Penname: Flora Mile [Contact] Real name: Fiorella
Member Since: 06 Feb 2010
Membership status: Member
Bio:

Hi all, Thanks for taking the time to visit this page, and coming to find out a bit more about me. I live in Australia. I am over the age of 35, and a divorcee. I don't have any children but I do have three nieces, that I adore, and occasionally look after. I have two dogs Sunny and Ava. Sunny is a spoilt Pomeranian and Ava is a Siberian Husky, and you could say they are my children. I love to read and now giving writing a go. My favourite genre are Crime and Romance. Some of my favourite authors are Kathy Reichs, Janet Evanovich, Jane Austin, Matthew Reilly, James Patterson, Patricial Cormwell, John Grisham, Charlaine Harris, Ruth Rendell, Lynda La Plante, Harlan Coben, John Grisham, J. R. Ward, Michael Connelly, Dan Brown, Kyle Mills, Sara Gruen, and Ian Rakin. You can also find me on FFnet. http://www.fanfiction.net/~floramile Thanks


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Reviews by Flora Mile
Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 269706
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - In My Hands

Aro is a fricken fruit cake.  Send him out the back and shoot him now is all I have to say...

The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3561]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

TPW Avi 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Carlisle/Esme, Emmett/Rose, Jasper/Alice
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1250749
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 45

Mel, I have been reading your story on the other site and I am glad you moved the story here, it was so hard to register there...

I have not missed a chapter yet and I am loving what you have been writing. 

So much has happened and I am glad that they are working on their relationship.. but always in the back of my mind is Carlisle... What is he doing? What is going to happen? What is he planning? etc etc and I am sure I am not the only one. 

I cant wait for the next installment.

Email me sometime and let me know how you have been.

Fiorella

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 46

Ohhh the twist is on its way... I just hope that Bella and Edward will stay together.

 

I have a feeling that Carlisle is going to be and ass and I have a bad feeling that he is trying to sell or push Bella onto his brother son Felix.  (I hope I have that correct).

 

I shall see what the next chapter brings. 

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 47

Please let Edward explain what he is going to do to her... 

 

Really cant she get some peace, it really upsets me that this has to happen.  Can someone just put a bullet in Carlisle head and be done with it.  No one has to know... say he went on extended vacation and dump his body in a deep depths of the ocean. 

 

I have to say that I am actually sickened with this chapter, I was dry reaching when I was reading it.  It truly upsets me, I thought they were making progress but it is like they have now taken 500 steps backwards.

 

Ohh well, it all happens for a reason I will see where this is going... thanks for the update and chapter I still love the story... now I am going to get my nerves under control... Have a good week Mel.

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48

Holy crap Mic, you scared me there for a second.

 

Thank you for not letting Edward break his promise and I just hope Bella is able to get some peace soon, and I hope she marries Edward soon as well.

 

Please don't let the like of Marcus or Demetri get their hands on her.  Then her life will truly be in danger.  Carlisle is bad enough. 

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48

Holy crap Mic, you scared me there for a second.

 

Thank you for not letting Edward break his promise and I just hope Bella is able to get some peace soon, and I hope she marries Edward soon as well.

 

Please don't let the like of Marcus or Demetri get their hands on her.  Then her life will truly be in danger.  Carlisle is bad enough. 

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 49

Mic, I was wondering where you were going with the garden, because as you were describing what Esme went though was similar to what Bella went through and I thought, oh this is a repeat chapter.  I was totally wrong by the time I got to the last line my heart was heavy and I wanted to cry.

 

Thank you for explaining the garden to us.  As always wonderfully written. 

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 49

Mic, I was wondering where you were going with the garden, because as you were describing what Esme went though was similar to what Bella went through and I thought, oh this is a repeat chapter.  I was totally wrong by the time I got to the last line my heart was heavy and I wanted to cry.

 

Thank you for explaining the garden to us.  As always wonderfully written. 

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 50

ohhh god please not Carlisle...

 

I really could not handle that one.

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: A Mother's Love

Mic, I am stupid, I have been going though the review trying to figure out what HEA stands for and I just figured it out. 

HAPPY EVER AFTER.  Clap clap for me. 

Please update soon...  as I said I have been reading what everyone else has written to see if I can figure out who would be on the other side of the door.  The reason I don't feel it is Edward is because she asked for the man up above to give her a break.  

I also have to say I like some of the peoples view of how to get back at Carlisle and I say letting him rest in a prison cell is to nice.  I think a lot of punishment from the 4 ladies would be better and maybe some starvation as well like he did to Esme.  Then I would turn his words against him and get the 3 boys to come up with the most evil thing they could think of him to do like he made them with Esme.  A bit of payback.  Maybe even a bit of back door sex seeing as he seem to like to take it by force.  Let see how much once he has it done to him by force. 

I could keep going by I wont it just get really evil after that one. Barb wire is involved and that is not pretty.  But then only the best for him. 

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 01 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

I think I am at a loss for words.  So Bella gets her happy ending and in the mean time breaks Edwards heart.  Hmmm I am not sure if this will happen but by letting her go completely Edward is loosing the love of his life.  Well we shall see what happens the story is not over yet. 

 

I am very happy with the way Carlisle life was taken away from him but it was quick and painless.  I have nothing more to say on this matter.  

 

We shall see what happens now. 

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Mic, I am sure everyone that has read the story would love for you to send it to print.  I know I would buy a book, even though you have to change the names.

I love how they have grown and how they still grow. I cant wait to see what you do with the Epi and I totally understand why it has taken Bella that long to go on an actul date with Edward.

Love this story so much.  Thank Mic for writing it.

Broken by ysar Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 103]
Summary: Past Featured Story

I wasn't like the women in those movies.  You know, the ones you catch on the Lifetime network when you're channel surfing over a pint of ice cream at two in the morning?  Everything was perfect.  My grades were good, my college was paid for, and the future of my dreams was set.  Until it wasn't.

 

Banner by FrozenSoldier


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 33666 Read Count: 14954
[Report This] Published: 26 Jan 2010 Updated: 12 Dec 2011
Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Much Ado About Nothing

ohh its over already!

i was so into reading it, that i did not realise I was out of chapters!

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 20: The Divine Comedy

ohh, I love caring Edward.

I just hope soon Bella would be okay with everything.

Homecoming by dont_run Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1249]
Summary: Past Featured Story

banner by mehek18 site http://mehek18.tumblr.com/

A troubling childhood has left Bella shy and scared of her own shadow. Her life is turned upside down when she is sent to live with the Dad and brother she never knew at the age of 15. Can Charlie and Emmett along with Edward and the gang help Bella? E/B, A/J Em/? *abuse is discussed*

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 160653 Read Count: 143742
[Report This] Published: 08 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 May 2012
Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Oh thank god you did not let the story go, I was wondering what happened.

I hope yourlife get back on track soon.

Fiorella

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Ohh it is a shame to be cut off there.

Loving the story.

After All by Scorp112 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 218]
Summary:

Bella is in a car crash that kills her mother and Phil, leaving her with many physical and emotional injuries. Bella is completely devastated by the accident and is no longer the woman she used to be. She returns to Washington to be closer to her father and best friends, trying to find a way to put her life back together.

Edward has had a "thing" for Bella for ten years, but he never acted on it, and no one ever knew about his feelings for her. He's done a decent job of building a good life, but Bella's return makes him question and re-think everything he thought he knew.

Once these two meet again, he's going to do all he can to finally get his girl, but life and circumstances will make it difficult for him - and Bella will be the biggest challenge of all.

Banner by Ms.Ambrosia

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 159668 Read Count: 22228
[Report This] Published: 10 Feb 2010 Updated: 05 Jul 2011
Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 25: These Dreams

Wonderful story, very well written, I never thought I would see Bella get to this point but it excellent to see. 

Keep up the wonderful work. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!! :) I'm so glad you liked what you've read!! :) 

Episode by BoydBlog Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 362]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Swan is a writer that is on a trip of a lifetime. Edward Cullen is a famous actor and musician, whose life is a blur of film-sets, hotels and screaming fans. A destined encounter and a battle of mind over matter erupt amongst sensual music and a shared longing.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 284003 Read Count: 51132
[Report This] Published: 13 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jul 2013
Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Demisemiquaver

I am slowly reading though your story and I have to say that the wine you have listed in this story are some of my fav's as well.  I am from Brisbane so I know how good Australian wine really is.

I was going to comment when I got to the end, but I think Bella really did piss me off in this chapter and I would really like to grab her by the head and smake it against the wall to knock some comment sence into her...

Why does she have to be so melodramatic!  Just call the poor bastard and let him explain.  Really is that dam hard to do.

Thanks for writing a wonderful story... but Bella is on my shit list at the moment.



Author's Response:

Yay, a Brissie gals! Hello! I've just updated! 

 

Yeah, Bella is what she is - Thanks very much Riley Biers for making her so bereft of self-esteem :)

 

Luv BBxx

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Em Dash

Can these tow not catch a friggen break... I am about to throw my laptop against the wall!!  I really want everyone to fuck off, and Edward to lock her in a fucking room and get this converstaion started othersies they are going to blink and they will be 50 and still not had the conversation!!!!

 

Still loving the story... just want to knock their blocks off!

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Crescendo

OMG, can these two ever catch a break, I say someone smack some sence into these two once and for all.  I would really like these two to talk it out...  It is about time they both jus laid it on the line and really talk.  By the time they are finished I would really like them to understand that neither one of them can go on with out thei other.

I would be nice for Bella to understand what Edwards life is really like and how the public perceive him.  Bella really need to ask these question and get it all out in the open.

Edward really needs to appoligise for not at least saying her to her or even just a quick glance and simle or wink hello.  Understand why he did not but he needs to say sorry for that and explain himself completely.

In the end make sure he does not forget the condoms, I dont think I could handle it... again!

Wonderful chapter but enough with the people fucking it up for them... I know that there will be more but its enough now, both of them need to grow thick skins if they are going to make it in Hollywood!  It is about time they did it together.

Fiorella

 

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

YAY!!!!!!!!

They talked and opened up.  I am so proud of them, I know the road head is going to be long and hard but I feel if they are honest with each other and talk they should be right.

I really would like to see Edward put Rose in her place for what she did.  She really needs to be brought down a peg or 20!

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Caret

I am about to jump in the water and pick up that rock Bella was stading on and smack her in the head with it, that should knock some sence into her.

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Transposition

Yeah, I am hoping the next chapter they will cover everything that needs to be said.  I really do hope that Bella understand and I really do hope Edward explains properly, no more pussy footing around.

YEAH!!!

Summary:

Life in a maternity unit is full of ups and downs!  

Bella Swan, an experienced midwife at Forks Hospital meets the new obstetrician, Edward Cullen and the attraction is instant.

As their hands touched, she gasped softly as she felt the shock of electricity that seemed to pass through their skin.  Dropping his hand abruptly, her brown eyes wide in surprise, Bella stepped back.  Without volition, Bella felt her face flame with another cursed blush.  Damn, she was 26 years old.  When was she going to stop blushing like a schoolgirl?

 

A HUGE thank you to colorguard_girl for my new updated banner

All Human/Alternate Universe


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 222356 Read Count: 59303
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 10 Sep 2010
Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Ohh so beautiful.  I was not sure how Bella was going to cope after James, I love the fact that you packed so much into this chapter to keep the story moving.

 

Cant wait for the update.  Love Bella's Dress.

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Cecilia, 

What a beautiful wedding, and start to their honeymoon.  I really do they have a wonderful honeymoon.  For all the crap they have been though they both deserve it. 

 

I love it and thank you for the update. 

 

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

I say use the creative licence, it makes the story beautiful, I am sure a lot of doctors would like to do what Edward was able to do and then again I am sure a lot would not like to see that part of their sister at all.  

Thank you for the update I loved it and cant wait for the next chapter as always. 

Help Wanted by jaxon 22 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 183]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

Bella Swan applies for the job of PA to the rude, arrogant and distant Hollywood star Edward Cullen. Will she be able to do her job without letting feelings get in the way? A/H Lush and graphic Lemons and very strong language. If smut isn't your thing - DO NOT READ!

 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 192705 Read Count: 21921
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 Aug 2010
Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 28: London Confessions

I have to say that this was one of the best story I have ever read, I could not wait for you to finish posting here so I jumped on FF to see if it was there and it was so I finished it there, and I have to say the only thing out of the whole story was the I Love you's. I personally found that they said it to much but that is only from reading it. I know you can never say it to much.

But apart from that the adventure you took us on was amazing.

I will look up more of your story for sure.

Thank you
Fiorella

Summary: Past Featured Story

A collab between Kitschisme and Rosette-cullen Isabella Swan has lived as a servant her entire life. She has come to expect cruelty from her masters, but will her luck change when she is purchased by the mysterious, brooding millionaire Edward Cullen?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 58565 Read Count: 26036
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 17 Feb 2010
Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I have only read 10 chapter so far and I like how you have set this, it is a beautiful victorian story and I am loving it.  I cant wait to see what Edward says, but I am on the fence of wether I am going to like it or not. 

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 27 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

So Edward likes her but does not want to be seen fucking the help is that how this is going?  I am just a little lost.

So I am guessing that he had feeling for her but does not want to admit them, Bella on the other hand feels used but now is unsure how he feels.  God I hope I have this correct. 

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Wow, I am amazed that Bella still has not said anything about Rose.  I am sorry but he should be told what a lying bitch she is. 

I really do hope he does not loose the house.  It does not belong to Rose just because she think she is the shit, she is definitely runny shit. 

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Oh how beautiful that they are willing to love each other faults and all.  

Someone by the name of Rose is in trouble. 

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I guess that saying "I am your always" is as close as either of them are willing to get to saying I love you.

I like Roses punishment, I think I would like to see Emmett with Angela I think they would make a cute couple.  Seeing as you are at chapter 22 I shall find out soon enough. 

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Wow, a day out to go shopping with Edward turned into a disaster with an wicked man and Edward was the hero in the end again.

 

What will Edwards say once he comes out of his shock. 

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

So Edward can't say I love you yet, totally understand about with what that wendh did to him.

Hopefully soon Edward will realise what he is able to say and do because he is stronger than he thinks. 

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Ohh Rose is still there, I hope Emmett has her jumping though hoops like a poodle dyed a horrible pink colour. 

 

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Yay, about time Edward, see was not that hard...

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Ohhh I did not see that one coming when I started reading this chapter. 

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I am not sure if this is the ending of the story but I have to say if it is what an ending. 

Every thing she never thought she wanted she got. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

After joining a prestigious and illustrious private club built around sexual dominance and role play; Bella enters into a submissive relationship with wealthy and predominant businessman Edward Cullen. Will secrets and a dark past keep their D/s relationship from blossoming into something more? AH. ExB Rated M for adult themes, sexual content and adult language.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Bdsm stories only, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 172799 Read Count: 138316
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 19 Oct 2010
Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 Private Jets Pt. 2

I have to say that this was a bit dramatic (Good way) and kept me on my toes the whole way though.  I was shocked about what Lauren admitted. 

Wonderful chapter as always. 

Thanks for the update. 

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: Bags and Bondage Pt1

Ohh, I started this story a long time ago and I stopped reading because the updates took to long. No I am kicking myself, such a fantastic story.  

 

I can wait till you update again. 

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30. Bags and Bondage Pt2

ohhh come on!  another cliffie!

Update soon, loving the suspense that you keep handing out to us. 

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Master of My Heart

Hmmm, well this is all very intersting, but I think I am getting lost in all of this...

Maybe it is because the update are so far apart and I think I will have to go back and re - read. 

Summary:

After a bad break-up, Rose and Alice take Bella out to find her someone to have a little “fun” with so they head to La Push, a local college hangout, where she meets a certain 17 year-old looking guy with green eyes and sex hair. OOC. First chapter written for the NaughtyHeels Anonymous One-Shot Contest.

 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 38182 Read Count: 21513
[Report This] Published: 18 Feb 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2010
Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Jingle Bells

ohh what a cute story.  I understand where Charlie is coming from it would be a shock. 



Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm glad you like it! 

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Feels Like New Years in July

Well I am glad that Renee took it better than Charlie did, I really do hope that Charlie tries and says sorry again.

I like how these two have just fallen head over heals for each other and how they are just so loving.



Author's Response:

Charlie will open up again soon, don't worry.  They have fallen for each other and it is fun to write because it wasn't a planned and long standing thing.

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Finding Answers and Striking a Balance

i like this chapter, there is a lot of love in it.  I am glad that Edward called Charlie it made it a little easier for him to say sorry to Bella.  I am glad they are having a little girl, so cute. I am excited that Edward is moving in.

 

Cant wait for the next update, so exciting to see what is going to happen.



Author's Response:

Edward really stepped up this chapter and was well rewarded.

Victim by tima Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 90]
Summary:

She once lived the life of luxury with her husband, James, but then he became abusive. With the help of an unlikely friend, she escapes James' abuse, becomes Bella Swan, and starts fresh in a new town. She meets a handsome young man named Edward who will help her heal, but will she ever fully get over the abuse she suffered? 

When James gets wind that his wife isn't dead, what lengths will he go to take back what he feels is his?

Rated for future sexy times, some scenes of violence, abuse, and cursing.

(loosely based on Sleeping with the Enemy, but with large differences, and a Twilight twist)


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 159628 Read Count: 12060
[Report This] Published: 19 Feb 2010 Updated: 31 May 2011
Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 17: A Weekend to Remember

what a loving chapter, It was what they really needed to get their relationship cemented. 

It is going to be interesting to see how you bring James back in.  I was wondering when he would show back up.  I know there are going to be rough times ahead for Bella and Edward when he shows up. 



Author's Response:

you are absolutely correct...rough times are ahead, but thankfully, it'll be because of outside influences, not due to relationship turmoil...

I'm glad you've found my story, and I hope you continue to enjoy.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

~Fatima

Summary:

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Edward Cullen loves two things in this world: his twins Wendy and Car, and his tattoos.

Bella Swan is jaded by her husband, who left her three months pregnant. Now her daughter Lily is her entire world and she wears her love for Lily on her skin...

Can these two broken hearted people overcome their fears and come together?

Or are they both to stubborn?

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've read
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 48440 Read Count: 88238
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 Jun 2010
Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Epilogue

I havet say this was the a beautiful light filled story I have read in a long time.  There was no Bella getting attacked, no one chasing to kill someone else, it was pure unadulterated love. 

Thank you for a wonderful story and I had pleasure reading it in 4 hours. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella finds out she's pregnant, but Edward wants nothing to do with it...it doesn't fit his plans! She moves on...Will time make Edward want to be in their lives before the baby is born? Will they find their way back to each other - AH/lemons later  NC-17 RATING FOR VOILENCE IN LATER CHAPTERS.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 56874 Read Count: 46604
[Report This] Published: 22 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Apr 2010
Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Moving Forward

Ohhh, it has taken me 6 hours to read your story and I have to say you had me in tears, laughing, angry, scarred, pain, joy, and about 10 other emotions. 

 

I really have enjoyed reading this story and I really can not wait for you to update soon.  I have a feeling that Jessica is going to end up taking the baby and I am sure she need to be punished severely for it. 

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Moving Forward

Ohhh, it has taken me 6 hours to read your story and I have to say you had me in tears, laughing, angry, scarred, pain, joy, and about 10 other emotions. 

 

I really have enjoyed reading this story and I really can not wait for you to update soon.  I have a feeling that Jessica is going to end up taking the baby and I am sure she need to be punished severely for it. 

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Stalking Tendencies

OHHH Evil is not the correct word for her... but i cant really use the one I want...

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Carnage

Ohhh Jessica is in trouble now!

I say a little game of cat and mouse is about to start and the looser will not be Edward.  But then again you are writing the story and they could all lose. 

 

Till you update next I cant wait... I will be hanging on to the edge. 

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Dark Passenger

I am sure a lot of people would do something like this if they could. 

 

Cant wait to see what is going to happen.

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Stay with Me

Ok you really know how to bring on the tears.  Thank you for a beautiful chapter, from the talk in the car to the mothers washing their granddaughter to Bella holding the baby.

Truly beautiful.

Cant wait for the next chapter. 

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - Epilogue

OMG I did not realise you were writing Explosive Encounters... I have to say that James is just pure evil in that as well as Jacob and Billy... I really hope you do some damage to them.  Not just a quick bullet.  Anyone how is not reading this story should.  Keeps me on my toes. 

 

I have not started Ripple Effect yet but it is on my fav's list.  Will start it soon. 

 

Loved this story and I love the ending, it was beautiful.  I am always sad to see a story I love end, but I know they always have to.  Thank you for writing it and I cant wait for the update on EE. Thank you again for this wonderful story. 



Author's Response:

Yes, that's me! We are actually working on Explosive Encounters tonight, perhaps might even be able to update again, TONIGHT. So keep checking your inbox. EE Is about to kick up a notch and get a whole lot more sinister and mysterious.

Thanks for reading and reviewing After Everything.

Summary:

AH/AU OOC. Bella and Edward are forced into an arranged marriage by a pact made by their grandfathers. can a high school girl and a college graduate make this marriage work or will high school crushes and unwanted attention get in the way? first fanfic

 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 86357 Read Count: 10968
[Report This] Published: 22 Feb 2010 Updated: 12 Jul 2010
Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Update soon, I want to see where you are taking these crazy kids and their even more crazy family.

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 25: One Step Forward and About a Million Back

Well I have to say that I started reading this story and I thought what an original story.  I got to chapter 6 and then forgot about the story until you update yesterday.  I started reading it from the beginning again and realised that I had read it before, so I went through your reviews to find out where I was. 

I have to say that I feel sorry for Bella and the waring she is going through, but seriously Edward has put himself out there into the same situation and he probably has just as many doubts as Bella.  I have to say that she is acting immature if she stopped over thinking every little detail she would realise that she does love Edward and has done since she was little.

Wow you have so much going on in this story and now it has taken a turn for the worse.  It is going to be interesting to see where you take this.  Please update soon, I know you said you were not sure when you would but please dont leave us hanging like most of the other stories on this site.  I sware some people take over 3 months...  It is like they forget about the story.

Thank you once again for a wonderful story.

Summary: Past Featured Story

ADC,fanfic

 

Bella is a family attorney & Edward seeks her help. Friendship abounds, maybe more? AH OOC Rated M b/c they are adults & will do adult things! Canon Couples


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 91018 Read Count: 23285
[Report This] Published: 23 Feb 2010 Updated: 21 Dec 2010
Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17, Forever & The Rest of Forever

I have to say you really left the water works till the very last chapter, for that I am grateful.

A beautiful story and everyone should read it. 

Thank you. 

PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3948]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, Complete & read by Chandrakanta
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 768043
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I have to say that the ending of this chapter is the funniest I have read in a long time.  I love how both Alice and Bella were goading the boys and it was fucking funny.  I love how Bella says "I know self defence" and "Bring it" I nearly fell off my chair laughing and just to top it off she poked her tongue at him. 

I feel there will be two very very very saw backsides in the morning. 

But I am sure it was worth it for the both of them 



Author's Response:

Now you know how I am writing! My kids think that I am a mental case, I sit in front of the computer (which is in the lounge) and I snort or giggle or flat out just burst out laughing - I can't tell them what I'm laughing about either - they would be in shock!! Bella is a brave little thing, isn't she? Totally out classed in most instances, but brave none the less!!

I have started writing the next chapter (lemons get written after midnight, in the dark, just in case and noone can see me blush like a 12 year old!)

Thanks for the review xoxo Michele

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Wow, I have to say that I am proud of both of them for not loosing their head at each other.  You have done a fantastic job.  

A question for you, I am not being rude, I am just wondering, do you have a beta?

Thank you for putting a little bit of humour in this story as well.  You have balanced it beautifully. 



Author's Response:

thanks for the review - and I don't think you are being rude at all - no I don't - why are you offering?  I really can't help the humour - I tend to see the humerous side of things most times -  things tend to happen to me (a little like Bella...)

xoxo

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Ohhh, poor Bella she just does not understand when to say no....  Alice is also a bit at fault.  Bella should listen to her inner self.

Please update soon I really love your story.

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 May 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Ohhh, someone's backside is going to be flaming red by the time her weekend with Edward is over.  

I wonder what Alice's punishment will be like, but I understand I would be the same if I was Alice, you cant pull the Dom card on that situation.

I really do hope Bella gets past the communication problem she is having (understand what she has gone though) but she is deluding herself if she can make a relationship work with out communication, it's one of the fundamental rules.  I just hope she wakes up soon and realises this.

Peoplelikeus my offer stands I am not sure if you got my email.  if you want someone to just read over your work before you post I would be more than happy to help you out.

Thank you for the update, excellent chapter as always.

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 May 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

As I said, need a cold shower anyone. 

I say bring Jasper and Alice on.



Author's Response:

You ROCK! Busy with next chapter - I may send you what I've done soon - I'll begin outtake tomorrow probably!  Thanks for being such a star!

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 May 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

You did good, I loved it.  So much fun!!!



Author's Response:

YOU did good too!

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Do I get a teaser now!!! he he he I am so funny.



Author's Response:

And you thought you'd catch me unaware...you naughty Domme you:

 

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TEASER FOR CHAPTER 29

“P-pardon?”  Bella felt faint.  This is bad! This is really, really bad!

Mona looked at her as if she was in awe, “Sit down Bella, you don’t look so well.’’

Bella groped her way to one of the chairs in front of Mona’s desk.

Riley cleared his throat, “Your face says it all. When I went outside to ask the photographers what they were doing here, one of the guys that I have become sort of friendly with informed me that they were not here for me, but for you.  It seems that your secret is out.” He raised an eyebrow.

Bella felt her stomach heave. She put a hand over her mouth and ran to the little bathroom adjacent to Mona’s office.

 She made it just in time as her stomach was emptied of it’s contents.   Bella sat sweating on the floor for a moment with her head leaning against the toilet bowl.

My secret is out? Oh my god! Do they know about what Edward and I are? Have I ruined his career? His life? 

Her jumbled thoughts were racing around in her head.

What had she done?

Her phone vibrated as she was rinsing out her mouth. She answered it with a shaking hand.

“y-yes?” she whispered.

“Bella?”

“Edward…” she closed her eyes as she heard his voice. She could feel the tears well up in her eyes and she felt the hot trail down her cheeks.

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Are you shitting me, you cut it off there!!!  How am I supposed to know what they talk about.  GRRRR

I should take you over my knee, then lets see who is laughing...  ME!!! (insert Dr Evil's, evil laugh here)

You will be weeping, and asking me to take it easy on your ass.  NOT HAPPENING!

Thanks for the update, NOW CRACK TOO IT AND WORK ON CHAPTER 30, MY PRETTY!



Author's Response:

There is something seriously wrong with you, do you know that?? I read your review and then I re read it - I was like WTF!?  You my little Aussie Twister are too much.  BTW I am using the link that you sent me for the next posting... yeah it's too good not to (I looked at it again last night!)  kinda like when you drive past an accident and you can't help looking. And I'm thinking to myself - that AND EDWARD????!!! OMG!

Talk soon

xoxo

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Whoooo, I get to be the first... The non-beta beta. Haaa Haaa

Just letting you readers know that I can be bought!  It is a high price as well.  Five words for all of you "Robert Patterson and dinner date".  hehehe

If you cant do this for me then I will settle for the following as a dinner date:

Sam Worthington - Fellow Aussie like myself

Michael Schumacher - One sexy mother of an F1 Driver

Alexander Skarsgard - One hell of a sexy man, I love them tall seeing as I am nearly 6".

Only kidding!!!  But I feel the need to keep reviewing even though I know what is happening every week.  I just feel that you would be ripped off if I did not.  

Thank for the fun evening with the chappies as well, loved them and you readers have no idea what is installed for you all, you will love it. 



Author's Response:

you are a sick, sick, puppy! I love you so very much!!! My kinda girl...

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Michele,

I would like to personally apologies to your readers for cutting off PLU where it was.  On Michele's behalf she had cut it later in the next chapter, but I was not having a bar of it. I am a nasty beta and trust me Michele has felt the paddle a little lately.  I also have to admit that I will get downright awful in the next couple of chapters.  I personally feel Michele was giving too much away in this chapter already with Jim=James. 

Most of the readers picked it up (Yes I do take the time to read the reviews so I can help Michele give her readers what they want and deny just the same).

But I must admit, you only have to wait a week to find out what is going to happen.  Michele is good with updating, she is also head in chapter as I am going away on holidays for 3 weeks to see my sister in London.  I would not accept her putting anything up without me checking it first (Poor Michele had a lot of red pen marks).  I please feel a little sorry for Michele; she has been working really hard and staying up till the early hours of the morning to do this for her readers.  I have been doing the same for her, to make sure that she is stays as close to real life as possible.

Trust me there is a line in chapter 37 that say something along the line of “to lenient” and that is for my benefit... you will understand when you read it.  I personally feel it should be more.  As Michele said, I am a ball breaker when it comes to her story and I don’t think I would want anyone to have to be my submissive.  Their ass would be constantly pink... 

I would also like to thank the person that pick up on my mistake, I do try and re-read it about 3 times before Michele post's, one seem to skip by both of us.  I shall try and not let it happen again.

Yes I have been told that I am an “A” type personality and to make it worse I actually have been classified as an “A Responsible” person.  I have all the traits of “A” type personality to add on top everything is my responsibility.  Not good when you strive for perfection, but I have learnt to live with it and I work around it.

So I am sorry to leave you all with this cliffie, and to make Michele do this to her readers but just trust in us, it is starting to get good.

Thank you for reading PLU and reviewing as well.  I hope this helps a little.

Kind regards

Fiorella Maggiolo

 



Author's Response:

Hello there Madame!

Jeez, been bottling that up for a long time have you? Thank you my litte Koala Bear for all you are doing and your red pen marks are duly noted in the chapter that I'm working on right now!! You better watch out, your inbox will be full when you get home!!

I love you, stax and lots, jelly tots

 

xoxo

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Wow, Michele the response this week is amazing.  Since everyone is having a little trouble dealing this the jealous issue I thought I would write a review and if people want to read it and get a better understand how BDSM works.

I am "JustJinger or Peoplelikeus" beta and I agree with your comment that Bella should have some balls but to beta this story and to keep it as close to real life I had to buy books on BDSM and I can tell you now I would make a really crappy sub! 

There is not room what so ever for JEALOUSY in BDSM.  As a submissive you have to trust your Dom and I am sorry to say what your Dom says goes.  Hence the reason for safe words.  If Bella was uncomfortable with what Edward was doing to her she should have said Yellow and talked to him or Red and they would have left the party.  But once again Bella's pride got in the way and she said nothing and stewed the night away.

As for what happened with Vanessa, if she was not happy, felt humiliated, or did not want to do it.  Once again she has her safe words.  She chose not to use it.  She is the only one in charge of how she feels and she is the only one that can use them.  Think of it like this, can you tell what your cat is feeling when it meow's at you, can you read its mind, no you cant.  Same with Edward, he has these word there for a reason, to let him know what she if feeling at all times.  He cant make her use them, also he keeps asking her what colour and she keeps saying green.  So he keep going on with his plan.  

Now I am in no way saying Bella is at fault.  I am not.  Edward should have prepared her a little better by sitting her down and forcing her to ask questions about the play party, but once again he asked if she had questions, you can take a horse to water but you cant make questions it drink.  So if Bella let the opportunity go, who is to blame.  

What these two are going through now is a learning curve, Bella has never been a sub before and Edward should have know better.  Bella has a way of not getting the information she needs or say "fine" all the time.  Instead of just leaving it to her to ask questions.  Edward should have sat down with her and had a proper conversation.  Be then you have to keep in mind he has never collared before, so he has never had to teach anyone.  They girls he has always had have been trained and collared many times before.

To be a true submissive when playing is to truly let go of all that you believe.  You have no control what so ever apart from feeling.  This is the point of the Dominant he controls you.  He controls your body to give you pleasure, pain, satisfaction, wants, needs, desire, greed, and so many more feeling.  The only thing you mainly control is how you feel physically and mentally about this.  Is it to much or to little.  I think the best way of describing it is you are Goldilocks inside the 3 bears house.

Edward is already to lenient on Bella, she gets away with so much, the yelling, the disobedience, the punishments, it should be at least 10 to 20 strokes per infringement, Edward is lucky to give her 10 sometimes.  If she was with a Dominant that did not do this her backside would be red not pink.  For example what she pulled in the playroom after Edward did not call for the week, where she had lost the weight etc, she had at least broken 4 or more rules that should have been at least 40 strokes and I totally understand why, but this is just an example of how Edward is being lenient on Bella. 

This is one thing that Michele and I argue about all the time, but at the end of the day it is her story and I am just here to guide her along.  But then again there is also a reason for this in her mind.  I am sure she will tell me soon... 

When I was editing this chapter for Michele, I know I had some of the same feeling and reactions, why this and that, and I had to really go back and read the books and make sure we got is right and I think we came really close.  

As for Bella "growing a pair" when she is collared she cant, she has her rules to follow and the big on is to be respectful at all times, so she can tell him what she feels but she had to take the emotion out of it, she cant yell at him, she cant swear at all, all things you would do if you saw your boyfriend kissing someone else, you just cant do this.   This is where it is hard in these controlling, submissive relationships.  You have to separate your Dom/sub relationship from your boyfriend/girlfriend relationship.  It is like anger should not to be brought into the playroom, either the Dom or sub could get hurt.  This is the same, emotions like these have to be left at the door or you do not play. 

So I hope this helps while you read the rest of the story, if not jump on a few web sites out there, there are some really good ones where you can learn and be informed about this lifestyle.  It really is an interesting way to live, the discipline a person needs, is amazing. 

Thank you for reading Michele's story and taking the time to review.  I hope this has helped a little.  If you have any questions I would try and answer them for you.  I am not into or do not practice BDSM but I have read a lot on the subject for Michele. 

Kind regards

Fiorella Maggiolo



Author's Response:

And this ladies and gentlemen, is why I love this woman - she makes sense of my madness and endless ramblings.  thanks fee

xoxo

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Hey Michele,

What happened when you posted this???  You just wanted it to look longer than it was...

Hmm I think we are going to get mixed feelings with this chapter from what I have seen from the first review, but I have a feeling that a lot of people don't understand the Dom/sub life style... Like we did not until you started writing it and I started editing for you.  I really did not understand it either.

One thing I would like to let you readers know is that Edward does not have to be accountable for what happened, he asked her if she was comfortable to try something and Bella agreed.  If she did not like it she should have safe worded, and she chose not to.

Do not get me wrong what Edward did was wrong, but he has not had a relationship ever and he needs to learn that there are some things he is not aloud to do anymore.  They spoke about it and sorted it out.  It is something that will not happened again, so in his eyes as a Dom the matter is closed. 

I hope this helps your readers understand where Edward comes from.

Have a good day darling Chapter 39 will be to you soon, first edit done.  As I said I would break it into two... Sorry readers you will have to sit tight for chapter 40...

Love ya darl all the way from RAINY London... God I love the cold. 

Fiorella



Author's Response:

I love you too sweetcheeks and HAPPY BIRTHDAY and talk soon - you really do keep me sane!

 

xoxo

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

You posted early...  I have read the review and you could never send me crazy over editing for you.  I will always walk you off the ledge.  he he he

There is one review I dont get and if you figure what the person means let me know.

 Reviewer: evilangel813 Signed [Report This]

Date: September 02, 2010 01:35 PM Title: Chapter 40

 

I do not know what story I've been reading but that as sure as hell is not how the last chap ended... something is missing. And I really want to read it before this chap.

You did good as always Michele  Love Ya Fiorella



Author's Response:

Hey babe, I don't get that one either but you are my star and yes, I am sorry, I jumped the gun - so what do you think about an out take of some CULLEN LOVING the night that they got back? I'm thinking some Emmett/Rose Ali and Jazz and Dr C & Es loving - what do you think?

You don't have to edit (or Beta) I can just put it out there .... I will work on it tonight and then I'll flip it over to you!

Do. Not. Hate. Me.

xoxo

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

OMG I cant believe this chapter you crazy woman...  I think I am telling your Dome on you!  Your in trouble now!

 

Yeah the first to review...

 

wooooooohoooooooooo



Author's Response:

You do know that you are crazy right? Completely out of your tree!!! I love you, you crazy woman. Thanks darling. you are the bestest.

xoxo

Subbie

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Hello crazy lady!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Hey honey! Are you having a good weekend so far?  I'm off to write some more of chapter 54 - will send you my crazy chapter later today.

Love you xoxo

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

Thank you so much for answering my questions for me... love you heaps.

Cant wait for the next chapter, it sounds exciting.

Fiorella



Author's Response:

Love you so hard! Enjoy the grand prix!

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

Hey Michie,

All Rec's are from FF!

 

Love Ya

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75

Hey Darling,

Remind me to pimp this story out next update.  Leave it all on the Floor by katiecav.

Love you and I hope you are having a good week.

Fiorella

Summary:

 

REDONE, WARNINGS INSIDE PLEASE READ THEM

"Down will fall cradle, baby and all." I snorted as I sung the last verse of the nursery rhyme, truer words have never been spoken. B/E


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 21916 Read Count: 15212
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 22 Apr 2011
Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 31 Mar 2010 Title: When it all Falls Down

please update soon.

 

it is going to be interesting to see where you take this story

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Apr 2010 Title: When it all Falls Down

No this can't happen. The the skank Ellen to get her own child.

The Cullens and Charlie better come to the rescue.

Thank you for updating

Summary:

Bella and James used to go out, but now they are just "friends". Or so everyone thinks. Bella is still in love with James, and hates being used the way she is, but she'll take what she can get with him. A new kid named Edward comes to town, and Bella thinks it's time she got over James, and finds love in Edward. This stirrs up trouble for Bella and James, and many arguments insure. Confusion, heartbreak, and sex.

 

"I want to stop loving you, but I can't, and I hate it! You treat me like crap, and I still love you!"

 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 11693 Read Count: 1453
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 09 Aug 2010
Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh Edward is cutting in on James's grass.  I likey a lot. 

 

Cant wait to see where you take this.

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

James you be meanie...

 

Dont worry Bella, Edward always saves the day, you'll see. 

 

Update soon please.

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 17 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

taylor, 

the chapter is great, it gets Bella's point across. 

 

I really cant wait for the next.

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Ohh, about time she got away from the nastiness of the A-holes.

 

I am amazed more people are not reading your story.  I hope it picks up for you soon.  I am really enjoying it. 

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 31 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

This is like a train wreck waiting to happen, you can see it in slow motion and there is squat you can do to stop it.

I understand what Bella is going through, when you love someone that has been your whole life, your best friend and your lover. 

It is going to be interesting to see what Edward and Alice think of this and if James will ignore her on Monday back at school.

Update soon Please



Author's Response:

I know, don't you just hate it? D:

I hope I've portrayed and lived up to what you actually go through in this kind of relationship. I don't want to give people the wrong impression, becuase this kind of relationship sucks. ._.

Edward and Alice won't find out. As I've mentioned before, as of in the story right now, what happens between James and Bella stays between James and Bella. Hmm, we shall see then, won't we?

I'll try, thanks for the review!

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 10 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I understand that Bella might like Edward a little bit but you are yet to show it, what you are really showing us is that Bella is using Edward, and i have a feeling that she is using him to make James jealous.

The problem with Bella is that she does not realise that James is never going to change when he can get the milk for free.  She has ruined any chance she had with him when she started sleeping with him outside of a relationship. 

But I shall wait and see what is going to happen. 

Reviewer: Flora Mile Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

This story was on a roll and now you have disappeared. will you be coming back to finish this story off, or have you given up on it???

I have to say that if you have it is a crying shame.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan has been living with and working for renowned business man, Edward Cullen, to pay her way through college. The problem? She's his chamber maid. The complication? She's in love with him and he treats her like the hired help.

 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 33577 Read Count: 20500
[Report This] Published: 25 Feb 2010 Updated: 30 May 2010
Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

What a cute story, I have a feeling there is more to Bella than you are not telling us at this moment, and I also have a feeling that Edward is hiding something as well.  

I hope we find out soon if this is the case. 

Thank you

Summary: Past Featured Story

It's You've Got Mail meets Pillow Talk meets...eh, you get the picture. It's the usual ABG yuks and lemons. Playerward v. Straightlacedella. Love/Hate/Love/Banter/Sex. RATED NC-17 COS WHY ELSE DO YOU READ FIC, HONESTLY? AH, CANON PAIRINGS


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 174770 Read Count: 29859
[Report This] Published: 25 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2010
Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

What a way to start the story, I was killing myself laughing I actually had to get up and move around to breath.

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I agree with Bella, Edward was a pig but did redeem himself a little towards the end.

 

Still love your one liners they are so funny.

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Wow, Bella's an unhappy drunk.

 

Well in this situation anyway.

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I think I will admit to being scared of thunder just to build a fort with Edward.

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Ohh poor Eddie had a shitty night so to make himself feel better, he roped poor Bella into his boaring doctor night out's. Sure Edward just as friends... *wink wink* *nudge nudge* we all know.

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Now youa are in the shit Edward, how are you going to get out of this.

Think fast is all I have to say

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Holy Crap, I want a friend like Edward.  Hmmm yeah I dont think this happens in real life but hey here is hoping.

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Edward was actually starting to redeem himself until the last line...

His stock plummeted.  But all in all it was very exciting.

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Can you please tape Edward the next time he talks dirty, I am sure alot of ladies would get off listening to him

This chapter was buring hot.

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

C U Next Tuesday is not what it is all crack up to be here in Australia. But Bella's C U Next Tuesday will be seeing a lot of action on Tuesday.  Let hope Edward keeps his promise.

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Cullen is fucked.  I am not sure he realises that he is in the same boat as Bella and just has not realised it yet.

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 13 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Ohhh come on cant these two just say what they really feel.  I thought they were supposed to not lie to each other... 

I see some big lies going on here. 

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Wow, Edward is really opening up to Bella, it is nice to watch him grow and watch Bella learn pertinence.  They are beautiful together. 

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Ohh, the angles are crying tonight.  What a beautiful way to end a chapter.  made my heart even sigh. 

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Wow, it is about time he let go of the pass and I knew that Bella was the only one to help him thought it.  It will be interesting to see now that Grandma is not well, it Edward will go looking for his father. 

Try to find the only remaining relative that is left for him.