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Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4106]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 918145 Read Count: 852219
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2013
Reviewer: dax Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 110: Chapter 110

Hello,

Thank you thank you thank you. I founfd your story last week and have been deligently reading it ever since. I am sorry I didn't comment on each chapter I just couldnt stop reading. I love this story. It is amazingly well written and ties in so many subplot so well it is fantastic. I play at being a submissive somewhat like Roselie in your story and it was amazing and very moving to see someon who had gone through a sexual trama still want to act submissive. I hav overcome my old feeling of wondering is I was a freak but it was very empwering to see that in a story. I am amazed at how well you are pulling everything together. I hope yor life slows down so you can keep working on the story. For now I think I will go back and reread it to make sure i didn't miss anything in my zest to keep reading. I also love how you are providing so many exapmles and ideas about D/S lifestles. It is an amzing piece of work. Thank you.

 

Summary:

Upon returning to Forks, Edward quickly learns that trying to remove supernatural forces from Bella's life by leaving was in vain. She's undergone a transformation that he couldn't have even imagined. Watch as they navigate the new dynamic of their relationship, fight old enemies, make new friends, and face down a threat they couldn't have even conceived of.

*WARNING: Rated NC-17 for language, lemons, and adult sit*

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Romance, Supernatural
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89621 Read Count: 6210
[Report This] Published: 21 Aug 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2011
Reviewer: dax Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

This is a good story. I hope you continue writing more chapters.

Reviewer: dax Signed
Date: 25 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

That was a wonderful chapter and I think you portrayed emmitt and Rosalie perfectly. i can't wait for more I love this story.

Reviewer: dax Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

yippy. I loved the chapter and I love caleb. Jaspers reaction to leah was perfect along with his talk to paul. I love this story and I can't wait for more. i hope it continues long after the fight. I just don't think I will get enough can't wait for the next chapter.

The Moment by ButterflyBetty Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 159]
Summary:

One moment, I was a young, carefree girl and the next, I was writhing around on the ground, as the venom surged through my body. NC-17 for language and lemons.


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Supernatural
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , Fics to Read, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 53585 Read Count: 20796
[Report This] Published: 19 Oct 2010 Updated: 10 Nov 2010
Reviewer: dax Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

That was a great story thank you. This is the first Bella Carlisle story that has actually made snes and i greatly enjoyed it thank you. ANd any story that kills Aro get a plus.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Summary:

Picks up at the end of Eclipse, where Bella is kissing Jacob and instead of discovering some love for him, she finds him just a friend.  This is my version of Breaking Dawn, wherein sacrifices have to be made for eternity with the one you love.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 52 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 271871 Read Count: 26343
[Report This] Published: 21 Oct 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2012
Reviewer: dax Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

I have to applude this story it really is wonderful. I love the none Breaking dawn everything tied up in a bowness it seems more real this way. Thank you for an interesting read.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  There's definitely some letting go in this story, there had to be.  Thanks for checking it out!

Reviewer: dax Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

I love your story I can't get enough of it. I love the character intereactions you have a wonderful grasp of each character. thank you for the wonderful read..



Author's Response:

Thank you so much :) I enjoy bringing them more to life!  That's a wonderful compliment, made me night!  Thank you again!

Summary:

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Canon Prequel to Twilight.  Carlisle Cullen had experienced a long existence of isolation and facade, but the final wish of a dying woman sets him on a path to end his solitude forever. As he brings Edward and Esme into his life, will they form a family, or a mere collection of lost souls?  1918-1930s, depicting the rebirth of Edward and Esme into the world of vampires.  Canon. Carlisle x Esme, Edward.  Lemons later.

Thanks to Coleen561 for my banner!

'Prelude in C' has been nominated in the Sunflower Awards. Voting began May 4th.

Prelude in C has won the Vampie Newborn Award for Bloody Brilliant (Best Overall) (1-50 reviews/chapter)!

Prelude in C was also nominated for Inspired Fan Fic Awards; Prelude made it to the second round of voting.  

Vampie Award


Categories: Twilight, Canon
Characters: None
Genre: Supernatural
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 73724 Read Count: 2419
[Report This] Published: 02 Nov 2010 Updated: 08 May 2011
Reviewer: dax Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I always like storys that talk about Edwards begining. Congrats on the story.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Professor Cullen wonders if he has found his next submissive in his Human Sexuality class, but she has been right before him for years unnoticed.  When he finally sees her will it be too late?

 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89699 Read Count: 106996
[Report This] Published: 03 Nov 2010 Updated: 24 Apr 2012
Reviewer: dax Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 2: October's Entries

This looks like it will be a fun read. I like the story set up. I cant wait for more.

Getting Warmer by eiluned price Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 50]
Summary:

After their honeymoon on Isle Esme, Bella gets to spend more time being human with Edward as they travel cross-country to New Hampshire and beyond, and learn about art, love and temperature differentials. AU. BxE. Newlyweds being newlyweds, so lemons.


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 159812 Read Count: 4556
[Report This] Published: 19 Nov 2010 Updated: 26 Apr 2012
Reviewer: dax Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: NYP

I love this. I can't wait for more chapters.

Reviewer: dax Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: YNY

that was a wonderful chapter I cant wait for more. I think the hiking trip will be funny.

Reviewer: dax Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: CDG

It was wonderful to remember my trip through Pars with Bella and Edward however I wish I had some to give me Bella's french lesson. I love your story and can't wait to see a new chapter it is wonderfuland I always want there to be more. Goddluck with the next chapter I can't wait.

Reviewer: dax Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: ORY

it is wonderful to see a new chapter I just ove the story. Hope to see more soon

Reviewer: dax Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: URO

Wow that was fantastic. I was starting to miss our story a lot however the length and complication of the chapter made up for the time fabulousl. I think the other two vampires and what the cullens did during the war was a perfect idea and would fit their personalities. I am so excited for the next chapter thank you for an amazing story to read.

 

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Summary: Past Featured Story

What if Edward did not take the dramatic route and wait till noon to step into the sun in Volterra?  What if Alice and Bella were incapable of getting to him in time?  What if he was not the only casualty of bad timing and misread visions?

 

This story takes us down an alternate path than what we followed in New Moon.  The Cullen’s are no longer whole and Bella is so badly damaged that she may be unreachable as she closes herself off to the pain of the outside world.

 

Can a new love save her?  Can his voice pull her from the darkness?

 

This story is rated NC-17 for major angst, suicide and the possibility of far off lemons (who am I kidding?  If you have read any of my stories, you know there will be lemons…but not for a while).

The top banner and this lovely blinkie is brought to you by my banner goddess, MissKingAtYourService.  Check out her blog at misskingatyourservice.blogspot.com/.


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 140978 Read Count: 54173
[Report This] Published: 24 Dec 2010 Updated: 09 Apr 2012
Reviewer: dax Signed
Date: 28 May 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19- Sex, Lingerie and the City

I enjoy your story. I wonder will someone tell Bella that Carlisle and her are really mates. I can't wait for more that was a fun chapter



Author's Response:

I am not sure if this subject will ever come up with Bella.  I need to think on it.  Thanks so much for the review.

If you would like to vote for AVitD for the Avant Garde Awards, here is the link.

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Till next time

Nickey

The Transfer by bannerday Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 389]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella transfers to the University of Washington her junior year. The incredibly beautiful guy with the coppery-bronze hair is such a jerk when their lives first collide, but they can't ignore the fact that they are drawn to each other. However...Bella has a boyfriend back home and Edward is adamantly unavailable; a horrible experience in his past has made him reluctant to form any attachments or new friendships. But sometimes, when you least expect it, you find something you didn't even know you were looking for; something that will change your life irrevocably and unconditionally.

Lots of humor, tons of romance and occasional angst, featuring a rather nosy and intrusive Emmett, Rose, Jasper and Alice. Add a potential stalker into the mix to stir things up. Top it all off with undeniable sexual tension and eventually some very hottt sexy-times.

A big round of applause for Z-21 and Twi-Holoic for the amazing banners! *clap, clap, clap, clap, clap*


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012
Chapters: 73 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 511972 Read Count: 68641
[Report This] Published: 13 Mar 2011 Updated: 09 Dec 2011
Reviewer: dax Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64: The Bubble Bursts

I can't wait to see how this continues. i love the story thank for a new chapter can the nextone come soon please.

Wild by PeppahLouie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 638]
Summary:

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  • Winner of FIVE 2011 Sunflower Awards: Best All-Human, Best Drama, Best Romance, Best Bella, Best Alice
  • Winner of Fic of the Week at The Lemonade Stand, September 2011

 

Recently widowed Bella moves to Seattle to start a new life. Reconnecting with her friend, Bella meets Alice's brother, Chef Edward Cullen. Celibate by choice for 2 years, what happens when Edward finds himself undeniably attracted to a sexy new Bella?

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, To Read, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 436368 Read Count: 140018
[Report This] Published: 03 Apr 2011 Updated: 19 Dec 2011
Reviewer: dax Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - How She Got Here

I just found this story and read it straight through,let me tell you that is an annoying chapter to have to stop at bbut the story is fantastic. thank you for not making Jared or Billy evil/purposely part of the plot. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: dax Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41 - Caught

Thank you for not making us wait to long for this chapter. I love the lighting strike.Can't wait for more

On The Edge by jesspace Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

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What does it mean to “be on the edge”?  
Well Edward is about to find out.

Jasper and Edward have been living in a D/s relationship for several years.  Recently, life has gotten in the way slightly.  Work... school.... you name it.  

Just before Edward arrives home after his classes, Jasper makes a decision.  He’s been much to relaxed with his precious pet.  It’s time for a change.  It’s time to take his pet to the edge.....

 

Disclaimer: SM owns all.  I simply take her characters and make them do dirty things.  Tee hee.  
Also, this story is only for people 18 and older.  If you aren’t allowed into a porn store in RL, you’re not allowed in this porn store (aka my mind... a dark and dirty wonderful place). 
This is a D/s story and a slash story.  So if any of that stuff (whips, chains, and boy-on-boy action) squicks you out.... don’t read further.  It’s as simple as that!

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica, One-Shot, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8110 Read Count: 1953
[Report This] Published: 28 Apr 2011 Updated: 28 Apr 2011
Reviewer: dax Signed
Date: 28 May 2011 Title: Chapter 1: On The Edge

WOW that was hot and wonderful. I hope you decide to write more that was just amazingly hot.

Mr. Cullen by Bekki Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 322]
Summary:

 

 

 

Edward's life is changed when he and his family move to the small town of Forks, Washington. Being a teacher as a vampire proves to be a bit more difficult than he'd once imagined. Join Edward and the gang as they move to this new town and meet the chief of police's lovely daughter that will forever affect their lives. 

 

Disclaimer: I Do not own Twilight or it's Characters. 

 

Beta'ed by RAH70890

 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Humor, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 107008 Read Count: 44247
[Report This] Published: 05 Jul 2011 Updated: 27 Oct 2011
Reviewer: dax Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I really enjoy your stor I can't wait for more of it.

Reviewer: dax Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

nice chapter