Penname: jbe86 [Contact] Real name: Courtney
Member Since: 14 Feb 2010
Membership status: Member
Bio:

I am 24 years old and I love reading and writing fiction so keep writing and I'll keep reading. :)


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Summary: Past Featured Story

AH/AU, OOC Bella is a famous actress and Edward is a host of a late night talk show. What do they whisper to each other when they greet each other on stage?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, Love to drive's Stories to read, Stories Read by CNYBella
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126443 Read Count: 76000
[Report This] Published: 27 Jan 2010 Updated: 20 Feb 2012
Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I liked that chapter. It was sweet and had a purring Edward. lol I can't wait for more. keep up the great work. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

I love making Edward purr. Thanks!

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

AWWWW!!! nows a fine time to say something. lol I'm sad you had writer's block but so Glad you are over it. :D keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Well who did do it then? don't leave us hanging. lol keep up the great work. i can't wait for more. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

well that chapter was cute, no angst present there. good job. lol I love that Bella got him his dream car while Edward was (lets face it) being a little jealous and bought her a house so he can visit her on set. I love it. its been a while but I'm still here so keep up the great work. i can't wait for more. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

aww that chapter got me weepy. lol I loved the watch and the time message thing. too sweet. keep up the great work and I can't wait for more. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

i should give the time message props, it's a quote, but i can't remember who know

thanks, working hard on the next chapter, glad you are enjoying!

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

lol they are some kinky bitches. lol I love it! I see its been awhile since you updated. (shakes finger at you) shame shame. lol just kidding but what a comeback. keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

well Bella's breakdown was just wow! that poor girl is all over the place with her emotions. I'm glad you updated and I'm going to go over there now to check out those one-shots. thanks again and bring on Edward. can't wait for their reunion. :D thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 01 May 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

First off: cockblocker! Lol I wanted to see the yummy lemon that would come from Bella's silk nightie but guess not. (mock glare) but u did make up for it with the fruit so you're forgiven. :D ooh wonder why Tia wants Edward? Interesting! I can't wait to find out. Keep up the great work & thanks again. Bye for now.



Author's Response:

i know, sorry about that

but you did get the fruit lemon

i wouldn't worry a ton about tia

working hard on the next chapter!

Summary:

 

 

 

 

 

 

Bella and the gang are the popular rich kids of Forks high, new teacher Mr. Cullen starts, B wants him right away. What starts out as a passionate affair ends up as a cataylyst for the obsession of a dangerous drug lord to take action. Lemons.

Be warned- this is not your average teacher/student story

Now completed- Thanks to all my readers and reviewers.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 88667 Read Count: 47904
[Report This] Published: 29 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 Mar 2010
Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Well now that the cats out of the bag, things can progress on to Happily Ever After. :) I loved this story and I can't wait till you post the epilogue. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26-Epilogue

Sweet sweet sweet and hot as hell. lol way to start the ending with a lemon. great great job. thanks so much. this story was great. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Aww thank you so much!! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Heroin Lullabies by ayngyl22 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 326]
Summary:

Edward is a lead singer of a hard rock band-lots of drugs, alcohol, and sex. Bella is a massage therapist freshly out of Massage Therapy school and her first job is with the band, Loxley Screws that consists of Cullen Masen, Emmett, Jasper and Jake, who is managed by Carlisle.  If you're under 18, please DO NOT read this story as it contains material that is not suitable for minors i.e. graphic detail on drug and alcohol use, sex and language.

This story is dedicated to Peter Steele of Type O Negative who passed away April 14th, 2010.  I will miss you.  This story will have the ending you were supposed to have had.

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 125581 Read Count: 29420
[Report This] Published: 03 Feb 2010 Updated: 12 Mar 2012
Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22- Scared to Death

ooh Edward Edward Edward. Shaking my head. He's in love and yet there's still that appeal in the back of his mind for another girl. :( can't wait to read more. thanks again bye for now



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing.  It's not just any other girl he wants.  It's the same one he's been loving way before Bella came along.

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17 Beyond Redemption

WTH? I thought he wasn't going to cheat anymore so he invites that HO to have a drug induced threesome with her and him? what a jerk. I love Rockstar Edward but sometimes it seems like he's not even trying to be exclusive with poor Bella. I just got caught up on this story and let me tell you: I love it. there are some parts (like this) that are a little hard to stomach but otherwise very nice. :D keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18- In Praise of Bacchus

ouch! that chapter was.....harsh. Everyone doing drugs and another girl touching Edward. (shudders) I love the Rock and Roll drama but I really hope that with Bella doing so much drugs, hopefully it will wake Edward up enough to stop all this before she gets hurt. keep up the great work. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading.  Bella gets mad next chapter.

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19- Guilty

GOD!! if he hates what he does to her why the HELL does he keep doing it? and then he is going to lose his family too above anyone else. I love the drama in a story especially this one but please tell me we might have a HEA to look forward to? :D thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20 - Haunted

UGGGH!!! He is NOT even trying and Bella, ignoring him? does she really think that's going to help him prove that he loves her more than the drugs.  ooh, makes me sooo mad but at the same time I can't wait to see how they finally do overcome all this. its funny that I'm not even mad at you like how could you write this, its being mad at them and they're not even real. lol I can't wait for more. keep up the great work & yeah I understand your hiatus if you were on vacation. :D thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21- Alone

Alone? how misleading! lol no I'm kidding but I did think she was going to tell him to go to hell instead of letting him talk so yeah I did kind of think loneliness is where it was going but GREAT JOB!!! his speech almost had me in tears. NOW he needs to get help & his "family" needs to support him instead of sitting around drinking & doing drugs with him. can't wait to read more. I'm so glad you updated. thanks again bye for now

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23 Less Than Zero

I hate my name? Poor Edward. But I'm glad he's getting along with Bella. :) I thought for sure after making up they'd be fighting again so I'm glad they're not. I also liked Bella and Alice time. That was cute. Can't wait to find out more. Thanks again 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is 17 and tired of being the 'good girl'. Senior year calls for change. She finds it in the arms of 25 yr old Edward. Consequences for her choices cause a ripple effect that even she could never have been prepared for.

New banner made by: mkystich, thanks bb!

 

 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 67280 Read Count: 91187
[Report This] Published: 07 Feb 2010 Updated: 08 Oct 2010
Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

oooh Edward is in TROUBLE!!! lol I can't believe he's still seeing Tanya though? hopefully just friends, nothing more. :( I can't wait for another update. this is going great. keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

No I did NOT expect that to happen that's for sure. :D i hope its Damon that would be great. lol I can't wait till you update again. I love where this is going. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I love this Edward you've writter and I can't wait for the visit. keep up the great work and I just LOVED a little of Bella's saucy possessive side coming out to play. I wouldn't mind seeing more of that. She needs to brand that boy right in front of Tanya. lol keep up the great work thanks bye



Author's Response:

I love this Edward too! I also Love a strong, confident Bella. Oh, she's gonna make it known that Edward is hers ;) Thx for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

not Tanya but BELLA, right? lol I love guessing and I can't BELIEVE that Tanya attacked Bella like that. that woman is psycho. :D I love it. keep up the amazing work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

OUCH! Emmett is going to whip Edward's butt. lol I can't wait. I love her freak attack and just think, her being pregnant was predictable but how she got that way was a surprise at least for me so feel happy. lol keep up the great work. thansk again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I love it. i'm right there with Edward, abortion is not an option but if you decide adoption then I really won't say anything. :) I would love for them to keep it though. Just my opinion. :D I can't wait to read more. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 15 May 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

god I've always hated Renee is this story just proves I was right. poor thing. I was freaking out when Edward was being choked but was sooo glad that Emmett saved him. keep up the great work and give my get well wishes to our dad. I hope he gets better soon. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Thank you for your well wishes for my dad, very much appreciated.

Thanks for reading and reviewing as well.

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I'm right there with Bella. that poor couple. just got through with saying how they can make their own decisions and then Charlie goes and does that. :) poor things. I can't wait till Bella's pregnancy hormones kick in. the lemons will be back! lol love it. keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

aww lovely make up sex. lol I loved it. and as long as you update within the year, lol I don't care how long you take. :D keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

GOD he is soo annoying. Please tell me Edward doesn't believe that CRAP? that's all it was was crap. I can't believe him and how does he know she's pregnant? God all these questions and we might have to get maury Povich involved. lol keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

oops Edward shouldn't have punched him. he's still a minor so that's not good. i love the work you're doing. keep it up. thanks again bye. p.s. great thing you're doing at being a foster parent. :D

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Welllllllllll I guess I can forgive you AS LONG as next chapter: We get a LEMON!!! Please???? I was beginning to wonder if you had forgotten but now that you're back, lets get Cockyward and Bella back to being somewhat "normal" shall we? lol thanks again so much. bye p.s. LEMON?????? PLEASE?????

Summary:

Bella's first trip to England at Christmas isn't exactly a Dickens novel, especially when her host family's son seems to hate her guts. 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Sparkledamnu's Must Reads
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 35950 Read Count: 10777
[Report This] Published: 08 Feb 2010 Updated: 21 Feb 2010
Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Epilogue

WHAT??? just leaving it there? okay fine but it was a great story nonetheless. great job. thanks again bye

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

One Bet. One Week. No Rules.

Bella bets Edward that after a week of some raw sexcapades he won’t want to stop. He bets her otherwise.

A slightly tongue in cheek smutathon and my first fan-fic.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Twilight - Read, G8or Favor8s Read, To Read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137672 Read Count: 230616
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 13 Sep 2010
Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 29 May 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands

that's exactly what I was going to say: AWWWWWW!!!! that ending was too cute. I loved that they both made the same grand gesture at the same time. :) I can't wait for more. thanks so much. keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22- The Lines Begin to Blur

okay no I didn't get the reference, what was it? :) also I was sort of stuck on the whole parking lot hot sex scene. WOW!!! hot hot hot. keep up the great work and have fun in Turkey. :D thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23- Hologram

God Rosalie is such a bitch. I hate her. bella was doubting Edward's affections because he didn't say it back and now she's doubting even more because of freaking Rosalie. she needed to tear that bitch down. lol god i love this story. keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24- Never Think

WHAT? there better be a HEA or there will be hell to pay.........lol I'm kididng. I actually loved that chapter. it was very NEW MOON but backwards. loved it. I hope she goes back or he finds her without giving up Harvard because right now that boy is hurt. keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25- Echo

god they are stubborn. lol I love that Edward is giving Esme a chance. that's great and even better that Edward came to see her. keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26- Bad Romance

aww I'm so sad to see it go but I'm glad they have their HEA. thanks again so much

Summary:

World War II Navy Pilot Edward meets shy wallflower Bella at a USO dance and starts to fall in love immediately.  Two weeks and a wedding later, they face separation as Edward ships off to the Eastern Front.  How will Bella handle life back in the states while Edward fights for their country abroad?  Will the letters they exchange be enough to help them get through the painful separation?

Rated NC-17 for the lemony exchanges in the first few chapters and perhaps later on in the story.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Twilight, Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 98833 Read Count: 50695
[Report This] Published: 11 Feb 2010 Updated: 28 Apr 2010
Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Crucial Correspondence

aww those two are soo sweet and marcus's relationship with Bella is sweet too. Those girls are ridiculous but I can't wait to see where this progressed. keep up the great work. I can't wait for that call. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Blessed Revelations

YES this is getting great. Im so glad that they got to talk not only once but twice. soo soo sweet. I love it. keep up the great work. can't wait till monday. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: The New VIP

you go girl. lol I love this story and Edwar is too cute. he's such a daddy its funny. :D keep up the great work. I can't wait to read more. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Corporate Hat Trick

Fight on Mr Volturi, the fight is on! lol I love it. I cant wait to go to your blogsite and read what happens next. hell I can't wait to read on monday what happens next. :D keep up the great work. I can't wait for more. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Transitions

I liked that chapter. it was short but cute. I can't wait to read the teaser on your blog. keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Transitions

I liked that chapter. it was short but cute. I can't wait to read the teaser on your blog. keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Unpleasant Surprises

wow james really is a douche bag. lol I can't believe he'd do that. I mean that halfwit, she's pregnant! I can't wait for more updates thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: United Front

wow that was a freaking dream. I love that Jake's in the picture now even if its not as a romantic interest, or is he? :) lol I love where this is going and I know life gets in the way so take your time even though inside I'm DYING to see what happens when Edward gets home, take your time. lol thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: A Pain In The Back

yes yes yes YES I'm so excited!!! I can't wait for the baby. keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Welcome Baby Cullen!

YES Its a girl and what a Daddy's girl shell be. I can't wait till Edward gets home. this is going so great. keep up the awesome job. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Back Home

oh that poor girl, hopefully those dreams aren't real. :( I love that you got more updates coming. keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Evil Brown Envelopes

oh my god I almost had a heart attack too. lol I'm so glad he's alive and I can't wait for another update. keep up the amazing work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 21: The Mysteries of Time

that connection is awesome! I love it and I like I said hope you get better enough to update. We miss you! :) keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Safe

NEITHER CAN WE!!! get him home soon. :) I love it. keep up the great work. I can't wait for more. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Birthday Party

HE'S COMING HOME!!! yeah I'm so excited in case you can't tell. lol keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 24: The Foreign Familiar

Bring on the lemon! lol I loved that chapter and yeah I do agree a lemon would have probably been too much especially with the sweet reuniion between father and daughter. i can't wait for more. keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 25: A Clean Start

yes yes YES YES YES lol hot sex and a sweet daddy/daughter moment all in the same chapter. I love it. I'm so ad to see it end but it was a great journey. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 26: It All Comes Together

aww baby number 2! I love it. they are sooo in love its sweet. :D keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Epilogue: Chicago, May 1966

I can not WAIT till that nascar story comes up because if this one was great the next one will be awesome. lol i loved how that ended and I'm glad it was a happily ever after so to speak. thanks again bye

Tempting Bella by dont_run Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 191]
Summary:

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Bella tells herself being with Edward is wrong because he's to young for her though it doesn't stop her from wanting him in every way including her biological clock picturing green eyed babies. And if it is wrong why does he feel so right?

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 48225 Read Count: 29361
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 13 Mar 2010
Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Outtake 1: The Day Emmett Got Snipped

aww that story was THE best I think I have ever read. It was hotter than hell too so great job. i hope there's a sequel but if not that ended just fine. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Outtake 2: The Day Edward Messed Up?

awww that is too sweet. I'm so happy bella didn't let him get his way and forget about valentine's day. I'm so happy. this was great. keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Summary:

Isabella Swan is forced to seek out protection from the very family that abandoned her a century ago.  How will the love of her life react in finding her alive and well after one hundred years of believing she was dead.

**Written as a One-Shot/ My Entry for Darkward Vamp Contest**

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10894 Read Count: 1490
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 12 Feb 2010
Reviewer: jbe86 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

oh my GOD!! he killed Jake and now HER!!! god he really has lost his marbles. that gave me chills man that was great and scary as hell. great great job.

Bonfires and Lakes by booty492 Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

Bella only wants a summer fling, however, when she meets Edward will she want something more?


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 55496 Read Count: 1943
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Jan 2011
Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Suckers

lol Bella is great. I love those guys too. I can't wait till she meets Edward. Really interested to see where this story goes. keep up the great work. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing, I appreciate it!  The guys are definitely like some of my own friends, but I'm glad you like them.  

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Meet and Greet

awww!! they are too freaking cute. I'm glad that they're taking a step, albeit a small one by exchanging numbers but still. lol keep up the great work. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review, again.  It won't be for long that they are taking things slow...

The Freshies Club by maelyn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 490]
Summary:

 Banner                                           

 A darker Edward learns a new technique from his brothers and starts a very special club, luring his new female classmates in. Will Bella be in or out? Can she handle the competition? Can Edward handle the competition when Bella and her friends are dragged into the dark world of the vampire's who want to collect them?

 

This story is a bit dark and different from the usual twilight vampire lore, so beware.

 

 

AU/OOC/Canon/Non-canon pairings. MATURE for dark adult themes and language, lemons

 

 Disclaimer: Twilight and all it’s characters belong to Stephanie Meyer.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137637 Read Count: 53037
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jul 2010
Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15. Lured In The Trap

wow I wonder how Bella and Alice are going to take to this. :) I was kind of dissappointed that Bella lost her virginity to Dimitri instead of Edward but I'll get over it especially since they're going to need their help finding rose later. lol keep up the great work. I can't wait for Edward's reaction. :) thanks again bye

Summary: Past Featured Story

A night of Halloween trickery & secrets leads to some unexpected treats for Bella. Will this night of debauchery be a one time occurrence? Or will Bella & Edward risk the burn and attempt a relationship? Contains Mature Language and Situations, along with some violence.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 69 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 726775 Read Count: 279047
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 22 Dec 2011
Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: You Got My Head Spinnin

aww that really was the perfect date AND he didn't expect anything in return? such a sweetie (swoon) lol I love it. I can't wait for more. keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Bad Day

Edward was tooo awesome and a stubborn ass just like Bella. lol I love that he stayed even after she told him to leave. great! :D I can't wait for more keep up the great work. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Yes, it certainly seem dear Bella has met her match!!  Or at least a man who knows how to deal with her stubborn streak.

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 15: All I Needed

I love Bree, "she" is awesome. I also loved that hot as hell sex scene between them. keep up the great work. I love it. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 08 May 2010 Title: Chapter 16: I Won't Back Down

Happy Mother's day to you also even if you arent a mom. lol I loved that meeting. it was cute. Edward was so flustered poor guy. lol keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 51: Piecing It Together - Part 2

ouch! first off the whole thing with Em and Rose? yeah not even going to say anything bc I can't help feel bad for the guy. As for Edward and Bella and their playful flirting? yeah too freaking Cute! I can't wait to read more and for Bella to go to the Dr. This is going to be awesome. keep up the great work. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

It was a lot of fun to write that flirting after following them through their darkness.

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 15 May 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Morning in the Meadow

aww those two are too freaking sweet together even though bella has a boy ego. lol I can't wait for more. keep up the great work. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

YES!  Bella definitely has a boy ego. She and Emmett are much more alike than she and Edward.  LOL

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 22 May 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Scars & Ninja Mind-Fucks

well her story wasn't as bad as I thought it would be. :) I love that with Bella's temper Edward is her balance beam. he just evens her out. I love that. keep up the great work. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

And this is just the beginning. The more she lets him in, the more he will balance her while she will open him up.  They are compliments to each other.

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 29 May 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Drive

aww Cheesy E strikes again but she loves him. :) I love it too. keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 20: The Longest Day

we may rock but you rock harder! that chapter was sweet and we got introduced, finally to slutty Mary. lol keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 21: The Next Contestant

YES TO THE bar fight! that was hot. lol keep up the amazing work. I cant' wait to see how their day goes. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 22: New Start

aww that whole chapter was sweet and hot right down to the sex on the couch, even if Bella didn't get to finish, but there's always the next morning. ;) lol I loved bella cooking with Emmett for Rose. that was too sweet. I'll miss you, :( but you have fun and can't wait till you get back for an update. :) thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 25: The Past Laid Bare

well at least we found out who Aaron was and what exactly had happened to him. :( that was sad. keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 26: That's How You Know

aww Bella is such a worry wart. lol I love that she's leading up to just three words and like always making a big deal about it. lol I love it. keep up the great work. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Being Bella and Edward, it's definitely going to be a profound moment in their lives!

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 27: No Turning Back

that poor couple. I don't blame Edward for being upset though. she went on and on about hating Valentines' day and now she magically "has to work". yeah that doesn't sound like a cop out even when she's not. Then Bella admits something that she's not ready to admit? yeah she's hurt to and for good reason but I just hope the next chapter doesn't have her driving because she's not fit to. :D keep up the amazing work. this is awesome. I can't wait till next Saturday. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

They both messed it up this time and they are going to have to not only admit to their mistakes, but be honest about their chances of fixing them.  Edward can't just say he's fine with this or that if he can't really be.  And Bella is going to have to learn to speak and not assume he understands what she feels for him.

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Keep Holding On

aww freaking aww! I'm so happy they're working things out even though Bella was very dramatic on just saying I love you back. :D thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Need You

Emmett is such a dick but I'm so glad he and Edward had it out. I loved that goodbye kiss. that was hot in and of itself. :D I loved that chapter. keep up the great work. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Yeah, you leave Edward without any lovin' for a little while and he suddenly had new tricks!  Damn man!!  LOL

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 30: And So It Begins

first off those cops were jerks to pull all those guns on Emmett. Poor thing. then Edward, oh poor baby! I know exactly how it feels to have motion sickness on a plane and its NOT COOL! I felt bad for Edward especially more than anything because it was Edward. lol I do love how worried Bella was about him though. too cute. she's this hardass but as soon as her baby iis sick, bam! worried momma bear. love it. keep up the great work. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Yep! She would have teased anyone else, but since it was Edward, she just wanted to make him feel better. She's gooey on the inside for that man.

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Aloha Wau Ia Oe

aww LOVE LOVE LOVE!!! too cute. I liked the whole Edward getting sick thing because I know EXACTLY how he feels. i don't do trips, any type without becoming ill. for like days later, I'm still sick. it sucks. I loved that whole chapter but her saying she loved him more than any other part. great job and keep up the great work. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Yeah, I thought about letting Emmett forget too, but after him nearly getting tased, I let him take his pills. LOL

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Hoaloha

aww Edward and Bella are toooooo perfect. lol I love it. I think Edward is a cheese ball with all the love yous he's making Bella throw out there but Bella loves it. :D I can't wait till next Saturday. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Yes! Edward is a cheeseball who has waited an awful long to time to hear the woman of his dreams say those words back to him. I think it'll be a while yet before he gets tired of hearing them! LOL

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Moe'Uhane

aww that waterfall was sweet and then the cottage with all day sex? Hell yes. lol thanks again so much. I loved it. thanks bye



Author's Response:

They had themselves a very fine time, making the name Hale Lani (Heavenly Home) very, very true! Wish we could all be so lucky!!

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 34: All Shook Up

YES YES YES Bella was totally jealous. I thought for sure she was going to get up and rip that girl's hand off. lol that was awesome. as for Edward and Bella's hot scenes, it was just that, HOT! I loved it. keep up the great work and I can't wait till Saturday. Question though and i know you won't answer it but is Bella pregnant? just wondering. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

I won't, but only because you'll get the answer in a couple of chapters.

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 54: More Than Words

aww I'm soo glad they're getting back to their normal selves. :D I also loved the talk between Esme and Bella, Edward and Carlisle. :D keep up the great work. thanks again bye for now

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Beaches, Boys, & Blues

the day with Emmett was awesome and I know Bella can be touchy but dang. wasn't she a little harsh with Alice? poor thing. I really hope that the flower they were talking about worked. that would be great to prove Bella wrong. keep up the great work. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

You have to keep in mind that every single time Alice can find something to say about it, she does. And Bella has asked on numerous occasions for Alice to stop as soon as Bella asks her to the first time. Bella doesn't want to talk about any of this stuff because she's sick and tired of things that work for others not working for her. The whole situation frustrates her and hurts so she'd prefer not to talk about it all.  But Alice being Alice can't do that.  Bella does try very hard to keep in mind that Alice only does it out of love, but sometimes, you just can't take anymore.

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Don't Worry, Be Happy

Awww Edward and Bella are too freaking cute and so are Emmett and Rosalie when they want to be. lol I loved that chapter. keep up the great work. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Yeah, I didn't Rose and Em could be all mushy sweet so it was great to see!  And Bella was too funny with her giddy behavior - Edward keeps that up and he might actually tame her a bit. LOL

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Complications

wow I was really worried there for a second, honestly. poor Bella. Also poor Edward. Alice is a pain in the ass. you'd think she was the one dating Bella and not Edward. lol keep up the great work. I can't wait for more. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Alice isn't trying to be a pain at all. She's just really close to Bella and was scared out of her mind. Bella will make sure her best friend and boyfriend are both okay with the big change in dynamics.

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Adjusting

aww I'll miss you MUCHES!!!! well this story anyway. lol that poem and the moment where Edward was hugging Bella was sweet. I loved it. I guess we'll see this when you feel better. :D thanks again bye



Author's Response:

I'm always excited when you guys enjoy reading a poem as much as I enjoyed writing it.

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Air & Water

aww They are all family. that's what I loved about Twilight when I first read it. the family concept. well besides Edward and Bella getting all hot and lovey dovey but still family came 2nd. they didnt' even know the girl and they were going to fight one of their own kind for her. FAMILY!! lol this chapter was too freaking sweet. everyone helping Bella even when she's being a bitch. great update and I'm glad your arm is feeling a little better. :D thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Yep. Family was definitely what this chapter was all about - pulling them closer when things get rough instead of pushing away and dealing it with alone. Bella is learning to do that and consider it a good thing.

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 12 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Surprise

Well Bella wasn't the only one freaked out when he fainted. holy hell! my heart about jumped in my chest. lol I'm sad it might be 3 weeks between chapters but I'll get over it. :D keep up the great work. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

LOL Yeah, Edward freaked everyone out in this chapter. Trust me, I'm sad it's so long between chapters too but I have to take so many breaks right now that it's taking forever to get a full chapter fleshed out. Once my wrist is stronger and I can type for longer, I'll be more than happy to post more consistently.

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 41: Eclipse

aww! they are too freaking cute together! They do end up together right? I mean that last part freaked me out a little with how it says she'll remember the canyon but Edward more than anything. Keep up the great work thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Bella only meant that she will remember him more than the canyon because the way he makes her feel trumps everything else in her life. Our girl is long past smitten and into whole hearted love territory.

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 17 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 42: Crash & Burn

God Emmett is a DOUCHEBAG!! Sure he was trying to look out for his little brother but come on. he had to make him lose Bella first in order to get healthy? doesn't he think THAT alone would take a toll on his heart? poor Bella and Edward. I can't wait till they find each other again. thanks soo much bye for now

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 43: Cry

aww, seriously crying over here. you have got to love Jasper. Emmett is such a douche! Still! I can't believe he would tell Edward We owe Bella bc w/out her we wouldn't be talking again and Im glad you're back to being healthy again when he knows the one thing Edward needs is Bella and he told her to stay away. I really really Really REALLY hope that Bella tells Jasper about her problem w/out lying to him so that they can be back together. SOON! like next chapter soon. lol keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Pulling All The Right Strings

uh oh! Emmett's in trouble poor thing. I think he honestly won't remember saying that just like Rose said where he was so upset he doesn't even remember what happened the whole time he was visiting Edward. oh well. can't wait for the drama & BABIES!! twins perhaps? I can't wait. keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 44: Will It All Away

um, I'm not seeing us on the way to being happy again with Edward and Bella being back together with HER not answering him back and trying to forget about him. where's our HEA? :( but I do have to say I did LOVE LOVE LOVE that conversation with Numbnuts who I think its safe to say is Edward? (squeals) right right? lol I love where this is going and hopefully we don't have to wait that much longer to get there. :D jk but keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 10 May 2011 Title: Chapter 57: Learning to Breathe Again

aww Freaking AWW!!! that should be my motto for this story! lol I love it. granted bc its so long it takes me FOREVER To read a chapter lol but don't ever change that. I love it. keep up the great work. thanks again bye for now

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 47: So Different Yet Still The Same

ooh damn! that was one hot baseball game! lol and then he put her hand on his chest? yeah baby! why she got mad, though I'm not sure of but you'll tell us in the next chapter right? lol thanks again so much and I'm totally picturing Rob from Water for Elephants w/his new buffed up short hair physique, am I close? lol thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Yes, it was! One very hot game!  She didn't get mad about her hand on his chest - she got scared.  She doesn't know that his heart can't get messed up again.  But he will make that loud and clear to her very soon.  And yes, you are pretty close.  I put a pic up on my website over at http://jessealexander4.webs.com/worththeburn.htm.

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 48: My Guiding Light

aww! Bella is "sleeping" with him now. that's soo cool! I can't wait for 2 weeks to come. I do like that he is slowly starting to notice that its Emmett that keeps Bella away. keep up the great work and see ya in 2 weeks. :D thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 52: One is the Loneliest Number

aww Bella knows she's going to have not two but THREE babies! ooh this is going to be great. too bad she's such a stubborn butt and won't let Edward help her. :( I can't wait to see where this goes. keep up the great work. thanks again bye for now

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 53: Ghosts of Broken Hearts

aww Edward is adorable. I loved that part where he was bouncing between her belly and her eyes in excitement. too cute. and charlie! that was adorable. I can't wait to read more. I'm so glad she's coming around finally. :D keep up the great work. thanks again bye for now

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 15 May 2011 Title: Chapter 58: If At First

Aww! Now everyone knows, and E/B are happy & together! Thats fantastic! I can't wait to find out more. Thanks gain bye for now.