Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
08 Jul 2011
Chapter 10: Amazing
Little Information about “If only”
This is the summary that I write about “ If only” :
Edward & Tanya have been married for several years & live a wealthy & fairy tale lifestyle. They have one problem though, Tanya cannot conceive. When efforts to adopt a child fail, they decide to use Edward's sperm on another woman, Enter Bella, a prostitute who is willing to become a surrogate mother for couple. Their relationships becomes complicated it
This story is about: Romance, hurt , real life happiness and sadness and all the character of twilight will be here, too.
My English is not that good and with help of my Dear Beta I am writing to pursue my dream , I always love to write and it takes more time for me to write ,because I am not that good in English .
I don’t want to ruin the story line and the End of this story, you have to be patient and read it and then you may fell in love with characters. what they have and what they don’t have? But to answers of some of the question in this story I am writing some answer for it here, Okay.
Thank you to those reviews who are very kind hearted, who didn’t hurt my feeling or didn’t get mad at me like some people who I am think “their English is not that good, too.”
You see ……some of my reviewers stick to this sentence “is not a Bella /Edward love story, you should really change the heading I don't read Tanya and Edward stories”
Well , I felt bad for these people .
I write it in summary. I write the heading and,… I said this story belongs to who and whom? With what kind of language could I say that.
Look closer to these at the bottom:
Twilight - Rated: M - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 10 - Words: 20,497 - Reviews: 65 - Updated: 7-5-11 - Published: 9-1-10 - Edward & Bella
I am not lying and be patient if you are not. It’s your problem is not me!
I already answer to those who are accuse of this story is about Edward and Tanya and, not ,..
Come on, you guys …my English is good by reading this summary and heading. I know what I am reading. And you don’t and your English is much better than me, ……
Stop asking it please I already give you clue and hint at the summary and heading and I am not lying. So stick with this story, because I know we love Bella and Edward.
Well, I love Edward character more in twilight.
These are the good question I would like to answer:
I'm wondering how are they going to make a baby, if they will do it thru insemination or the old fashion way...sex?
It is in old fashion way
Well I don't see it ending good. Someone will end up hurt!
Yes, unfortunately three of them will be hurting in some way.
Tanya and Bella is womanly kind of way like; jealousy and love……, but Edward is victim here, it wasn’t his choice to pick Bella for this plan and now he has.
Edward has to be worried for Tanya, because Tanya going to be sensitive and then he feel for Bella.
He wants to help Bella so she become better ,and don’t get back to being prostitute and have something in her life.
For more than a one year he will be in two worlds. I think the most hurt full part is going to be Edward through whole of this story.
it looks like Tanya is okay, is she going to be nice person ?
Tanya character I love the most.
She is different from other Tanya you read. She is not bitch. She really loves Edward, and she is kind and friendly and get so comfortable with Bella.
She really likes Bella, too.
Tanya doesn’t have choice, because Tanya will know in future that Bella was prostitute and she is in drugs and alcohol so Tanya will support her . And she wants this baby very badly so she is struggling with sharing Edward and having a baby …
And you know, what will happen,………….. you can’t have both of it . Do you?
If only we could have what we want in this world.
This story is not one men living with two wives. Just know that.
Hope I answered to your curiosity question and be patient and I don’t want to ruin this story.
By telling more.
Have good day