Penname: nilo24 [Contact] Real name: niloafr
Member Since: 10 Feb 2010
Membership status: Member
Bio:

Before i saw Twilight , my life was boring and i didnt have any clue about becuase i am more to myself and not outsider so i spend a lot of time with my usual chours ,...that is boring , when i saw movie , i coudnt stop thinking about it so i search and find books , i read the 4 books . english is my second language it take time but i like the main charector and the only friend in whole world is book becuase its the only one who doesnt talk back at you and hurt you so , i want to read more so becuase twilight open me more i search and find Fanfiction and read all kind of Edward , desprate one , dark side one , funny one , drunk edward, i like it people have wild imagination , now after 2 years i decide to write what is in my head . its hard for me to write it becuase of my english but i will do it . it give me achievemant.


 


 


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Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.

BDSM, Dark story.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1110083
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 May 2010
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 73: Edward Day 23 and 24

its a little weird you save three chapter of 74 that all chapter is same content so i think you have to delete the simaler chapeters

The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3562]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

TPW Avi 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1264882
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 49

I love this chapter, hell, i love this whole damn story. It's great, and i love it

Summary:

Bella can no long hide behind her intellect when she has a stroke. She can't hide from her childhood love when he shows up back in Forks, either.

Memory Banner


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Sparkledamnu's Must Reads
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 26330 Read Count: 8058
[Report This] Published: 02 Feb 2010 Updated: 07 Feb 2010
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Epilogue

Hi . i read your stories it was happy ending i felt for bella who have storke and all this hospital visits its very tought time and she compare i o her life what she did wrong that she deserve this . emm you are good in writing this you could put this story in fanfiction dot com becuase a lot people will review it its very good and short . i love it thank u fo writing i .

Heroin Lullabies by ayngyl22 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 326]
Summary:

Edward is a lead singer of a hard rock band-lots of drugs, alcohol, and sex. Bella is a massage therapist freshly out of Massage Therapy school and her first job is with the band, Loxley Screws that consists of Cullen Masen, Emmett, Jasper and Jake, who is managed by Carlisle.  If you're under 18, please DO NOT read this story as it contains material that is not suitable for minors i.e. graphic detail on drug and alcohol use, sex and language.

This story is dedicated to Peter Steele of Type O Negative who passed away April 14th, 2010.  I will miss you.  This story will have the ending you were supposed to have had.

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 125581 Read Count: 29471
[Report This] Published: 03 Feb 2010 Updated: 12 Mar 2012
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue-New Toy

wow , i am happy that you are writting your experiance in this story this is first time that i read rock stories and i am happy that is real ,thanx for writting

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella's first assignment as a journalist is to uncover the truth about Christian Polygamy. Dr. Edward Cullen is a small town doctor who lives his life by his own sets of rules. Edward and his wives live a lifestyle that many may not understand. After Edward treats Bella he invites her into his home, where Bella learns more than what she bargained for. How will her first assignment impact the rest of her life?

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Edward/Alice, Edward/Rose
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 158312 Read Count: 124098
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 08 Apr 2012
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 27 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Suppression

hi , Thanx for writting i am eager to find out what you plan with this story how three wife and one male will be ,..emmm i cant imagine this kind of life are all about sex i think it is . its hard to live like that and you nee tention in this kind of life

Summary:

Edward: Dark, domineering, ruthless. Isabella: Sweet, caring, frightened. How will the two get along after Edward claims Bella his and steals her away in the night? How will they come together as one when they need it the most? M for Sexual content and Language!! Multiple chapters, not a oneshot!


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 22993 Read Count: 14249
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2010 Updated: 09 Apr 2010
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Introduction

wow, for start this edward of yours is dark ,you are good in writting thanx for takinh time and write

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

hi , this chapter is empty emmmmm

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

:(( i cant see , i guess you delete the chapter i thought you put it in hidden message in this chapter but i check and hilighted thepage with my mouse nothing its show up

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

ok , this is the only thing we see here

Chapter 7 by Nymphetamine Author's Notes:

ENJOY

End Notes:

REVIEW

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters and settings are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this work. No copyright infringement is intended. emmmm, i think something wong with publishing of the website it said you write moe than 2000 words for this chapter but we cant see anything hopefully you make it right that we could see it again thank u

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

wow, u up date so soon . edward have some kind of wierd atitue but i like dark vampire edward love him i feel he will be great

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

wow, what will happen in to the club , thank you for writting i really want to see new chapter i like this dark edward

Summary: Past Featured Story

Summary - Bella is kidnapped by a beautiful stranger that cannot kill her, but hates that a human can have power over him. Which road will he choose? When Jacob wants her, will that make his decision? Both men want to own Bella, however her heart only belongs to one. Which will have her in the end? Can Edward protect her from Jacob and his past, or will she eventually be consumed? 

 

 

 

Banner Created by the wonderful MsAmbrosia 

 

Vampires and Werewolves. OOC. Darkward. And every so often there shall be a sprinkle of the fluffy stuff. But mostly dark.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges: Dark Edward/Cullens
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 122877 Read Count: 69089
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 28 May 2011
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Ultimatum

I'm new to your story and love it. I added it to my favorites a while ago, but just started reading it. I could not stop. Thank you for a wonderful story and I look forward to future updates

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Monster

it's amazing. and acctually i don't have anything to say, it's all said already before.
your story is so different from all others at and i love it. you made it so good that i think that it's impossible not to love it after few chapters

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: New Surroundings

it's amazing. and acctually i don't have anything to say, it's all said already before.
your story is so different from all others at and i love it. you made it so good that i think that it's impossible not to love it after few chapters

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Hopeless

Another powerful chapter! Poor Bella! But so glad the truth is finally out

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Inside the Mind of a Monster

That was wonderful! You're writing is beautiful, as always

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Magic Eight Ball

this chapter blew me away. it was even better than i imagined it would be. can't wait for the next one

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Mr Nice Guy

i think u have 4000 review in fanfiction in here, not much peoplecaming but they will come becuase fanfiction delete some stories and people come here

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Bitter Heart

i dont get it . in authour note you mentioned that you will write chapter 18 but this is chapter 14 i search your story in google i find out the only place you write is in this website so why you are saying you have more than 4000 review and you update until chapter 18 emmm i really confused im egaer to ur update

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Manipulations

hi .

 

wow thank u for up dating so soon , no mistake really it was very nice. okay i recomand for slow burns you read this chapter its so good

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5390119/26/The_University_of_Edward_Masen

and also if you more emmm master of universe you could search in twilighted.com without sensor and fanfiction with sensor you will love their slow burns



Author's Response:

thank you very much for the recomendation, i will look into it thank you :) xx

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Killing the Corrupt

I love this chapter, hell, i love this whole damn story. It's great, and i love it



Author's Response:

hehe im glad you liked it :) and im ecstatic that you love the story. thank you so much xx

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Notes

hi....thank you for up dating .hope your new classes are good . i love the way you described the i love ou in the begining of this chapter the way bella hand was writing in edward chest it was so kind and romantic . i really liked . emmm i really love to know more about alice and emmet feeling toward to thir rose and jasper are they also have monster within themselves that alice and emmet recognized too

Summary:

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Vampire, Edward Masen, craves someone's body more than her blood.  Can he ever see Bella as more than a pleasure giver?  Can Bella ever see Edward as anything other than a monster?

This story is intended for mature readers only (18 and over).   Subject matter could be disturbing to some readers.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, My all time favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49527 Read Count: 76076
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Sep 2011
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

interesting plot line , bella become doll for edward and he doesnt feel herself yet but he doesnt like the way bella act on him , im sure he is feeling grows , keep up dark edward up i like him

Seducing Revenge by ladyinblue6 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 65]
Summary:

Bella isn't your regular government agent. She's a rogue agent, and she's killing everyone that ruined her life. What happens when she takes an FBI agent, Edward Cullen, hostage? Will her revenge still be burned into her mind? 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 47921 Read Count: 8464
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 25 Apr 2010
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

wow, i read your whole story today wow, it was really good a little bit of mistake and i wish you choice different for children but i am happy for bella , it was very nice . thank you for writting this story .

Carpe Diem by ladyinblue6 Rated: M starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 25]
Summary:

Bella has one month left to live. Edward is a broken-hearted teenager that feels like he’s got nothing left to live for. Bella picks up the pieces of Edward’s broken heart and fixes him before she leaves the world forever.

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 31676 Read Count: 2376
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 08 Aug 2010
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

oh so sweet , your story sad but its powerfull too in same time i remmeber the movie of sweet novamber and If only . its very emotional story and its nice and i love it . but i feel so sad when bella time comes to the end how hard life will be for edward and how desprate he will be . as in sweet novamber the lady who was dieying wants to have good memories in his life when she is gone not band memory or , the movei "Ps; i love you " the husband send letter for 1 years after he died to her wife so he didnt get desprate and she come out of his grive . i hope bellad write letter and encourage him to do that,....... but your story is very sweet. thanx for updating soon ,

Summary:

Bella hasn't spoken a word to anyone in over two years. Charlie is frustrated and lost at how to help her. When the Cullen's move to Forks, will they be able to help her open up? Will Charlie still be there if he really knew what she was hiding?

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Banner by, rpattz1990 

 

Warning: This story deals with dark subject matter.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 85605 Read Count: 94618
[Report This] Published: 18 Feb 2010 Updated: 14 Apr 2010
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love this chapter, hell, . It's great, and i love it.

WOW! Cannot wait for next chapter. This has rapidly become the highlight of my week. Thankyou!

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

hi, wow its a little funny that all cullon kids are in all her classes and they all want to be talk to her and feel her safe emmm interesting. i eager to know what will happens

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I love your story! It's one of the best that I've ever read. One thing I really enjoy is your unique plot, it makes your story that much more addicting. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

emmm,weird she will fight and screams so bad wow, how you want this story goes i dont know im still in this chapter 4 i have to read a lot to see what will comes next.but thanks for taking your time to write . i love it

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

i just started this story and its really really good. Your writing is amazing... It's like you are in Bella's head but also the reader is aware of what she is oblivious...


Somebody told me about this story and that I should read it

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

i wish more of these good people we creat it in fanfiction sotries was real in real world we living . emmm its so hard and touchy it had hurt,comfort and maybe love in ur story

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I just read the  chapter 7 and you've already gotten me hooked.I'm just curious as to have very dark things are going to get. I see that I have a lot of chapters to get through

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

wow, so she is writting godto know but im thinking when she starts talking it wil be ard to talk after 2 years

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

so she confess like that emmm i really love it if u put more prietly confess from bella to charli or edwar alone emmm but itsnot m story to tell

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

what can i say a little hurt but good chapter over all

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

poor bella you are a little fast in these chapter 10 and 11 and love and confession all three guys are feeling about rape emmm



Author's Response:

Thanks for all the reivews:)

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

thank you for up dating . i was starting to read a;; 22 chapter yesterday night when i find out you up date new chapter here,

 

last three small 2 line sentence you have mis-spell : you wrote wood instead of would . just want to let u know

he wood look over at me and smile before he looked down at his plate



Author's Response:

Thanks foir reading and pointing out my mispelling:)

Summary:

Kidnapped from the dreary town of Forks, Bella must face being sold as a slave to a richer, more demon like vampire. As her master teachers her the rules and uses her, somewhere along the way, he feels for her, but throw in Jacob and Edward must fight for the girl who could potentially change his ways. But what if, one night, Edward's family from Forks comes to visit, and they recognize the chiefs missing daughter? How will they save her too?

Banner:)

I want to thank rpattz1990 for this amazing banner. I LOVE IT! SO much. Thank you dearest.

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I want to thank jennmc75 For this Beautiful Banner that she made for me. You honestly dont know how thankful I am for it:)

 

*Contains rape and a very Dark Edward.*

 

ATTENTION: If you have any experience in making banners for stories, if you could, please make one for this story. Please make one and send it to my email.    Akersiscool@gmail.com

Please and thank you:)


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 40554 Read Count: 58424
[Report This] Published: 21 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Jan 2012
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I love this chapter, hell, i love this whole damn story. It's great, and i love it

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

wow, dark edward why he is so dark and likes his needs emm, poor bell he likes cry and tears and screams but i know you will make it better at the middel of story please up date soon , i was waiting to read story a long time now

Summary:

I suck at summaries, so I'll cut to the chase. This is a story of Darkward and Bella is his new slave.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1533 Read Count: 8348
[Report This] Published: 21 Feb 2010 Updated: 01 Apr 2010
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 27 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

wow 68 reviews for 3 chapters emmm, do u know people really like dark edward emmmm, i hope you up date soon this chapter was very short

Summary:

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Isabelle Volturi, Daughter of a mafia legend is one of the most notorious mercenaries in the U.S.A. When her family hears that their rivals in the underground world are trying to distroy their empire she wont stop until the Cullen/Masens have been demolished. Unlucky for her, the heir to the Masen throne, Edward wont go down without a fight.

 

When Edward kidnaps her will he break her spirit or will he help her realise that love does exsist? 

 

And when a third party joins the blood bath will anyone make it out alive?

 

Rated for graphic violence, murder & rape.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 40094 Read Count: 33611
[Report This] Published: 28 Mar 2010 Updated: 25 Feb 2012
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Following Orders

wow, im egaer to see what this story goes , its very cool,thank u for writting this

Summary:

Bella has come to realize she is an addict to ff. She also realizes her life is missing a lot. Can her husband Edward help her out with this, or get scared off? Suck at summaries. AH. Rated NC-17 for a reason if you don't like lemons or bad language don't read this.

Edward and Bella


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8360 Read Count: 1627
[Report This] Published: 07 Apr 2010 Updated: 22 Sep 2010
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Welcome to my life

fanfiction i really love the site and i am addicted to a lot of stories there people are writting very interesting stories and some of them very fictional romantic and lovely i love it . i never date guy or not know about sex becuase i am v....but i think if i get married and i will my guy to read this romance story to get what i feel . i like this first chapter you good to go ...

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is a student at UW who lives a routine, struggled life, but that changes when she meets Edward Cullen,CEO of his Company. How exactly do they meet? What happens when their lifes collide? Does Bella uncover Edwards darkest secrets or does Edward learn Bellas hidden truths first. D/S Material

 Thanks to bjelaja for taking the time to make this awesome banner! (:

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 38146 Read Count: 63616
[Report This] Published: 24 Apr 2010 Updated: 11 May 2011
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

lovely chapter :)

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

its a lot of sugar if edard want test all the cakes and dsirt in bella bakery

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

poor TANYA, did you check my email or read my E-mail . i change her charecter differently from others .

poor Emeth with all caked he have to eat every day he will get sick

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

oh Emmett , i wish my brother more like , he is funny in this chapter . good job , you know i hate when people dont put review when they read each chapter , they are too lazy

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

how he could be reach what he study that he is 24 and he is working in a company ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh in fiction everything is possible isn't it !

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Emmett is cute  , i hope too much sugar, dont bother his health

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

edward sweet in here but he is too shy or ,....that doesnt say his feeling toward bella. peter use bella to her advantures

you know its better not to tell anybody what you have and what you dont have so people dont get used you . in bad way

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Wow coool

Summary:

After a terrible shipwreck in the Mediterranean Sea, Isabella Swan, marquise de Courville, her two best friends and her loyal servants are rescued, but only to become slaves and serve the Volturi brothers, three men with very dark desires. All human. Domward.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Historical
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Finished, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 45 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 201090 Read Count: 150355
[Report This] Published: 05 May 2010 Updated: 13 Jul 2012
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 3: The ship wreck.

Thank you for writting this story and time , im so suprize how did you find french story or translat it , i mean how and who wrote the french story its just story i have in my mind it seems all the people in ship survived



Author's Response:

I'm the author of this story, meaning that I both write it in French and in English. I should finish to write the French version around Christmas. My chapters in French are longer and I split them for my English version so there will be more of them.

Summary:

A young girl, stolen from her home and forced into submission by sadistic men, Bella Swan fights for her freedom. What happens when a green-eyed man buys her? Will he be her salvation or her imprisonment?


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2989 Read Count: 2874
[Report This] Published: 08 May 2010 Updated: 16 Jun 2010
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hi Dear

i read your story in fanfiction until chapter 15 i see that you didnt put much chapter here , i love the plot line but i think you go a litile fast on love in your charactor ok,...

 

i like the information you give me about hyeman becuase i am vergen and read this storyes and i feel wow that is so cool and nice and feel good but i see people who wrote they imaginite good and,... you like dark story so do i  i read a lot and i recomand thease are some of them are compelete you will lik it they are good very good actually

http://www.twcslibrary.com/viewstory.php?sid=200

 

http://www.twcslibrary.com/viewstory.php?sid=19

http://www.twcslibrary.com/viewstory.php?sid=507

http://www.twcslibrary.com/viewstory.php?sid=711

Summary:

*Story Adopted 'Love Me'*Bella is a famous gospel singer and overall good christian named HT. The Cullen's move to Holyfield and Edward becomes obsessed with Bella.Will Bella fall from her faith to lust? Dark edward, Darkward...

 

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Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8807 Read Count: 980
[Report This] Published: 12 May 2010 Updated: 10 Jun 2010
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starhalf-star
Date: 12 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter IV

cool story dear. i know how it is to write story becuase im stock with mine too . take ur time and dont hurry up in the story

My Porn Angel by Shanice712 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

The Swan's are in the Porn business. Charlie a producer, Renee one of the actress along with Bella. They go to Forks Washington to shot a video there. While they're there Bella has to go to school. What happens when the Cullen's see her?


Categories: Alternate Universe, Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 16408 Read Count: 2270
[Report This] Published: 12 May 2010 Updated: 12 May 2010
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One: She's 17!

hi dear, i know in fanfiction you will have more review but in this site i dont know why people are lazy to put review. i really like to know what you will do did you read story called the "red line" its great you could search it in fanfiction. happy new year thank you for sharing this story for us

Summary:

Bella is just plain Jane secretary by day but at night, she is Mistress Izzy Domme extraordinaire. What happens when her days and nights start to merge?

 


Categories: All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 74519 Read Count: 27032
[Report This] Published: 17 Jun 2010 Updated: 01 Feb 2012
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Partying is half the fun

very good chapter i like the shaving part

Summary:

An old, dilapidated hospital residing in the outskirts of Forks, Washington, sits untouched - other than being the occasional setting of a teenage party. Everyone knows the rumors, and it's because of those rumors rebellious teens are lured there. They want to be the first to spy the young man who supposedly lives inside its walls, the man who's either a ghost or crazed maniac that murders those courageous enough to enter the building.

No one has ever seen him, or at least no one that's ever lived to tell the tale. But it's all just rumors, right? Well, Bella Swan is about to find out.

 

Rated for subject matter and content. OOC. Canon pairings.

 

 

 

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Gif made by the amazing RoseArcadia

Warning: There is mention of physical abuse in this story.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 140521 Read Count: 25450
[Report This] Published: 29 Jun 2010 Updated: 05 Feb 2012
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Puzzle Piece

wow, i read these chapter until now , you are very good describing i really want to know what will come up to your story . good job

Summary:

stories/11921/images/new2.jpg

bella is a naive girl. she thinks nothing can happen to her, she thinks she will find the perfect man, have an okay job, struggle alittle, than have kids and settle down.

how wrong she was. she meets this boy who is perfect, or so she thinks. one thing leads to another and bella is stuck in a world she can not nor ever get out of. she tries but in the end she is always for ever his.

nc-17 for rape, lemons, killing, drugs,etc.

warning: dark edward and sexual abuse

Hey everyone so my story has been reported for all the lemons sexual abuse drugs and rape. Even though it states these things in the warning and is in the nc-17 category. I have not violated any rules and my stories are not as graphic as many are on this website. So if this story is deleted you know why.  Sorry to all those enjoying it and wanting more, I apologize for this one persons actions in advance. If you want to know who reported this story just look in the reviews and you will see! 

-Love Sinister :D

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 49477 Read Count: 38241
[Report This] Published: 07 Jul 2010 Updated: 23 Jun 2013
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 4: so close but so far away

i really love your story , why edward telling lie at the beginning , when he truley wants her to have child with him with the act he did in dr office. thank you for writting please up date soon oh also , in this sentence you have tiny mistake , and im surize how easy she could live edward mantion so easy and not anybody following her and how she got euro moneys ,emmmm, over all it nice story

“My father and uncles are incouraging me to marry someone. Someone who has had my kids  already.” He said grazing my face.

encouraging



Author's Response:

yea, thnx. and i really was going to expain all of that in the next chapter you kno her tell jake the how she got out easily and everything, because remember she was there for nine months, it will all make sense in the next chapter.

so yeah and sorry about that little mistake i was trying to hurry and post it.

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 5: story teller

What is love? baby dont hurt me, dont hurt me ,  No more ,...


well , can you believe if i say that from last up date until today i check this site everyday to see this chapter , yep , i love your story , you are very good writer and you are very good in charecters , Please dont listen to Others about why this story is Dark or why edward is like this and they want Softer Edward , you see many writers in Fanfiction or this story dont listen to others they have their oponion and they try to make whats they want in thier story and Reader have to be thank full to read the story , i love the way your story goes , so please dont give up , keepp up what your ideas of story , Okay Well, i dont get why edward wants babys so much , :D i hope the baby is girl Not boy . Girls are sweet and more to mommy until the boys but im sure if baby be girl ,edward try to make boy for next year. I like Mob eward .
Thank you for updating and writting this story , i know its really hard to write and Edit and do,....all the stuff but i know the reviews makes you happy i will review for all the chapters

Author's Response:

AAAwwwww thank you well i guess we know what the baby is. because you just made my day with that review

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 30 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 9: abandon and sacrifice

hi dear , wow i am so happy that you up date your story , well, well i see james is good guy

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 27 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 7: a life

tough chapter, really all the chapter i read are all about helpless bella , i dont know where you want to go with this story ,,but good luck , good chapter

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 27 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: head start

long time no up date, please up date story if you put time between your chapters we will forget , i really want to know what you have i your mind about this story , i dont know where this story will go dear. thanx , edward back , i dont know but i like dark edward

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

well, good chapter as always i am wondering how many children in totall bella have why bella stop her body to be pregnant again , thanx for writting

Summary:

he made me the weirdest offer that i have every heard in my life," Will you bear my children?" little did i know what i was really getting myself into. a/n all human


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9760 Read Count: 5841
[Report This] Published: 31 Jul 2010 Updated: 01 Oct 2011
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

well, you story line is a littile fast . you are faster in telling the story put time , becuase if you want to make it better and interesting you have to put a littile more emotions ,... my story " if Only" is also about bella and edward contracting with each other,....wish you best.



Author's Response: Ok... I won't be changin anythin I hate how some stories take forever to get to the good stuff i got lots of reviews here n on ff. maybe its just u who doesn't like it.... Every story is different mine isn't like urs or anyone else n this is how I want it to go. So yea..... Bye

If Only by nilo24 Rated: NC-17 Round robin starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 92]
Summary:

Edward and Tanya cullen have been married for several years, and live a wealthy and fairly tale lifestyle. They have one problem though, Tanya cannot conceive. When efforts to adopt a child fail, they decide to use Edward's sperm on another woman, who is willing to carry their child.

Enter Bella swan, a prostitute who is willing to become a surrogate mother for couple.  Their relationship becomes ,…..

 

This story is about : Romance , hurt , Real life happiness and sadness and all the Character of Twilight will be here ,too


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25869 Read Count: 9757
[Report This] Published: 26 Aug 2010 Updated: 28 Oct 2011
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2010 Title: If Only

For those reviews who add my story to favourite , i am happy about it but if you read and add , you can put review ,too . its not that hard , it just take 2 min .

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Agreeing

i try to up date in 2 weeks but as you see this is between me and my helper so it take time . sorry for 2 and half weeks

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Focus

i like the fact james is helping. i also like the fact that he could be a threat in the future. you did good with him!

  the ending i really didn't like. but it's your vision. so i left it alone. we all have different taste so i figured to each's it's own!

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Proloug

Oh , i forgot to Edit this in this story . I dont need a beta i have friend who will me through this story .



Author's Response:

i mean help me through this

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Impression

Thank you for reviewrs who are taking time and put review , it takes time to write when your english is not that good and give to danika to improve and touch some stuff in it and than have to wait so she send it back to me and i post so be pationt . reviews are love,....keep it coming that give me hope

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Broken

Dear Readers ;

 

Thank you for your comments . it make my heart warm and i like to write faster actually , but my Beta she is very busy ,...and me and her agree to edit each chapter for 2 weeks and now she takes more than 1 months :(

i dont know what to do ,.... please if anyone want to be my beta please contact me i just warn you , that my english is not that good and i am stock and stop sometimes some where in the story and i just have clue and ideas of what i want but i cant write it so i just mention it in summary so that my beta coul put for me instead.

 

thank u for reading

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starhalf-star
Date: 28 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Nice

Well, i had 6780 people who click to read my story and right now i see i have 7370 people who read my story but ,.... only 5 people made reviews,...i think some people are got lazy ,..to apreciat the writers efforts...

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Amazing

Little Information about “If only”


 


This is the summary that I write about “ If only” :


Edward & Tanya have been married for several years & live a wealthy & fairy tale lifestyle. They have one problem though, Tanya cannot conceive. When efforts to adopt a child fail, they decide to use Edward's sperm on another woman, Enter Bella, a prostitute who is willing to become a surrogate mother for couple. Their relationships becomes complicated it


This story is about: Romance, hurt , real life happiness and sadness and all the character of twilight will be here, too.


 


My English is not that good and with help of my Dear Beta I am writing to pursue my dream , I always love to write and it takes more time for me to write ,because I am not that good in English .


I don’t want to ruin the story line and the End of this story, you have to be patient and read it and then you may fell in love with characters. what they have and what they don’t have? But to answers of some of the question in this story I am writing some answer for it here, Okay.


Thank you to those reviews who are very kind hearted, who didn’t hurt my feeling or didn’t get mad at me like some people who I am think “their English is not that good, too.”


 


You see ……some of my reviewers stick to this sentence is not a Bella /Edward love story, you should really change the heading I don't read Tanya and Edward stories


 


Well , I felt bad for these people .


 I write it in summary. I write the heading and,… I said this story belongs to who and whom? With what kind of language could I say that.


Look closer to these at the bottom:


 Twilight - Rated: M - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 10 - Words: 20,497 - Reviews: 65 - Updated: 7-5-11 - Published: 9-1-10 - Edward & Bella


 


I am not lying and be patient if you are not. It’s your problem is not me!


I already answer to those who are accuse of this story is about Edward and Tanya and, not ,..


Come on, you guys …my English is good by reading this summary and heading. I know what I am reading. And you don’t and your English is much better than me, ……


 


Stop asking it please I already give you clue and hint at the summary and heading and I am not lying. So stick with this story, because I know we love Bella and Edward.  


Well, I love Edward character more in twilight.


 


These are the good question I would like to answer:


I'm wondering how are they going to make a baby, if they will do it thru insemination or the old fashion way...sex?


 


It is in old fashion way


 


 


 


Well I don't see it ending good. Someone will end up hurt!


 


Yes, unfortunately three of them will be hurting in some way.


Tanya and Bella is womanly kind of way like; jealousy and love……, but Edward is victim here, it wasn’t his choice to pick Bella for this plan and now he has.


Edward has to be worried for Tanya, because Tanya going to be sensitive and then he feel for Bella.


He wants to help Bella so she become better ,and don’t get back to being prostitute and have something in her life.


 For more than a one year he will be in two worlds.  I think the most hurt full part is going to be Edward through whole of this story.


 


it looks like Tanya is okay, is she going to be nice person ?


Tanya character I love the most.


She is different from other Tanya you read. She is not bitch. She really loves Edward, and she is kind and friendly and get so comfortable with Bella.


 She really likes Bella, too.


 Tanya doesn’t have choice, because Tanya will know in future that Bella was prostitute and she is in drugs and alcohol so Tanya will support her . And she wants this baby very badly so she is struggling with sharing Edward and having a baby …


And you know, what will happen,………….. you can’t have both of it . Do you?


 


If only we could have what we want in this world.


 


This story is not one men living with two wives. Just know that.


 


Hope I answered to your curiosity question and be patient and I don’t want to ruin this story.


 By telling more.


Have good day


 


 


 

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 03 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Kind

Thank you for your reviews it makes my heart warm to hear your oponion of each chapters

Summary:

Crimson Love banner

 

Sometimes love is darker. More crimson.

For the 'Beyond The Pale' Contest located at: http:// www. fanfiction. net/u/2431148/BeyondThePale. Image used: #17. (Voting open NOW!)

WARNING: Contains graphic violence, sex, and language. There are disturbing images and themes in this story.

(Banner by: Me, Myself, and I.)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Horror, One-Shot, Suspense/Thriller
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7242 Read Count: 597
[Report This] Published: 15 Sep 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2010
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Crimson Love: One-Shot

Wow, this one shot story was great. i went to the site in your profile and vote for this story . in this story you put everything in it.  love , hate, hurt, obsesseness,....i really like it . you have to change name of the story to obsessive of Edward as all readers here in this site and fanfiction are obsessed . i like the lemon part also you wrote very highly and i hope when that part come to my story i could wrote it i dont how to write but im sure is hardest part to write becuase its,.... well my story is called If only . if u have time i be happy if you read it

Carnival by pdd912 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

Bella meets Vampire Edward at an amusement park in New Orleans.  Mind control and Smut ensues.  Dark Edward.  Defiled Bella.  Consent is questionable.  Might be nonexistent.  AU, very OOC.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1336 Read Count: 522
[Report This] Published: 30 Oct 2010 Updated: 30 Oct 2010
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

i like this chapter, it has everything . it seems you want to write more becuase he have unfinished buisness with her. good chapter , thanx for writting this chapter

Dont live in regret by DLIR Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 194]
Summary:

stories/37649/images/30259_113469295356162_100000792768222_89811_7051764_n.jpgLove comes to you when you least expect it. But can your love survive an unexpected event?  


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 132262 Read Count: 27878
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2010 Updated: 24 Mar 2011
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Yes...

you put so much emotion in this story , you are very good in writting and efeacting all our hearts for sure . thank you for putting time and writting this story



Author's Response:

awwwww thank you soooo much.xoxoxoxo I really really try and i get sooo happy when people love it thank you....my sister is working on the next chapter right now xoxooxoxox

Hate you by rob-love Rated: NC-17 Round robin starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 133]
Summary:

“So, you need money?” he nod his head looking at the floor.

‘Okay, take out your pants, now?” she said with smirk in her face while looking at him from top to bottom.

Edward eyes were shocked and looking at her. He grabbed the bottom of his shirt then slowly inch by inch lifted it up. Once the shirt got up to the top of his chest he removed it with one fluid movement tossing the shirt to the side. Then he reached for the zipper of his jeans, slowly so that she heard the sound of the zipper, after that he looped his fingers in his belt loop and pulled his pants leisurely down. He turned to let her see his ass being revealed, giving her just a glimpse of the top part. He turned back around and he stood with his hands in front of him, he let the pants drop down then he stepped out of them kicking them away.

Bella folded her arms and tapped her foot as he stood with his hands in front of him. She said nothing for nearly a minute, and he too stood in silence and deep embarrassment.

“I’m waiting,” Bella said at last, “For you to take your hands away from in front of you. For every second you keep me waiting, I’m adding one minute of extra pain for you. And if we run out of time today, I’ll find another occasion to cause you pain.”

“This is a bit silly,” he told her.

“No,” she corrected him. “This is the deal you agree to do. I cause you pain, you suffer. I humiliate you, you undergo humiliation and embarrassment. Got it? Now put your hands on your head before I get really annoyed with you.”

Hesitantly he raised his hands and put them on his head.

She nodded. “Better. Now keep them there and don’t move until I tell you.”

She walked round him as if inspecting him. She watched Edward closely. She eyed him contemplatively. He catches the strange women liking her lips and grounded at him and she shrugged.

Attention; we have a lot of dark Edward why not very dark Bella. She is not Dom. She is just different and complicated. This story about; Romance and life, Erotic.

Warning:  Contains sexually explicit content.  NC-17

 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25776 Read Count: 7895
[Report This] Published: 28 Mar 2011 Updated: 02 Jul 2011
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 May 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Mine

wow, she is really tough , i like this chapie and thank u for recomanding my story to others

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 May 2011 Title: Chapter 15: revenge

i really like this idea of dark edward, oh also Happy birthday dear, i like this chapter a littile more i dont know why , the font wasnt that small to read. thank u

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Iím the one

Very different story that i read before and its a littile starange but i know you make it different from what i read before

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Expectation

emmmm, i have no idea .what you would do with this story dear

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 3: pretty boy

lol , poor jacob , it really interesting ,.... let see what you have in your mind

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 4: challenge

yes, it was really good chapter i like it . its different from other stories .

the story you mentiond is from roblove she delete it her stories in fanfiction and this site i dont know why :(

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 5: let start

Good job !

poor him , he is with devil , i am very cruiose to know what u do with this story ..

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 6: transferring the $

oh hot way of transfering money , ow la la , you know i think people in this site are lazy and some of them are shy dear . you will be okay

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Crazy girl

Very good ending , i like the part you make . its look interesting the way bella sleep while watching his body .

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Dream

hi dear

very good long chapter , i see the dr is Edward in some part that is interesting so ,... she has some kind of feeling for him becuase of that he saw her ,too.

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 9: You are bitch!

Bella is really mean , poor edward but i feel she has reasons for acting like this and i am so happy you mention my name , you put review for my story and i like your story ,too. thank u for putting time to write this story

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Generous

Yes , i feel you cant be nice in this chapter , it was really good and i like it . hope they have happy ending thats good.

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 12: play with u

Really cool pictures, you make this chapter longer by putting it but i know i have to wait to read why you have store for next chapter . i hope bella is not crazy , and hope edward could survive in this ...

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 13: play with u more

yes, he is cuty and candy and hot ,... what ever you say it is , feel bad for edward but i think he did try to call police to free himself and this was part of their agreement , you see,... good job , thank u for writting this story



Author's Response:

thank u dear

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 03 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

i AM SO SAD FOR PEOPLE WHO ARE VERY SELFISH. I KNOW HOW YOU FEEEL my story ,...i think is great in my oponion but these people are making me so mad , they always want more and better and ,.....etc.

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 03 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Flash

well, right now i get why bella is acting like this ,... so becuase of this she is very ,...negative , hope she gets change in better, i really dont know what you have in your mind , but i love it no matter what

Summary:

Bella is a high class escort, Edward her newest client. They soon realize that there's more between them than great sex and witty conversations. While Bella doesn't believe in fairy tales, her life seems to be turning into one fast. Or is it? AH/OOC.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 152708 Read Count: 67579
[Report This] Published: 07 May 2011 Updated: 02 Sep 2011
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

i read many stories in fanfiction and twcs libarar and i like the two the most . one of the story is your story as bella is prostiute and edward is buissness men and how the game of what edward do to bella and the end of your story how everything is not the fairetale that i thought it would be. great writting and great story , you really did very well and i love the potential and time and i am happy you put this story for free for more people to read and comment it . the second stoy that i read it called " the red line"edward is prostitued and bella is psychology student and i love that story too , i read it in fanfiction i dont if this still this story there or not . good job and i am so happy that i have chance to read your story . thank u for your time and pationt ,

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

its like a dream come true , i had this story in my mind a long time a go to write and when i saw it in this web i was suprize , you wrote it very well and your writting is in high class way i really love it . good job ,  and you are wonderfull for putting everything and emotion in this story , you are very good author dear. well , i have this story idea in my head , i dont know if you are interested or not but with your good writting i know you could write ,.... is story of beauty and the beast , the beast is damage men who is face is burned when he was child in fire accident and he is rich and he needs companinon and becuase of the dept of bella family he wants the daughter as the depts ,..he always wear mask and he doesnt have emotion and sense the only thing she can see is green eyes from black mask and his bronze hair ,.. at the beginning he do what he want he use her as sexcuall pleasure and he repeat his act until bella or beauty shows him the light at the end ,...well the plot line is flexbile , but edward or the beast will give his life for his beauty.....so in this story beauty killed the beast,....

 

if you like this story line i be so happy if you could write it ,...i love your story and you deserve more review and i am sure people like the beauty and best in this version too ,

 

thank you for putting your time and energy to write this wonderfull story , i wish my english was good enough so i could write it like this ,too dear

The Journal by MsEm Rated: M starstarstarstar [Reviews - 22]
Summary:

 

 

His wife's journal. He shouldn't read it, but he can't help himself. My entries I entered into the Quickie Contest, EXTENDED.


Categories: Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 27743 Read Count: 4140
[Report This] Published: 06 Jul 2011 Updated: 07 Jul 2011
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 23 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Colorblind

your story up until now sound interesting becuase i am studying psychology and i am happy the way you write ,...and i like that i could the feel of charectors thank you for sharing and putting time to write this story

Summary:

stories/4119/images/mistressofmasonmanor.jpg 

 

A gentleman.

A gentleman is a man of noble birth whose conduct conforms to a high standard of propriety. His behavior is beyond reproach. Usually Edward Cullen is the perfect definition of a gentleman… that is unless the new chamber maid, Isabella Swan, is nearby.

 Banner by the wonderfully talented RachelxMichelle


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Historical
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5190 Read Count: 2216
[Report This] Published: 23 Jul 2011 Updated: 23 Jul 2011
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

wow, you put everything a readers wants in one chapter good job dear

Summary:

stories/51169/images/EdwardsAddiction_smaller.jpgVery mature subjects matter - AU- Canon pairing – Edward kidnaps Bella to use as a toy. The Cullen's attitudes different from canon – lots of lemony goodness, or badness depending upon your mindset. Some bondage, ok lots of bondage...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 43289 Read Count: 19938
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2012 Updated: 20 Jul 2012
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed half-star
Date: 05 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

wow, you are not slow writer you jump to hard stuff emmm

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed star
Date: 05 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

if you see that you dont have more reviews becuase this site is not working with internet explorer 9 , as you many people using ie 9 and they put messages for stories and ,..but all the messages are blank , the owner of site said its been 1 years this happens to reviewing of stories so she suggest to use google chrome for send reviews to other , so i downloaded this apps espically for this site . i know you might be heart broken if you see you dont have more reviews is this site faults and ie9 versions,...

 

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starhalf-star
Date: 05 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

wow, this expensive lingerie needs a great body i think most actors and model are wearing this i love la santa and cheaper lingerie

Summary:

One time, no matter how hot or sexy was not enough. We both knew it. So he made me an offer I couldn't refuse. For the next year my body would belong to Edward R Cullen; the billionaire, the genius, the sex addict and the married man.  How did I get here and why don't I want to leave? 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've read
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 104383 Read Count: 216863
[Report This] Published: 21 Sep 2013 Updated: 28 May 2014
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

i love this story , i love dark side of edward and you kind of write it like beauty and beast kind of way , good job dearest and i know how much time you spend on writting this story. thank you for make our boring life interesting by reading this story .

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Desperate times call for desperate measures. Bella is starving for a better life for her and her son, and taking her clothes off in front of a stranger is just the first of many lines she'll cross.

 

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8372 Read Count: 98690
[Report This] Published: 18 Nov 2013 Updated: 24 Aug 2014
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

wow, i could just i love this chapter , you described every thing well, you are very good writer and very good story teller. i am sorry about your daughter condition , i am psychologist and i work with authism children , they need love , they kindness , they will notice it if you be kind with them and it is so cute when they hug you from your back , i alwyas tell my client espically to the parents , that their child dont understand work , money and car and house , they only need loves , only loves and most parents dont care unfortunatly and they get loved by us , by babysiter , by their teachers,.. i hope you and your child have this kind bonding and dont worry becuase she is young she will get learn faster and change faster in better stage of her life .

 

thank you for your lovely story and for your lovely time