Penname: Sabs [Contact] Real name: Sabine Wallau
Member Since: 24 Oct 2010
Membership status: Member
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Married, mother of two, bookworm....


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Sight by Aurora Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 408]
Summary:

“Swan! I wanted that file ten minutes ago, on my desk, it’s outside my door, are you blind?!” “No Cullen, I cannot see your office, because yes, I AM blind and I don’t want to walk in and listen to you with Tanya Denali!”


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 163311 Read Count: 37292
[Report This] Published: 13 Feb 2010 Updated: 01 Oct 2011
Reviewer: Sabs Signed
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Element of Surprise

I just startet reading your story yesterday and I can't wait for the next chapter.

I am totally Team Edward, so I am not too keen on more of Jacob in the next chapters, but I would love some more Emmet - with Rose maybe?

Waiting impatiently....Sabs

Reviewer: Sabs Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Friends and Foes

Finally - they said the three words!!!!

I must admit, I am always a bit "shocked" when I read BPOV "my eyes shot open" or "I did not see Edward in the morning" it seems kinda weird that being said by a blind person. But anyhow - I really liked reading this chapter.

Have a good time at Moscow and be safe!

Sabs



Author's Response:

Hi Sabs, thank you for your review,

Glad you enjoyed the 'i love you', I was worried about writing that. You've made a good point about my BPOV, I purposely write her saying things like that because she;s been blind for eight years, she doesn't necessarily think of herself as 'different' per say, so she doesn't think of what she's saying as being abnormal because she can't actually see. When she talks about 'seeing' Edward it's used loosely and meant to be her way of expressing a wish to be around him. The thing about the eyes 'flying open' is a natural response to surprise, old habits die hard and it's just a reflex reaction for her.

Hope that helped, but I'm really glad you spotted that so thank you. I'll be in Moscow for work (if my flight isn't cancelled) so I won't get to see the beautiful city that much, but I shall be sure to wrap up warm, thank you for your regards.

Aurora

Summary:

After a bad break-up, Rose and Alice take Bella out to find her someone to have a little “fun” with so they head to La Push, a local college hangout, where she meets a certain 17 year-old looking guy with green eyes and sex hair. OOC. First chapter written for the NaughtyHeels Anonymous One-Shot Contest.

 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 38182 Read Count: 21488
[Report This] Published: 18 Feb 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2010
Reviewer: Sabs Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Feels Like New Years in July

Hi,

I read already some of your stories - and I wanted to say, that I really liked them! You have a wonderful way of writing, getting the reader to really get into the story and feel with the characters.

But after reading the last part of this chapter, I had to write to you, because I never ever heard of a doctor telling a pregnant woman not to perform oral sex because of air being breathed "down there"??? I have had two children, and most of my friends have, as well, so I asked them. They looked at me a bit strange, but none of them has ever heard of that. Is it a special thing in the US?

Just wondering, but nontheless reading on

Sabs



Author's Response:

Thanks for the wonderful review, but as for your question...I've had a few friends hear this, but also found it on more than a few parenting websites and books and thought it was an odd little thing, but as far as it being exclusive to the us...I have no idea. 

PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3948]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 762188
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Sabs Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

Hi,

that was a great chapter! I really think it was time for them, to come to terms about their D/S- times.

And what I really loved was Bella getting the evil Alice back on track!!!! I sometimes find her too pushy and too intimidating, just walking over everyone. What I wondered was, why her Dom could not reign her in - I am sure, Edward would not have let Bella behave like that!

The uncles are great, although one could have been afraid that they would kidnap Bella :D

So thank you - I am (im)patiently waiting for the next update hopefully with some more practice for the party and maybe, just maybe, the party itself...

Sabs



Author's Response:

Hi there Sabs,

Thanks so much for the review and your comments.  Alice does need a firm hand, but Jasper's head isn't in the right place either, I think that he is a little afraid of reigning her in too much with her being pregnant and being the week of the wedding and Carlisle and Esme just let her get away with murder!

I loved the uncles - and you haven't see the last of them yet.

Lots of play party, weddings and drama up next!

xoxo

Summary: Past Featured Story

Sequel to Heartbreak Remedy. As Bella & Edward continue to share
their lives, they explore their deepest fantasies & push their limits
together. BxE, AU/AH, very OOC. BDSM. NC-17 rated for language & situations.
LEMONS aplenty.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 245042 Read Count: 160212
[Report This] Published: 28 Mar 2010 Updated: 07 May 2011
Reviewer: Sabs Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Hmmm, what is that all about? What should Jazz tell him?

Considering their current situation, I think they would be better off, not living together, but just spend "playtime" together. As I am a Bella+Edward-lover, I am not sure, if I really like their living-situation.

So I am impatiently waiting on how you will let their journey go on...

Thanks for sharing

Sabs

Summary:

Bella thinks she has her life figured out. She has the best father and brother but all too soon her life comes shattering down around her. Will Edward be able to help her? E/B, Em/R, J/A AH & NC-17 for lemons.

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, To Read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 70 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 156928 Read Count: 63862
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2010 Updated: 10 Jun 2010
Reviewer: Sabs Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70

Hi,

I read your story in two days - it is really great!!!

Thanks for sharing.

Sabs

First & Ten by Nolebucgrl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 819]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan is an aspiring sports writer and her first big assignment is to interview the league's biggest, not to mention hottest, quarterback.  Will Edward Cullen school her in the rules of the game or will she teach him a thing or two?  Rated NC-17 for language, lemons.  An entry in The Sport of Love contest.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges: The Sport of Love Writing Challenge - CLOSED
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 351776 Read Count: 128423
[Report This] Published: 06 Apr 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: Sabs Signed
Date: 17 May 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39 Leaping

Oh great!!!!! Charlie and Renee - what a wonderful couple...although I do not like Renee embarrassing our lovely Bella and Edward. But Charlie is just hilarious.

Now I am really curious for the meeting of the parents - THAT will be epic! I only hope, that they won't embarrass too much, when in public at the stadium...

Thanks for sharing - I can't wait to read the next chapter.

 

Sabs



Author's Response:

Charlie and Renee are cute.  She's not trying to embarrass them, she's just...Renee.

I have no idea hwo the parental meeting will go, but it won't be at the stadium. :)  That I can assure you.

Thanks for the review!

 

 

Reviewer: Sabs Signed
Date: 24 May 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40 Roughing the Passer & His GF

Hi,

I must honestly say, that I find Renee extremely annoying! It's a tad bit too much. I read a ton of Fanfics and I am oftern annoyed at how intrusive and bossy the characters of Alice and Emmett are. I would never accept anyone of my family to run me over like that. But in the end, it is just fiction.

Nontheless, I am impatiently waiting for the next update, hopefully Emmett will not do too bad for Edward, maybe Rose will step in?

Sabs



Author's Response:

Sorry to hear that.  Yes, she's OTT but she's been that way from the get-go.  I think we each have different ways of dealing with our families and Bella didn't want to hurt her mom, which she made clear earlier in the chapter.  Sorry it wasn't for you. 

Thanks for the review.

Summary:

This banner was made for me by the lovely Lindsi loolabell

 

 

Alice has been lusting after her pupil Bella for a long time. A uniform violation allows her to act on her desires. Bella’s inexperience leads the girls to steamy lessons that eventually inc. a dreamy male student and a God-like Male teacher. Eventually... B x E and A x J

 

Slash and explicit sexual content.

 

This banner was made by the amazingly awesome CuddleswithRob.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 71784 Read Count: 98632
[Report This] Published: 09 Apr 2010 Updated: 10 Nov 2012
Reviewer: Sabs Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 25

Thanks for this chapter - just made my friday afternoon!!!

I am really curious, where these two (or three or four) are heading and how they will *cough* work together.

Waiting impatiantly (dont know if that is the right spelling)

Sabine

Reviewer: Sabs Signed
Date: 10 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 26

I love, that Edward is so responsible, stopping her in the heat of the moment. And yes, I also loved the comparison with these lyrics from her youth.

But what I was mostly astonished with??? James! He is, in most all other FF's a bad, if not THE bad guy. And you made him an understanding guy, stepping back? Hmmmm, will we see another side of him?

So I hope, for our kinky Christmas, there will be a longer chapter, including some Edward, Bella and Alice and maybe Jasper....

Have a wonderful time

Sabs



Author's Response:

Lol- you would not eblieve how often I get readers mentioning how amazed they are with this James...I love it, though, a nice change, don't ya think?

Smexxy times are a coming, bb. along with confusion and heart break and finally....understanding and common sense...lmfao

 

Merry Christmas, M'dear.

 

xx

Reviewer: Sabs Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 32

Oh my - what a "plaesure" reading!!! But - I as well, find myself asking how this is/will be a B/E-story. So I am desperately hoping, that Mr. Handsome is our wonderful Edward!!!!

Please don't let us poor creatures wait too long for the solution!!!

Thx for sharing your fantasy with us.

Sabs



Author's Response:

Glad to see that some of you are still hanging in there with me. I am trying my hardest to get the next chapter out as soon as I can. Kids home for March break is so not helping- but soon- real soon. Promise.

PS- whoever the handsome man is- he is here to stay for the rest of the story- just saying....snickers*

Ty for taking the time to review. I love hearing from you, always.

xx

PPS- a real tiny teaser for ya....sorry it aint much :-(


I swear I didn’t intend on going up there. But I really didn’t know anyone else here, except for James, Bella’s bum buddy. I didn’t know him that well. However, I had spoken to him on occasion. He nodded my way in greeting when his eyes met mine, but I didn’t feel like interrupting what looked like…

Summary:

When the disarmingly handsome Edward Masen turns up as a new patient, the life Dr. Isabella Swan has carefully put together will be shattered forever. What will it take to put the pieces back together again? What does it take to heal?

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Many thanks to fuzzyltlwingedthing for the new banner!

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read, Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 334239 Read Count: 48314
[Report This] Published: 27 May 2010 Updated: 07 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Sabs Signed
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 26

Oh my - fighting siblings - maybe it is time for the family to get all the shit out of their system? Can't wait to read how it is going on and what Carlisle wants to talk about to Edward.

And that red hair.... hint or fake hint??? And where are wife and daughter of James? Questions over questions, so I will wait patiently for your next update. Thank you for sharing your fantasy with us readers - it is really great!!!

Sabs

Reviewer: Sabs Signed
Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30

Hi M,

Wow - what a developement! I was totally on the wrong track, thinking the woman in the blue car woud be Victoria.

But now it seems there is a big hope for Bella against James. So if Mary talks to the police, there is one down and one still to go - the big bad sister.

I am convinced, that you will let our beloved couple get some good news in the next chapter - they still have so much sh** going on.

Thanks for sharing your fantastic story with us.

Sabs

 

Reviewer: Sabs Signed
Date: 20 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 29

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thank you SO MUCH! Just cleared the custody for now, but leaving us with Carlisle at the hospital? How evil is that? Please - it is Christmas time - the time of love and peace...

So also for the peace of minds of your readers.

Anyhow - that was a good chapter. To find Bella still intimidated by James, was hard, but she kept fighting. For me, it is completely not understandable, how women stay with these kind of men. I am lucky to have a wonderful husband (and father of our kids), some would say I am the intimidating person here. LOL But thank you, this story just helps me, not taking him for granted - he is a great man and does everything to keep our family running - through good and bad (and we had lots of bad, this year). So I do not only have fun reading your story, I get even more of it.

Therefore I wish you a wonderful Christmas with family and friends and a very happy and successful New Year

Sabs

Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4106]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 918145 Read Count: 850224
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2013
Reviewer: Sabs Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Hi Louise,

thanks for making my thursday, again! I really liked the chapter, I think I could totally understand Bellas feelings during the punishment. I would feel humiliated being made standing "in the corner" (Was that even the correct grammar?)

I am still nor sure about Leah, though, but maybe she is only jealous, because of Bellas friendship with Alice and Rose?

And that skank Tanya can hear as much as she wants to!!!! Hopefully someone will put her in her place really soon - Jasper did it a bit in this chapter, but I hope for some "big guns" from all of them. (Would be a big fun for me, hehe)

As I am a mother, too, I can completely understand the lack of time until after New Year, it is kind of the same here. I already finished the baking, and fortunately we will only be having christmas dinner at our house with our two kids, one day will be spent at my parents, the second day we will go to a restaurant - but still, there is so much left to do. Thinking of all the cleaning...urghhhh. So I will be even more looking forward to the Thursdays then.

Have agood time and be safe

Sabs



Author's Response:

Jasper the man of few words comes through with a great line...lol ....You get to go out for dinner? My-O-My I get to Cook for twenty people...That's ok it's my kids oh and 1 mother-in-law (I better stock up on the wine...lol) Have a Merry Christmas ...Thanks for  reading and leaving a comment, I have a teaser for you..lml

Leaving out a long sigh I focused really hard on opening the twist tie that held the bread wrapper closed. Edward moved with me and as he passed by to get the wine out of the cooler his hand ran down the length of my arm. The extra sensation from his touch made my muscles clench tighter and I think I let out a whimper because Rose glanced at me with a smirked. 

 

Bastard!

 

I needed something else to occupy my mind and it didn’t matter what it was “Jasper” I looked up from the two loaves of bread “could you turn on some music?”

 

“Sure…anything in particular?” he asked moving to a panel in the wall. Before I could answer Emmett made an observation.

 

“You alright little Bella, you seem a kind of jumpy tonight” Edward’s voice came from behind me.

 

“Isabella’s been jumpy all weekend”

 

“I have not!” the words left my mouth without any thought of the repercussions they might cause. Emmett chuckled and a small giggle came from Rose who was standing next to me, but my eyes went to Edward. His face became stone cold hardness while his eyes widened as they turned dark. 

 

Oh Shit

Reviewer: Sabs Signed
Date: 21 May 2013 Title: Chapter 105: Chapter 105

Hi Louise,

I really , really love reading this story and I am amazed about your imagination and writing skills!Usually I hate stories, that take a long time updating, but I wait (im-)patiently for your updates. :) In my frustration I reread this story and am now "up to date" again and hope you will be able to give us a new chapter soon!
Thank you for sharing this with us

Sabine

Reviewer: Sabs Signed
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Wow - I really like your story and still envy you for the imagination that ist necessary to write such emotional stuff!!!

So now I will wait impatiently for the next chapter, because I really need to know, what will happen and who is looking into Bellas accounts. I assume it is not someone we all think about....

Sabs



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like my story and yes I must say there are times when after writing a chapter I am drained and need a day to recover...

Reviewer: Sabs Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Hi,

I really liked the punishment, although first I thought it resembles one of my childhood (standing in the corner for doing something bad or nasty - even in class) but afterwards, I could understand it.

Now - as always - I am waiting impatiently for the next chapter. But I will have somethings to keep me busy until then. It is my birthday on Saturday, then some holiday-dinners and, of course the dvd will be delivered (because - YES of course I preordered at Amazon).

Thank you again and greetings from the snowy 7 mountains in Germany

Sabs

 



Author's Response:

Yes ... me too... stand in the corner and think about what you did, my mom even set the kitchen timer and it would tick away while I waited ....thanks for reading, here's your teaser ...lml

A piece of tomato fell to the floor but instead of squatting down Bella bent from the waist, causing the back of her nighty to rise up over her thighs showing me the ruffled yellow thong she had on. The groan left my mouth without consent while my dick pressed painfully against my pants.

 

The giggle that came from Bella gave away her intentions, my girl was fucking teasing me – again.

 

A hand landed on her ass before it registered in my mind what I was doing, Bella gasped standing to give me a shy smile. “What did you do that for?”

 

I raised my eyebrows in disbelief “If you stick that in my face you know damn well what’s going to happen.”

 

“Oh yeah? “ Bella looked up at me through her lashes taking a few steps back out of my reach dropping the tomato she had just picked up “Oops”

Reviewer: Sabs Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Yes, Louise, you are successful with the tease!!!! ;-)

And thank you very much for the bithday wishes - I really had a great day, actually two days. One with my husband and friends and the day after, with the whole family.

So now, again, as always, you leave me on highest expectance (is that even correct english? Anyway, I am sure, you get what I mean...)

With this chapter you have even given more questions: Are the situation at the club and the threatening of Bella connected? Is it really Laurent, or who else could it be? To be honest, I do have my suspicions against Leah...Oh my, what is wrong with me.

So PLEASE do not let us poor readers wait too long.

Have a great time and let your imaginations roll!

Sabs



Author's Response:

Then mission accomplished ...lol ... and BTW the problem sometimes is getting what's in my imagination down into words, but it;s coming along.. glad you had a good B-Day see ya Thursday ...lml

Reviewer: Sabs Signed
Date: 09 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

That was so sensual - I loved it. You make my Thursdays so great, I am always looking forward to coming home from work to a new chapter of this story.

And I have tomorrow off, as well (I never work saturday or sunday) and I also plan on baking some cookies. So I wish you a wonderful weekend and a productive week.

Sabs



Author's Response:

I work twelve days and have every other weekend off... I work alot but such is the nature of health care...thanks for reading, here is your teaser...

Picking up the first box I actually grunted because it was heavier than I thought it would be. After putting it on the table I turned around to see Bella carrying another one of the boxes.

 

“Isabella what are you doing?” I asked her while taking the box from her hand then realized the one she had was heavier then the first.

 

“I was carri…” I cut her off before she could finish

 

“I thought you had a fifteen pound weight limit”

 

“I do…” I stared at her in bewilderment

 

“This box has to be at least forty pounds” she looked at me like a deer caught in the head lights. I wasn’t mad –much- it was more concern for her wellbeing. Once the box was on the table I pulled Bella in for a hug. “I don’t want you to hurt yourself, so don’t do that anymore”

Reviewer: Sabs Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

Oh wow - finally Bella and Leah are going to clear the air...!

And Paul? He is an ass - hopefully Edward will get a punch in, but even more hopefully Charlie will not be too reserved to Edward.

Maybe Jacob will come to his "rescue"? Who knows, what you have in store for us - I know, that I will be waiting impatiently for the next update!!

 

Thx, Sabs



Author's Response:

Bella and Leah need to get this over with, as Sue said "it's about time" ....lol....

Thanks for reading and taking the time to leave me a comment ....I have this weeks teaser for you...lml

Leah went into the bathroom while Bella came around the corner into the kitchen. Our eyes met immediately as a warm smile engulfed her face. It was clear she had been crying and it took everything I had in me to remain in the chair and not run to comfort her. Sue looked up as she started putting food on the table then went over to hug Bella just as I wanted to. Bella nodded at whatever Sue was saying then left her go so she could say hello to her father.

 

“Hi daddy” Bella said wrapping her arms around him from the back before leaning down to kiss his cheek.

 

Charlie’s hand gripped her forearm then patted it in a fatherly manner. “Hi’a Bells. How are you?”

 

“I’m good…” Bella gazed at me while adding “…I guess you got to met Edward?”

 

“Yes…no thanks to you. Paul introduced us” Bella glared at Jacob mouthing ‘Paul’, Jacob held his hands up in surrender “You don’t want to know”

Reviewer: Sabs Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 98: Chapter 98

Hi Louise,
as usual, I was giddily waiting for the new chapter. Although I think he was a bit too hard on Bella, I realised thtat it was necessary for both of them, in order to compensate the situation thei are going through, with all the things out of their control.
As for Alice...I really don't like her at the moment! In most of the stories, she is just an annoying person, trying to walk over people (esp. Bella), but with a good intention behind it. But after her conversation with her brother in this chapter, I even ask myself how Jasper can stand her attitude, or did she never show it to him? I am wondering, if Edward told him how he would react? Angry? Surprised? Or even ashamed for his wifes behaviour? Well, we'll see - you'll without a doubt, let us know. :-)
So to end my (longest ever) review I wanted to thank you for your story and for sharing it with us. Usually I tend to not read WIP, as I do not like waiting on following chapters, but I surely wait (im-)patiently for yours!
Sabs

Summary: Feature

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 ***NOW COMPLETE***

Bella Swan had led a very ordinary life.  She'd married her college boyfriend only to be betrayed when he left her for another girl.  After the death of her father, she pulled out a map and threw a dart.  The implications of that one simple act would surprise her beyond her belief.  She found a home...she found a job...could she find love again after surviving a cheating husband?  Only time will tell.  What secrets will the beautiful stranger she meets have and how will she deal with them? 

AH/OOC.  Canon pairings, with twists.  NC-17 for dirty language, a smattering of BDSM, and the usual lemony goodness.  If you wouldn't read it with your mother standing over your shoulder, you shouldn't be reading it at all!


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, Ageise02 Current Reads, Single parents , I Whitlock's read , My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 258357 Read Count: 128727
[Report This] Published: 21 Jul 2010 Updated: 09 Mar 2011
Reviewer: Sabs Signed
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Christmas Cullen Style

Oh Emmet - big oaf!!!!! But I am sure, they will come around. And I hope, that there will be big consequences for Mrs. Cope and that excuse of a mother.... I would love for them to be put in their places while Bella is attending. So now I am wondering what Edward got Bella for Christmas?

I will wait (im-)patiently for your next update and thank you for sharing your great fantasies with your readers.

Greetings from the "7 mountains" (a region in Germany near the city of Cologne, on the river Rhine)

Sabs

Reviewer: Sabs Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20-Here He Goes Agroveling...

Gahhhhhhhhh... I hate Cliffies!!!!!!!!!!!

First you let us suffer through Edward acting like a total dipshit causing Bella to leave and then lead us through them mending their relationship, over to the hearing, where lots of parents want to speak in favour of Bella, only to end with Heidi walking up????? You truly are evil!!!

 

But we love you, nontheless, your story is really great, thank you for writing and sharing it with us. And, as I think you love us, too - you will not let Heidi ruin everything, won't you?

Be safe

Sabs

Reviewer: Sabs Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - Unexpected Surprises

Ho, ho, ho!!!

Thank you for the Pre-Christmas-Present! Oh I am so looking forward to that proposal - what a wonderful idea!

I really like your story, how they made it work, how they coped and of course, all the lemonsssssssssss!

So I wish you a Happy Christmas and hope, that Santa is going to give you time and ideas for the next chapters.

Sabs

Reviewer: Sabs Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - Commitment and Commitment Issues

What a really lovely proposal - of course, Carlie had to be included. And I urgently hope, that Emmet will come around within the nearest future...

 

I really loved the "celebration" and the introduction of the plug to Bella and I am looking forward to the next step.

After Edwards questions about Renee, I am sure, we will hear or better read more about her - let the drama begin ;-)

Thank you again for sharing your great fantasy with us. I wish you a happy, successful and healthy New Year!

Sabs

Reviewer: Sabs Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Pain

Oh my, how could you be so mean, changing our happyness about the new chapter in the new year to such an agony????

I do understand, though, why both of them acted the way they did. But I would have thought, you would write in greater detail, how the three of them felt after it and how they dealt with the break-up. At least Bellas side was cut short. So hopefully there will be all of it in greater detail in your next chapter. What I hope for the most, though, is that that evil bitch gets what she deserves: HELL!!!!

Sabs

Reviewer: Sabs Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - Heartache

Hi,

 

no, you haven't lost me, although I waspissed with the Jessica-stunt. But I was always sure, you would let them find their way back together! I would have been pissed if they had gotten back together just like this, because there is just too much to talk abut, But an eating disorder? Maybe it has got to do with her being submissive and she lost that, too? Anyhow, I will stay tuned for the next chapter, to find out how you will let our favorite couple find their way back.

Thanks for sharing.

Sabs

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly. Can they both overcome traumatic pasts and trust issues to be together?  All-Human

Thank you to Coleen561 for the beautiful banner!

Virgins & Villains came in first in 3 categories at the Summer 2011 Avant Garde Awards.  See banners below.

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 86 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 448890 Read Count: 256697
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2010 Updated: 04 Jan 2012
Reviewer: Sabs Signed
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Creme Eggs & Welcome Distractions

Here's your written chocolate: *swooooon* *whipeshertearsaway*

And now I will be waiting for Rose's big Interview with the wicked witch of the West!

Sabs



Author's Response:

soon...probably doing 1 or 2 LRMs first.  Thank you for the internet chocolate!

Reviewer: Sabs Signed
Date: 09 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Pink Chiffon & Man Skirts

Thank god, the skanks were caught, but I think that was a bit "overblown". But I really like the skype-talks between our love-birds. And, like you and Alice, I like London. So I am looking forward to her visit there.

Sabs



Author's Response:

i wanted them to be punished...and Charlie being involved added the right touch for the cops to go overboard.  Evan though the ranger was an ass, cops love Bella, because her Dad is one...and some of them know him.  Thanks!

Reviewer: Sabs Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 50: Champagne & Diamonds

Wonderful - just wonderful! The whole chapter was so romantic. *sigh* Just to think that he changed a room into a hobbits house....oh my.

It will be hard for her to leave him and I am very sure, that the paps will give her a hard time. So how long will it take, until their happily ever after?

Thanks again for sharing your fantasy with us

Sabs



Author's Response:

they will set the wedding date soon.  Thanks!  so glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Sabs Signed
Date: 19 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 52: Edible Art & First Steps

Thank you for that chapter - you just made my Wednesday evening better!

I loved, that Bella stood up for herself against James, but I am not really sure that it will make him step back?

To me, it was clear, that they would not wait too long for their wedding, but to let Bella set the date earlier was a surprise. Ohhh and Emmet....he is a pain in the ass, hopefully Bella will put him right in the next chapter, I am not sure, how long Rose will keep her calm (or at least a little bit of it)

Will you write about her talk with Dr. Miller? (SURE you will!;-)) I am very curious (did I spell that right?), what Bella will tell her first - that should be interesting.

Last but not least: You are keeping us on our toes regarding the sender of the flowers. Please don't let us wait too long for the solution, these two had enough drama, didn't they?

Either way, I will be waiting impatiently for the next chapter. Thank you for sharing your fantasy with us!

Sabs



Author's Response:

Wow!  What a great review!  Thank you so much.  I will address each point to the best of my ability (wow sounds like i'm in court..lol).  The James issue is not resolved yet...he's a jerk, obviously.  The wedding actually ended up being close to the date from the books...not really on purpose..it just fit the plot that way.  Emmett is a pain, but Rose secretly loves every minute of it.  The part of the next chapter with Dr Miller is already complete.  The flower/stalker issue won't be resolved for a while..so you can relax about it for now.  remember...HEA.   Thanks again...i will post soon.

Firsts by midnightlove87 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 201]
Summary:

 Bella and Edward have been best friends forever and they've shared a lot of firsts. Now Bella wants to share one last one together. AU/slightly OOC Cannon pairings B/E And rated M for language and lemons!


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, To Read (Geddy), My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 331144 Read Count: 75317
[Report This] Published: 10 Oct 2010 Updated: 31 May 2012
Reviewer: Sabs Signed
Date: 17 May 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Oh - a heyvy one...

I really think she should call him out on the smoking - it's making her sad and the conclusions she draws are just horrible...he should know about them. But talking about any problems seems to be a problem for them :D So hopefully, while trying to help Em as a family will help them finding out, that talking over feelings and problems will help a lot and solve even more...

As for Em - I think he is just not used to failing or at least to feeling insecure and so he chose an "easy" way out. Drinking and hurting the ones who love him the most. I fear he thinks he is protecting her by driving Rose away from him. But as far as we know that family, they will be all helping!

Can't wait to read the next chapter.

Sabs

Reviewer: Sabs Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

What a disastrous Valentines Day! I can, partly, understand Bella and I was never a big fan of "invading" Alice. So hopefully, Jasper will step in - he should really see and sense, what is going on with Bella! She and Edward need time on their own, space on their own and maybe, you will change that in the next chapter, which I am looking forward to, after reading all the others just yesterday. ;-)

 

Thanks for sharing

Sabs

Lives In Chaos by Kiwibeme Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 74]
Summary:

Sequel to "It Happened One Weekend" and "Life Outside The Bubble". Edward and Bella struggle with changes in their lives and relationship. Thanks to their family and friends, chaos and humor abound!

Lemons, language, drama, humor and romance....all your usual suspects are accounted for!

This story is being published as a "In Progress" story and will update every Thursday.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Humor
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 46631 Read Count: 3937
[Report This] Published: 25 Oct 2010 Updated: 19 Jan 2011
Reviewer: Sabs Signed
Date: 14 May 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Oh sooooooo great - I really love your stories. I just found this series and read through the first and the second within 3 days!!!

As you wrote in your AN, you will be mass posting - I am really looking forward to it, I really want to know when Alice will keep her hormones in check and how they all go on making fun of Carlisle and Rosalie. And what about Summer - will she go on being a mini-Rosalie, or will someone manage to rein her in?

But most of all, I am looking forward to Bellas Chat with her mum and what she will decide for her future - being a chef or not?

Thank you for sharing your great fantasy with us!

Sabs

Summary:

In Edward's life, he has never been given the option to choose anything for himself. From where he goes to school, to whom he dates, it's all chosen for him by his overbearing father. 

Bella has always had to be self sufficient and has always taken care of those around her, including those who should have taken care of her. 

Can the two of them find love together? Are they strong enough to take on the unexpected twists and turns life throws at them?

Edward and Bella kissing

 

Sadly, Edward, Bella, and all the Twilight cast are not mine. They belong to Stephenie Meyer, and I thank her profusely for breathing life into these characters so I could borrow them for my own mental ramblings. I promise to give them back when I'm done with them... Well, maybe not Edward, but I'll give the rest back! ;)

No copyright infringement is intended... just good clean wholesome fun.

 

Rated NC-17 for lemony goodness later on in the story.

 

2/15/2011

I am looking for someone to create a new banner for me! I have tried over and over, but everything I make looks like it ought to be flushed down the toilet. If there is anyone who is willing to take on this task, I would greatly appreciate it!

~Kitty

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 47465 Read Count: 8105
[Report This] Published: 06 Nov 2010 Updated: 15 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Sabs Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Oh my - how stupid can these officers be? Or they are really bribed or have their hands in dirty things.

Poor Bella and poor Edward. But I really liked Charlies reaction towards Edward. He wants to adopt him? No way!!!

 

I hope you are better now and thank you for sharing this chapter with us.

Sabs

Summary: Past Featured Story

Everyones got secrets...dirty little secrets. Bella Swan is tired of her life, so will a swinger's party have someone swing her way. BPOV and EPOV. Warning...LEMONS AHEAD


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 281157 Read Count: 122035
[Report This] Published: 08 Nov 2010 Updated: 14 Sep 2011
Reviewer: Sabs Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Get the fucking bitch out of my house

Gaaaahhhhhhhh - who would have thought? Esme is Ang's mother???? How evil of you!

But thank you very much for this idea - it leaves me with hopes for the next chapter.

 

Sabs



Author's Response:

Evil?????? us????? Ari are we evil??....ok maybe a tad...next chap is done and with the Beta so hope not to long....xoxooxo

Reviewer: Sabs Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 10: I fucking love swings

Who would have thought, Eric would get so aggressive? Whiny, yes, but not breaking down the house.

And now Bella is going to live with Angela AND Edward??? OMG - I am so looking forward to these "roomies".

So please don't let us wait too long for the next update. Now that Bella found the strength to kick Eric out, how long will it take for Edward to finally break up with Angela?

Sabs



Author's Response:

Thank you soooooooooo much for liking and reviewing this chapter...and yes, i cant wait to see the roomies in action....Ari has her chapter written soooo off to the Beta is goes....DLIR AND ARI

Reviewer: Sabs Signed
Date: 08 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 11: tú eres mi pecado mortal. (you are my mortal sin.)

Ahhhhhh - what a bad timing for a cliffie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

OMG, I so want to know Edwards new plan. And I think Ang is up to something, or better someone...

Hopefully Edward will find out about that. Maybe Rose will help, after she gets to know Kitten.

Thank you again for this new chapter.

Sabs



Author's Response:

IKR! We tried to tell Spartan that. But he woouldn't listen to us. And Ang is up to something'someone. But what and who? Edwards plan will be revealed soon. Rose will play a huge part in all this!

 

Thank you so very much for your most awesome review! We greatly appreciate all of your support!

 

 

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Ari & DLIR

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

thanks to christagbanners.blogspot.com

Renee is cutting Bella off. Bella needs money and Edward has a lot of it, but Bella gets more than she expected. Can she handle it or will it be too much? lots of fluff and lemons consentual spankings. R&R


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Completed Stories, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139157 Read Count: 171231
[Report This] Published: 04 Jan 2011 Updated: 10 Oct 2011
Reviewer: Sabs Signed
Date: 15 May 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Gaaaaaaaaaah - how could you leave us with that cliffie????????????????

But I know, that the next chapter will be another great one! So I will wait patiently (well, I'll try) - to see if Edward really stands to his word and will protect Bella from his father - even if he had to break up with him... I truly hope for it!!!!!

Sabs

Shhhhh.... by Robshandmonkey Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4716]
Summary:

 

Edward Cullen owns the most popular club where his elite members join solely to indulge in deviant behaviors.

He is a notorious badboy Vamp who has grown bored with this life. He makes it a hobby of breaking rules to entertain himself when he gets bored. However, his club is the one place he can always count on to find a willing partner to play with his inner demon.

He is well known amoung his kind for his obsessive, compulsive tendencies, clearly a perfectionist to the extreme. His taste for the finer things in life clearly show his preferences for ostentatious cars and homes where he believed he had everything he could ever want...

...that was until an innocent Angel found her way onto his playground. 

Lovely, Dark & Deep is a Vampire only BDSM club where humans are forbidden but somehow this innocent girl found her way in and has managed to capture the attention of the darkest Angel of them all.

 

This is a Darkfic Adult content. Human vamp fic, Cannon couplings But not your Twilight sparkling vamps.

Contains BDSM Scenes, Non Consensual Drug use, Violence, organized crime, Lemony Tart and sometimes sweet on occasion.

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe, Crackfic
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Aggies completed BDSM to read. , To Read (Geddy), Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, My Favorite Stories, To Read , Misstoria's Stories to Read, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 89 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 471242 Read Count: 1372211
[Report This] Published: 12 Mar 2011 Updated: 07 Jan 2014
Reviewer: Sabs Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 79: Shhhhh......The Epilogue....

WOW - just WOW!!! I really enjoyed reading your story and thanks a lot for sharing your fantasies with us.

Sabs

Fold Your Wings by Jadalulu Rated: NC-17 Round robin starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 945]
Summary:

'The liberties he assumes with my body should enrage me, anger me beyond my own sanity. But it's just not that simple.' Encounters born of need. Consequences neither saw coming. Guard your hearts. Not the ExB you're used to. 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 WIP Reads, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 104224 Read Count: 122775
[Report This] Published: 18 Apr 2011 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Sabs Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Wow, what an intense story! I found it just today, started and couldn't stop reading. So now, here I am, waiting and thinking how they will move on. When will Bella have her breakdown, that is surely to come.

I want to know, what happened to Edward to turn him into that asshole and what happened to make him change his ways. I want to believe it was the look on her face, he just told her about. And of course, I want to know, what exactly happened to her and her father and mother. So please, don't keep us waiting too long for the next chapters.

Thanks for sharing your fantasy.

Sabs

A Fresh Start by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 473]
Summary:

Bella is a recent divorcee, reeling from the abrupt ending of her marriage. In walks a certain green-eyed stranger. Can he convince her trust and love again? Or will she just ignore his advances? ExB, AU, AH

 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 271752 Read Count: 184634
[Report This] Published: 30 Apr 2011 Updated: 04 Jun 2011
Reviewer: Sabs Signed
Date: 18 May 2011 Title: Chapter 39: The Dream Wedding of Bella and Edward

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!

What can I say - just WOW! But I am wondering when Bella will finally realize that she is already pregnant? LOL

 

Sabs

Reviewer: Sabs Signed
Date: 01 May 2011 Title: Chapter 31: The Hospital at Christmas

Hi Josephine,

I read the chapters within two days and now am not so patiently waiting for your updates! I really like your story - what these two had to go through and how they managed. Some may say it is a bit too much of the drama, but hey RL often is like that!

So I think, that we are going to see a lot more of the little toddler...I have a feeling, that our two lovebirds will not be able to let him go into foster care...but who knows? Ah right: You!

Anyway, thanks for sharing your fantasy with us.

Sabs

Summary:

Bella was a teacher at San Bernardino High. What started as a class project slowly becomes something more. Edward is fighting in Afghanistan when he receives a letter that will change his life. What happens when love blooms through letters?

This story has over 800 reviews on FanFiction.net!

thanks to LissyLock for the beautiful banner

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39298 Read Count: 28653
[Report This] Published: 23 Oct 2011 Updated: 23 Oct 2011
Reviewer: Sabs Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Epilogue

Thank you for a really great story! I had to keep on reading, because I wanted to know their story. :-)