Penname: mhawkins9802 [Contact] Real name: Misty
Member Since: 10 Feb 2010
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Summary:

"Without Bella's love, I can merely exist. Now that I've lost her, I am bound to wander this earth, alone and unchanging for eternity." Edward, attempting to be noble, leaves again after the Night of Tears. Will Bella crumble or run after him? Eclipse/AU, alternating POVs. This is an Edward/Bella story with a HEA. Not for dog lovers.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 WIP Reads
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 168494 Read Count: 9452
[Report This] Published: 01 Feb 2010 Updated: 21 Jan 2013
Reviewer: mhawkins9802 Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Floating On Clouds

I am glad that they have learned or are slowly learning how to lean on each other and to communicate better. I do think that Bella disregarded Edward's feelings and hurt him with her words and actions especially where Jacob is concerned. I think they need to talk out all their insecurities about themselves and where the other is concerned. They have to talk about Edward leaving and how it affected her and what it did to her. Edward needs to admit how he feels about Jacob and his fears.



Author's Response:

Yes, exactly! A lot of that will happen next chapter. Thanks so much.

TMOT

Sexual Healing by Lori 94 Rated: NC-17 Round robin starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 370]
Summary:

Bella is an ex- nurse and a Domme... Edward is a young man whom she knew as a child and now... years later he's an abused sub in need of help and healing... Many Twilight characters will appear but obviously everyone is OOC... Hope you enjoy


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Slash
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 117914 Read Count: 44741
[Report This] Published: 13 Feb 2010 Updated: 31 Mar 2011
Reviewer: mhawkins9802 Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Wow I'm not surprised that Alice and Jasper broke up. I hope that Jasper won't cause any issues in Bella and Edwards relationship.



Author's Response:

Not in the way you might think...

Edward's Clan by Greenaway Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1365]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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**WARNING - THIS STORY CONTAINS VIOLENCE, SEXUAL MATERIAL, OFFENSIVE LANGUAGE AND OTHER CONTENT THAT MAY DISTURB SOME PEOPLE. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.**

Edward Cullen is the leader of The Clan, a fierce and deadly group of assassins for hire and he knows nothing besides violence and blood. When he meets Bella, he begins to imagine that there might be more for him out there.

A dark journey of love, power and death.


All Human, Cannon Pairings and TEAM EDWARD

Please be warned, this story gets pretty graphic later on.

 

A special thank you to evilangel813 for the awesome banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 234131 Read Count: 159667
[Report This] Published: 23 Feb 2010 Updated: 10 Jun 2012
Reviewer: mhawkins9802 Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 29: The Rescue - Part One: Farewells

OMG I can't wait for the next update!!! I also can't wait until Edward finds out he is going to be a dad.

Summary:

 

REDONE, WARNINGS INSIDE PLEASE READ THEM

"Down will fall cradle, baby and all." I snorted as I sung the last verse of the nursery rhyme, truer words have never been spoken. B/E


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 21916 Read Count: 15212
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 22 Apr 2011
Reviewer: mhawkins9802 Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I am so proud of Bella for standing up for herself and for Angela. It is so weird seeing a story where Rosalie is nice.

Obsessed by Pheonix1855, Balti K Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 64]
Summary:

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Jasper had the perfect plan to kidnap Bella and make her his but what does Bella think will she hate him for kidnapping her

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 60153 Read Count: 5681
[Report This] Published: 13 Apr 2010 Updated: 08 Nov 2010
Reviewer: mhawkins9802 Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

I hope that the surgery goes well and my thoughts and prayers are with you.

I just found your story and I love love love it. The Alec/Jasper name switch was unexpected and creepy. I really enjoy the real Jasper and I can't wait to see the sparks between him and Bella.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your kind words, both for my partner and for the story.  We really appreciate the support, on all fronts.

Cheers,

Balti K

Summary:

 

“FAMILY” is the most eternal part of every human’s life. It is a social unit living together, which comprises of parents and children or people descending from a common ancestor, following common traits and features. It is an association of people who share common beliefs or activities. A family is a domestic group of people, or a number of domestic groups linked through descent (demonstrated or stipulated) from a common ancestor, marriage or adoption. Families have some degree of kinship.In every dispute between parent and child, both cannot be right, but they may be, and usually are, both wrong. It is this situation which gives family life its peculiar hysterical charm.

~Isaac Rosenfeld

 

"I looked on as my parents hugged her, loved her, cared for her and all i could do was hate her. She had everything I wanted but could never have. I knew it was wrong of me to react this why. I knew that when they found out what I had done to her that the relationship I shared with my parents would be over but i could not help but want it, crave it. I wanted my mother to hug me again. I wanted my father to tell me how proud he was of me but most importantly, I simply wanted them to love me again.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 18413 Read Count: 1719
[Report This] Published: 17 Apr 2010 Updated: 11 Jan 2012
Reviewer: mhawkins9802 Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Her Story Begins

Holy Shit and the story begins!!! I love Jacob in this story he is amazing.

Summary:

 

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“We found her Chief Swan, she’s ALIVE! We found Isabella!" Alive? She had really survived the last tens years?

They said I was going home but where was home now?

OOC AU Dark themed you've been warned. No rape! But there is talk about slaves and abuse   Bella x Edward

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 77399 Read Count: 29770
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 25 Feb 2011
Reviewer: mhawkins9802 Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Holy crap!!! I am so confused about who the "master" is.....nice cliffhanger btw...update soon.

Two Worlds Collide by Ezzy Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 154]
Summary:

Edward Mason is the leader of Mason Corporations. Isabella Swan is set to take over leadership of Swan industries from her ill father Charlie Swan. He wants Swan Industries, she wants Mason Corporations, but their Father's have a different plan for the two to get what they want...how will they take it and how will it all work. SOME CONTENTS ARE FOR THOSE WHO ARE, AT LEAST, 17 AND OVER.


Categories: All Human, Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 39221 Read Count: 9995
[Report This] Published: 28 Apr 2010 Updated: 13 Sep 2010
Reviewer: mhawkins9802 Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 14: The Storm Has Begun

Wow let the games begin. I can't wait to see Mob Bella and Edward in action.



Author's Response:

things are going to get interesting.

Summary:

Bella thought that Edward was her soul mate, but meets Jasper's brother. Peter is visiting his brother after Charlotte leaves him and sees the girl of his dreams. Can a relationship between a human and human-drinking vampire work?


Categories: Alternate Universe, Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 24140 Read Count: 6041
[Report This] Published: 02 May 2010 Updated: 01 Aug 2010
Reviewer: mhawkins9802 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Damn are Edward and Char working together??? The only other person I could see involved would be Maria.

Uprising by allforkedup Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 434]
Summary:

Kidnapped into slavery, Edward tries his best to work diligently in order to avoid punishment and keep his wife safe.  Nothing about his life is his own, not even the intimacy between him and his Bella... and she, too, could be taken away at any time.  What happens when he has no choice but to make a big 'mistake'?  What will the punishment be?  Will it break him?  Inspired by the song 'Uprising' by Muse (which I think has a stupid video).

Contains adult situations and language; please do not read if you are under 18.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished
Chapters: 51 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 181405 Read Count: 50903
[Report This] Published: 14 Jun 2010 Updated: 09 Oct 2011
Reviewer: mhawkins9802 Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

LOL I love that they got copies for their entire "family" and laughed when Carlise missed the chair. This chapter was sweet, funny and lemony. Great chapter!!!

Reviewer: mhawkins9802 Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

OMG I LOVE Bill.....he is a freadking hoot!!!!

Reviewer: mhawkins9802 Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

My guess would be that the mine with the guards was discovered or someone survived?? I am glad that Emmett realized that something is wrong or bothering him and that he was brave and strong enought to ask for help.

Road trip to love by dna2679 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 104]
Summary:

EMMETT AND BELLA ARE LIKE BROTHER AND SISTER, BEST FRIENDS. EMMETT IS WITH ROSALIE AND BELLA WITH EDWARD BUT THEIR RELATIONSHIPS AREN'T WHAT THEY SEEM. TRYING TO CHEER UP EMMETT SHE DECIDES TO TAKE HIM ON A ROAD TRIP. WHILE THEY ARE LOOKING FOR HIS HAPPINESS, WILL THEY FIND MORE THAN THEY BARGINED FOR?


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Emmett
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 48 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 135467 Read Count: 11863
[Report This] Published: 18 Jun 2010 Updated: 16 Aug 2010
Reviewer: mhawkins9802 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

NO NO NO why did you have to leave a cliffy like that??? I love the names and I am so happy that Jasper and Leah are the godparents. Hmm did she imprint with Jacob or Paul....I'm hoping Paul. Great chapter!!!



Author's Response:

i know. i hated myself for that cliffy lol... thank you so much!!!! i would have uploaded this chapter sooner but for some reason, i couldn't access this site from my laptop or my desk top.. it was pissing me off actually

Reviewer: mhawkins9802 Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Aww hell couldn't they wait until after the wedding to show up?



Author's Response:

they wouldn't be living up to the ass-hats they are if they did... the jerks

Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1932]
Summary: Past Featured Story

parachute

After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 171983
[Report This] Published: 20 Jun 2010 Updated: 03 Feb 2011
Reviewer: mhawkins9802 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Aww Jack wants to call Bella Mom....sniff sniff. She has taken such care of Jack. It is so cool that she wrote a book based on Jack and it is getting published. I am excited and scared about meeting the Cullens.



Author's Response:

<p>Hiya! Thank you so much for your review! Here is a Teaser for the next chapter of Parachute. A reminder for all of my lovelies, including the newer followers, I usually post a new chapter every Friday.</p><p>On Mondays, I send out teasers for reviewers. There is also a completely different snippet from the next chapter post on <a href="http://www.fictionators.com/teaser/teaser-monday-071210/">The Fictionators</a>, as well as the <a href="http://pictease.blogspot.com/">PicTease</a> blog on Mondays as well.&nbsp;</p><p><br />Thanks again for supporting my story! Love and Hugs!</p><p>~Shel~</p><p style="text-align: center;"><br /><strong>O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O</strong></p><p><br />Bella fastened the clasp of the sterling silver I.D. bracelet over Jack's wrist. He looked up at her with wide, watery eyes as he ran his fingers over the letters that were etched in the metal.</p><p>"It has your name, Jackson Swan, our address and my phone number engraved on it. As long as you have it on you, you'll never be lost again."</p><p>Jack threw himself into her arms, with tears streaming down his face.&nbsp;</p><p>"Thank you," he sobbed. "Thank you for loving me so much!"</p><p>"Oh, baby," she sighed, crying along with him. "I never had a choice. You're my son."</p><p>The two held each other tightly, while the others in the room gazed at the pair in wonder and love. &nbsp; &nbsp;</p>    

Summary:

 

 

Rebel Bella has been shipped around the U.S. for years to different foster homes after being placed in Child Protective Services. What will happen when she is placed with uptight Edward and his family?  Adult language/Violence/Lemons


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 134043 Read Count: 36709
[Report This] Published: 07 Jul 2010 Updated: 05 Jul 2011
Reviewer: mhawkins9802 Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Victims

Hmm I'm thinking the body guard is Jacob. Wow James is a sick fuck isn't he?? It is scary how close he has been to the kids and how much he knows about where they are and their age.



Author's Response:

yeah, James is a nasty mofo.  the bodyguard will be introduced next chapter! thanks so much for the review!!! ;)

Reviewer: mhawkins9802 Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Agent J

I had a feeling it was going to be Jacob not sure how that is going to effect Bella and Edward's starting relationship. I can't wait to see Bella's POV of Jacob. Poor Edward!!!



Author's Response:

jacob is there to be a protector.  he won't be too much trouble for ExB.  thanks for the review!!! ;)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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 ***NOW COMPLETE***

Bella Swan had led a very ordinary life.  She'd married her college boyfriend only to be betrayed when he left her for another girl.  After the death of her father, she pulled out a map and threw a dart.  The implications of that one simple act would surprise her beyond her belief.  She found a home...she found a job...could she find love again after surviving a cheating husband?  Only time will tell.  What secrets will the beautiful stranger she meets have and how will she deal with them? 

AH/OOC.  Canon pairings, with twists.  NC-17 for dirty language, a smattering of BDSM, and the usual lemony goodness.  If you wouldn't read it with your mother standing over your shoulder, you shouldn't be reading it at all!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, Ageise02 Current Reads, Single parents , I Whitlock's read , My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 258357 Read Count: 131574
[Report This] Published: 21 Jul 2010 Updated: 09 Mar 2011
Reviewer: mhawkins9802 Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Revelation Number Two -- It's a Biggie...(Part 1)

Yumm hot Domward is fine by me. I wonder who Alice is calling about?? I can't wait for the next update.

Reviewer: mhawkins9802 Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Revelation Number Two - It's a Biggie (Pt. 2)

I wish that Jacob would go to hell in a hand basket and take Renee with him. Carmen is just sad and pitiful...find a real man your age and go eat a meal. UGH I just want Edward and Bella to be together and be happy.

Horror on Isle Esme by Radd Rach Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

Bella, Alice, and Rosalie take a much needed vacation from their hectic lives to Isle Esme.  What starts out as paradise, quickly turns into something they never expected. DARK THEMES. BLOOD. EXPLCIT LANGUAGE.


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Horror
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1712 Read Count: 206
[Report This] Published: 16 Aug 2010 Updated: 17 Aug 2010
Reviewer: mhawkins9802 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hmm is it a little odd that Esme sent Bella and her friends to the island?? I wonder if Esme and Carlisle might have some clue where the boys really are and what happen to them?? I can't wait to see what you have planned for the gang.....hopefully some love amongst the horror.

Summary:

 

28 year old English teacher, Bella Swan is dreading being dragged to her 10 year reunion with Alice; until a certain social networking site offers her a very welcome blast from the past... BxE, AH. NC-17 for lemons in later chapters.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126861 Read Count: 49372
[Report This] Published: 06 Sep 2010 Updated: 13 Aug 2011
Reviewer: mhawkins9802 Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Umm b*tch better back up and step away from BELLA'S man!!!! I hope that Edward lets Kate and Tanya both know that he has moved on and that he has found the love of his life. Please update soon since you we're very mean and left another cliffhanger!!!

Reviewer: mhawkins9802 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

LOL I can't wait to see Edward hand Tanya her ass!!! He is a good friend for going especially since Carmen and Eleazer helped support him when he was in school. I hope that Bella likes the stone that Edward had made for Sophie.

Reviewer: mhawkins9802 Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Damn Tanya is freaking crazy and I am pretty sure we haven't seen the last of her. Hopefully she will pop up when Bella is around and Bella can kick her ass!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly. Can they both overcome traumatic pasts and trust issues to be together?  All-Human

Thank you to Coleen561 for the beautiful banner!

Virgins & Villains came in first in 3 categories at the Summer 2011 Avant Garde Awards.  See banners below.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Stories for Lissa, Complete & read by Chandrakanta
Chapters: 86 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 448890 Read Count: 260095
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2010 Updated: 04 Jan 2012
Reviewer: mhawkins9802 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Chip Shops & Fairy Lights

OMG OMG OMG how could you stop it right there...why...that just cruel....I am really really hopeful that the next chapter will be out soon....PLEASE!!!!



Author's Response:

i'm working on it now.  I'll post soon!  Thanks very much!

Reviewer: mhawkins9802 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 50: Champagne & Diamonds

Oh WOW the proposal was so sweet and very romantic. Thank you for updating so quick.



Author's Response:

Thanks! next chap is halfway done.  posting a couple LRMs first.

Reviewer: mhawkins9802 Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 64: Wrap Parties & Shattered Glass

OMG Please tell me you are going to update very soon. I am trying to trust you but  damn I am so afraid for Bella right now. Edward is going to freak!!! The fear you wrote in Bella and Emmetts words was amazing. I hope we finally get to see who has been stalking Bella.



Author's Response:

obviously i'm behind with my review responses...by now I hope all your questions have been answered!  Thanks so much!

The Healer by coolace1014 Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 25]
Summary:

Bella has had enough of being ignored by Jake so she confronts him admitting to him she loves him. He imprints after having sent her away. Her parents reveal she is adopted - and turns out Paul is her brother. She will come to be integral in the tribe.


Categories: Alternate Universe, Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6448 Read Count: 839
[Report This] Published: 03 Oct 2010 Updated: 01 Jun 2011
Reviewer: mhawkins9802 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

OMG Bella fucking rocks!!!! I am glad that Jacob found out the truth about Sam and I am really glad that Paul is not only supporting Jacob and Bella but it seems like he might be a good brother to Bella.

Delicate Flower by chickson34 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 108]
Summary:

Mafia underworld and arranged marriages.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 22295 Read Count: 15146
[Report This] Published: 14 Oct 2010 Updated: 10 Dec 2012
Reviewer: mhawkins9802 Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Damn cliffhanger!!!



Author's Response:

Sorry about some of the words showing up in numbers. I am not sure what that was about. They were talking in Russian. I ahve no idea why it didn't show up. So I will no longer use russia in my story.

The Greatest Gift by les16 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 186]
Summary:

Edward Cullen has the plane ride of his life when a mysterious flight companion changes his life in the blink of an eye. Edward will need the help of his wife, Isabella, to right the wrongs of his past before it's too late.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance, Supernatural
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Finished, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Sparkledamnu's Must Reads, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 249172 Read Count: 23004
[Report This] Published: 30 Nov 2010 Updated: 05 Jun 2011
Reviewer: mhawkins9802 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Aww he finally told her he loved her!!! This new Edward is so awesome and I really hope that in the end he doesn't die.....PLEASE!!! Oh man Carlisle just showed up, I hope that Edward behaves since he is at Jack's game.



Author's Response:

Hi again!

Yay! We finally got the 'I Love You's!' I know that lots of you have been waiting on that to happen and I hope you all thought it was the right time. Our boy has done good, hasn't he? He's come such a long way already. Now, I know lots of you are worried about the upcoming talk with Carlisle, huh? I will tell you that Chapter 12...full of lots and lots of information and one part I've been assured will melt all of you! Chapter 13...it's gonna be a little rough, just warning you now. But then 14...my favorite...favorite one so far! So excited to get these next chapters to you guys. We're moving right along...but always keep in mind my promise...I am a HEA girl through and through. You've all shown so much faith in me, just keep hanging in there, okay?

Okay, an answer to a question quite a few of you have asked me. When Seth appears to Edward, no one can tell Edward is talking to Seth. Think of it this way, kind of like a movie that stops. When Edward and Seth talk, no matter for how long, time stops and then begins again when Seth leaves. No one knows any different and no one can tell any time has passed. I know it might be pushing the boundaries, but just go with me, okay? I mean we have an angel that curses and doesn't have wings...it's fiction!
 
Don't forget to sign up on the discussion board if you haven't already...and I know most of you haven't! We'll be posting lots of information on there and it's a place where you can ask me any questions you might have about TGG, TPWC...or anything else. Also, be sure to check out the story rec thread and leave your favorites there. I'm always looking for new things to read, and I'm sure lots of you are, too.
 
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Now, let's take a look at Marcus and Alec shall we...this one was loads of fun write!

Enjoy~

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TGG- Seth Bonus Scene #6~

 

"Alec, have you seen Edward?" Marcus asked without preamble...or knocking on the door to his office as he came barreling through.

 

Alec looked up from the report he was examining and shook his head. He had had his nose buried in reports all morning to begin preparing for the upcoming project Emmett and Isabella would be undertaking. He hadn't even realized Edward wasn't in the office yet.

 

Strange.

 

"Did you check with Isabella to see if she knew where he was?" Alec asked, figuring if anyone knew where he was, she would.

 

"She's not here either," Marcus said with a huff.

 

"What in the world is going on with him this week?" Alec asked his longtime friend.

 

Marcus shook his head. He had no clue, but damn if Edward hadn't turned into a completely different person in the span of just a few days.

 

He'd known Edward a long time, ever since they met when they were at Northwestern together. They were in the same business classes from almost the very beginning and though Edward always gave off a cold vibe and most people tried to give him a wide berth, Marcus found himself strangely drawn to him. Not in any weird kind of way, but there was something about Edward that he connected with from the very beginning.

 

Through study groups and group projects, Marcus and Edward became friends. Immediately it was obvious that having friends was not something Edward was used to. He was awkward and stilted, and more often than not, hours would pass and little would be said that didn't have to do with the subject they were studying. Edward hardly ever mentioned his family, though Marcus was well aware of who he was...everyone knew.

 

The Cullen name was well-known and respected in all of Chicago...hell probably all over the country. It would have been easy for Edward to use that notoriety to his advantage, but he didn't. Marcus had always admired his friend's natural instincts when it came to business matters and in his opinion, there wasn't a man...anywhere...that could hold a candle to him when it came to taking charge of a meeting.

 

Marcus knew better than anyone, besides Jasper, how much pressure William Cullen had placed on him. For anyone else, it would have been enough to bring them to their knees, but not Edward. The more William expected of him, the harder and longer Edward worked. By the time they had graduated from college and Edward was essentially William's second-in-command, Marcus had been offered a job at Cullen Publishing.

 

Over the years Marcus had seen a lot. He watched as Emmett and Edward passed each other in the hall or sat in the same meetings barely acknowledging the other. He watched Carlisle come and go, and more often than not, not bothering to even say hello to Edward. He watched Anna chip away at him, day after day. He watched Sophie try to put him back together again, only to fail.

 

He watched, with much hope, as Isabella entered the picture and knocked his staid and reserved friend...completely on his ass. He'd never seen Edward so...flustered as he was when he was around Isabella. Hell, Edward would only have to say her name, or hear her name from someone else before he turned into a tongue-tied adolescent. It would have been funny if Marcus didn't know how much his friend struggled, daily, with his feelings for her. He was totally outside of his element, Marcus knew, and at times it was almost painful to watch Edward try to accept the inevitable.

 

Over the years he watched as Edward continued to shut people out, even Isabella for the most part. There had been times when it seemed like he was going to turn a corner, only to pull back again. He'd seen it time and time again, but nothing like the past few days.

 

And for Edward to be late to the office...it was unheard of.

 

"Hell if I know," Marcus answered Alec.

 

"Do you know, on Wednesday, I actually saw him and Isabella getting off the elevator together, holding hands and he was laughing?" Alec asked, still totally stunned by that.

 

It wasn't that he begrudged Edward anything...it was just such a shock to see a different side of him.

 

"You don't think they...you know...stayed home...together?" Marcus asked. He had to admit the idea seemed totally preposterous...though for his friend's sake, he hoped that was exactly what it meant.

 

Alec chuckled and shook his head. "Man, how the hell do I know? He's been acting weirder than shit all week. Maybe Isabella has finally pulled the huge stick out of his ass."

 

Marcus couldn't help but laugh at the blunt assessment by Alec. Alec and Edward weren't as close as he and Edward were, but Marcus knew that Alec respected Edward immensely and he was just being...Alec.

 

Crass, blunt, and no filter whatsoever.

 

"Look, Marcus, you and I both know he's been a pretty miserable son of a bitch for a long time. If something has happened to change that, I'm all for it. I hope to hell it has, to be honest with you. I may act like a dick most of the time, but I adore Isabella and she's put up with way more of Edward's shit that anyone should be subjected to. If I was her, I would have kicked his ass to the curb a hell of a long time ago. But...Isabella isn't like that and any fool can see that she thinks he hung the moon and all that sappy shit. He's one lucky bastard she's stuck around this long and if he's finally woken the fuck up and realized that, then more power to the both of them, I say.  About damn time."

 

Marcus sat on the opposite side of the desk, his jaw hanging open. He finally managed to close his mouth and got an evil grin on his face and said, "Dude, you have a crush on Isabella, admit it."

 

"What the fuck ever," Alec said dismissively with a wave of his hand. "And if I did, can you blame me? The woman is drop dead, out of this world beautiful; she's the smartest person I know, smarter than Edward even. She's kind and sweet, and she can be feisty as hell when she needs to be, too. She's..." Alec stumbled as he tried to think of a word.

 

"Perfect," Marcus added quietly. He felt all the same things Alec did toward his friend's amazing wife. He didn't harbor any unrequited feelings or anything like that for her, though it would be easy to do. No, he respected both Edward and Isabella too much to ever go down that path, but he wasn't an idiot. Isabella Cullen was an extraordinary woman; there was no doubt about it.

 

"Perfect," Alec agreed in the same tone. "Edward is one lucky man to be married to someone like her. It's about fucking time he opened his eyes and appreciated that fact."

 

"Seth, my young friend, looks like you have some competition in the Isabella Marie Cullen fan club," Gideon said with a wicked chuckle and a twinkle in his ice blue eyes as they watched the two men discuss Seth's favorite human.

 

"Hmph," the angel answered while he stewed in an annoyed silence.

 

It was bad enough that he had to share her with Edward...though he was her husband and, if you wanted to get technical about it, it was Edward that was sharing her with him...but he decided not to dwell on that fact at all.

 

"Come now, Seth, Isabella is a wonderful person. It only makes sense that she would have that affect on everyone she meets," Gideon said patiently.

 

"If he hurts her again," Seth said and his heart seized at the thought of that.

 

"My friend, you know as well as I that he has never done so on purpose. Yes, he's caused her great sorrow, but look at how far they've come...together...already in just this short amount of time. Edward's love for her has never been in question, it has just been his way for such a long time to behave as he has. Edward has endured so much, Seth; you understand that better than anyone. Anger and bitterness has a way of turning even the best of men into someone they don't wish to be," he reminded with a pointed look.

 

Seth sighed deeply, grateful for the reminder, no matter how painful it was, to remember his own time as human when he suffered through many of the same emotions Edward had struggled with for so long.

 

"He has done well, hasn't he?" Seth said proudly.

 

"Exceptionally," Gideon agreed.

 

"The true tests for him are coming, my friend. Remember it is your job to guide him through. There is much at stake, never forget that," Gideon said sternly, though with love.

 

When Seth was left alone, he said softly, "Please, don't let me fail."


~~~~OOO~~~~OOO~~~~

What did y'all think? We'll be seeing more of Marcus and Alec as we go along and get into the nitty gritty of Emmett and Isabella's project. Now, a bit more business. I am still willing to give any of you that haven't gotten the other bonus scenes a copy of them. Instead of trying to get a PM...which FFn doesn't like if you include whole email addresses, let's try this. Email me at:
 
les_sh_16(@)yahoo(.)com
 
and then I will reply to the emails. If you've sent me a PM and haven't gotten a reply back, it's because you've disabled your PM's and I don't have a way to get in touch with you.
 
Okay, I hope you liked the bonus scene. Let me know what you think, I'd love to know!

Oh, I'll be making this announcement soon but I'll tell you all now. I've signed up to take part in the Fandom Against Domestic Violence fundraiser that will begin on Feb. 1st. I'm going to be submitting an outtake from TGG in which we will Seth as a human and how exactly he died and became an angel. I'm working on it now and I am so pleased to take part in such a worthy cause. There is a link to the FADV website on my blog and profile if you'd like more information!
 
Thanks as always for the amazing love and support you continue to give me. I'm blown away every week by it all!

See you Sunday!
 
Hugs and Love,
Erin~ (les16)

Reviewer: mhawkins9802 Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Good Grief I think I am in love with Bella...damn tiger Bella ROCKS!!!



Author's Response:
Hi again!
 
Well, it seems as if the resounding consensus is Isabella kicks ass and no one would be too upset if Vincent was no more. You have no idea how happy the response to the last two chapters, especially, have meant to me! I've fretted and worried over them something terrible, only because I was afraid you all wouldn't understand what I was trying to do with them. It was important for Edward to show someone else the same forgiveness and chance at redemption as he's been given as well as for Isabella to show she is more than capable of handling herself in unpleasant circumstances. I promise, both things come into play later on.
 
Next chapter...oh boy! I am really excited to see what you think about it. Please keep in mind something though...I have never written a sex scene just to write one or to fill space. This next chapter is the culmination of a very intense, emotional weekend for the both of them and what happens when they get back to the penthouse is the result of everything needing an outlet. It's more graphic, more explicit than I've written previously so be aware of that. If that's not your thing, I totally understand and I'll see you with Chapter 21. If you do read it, I hope you'll let me know what you think!
 
Once we get through Chapter 20, things will get rough. You've all known it was coming, and it has. We have a lot to work through, so get ready. I'm guessing 4 chapters or so until everything that needs to be covered is done. Someone asked on the discussion board, and thank you so much for that, how many chapters TGG was going to be. The way I have it loosely outlined is for 30 chapters, but don't hold me to that, okay? Sometimes things take a turn I hadn't planned on and I have to add more, but that is the way things are looking right now.
 
I will be posting the outtake between Chapters 19 and 20 that shows everyone's reactions...soon. I had hoped to get it done for Friday, but that doesn't look like it's happening. I wrote 3 chapters in one week , not to mention this weeks bonus scene and my brain is a bit fried at the moment. So, just bear with me and I promise I'll get it done soon.
 
Thanks to all of you, The Greatest Gift has made it to the Second Round in the Inspired FanFic Awards. Voting for the 2nd round has started and goes until the 14th. If you would, I'd love it so much if you voted for me again!! There are so many great stories out there, so check out the lists and take a few minutes and vote. Be sure to look for my friends, rtgirl, AydenMorgen, prettykittyartist, sherryola, and justginger while you're at it, too!

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Don't forget that I've submitted an outtake from the honeymoon for the Fandoms4Floods fundraiser. The compilation is HUGE with so many people contributing a variety of things and a steal for only a $5 donation. You can donate here:

http://fandomsfightthefloods(.)blogspot(.)com/

If you read it, let me know what you think, okay? I would love to know!!

Thank you, from the bottom of my heart, and like always, for the incredible support and encouragement you give me week in and week out. Your reviews, PM's, emails and messages on Twitter mean more than you can know. I read them over and over again and I smile each and every time. I've gotten to know so many of you and it's been an incredible experience meeting you all and hearing from you week after week. This story is a leap of faith, I know that, and I can't tell you what it means to me that you've trusted me enough to take this journey with me. It will be worth it in the end, promise!

 

 

Look for me on Twitter, I am finding myself spending more and more time on there! @les_sh_16


If you're not on Twitter but are on gtalk, hell, find me there, too! Me and my girls are always on there...erinsharpe.16(@)gmail(.)com. Friend me and I'll accept!

 

Remember to email me if you're missing a bonus scene, from yours, and I'll send it to you.

 

Okay, here is Vincent and Anna. I'd love to hear what you think of it.

 

See you Sunday. I'm nervous and excited about Chp 20, EEEK!!!

 

Hugs and Much Love,

Erin~

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Chapter 19 Bonus Scene~

 

Vincent stood ramrod straight and had so much anger and frustration coursing through his veins he was like a volcano waiting to erupt as he watched Edward and Isabella and the rest of their clan turn away from him like he was nothing.

 

Who the fuck did they think they were, he thought as his mind raced with thoughts on how to get back at them for even thinking about calling him out like that in front of his colleagues.

 

He took a step forward and had every intention of going after Edward but was stopped when he felt Brody grip his arm, hard.

 

"No you don't, Vince. This has gone on long enough, it's time for you to cut your losses and move the fuck on," Brody told him angrily.

 

He was so tired of all the bullshit between Vincent and Edward, and though he'd be a fool to say it out loud, he knew that most of it was because of Vincent. He wasn't a huge fan of Edward Cullen, but the man knew his shit. He ran Cullen Publishing with an eye always on the bigger picture and never once lost sight of the fact that his job as CEO was to run the company, not to see how many times he could screw over his competition.

 

Vincent turned and stared coldly at his right-hand man. "What the hell does that mean?" he demanded as he yanked his arm out of Brody's grasp.

 

"It means, Vince, that this dick measuring thing you've got going on with Cullen needs to come to a fucking stop. You are ruining the company with your incessant need to try get the best of him and not only that," Brody said hotly, "you're ruining mine and everyone else's reputations along with it. If you are hell bent on continuing this ridiculous game with Edward, count me the fuck out. I'm tired of it, Vincent," Brody said and took a deep breath. He knew he was quite possibly slitting his own throat, but he couldn't hold back any longer.

 

"If you want to go down that's one thing, but don't expect me to go down with you. And Cullen," he said as he narrowed his eyes at him,"won't stop until he ends you if you keep antagonizing him the way you did tonight. Go after him, man to man if you have to, but even for you, going after his wife was fucking low...and not only that, it was suicide. I'm not married, but if I was, there is no way in hell I'd ever let anyone talk to my wife the way you did Isabella Cullen. I'm afraid you've just woken up the sleeping giant, my friend. Good luck with that, you're going to need it."

 

"So what, you're going to let Cullen get the best of you, too?" Vincent asked as he looked from Brody to Josh, Cameron, and Trent. "The three of you pussies, too?" he questioned incredulously when they all looked at him with the same look of disgust. "What the fuck ever," he said bitterly and waved them off. "Anna, let's get the hell out of here."

 

Anna had held her tongue, but only by biting down on it to the point she could taste blood. If she didn't have a choice but to leave with him, she wouldn't, but she had a few things of her own to take care of with Vincent. She stepped forward, without saying a word and without looking behind her either...somehow she had a feeling she wouldn't be seeing any of them anytime soon...if ever.

 

Vincent of course had kept the car and driver waiting for them, always needing to keep people at his beck and call and they both climbed into the backseat without saying a word. The air was tense between them and she felt her stomach twist in knots knowing what she was going to do and say once they'd returned to their apartment. She'd known it had been a long time coming and had made up her mind to finally put herself first after speaking with Edward, but watching Isabella had solidified her decision even more.

 

Anna was quite frankly...in awe of Isabella. She was fierce, loyal, and obviously not easily intimidated. Anna had never admired another woman the way she did Isabella, but even she had to admit how amazing she was as she handed Vince's ass...and his balls to him. Watching Isabella stand up for Edward, for their company and family and friends was an incredible thing to witness and gave Anna the push she needed to do what she should have done a long damn time ago.

 

Edward had given her a second chance by forgiving her; there was no way in hell she was letting it go to waste.

 

They arrived back at their apartment and Vince didn't even try talking to her...nor apologize for the way he'd talked to her, not that she really expected it anyway. As soon as he opened the front door, she strode without looking behind her to their bedroom and pulled a suitcase from the closet and threw it on the bed. She heard Vince walk to the wet bar in the living room and pull what she assumed was a bottle of Vodka from the small freezer but paid little attention to the muttering she heard him spew.

 

A few minutes later when she'd walked out of the bathroom carrying her toiletries, she looked up and saw him walk into the room. His bow tie hung limply from around his neck, he'd taken his jacket off, and frankly...he looked like shit.

 

"What the hell?" he asked stupidly when he spied the suitcase on the bed.

 

"I'm leaving, Vince," she said simply.

 

He looked from the bed to her and then repeated the motion several times before blurting out, "But I thought we were gonna fuck?"

 

Anna snorted at him and then rolled her eyes. She threw the bottles she'd taken from the bathroom on the bed and then turned to look at him. "You're out of your fucking mind if you think I'm letting you lay your hands on me again."

 

He smirked at her and then shook his head. "Babe, are you still pissed about what happened earlier? You know I didn't mean anything; that was just because Edward-" he started again but she cut him off abruptly.

 

"Shut the hell up, Vince. This has nothing to do with Edward and everything to do with you," she told him levelly.

 

"Me? What the fuck did I do? If Cullen wasn't such a cocksucker," he began to rant again and she'd had enough.

 

"You know for as long as we've known each other you have blamed every bad thing that has ever happened to you on Edward and that's just fucking pathetic. Try looking in a mirror sometime, Vincent. You have no one to blame but yourself for the mess you've made of things and it's about damn time for you to realize that," she told him as she began throwing more clothes into the suitcase.

 

Vincent sneered at her, trying to figure out how to get her into bed instead of thinking about what she'd said to him. He knew she was pissed, but he didn't believe for one second she'd leave him.

 

"Yeah? What the hell do you know about anything that has been going on anyway? All you do is shop, go to the spa, and gossip with your girlfriends about who has had work done to their tits or asses and what you want to get done next. I haven't seen you complain about anything up until now, Anna," he said nastily.

 

Anna wanted to disagree with him, but she knew she couldn't. She had done all of those things...but no more.

 

"You're right. I have done that, but I'm done, Vince. I'm not letting you walk all over me anymore because I'm too afraid to be by myself. I deserve better than that," she said and then realized instantly how good it felt to say that...and really mean it.

 

Watching Isabella and Edward all night as they stood side by side really drove home how much she was missing from her life. Then to watch them both face Vincent, together, was really the icing on the cake. Edward wasn't one to be underestimated, but neither was Isabella. They were a true team, one that respected the other, and she wanted that for herself.

 

She deserved it.

 

Up until she and Edward spoke Anna never believed that, but she did now, thanks to him...and to Isabella.

 

Isabella could have been a jealous bitch, and Anna knew she would have deserved it, but she hadn't. She'd been nothing but gracious, if a little cold at first, but only because Anna had tried to intimidate her because that was what she did. Instead, Isabella treated her fairly and with respect, even though she probably didn't deserve it.

 

"Where the hell are you going to go?" Vincent questioned, still not believing for one second she was leaving.

 

"I don't know, but anywhere is better than here with you," she said succinctly as she closed the suitcase.

 

There wasn't anything left she couldn't live without or buy again and she turned to Vincent to say the last thing she needed to tell him before she left to start a new chapter of her life.

 

"I'm sure you won't be alone for long, just give Biannca a call, I'm sure she's not busy," she said slyly and then smirked when he quickly swallowed and his eyes darted nervously around the room.

 

He opened his mouth to deny what she said but Anna held up her hand. "Save it, I don't care anyway. I'm done with you so what you do from now on doesn't matter to me. But," she said as she picked up her purse and suitcase off the bed and then walked to the doorway. She turned and finished her thought, "never forget who I am, Vincent, or who my family is. Stay away from Edward and Isabella. My family is very powerful and if there is anything left after Edward gets through with you if you keep going after him, I'll finish the job."

 

With that, she turned and walked out, not looking back.

 

Edward and Isabella gave her a second chance to find out who she was...she was damn sure going to take advantage of that.

Reviewer: mhawkins9802 Signed
Date: 08 May 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Aww he called Carlisle Dad...fantastic!!! I love this story and look forward to our Sunday updates but I am so scared now that it is coming to the end. I will have faith when you say it will have a HEA.

Reviewer: mhawkins9802 Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Aww I love Bella and Edward!!! I am glad that they are finally the couple they should have always been. I can't wait for the next chapter and I hope that Bella continues to protect and support Edward.

Reviewer: mhawkins9802 Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

WOW you really needed the tissues on this one. I can see now why Edward acted the way he did and why he held himself back.  I hope in the next chapter they can talk everything out and move on. Once Edward completes the "tasks" that Seth has for him does that mean he is going to die? I am going to keep the faith since you said you believe in HEA!!!

Reviewer: mhawkins9802 Signed
Date: 15 May 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Really I think I started crying when I read the first sentence of this chapter!!! Oh my this one was a hard one to read but I am so happy that he is alive and they are going to have a baby. Oh and don't even get me started Seth!!!

The Third Wife by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 232]
Summary:

 

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New Banner By Ima Twi Tard and I love her for it!

In my world when a man says "I do," he says it a lot. In my world it is not uncommon for a man to have more than one wife. We are not your everyday poly family, we are new breed. Or should I say a very old breed?

AH/AU Slash and multiples. Don't like it, don't read it. NC-17 (short story contest)


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25995 Read Count: 45516
[Report This] Published: 18 Dec 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2011
Reviewer: mhawkins9802 Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Holy Shit!!! I hope that Edward sneaks up and shoots Tanya and James. Carlisle seems to have a lot of secrets from his family.

Summary:

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Bella wakes up the day after her fateful birthday party only to find Alice perched on her bed. Ever wonder if things might have turned out differently for Bella and Edward if Alice and Rosalie had interfered? "Seduce him, Bella!" Guided by Bella’s inner strength and determination, Edward must face both his human past and his vampiric future.  Where will his decisions take their relationship? New Moon with a twist.

 

Thanks to coleen561 for the Awesome banner and editing advice!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories for Lissa, Complete & read by Chandrakanta
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 165429 Read Count: 33733
[Report This] Published: 27 Dec 2010 Updated: 18 Jun 2012
Reviewer: mhawkins9802 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Beer Blast

Bella freakin ROCKS!!! Oh poor Edward...he has no idea what Bella has in store for him....I can't wait until Friday!!!



Author's Response:

Can't wait to hear your response!

Thaks fir reading! Jayne

Reviewer: mhawkins9802 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Bed Time Stories

Aww I love happy Edward!!! I like all the little notes and help from Edward's family. It is also nice to learn and hear stories about his past. I can't wait to find out who Charlotte is and what happen to her.

Reviewer: mhawkins9802 Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Dinner and a Movie

LOL I loved when they we're interupted by the cop...thank goodness it wasn't Charlie. It was so sweet that they gave the waitress money to help her and her fiancee. Good Lord the family is back...so so glad. Hopefully they will see the change in both Edward and Bella. I can't wait to see what Emmett has to say.

Reviewer: mhawkins9802 Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: The Honeymoon's Over!

I am so glad the family is back. I think the part that I have enjoyed throughout your story is the involvement of the Cullen family in Bella and Edward's relationship. It is obvious that the family loves Edward and want their "little" brother to be happy and find love so it is sweet how they helped  him. They love and respect Bella and want the best for her also. I hope that Edward will have a different relationship with his family now especially his brothers. The new Edward is lighter and happier and I hope that he has more fun with his family because they all deserve it.

Summary: Past Featured Story

She thought he was everything; He thought she hung the moon. Now, Bella and Edward face their toughest challenge in a race against time. Will love be enough? AH & NC-17 Cannon Pairings.

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Categories: Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 WIP Reads, Stories to read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, My Favorite Stories, Dumbeline's WIP to read list
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 133949 Read Count: 91622
[Report This] Published: 07 Jan 2011 Updated: 10 Mar 2014
Reviewer: mhawkins9802 Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I hope that Edward can save Bella and the kids and I hope they make up. I like seeing into their past. I hate that Carlisle and Esme are so cruel to the people that their children love.

Summary:

"She will never be their mother and she will never have you, Emmett!" She screamed at me." She already is Rosalie. She was there through the lies and tears. Isabella Swan is and will always be their mother and the woman I love."AH/OOC No Under 18's Please.

 

 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5834 Read Count: 1543
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2011 Updated: 11 Aug 2011
Reviewer: mhawkins9802 Signed
Date: 17 May 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Oh my he should have been with Bella all along!!! I can't wait until she joins the story.

Summary: Past Featured Story

It sounds like some kind of fairy tale: girl meets boy and they fall deeply in love with each other. She comes from a hard working family, he was born with the silver spoon. She loved him unconditionally and he promised her the world. Together they make plans for their future, happily ever after included.

But what if the fairy tale turns bad? What if, instead of the evil step-mother our female protagonist has to face her prince's evil family? What if the prince was cursed and turned into someone else? What if said prince can´t keep his promise and instead of the world, he gives her pain and heartbreak? Will they still have their HEA?

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**Thanks to RachelxMichelle for creating this beautiful banner! I love it! Mwah!**

 

AH, OOC, Canon couples      Rating is for language (and hopefully lemons...) !

 

 SM owns everything Twilight - I just played with the characters a bit! Adele owns the song and lyrics that inspired this story! This story, however, is mine! ^^


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 69703 Read Count: 24585
[Report This] Published: 07 Mar 2011 Updated: 20 Dec 2011
Reviewer: mhawkins9802 Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Unwelcome Reunion

Hmm so basically Carlisle, Esme and Alice are a whole bunch of assholes and need their ass kicked!!! Not sure what secret Edward was trying to keep from Bella and I can't wait to see what it was and what he or his family did to make her run. I'm not sure how I feel about Emmett yet.



Author's Response:

Hey!

Yes, that pretty much sums Carlisle, Alice and Esme up (but some of them have their 'reasons'....*eyeroll for them*) As for what Edward did - it will be revealed soon! ^^ Emmet needs to get his head out of his own ass....like most of them! ;D

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

-Sue

Reviewer: mhawkins9802 Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Clarification

I am so glad that Jasper is disgusted with Alice and if he feels the need to have wild, hot sex with Bella to make them both fell better that would be great :)

If Edward would have had trust and faith in Bella and their relationship then they wouldn't be apart now. He chose to believe his family and friends about how horrible Bella was and how she was cheating on him and was "playing" him. DUMBASS!!!! He lost her and it was his fault.

I am not even going to get started on Edward being engaged to Jane other than I am sure she is a bitch. At this time I can't see Bella and Edward being together. He had no trust in her and chose to believe lies rather than confront Bella. I can understand why Bella ran away and has kept their child from him and his family, they are horrible and there is also the matter with the sex tape.



Author's Response:

Heya!!!

LOL- your review made me laugh! First the little let's get Bella and Jazz get together suggestion and then your little outburst about Jane! ;D ;D  Ungh...but to be honest...I can't get the picture of Jazz and Bella together out of my head! It wasn't actually planned...but I may gonna work with that! (I'm not making any promises, though!^^) So, thanks for that!!!

Thank you for the review! ^^

-Sue

Reviewer: mhawkins9802 Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Revelations and Breakdowns

Well holy shit Bella fucking rocks!!! I LOVE that she had so much dirt on the Cullens. I was hoping that Edward was only accused of cheating on Bella so it sucks to find out he basically made a porn tape with the two Denali sisters...EWW!!!! I am assuming that he heard all the rumors and lies from his family and friends that Bella was cheating so it probably made it easier for him to cheat. Are Bella and Edward going to get together by the end of the story because I would have to kill off some Cullens before that happened.



Author's Response:

Hey!

I like my Bella a lot, too! ^^ I'm sorry that I made Edward actually cheat on her, but in my book and in this story, that would have been too easy- I neeeeed that drama here! ;D But yes, a lot of people talked him in to believe that she cheated on him and eventually, he believed it.... And you are spot on about him finding it easier to cheat once he 'found out' that sBella cheated on him! As for B and E becoming a couple again...- my lips are sealed! At least for now! ;D ;D

Thank you so much for reviewing!

-Sue

Reviewer: mhawkins9802 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Friends and Foes

I am assuming that the Cullens felt that Bella was a gold digger and was not good enough for Edward and made it hard for them to be together. I also have a feeling that Edward did something to hurt Bella if it cause her to run away and to be suicidal. I hope that the Cullens do not try to take Josie away and I also hope that Bella continues to he strong and tough. I get the impression that she was "weak" when she was with Edward but now that she is a mother she is tougher and of course a mama lion...love the story.



Author's Response:

Hey there!

Yes,yes,yes and yes! ;D You are pretty good! ^^ I can' make any promises regarding the Cullens, but I hope for the best! ^^ As for Bella, she definitely isn't the same person anymore - and she is going to have her say! Trust me- I#m already working on that one..^^ But, since everything kinda comes crashing down on her at once, she will have her moments where she may appear 'weak' again! It is my attention to keep her tough most of the time though! Someone has to tell the Cullens to shove it up their ass... ;D

Thank you so much for reading, reviewing and rating! ^^

-Sue

Reviewer: mhawkins9802 Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Fights, Threats and upper Hands

Hmm so I guess Edward's family told him that Bella was cheating on him with Jacob and he ended up doing something with the Denali sisters or Bella thought or was told something happened with the sisters. I HATE Alice and I think Emmett is not to far behind on my shit list. He may have thought he was helping but all he has done is cause problems. I don't know why Bella has security cameras or mics in her apartment but her fighting back against the Cullens rock.



Author's Response:

Hey!

Jeez- you're pretty much spot on with guesses! ^^ Especially the part about Emmet!  As for the security cameras, it will be reveled soon, but I promise it's nothing bad! ;D

Thanks for the review!

-Sue

Reviewer: mhawkins9802 Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Red Haze/Green Orbs

Well damn Edward it is so wonderful that you finally grew some balls and stood up to your family. Now just make sure you keep it up. I hate that he cheated on Bella and I am not sure if Bella can forgive that but I do hope that she talks to him. They have so much to talk about. They still love each other but thanks to lies and misunderstandings they hurt each other deeply.



Author's Response:

Hey there! ^^

Yes, it was about time that Edward stood up to his family and told them to shove it! ^^ Yes, they both have an awful lot to talk about and I don't think the beginning will be pretty...but what needs to be done needs to be done! They both made mistakes and had and have to live with the consequences!!! They still do have feelings for each other! (They wouldn't be Bella and Edward if they hadn't ^^)  Thanks for reading and reviewing!^^

-Sue

Shhhhh.... by Robshandmonkey Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4716]
Summary:

 

Edward Cullen owns the most popular club where his elite members join solely to indulge in deviant behaviors.

He is a notorious badboy Vamp who has grown bored with this life. He makes it a hobby of breaking rules to entertain himself when he gets bored. However, his club is the one place he can always count on to find a willing partner to play with his inner demon.

He is well known amoung his kind for his obsessive, compulsive tendencies, clearly a perfectionist to the extreme. His taste for the finer things in life clearly show his preferences for ostentatious cars and homes where he believed he had everything he could ever want...

...that was until an innocent Angel found her way onto his playground. 

Lovely, Dark & Deep is a Vampire only BDSM club where humans are forbidden but somehow this innocent girl found her way in and has managed to capture the attention of the darkest Angel of them all.

 

This is a Darkfic Adult content. Human vamp fic, Cannon couplings But not your Twilight sparkling vamps.

Contains BDSM Scenes, Non Consensual Drug use, Violence, organized crime, Lemony Tart and sometimes sweet on occasion.

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe, Crackfic
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Aggies completed BDSM to read. , To Read (Geddy), Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, My Favorite Stories, To Read , Misstoria's Stories to Read, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, Complete & read by Chandrakanta
Chapters: 89 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 471242 Read Count: 1390650
[Report This] Published: 12 Mar 2011 Updated: 07 Jan 2014
Reviewer: mhawkins9802 Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Enraged Vampire

Holy Shit Edward is freaking HOT!!!

Summary:

Bella returns to forks to care for her dying father, after five years of absence. She comes across people from her past, who ask for her forgiveness. Will she grant it? Or will she close the doors to their faces, as they did her? Edward / Bella.

Drama / Angst / Romance

 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 22238 Read Count: 2593
[Report This] Published: 27 Mar 2011 Updated: 29 Apr 2011
Reviewer: mhawkins9802 Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Aww I really enjoyed this chapter. I like that Bella is really trying to let Edward's family have a relationship with Lizzie. I love Emmett and I can't wait until Jasper and Rosalie show up and meet Lizzie. I hope you make Alice and Edward work hard and grovel a lot for all the shit they did to Bella.

Summary:

Edward and I have always had our ups and downs.  Every couple has that and it’s completely normal, except with Edward it’s either way up or way down.  There is no middle. I know that Bi-polar is a serious disease bit I never thought it was a disease that could affect a vampire.  One minute he will kiss me till my knees went weak, then he gets upset because I still want to be friends with Jake, then he says he doesn’t want to lose me, then he always ends with how he should leave so I can be safe and live a normal human life.  At that point I always tell him that he is my life and I don’t want to have to go to the Volturi to rescue him like last time.  I have always followed the boundaries he set for our relationship.  It’s true I may have toed the line a lot but I never crossed it. He was so terrified of hurting me and apparently the morals back in 1918 were a lot different than they are now.  He wants to be married first and I agreed although I am not happy about it.  I don’t believe in marriage but if it makes him happy then I will do it. He says that he and I are true soul mates and I believe him… well I did believe him right up until the weekend I was being babysat by Emmett and Rosalie.  Now I know that if I am Edwards soul mate then my soul must be black as night.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 24620 Read Count: 2444
[Report This] Published: 13 Apr 2011 Updated: 16 Jun 2011
Reviewer: mhawkins9802 Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow I am like Bella...so confused. You have to continue so we know why Bella and Victoria needed to be "dead".

Things We Do For Love by Lori 94 Rated: NC-17 Round robin starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

Edward has been a bad boy. He's been caught sexting with someone other then his wife. She has decided to punish him and knows who can help.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6472 Read Count: 1170
[Report This] Published: 20 Apr 2011 Updated: 20 Apr 2011
Reviewer: mhawkins9802 Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I understand that Bella is upset with Edward because of the Mike sexting and they have played the dom role before but he did not seem comfortable in this situation. I think that she needs to talk to Edward and get his input to make sure he is okay with their new lifestyle or she is going to ruin her marriage.



Author's Response:

This was her gut overreaction. I'm considering continuing this because I've had questions about the Cullens and some other things, so stay tuned.

Summary:


Cocky young Edward Cullen makes a promise to his best friend, James to keep Bella safe.

Will that include marrying her? Written by myself and Lynzi whose idea it was!


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 83 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 109789 Read Count: 34229
[Report This] Published: 02 Aug 2011 Updated: 07 Sep 2011
Reviewer: mhawkins9802 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59 Confrontation

I understand that Jessica has had a hard life with Tyler but that doesn't excuse what she is doing to Edward and Bella. She at one time considered herself Edward's friend so it is sad that she now wants to ruin not only his marriae but also his career. Why doesn't Edward demand a dna test?

Author's Response:

Oh he will, in fact, he has already talked to Carlisle about it!  He is positive that the baby isn't his!

Summary:

They had it all. Or so she thought. Will she be strong enough to walk away or will she remain the voyeur in her own life?


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dangerous Liasons
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 15203 Read Count: 4005
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2012 Updated: 01 Apr 2012
Reviewer: mhawkins9802 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I have to wonder if things were good between Tanya and Edward would he even notice Bella's new confidence and her attitude toward him and their marriage? Bella has clung desperately to Edward and their marriage and now that she has decided she is done he misses her. I am not sure Edward knows how to love anyone. It seems when things get boring or hard he is ready to walk away.

I am proud of Bella and I hope that in the end she does not take Edward back nor does she give him a chance. I want her to get whatever help she needs so that she can move on and find someone who can love her the way she deserves to be loved.

It seems that Edward's perfect world is crumbling around him. His wife, that he thought would always be around know matter what he does, has finally had enough and wants a divorce. He just found out that his married mistress has played the "good" wife and has continued to sleep with her husband and that the baby that he thought was his might not be. And on top of that his family not only knows about the affair but they also know about the baby! My hope is that Edward's family supports Bella during this difficult time.

In the end I hope that Tanya is pregnant with her husband's baby and she sticks with her plan to remain with her husband. I hope that Edward loses everything...Bella, Tanya, the baby and the respect of his family. I want him to hurt half as much as Bella has over the last few years. It would be fantastic for his world to crumble while he watches Bella grow stronger and move on to be happy and loved.

Reviewer: mhawkins9802 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Holy Shit Bella married into a fucked up family! It seems as if Emmett is the only sane one.

So Edward and Jasper are both sleeping with Tanya. Tanya told Edward the baby may be her husband's baby, could it possibly also be Jasper's baby? Now there is a chance that Tanya's husband, Edward, Jasper and Alice could be HIV positive.

Then we find out that Alice is also having an affair. I wonder if Garrett is Tanya's husband? Alice was upset with Edward for cheating on Bella yet she is doing the same thing to Jasper.

I hope that you go into further detail on the comment that Emmett made about how the family played a part in Edward's deceit. Good grief Bella doesn't need enemies if she has family and friends like this!

Reviewer: mhawkins9802 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Finally! I am glad that she finally wants to take her life back. I hope she makes Edward pay for all the pain he has caused her. I hope in the end that Tanya's baby isn't his and he ends up miserable and alone. Then again at one time he loved Bella so I could see him falling out of love with Tanya and cheating on her. In the end I want Bella to find herself and to have a happy and wonderful life.

How is Tanya's last name Cullen? Please let Bella's bitchy strong angry side come out when she takes on Edward and Tanya!

Hot Bubblegum by SoapyMayhem Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 656]
Summary:

Bella Swan rose to fame starring in the hit Disney Channel series 'Girl Next Door'. Now that she's finally legal, she's ready to lose the sweetheart image. What better way to start than to get a tattoo? E/B Olderward/Tattward - Drabblish 

 

Now available on Blogger - http://hotbubblegumfic.blogspot.com/

 

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 66 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 45471 Read Count: 236814
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2012 Updated: 10 Oct 2012
Reviewer: mhawkins9802 Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

OMG Jasper's reaction was fucking priceless!