Penname: helluvabell [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: 03 Feb 2010
Membership status: Member
Bio:

I'm a student during the day and a fanfic addict at night.


I'm also hooked on Polyvore.


Sets for Control can be found at:


http://www.polyvore.com/control/collection?id=570005


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Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Jasper, Phil, Renee, Rosalie
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 262942
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
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Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega

Jeebus! Just when I thought Charlie was going to come storming in, Father Aro gets his way again. *sigh* The light at the end of the tunnel just went out...damn.

Great chapter, and congrats on the publishing house! I just might buy myself an early Christmas present.

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Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - Redemption

I loooove Felix... and good for Charlie-- cracking him on the jaw! Almost there....

Happy New Years! It tokk me forever typing this up... I might be a little tipsy...

:)

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Date: 17 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Revelations

Amazing update.

The control Aro has over the Elders and others is truly frightening. I'm scared for the Cullens. Poor Alice and Jasper. And Carlisle-- taking that punishment.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward has given up ever finding a vampire mate. He's decided on a new strategy-he'll find a human to become his mate. Easier said than done when others are in the way of who he wants.

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 95461 Read Count: 98839
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2010 Updated: 27 Feb 2014
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Date: 29 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Dude! I totally thought I would get an answer to what's going on with Bella!!!

LOL...that's cool, although...maybe it's that you've built so much back story into this already, but her experience at four sounds awfully fishy! Do I believe in coincidence?....perhaps.

I will keep your family in my prayers. I hope all goes well.



Author's Response:

They will find out what happened soon...and about her bad experience....

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

"Edward, what's wrong? Why are you making that noise again?"--probably one of the best/funniest lines I've read in a while? I don't know why, it just is. Thank you for posting another chapter and I love that this Jacob seems a bit more mature than the one I'm use to.



Author's Response:

I thought Jacob was very nice to look at in NM and Eclipse, but I couldn't deal with the fact that he was younger than her, so I aged him a bit.  If Edward can be 107 the least we can do is have a legally adult Jacob as well.  :)

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Just the thought of tiny Alice being knocked down by one of those wolves makes my breath catch. What a great chapter; can't wait for the next one!

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Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I had to re-post my review because somehow it showed up with only 4 little coffee cups. I thought I gave it 5 :/

Well, anyhow, great chapter! Looking forward to the next.

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed
Date: 24 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Wait...no!!!! Who said that?!?!? I think I know, but one can never be too sure.

Argh! Thanks for the update. Loved the backstory you put in here :)



Author's Response:

I'd love to know who you think it is. 

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Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Okay, okay... so I didn't know who it was, but I did know it wasn't Jake!

Great update!

Gotta tell ya, the whole time I was reading it I was thinking, "Doesn't Bella's say matter?" And then what happens?.... She uses it to pick Paul! *sigh*

In all fairness she was stuck between a hard place and a pissed of shifter.



Author's Response:

Yeah, love makes you do really stupid things sometimes.

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Date: 17 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

*sigh* My faith is completely restored. I was really worried that she would leave with Paul! Glad it didn't come to that. Whew.

I am a bit surprised that Charlie is taking it as well as he is, but he is happy if she's happy.

I really dig the mating call... lol. It's sweet :)



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it! I wanted to try something different with the mating call. I'm glad its been so well received.

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Date: 23 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Whew! You had me worried there for a sec! I thought they were about to be ambushed... the suspense, by the way, was wonderful ;)

I wonder what this means for our couple....hmmm....



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it. Carlisle has a puzzle to solve...

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Date: 03 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Ohhhh, that was so worth the wait!



Author's Response:

Glad you liked! Aftermath in Jan along with Carlisle's outtake.

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Date: 26 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Still with ya!

So, Renee's coming back to Forks. Should be intresting...

I love the way the families are intertwined. Great backstory!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it. Next chapter is going to be a "mess". ;)

Summary: Past Featured Story

AH/AU, OOC Bella is a famous actress and Edward is a host of a late night talk show. What do they whisper to each other when they greet each other on stage?


Categories: Twilight
Characters: Bella, Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, Love to drive's Stories to read, Stories Read by CNYBella
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126443 Read Count: 73545
[Report This] Published: 27 Jan 2010 Updated: 20 Feb 2012
Reviewer: helluvabell Signed
Date: 17 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I just read this fic in one sitting and all I can say is wow....yeah, wow.



Author's Response:

wow, that's a ton of reading

glad you are enjoying

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella's first assignment as a journalist is to uncover the truth about Christian Polygamy. Dr. Edward Cullen is a small town doctor who lives his life by his own sets of rules. Edward and his wives live a lifestyle that many may not understand. After Edward treats Bella he invites her into his home, where Bella learns more than what she bargained for. How will her first assignment impact the rest of her life?

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Rosalie
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 158312 Read Count: 119899
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 08 Apr 2012
Reviewer: helluvabell Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Girl Talk

I can't believe I've read 18 chapters yet this is my first review! This is such a great story and I can't wait to see the relationship between the ladies get better. Oh, and I think the office sex in the last chapter was really hot. It's weird, some days it really bothers me to see Edward with any woman who is not Bella. Some days, not at all. Go figure.;)



Author's Response:

Thank you for taking the time to review. I know how hard it is to find the time to read sometimes not to mention take the extra time to review. I have to agree that I myself have a hard time see Edward with anyone else. At first I had to write the lemons general and then add in Rosalie or Alice afterwards.

 

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Date: 08 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Home Away From Home

I'm glad to see Rose is accepting Bella a little more :)

Yeah, spankings... I was spanked when I was younger. I have a friend who wasn't, but when she had kids she started doing it because that's how her husband was raised. My parents always used a belt or their hand. Wooden spoon, hair brush, switch from the tree, I've heard it all, but when my friend pulled out a wooden paint stirrer from the Home Depot I nearly lost it XD

Summary:

What if Edward finally found his mate, but she had a troubled past and wanted to kill herself? Could he help her? This story has DARK Themes and Rape discussion.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella, Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 51 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 248279 Read Count: 56848
[Report This] Published: 15 Feb 2010 Updated: 14 Jun 2012
Reviewer: helluvabell Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 - Ignoring the Holidays

I wish I had a psychic vampire watching over my ten million dollar account...if I had one that is! Another great chapter.



Author's Response:

how true!!!  Heck I just wish I had 10 miioln dollars, I'd even settle for 1 million!!!!

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 - Trying New Things

Oh my god, I was just thinking about sparkly cum and it made me giggle. Another great chapter. It's so sad that he'll have to watch the tape. You're going to make me cry in that chapter aren't you?



Author's Response:

I don't want to make you cry.  I don't think that I will be doing the chapter showing Edward watching the video.  It will be more of a flashback. I cant' write him watching it, I can't write anyone watching it.  Nope.  So dont' worry to much.

Summary:

What if a Vampire Singer was not about blood lust instead its involuntary, unpreventable and irrevesable form of true love. What would you do if you waited a century to find it? What would you do to keep it? ANYTHING! AU reg.pair. Re-writting earlier chapters.

 

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: Bella, Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 124314 Read Count: 46024
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 07 Jun 2010
Reviewer: helluvabell Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I find it hilarious that you call Edward's hard-ons 'problems'. :D

Summary:

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Bella Swan gets a job as a personal assistant to the "The Sexiest Man Alive" Edward Masen while attending USC.  Sparks fly between her much older boss and her, but they soon find that temptation is too hard to fight.

 

It's a coming of age story with Bella, who learns to embrace herself as well as the life she's found herself thrown into, and a little Britward on the side.

 

*WARNING:  Rated NC-17 for language, lemons, and adult sit.*


Categories: Twilight
Characters: Bella, Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 298638 Read Count: 96050
[Report This] Published: 14 Mar 2010 Updated: 15 Dec 2010
Reviewer: helluvabell Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Well, that cliffy left me very anxious! Thanks for updating, and I can't wait for more :)

Left for Dead by Malanna Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 38]
Summary:

Sequel to Dead to Rights. After the battle for Sookie's survival, a tribunal has been called, and the vampire community is facing threats to their very existence.

Spoilers for books 1-8 and the short story "Gift Wrap" from the Wolfsbane and Mistletoe anthology.

If you have not read my prior pieces, Dead to Rights and In Between, this story will make little sense.


Categories: Southern Vampire Mysteries/True Blood
Characters: Eric Northman, Sookie Stackhouse
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 62411 Read Count: 2371
[Report This] Published: 17 Mar 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2010
Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 May 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Such an amazing chapter! His yearning tears at me, and I'm eager to see how things could get better.

Faithfully by LailaB Rated: NC-17 Round robin starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 680]
Summary:

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Edward is the lead singer of Eclipse, the most popular band in the world for the last decade. He has always considered himself fulfilled and successful despite his solitary existence. He has never felt the desire for an emotional connection outside of the band and family until meets a much younger Bella during Eclipse’s European summer tour and begins to realize just how much has been missing from his life. Can their newfound relationship bliss survive the expectations and responsibilities of loving a rockstar? Can Bella survive the repercussions of her newfound and unsolicited fame? How do you protect the one you love when you are thousands of miles away? AH/OOC

Banner by: Evilangel813

 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: Bella, Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 175031 Read Count: 49827
[Report This] Published: 08 Apr 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2011
Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: Deep Inside Your Heart

I think it was worth it. Bastard deserved to get his ass kicked!

Another great chapter. Holy shit, I laughed so hard when I read about Capo pissing on Gianna's leg!

Summary:

Suspicions 1

 

Geeky Bella has a theory. She suspects that popular Edward Cullen is not who he claims to be. Being one not to let things go, she decides to investigate. Are her crazy speculations true or will she be left feeling foolish? Most importantly, how far is she willing to go to prove herself accurate?

 

Suspicions 3

 

Huge thanks to palewhite_n_icecold and babistarr for their awesome banners!


Categories: Twilight
Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jacob, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Mike
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 74116 Read Count: 5935
[Report This] Published: 13 Apr 2010 Updated: 08 Apr 2011
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Date: 30 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: An Apple A Day Keeps The Doctor At Bay

Oh, Jasper's such a bad boy; teasing Bella without her knowing it.



Author's Response:

I love writing Jasper/Bella conversations almost as much as writing Bella/Edward conversations.lol

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Itís Not Considered Crazy If Everyone Is Truly Out To Get You

Okay, so I just have to let you know, I LOVE the way Bella thinks! It cracks my up that she can get so into her thoughts she looses track of stuff happening around her. Great story!

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Charging Particles Is A Hard And Long Process

Holy guacamole, that talk with Charlie was hilarious! Great chapter :D

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 8: You Wonít See Me Going Up Against Any Windmills

Awww....poor awkward Jacob :(

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Louis Isnít The Only One Getting Interviewed Around Here

I totally started singing the theme song to Inspector Gadget!

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Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 12: To Sleep, Perchance To Discover?

She's such an odd bird...I LOVE HER!!!

Her dream cracked me up! Thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

I love that you used the term 'odd bird' I havent heard that in years.

Thanks for the review! : )

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Date: 09 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Strange Case Of Dr. Swan And Mrs. Cullen

hehehe... I truly love her. And I did enjoy the chapter, thank you very much :)

Ahem... I am a little sad to see so little interaction between B and E. Is she positive she needs to keep distance from "the subject"? Perhaps she can get a little closer observation during the sleep over? Hmmm? Yes? Please....

Summary:

 

  My entry for FF's Forbidden Lemon contest.

Bella is graduating high school and looking for a Dom.  Edward is the Head Master at her school and he is who she wants.  Problem - he is married, has kids, a friend of Bella's fathers, 35 and oh! he isn't a Dom.  Can she get him? - Maybe!


Categories: Twilight
Characters: Bella, Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 210866 Read Count: 87946
[Report This] Published: 24 Apr 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2011
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Date: 04 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Outtake - Esme's Reasons

THAT SELFISH BITCH!!!

I think this is probably my first review to your story, but I'm just blown away... I can't believe.... I just need time. Like Carlisle.

You truly write a great story.



Author's Response:

Thank you and thanks for reading - Beth

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Date: 17 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Fifteen Years Later

Right, so I wasn't expecting that. You seriously made me cry! However, I loved the ending :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading - Beth

House of Hope by rbsschess Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 924]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is a 27 year old widow whose late husband has given her a task to force her to live and hopefully love again.  Edward is a 40 year old CEO who has turned cynical and life has taught him most women are gold diggers.  Will he be able to get passed his misconceptions and misunderstandings to hopefully find love?

 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: Bella, Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 179835 Read Count: 68188
[Report This] Published: 05 May 2010 Updated: 21 Mar 2012
Reviewer: helluvabell Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Hang on, I'm coming!!

how exciting! can't wait for the next chapter. BTW kudos for making Bella so badass.



Author's Response:

You are welcome and thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 21: The Hospital

It's sad how people misplace anger when someone's hurt or dead. I hope Esme will change her tune. Great chapter even if you say it was a filler :)



Author's Response:

It felt like a filler as I was writing it.  thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 22: The Second Name

Another wonderful chapter! I had no idea Bella was in that deep.

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Date: 26 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Time

I totally wanted to kick Edward's ass after reading this chapter! He's right, he is an idiot. I hope she doesn't just take him back without him working for it. Argh!

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Edgar's Motives

Yea! Edward's stepping up.

Married to the Enemy by Gelix Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1688]
Summary:

After a night of celebration in Vegas, Bella finds herself married to the man who made her life a living hell for seven years. Follow her as she finds true love where she least expected it!

AU/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future lemons.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella, Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 315953 Read Count: 209303
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2010 Updated: 28 Jan 2011
Reviewer: helluvabell Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Vegas

hahaha...I actually laughed when I read--"What are the odds?"

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Stood up

Is Edward going to find out about the dinner that wasn't or did Emmett get rid of the evidence? (hehehe)

Another great chapter.

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 35: A mother's touch

Tonight I told myself "no fanfic"--I have a project to work on. But when I saw you updated....well, of course I had to read it. Thanks for updating! Poor Bella, I can't imagine being kept up every night. Glad Edward was sweet enough to help out :)

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 50: S: Epilogue

I loved reading this story! Congrats on finishing :)

Memories of Love by mizzdee Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 54]
Summary:

Bella Swan wants nothing more than to prepare for her future.

When Edward Cullen moves to town he quickly realizes that he wants nothing more than Bella Swan.

Will her painful past and his recent mistakes keep Bella from seeing the man Edward truly is?  Can she let Edward in?  Can the two form that lasting bond that can never be broken?  Or will the heartaches and tragedies tear them apart for good?

Rated NC-17 for some strong language and eventual mature content.

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 199361 Read Count: 8437
[Report This] Published: 25 May 2010 Updated: 26 Apr 2012
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Date: 18 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - Starting A New Life

God, Bella is being sooooo stupid! She knows Jake's honesty had been questionable in the past.... but oh wait, that was in the past. *rolls eyes*

I can honestly say I've never before felt like telling a character, "You're screwing everything up!!!"

Grrr... Still one thing I can't deny is you keep me coming back for more ;)

Can't wait for the next update!



Author's Response:

Jake really plays her. He pulls Bella in and then lets her go again for awhile. When he feels like she's moving on, he pulls her back again. But Bella is a fifteen year old girl and she's gonna make stupid decisions when everyone else can see that the one she should be making is staring her right in the face. Of course, her being the hard-headed girl she is doesn't help either. Keep yelling at her, darlin, maybe one of these days she'll listen. LOL

Thanks for the review and the cups, bb. They are so very appreciated. The next chp should be coming soon so...until next time. Much love to you - D

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - The Price Of A Dream

Poor clueless Bella. All the signs are there. He shushes somebody when she calls. He doesn't say 'I love you' back. Hardly ever wants to meet up with her. Something tells me she won't believe it unless she sees it with her own two eyes. Of course when that happens, she'll be heartbroken and take her anger out on everybody around her. *sigh* We're in for some rough weather, my dear.

I love that she's so focused (most of the time) with her job at the paper. If only she could be that confident and mature in her personal relationships.

Honestly, I can't wait to hear from Edward! He's been pining away, sending her love notes and she has no clue it's him! Kind of weird that he's hanging out with all those chicks. He needs to explain himself!

Great couple of chapters!

Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4091]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 918145 Read Count: 758026
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2013
Reviewer: helluvabell Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Okay, I'm a little worried about the collar and what Seth was looking at. :/

Another great chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the comments, I have a teaser for you....lml

 

Edward was standing at the sink brushing his teeth, the muscles in his shoulder flexing as his arm moved. I reached out to run my fingers down the length of his spine before wrapping my hand around his waist and laying my head between his shoulder blades.

 

“I’m trying Edward, please don’t be mad at me” I could hear the air leave his lungs.

 

“Bella, I’m not mad at you. I am furious with a world that would allow so much hurt into your life. I want to take it all away, right now- today. I can’t and that makes me feel inadequate. But I know it’s going to take time and a lot of reassurance and baby…” He stopped abruptly.

 

“What?” I wanted him to finish his thought. But instead he turned around to face me.

 

“Nothing…” I knew there was something but I had no clue what it was. “…I told you last night I would give you all the time you needed, and I’m not going to push you, so…nothing. When you’re ready to let go of the shame you carry, you’ll tell me.”

 

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Nope, I didn't change my mind. I thought it was a brilliant punishment. Thanks so much for posting his perspective of what happened!



Author's Response:

I didn;t have a choice, as I was writing Bella's POV Edward was screaming inmy head to tell his side ..lol...Thanks for reading a nad leaving a comment, I have a  teaser for you...lml

Bella it sounds to this one like you are depending upon your Master.”

 

“I am and that scares me.” I admitted in defeat. I could see the question raging in her eyes I didn’t give her a chance to pose it.

 

“Jane I never depended on anyone in my life. Anytime I did it was a complete disappointment. So I just learned to do everything on my own. I hate the fact that I am so weak to need Edward so much.”

 

“Bella there is no such things as needing your Master too much. Let’s make that clear right now.” Jane’s voice turned demanding “He wants to be needed, it brings him satisfaction to meet your needs and see that you are properly taken care of. There is also no such thing as a weak submissive. It takes a lot of strength, courage and confidence to give yourself over so completely to someone else. It is not an easy thing to do and those that try because they think it is an effortless life find out very soon that it is not. That usually happens with the first punishment.”

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Okay so that last lemon was really hot!



Author's Response:

I know i need to go for a smoke break half way through...lol

Thanks for reading and leaving a comment. I have a teaser for you...lml

“Um Edward, do you know the answer to my question?” He chuckled

 

“What question was that Bella?” Damn he was going to make me ask. I glanced at the women in my car, their attention was completely on me

 

“Um, you know about what time” Nothing on the other end

 

“Edward you still there?”

 

“Yes, I’m here it’s almost one o’clock” Shit he was really going to make me say it.

 

 “I could just guess.”

 

“You could, but don’t guess wrong” I took a deep breath and just asked.

 

“Edward, what time did we go to sleep last night?” I looked to Carol, she had a shocked look on her face as she asked in a hushed whisper.

 

“Your sleeping with him?” Peggy on the other hand was not as quiet.

 

“I knew you were getting laid, that’s why you been so happy lately”

 

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Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Ahhhh...that was a very good chapter. My, my, my, Isabella has been very naughty. I wonder what Edward has in store for her.



Author's Response:

I'm sure he has something in mind ...

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Date: 18 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

Oh, that was freakin' sweet! How the hell did none of them notice him walking in to the place?!?!?

My thoughts on Jared? I think he still carries an old crush for Bella and is not to keen on Edward envading his space. Pfft... men. I just hope he doesn't cause any problems for them.

Great chapter! Did you see that? I used both bold and italic ;)



Author's Response:

He walked in to the door and Bella was standing between him and where the group was sitting in the corner....and i did see you use both ,,,Bold and Italic ....you go girl ...lol....

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Date: 01 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Yea more "usual"!!! After the stress she's gone through I have a feeling she really does need it. Great writing.



Author's Response:

mmm...Bella does like the usual..lol I hope she gets it,,,thanks for reading and leaving a comment. Becasue this is a Thursday post I have a teaser for you....lml

“The phone Bella” I could see him trying to rein in his anger and I knew that had we been anywhere else but this room, I would have been Isabella at that moment.

 

“I turned it off”

 

“You…” Edward didn’t get to finish his statement because I continued to explain.

 

“On the way back, Sally was upset and we were talking and the phone kept ringing and interrupting us, so I turned it off.” He sat there with his head down running his hand through his hair for what seemed like forever before his eyes finally met mine again and he released a long sigh.

 

“Bella..” Edward sighed again “I’m going to give you one more chance to just stay in this room and relax tonight. I’ll bring your dinner up here; we’ll take a long bath and watch TV.”

 

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Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Oh, poor Bella! But Edward was right, she needs to know how important her safety is to everybody. Hopefully she will learn and grow from this...I think she will.



Author's Response:

The best lessons are those hardest learned..(that's what my momma always said) ..thanks for reading ,,,lml

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Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

I loved lunch with Jane! I'm very glad that Bella has someone other than Edward to turn to when she needs to work through something. I thought Jane's advice on keeping track with her food and sleep was great.

Honestly, I'm not upset with Edward's actions. I would be more upset if he confused her by allowing her one time, then went back to the punishment. Oh, the punishment!!!! Will the black ink be coming off soon?



Author's Response:

Soon - it would help if she could soak in the tub, but the tattoo care is preventing that...but soon, edward wants it off too, he likes to hear the noises she makes...Thanks for the comments...lml

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Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Personally, I don't care for the hand signals, but I think they're fine since she doesn't seem to have a problem with them. Gah, does that make any sense?

Oh and I'm extreamly happy that they are getting back on track. Have I told you how awesome it is that you update so frequently?



Author's Response:

Thanks for the comments and I really hope to be able to keep updating often... I hate when a story just sits there with no ...nothing, it drives me insane...so thanks again ..lml

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Date: 04 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Loved the chapter...I find it hilarious that the family heard them.

And way to Bella! Holding on like a champ. Yes, in the next chapter please explain why I shouldn't be upset with Edward. I don't like feeling that way with him :(



Author's Response:

he will explain, not sure you are going to agree with it, but there is a reason for his madness...lol ...Thanks for reading and leaving a comment, i have a teaser for you...lml

When I got back to Bella she was half awake thanks to Seth’s persistence, I sat on the edge of the couch looking down at her.

 

“Hey” my fingers ran along the line of her jaw.

 

“Hi. Do I smell food” I smiled at her

 

“You do. Are you hungry?”

 

“Starving” she admitted while she sat up “It’s weird because I ate lunch”

 

“Yeah well that was four hours ago and your body worked really hard on the way home” her lip went between her teeth while her face flushed pink. I chuckled at her response “What are you thinking?”

 

“I’m thinking about my reward. I get a reward.” Bella’s whole face lit up and her eyes sparkled. 

 

“That you do, what would you like?” I asked tucking a lock of hair behind her ear

 

“You” I looked into her eyes “You have me love.”

 

“Nooo…I want you” Bella flung herself at me straddling my lap with a force so hard she knocked me backwards on the couch.

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Date: 19 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

I don't know what the hell happened! I can't believe I haven't been keeping up with this story! I had four chapters to read. I guess RL got in the way :/

I knew Seth was looking at something! It's so creepy that somebody would do that to Bella's tire....

Ten minutes, huh? Nothing like hard and fast from behind. May be unimaginative but it gets the job done :D Thanks for the update and sorry that my RL got in the way of reviewing.



Author's Response:

Welcome back !! ... i see ten minutes of mutal oral pleasure ....usual ...Here is a teaser for you...lml

We sat a little longer talking about some of the things she would like to do there. I had not been to Victoria in a long time and there were some new attractions that were possibilities for us to see. I thought it was a good time to bring up the extended stay at the beach. Bella seemed very opened to that possibility, made all the more attractive because both hotels allowed pets.

 

“When you talk to Alice would you get the name of the hotel so I can sort of figure out what the cost is going to be” The statement was harmless enough but my answer must not have been.

 

“I got it Bella you don’t have to worry about paying” her eyes narrowed

 

“Edward I’m not going to let you pay for the whole thing. We’re both going we’ll both pay”

 

“I’m the one that suggested the long trip, I got it” I watched as the resentfulness rolled across her face.

 

“This is not up for discussion, I’m paying my half”

 

What does she mean half are we going to split the cost of meals?  

 

“Isabella be…” I didn’t get to finish, Bella’s eyes turned to pure fury

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Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Jeebus, I'm emotionally tired reading that...you must be exhasted!

Another great chapter!

I was thinking, Tanya must be an excellent sub in the playroom. If I were Elezar or Carmen I would tire pretty quickly from always apologizing for her behavior. Pfft...she really needs to back off.



Author's Response:

There are chapters that when I'm done writing them I am drained and need a day off to regather myself... chapter 38 was one of them....

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Date: 26 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

I don't know how I feel about their angry sex...not that it wasn't hot! It was a little close to their usual :O

BTW, I LOVE the way your Jane talks! My favorite line in this chapter was when Jane was commenting on your term. "...this one so does like that word." She makes me giggle. I like that!

Oh, and I was too tired to brave the lines at 2 in the morning. I commend your craziness :)



Author's Response:

the craziness was totally worth it ,,,lol and angry sex sometimes serves a purpose...

Thanks for reading ... I have a teaser for you....lml

Bella pulled back after placing one more soft kiss against my lips to look in my eyes while her hips wiggled against my dick. She smiled as the hiss left my mouth. “Little Eddie wants to play hide and seek”

 

“Oh he’s not hiding…” my hips thrust forward “…and he defiantly knows where to look”

 

“Well then…let him come find it” Her legs loss their grip as she slide down my body but I held her back firmly keeping her against my chest.

 

“Are you teasing me again?” the last time she tried this I ended up giving her a spanking over the kitchen counter, the memory alone made me throb.

 

“I wouldn’t think of it” stepping away the hint of a smile formed on her face, my girl was up to something. I eyed her speculatively but she gave nothing away as she moved towards the house telling me she was chilly and going in to get ready for bed. 

 

While Bella opened the door to go back in the house she stopped “Edward…” the somber look on her face was a direct contrast to the playful one she held just a minute before. “…do you trust me?”

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Date: 04 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

I might overshare with this...but I don't care. I saw a porn flick once that involved Spaghetti O's... Sometimes Chef Boyardee in not a good thing...seriously, it scarred me for life. Why oh why couldn't Bella like Ramen noddles or something else (lol).

Another wonderful chapter! I'm glad to see they've patched things up. So, Forks is next? I can't wait to see what Leah's problem is :)



Author's Response:

Oh ,,, you have to share ...What did they do with the Spaghetti O's?  My mind is running in all sorts of directions with that ...lol ....Thank you for reading, here is your teaser.

A piece of tomato fell to the floor but instead of squatting down Bella bent from the waist, causing the back of her nighty to rise up over her thighs showing me the ruffled yellow thong she had on. The groan left my mouth without consent while my dick pressed painfully against my pants.

 

The giggle that came from Bella gave away her intentions, my girl was fucking teasing me – again.

 

A hand landed on her ass before it registered in my mind what I was doing, Bella gasped standing to give me a shy smile. “What did you do that for?”

 

I raised my eyebrows in disbelief “If you stick that in my face you know damn well what’s going to happen.”

 

“Oh yeah? “ Bella looked up at me through her lashes taking a few steps back out of my reach dropping the tomato she had just picked up “Oops”

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Date: 12 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Didn't mean to leave you hanging ;)

Ah, the porno...replace icing with Spaghetti O's...mixed with what Alice learned to do...yeah....



Author's Response:

oh...ick ...ummm..yuck! ... that is all I can think to say to that ...lol

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Date: 12 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

That chapter was perfect.



Author's Response:

Thank you, I have your teaser...

Picking up the first box I actually grunted because it was heavier than I thought it would be. After putting it on the table I turned around to see Bella carrying another one of the boxes.

 

“Isabella what are you doing?” I asked her while taking the box from her hand then realized the one she had was heavier then the first.

 

“I was carri…” I cut her off before she could finish

 

“I thought you had a fifteen pound weight limit”

 

“I do…” I stared at her in bewilderment

 

“This box has to be at least forty pounds” she looked at me like a deer caught in the head lights. I wasn’t mad –much- it was more concern for her wellbeing. Once the box was on the table I pulled Bella in for a hug. “I don’t want you to hurt yourself, so don’t do that anymore”

 

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Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Oh how I despise Tanya. Girl just can't take a hint. I think the only part of the conversation Tanya heard was when Alice asked them not to fuck in her driveway.

I think Bella's punishment was perfect. It gave her plenty of time to "think about what she's done wrong" as my mother would say. You're right, it is very much like time out. But with her history, a more physical punishment wouldn't end well.

Leah, Leah, Leah...I think she's feeling a little replaced :(

Thanks for the updates!



Author's Response:

Thanks for  reading and leaving a comment, I have a teaser for you..lml

Leaving out a long sigh I focused really hard on opening the twist tie that held the bread wrapper closed. Edward moved with me and as he passed by to get the wine out of the cooler his hand ran down the length of my arm. The extra sensation from his touch made my muscles clench tighter and I think I let out a whimper because Rose glanced at me with a smirked. 

 

Bastard!

 

I needed something else to occupy my mind and it didn’t matter what it was “Jasper” I looked up from the two loaves of bread “could you turn on some music?”

 

“Sure…anything in particular?” he asked moving to a panel in the wall. Before I could answer Emmett made an observation.

 

“You alright little Bella, you seem a kind of jumpy tonight” Edward’s voice came from behind me.

 

“Isabella’s been jumpy all weekend”

 

“I have not!” the words left my mouth without any thought of the repercussions they might cause. Emmett chuckled and a small giggle came from Rose who was standing next to me, but my eyes went to Edward. His face became stone cold hardness while his eyes widened as they turned dark. 

 

Oh Shit

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Date: 23 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Not that I don't have a sense of priorities, but does this mean no playtime for Bella?!?!



Author's Response:

i don't know,,, I guess we will have to see...thanks for reading. I have your teaser ..lml.....

“Hey” my thoughts had taken over my attention so much that Edward’s voice startled me causing me to flinch.

 

“I’m sorry babe…” he chuckled “…I didn’t mean to scare you” My eyes moved towards his they were warm and bright making me smile.

 

“It’s ok. Where have you been?” Edward sighed

 

“Ahhh…well while some of us get to lay around in the tub others leave the dog out, hang up their clothes and talk to irate fathers from Forks” the auditable gasp left my throat and I couldn’t mask the horror in my voice.

 

“You talked to Charlie?”

 

“Hmm...Yes I did” Edward sat down on the floor with his back against the wall of the tub pulling the cork out of a bottle of wine that I didn’t see he had.

 

“What did he want?”

 

As I sat up straight turning with my arm lying on the wall by his head, Edward handed me a glass before he started talking. “He was just concerned about you Bella and he wanted to make sure that after what happened you were safe.”

 

“And?” I knew there had to be more

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Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

I think it was Heather that was in the house... why she was there, I have no idea... hmm.... I wonder who sent her? If it was her, why did she break into Edward's place and not Bella's... hmm... I'm intrigued! I love a good mystery!

God, Officer Hawk was a real dick! I'm glad Bella stood up for herself, and not let him bully her!

Thanks for another wonderful update!... and for the little citris at the end ;)



Author's Response:

Bella is the daughter of a cop so policemen don't intimadate her like would someone else...lol....Thanks for reading, I have a teaser for you....lml

I should have expected that she would have a nightmare, the trauma of having our home invaded was enough to unnerve me, I can only guess what memories it stirred in her. Removing my shirt that was full of tears and dirty from her nose I laid back down with her head on my chest. “We’ll change the locks tomorrow and figure out who it was, that will make you feel safer. It was just a dream Bella, I swear I would die before I let anyone hurt you.”  

 

“Don’t say that!”

 

I wasn’t sure what she was talking about when she abruptly shot her head up to look at me. “I couldn’t stand it if something happened to you. I couldn’t take it”

 

Even in the darkness of the room I could see the fierceness in Bella’s eyes as the tears fell down her face. “Nothing is going to happen to me, and nothing is going to happen to you. Now stop with the tears and lets go back to sleep”

 

Cupping her face my thumb wiped away the tears as she nuzzled her cheek against my palm before turning her head to placing a soft kiss in the center of my hand. “Do you think I’m crazy?”

 

“No…” why the hell would I think that?  

 

“…I think it was a stressful night and I think you have a lot on your mind and have dealt with more in your life then any one person should have to deal with. I told you before baby, I think you are the strongest person I know; a lesser person would have called it quits a long time ago. Now let’s go back to sleep, I have a promise to keep to a dog”

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Date: 21 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Ah, such an awesome chapter!!!! I knew there was something off with that Heather chick... if that's her real name :/

And who complains about too many lemons?!?!?! That's crazy! Did they not read the story summary?

Great chapter, soooo many things going on, questions that need to be answered, trips they need to take, sex that needs to be had, and we can't forget the "usual". *sigh* Have I mentioned how great this story is? ....I think I might have mentioned it before ;)



Author's Response:

thanks...

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Date: 22 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

My God that was an amazing lemon at the end! I might need a cold shower ;)

No I don't buy Irena's apology, I think she mostly full of shit. Maybe like 1% of her is actually sincere.

I was wondering when she'd be writing in her journal. Especially since she had that epiphany. And damn you woman *shakes fist in the air* making me look up words. Now I need to find a way to use lackadaisical in my everyday speech. How did I not know about this word?

It was a great chapter, as always.



Author's Response:

lol...my mother use to say lackadaisical ...lol... I have a few more words that she used all the time in up coming chapters...maybe you'll need to keep out your dictionary ...lol....she has a few writings in her journal I'll be posting ...

Thanks for reading and taking the time to leave a comment...I have a teaser for you...lml

Edward was pulling into the parking lot that was across the street from the main entrance. He didn’t say anything else until he held my door open for me taking my hand and pulling me closer to him. “I am sorry about my behavior”

 

I smiled at him “You girl forgives you”

 

His face moved closer to mine as he spoke “My girl is more tolerant then I deserve”

 

“Never” as I said the word his lips brushed against mine, it was a sweet chaste kiss. When he pulled back his eyes held a tenderness in them as he palmed the side of my face. 

 

“Remember your task and speak to no one other then family members”

 

“Yes Sir”

 

“Come let’s get this over with so we can get home” I nodded in agreement following behind him with my eyes down. As we approached the entrance Edward spoke with the guy at the door.

 

“Tyler, how is the night going?”

 

“Edward, actually it’s been busy, it’s game night”

 

Edward groaned “damn I forget about that”

 

Tyler chuckled as we moved into the club telling us to have fun, I wasn’t sure what game night was but it appeared I was about to find out.

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Date: 05 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

Oh, I was never mad at Edward. All of my anger was reserved for Caius and Jessica.

I'm glad to see their bond is strengthing. They're able to talk through the things that need to be discussed. Although I was a little disappointed (but not surprised) that Bella didn't want to talk about what Jess did in the bathroom. I think Edward had a right to know upfront. Yes, she can take care of herself but Edward strikes me as the type of man who measures his worth by how well protected and treated his sub is. How will he know if he needs to step up if she holds out on him?

Great chapter!



Author's Response:

They are talking better,,, and growing together..and something tells me that Jess will get what is coming to her...thanks for reading and leaving me a comment, here is this weeks teaser...

Excusing myself I went into the kitchen to check in dinner, everything was done so after pulling the chicken out of the oven - to allow it to rest - I started putting the other stuff into serving bowls. The sound of the kitchen door swinging open made me turn to see who was there, and I smiled as Aro joined me.

 

“Isabella I don’t wish to disturb you, but may I speak with you for a minute?”

 

Not wanting to be rude I stopped what I was doing. “Yes Sir, do you need something?”

 

“No..no, please continue, I can talk while you work.”  I asked him to give me a second while I took the Corn Pie out of the oven because I didn’t want him talking to my back. Once it was out I gave him my attention. 

 

Eyeing the pie I had just removed he smiled at me warmly “It’s nice to see you so carefree around everyone. You seem much more confident and I must admit it does me good to see that. You are young and need to laugh more.”

 

I giggled “Emmett is easy to laugh with”

 

Aro agreed with me with a slight nod of his head “And Edward?”

 

“Edward is easy to laugh with too.”

 

“Good, it truly brings me joy to see you happy and carefree.”

 

“Well I don’t know about carefree…”

 

Aro spoke before I could finish “Yes well that is wanted to talk to you about.

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Date: 11 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Hmmmm... I just posted a chapter, not 10 minutes before I read this, only to find the lemons very similar... kind of strange. I'm worried that readers might think I stole your citrusy goodness. *sigh* Anywho, you know I adore your story right? It would crush me if you thought I was ripping things off!

Let's get to this chapter!

It honestly weirds me out that Bella acts so submissive with Aro. Has she always been that way?... She's not like that with Em or Jasper. Maybe it's just respect for him. Well, I was never confused about their relationship. I think it's funny that some believe people of the opposite sex can't be friends.

And what was the deal with Edward's attitude in the kitchen?!?!? Will that be touched on?

Great update!

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Date: 18 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

I was getting a little worried... I was thinking, "Don't be ass and ask Bella if Aro gave her any money." Whew. Glad he didn't.

Great chapter! One more thing... what's an annuity? LOL... just kidding :)



Author's Response:

LOL ... I think that Edwrad knows the answer to that question ((about the money )) I sent you a seperate e-mail as a small thank you for leaving a review ...lml

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Date: 18 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

Wow... just wow. That chapter was really hot! I think I like full on mode more than the modified. With the modified lines get blurred and I think it's harder for Bella so I'm glad she did so well.

I'm back! I've finally got the time to catch up on my favorite fics so I'm off to read I think 2 or 3 other chapters you've posted.



Author's Response:

Welcome back !!!

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Date: 19 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

I kind of want to punch Paul too! Poor Edward. Hopefully when Charlie sees how happy Bella is, he'll take it easy on her.

I suppose I can see where Leah's coming from. I guess she didn't think that a new boyfriend would cut into sister time. That was just a silly thought.

Great chapter and I'm all caught up. Looking forward to seeing the sisters hash it out and Charlie's behavior toward Edward.

P.S ... No, I don't do the rock thing, but it sounds pretty cool. I just take a bunch a pictures that wind up in a shoe box in my closet XD



Author's Response:

I have rocks all over my house and yard from all over the world...

Thanks for reading and taking the time to leave me a comment ....I have this weeks teaser for you...lml

Leah went into the bathroom while Bella came around the corner into the kitchen. Our eyes met immediately as a warm smile engulfed her face. It was clear she had been crying and it took everything I had in me to remain in the chair and not run to comfort her. Sue looked up as she started putting food on the table then went over to hug Bella just as I wanted to. Bella nodded at whatever Sue was saying then left her go so she could say hello to her father.

 

“Hi daddy” Bella said wrapping her arms around him from the back before leaning down to kiss his cheek.

 

Charlie’s hand gripped her forearm then patted it in a fatherly manner. “Hi’a Bells. How are you?”

 

“I’m good…” Bella gazed at me while adding “…I guess you got to met Edward?”

 

“Yes…no thanks to you. Paul introduced us” Bella glared at Jacob mouthing ‘Paul’, Jacob held his hands up in surrender “You don’t want to know”

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Date: 02 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

Super excited that James has "entered the building"!!! Can't wait to see what happens on that front.

And an eggplant colored vag? Poor Leah... no nookie and contant worry for her sister has indeed made her cranky. Glad they hashed it out though.

I do have to applaud your creativity during their usual. Really hot! My god, my face was flushed and everything ;)

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Date: 30 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

Happy belated birthday!

Edward will not be to happy about Bella showing her/his boobs like that!

Summary:

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Gorgeous banner by Lindz Nom Nom, once again through my ineptness I had to take it to banner maker to get the code thingy to post it here. Im not the brightest bulb in the fixture. :)

Sweet innocent new girl Bella starts her senior year without any friends or knowledge of the cliques that form the hierarchy at Forks High School. Unfortunately her first meeting is with the local greaser gang called The Devils who run the school and their female counterparts, they teach Bella hard lessons fast.

Story is completely from the POV of Bella.


Categories: Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe, Canon
Characters: Bella
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 46211 Read Count: 14508
[Report This] Published: 20 Jul 2010 Updated: 07 Jun 2011
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Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I have to say I LOVE LOVE LOVE your story. It's now two-thirty in the morning, and I should have been writing my paper, but I just had to read more! Bags under my eyes be dammed!

Can't wait for the next chapter :D

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Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

SMILES!!!!

I was begining to think you quit this story. Glad to see the shitty reviews didn't keep you down. :)

Loving it.

Summary:

In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to donate blood and abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when her parents are killed by a vampire. She is adopted by her parents' friends, who happen to be vampires. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured? Will one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and bloodplay.
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I want to thank Dazzled~by~Jake for this awesome banner! And my awesome Beta Lindz! xo


 

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Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 316008 Read Count: 143621
[Report This] Published: 14 Aug 2010 Updated: 26 May 2012
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Date: 03 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

So I was following this story on Freedom Fan Fic and was uber excited to find it here! I can't tell yo how much I'm loving this story, and I look forward to the next chap!



Author's Response:

Hiya helluvabell! Yeah, your penname looks familiar.

Thank you so much!!! I'm happy that you are enjoying this story!

Thank you for reading and commenting. I appreciate it =)

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Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Yea yea...happy dance, happy dance. He claimed her! And might I say, it's fuck hot!

Thanks for such an awesome update!



Author's Response:

LOL. Glad you enjoyed it! I'm definitely doing a happy dance cuz the chapter is finished, crazy monster of a chapter. Very exhausting. LOL

Thanks for reading and commenting!!! I really appreciate it!

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Date: 02 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Wow what can I say? So many amazing things are happening in this chapter.

First, I want to say no one should be complaining about chapter length. The way I see it is readers are fortunate to be able to read amazing stories like yours and other author's on this site. So a chapter is a little short, you got a quick update. Say you got an update that was later than what you're use to; I know as a writer, I try to make up for it by turning out a kick ass chapter ASAP.

That being said, I was amazed at this chapter. I loved Cauis' backstory with his hybrid mate. So cool.

Then there was that hot marking going on in school. Hot!

Then Ben and Angela... sad about his folks, great that they're together, they're so sweet together :) I gotta tell you I was surprised that he claimed her like that... I know it happens in your world, but when I think of Ben and Angie I think "wholesome". It proves my point that you have to watch out for the quiet ones ;)

And the thing with Mike-- uber creepy. At least now I know who's behind everything.

Loved it! Can't wait for the next update!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! =) I'm happy you enjoyed it!

I've had a very few people ...um...complain about chapter length on another site. Maybe they think that they need to read the entire chapter in one sitting? lol idk But  I totally agree with you.

Yeah,  you do have to watch out for the quiet ones! lol Very true.

Thanks again for review! I appreciate it very much =)

~Jells

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

So many amazing things going on in this chapter! I think my favorite was Emmett's interaction with the little girl at the blood clinic. It was soooo sweet :)

It's sad about Ben and Ang. Don't know how that's going to work out. I'm anxious about Aro's visit and the trial...can't wait to see what happens.

Thanks for another terrific update!



Author's Response:

Hiya helluvabell!

Thank you so much! I'm happy you enjoyed the chapter.

Thanks, yeah Emmett is such a sweet vamp, he adored Annabel =) And as for Ang and Ben, it's definitely going to be tough for them.

Thanks again,

xo

Jells

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Date: 14 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Okay, so this is one of my favorite chapters. I got to tell you, I was getting a little squigged out reading about the Cullen boys' arousal to Bella's scent. Mainly because she sees them as family, but I totally get the vampire reasoning behind it.

But yeah, I felt a little bad for Edward and Bella when they had to be seperated :(

Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Hiya! *waves*

Aww thank you so much =) Glad you liked. IKR? When I was writing that scene with the Cullen guys and Bella's period I was like OMG, what am I doing?! lmao But yeah, they're vamps so that's the only reason why I left as is.

I felt bad for Edward and Bella too. But maybe they'll get a chance like this again? You never know. lol

Thanks again,

XxOo

Jells

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Date: 11 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

God, I hate Tanya.... I'm worried that she won't give up, like you said. And the deal with Bella's illness, WTF....scary! She could just bleed out!?!?!

For some reason, when I was reading this I thought I had more to say....

Just know, it was awesome, and I was a happy girl when I saw that you updated :)

Oh, exactly how tall is Edward now?



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. Sorry for the late response. I've been rushing to finish up a chappy for another story.

Yeah I hate Tanya too. It's funny b/c in my other story I really like her. lol But here *shakes head* she has got to go.

I have this in my notes somewhere. You should see the stack of notes i have for this story. It's crazy lol But off of the top of my head I want to say that Edward is now a little over 7 feet tall...between 7'2" to 7'4" he's insanely tall...the male vamps are around 6'8" on average.

I'll have to look it up for exact. lol

Thanks again,

XxOo

Jells 

Be My Sub by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 745]
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Thank you Emma Verberg for this new banner! She is wonderful!

After searching for a century, I have found what I have been looking for, a human submissive. The fact that I am a vampire and she is my singer, will not deter me from having the only thing I have ever wanted more than human blood, her body. D/S BDSM EPOV AU

 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: Bella, Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Ageise02 WIP Reads
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 66673 Read Count: 85966
[Report This] Published: 15 Aug 2010 Updated: 05 Jul 2012
Reviewer: helluvabell Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 First time in the playroom

So I just found this story and I have to say I love what I've read!

I think your story is the first I've read that has a dom/vamp Edward and a sub/human Bella and I think it's a great idea.

Great work and I can't wait to read more.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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He met the girl of his dreams. She met the man of her nightmares. How far would you go for your obsession? AH/AU/OOC

For the BEYOND THE PALE contest-Third Place Voter's Choice Winner

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: Bella
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 40133 Read Count: 39954
[Report This] Published: 25 Aug 2010 Updated: 22 Sep 2013
Reviewer: helluvabell Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Only Bella would fail to realize Emmett trying to win her over. Cue eye roll.

I'm so happy to see that you're making this a full story. And congrats on 3rd place!



Author's Response:

Yes, but clueless gives you so many more possiblities for a story and smart and savy.  LOL

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

OMG.....What did you do!?!?! You killed Charlie (I'm starting to think you don't like his character) and knocked-up Bella! Now, how the hell is she suppose to get away from him?



Author's Response: I actually love Charlie but his and Edward's deaths were necessary for the story. Would you believe Emmett is my favorite character of all? I want to show the possibilities of Emmett beyond idiot. There's so much he's capable of.

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Wow, Rose really knows how to lay on the guilt trip. Thanks for the update!

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Date: 04 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I can't remember if you said this story had a HEA... I don't see how it could... I kind of want to curl into a fetal position and cry for Bella... damn.

You have done wonders with Emmett's character though! He has so much depth... and I kind of hate his guts. So, way to go!



Author's Response:

As much as I love Emmett, he's just evil in this story.  There will be a happy ending for Bella, but you'll have to wait to see how it happens.  Remember this isn't TPW, even I can't redeem Emmett in this one.  :)

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Date: 18 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Oh my God! I'm so excited that things are finally turning around :)

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Date: 17 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I absolutely loved Charlotte! I'm from Texas too so I love hearing from the southern characters of the Saga.

Of course Emmett will find out about their friendship. How he handles it is another thing. And she's not fat!--she's preggers... But the yoga is a good idea.



Author's Response:

I'm Austin born and bred. You couldn't pay me to live anywhere else but Texas!!  Charlotte is going to help me channel my Southern "take no prisoners" attitude.  Glad you liked it! :)

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 03 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

It was because it wasn't a boy, wasn't it?...That bastard.

I gotta tell ya, every time I read another chapter of this I feel thouroughly depressed. Yet I come back for more! What is wrong with me?!?!?

It was still a great chapter, and I'm glad that she now realizes what a thug he is.



Author's Response:

You keep coming back waiting for her to open her eyes and then to escape and find love.  ;)

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 13 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Oh, I love a good J/B story!

Very nice image of him on the horse...yeah. Can't wait to see how things unfold in this story. And I'm so very happy that she was able to get away from Emmett.



Author's Response:

I thought it made a great first impression. Did you catch the misdirection with the horse description? Just a little fun. ;)

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

So glad to see you back! (Thought you might be off writing another book...LOL.)

I'm excited to see what's coming next!



Author's Response:

Oh, I'm doing that too...two actually! I figure if my head is stuck in 4 different realities between LOMO, CAM and two novels I won't be able to be depressed about my empty nest.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly. Can they both overcome traumatic pasts and trust issues to be together?  All-Human

Thank you to Coleen561 for the beautiful banner!

Virgins & Villains came in first in 3 categories at the Summer 2011 Avant Garde Awards.  See banners below.

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella, Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 86 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 448890 Read Count: 250368
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2010 Updated: 04 Jan 2012
Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Ringtones & The Prodigal Son

Thanks for updating again. Oh, and for the record, I wouldn't mind a bit if Emmett sang Sexy Back to me.

So what's next? A Jonelle beat down? Interview hell for the nasty Ms. Chance? Can't wait!



Author's Response:

Justin who?  I'm with you, I'd rather have Emmett sing it to me........*sigh*...what were we talking about?  oh yeah...Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Yellow Carnations & First Class

 

Sooooo.... those flowers are uber creepy. When Rose was talking about what their color meant, the heater kicked on...scared the crap out of me!

Thanks for the update... even if the flowers were creepy....bet it was that Victor James guy (btw- loved how you did the name)....maybe it was Mike....could be a random stalker...gah! When will we find out?!?!? And what will Caveward do?



Author's Response:

LOL...the heater scaring you makes me chuckle.  Believe me, I'm the biggest chicken I know...I get spooked very easily.  I can't go out in my yard at night because I swear there are zombies out there...and zombies don't even exist.  I scare the crap out of myself regularly.  You guys didn't believe me when I said I needed therapy...  Anyway, don't worry about creepy stalkers while B is in London...just have some fun reading about it.  Thanks!

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Creme Eggs & Welcome Distractions

I can't wait!!!! It will be epic :D

 Such a sweet chapter...well, I've decided to pimp your stories out in my next post. I don't think you'll mind (lol). I've had too much fun reading them to stay quiet any longer!



Author's Response:

pimp me please!  lol  I'm so glad you're liking the story!

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 63: Dream Jobs & Photo Shoots

Okay, so I absolutely loved the edited Leno bit!!! Sweet and oh so funny... great job.

I gotta tell you, even though I know how the pregnancy results will turn out, I'm still nervous! *sigh* Please, please don't pull the rug out from under me. I'm so invested in the story that I couldn't handle a heart fail!



Author's Response:

more stuff about Jill Richarson in next chap...test results wont come for a couple chaps though.  Thanks!

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Grits & Vitamin R

I'm loving this story. I also like that the priest is the gossip of the church. Hilarious :D



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Weirdos definitely make the world more interesting.  I've known a couple priests crazier than that guy....but most of the priests I've known were/are very good people, very dedicated. (but what's fun to write about there? lol)

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Haircuts & Pepper Spray

I don't think I've ever laughed harder. Seriously, I laughed so hard that it led to crying and coughing up a lung! Too funny.



Author's Response:

omg!  at least you didn't lose bladder control...i guess that's something...lol.  Thanks for reading, I'm very glad you enjoyed it! 

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Captain Jack & Drunkella

Again with the hilarity! BTW, I love Drunkella.



Author's Response:

She's a lot of fun to write.  Unfortunately, some of us have minds that work that way while sober.   Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Outtake: The April Fool

OMG! As soon as he started talking to her in the elevator I was like, 'No, he isn't.'

But he did. And it was awesome!!!!

I also loved his ponderings while Rose randomly told him off. Great outtake.



Author's Response:

Thanks, glad you liked it.  I really liked the 'pondering' also.  They are so perfect for each other.  I have some funny stuff planned for him..and will be dishing out my own punishment to Emmett very soon!

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Lap Dances & Abstinence

Being Catholic, I distinctly remember my mother telling me it was wrong to have any kind of fun on Good Friday...that includes dry humping your boyfriend in the parking lot. LOL. So I completly understand Bella's Catholic guilt!

I'm glad she wan't mad or disturbed by Edward's confession...I wonder how she'll take hearing about the pantie theft :D



Author's Response:

I would give Bella extra penance, but she was dry humping Edward...who could resist that...lol.  Here's hoping that no nosey people saw them and reported to Father Pat!  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Pool Tables & Revelations

I just want to thank you for changing my opinion of Lady A's song "Need You Now". When my friend and I first heard it, he told me it was about a booty call (which totally ruined the song for me). Now whenever I'll hear it, I'll think of E&B slow dancing to it :)

And for the record, I wouldn't be opposed to seeing any part of Emmett naked. That includes his tush ;)



Author's Response:

Oh...eww.  LOL  I never thought of the song that way... hahaha.  Okay Emmett's tush would be a glorious thing for us to see ...but not, unfortunately for Edward.   THanks! 

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Outtake: Ode to The Arse

Awww, I liked the silliness! I especially liked her internal apology to the assholes around her for nearly dying. :)

To think, they've bumped into each other before!

Thanks for the Thanksgiving update! You really are too good to us :D



Author's Response:

Thanks!  as i said, I was inspired..lol.  Thanks!

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Some Justice & Escargot

I'm still stuck on what Geri said about weak babies left out in the wilderness to die...what a bitch!

(Psst...but secretly, just between me and you, bad guys are so much fun to write. Aren't they?)

Great job creating her! And another great chapter.

BTW, I got my copy of Eclipse, but I'm saving it as a treat for when the semester ends. Crazy right?....I don't think I'll be able to hold out.



Author's Response:

well I wanted to convey how evil she was...glad I don't know anyone exactly like her...  (I'd probably push her out a window).  I do like writing the villains...you don't have to hold back and behave..lol. 

waiting till the end of the semester?  well..that's not too far away i guess...you, my dear, have superior willpower.  Thanks!  I'm off to write more LRM.