Penname: bwen [Contact] Real name: wendy bayne
Member Since: 14 Feb 2010
Membership status: Member
Bio:

Older than 30 younger than 60. Have not written anything, but enjoy reading fan fiction especially from the Twilight Saga.


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Reviews by bwen
Summary:

"Without Bella's love, I can merely exist. Now that I've lost her, I am bound to wander this earth, alone and unchanging for eternity." Edward, attempting to be noble, leaves again after the Night of Tears. Will Bella crumble or run after him? Eclipse/AU, alternating POVs. This is an Edward/Bella story with a HEA. Not for dog lovers.

 

Banner by Bella's Executioner


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 WIP Reads
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 168494 Read Count: 9452
[Report This] Published: 01 Feb 2010 Updated: 21 Jan 2013
Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I hate Edward leaving that really sucks, but obviously thats what you wanted1



Author's Response:

Hi,

yes, that's actually the whole point of this story. Edward has to leave, for two reasons. One, he needs to come to a point where he can allow himself to be angry, not only with himself or the dog, or fate, but also with Bella, for treating him like she did in Eclipse. Her reasons, consciously or subconsciously, notwithstanding, she did a piss-poor job of showing her love for him. Secondly, Bella needs to grow up. Really! Hopefully, with this story, they both get that chance at a HEA, neither of them with their heads in the clouds, nor on a pedestal. These are two people who love each other very much, but have a very poor way of expressing it. Edward's a bit autocratic, and often treats Bella as a child, and Bella is acting like a child, instead of the grown-up she claims to be. They need to realize that neither of them is perfect, and that the only perfection they have between them is their love.

I hope you'll stay tuned. Thanks for the rating, I really appreciate that!

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: The Awakening of Bella

That was unbelieveable and excellent!!! Thank god Bella sa the light, thank you, thank you. BRILLIANT and BRAVO is all I can say!!!!!!!

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: And the Truth shall set you free

I'm balliing over the desperation that Bella feels and the aching need for them to get back together. Hopefully the Cullens can keep them both from f*cking this up again!

Great writing, I usually don't get this wound up in a story.

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Falling To Pieces

OK I'm still crying from the last chapter and I can't stop this is so beautiful, god I love Bella and Edward!!!

The depth of emotion that you have put into these characters is amazing, the pain and passion you have created is so vivid you can't help but feel it!



Author's Response:

I'm trying to reach through the interweb with a tissue for you...awww, I think that was the sweetest review I have ever received. Thank you SOOOO much. And as much as I don't want you to cry, I am so glad that my words evoke the emotions I intended. Edward is so very lost at this moment...

If it's any consolation - I cried while writing this chapter. Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts with me.

Summary:

Edward realized in New Moon that with Bella is where he is meant to be. Forces earlier unleashed are now again threatening her life, and Edward must do everything in his power to keep Bella safe, from the danger lurking in the shadows and himself. EPOV.  

 eclipse

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 257389 Read Count: 2759
[Report This] Published: 02 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 Mar 2010
Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Covenant

I loved this chapter, and this story becaseu it's from Edwards POV, so much had to be taken on faith in SM's books so I have really enjoyed this.

This chapetr shows us just how much Bella affects Edward in the amount of concern and pain she causes by not thinking of his feeelings until after she has opened her big mouth. Sorry I do like Bella but she was such an ass somtimes.

I also appreciated the need for Edward to let go or the self love as you put it, it's natural and to deny it would be a terrible lie, I saw nothing wrong with it at all.

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Subterfuge

Damn that was very good!!! I love Edward's POV and I can't waitf or the next chapter. I'm gald that you are showing Edwards humanity by using his POV something that was lacking in the original books.

This has been really well done!

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Disclosures

Always love EPOV and this one filled in so many gaps from SM's Eclipse, really loved it!! Well done. I especailliy liked the mental asides that Edward did not share with Jacob (only with your readers) it confirmed so much of the deoth of love and passion Edward had for Bella and what I thought would have been going through his mind. BRAVO!!

Summary:

A prophecy can be an interesting little thing, especially when it pertains to Bella Swan.; ExB, AU.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3213 Read Count: 36
[Report This] Published: 10 Feb 2010 Updated: 10 Feb 2010
Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 06 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Verrin and the Mysterious EC

First I was very sad thinking that it was another run of the mill fiction with Edward leaving, its been done many, many times over, so I wasn't going to read it. I just hate the pain of Bella without Edward.

Then I decided to skim over the first chapter to see if you were different, and low and behold you grabbed me with voilet eyes, Alice like chatter and secret talents.

I think his the beginning of a great story, just so long as Jacob Black doesn't get Bella and Edward comes back to her as the love of her life.

See I'm not the least bit demanding LOL!  So good luck and I will keep reading!

My Happy Ending? by Bellavista Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 173]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Disclaimer: All previously recognized characters, place, and plot markers are property of their respective owners, which in the case of this story is, The Twilight Saga and Stephanie Meyer. No copyright infringement is intended.

Set during Eclipse when Edward and Bella are back together adn trying to work out their relationship. Jacob is not happy that Bella is back with Edward after everything that happened when he left her before.

Bella and Edward continue to grow in their relationship regardless of the trouble that a very angry and very jealous Jacob tries to cause. That is until Jacob finally snaps and does something that will change his, and the rest of the characters lives, forever.

The story contains lots of Cullen fun, romance, drama, violence, angst and a few lemons thrown in for good measure.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 224791 Read Count: 28905
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 09 Mar 2013
Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 06 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 BPOV

Interesting story line, can't wait to read the rest. My one reservation is Jacob (can't stand the dog).

Love Edward and Bella and the Cullen brothers, very good first chapter!

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 06 Mar 2010 Title: My Happy Ending?

Beautiful chapter!!! Sensitive, and tender.

I don't like Jacob never have and I don't trust him.

Great job and the engagement by the way well written a tribute to true love.

I really like Jasper and Emmett, I hope that Japser is OK, if not it will kill Alice.

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 07 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 EPOV

Very well done, action, passion and a fight scene...sorry just kidding.

It really was well written and your attention to details is commendable, like the buttons on Edward shirt, it's often these sublte littel things that make a story unique and interesting.

I loved this chapter but then Edward is my favourite character, and I really have never like Jacob Black human or werewolf.

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - EPOV

Bite me??? Are you kidding isn't that like a toddler playing with fire?

Could solid chapter though, and of course an engagement is always great! I love the Cullen family they always stand together so loyal an loving!

 

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 BPOV

I am really enjoying this story! But I think you need to pay a little more attention to your final edit in your chapters, there have been spelling mistakes, and grammar errors, none that detract from the story but I thought I'd let you know.

The enjoyment Edward and Bella have finally found in their relationship is incredible and heart warming and vindicating. You have done such a great job with the Cullens, my favourite vampir clan. I can't wait for additional chapters!!

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45 - BPOV

LMAO over the coffee!! This wasa very endearing chapter of closure, Bella's libidio is Edward's greatest allie and enemy, their realtionship is so passioante and lighthearted !

Well written tempering Bella's passion with love for Edward and love for her father. There ia an amazing evolution of these characters under your direction.

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 EPOV

Loved it!!! But with you posting so many chapters today I think my family will be makingtheir own dinner!!

Love this story and thatn god Bella told Edward about talking to the dog, this is getting very interesting!

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 EPOV

WOW!!! This chapter had everything but the finish still has me panting, GO EDWARD and BELLA...talk about erotic!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Hey sweet!

I just worked out how to reply to reviews on here ... slow huh!

Thank you so much for all your reviews! I lvoe them.

I'm glad you're liking the story... sorry for all the post today! It's all up to date with ff.net and fffw now tho .. so one update a week!

I have recently found an awesome beta, and she is going back through the other chapters to fix them all up a bit.

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 EPOV

Man I hate the dog, aleways have always will!!! Got get him Edward and put him in his place.

Nice party from the sound of it, Mike cracks me up though!

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 EPOV

I can see why Edward would be angry and I agree Bella as to come to terms with her feelings but pushing her away and running away never solved anything.

Edward get your ass back there and man up!! Bella stop for a minute and think of the man you love Edward not the dog and let go!!!

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 BPOV

Bella and Edward in danger I can handle, them doubting each others love is painful. Go Alice and make this right!!

Since it was painful for you to write I will forgive you, but your so damn talented I honestly felt their pain.



Author's Response:

I've loved getting all of your reviews today ... they made my day :)

Thank you so much, Writing Edward and Bella's arguement was really hard, it took me ages to actually write it! I'm glad you liked it

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42 BPOV

I just found this sory a couple of days ago and have been reading madly, soory I didn't leave a review for every chapter but I couldn't stop myself and just kept going except for when RL interupted.

Anyway great original plot and sorry to any dog lovers but I loved Jake biting the dust!! I really liked how you made Bella a stronger charactr and Edward less brooding and more willing to talk, it was really refreshing!!

Loved it!!



Author's Response:

Hey,

I understand completely, I know what it's like when you find a fic that you just get totally wound up in... you don't have time to review on every chapter!

But thank you so much for letting me know that you are reading and enjoying the story. It means a lot.

Thank you, Mel

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43 BPOV

Ding Dong the bitch is dead. go Bella and Rose. But yeah get back to the men pronto girls!!

Can't wait for June 30th!!!

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44 BPOV

I cried my eyes out reading this chapter as much as it was filled with unbelieveable pain there was hope and love at the centre of it all, I found Esme and Jasper to be truly amazing in the little things they did with just small gestures and of course Edward is the epitome of the ultimate mate, friend and lover!!!

Beautifully done especially with the reincarnation reference.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much sweet :)

I thought I should have some Esme in it ... she hasn't really been in the story all that much, and I love her in the books.

I'm glad you liked the reincarnation reference - I wasn't really that sure about it when I was writing it, but I liked it when it was all done.

I hope you like the last two chapters...

Mel x x x

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 May 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Epilogue

Good chapter, but sad in a way Bella has obviously moved on and unfortunately that included Charlie who she really loved, so even though he would have Sue I'm sure he felt the loss as well!!

But on a very good note Bella and Edward have forever with a love that is epic and you most assuredly have done that love justice. Can't wait for your next fanfiction!!



Author's Response:

Hey bwen,

Thank you so much for all of your reviews, it's really meant a lot to me, to get your reviews on every chapter. You rock!

Yeah, I think that Bella leaving Charlie behind is sad as well. I just thought that in the book they always said that it was hard to remember your human life, and I thought I'd play up to that instead of having Bella remember almost everything, sadly, Charlie came with that.

I hope I did manage to portray their love properly, it is just so epic and I hope I was able to do it justice.

Thank you again!

~Mel x x x

You Belong to Me by IrishLove Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 155]
Summary:

Living in the small town of Forks, Bella Swan has a normal life, boyfriend, and best friend. Everything starts to change when people mysteriously disappear. What is happening to them? Why does she have the feeling that someone is watching her? AU/OOC Dark Cullens.

 

You Belong to Me

 

You Belong to Me 2

Banners made by MarianneNorthmanCullen


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 70150 Read Count: 32244
[Report This] Published: 13 Feb 2010 Updated: 13 Oct 2010
Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Dreaming

I just started reading this story last nightand have not stopped to review each chapter because this story is so damn good it has captured my imagination and I can;t stop reading it.

The plot is so unique and is so obviously not a regurgitation of the SM story. I love it so far and it seems to border on erotic and terrifying, definitely very electric the characters have a real sense of self and power!!!

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Beginning

This is one serious kick ass story, hell I usually don't like drak Cullens but this has really grabbed my interest!

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Belonging

This story is brilliant, and even though the Cullens arn't vege vampires they are still so Cullen with a twist and a new depth to their characters!!

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Pursuing

I really don't like Jessica and I can't say I'm soryy you made her a raving lunatic. But I really hate Jake always have, always will. I hope the Cullens end up making him road kill!

No I didn't see it coming yes I remembered the reference to him in chapter 8 bt he is really such a meglomaniac!

IMMERSION by katmom Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 65]
Summary:

...Immersion... 

 

Suppose that vampires "imprint" based on smell and the connection is immediate and irresistible. What will happen when vampire Bella Swan meets her mate at Forks High? 

 

 

 

Immersion: involvement in something that occupies all the time and energy available. AU...Canon Couples


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 46809 Read Count: 4216
[Report This] Published: 13 Feb 2010 Updated: 13 Feb 2010
Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Epilogue

EXCELLENT!!! I wish that it was longer, but that doesn'talways mean it will be better, I am gald your going to wrtie a few outtakes, I will really like to know about the acceptance of Bella by Edwards family.

Anyway BRAVO to a very talented writer.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, bwen...I've enjoyed opening my emails today!

I hope you like the side-shots my friends wrote too...they made me laugh...

Kathie

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

BRILLIANT!!! Loved the transposition of Bella and Edward the imprinting idea via smell is an interesting twist.

You opening chpater is intriguing and inspired, looking forward to the rest!



Author's Response:

Thanks, bwen, lovely review and steaming coffee cups!

Hope you enjoy the rest of IMMERSION...

Kathie

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

So glad you did both POV one thing I missed with SM everything coming basically from Bella's POV.

Very well done!



Author's Response:

I don't always do scenes from differing POV, but did think this one called for it...

Thanks, again, for reading, bwen!

Kathie

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

You have me totally captivate by this story and yes it is fun!

I love the dialogue and how open and honest it is between Edward and Bella.

BRAVO for stepping out and taking these characters on a journey of your own creation and not just rehashing old themes, what you hav created is truly beautiful!



Author's Response:

Makes me happy when you have found it to be fun too!

I appreciate your kinds words...and the coffee cups too!

Kathie

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I think I have run out of things to say, so I'll just say HOT and BRILLIANT!



Author's Response:

Why, thank you!  I'll take that!

Thanks for the review, bwen...and the coffee cups too!

Kathie

Summary:

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A very short, very cute collection of short oneshots. Each oneshot covers a certain Cullen's POV on a certain situation with Bella and Edward or just Bella.

Enjoy! :D


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4660 Read Count: 1287
[Report This] Published: 15 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Feb 2010
Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Esme

Truly beautiful and so Esme!

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Jasper

These little vinettes are beautiful and all the ones of the Cullen men have me grinning from ear to ear! They are really well done and meaningful.

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Rosalie

All of these were great and I would love to read more they are witty, and in tune with the characters yet you give them enough personality quirks that they are refresheing and not just rehashed SM characterizations.

Brilliant work!

Summary:

 

Yolanda Banner v2

Beautiful, terminally ill, Yolanda is abandoned by her partner to die in the woods near Forks, but is stumbled upon by Rosalie and Emmett while out hunting.  The kind-hearted Cullen family take this former journalist under their protection & care; see how she learns what they are and that there really are vampires in this world.  Her story plays out in a way she could never have imagined. 

What would you do if you discovered vampires truly existed?  What if you were offered immortality? What if a chance encounter brought you the love you had always dreamed of?

All your Cullen family favourites are very much involved in this story.  An Irish vampire comes calling to add a new twist to Cullen life. 

This is in essence a love story, mostly told from Yolanda's POV as a newcomer to the world of vampires.  Sometimes the story is told from the perspective of one of the others as they watch her adapt to her surroundings. 

Plenty of erotic moments contained in the story for the gorgeous Yolanda you see pictured in the banner.

Story rated for explicit lemony scenes and language and dark issues.
It has been migrated across from the FanFiction site and is now complete.

“Is she even alive, Emmett? I can’t hear a heartbeat from here.”  Rosalie stood there, hands on hips, glaring at me as if it was my fault we had stumbled upon a body in the woods. She clicked her tongue impatiently.

We’d been out for a couple of hours hunting and making out gloriously and lustily in the bracken. When the day had started, bright and early, I’d never imagined it would take this turn of events. Vampires don’t like surprises.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward, Other Misc Char or Pairings
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet
Chapters: 80 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 240866 Read Count: 6628
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 21 Apr 2010
Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 75: SHE SHALL BE FREE

This is without a doubt one of the best chapters you have written, I love Liams look back at his past and how Yolanda has enriched his life an changed him it was beautifully done and absolutely brillliant!!!

 

OK now bring on "The Thing", thanks!

And God Bless Yolanda.

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 76: RETURN

Another great chapter!!! It seems there is more energy and adventure in your writing lately. Don't get me wrong your writing is always wonderful, but there just seems to be some additional spice to it these days. Maybe its just me it is 15 degrees celsius today and the sun is glorious.



Author's Response:

thank you so much sweetheart - you are such an ace supporter, and I value your judgement implicitly.  don't ever shy away from telling me when I'm dropping the ball, ok?

good news is that the latest chemo round has halted things for Yo pro tem. she remains very poorly though.

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 77: HOMECOMING

That was gorgeous, it was so full of life and upbeat I loved it!!! You have a real talent for pulling together the touching family moments. And thanks for all the Bella and Edward moments I really do love that couple.

So "Thing" is in the next chapter! Great I've been waiting for this bastard to get his just desserts. I can't wait to see what Liam and Yolanda have instore ofr him, this is going to be so good!!

Bye the way as much as I love your story, I know Real Life gets in the way sometimes and it really is more important to take of RL business, your readers will alwasy undersatnd and be here waiting.



Author's Response:

cheers my darling.  am enjoying a little "Liam" time of my own!!

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 78: LEAVING FORKS

Great build up to what bodes to be a memorable confrontation!! Even though this chapter was about moving on and separations its about new beginnings as well and was very upbeat.

Thanks to Liam for purchasing property in Ontario great choice!



Author's Response:

thanks babe!!

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 79: SERVED COLD

Bless the real Yolanda I'm so happy for her!

And your Yolanda is truly terrifying and I have to agree with her stance leave him scared and wondering is the best revenge possible.BRAVO, BRILLIANT!

I'll be sorry to see the story end it's been a hell of ride, but I'm sure we'll hear from you again, your a talented writer and I hope you will find another topic/character to which you will devote you skills  with equal passion!

By the way love Nickelback, my favourite Canadian band.

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for your wonderful support Wendy, you have been a true treasure both here and on Fanfiction.

Glad you liked what I did.  Yo and I discussed it and I went with her flow on it as she's not a truly vengeful purrson - I figured it was better to let him sweat and wonder.  I don't think Yo would have wanted Liam to rip his heart out either lol.

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 80: EPILOGUE

BEAUTIFUL ending and especially the summary!!! It is obvious the changes that have taken place in your life have been reflected in your writing, so I wish you all the best, you deserve it.

I'll look in on Liam and Yoland while their here in Ontario if you like, LOL!

Perhaps you'll bring us another tale from Yolanda in the future, good luck!



Author's Response:

thanks Wendy.  am really going to miss my two protagonists!

LOVING EDWARD by Cullenfest Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 47]
Summary:

Loving Edward

Set during Breaking Dawn from September to December, this is my story of Edward and Bella’s voyage of sexual discovery from the first night they go to their cottage in the woods.  Follow Bella's first night as a vampire after her tumultuous introduction to vampirehood, motherhood and meeting the Cullen family as an equal. 

Told mostly from Bella's POV, it will take you on their journey of learning about each other, loving each other as they've craved since the beginning.  Watch their tender bonding with beautiful Nessie and their interaction with the Cullen family through the weeks that follow until the arrival of the Volturi.  All the Cullens are in the story, helping them adapt, as is Jacob's wolf pack.

Rated NC-17: Explicit lemony scenes and language almost from the start.
Note:  This story has migrated across from the FanFiction site and is now up to date.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 93814 Read Count: 12377
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 18 Apr 2012
Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - REFLECTIONS

Hey Cullenfest I'm followed you from Fan Fiction to here.

If that is the quality of chapter you put together after suffering Writier's Block then it was to all of your readers benefit. I believe Edward used the word breathtaking and it most certainly was, I definitly felt warm all over!

Summary:

 

Create your own banner at mybannermaker.com!

Ascension of the Morning Star chronicles the journeys Bella must take on the path to her fulfill her destiny.  In an almost-canon Post-Eclipse universe, we find Bella and Edward at the moment of their engagement and follow along the preparations for their wedding, the consumation of their vows, and ultimately, her envenoming and beyond.

Unfortunately, as they saying goes...the best laid plans of mice and men...

After all the planning and wedding hoopla, Bella's transformation is not a dream come true, and the future is anything but assured; however there are bright signs of possibility in unexpected places.  The journey will force the Cullen family to confront the demons of their hearts and rediscover their connection to humanity, which was thought to be lost forever. 

The inevitability of change is not only the perview of those who seek their destiny, but it is the boundary of all life, eternal and merely mortal. Without the momentum of personal growth, life stagnates.  So it is for many of the Saga, they are emotionally stuck in ways they cannot understand. In her journey, vampires and humans alike discover in themselves new life, new possibility, and hope for the future.   Touched by her unconditional love, no one is the same. 

Nothing will be the same.

A strange human, more comfortable in the dark world of shadow than with her own kind, Bella will discover her destiny is not a choice... it is a gift of love she was born to give.  It was decided long ago.  All that is required is for her surrender to the power of the Fates and accept the unlikely role she must play in history.  By her existence, as human and vampire alike, she will rock the foundations of the mythical world.  Although we grieve, she will rise like the morning star to bring light to our eyes.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 306630 Read Count: 2837
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 25 Jul 2012
Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: July 27: Nancy Meyer

Guess who, yeah I followed you from the other site. I like this one better anyway.

Loved the chapter!!! Beautiful female bonding scene and it really establishes Esme as the matriarch of the Cullen family.

The taleSeme told was very sexy and erotic full of lust and desire, so much so I had to open the windows for a little fresh air despite the chilling temperature outisde.



Author's Response:

I KNEW it was you! 

Well, I guess I could get a new banner to say, 'save on your heating bill this winter--Read Ascension! 

I am so glad you found that the Esme factor was firmly established.  Camilla (Laura, from Italy) didn't like it AT ALL.  Maybe it was personal...but still.  I think it iis not THAT far off base.  You can't be passionate in love in parcels.  Well, anyway...

...if the Edward strip tease, naked spooning, and Esme seduction lessons is not enough to heat your house...just wait: August 1: Tango is posting for TWI validation today.  But will be up here...probably sooner than there...and of course, it will be in a certain mailbox I know sooner still!

thanks for writing!

RL

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: August 13: The Bridal Sanctuary (2:10 pm)

BRILLIANT! You are a master of detail and subtle remiders of love and dedication, passion and tenderness. Bella and Edward are more then just loveers more then just mates, they touch each others souls and make each other whole. The fact that she can commune with him (or halucinate) while in the bath only proves this connection.

I love Esme in this chapter, she is always in the background in so many stories and here she plays a vital role. Esme embodies the true meaning of what a mother is.



Author's Response:

Ah, W my friend, how you tickle me!  You so BRILLIANTLY put to words those things that are hanging around the perimeter of my capacity to verbalize, even to myself!  I feel like I learn about my writing through your observations..and for that I am every grateful.

I love what you say here about the closeness of their souls...as expressed in the hallucinations she experiences in the bath.  On the surface, I suppose, it could be that his voice is just like the other times she experienced it in New Moon.  Or even more simplisticly...she's under water again!   She even makes that same connection.  But there is a big difference...  In the prior experiences, the voice comes to admonish her for recklessness, to push her to self preservation, and to operate from the outside, imposing his will.  But this time it is different... a simple inquiry, a pulling towards, a playful connection...  A game of the soul.  She knows deeply he is missing her as much as she misses him...because they feel incomplete when separated.

And Esme...well, she is mother nature, earth mother, and mother of the heart truely embodying what maternal unconditional love can be...  Thanks for writing!

 

 

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Aug 13: The Reception, Part 2: Moving Mountains (8:15 pm)

Beautiful chapter the strenght of person each of these characters possess was ably shown in this chapter.!! The beauty of the night surrounding the reception is so vivid that the visual jumps of the page and the emotions are palpable.

 



Author's Response:

Um, once again you slay me with your kindness.  

I think there is great strength in these characters, and as in life, we show who we are in the moments of great stress.  I especially like Sam (even though I am also surprised) as he shows he possesses these true colors. He is the Chief and the leader the tribe and the Pack requires.  There is no way Jacob would have been ready or able to lead...like this.  The recognition of their tacet acceptance of Bella and Edward's union is another expression of their character. 

Halfbreed by Athey Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

Alternate Universe where Edward is a half-breed human-vampire and bio son of Carlisle and Esme. The Cullens move to Forks and Edward meets Bella Swan. ExB AU


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 109660 Read Count: 1908
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 18 Feb 2010
Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Introduction

I just found this story and the though of Edward as a hybrid is very intriguing and this chapter has been amazing as an intoduction, very well written, concise and I love the fact its from Edward's POV'

It really is a brillinat twist, BRAVO!

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I have been mesmerized by this story and just realized I haven't reviewed a single chapter since the introduction.

This is really an amazing original idea and I have lost myself in it. Your characters while borrowed from SM are refreshing and have greater depth and emotional range, I love your version of Edward and Bella there are so compelling!!

Fantastic writing!

Summary:

I have searched for her since the day she was born, My singer. A singer is a precious gift. Its one I will protect and treasure always. That is if life doesn't screw it up! AU reg. pairs OOC  EXB

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 43691 Read Count: 18960
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 01 Jun 2010
Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Excellent, talk about creating tension and anxiety for everyone including your readers!!!!

Love it!!



Author's Response:

that is thew ultimate review! if you could feel the tension they did, then i did my job right! thank you so much for reading and reviewing! michele

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

OK well that was a shocker!!!! But hell it was a nice surprise, Carlisle on of 4 brothers.

I have a big problem with Bella being disfigured not that it would mean anything to Edward other than he'd want to make mincemeat out of Victoria and Tanya, but that is just sick.

Ok once agin you ahve me talking about these charc=acters like their real...LOVE IT!!!!!!

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 13 May 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Didn't see anything wrong with happened to Victoria, it wasn;t the least bit graphic. Actually I found it rather fitting for Felix to have a play thing.

The reunion between Bella and Edward while short was well done.

 

High Noon by RiaMaria Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 66]
Summary:

Set 5 years after Breaking Dawn, the Cullens leave Forks for a new life. However, one of them lapses, putting the entire family at risk. This is not a Jake and Nessie story, and gets quite dark in places. Contains vampire violence.

 

I was rooted to the spot. I had been a vampire for five years, but I had never taken a human life, nor seen one taken. In the instant it took me to take in the broken form in his lap, I finally understood what I was, what we all were. I could smell the blood from the lifeless body in front of me, and it smelled good. My throat burned and my mouth filled with venom.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 83172 Read Count: 4161
[Report This] Published: 18 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 Mar 2010
Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: 4. Wendle

Great 4 chapters I just started reading this story today ad you have really engaged my attention. Looking forward to reading further



Author's Response:

I hope you like it...

Ria

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: 7. Living the Lie

Really a BRILLIANT story, it has me caught up in this new owrld you have created for the Cullens, the tension is palpable and the emotions are so vivid!

 

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 18: 18. Flight

I really am enjoying this story, and love the original plot, this Hunter is one very scary person!!

But just one small thing we don't call our provincial highways interstates in Canada.

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 19: 19. Escape

Great chapter!! But hell Bella and Edward separated is never a good thing, looking firward to the rest of the chapters.

I don't ususaly check authors profiles until after I read a story but with you using terms like boot and bonnet I had to slake my curiosity confirm that you were from the British Isles.

Love this story well writtent and I especailly like the depth of the characters Bella and Edwards realtionship has so obviously grown they have changed each other and matured. Love it!!

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 25: 25. A new order

This was a brilliant story and well written BRAVO!!!

I cried when Rose was killed (and I had never really liked her), I cried at the end for what the Cullens had to give up and what they will do in the future!!

You have a truly amazing gift to increase the emotional depth of these beloved characters, to create  physical and emotional environments that pull you in because they are so vivid.

I hope you will consider a sequel, I would love to know what happens with the Hunter and the New World Order, you have just taken us beyond Breaking Dawn and there are so many new questions to be answered.



Author's Response:

Thank you, I am so glad you enjoyed it.

This story is what originally got me into fanfiction, because I was so annoyed by BD after loving the first three books in the saga. I was disappointed that everything fell so easily into place, without any cost to Bella, after having three books of angst over what a terrible thing it was to be a vampire...

You will see a little more in the epilogue, when I finally pull my finger out and finish it. A lot has changed in the Cullen's lives when we next catch up with them!

Ria

PS - I do try and catch the Brit-isms, but in a way I like that you can still tell I'm English ;).

Love at 1st Bite by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 59]
Summary:

Edward is instantly drawn to the new girl, Bella Swan. From their first meeting he is overtaken by a desire for her body as well as her blood. After a week in Denali he returns to Forks and visits the object of his obsession. What happens in her room that night will change both of their lives forever. First chapter was written for the "In the Dark" Contest.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 47712 Read Count: 8769
[Report This] Published: 18 Feb 2010 Updated: 27 Jan 2012
Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Hard Good-byes

Love the story!! Things have moved along at a brisk pace but it's refreshing not dragging out scenes without good cause.

Love Edward, and Bella is significantly stronger and more reasonable than Sm's version, I really like that!

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Outside Intrusions

BRILLIANT chapter!!! The love between Bella and Edward is epic and you have continued on with that tradition beautifully.

Love that you included the Irish coven always wanted to know more about them, and adding Alistair is sheer genius, he is such a funny character but I think can be of help to the Cullen's as well.

Summary:

Diary

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When you are the most unique person in the world, what is your life like?  This is a look into Renesmee’s life as a teenager.  She tries to be a normal teen, but her uniqueness keeps getting in the way.  Renesmee’s POV. 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Renesmee/Jacob
Genre: Humor, Romance, Young Adult
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 41546 Read Count: 3267
[Report This] Published: 18 Feb 2010 Updated: 13 Sep 2010
Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: May 2

I just foud this story and started reading, it is so good, and funny!!! It reads exactly likea a diary.

I'm with Bella on the hair dyeing though she has Edward's hair whats to complain about?? Oh yeah she's a teenager, got it!



Author's Response:

Lol.  Yeah, teenagers are never satisfied.  Even if she had everything, it wouldn't be enough. 

 

Thanks for reading!  I hope to update soon.  :)

Unforeseen Events by jmolly Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 15]
Summary:

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Banner by mimozka

Only 25 days remained until Bella would take my name and belong to me forever. Somehow, she was changing me. Somehow, I didn’t hate myself so much anymore. I was beginning to be able to accept what I was. Dealing with some other individuals was not becoming easier, however. Maybe it was just angst. I was having a hard time controlling my irritation these days.

 

 

A moment of passion becomes a fright night for Edward and Bella. Alice and Jasper are  not helpful.

Post-Eclipse, canon-based,canon pairings, vamps. Comedy/Romance.  First story in my Unforeseen Events Series of 6 books.  Rated NC-17 for some language, mature themes & lemons in some chapters. Mature content will become more explicit as this series progresses.


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: THE UNFORESEEN EVENTS SERIES, Complete & read by Chandrakanta
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11444 Read Count: 7373
[Report This] Published: 11 Sep 2009 Updated: 11 Sep 2009
Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Charlie, No, Please! Don't Shoot Me!

This was one of the best chapters I have ever read anywhere, it was not only erotic, but I was LMAO after Charlie arrived.

Yeah! teen hormones that have been dormant for more than 90 years are great, poor Bella, so close yet so far, and damn Charlie he needs to gert a life for heavnes sake their getting married!!

Great story I'm really enjoying it though I just discovered it today.



Author's Response:

Hi bwen:D

 

I'm so glad you enjoyed the story.  Please keep reading the series.  When I have 5 mins to put together, I must upload more of the books here.  I'm currently writing book 6, and posting on ffnet.  Anyhoo, one of these days when I'm done spring cleaning, I'll get back to posting.  LOL

 

Look forward to hearing from you again.  Happy reading:)

Summary:

Bella Swan is scouted and Hired by Forks General Surgeon Carlisle Cullen, only to meet his strange family, and fall in love with his beautiful son.

 

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Banner made by my awesome little sister TheHatDoesNothing


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 51 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 58877 Read Count: 28107
[Report This] Published: 08 Mar 2010 Updated: 30 Jul 2010
Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 10 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Accident

I just found this story today and have not been able to stop reading it. I really love your storyline and the strength you have given Bella to voice things she never did in the SM books.

And I have to say I'm LMAO over the conversations your having with Edward in the end notes, they are great.

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Five Stages

Chapter after chapter your writing has become more confident and complex, I love it!!! The emotional depth that you added to SM's characters is not only amazing but very compelling.

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Goodbyes

OK I know I'm late to the party but I officially request that you kick Edwards ass or maybe have Emmett do it becaseu I know what's going to happen...enter the dogs.

I've have never like Jake he is whiney, childish and manipulative, in other words he sucks..can;t we just kill the damn dog? (Oh sorry if your a Jake fan)

I'm giving you have high rating because this chapter really pissed me off so you must be good!



Author's Response:

You, my friend, are swiftly becoming my favorite reviewer.  /chuckles/  Don't worry too much about Jake,  Yea he's a fracking mutt,  but I'm writing him to be a more endurable character.  More interested in his pack of friends than the girl. ^.~  He'll protect her, and be her friend but nothing more.   Breathe,   breathe.

Reviewer: bwen Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Blood Games

Thanks so much now I don't have to send Emmett after you LOL!



Author's Response:

Wait... WHAT!  BUT WE HAD A DEAL!   I want my Emmett!   GIMME.  /Throws a temper tantrum/

Reviewer: bwen Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Blood Games

Ouch! (Emmett slaps me in the back of the head)  Emmett said he would never hurt you he loves your writing and told me to stop being and Edward emo!



Author's Response:

/chuckles/  Yep, you're my favorite now.  Ha ha.  Thank you,  you've made my evening.

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Hedge Fund

Damn girl I worked in the health care suystem in Caluifornia many years ago I hope your alright!

This chapter was so depressing I find I'm reaching for the ativan to take care of my panic attacks. I know Edward is gone but you won't make him stay gone...will you?? Cause if you do ....well lets just say I still have friends and relatives in California and though I'm in Canada I'll have them chase you down with a hockey stick. Seriously I hope you are feeling better!

This chapter was great but what else can I say I found this more heart wrenching then SM's leaving a series of blank pages. You showed us that life still has to move forward regardless of how connected we are to life at that time.

Now I know we are probably moving into the dog days ... and I really don't like the dogs, I'm more into animated marble, so please remember the hoceky stick (I have a mean slap shot) and please...please... don't let Bella do anything dumb with the dog!!



Author's Response:

/whispers so only you'll hear/  Stop worrying so much!  It's not a Twilight fic without the awesome that is Edward, now is it?  

As for Meyer's blank pages....  There's no way I can write Bella giving up on life.  It's too damned hard.  Obviously she had thoughts - why couldn't we hear them?

Sorry about the Ativan - but do me a favor and send a few my way.  Fracking anxiety is such a bitch.

 

And I told you before.  The mutt - is only there to be the friend/brother she grew up with.

 

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Spring & Ink Envy

Can I say that I really don't like or trust the dog. But I know,... I know ...one thing at a time and the dog gets his time to tell his side. ugh!!!!

Bella, getting a tattoo?? I can't wait to hear what Edward will think of that eventually.

See what you did EDWARD!!!, she's resorting to body art in an attempt to rail at what life (you) have done to her, and to keep Charlie close, god that sucks.

Obviously since I'm so upset your doing a good job, love your style!



Author's Response:

Ha ha!  I should insert the ridiculously redundant "WIN" here.  But that's so not me.  (Win)

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Apr 2010 Title: Blood Amongst The Roses

I can apprecate good body art but it's not my thing. I can understand her wanting to keep a piece of Charlie with her but it seems a little extreme.. but hell this is your Bella.

The emotion of the chapter is so easy to feel, the sadness regarding Charlie and underlying excitement when the Alice like girl interacts with Bella and Jake.

 

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 43: INKED

Not that I don't like tatoos but I feel that this wasn;t the wisest thing Bell has ever done.

I miss the Cullens... (yeah do I whine much?)

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 May 2010 Title: Chapter 45: JUMP

Yeah I know the damn dogs are back, I never like them. God I miss Edward!!!!

Bella has had so much heart ache that getting involved with Jake would just be so wrong, please just let them remain friends at the most!

The rating is for the angst and how pissed off I am that Edward is still MIA!

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 46: The Wolves

Damn I knew you'd stop it before we got to the vampire part!!!! But thanks for not writing in that ridiculous love connection between Bella and Jake, this story is much better for it.

At least Bella still has some of her sarcastic humour intact, she's going to need it. It was also a nice touch that you had Billy tell the story of the werewolves. Thnaks also for including the cliff diving scene it has always been one of my favourites since it heralds the return of Edward (please)!

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Love this story and you have not disappointed with this chapter and this event is one of my favourites!!!

Thanks for the authors note it was very considerate, but you know that Real life sometimes gets in the way and you need to take care of real life first! I hope you realize that your readrs will always be here when you need us.

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Wheel In the Sky

How dare anyone speculate about your age, timeless music is just that timeless!! Loved the chapter is it my imgaination or is Bella more gutsy? The touches of humour are refreshing as well, as is the grand theft auto of a superior sports car LOL!!!

 

Summary:

Sequel to You Belong to Me. Everything has gone according to their plan. The Cullens can finally rest...but when has anything ever gone smoothly for Bella and Edward? Old and new enemies are making themselves known. Dark Cullens AU/OOC


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 not updated in 6mo reads
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 23247 Read Count: 2751
[Report This] Published: 10 Mar 2010 Updated: 20 Jun 2010
Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Foresaw

Well this is interesting, looks like it could be a lot of fun! Your Drak Cullens are an very compelling group.

I know I'm late to your party but you asked who the new envoy to the Cullens would be, at first I thought of Tanya but then if Kate is with the Cullens then she must be, then I though Jane bt Aro would never give her up, so the only other one I could think of that would piss Bella off would be Victoria.

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Arrived

I'm amaze at how crazed Carlisle seems and I alwyas love the more docile doctor, but hey its your fiction.

Bella really has a mouthy inner voice dosen't she, could make life with Edward interesting, but at least Edward is still the strong angsty type, however there does seem to be some irritation with Carlisle.



Author's Response:

With Carlisle, I figured, all the Cullens are dark and evil and he's the leader of them, soooo...he needs to be the most dark of them all.

I wanted to write him calm and if something upsets him, he quickly changes shifts and becomes angry, to show you never can be too sure of what he will do.

Edward didn't quite like what Carlisle was thinking about Bella and Edward was angry that Carlisle wanted the sisters to train Bella.

Thanks for reviewing!

Polar Night by BellaDonnaCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 68]
Summary:

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This is Edward and Bella's story beginning from the wedding, through the honeymoon and beyond, as told from Edward's point of view.  Polar Night begins in canon, and moves gradually into AU territory, breaking away from Breaking Dawn.  I've tried to keep all of the good stuff, to add more details, and beyond that, to keep you guessing.

This is one of the sequels to Prelude.  You don't have to read Prelude to enjoy Polar Night, but it might be helpful filling in some of the backstory.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 109594 Read Count: 5345
[Report This] Published: 20 Mar 2010 Updated: 09 May 2010
Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Back to Reality

No wishes except understanding and change so everyone remians happy and safe.

Beautiful chapter but Bella really habours a lot of angst when it comes to her insecurities like she never completly trusts what Edward tells her and shows her, slap the girl on the back of the head and tell her to wake up, and open up!



Author's Response:

You have long term goals!  Yes, hopefully we'll have a hea at the end.  Until then, all bets are off.  I think Bella will come around quickly, just the shock and adjusting to feeling a bit inhumnaly in love.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, m

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Making Up

Great Mothers Day present, Thanks so much.!! My sons just laughed and said OK Mom go for it, when I told them I had to read this before we went out for dinner.LOL!

Love the awkward, human like Edward he is always one of my favourites, he's such a sexy honey that deserves all the loving Bella can give him.

Can't wait to see what's on these lists, to bad Bella's won't include an early transformation, just casue I'm worried about whats waiting in the wings and I love all the Cullens.

It was also nice to include Esme in a mother moment, she is always there but on the periphery, so making breakfast for the human was much appreciated.

 



Author's Response:

Thanks, Bwen!  I hope you had a lovely day and a delightful dinner... M

Summary:

When they move back to Forks, Edward decides to follow in Carlise's footsteps and become a doctor. As he becomes more and more frustrated with his monotonous life, Bella is admitted with a serious illness. Will he be able to resist? AU/EPOV

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 80415 Read Count: 15558
[Report This] Published: 26 Mar 2010 Updated: 07 Aug 2010
Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well you hooked me not only does it have an interesting plot, but I'm an ICU nurse so the thought of a Dr. E. Cullen really got my attention' Hope there is more to come



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad you like it. I will be the first to admit that I'm not the most knowledgeable with medical terms. I just kind of let y'all imagine all the jargon. ;)

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

You know there is aways something compelling about depressed Edward, I don't know if its the desire to offer comfort, or just that no one that goregous should be that lonely.

Your writing is so effective I think of these characters as truly feeling these emotions.

And Carlisle is such a good man to worry with such depth of feeling!



Author's Response:

Dr. Emoward at your service. ;)

I'm glad you are enjoying. I'm thinking for this website, you are BHLB's number one reader. :)

Thanks!

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Love the more sensitive Edward! This story has a lot of very interesting possibilities!!



Author's Response:

Thanks! Edward is mostly canon with a few non canon things about him. The situation is different, though, so his attitude is a bit different as well.

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

This really a beautiful chapter the grace of Bella under such extreme circumstances is heart wrenching!!!

Edward needs to tell Carlisle what is going on with him though.



Author's Response:

Thank you. This was my favorite chapter when I wrote it. I'm so glad you are liking it.

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

The elation felt by Edward is amazing!!

I can only hope that his happiness continues to grow along with Bellas. You know Edward always looks at his glass as half empy, and Bella looks at hers as half full they really need together.

I have met people like Bella that are suffering from incredibly devasting conditions but with amazing upbeat attitudes and totally selfless, they generally put the average person to shame.

This is an extremely sensitive story, with growing undertones of tenderness and love!!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it. I've also met people like Bella. People that are so inspiring because they don't give up. It's an amazing thing. I'm glad you are enjoying my first story. :)

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Man your Edward has self loathing down to a fine science and its painful to read, no one should feel like that!!

Alice is just the right mix of minx, pixie and dictator, great jpb. I'm surprised that Carlis isn't a little more supportive though, he is usually so concerned about Edward's happiness.

All in all this is a great story, and if Edward doesn't get it after Bella is calling out his name in her sleep then I'm going to ask Emmett to kick his ass.

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

WOW, that was so depressing (well done), but I can relate to Bella more than I care to admit.

Now get back there and tell Edward to pick himslef up and go back to that woman and comfort her!!!!

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

BRILLIANT and TOUCHING!!!! It was so initmate without any touching being oarty to Edward's inner thoughts, that ma has a beautiful mind (thanks to your creation).

My heart aches for both of them, so I can;t wait for pixie power to speed things up, I can't see Alice resisting for very long.

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I'm so glad you posted so many chapter today it made my day!!! I love this story and the romance and tenderness in this chapter is so touching it melts my heart.

Your wirting is so genuine and compelling and you have added depth to the all the characters especially Bella and Edward, BRAVO!!!!

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 May 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Having worked in ICU for many years I have seen many parents just like Charlie it's sad to say, but people withdraw for a multitude of reasons.

And having Edward use "love" so frequently I think is endearing and beautiful!!!

Very tender, compassionate chapter, but time is running out for Bella and Edward better strat being honest and up front with the lady, she obviously is in love with him.

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 May 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Emo Edward sucks up a lot of energy, he's almost as bad as a black hole. But hell I love the man! I hope that Bella will forgive Edward and that he will forgive himself.

Love what you have done with the characters, the depth of their feelings and how they express themselves. The emotional climate in this chapter was thick enough to cut with a knife

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Snarky Bella is cute and funny. But I feel sorry for Edward and his insecurity, he is so alone within himself.

Love the story!!!

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Well Edward is being Edward only even more so than usual, that man has got to cough up the truth and move on, he is so self loathing that Bella needs to kick his ass and tell him to knock it off!!!

Love the chapter, more realistic than Bella being super in control, but still she needs to organize her thought processes and let the Cullens help her work through this, its going to take time,..but hell grab onto Edward and don't let go before he takes on the I have to leave stand because I don't deserve you attitude...gah!!!!

BRILLIANT story!

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I love baseball, but Edward is so angsty that if he were human he'd have an ucler the size of the artic circle, the man has to lighten up and fess up, hell for that matter Bella should just jump him. Besides if anybody is always calling you "love" and is not a blood relative or senile kinda sends a message that they want to be more than just friends.

Love this story!!! But sometimes I want to kick Edward's ass, and whatever happened to a constantly interfering Alice nudging these 2 together??

Obviously your a brilliant writer if you can get your readers this vested in the characters and riled up.

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

BEAUTIFUL and Satisfying love the culimation of so much angst into so much love. Very well done!!!

Summary:

When Bella and Edward return from their honeymoon they get a couple of surprises that they never expected. How will they cope when dire circumstances threaten the family once again?


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13989 Read Count: 523
[Report This] Published: 05 Apr 2010 Updated: 20 Jun 2010
Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: 09 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

There is a lot of potential in this story but your rushing it. The idea is excellent and the plot is good but you don't put in enough dialogue or detail to each of the events together. But I'm enjoying reading.

Summary: Edward & Bella, New Moon. Over summer they finally make love. Bella then has her birthday party at the Cullens, where Edward can't stop Jasper from biting Bella. What will happen to Bella? And what will be the impact of her and Edwards night of passion? Rated NC-17 for graphic sexual content & dirty words.

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8274 Read Count: 2310
[Report This] Published: 11 Apr 2010 Updated: 01 May 2010
Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 The meadow

God Morgs your chapters should come with warnings about DO NOT read while drinking any hot beverage or if your significant other is not around to aid in releasing pent up tension.

Once again a BANG up job (pun intended)!!! Man when Edward lets his sexy, lusty self go it's like someone (that being you) have lit a fire under, over and through the man damn!!!

But despite the lemony goodness, the love, devotion, revereance and passion he and Bella feel for each other is always so clear and so heart wrenching.

Well done Morgs!! BRAVO!!

Summary:

 

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In the year 1634, eternity changed.

An extraordinary pact between vampires and witches results in an unfathomable hunt and a destiny neither vampire nor witch can resist...

Rated NC-17 for graphic scenes and sex in later chapters. EPOV.

The Beta for this story is TrueLovEph28.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 19820 Read Count: 5892
[Report This] Published: 11 Apr 2010 Updated: 05 May 2010
Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Just found this story today and I must admit it's plot is original and very unusual. Your attempt at fitting in a slight tribute to the olde English phrasing in some of your dialogue is  really amazing most people wouldn't even attempt it.

The only thing I only thing I would take exception to would be Edward's playing a piano in the late 1600's, the first piano wasn't built until the early 1700's but who cares, Edward needs his piano right.

Love the intro of witches, at least that gives Bella more of an equalizer to Edward then she has being only human.

Hope you plan on writing additional chapters this has been a great adventure so far!!

Summary:

Outtakes and other character POV's from Before Her Last Breath.


Categories: Alternate Universe, Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10544 Read Count: 698
[Report This] Published: 27 Apr 2010 Updated: 31 May 2010
Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Bella Meets Edward

Humourous, BEAUTIFUL (but then Edward always is) and just down right sexy Loved it!!!!!

Toasty Warm by jmolly Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 41]
Summary:

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B and E wed.  There's some romancing going on behind the scenes, some teasing at the reception, and some trouble from Jacob.

Sequel to Prenuptual Posturing, in the Unforeseen Events Series. Rated M for later chapters. All belongs to Stephenie Meyer. Romance, humour, hurt and comfort. The Cullens and Hales, The Denalis, Charlie, The Dwyers, The Clearwaters, Jacob, Sam, Ang and Ben, the Forks High acquaintances.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: THE UNFORESEEN EVENTS SERIES, Stories for Lissa, Complete & read by Chandrakanta
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 65913 Read Count: 8488
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2009 Updated: 23 Dec 2009
Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: I Take Thee, Isabella

BEAUTIFUL!!! I felt like a guest at the wedding. You created a very moving and emotional chapter, and you did not detract from the ceremony by belabouring physical details, so you allowed my imagination to fill in those blanks. VERY WELL DONE!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much:)  I've just finished posting, so please keep reading.  I'll be uploading the current book in the series, "I Hunger for Your Touch", within the next week.  This book is complete, but IH is still in progress.  Hope you enjoy this. 

Summary:

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I Hunger Rainforest Banner, Kitchen Banner and Corkboard Banner by mimozka.  I Hunger Dolphin Banner by lilianas.

 

The Cullens thought Edward would never grow up, but marriage to a determined human girl, and a trip to Brazil, alter him forever.  On his honeymoon, Edward finds more than love, friendship, self-acceptance, and an ability to lead.  He embraces a future.  Summer 2011 Shimmer Awards Best Storyteller nominee.

 

No slash.  Increasingly AU settings and storyline.

 

This is the 6th book in my 'Unforeseen Events' series.  You can easily begin reading here, with the understanding that my Edward and Bella are not quite as shy as the originals. This story is complete on ffnet, and I will gradually add it here. There are 50 chapters in total.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: THE UNFORESEEN EVENTS SERIES, Stories for Lissa, Complete & read by Chandrakanta
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 571771 Read Count: 16000
[Report This] Published: 03 Jan 2010 Updated: 24 May 2011
Reviewer: bwen Signed
Date: 22 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Departure

Thanks for the answers, they make logical sense. Can't wiat for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Glad you are happy:)  I look forward to your next review.

 

Hoping to post more this weekend, as I have a lot of chapters to upload.  But first, I want to spend some time writing.  Have not done that all day, and now I'm in withdrawal.

 

Keep in touch!

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Departure

Amazing chapter so many discoveries and so much love and lust, great writing!! The visuals you ceated were vivid amusing and arousing. Loved it!!!!!



Author's Response:

For some reason, my asnwer to this just refuses to post:)  So I'm trying for the 4th time.  LOL

 

You are so welcome for the chapter.  Hope you're continuing to enjoy the story.  Lots more to come:)

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Arrival

Well your 60 hours of hard work produced an amazingly well written chapter!!!! Kudos for the romance and site seeing the scenes were so vivid and the emotions so palpable, well done!!

The best part though is the dialogue between Bella and Edward that shows that electric connection they have, and the depth of the trust and love that they have for each other.

The sense of fun was inspiring, but 2 things bothered me, why is Edwards beard growing? and does Edward telling Bella the key pad number herald problems in the future?



Author's Response:

Thank you so much:D

 

Your first question:  this is something from my canon, based on what I find logical.  It's kind of gross, but did you know that human hair and nails continue to grow after death?  That's a fact.  Additionally, I always thought, 'what if the vamps got in a fight, and somebody pulled their hair out?'  They'd be afraid to damage themselves, and I can't see hairs reattaching themselves one by one.  So I thought, logically, hair should be able to grow.  And yes, they can cut it.  It's no coarser or stronger than human hair.  Otherwise, how would they fit in, in human society?

The next logical question is, 'is their skin marble-hard and freezing cold?'. No, it isn't.  In my canon, it's pretty impermeable and does not damage like a human's, and it's cooler than a human's, but the vamps are not mobile rocks.  Imagine bumping into a statue in the school hallway, or letting marble-Carlisle take your pulse. Say Em and Jazz bump fists, with a sound like grating rock.  They could never blend.

My vamps are durable.  They repair easily, and it takes a lot to injure them.  They can however, feel pain and discomfort.  If they could not feel pain, they could not logically feel pleasure either.

As to the keypad number, I can't give away all my secrets now, can I?

Thanks so much for the reviews, and the rating.  I hope you enjoy this book.  I'm a bit obsessed with it, myself.  LOL

xoox

 

 

 

Summary:

Edward left Bella heartbroken in the woods a year ago. She tried to move on; she goes to college now, goes out with her friends and tries to have fun. But she is still chased by Edward's shadows. During the day she turns to Jacob, becoming what everyone needs her to be. But as night, when she is alone, the shadows find her.
When Edward returns will he be able to help her step out of the shadows and becoming the person she was truly meant to be?

After the first chapter, I will post every Tuesday.


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 30968 Read Count: 478
[Report This] Published: 29 May 2010 Updated: 06 Jul 2010
Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ahh...this was really well written, the pain is very evident and Bella seems to be  still mentally devoted to Edward. But the relationship with Jacob is more than I anticipated and I have never liked the dog and that whole triangle that SM envisioned just seemed wrong.

But this is only the first chapter and I will continue to read because your writing is so well done, and you create incredibily vivid scenes.



Author's Response:

Hey bwen,

Thank you so much for your review sweetie, it made me happy. 

Don't worry, Bella and Jake will not last ... well this part of their relationship anyway ... it is an Edward/Bella story and there will not be a love triangle, 'cuz that shit annoyed me too. So you don't need to worry about that.. it gets better in the next chapter.

Love, Mel.