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I am a wife and working mother of three. And I am a rabid Twilight fan. I also love good wine, good friends and skin art. Oh, and I live and breathe the music around me. Currently, I love 100 Monkeys, Kings of Leon, Killers, Pink, Death Cab For Cutie, Van Morrison, Bruno Mars and Adele. But like the weather where I live, just wait five minutes and it could change.
I discovered fan fiction by accident while looking through Twilight websites and have been addicted ever since. My husband never complains about my hours of computer time because he always reaps the benefits in the end. ;)
Not only do I love to read a good piece of Twilight fiction, but I am working on several stories of my own.
I had a most incredible opportunity to meet the one and only Peter Facinelli on October 23, 2010. He was absolutley amazing and gracious and sexy as hell! I got pictures and a new tattoo out of the deal so all in all it was one of the best weekends of my life!!! Check out the link if you are so inclined.
I had an even better experience meeting Jackson Rathbone at a 100 Monkeys concert on July 9, 2011. What an absolutely amazing group of guys. If you ever get the chance, I highly recomend you go and see them. I am now a total Monkey Junkie and can not wait till they come my way again. And yes, I also got Jackson to sign my leg and immediately had it made permanant the very next day. Check out the link to read the whole story.
Use Somebody A/N:
I have removed Use Somebody. I am attempting to have the story published which is exciting and scary as hell!!! Follow my updates on Facebook, 'Nickeyd26'.
Vampires no longer hide. They rule the world. This dark new world is led by a coven of arrogant, domineering and ruthless vampires...The Cullen men. Are they all that they seem? Can they be tamed? Definitely ADULTS only...Wicked and Warped in the beginning.
A LESS INTENSE VERSION OF CHAPTER 02
has been added for those readers that prefer a less hard core encounter.
Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Jasper
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 146446 Read Count: 180130
Date: 22 May 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - A Dangerous Line to Cross
Whoa, that Peter is one scary dude. I love the story you came up with. His torture of David was truely evil and very creative. How do you torture a vampire when death is too easy for them? Being stuck in the bottom of an ocean for eternity might do it.
Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Waiting to Exhale
I don't blame Edward for his sceptasism. Carlisle has not been warm and fuzzy with Bella AT ALL. Hopefully it is nothing too terrible. After all, he has Esme now.
Please keep writing! I am totally adicted to this story and I need to know how it all ends. Take your laptop outside and write...that is what I do. ;)
Date: 11 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - A Meeting with Carlisle
Wow, Carlisle surprised me. He was actually nice to Bella!!! I hope she doesn't change her mind and I really hope Jasper keeps his mouth shut.
Human side of Carlisle can be reasonable. Animal side is wicked. Thanks for the review. Kat
Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - Contemplation
Poor Bella always feels like she is not enough. I love that she has Martha to go to. I also love that Jasper takes such good care of her.
Oh and the teasing of Jasper was very hot!!!
Date: 08 May 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Celebration
Bella's birthday party was excellent. I loved that she felt like a princess and that she got the chance to dance with her dad.
I can not wait for the private party! I wonder of Alice is going to keep Jasper from making it there. ;)
Thank you so much. I was so afraid that I would screw the party up. Kat
Date: 05 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Frustration
Carlisle is hot and animal Carlisle is damn hot! Excellent quickie! Can't wait for the trip to change Bella. Will we get a threesome before the bite? Will both boys chnage her or will Jasper allow Edward to have all the fun?
Date: 24 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - Last Minute Doubts
Oooh, I love Animalward. He can come play anytime!
I was worried that Jasper wouldn't make the trip, but I am so glad that he is. I can not wait to see how they go about changing Bella.
Date: 02 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - Revelations and Reflections
Happy Birthday!!! And it doesn't matter how old you are, it matters how old you feel. If you feel old, then grab a bottle of wine and say fuck it! ;)
Carlisle sending Peter to take over Lanny's position does seem like a perfect solution if only he would give up Alice. Alice is in a bit of a pickle now realizing how unstable Peter could be if provoked. Very interesting situation you have set our little vamps in.
Do I have to put my teeth in first? Just kidding - that would be so gross. I like the suggest of the wine but instead of just saying fuck it maybe I can attack my husband and ... (sorry - too much personal info there) lol. Thanks for the review and the birthday wishes. Kat (**blushing**)
Date: 20 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 - Understanding
I think Jasper is doing the right thing. His future with E&B is uncertain. He should allow Edward to be the one to chsnge her though her idea was pretty damn hot. So was E&J's little post hunt action. ;)
Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Heaven and Hell
Oh you nailed it honey! This chapter was perfect from start to finish. The way they pampered Bella was beautiful and when they made love together, I swear I washolding my breath the whole freakin time. I have to agree with Bella, Edward going all predator on her was a little scary and I hope he doesn't go too far.
Date: 19 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - A Breath of Time
That first part with Bella was hard to read. Edward must be going out of his mind. I hope Bella makes it through the change.
So, we have a new evil doer in town? I think he is a fool to go after Rosalie. He might find himself in the bottom of the ocean with no limbs like that other vamp.
Date: 19 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 – A Fatal Decision
That last part was heart wrenching. I really hope Bella comes through this intact and still in love with Edward and Jasper. Jasper is going to need that when he realizes he has no chance with Alice.
I think Alice made the right choice for her. I just wonder if she can stick with it.
My lips are sealed. lol
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - A Fate Worse Than Death?
OMG! My heart is breaking for Jasper! How terrible for Bella to not only not remember him but to be afraid of him?!? I loved this trio and had really hoped they would survive the transformation. Is there any hope for Bella to regain her memories??? Probably not. :(
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - The Bastard Is Back
Ooooh, I want to see Carlisle in all his evil glory! I would love to see Edward and Bella come back in time to help dole out the punishment to the sick bastard that took Esme and Rose.
Emmett's wish for a tryst with his brother's wife takes a turn he never expected. O/S for winner of author auction from The Fandom Gives Back. MATURE for lemons of the BDSM variety. I mean it. Don't try this at home. If you're under 18 or can't buy porn legally, turn away now!
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges: Birds & Bees Writing Challenge - CLOSED
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4724 Read Count: 1124
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Taming The Bear
Nothing is better than a busload of Robporn (with the exeption of Rob being the driver of the bus), but this story was damned hot!!! Very well written. I felt like I was sitting in the corner watching the whole thing happen.
Bella is 17 and tired of being the 'good girl'. Senior year calls for change. She finds it in the arms of 25 yr old Edward. Consequences for her choices cause a ripple effect that even she could never have been prepared for. New banner made by: mkystich, thanks bb!
Bella is 17 and tired of being the 'good girl'. Senior year calls for change. She finds it in the arms of 25 yr old Edward. Consequences for her choices cause a ripple effect that even she could never have been prepared for.
New banner made by: mkystich, thanks bb!
Characters: Bella, Edward
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 67280 Read Count: 83757
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Interesting beginning. I can't wait to see where bad girl Bella takes us.
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
I don't know how I feel about this chapter. Things were going well until Bella wanted to leave and Edward wouldn't let her. I felt he kinda overstepped and was on the tightrope over the difference between rape and consentual (all age differences aside).
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Holy shit! Talk about 6 degrees of seperation! This can not be good for Bella.
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Bella needs to make up her mind. Either she likes possesive overbearing Edward or she doesn't. He doesn't seem like he can switch off the intensity.
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Possesive Edward is fine..Assward is fine, but Bella needs to decide if she can stand him like this.
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Edward needs to find a hobby rather than possesining every free minute that Bella has.
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
I love operation get Emmett Swan. I have a feeling this will be a successful venture for the girls.
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
That was damned hot!!! I love the thought of Edward handcuffed to the bed. That is some serious mental candy!
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Loved the helicopter idea. I like that Edward isn't 100% possesive ass. But then he lost all the points he gained by being a dick in the restaurant. Bella shouldn't have answered. She should have found another way home just to piss him off.
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
I love how the girls didn't let the guys bully them into changing. Chaperones? Seriously? Can you say stalkers???
No, I did not see the accident coming. I can only imagine how the guys will use this as an I told you so moment.
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Holy hell! Emmett took that alot better than I expected. But then again, he can't say much since he is nailing Rose.
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
Whoa, I thought Edward was going to skin Seth alive when he found out that he lied to Bella. Emmett and Edward are devious SOBs for suggesting the punishment to Charlie. That may come back to bite Edward in the ass if he is not careful.
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
This was my favorite chapter so far. I love that Bella forgave Seth and that she is finally taking a little control over her life.
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
I'm glad to see that Bella's parents are being more reasonable. But that must kill Bella that she can't be with her best guy friend.
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
Oh the ideas that these girls come up with. I am so glad I don't live next door.
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
Oh man, seriously? He is still friends with Tanya after that whole restaurant shit? That boy needs to get his priorities straight and Bella needs to stop being a floor mat.
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
YES!!!! Bella has grown some balls and actually used them!!!! Don't even tell me that is Damon in the car. If she takes a ride from him knowing Alice is on her way, the shit is going to hit the fan!
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
So, I am betting that the girls hit the nail on the head with Tanya trying to get back with Edward. And I am betting that she wanted a few extra weeks to try and get knocked up by someone else and claim it was Edward's...am I right?
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
I knew it! LOL! Well, at least Tanya is out of the picture...hopefully for good. Bella's parents are going to flip shit when she tells them she is pregnant and Edward is the daddy. I wonder if Charlie is going to try and arrest him for statchatory rape?
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
Whoa! Emmett needs some bi-polar meds and anger management classes. I don't think that could have gone any worse. And now they are heading into the lion's den. Good luck Edward! Hope you got that life insurance paid up. You didn't really want your balls anymore, right?
Date: 16 May 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
Excellent chapter! I was surprised that Edward stayed hidden for as long as he did with Charlie and Renee having the reaction to the news.
Honestly, my favorite line was a pretty simple one, but I could totally hear it in my mind and that was when Charlie said, “EDWARD CULLEN, GET THE FUCK IN HERE RIGHT NOW!” . Classic dad line and it left it wide open for whatever he decided to do next.
I also loved the house sitting story. LOL. I need to tell that to my hubby.
PS. I hope your dad gets better. It is never easy to be in that situation, so I wish you and your family all the best.
Date: 21 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
Congrats on the new (albeit temporary) addition to the family. Best of luck!
Excellent chapter! I can't believe Edward hit him! As much as he deserved it, Edward needs to watch his ass before he lands it in jail. Damon is probably a minor and Edward is most definately not. I hope he and Emmett come up with an evil way to get back at the little ass munch!
Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
I love Aunt Irina. She really took all the bulls by the horns in this situation. Thank God someone has Bella's back.
Why am I not surprised that Charlie pulled the marriage card? Actually, I am a little surprised that Edward didn't pull it first. LOL. ;)
Date: 22 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
So, little Bella is getting married? I hope she comes up with some seriously extravagant plans because Charlie so deserves to get hit in the bank account for pulling that stunt. If I were Bella, I would make them pay for it and then ban them from the wedding. I know, I am evil like that. ;)
Date: 10 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
Holy shit!!! Please tell me that Damon is totally lying about everything?!? And how the hell does he know about the baby? Ugh! The chapter started out so happy and light...now I just want to beat the hell out of Damon on Bella's behalf.
Oh, I have started posting a story of my own on here. It is called "Use Somebody". I would love for you to check it out and tell me what you think. :)
Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27
What about Renee and Charlie? Couldn't they have been bitching to one of their friends who has a child who is also a student in Bella's school?
Jasper returns to Forks to apologize but was never prepared for what he found. Now he knows he needs to make it right. But how? Will Bella find love again?Lemons in the future! Non-canon AU New Moon.
Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella, Jasper
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 281055 Read Count: 41617
Date: 10 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36
Hmmm, I think Jasper handled that whole thing really well. The poor guy is going to go stir crazy from the sexual tension between him and Bella if she doesn't get better REALLY soon. ;)
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55
Well, it just wouldn't be right if I didn't review this chapter since I did all the others.
I thought it was an excellent ending to an incredible story. I am usually a strict E&B fan, but there was something about your Jasper that really touched my heart. I have laughed and cried and said 'ahhh' so many times throughout this story that I have lost track. I have loved it all.
Thanks for sharing it with us!
PS. If you like a little dirty vampire action, check out my one-shot 'A Family Affair'. It is dirty citrus galore. ;)
Ohh love dirty vampire action will certain take a peek! *giggles* I am so glad you stuck with me through the whole thing and read and reviewed! I'm also happy you gave it a shot but I understand the attraction to cannon so I'm glad I could warp your sensibilities a bit *giggles*
Thanks for all your kind words and reviews!
Mynxi & Jasper
Date: 10 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35
Bella is a little nutsy with her emotions, but she is getting better.
Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
That was one hell of an emotional beginning. I could totally picture the whole scene play out the way you described Bella. I hope Jasper can fix her, somehow.
Well I hope you enjoy the story please let me know if you have any questions or suggestions. It is a long process and can be a bit of a downer but many people are loving it just the same. I typically try to throw a little comedic relief in each chapter somewhere.
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Mynxi & Jasper
Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
I am really lovin how you are writing Jasper in this story. I just want to wrap my arms around him. I loved his little breakfast challenge to Bella. Very creative.
The breaksfast scene with Bella is still one of my favorites. There's a popcorn scene coming up that is rather amusing also but for a different reason.
Thank you for the review!
M & J
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
I am glad that Jasper made her go out. Left to her own devices, she would probably stay in that house until she willed herself to die.
I wonder of she sees the sign for Bella Italiana and that is what has her nearly freaking out.
You're right she needed to get out. Jasper agreed. I did what Jasper told me to. We're happy ;)
Thanks for the review!
M & J
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Jasper has a sick sense of humor setting those guys up like that. I love him!
*giggles* I'm glad you liked it. I know I honestly saw it in a movie somewhere and I can't remember where so I can't give the movie credit but it's still hilarious.
They got what was coming to them. That's what was important.
Thanks again for all the review! They're great! I love hearing people's favorite parts, lines, or just what they took note to mention.
M & J
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
That sucks that Em and Rose coming has made Bella backslide in her recovery. I really hope when she sees them it will be better.
I'll be honest here...Bella goes back and forth in her recovery. I tried to do realistic which really has drawn the story out but I didn't want the "oh they're back! Like is great!" scenario.
Hope you'll continue to enjoy!
M & J
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
I thought it was Ema nd Rose at the beginning, but I liked the surprise of the wolves showing up.
I like how Jasper keeps the pressure on Bella to make her respond to things and not let her retreat back into herself.
Oh, I forgot to mention before, so I will now. I love how Jasper is slowly falling in love with Bella. It is sweet and very, very slow, but it is perfect.
Aww Thanks Darlin' I'm glad you are loving Jasper's slow but sure love interest. Thank you for your continuous reviews, I appreciate them all. I hope you'll continue to enjoy the story and Jasper pushing Bella cause she needs it a lot. :)
M & J
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Oh shit! Please tell me it isn't Edward. She isn't strong enough for that yet. I know you said in a previous note that Edward would show up, but I hope it is after she is much better and her and Jasper are together.
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
I can not wait to see what Jasper has come up with to get himself into the school. Maybe a teacher assistant type position?
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Okay, the last part about the guys calling Charlie Dad was really funny. It had me giggling.
I am glad that Jasper warned Emmett and Rose about Bella's cutting. That is so sad that she just wants to let herself die. I am glad you are taking her recovery slow because it is more believable.
I really hope Jasper does something evil to Mike. I can not wait to see.
Oh, and I like the idea of Jasper needing a gym credit. Very creative.
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
I loved it!!! Jasper and Rose can be one hell of a scary duo!!!
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
I liked the impropmtu vampire sleepover. Very cute idea. ;)
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
Poor Jasper. I can only imagine what Bella said when he wasn't listening. But I would bet my copies of the Twilight books that it wasn't that she liked Mike. It was probably more like she wouldn't date him if he was the last man on earth.
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
I am so glad they are finally having real conversations. And Jasper didn't have to eat anything at lunch! Yea!!!
Their first kiss, I can not wait, but I suspect it will be at least five more chapters before we get there. ;)
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
As sad as this chapter was, I am so glad that she admitted to Jasper everything that Edward said to her.
I think Jasper was wrong to rub up on Bella the way he did, but you gotta cut the guy some slack. He really likes her and it is probably killing him every time she shuts down like that.
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
I'm glad she is getting some of her fire back.
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
I love how Jasper took charge, but he should have checked her room for any other cutting utensils.
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
That was not how I saw their first kiss happeing. Ugh, I really hope this story starts taking a happier turn soon cause it is starting to bum me out. :(
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
I am glad she is not staying there longer. I really don't think it can benefit her since she can't admit to being in love with a vampire and then left by said vampire. I was surprised there was no mention of any of the wolves in the hospital since Alice couldn't see them there. Hmmm.
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
I loved the exchange between Bella and Emmett. It was very sweet and natural.
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
Jasper has a dirty, dirty mind. First the spanking in the school dgirl outfit then the little fantasy in the shower...I wouldn't mind seeing them both come true for him. ;)
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
LMAO! I love that snarky Bella is starting to breathe again! I can not wait to see therapy with Emmett. He has got to be a therapist's worst nightmare!!!
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
I liked the shower scene. Emmett is a smart cookie when he needs to be. ;)
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
Ahhh, he got her a puppy! That is so sweet. I love that he was the only puppy not afraid of him and Emmett. I bet that Bella is having this reaction to Alice's name because she was supposed to be Bella's best friend, but she left without a word which in a way is almost worse than the way Edward left.
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
Spirit is a cool name, but I like Jasper Jr (JJ) too.
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
When Bella freaked out it almost seems like she has been supressing her emotions for so long that now that she is letting them out, there is no filter. So, any emotion can be blown out of proportion.
Date: 09 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
I love when Jasper promised to change her, but not for Edward. I really liked that.
Date: 09 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27
I'm glad that Bella figured out about the wolves. I think it was important for her to figure that out without Jasper telling her.
Date: 09 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28
Loved the family day out.
I am so glad that Bella didn't freak out over Jasper's past.
Date: 09 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29
Oh my! She finally initiated some real action with him. Woo hoo!!!
I also loved when she was tracing his scars. It was a sweet and intimate moment. Well done!
Date: 09 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30
It is really cute that Emmett wanted to make Bella a CD too. LOL
I love that poem that Jasper said to Bella. It really is perfect for these two (and thanks for giving props to Tara sue me...I had seen it there also). ;)
Date: 09 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31
Holy shit!!!! What is Bella asking for?!? I don't think she is ready for sex yet. She has just started to really open up and find herself again.
The date was fan freakin tastic!!! It was absolutely perfect!!! Loved it from start to finish.
The semi-sex talk with Charlie was funny. Poor Charlie! ;)
Date: 09 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32
OMJ!!!!!!! That was hot and intense and all over the emotional spectrum!!!! Holy shit! I need to read the next chapter NOW!!!
Date: 09 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33
Whoa, I expected Bella's reaction to E&C returning, but not Jasper's. But in a way, I am proud of him for standing up for himself. He really did get pushed around alot in SM's books. It is almost like seeing a caged tiger finally being allowed to stretch his legs and show off his stripes. ;)
Date: 09 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34
Go Bella!!! I totally love how she tore Carlisle a new one!!! That was classic! I always thought that it was bullshit that Edward was able to dictate that the family leave Bella in NM. Carlisle is supposed to be the head of this family yet he allowed that to happen?!? Good call on letting Bella tell him exactly what she thought!
Date: 10 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37
She loves him?!? I am so glad. I wasn't sure if she was going to be able to allow herself to love him.
I like Peter and Charlotte. They seem like a lot of fun. I hope we get to keep them around for a while.
I can never say thank you enough for all your reviews so Thanks again! I'm so glad you loved the story and left such wonderful and insightful reviews.
M & J
Date: 10 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38
Totally did not see Victoria showing up in this story. I hope this isn't a trick to get to Bella.
I loved it when Bella slapped Jasper with Charlotte's hand. That was awesome!!!
Date: 10 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39
OMJ!!! That was fucking hot! He bit her and she likes it?!? Jasper needs to be careful that she isn't using his bites as a substitute for cutting.
Poor Victoria (two words I never thought I would say together). I really hope she is being honest with them.
Date: 10 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40
I can not believe she cut herself after all that! WTF! Seriously, sho cuts themselves after an orgasm with the vampire you love? And with non vegetarian vamps in the house. Is she still trying to kill herself? I would really like to hear her talk about this in therapy. I am glad that Jasper is standing his ground and leaving her alone for the night, but I can't imagine who it will be harder on.
Date: 05 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41
Ugh! You are trying to kill us with sexual tension, aren't you?
*giggles* Should I say yes? Don't worry you won't have to wait long! Thanks for reading and reviewing and all of your other reviews!!! I don't know that I got the chance to thank you properly.
M & J
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42
It was moody, but still very hot. I loved that she asked him to bite her. Hell, that's what I would say. ;)
Thanks! I think. LOL I'm glad you liked it and you know me by now. I'm moody ;) Hope it was well worth the wait though.
Thanks for the review!
M & J
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43
Holy crap! Bella has some kick ass power there! I can't imagine what it will be like when she is changed.
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44
I love it!!! The boys in drag...too funny.
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45
That has got to be Peter in the door. OMG!!! That was kinky and dirty and hot as fuck!!!
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46
I love how Charlie is so accepting of all of them. It is kinda funny, but very, very sweet.
I'm loving Charlie in this too even if he doesn't have a real big part. I'm glad you are still liking the story and will hopefully be caught up soon.
Thank you for all the reviews!
M & J
Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47
OMG! I love the visual of the guys and their target shooting game...too funny! I wonder if Edward is going to survive his trip back to Forks? I can't imagine he is going to take the news well that Bella is with Jasper now.
Aww I'm glad you love the visual...I thought it was something different and fun. :)
I think Eddie will be about like you'd expect. Let me know what you think.
Thanks for the reviews! I love them!
M & J
Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48
Shit! is right. WTF was he thinking?!? I love this Jasper, but his timing sucks monkey ass.
I loved his talk with Charlie and how he promised he would never break her heart and how their love would be epic. Very sweet.
To be honest I even teared up writing the scene with Charlie so I'm glad you loved it! Thanks!
M & J
Date: 12 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49
Esme is dillusional if she thinks that Bella is just going to run back to Edward after all this. WTF is she thinking.
I love how Bella played with Edward. That was classic!
Date: 12 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50
For being over 100 years old, Edward is not the brightest bulb in the box. Ohhhh, is Jasper going to tear and burn next chapter?!? I think it is the least that Edward deserves. And I loved that Bella threw her shield up at him. I was so proud when she said what she did. That must have been so cathartic for her.
Date: 12 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51
With this whole dysfunctional family under one roof it reminds me of a soap opera. It is 'Days of our Lives' vampire style. LOL.
I don't see Bella giving a death sentence for Edward. She would have every right to, but I just don't see it. Like Jasper said, it almost seems anticlimatic. I would rather see him have to stand on the side lines and watch Bella and Jasper be happy together.
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52
Well it is about damn time that Esme came to her senses. I wonder how long it will take Carlisle? I have no hopes for Edward. He is a lost cause.
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53
Oh shit! They pushed Bella too far. She is going to crush Edward into teeny tiny pieces isn't she?
Funniest scene...Peter chasing Edward around the yeard. That had me giggling.
Oh l loved Peter chasing Eddie...even better was him screaming for help from Jasper LMAO. Glad you enjoyed it Darlin' next chapter nwo up :)
M & J
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54
Hmmm, that was incredibly yummy! I liked how everybody took turns playing with the black bubble.
Author's Response: You mean took turns making fun of Eddie? *giggles* I'm glad you liked it Darlin' Thanks! xoxoxoxo M & J
When Emmett comes home from work, what he sees causes feelings to surface that he never knew he had. What will happen when he acts on those feelings? How will his life change? AH OOC POLYSLASH, Rated hard NC-17 for language and big fat lemons. EmxEdxB
Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella, Edward, Emmett
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 40794 Read Count: 9923
Date: 13 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
That was a pretty fuck hot beginning!!!
Date: 13 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
What could Bella have in mind??? Maybe a little bit of double dipping? These are some kinky fuckers, I wouldn't put anything past them. ;)
Date: 13 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Emmett is so cute when he gets all emo.
Author's Response: I'm glad you think so! *giggle* Thank you so much for reviewing!
Date: 13 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
I'm so glad that they are not just playing with Emmett. He is so emo, I don't think he could take it.