 22," he sighed. "I haven't really celebrated a birthday in almost five years."    

 

Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed
Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

love Jasper



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogpot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! Included this week are teasers for the next Outtake, titled: Save Me San Francisco.

Also, today is the last day to vote in The Hidden Star Awards! Even if you decide not to vote for Parachute (Best Canon Category). stop by and support your favorite authors/stories that might be up for awards! Link is on my profile and up on the Blog!

XoXo

Shel


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"Good afternoon, Mr. Cullen," a beautiful brunette with ice blue eyes simpered, as she stood from her seat behind a large desk. "I was told you wouldn't be in the office for a few weeks." 

Bella quirked an eyebrow at the girl's blatant flirtatiousness. She looked over at Edward and noticed that his posture immediately straightened and his voice took on a cooler tone.

"Gianna," he nodded to the woman. "I'm only stopping by to grab a few things and to show my family around a little bit."
Bella's eyes cut to his face, surprised to have herself included in that statement. He smiled gently at her before leading her and Jack towards the large corner office.

"Family?" Gianna asked, confused. She didn't spare Bella a second glance, but her jaw dropped as soon as she got a good look at Jack. "Oh my God," she whispered and sat down quickly. As soon as Edward's door closed behind them, she picked up her phone and dialed.

"Jane? You are not going to believe who just walked in here!"    

 

Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

I love this story each chapter forwards the story some quitely some not so, this weeks twist with Marcus - all that double dealing - i look forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like!

Just a silly little note, I play TwiFicTrivia on Twitter every Tuesday at 9 pm EST. It is a ton of fun and very cool. Check it out if you get the chance! 

 <3 Shel

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Esme's eyes turned hard and her lips formed a frown.

"Well, then, I guess there's nothing left to say, is there?" She said in a cold voice.

"Esme, please. I'm not trying to hurt you," Bella replied softly. She had expected this reaction, but it still stung.

"It's a little too late for that now, Bella." Esme stood from her spot behind her desk and silently left the room.

Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25

Wow Victoria and James - great chapter looking forward to the next.  Loving this Tanya.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) One word for you: Charlie!

I know a lot of you get excited for updates and I want you to know that I get just as excited to post it for you, seriously! Your reviews make me smile, laugh and occasionally shed a tear. You guys mean so much to me and I thank you from the bottom of my heart for giving this story a chance in the first place!

Also of note, the Fandom for Preemies total has jumped to over $3,ooo raised for the March of Dimes! Freaking phenomenal! To those of who you won't be able to contribute, but still want to read the Jack Outtake, I'll be posting it on FFnet after Christmas sometime.

♥ Shel ♥

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Tanya sighed. "What happened after we left last night?" 

Emmett's lips quirked, trying to fight a smile. "Mom sucker punched Victoria when she started running her mouth again."

"Esme!" Bella gasped and glanced at Esme, who looked proud of herself. 

"What? She deserved it. I only regret not doing it sooner."

Bella shook her head and tried to hide her giddy smile at the thought of Victoria spread out on the ballroom floor.

Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30

I haven't reviewed in a while.  Each chapter i would say the same thing.  I love it.  I look forward to each new chapter and they never disapoint.   Thank you.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) It ties in with this one nicely.

Voting for the Original Character Awards ends today! We're up for Most Original Plot as well as Jack for Best Offspring and Best Male! It's going to be super tough!

Make sure you leave your pitchforks at the door before reading the teaser! This chapter's drama skyrockets, but I think it's necessary to complete our journey and it's the way that I've always pictured it heading.

♥ Shel ♥

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"Call Tanya and give her this info. She'll know what to do."

"Yes, ma'am. I'll keep my ear to the ground. If I find anything else out, I'll let you know."

Bella pocketed her iPhone and her hands curled into fists. The anger that she had experienced minutes earlier paled in comparison to the rage that coursed through her. The proof that James was a part of Jack's abandonment was black and white in front of her face. She fully planned on marching back into that office and tearing a new asshole into anyone who dared to get in her way. When the elevator reached the final floor, she was alone.

The doors opened and before she could step out, she found herself once again face to face with James Brooks. His eye widened in shock and her fist flew without thought. He swiftly caught her hand and pushed her back into the elevator with his body weight. "

What the hell are you doing?" he hissed angrily.

"You- you-" she stuttered. "You piece of shit! I'm not leaving here until I talk to Edward. I know who you are and what you did to Jack. You're a miserable excuse for a human being!" she shouted in her fury.

Quicker than she could blink, one of his forearms was pressed against her throat menacingly while the other hand gripped her by the hair.

"You couldn't just leave, could you?" he ground out. "No, you had to be Miss High-And-Mighty. From the first moment I laid eyes on you, I knew you'd be a challenge."

Summary:

Edward and Bella were highschool sweathearts. Bella and Edward got pregnant with their 4 year old daughter, Caroline when they were 18. They got married when they found out. Did they marry for the right reasons? Are they faithful to each other? And what happens when Bella falls pregnant again and Edward has  uncontrolable mood swings? This is my first story so please bear with me! this story contains language and sexual content.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2299 Read Count: 1443
[Report This] Published: 06 Jul 2010 Updated: 17 Jan 2011
Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

What a situation he's got himself into - Looking forward to the ride.  Keep writing don't worry about reviews they will come.

Summary:

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bella is a naive girl. she thinks nothing can happen to her, she thinks she will find the perfect man, have an okay job, struggle alittle, than have kids and settle down.

how wrong she was. she meets this boy who is perfect, or so she thinks. one thing leads to another and bella is stuck in a world she can not nor ever get out of. she tries but in the end she is always for ever his.

nc-17 for rape, lemons, killing, drugs,etc.

warning: dark edward and sexual abuse

Hey everyone so my story has been reported for all the lemons sexual abuse drugs and rape. Even though it states these things in the warning and is in the nc-17 category. I have not violated any rules and my stories are not as graphic as many are on this website. So if this story is deleted you know why.  Sorry to all those enjoying it and wanting more, I apologize for this one persons actions in advance. If you want to know who reported this story just look in the reviews and you will see! 

-Love Sinister :D

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 44973 Read Count: 37897
[Report This] Published: 07 Jul 2010 Updated: 23 Jun 2013
Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: preface

Darkward - Why Bella?  Why Then did he take her Chapter 1?  Emmett got Rose! do we find how and when?  Is Alice in this universe?  In the 9 Months what happened to the children?  Lots of questions don't expected answers hope they are answered in future chapters.  Please update and complete.



Author's Response:

and you r right those r going to be answered soon.

Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 6: lost

Love your story - yes it's twisted.  Go Daniel.  Why did he leave three of his siblings?  Are they closest to Edward.

Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: head start

So pleased you are back - i am suprised she didn't run after shooting Jasper. 

Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed
Date: 14 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 9: abandon and sacrifice

I can not believe Alice left her child.   I understand Bella's reluctance to tell.  But in the end Alice would not be safe, is not safe either way. 

Thank you.

Summary:

Banner created by xrxdanixrx

 

Edward Cullen is a 21 year old man who has the world at his finger tips. He has a great education, money, and plenty of women. The things he feels he's entitled to...but what happens when an innocent meeting with a beautiful, but older Isabella Swan at a coffee shop turns into something he never expected.

Will a hot and assertive woman like Bella, who likes to take control, finally be able to teach a young cocky Edward about life, sex, and women?

Thrust into a world filled with pain, pleasure, and all too consuming desire...Edward soon realizes it's a life he can't live without.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 Chocolate Brown & Leather Whips teaser trailer by Emily Bowden

 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HBsINM0Nu3Q

 

 Teaser Trailer #2

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=20q3OG5zRwQ


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 318635 Read Count: 70417
[Report This] Published: 08 Jul 2010 Updated: 29 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prolouge-My Mistress

love twitter no love the start of your story yes. 

Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 31 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter Seven- The Eyes Have It

Edwards found another way to Bella - that wonderful.   Doesn't suprise me Em and being a pain baby. 

Loving your story.



Author's Response:

Awe thanks, bb. I am so happy that people are giving it a chance, and I work hard not to disappoint anyone.

As for Emmett...such a big guy and a huge wuss.

I can't stand the wait..I havent wrote the chapter yet, but it's playing in my head. I need to write it down...

Much love, hun! Thanks for the review!

Korry

Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter Nine~Play With Me~

If he had not said Bella - he could have been in the clear.  At least everything is out.  Loving your slow burn.

Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11- Passive Aggressive

Well Em is a real Teddy Bear.  Think Edward's in for a suprise.

Play With Me by angela4148 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 222]
Summary:

Edward gets talked into meeting Bella, a Dominatrix who is looking for a new submissive. Will Edward hand over control to a woman who he barely knows? Will Bella lose some of the control she fights so hard to keep? ALL EPOV. Cannon Pairs, lots-O-lemons and funnies.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 81629 Read Count: 33000
[Report This] Published: 09 Jul 2010 Updated: 30 Dec 2010
Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Ch 1 You Want Me to What?

Loved Domella, piercing or no piercing is the question!



Author's Response:

it's chapter one, we all know what he's going to do! OUCH!! LOL

The Mafia Mistress by rayne Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 396]
Summary:

 

"Finally she was mine and I relished in the feeling. No longer did I have to fear the what if's or maybe's. She belonged to no one else except me and until the day I breathe my last, she will be all I needed. My Mafia Queen." AH/OOC. NO UNDER 18's PLEASE


Categories: Twilight, All Human, Canon
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 41151 Read Count: 37023
[Report This] Published: 12 Jul 2010 Updated: 09 Jan 2012
Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 6: The First Dinner

wow what a family dinner - Bella is not well going with the Cullen's, strangers?

Tanya yak

Matthew what a cutie - Autism horried condition have a cousin with it he is unable to speak only points to a board for communication.  Pleased Edward hears his voice and has some communication.

Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4106]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 918145 Read Count: 850348
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2013
Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

you have me interested looking forward to the next chapter - jake is definatly whipped.

Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 22 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

i have no negative feelings towards differing POV or third person in a chapter - as long as it makes sense, clearly labled and drives the story forward. 

Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Love this story - Love Edward and all the back history - looking forward to the plot unfolding.



Author's Response:

Thanks for leaving a review… here’s a teaser for you…lml

 

 

After checking the front door - out of habit - and closing the blinds in the living room, we were back in my room, naked sitting on the bed talking. He asked about birth control.

 

“I’m not on anything. There was no reason for it.” Edward tilted his head to the side. “I figure you weren’t unless you had some medical condition. I mean you haven’t had sex in what...How many years?” He grinned mischievously.

 

 “I’ve had sex.” I stated mater-of-factly. His face was full of confusion “But you said you haven’t been with a man in a long time.”

 

 “I haven’t” His eyebrows raised “A woman?”

 

“No!” Now he was really confused, he looked around the room, eyeing my night stand. “Oh...self-induced sex. What do you have in here Isabella?” His hand was heading for said night stand.

 

Lonesome Hearts by damsell Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2172]
Summary: Past Featured Story

lonesome 


lh


New banner by Julie C.


Eighteen year old Bella Swan has moved to the small Western town of Spoons Valley to meet up with her older brother, Emmet, after their parents' deaths.  She always figured that the Wild West that she read about would be like the descriptions in Harper's Weekly, but she didn't realize just how wild and dangerous things would get once she arrived.


AH.  Canon Couples.



Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Action, Historical, Humor, Mystery, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Finished, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 90 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131753 Read Count: 237118
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 30 Nov 2010
Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 20 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Rose likes making life hard - fear.   the mail order bride Alice?

Summary:

 

 Thank you to Mekek18 for the great banner

Entry for the Twi-Girl Revolutions "Under Her Thumb" Challenge. Follow Edward as he auditions and becomes the sub of a strict Domme. Will it just be a professional relationship or will it become more? BDSM. Mature.ExB


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, Bdsm stories only, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10926 Read Count: 8543
[Report This] Published: 27 Jul 2010 Updated: 12 Sep 2010
Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 28 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Got to feel for Edward - go Bella.

The Cleaner by slyt2 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 50]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Living in a abandoned warehouse with other runaways, they survive the only way they can. Bella soon
realizes there are bigger scarier 'monsters' out in the world when they get involved in a life or death situation. Will Edward end up being her savoir or the one who destorys her.  OOC/AH
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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 53948 Read Count: 3293
[Report This] Published: 30 Jul 2010 Updated: 07 Jan 2011
Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Read the story straight through to chapter 3 - what a rush, lovely start - going to read again.

 



Author's Response:

Well I'm so glad you found my story and you are enjoying it... thanks so much for reviewing I love to hear the thoughts of the readers.

Summary:

he made me the weirdest offer that i have every heard in my life," Will you bear my children?" little did i know what i was really getting myself into. a/n all human


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9760 Read Count: 5841
[Report This] Published: 31 Jul 2010 Updated: 01 Oct 2011
Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

What a beginning and Edward - yak.

Looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

i'm wrting the next chapter now,  i hope u engoy it :) and review! - mili

Summary:

Bella, Edward, Alice, Jasper, Rose, and Emmett are back for the sequel to My Boys. What will the future hold for our favorite three couples? AH & NC-17 for language and lemons. E/B, J/A, Em/R, C/Es, Ch/R.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My Boys Saga
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 97755 Read Count: 31100
[Report This] Published: 31 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Mar 2011
Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

what a cliffy - all late i wonder what Carlise was thinking !



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed
Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

no yelling, oh boy - Bella & Edward what a life.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Summary:

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Edward Masen was brought up in a world where responsibility to your family and class was everything. Tired of the endless pursuits of women he becomes more and more jaded. That is until, he meets his match…..


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 113881 Read Count: 13371
[Report This] Published: 31 Jul 2010 Updated: 03 Dec 2010
Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 02 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 3: 3. Beginnings

Hi I've read straight to here, loved the epilogue 10/10.  Can see how everyone fits - is Ben going to be the obnoxious Vicar.  Kissing her - would never happen, too soon.  Looking forward to your changes from Twilight and P&P to D&D.



Author's Response:

Thank you! The vicar will be another obnoxious fellow :) Hope you enjoy the rest of the story.

Summary: Past Featured Story

An average girl going about her daily life of college, work at the school, a boyfriend, apartment, etc is about to find her world ripped away when she finds herself plucked out of her normality and shoved in a whole new world that's totally not her own. Bella finds herself in the hands of kidnappers carting her off to become some man's new posession. Will she fight it? Or will she give in to the darkness and submit to him in every way imaginable?

 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 64243 Read Count: 28949
[Report This] Published: 05 Aug 2010 Updated: 06 Jul 2011
Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 27 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Kneeling With Pride, Yeah Right

Loving the story - powerful - all that infomation on Bella - down to finger prints wow.

Just one quick question in chapter 2 Bella described herself as 19 and in chapter 3 - 23 how old is she?

Looking forward to chapter 4



Author's Response:

Thank you for pointing that out to us! It was a brain fart on our part but it's fixed now. She's actually 23. Thank you for your Review :)

Soulmate by tinaababy Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 361]
Summary:

Edward Masen is a single father, ex-con, and an ex drug user. He and his child move to Forks for a fresh start. Bella Swan is a straight edge young woman. When these two people meet, the attraction is inexplicable. AH/M.

Disclaimer: I do not own Twilight. Stephenie Meyer and Summit own the right. I just play around with the characters. Lyrics credited to Natasha Bedingfield's song "Soulmate."

Banner by: FrozenSoldier

Soulmate Banner

 

Blinkie by: Rason

Soulmate Blinkie

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 130298 Read Count: 45246
[Report This] Published: 07 Aug 2010 Updated: 31 Jan 2012
Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 13 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I understand depression, killing off Charlie heart attach good reference back to the book and film Twilight.  Loving the story now you have set up the background of  Edward and Bella looking forward the next chapter.

Summary:

Living in a small town, Elizabeth was content with her life. That is, until someone from her hurtful past comes back into town and threatens the quiet life she has built for herself. Will she pass the test of strength or suffer more heartbreak?


Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 703 Read Count: 8
[Report This] Published: 08 Aug 2010 Updated: 08 Aug 2010
Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Elizabeth is a really good friend - may be too good.  It did feel a little rushed though. You have set the story up enough for me to interested in her past. 

Enduring Love by Rayday Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 92]
Summary:

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Edward leaves more than just Bella behind during New Moon.  Unbeknownst to Edward, he leaves Bella pregnant and in more danger than he could have ever dreamed possible.  Now three years later a reunion is possible.  Will they finally be a family or will a new danger stop that from ever happening?

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Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 42341 Read Count: 5950
[Report This] Published: 08 Aug 2010 Updated: 16 Oct 2011
Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I am really enjoying your story.  Love all the different pov that move the story forward.  It is lovely that Bella gave her children love and told them of their whole family.

Wonderful chapter.

Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Yes loving your story.  Great chapter looking forward to the Cullen's meeting the kids.

Summary:

In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to donate blood and abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when her parents are killed by a vampire. She is adopted by her parents' friends, who happen to be vampires. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured? Will one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and bloodplay.
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I want to thank Dazzled~by~Jake for this awesome banner! And my awesome Beta Lindz! xo


 

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Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 316008 Read Count: 147541
[Report This] Published: 14 Aug 2010 Updated: 26 May 2012
Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Another great chapter - the plot thickens.



Author's Response:

Thank you =)

And thanks for reading and commenting.

Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

well worth the wait

Angela's coming to town.  We meet p & c.  Plus a serial killer it seems.



Author's Response:

Thank you =) I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter.

I believe Angela will be coming up in ch 11. There will be more of Peter and Char in future chapters. And yeah...there's a crazy vamp going on a little rampage, but there's a reason why he's killing.  

Thanks for reading and commenting.

Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 17 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

What a full chapter - loved it - What a horrid blood bank.  Twice a month seems a lot - what does nine vials equate to?



Author's Response:

Thank you =)

I did a little research for the chapter.lol There are different sizes of blood vials. There's 5ml, 7ml, 10ml and even 15ml. There may be larger ones but I'm not sure. For this story, I'd use the 15ml vial so that's about ml 135 of blood.

Thanks for reading/commenting =)

Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 05 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Just read all the chapters again. Love it.  James and Tanya deserve each other.  I wonder about the pills, effect of all the donation on Bella's body, the way things are going she'll not make old bones.  The impact Bella and Edward's mating will have on the wider community human and vampire.  Looking forward to your next installment.



Author's Response:

Thank you =) I'm happy that you are enjoying this story. Carlisle's concern about the pills is coming up, just finished that part actually. lol  And you'll find out soon what the vamp community thinks about Edward and Bella.  There's so much to cover, it's exhausting. lol

Thank you for reading and commenting. I'll have the next chapter finished soon.

Mocked by Faith by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 58]
Summary:

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For Alexia Cross and Justin McNear, things are not what they seem.  Both were born and raised in hidden, gated communities.  A place where time virtually stands still and marriages are arranged by parents before a child’s 18th birthday.

Alexia is destined to be her community’s first spinster.  In a last ditch effort, a husband is found.  The only complication?  He has no idea he has been betrothed. Will his history of dating outsiders help or hinder his relationship with his future wife?

Justin McNear searched outside his church for the woman of his dreams. Returning home after failing, he knows he needs to rectify his life and his faith. Can a woman he’s never met make him whole again?

Will this couple end up mocked by their own faith?  Follow Alexia and Justin through the trials and tribulations of finding, falling, and surviving each other's love. It’s never easy saying “I do” to someone you don’t.

 


Categories: Original Fiction, Romance
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges: TWCS First Annual Original Fiction Contest - CLOSED
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2359 Read Count: 1047
[Report This] Published: 14 Aug 2010 Updated: 17 Sep 2011
Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2010 Title: Mocked by Faith

Found your story and loved it - made me smile.  A good reminder not to listen to rubbish coming out of peoples mouths.  I hate gossip, very little is ever proven true.

The motification and quick assumption of the parents due to a incorrectly folded towel.  This Religous community needs to practice a little more of what they preach.

Looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

I am so happy to hear you are enjoyng this story! Thank you for reading it. I am glad my message got through about rumors. they usual just hurt people for no good reason.

The minister and council attends the exchange so if something like this happens, he can smooth it out before it gets ugly. So their church understands, it's the fathers that need to learn.

I hope you continue to enjoy the story as it unfolds. Thank you again!

Summary:

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Summery: Eight years has passed since the Cullen's left forks, and Bella behind. While Bella has found at least some happiness in life the Cullen family has fallen apart at the seems. Rosalie has had enough, can they find Bella or is it already to late?

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author.  The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise.  No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Twilight, Canon, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Action, Drama, Romance, Supernatural
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7927 Read Count: 1667
[Report This] Published: 15 Aug 2010 Updated: 15 Aug 2010
Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Had Enough

go Rosalie

Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Moving

Interesting Story so far looking forward to the next chapter

He Lives In You by tina Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 58]
Summary:

How do you ease the pain of losing a son, a brother, a friend, follow Edward and Bella and the rest of the Cullens as they bury their son Christopher Sean Cullen. All Human, OOC

Contains mentions of suicide and rape in later chapters,

Rated M

 

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STORY IS NOW UP AND RUNNING AGAIN THANKS FOR BEING PATIENT!!!!!!

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Humor
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 83669 Read Count: 7567
[Report This] Published: 22 Aug 2010 Updated: 29 Jun 2011
Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: He Lives In You

Doesn't feel like a prologue, and it suddenly ends feel - left feeling cheated. Saying all that loved it.  I shed a tear. looking forward to chapter 1.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review and this hasn't been the easiest thing to write but I promise it does get better

If Only by nilo24 Rated: NC-17 Round robin starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 92]
Summary:

Edward and Tanya cullen have been married for several years, and live a wealthy and fairly tale lifestyle. They have one problem though, Tanya cannot conceive. When efforts to adopt a child fail, they decide to use Edward's sperm on another woman, who is willing to carry their child.

Enter Bella swan, a prostitute who is willing to become a surrogate mother for couple.  Their relationship becomes ,…..

 

This story is about : Romance , hurt , Real life happiness and sadness and all the Character of Twilight will be here ,too


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25869 Read Count: 9713
[Report This] Published: 26 Aug 2010 Updated: 28 Oct 2011
Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 26 Aug 2010 Title: If Only

great start

Author's Response:

Wow, First Review , yohoooooo ,thanx i dont like the way this site is . its really hard to put pictures and Edit and i dont like the Font . but what can i do ,....

Summary:

What happens when Rosalie calls Edward and tells him about Bella jumping? No, he doesn’t go to Italy. Instead, he goes back in Forks. What is going to happen?


Categories: Alternate Universe, Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3014 Read Count: 779
[Report This] Published: 27 Aug 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2010
Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love it - Have you read SM outtakes Rose and Edwards reactions to the cliff jumping and phone call?

Spacing between paragraphs and dialog would help with ease of reading this work.  Just a suggestion.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

 



Author's Response:

I'm sorry for the spacing. I also write on fanfiction dot net and I just typed Ctrl+C/Ctrl+V, but it was weird when I saw the preview, so I did it like that, but now that you have mentioned it, I think I'll change it.

No, I haven't read the outtakes, because I don't know where I can find them...:(

Thank you for reviewing and I hope you will keep reading this story!

Love,

Monica

Summary:

After Bella's eighteenth birthday party when Jasper tried to attack her, the Cullen family left her at her most weakest. Soon after they left, Bella found out that she was pregnant with Edward's child, and the only people that she could trust was Angela Webber and Ben Cheney. It's been about ten years. What happens when the Cullen family returns to Washington, finding out that?


Categories: Canon, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance, Supernatural, Suspense/Thriller
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 19344 Read Count: 4979
[Report This] Published: 28 Aug 2010 Updated: 25 Sep 2010
Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 28 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 8: He did come for the treasure

loving the story - had to read from start straight through.

Summary:

Bella suffers from 'episodes' as Charie so dubbed, where she walks around the house in the middle of the night and most often, although not always, ends up hurt and in the ER. It all stems from being kidnapped at fourteen and held captive for a year, she is now twenty four and realizing just how much damage its done to her life...

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Horror
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 15891 Read Count: 3738
[Report This] Published: 06 Sep 2010 Updated: 29 Aug 2011
Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 06 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

What a wonderful start - looking forward to the journey.

Summary:

For the past eight years, Emmett, Bella, and Edward have been siblings thanks to the marriage of Edward's father to Em and Bella's mom.  Edward and Bella are best friends, but as their world expands to include the world of college, so does the relationship between Bella and Edward.  Will their family survive when Bella realizes she has more than brotherly love for her other brother?

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 73513 Read Count: 85046
[Report This] Published: 10 Sep 2010 Updated: 25 Jan 2011
Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed
Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: My Other Brother

Great chapter setting up the back story and family dynamics.

Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Tanya never get a fair shake on fanfictions - any way i loved how Bella was a good friend to Edward and stopping a huge mistake if he had just taken Tanya's word.  What a thing to do to someone - very low self esteeme.

PS love the story so far.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Third story in the Awakenings Saga. Join Bella, Edward, Alice, and Jasper as they face their toughest challenge yet, the stress of having school aged kids. Will they be able to survive? Or will this tear them apart? NC-17, AH. Same pairings as in LA & SA

 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Alice/Jasper/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Themslovebug90's read stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, My Favorite Stories, The Awakenings Saga
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 189515 Read Count: 50856
[Report This] Published: 14 Sep 2010 Updated: 26 Jan 2014
Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Definately enjoyed the first part of part 3.  I love the way you forward the story and have a lemon. 



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 17 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Really loved this chapter - Edward's day was lovely to read about.  I wonder if the teacher has an issue with the family lifestyle?



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed
Date: 10 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Hi I haven't reviewed in a while.  Just wanted to say "I love your writing.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Summary:

Bella is found six years after she was kidnapped. Can her friends and family save her from the pain? DEALS WITH DARK SUBJUCT MATTER AND GRAPHIC ABUSE. NC-17 for language, violence, and just about everything esle you can imagine. Read with caution.

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, butterflybetty stories to read , I Whitlock's read , G8or Favor8s Read, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 114196 Read Count: 77663
[Report This] Published: 23 Sep 2010 Updated: 06 Nov 2010
Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Love Rose and Jasper, wait until they find out their parents point of view.  I wonder how they will react?

 



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

The play ground is a war zone.  Communication understanding are often lost.  Dark times.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

What a lovely chapter father daughter days can be so much fun - so pleased Charlie and Isabella got this day.

Great yet painful story.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Epilogue

Thank you.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

A Year and a Day by fiberkitty Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

When Jasper and Edward switch the roles they play in their relationship, they find there are lessons that carry far beyond a year and a day. Some BDSM elements.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica, Romance, Slash
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5131 Read Count: 1694
[Report This] Published: 21 Oct 2010 Updated: 21 Oct 2010
Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 21 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved the snapshots of the year and the detailed third chapter.   All three chapters fun, hot and lacey nickers.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing!

Writing Exercises by fiberkitty Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 25]
Summary:

A collection of my writing excercises- some drabbles, some longer one-shots.  Various pairings and subjects. Each will be noted.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica, One-Shot, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6671 Read Count: 2463
[Report This] Published: 21 Oct 2010 Updated: 21 Oct 2010
Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Twister

Twister with the cullens - what fun. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing!

Summary:

In a world of vices, wrongs and rights everyone will put those aside to fight for the right to live. Edward Cullen is a twenty five year old single father of a four month old baby girl named Katie. He lived with his older brother and sister in law in Hayward CA. Bella is a twenty two year old single female that has been living on an island for the last six months. They come with baggage, emotional struggles and a common goal. Strangers becoming family and fighting for a little slice of peace. Can personalities that clash survive the zombie attacks that are taking over the world? What is Salvation House and who will make it there alive?

 Rated NC-17 for language, limes and lemons in future chapters.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Action
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Ageise02 To Read 2
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 93057 Read Count: 16503
[Report This] Published: 25 Oct 2010 Updated: 24 Jun 2011
Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 26 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Well you have me hooked.  Apart ot Shawn of the Dead not into zombie movies, however I love what you have written so far. 



Author's Response:

I love Shawn of the dead! I am glad that you like it. The next post will be on Friday. Thank you again for the love, Shawney and I both appreciate it.

Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 05 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

This story is starting to take shape, I love eccentric families.

Author's Response:

TY for reading and reviewing Rhiannon I'm excited about where this story is going also.  There will be an update very soon

TY again for reading and reviewing

IP28 and Shawney

Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 26 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Lovely chapter - zombies attach remember on the run to take credit cards - check.



Author's Response:

Hi Rhiannon thanks for reading and reviewing we do hope you like the chapters updates coming soon.

Thanks,

IP28 and Shawney

Summary:

What if there was one more thing that Edward had to tell Bella bout being a Cullen. The real reason he was so mad with Alice for offering to change Bella had little to do with the lose of her humanity but more to do with sex. WHat if Edward kinda bent the truth when he Told Bella He was a virgin.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7290 Read Count: 6818
[Report This] Published: 06 Nov 2010 Updated: 11 Nov 2010
Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Hi you have set a complex matrix of relationships I am looking forward to seeing you explore. 

On a technical note Edward is not a Victorian.  The Victorian era ended January 1901 with the death of Queen Victoria the next era that Edward was born into was the Edwardian 1901 to 1910, though often extended to the end of WW1.  Sorry for history bit - I have read a lot of fan fiction that but Edward as a Victorian and the out look between the two eras was quite different.  Hence Edwards outlook.

 

Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Bella not running.  I wonder what she is thinking about - really.

Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I think stick to cannon and Bella has a baby - interesting how that would impact on the dynamic.