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Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Jasper, Phil, Renee, Rosalie
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 263196
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Fear Not, For I Am With You

Felix.  Please let it be Felix.

-fingers crossed-

 

Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Transgressions

Please hurry back with another update.

And please for the love of GOD let that be Edward at the door.

Great chapter.

Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Revelations

YEAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!

Okay i forgive you.

The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3502]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

TPW Avi 

TPW banner

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, James, Jasper, Rosalie
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1204929
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48

Okay i'll put down my hammer.  You are so mean.  I was actally scared for a little while there.  All of Edwards Progress!!

Whew!!  I feel so much better.  Thank you so much for this chapter.  It was great, very suspensful.  And good for Bella for not forgiving him completely and finally, (FINALLY) saying something, telling someone (Especially Edward) about Carlisle.

Can't wait to find out about Esme's garden.  I'm so excited!!!

Well done.

Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 49

I'm picking my pitchfork back up.  What do you mean Edward is being 'Carlisle's Edward' again?!  WHY??

:((

It's all an act right, right, RIIIIGGGHHHTTTTT?!

Please.

Good Chapter anyhow.  Can't wait for Creating a Mate's Update. 



Author's Response:

Bella says she doesn't care if its fake, because it feels real to her.  Next chapter is Edward's pov.  But first a chapter for CAM & BTP

Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 50

Great Chapter, loved it! 

It's Carlisle isn't?  Isn't? 

Nice job, can't wait for the next one.

P.S. : I'm not whining, i'm just eager about Creating A Mate.  Didn't you say you'd have that out before the next Chapter of The Perfect Wife.  Again not whining, just curious, and missing my Controlward. 

Keep up the good work. ;)

Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

Wow really doesn't cover how amazing and awesome this chapter is.  I love it, you did a great job with this.  I personally was hoping that all the girls would get a chance to have a few sessions with giving Carlisle the what-for in the basement, but maybe that's just me.

Can't wait to see what Esme did with those ashes.

I love your writing keep it coming

;)

Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

OMG, yea!!  Wow, how do you feel?  This amazing, heart wrenching story has come to an end (minus epilogue), how do you feel about that?

I would buy your book, the series, whatever it is, i would buy it and read like Twilight.  Your story is that awesome.

You did amazing with this ending, it was perfect.  A lot of times a writer will start an amazing story, have all these good characters and all these could conflicts, but then their ending just sucks, because the happy ending that they wanted their characters to have, wasn't earned.  You did great in that, Bella isn't quite there yet, but she's on the right road, she will get there, you given us that, and for that i thank you so so much.  You never disapoint, so also thank you for that.

I'm ranting i know, but it's been a long day for me, so i'm in a ranting mood. :(

Anyway about CAM, can't wait, i am a major supporter of this story.  Yesterday in fact, i went back and reread it i miss it so much.  After TPW, i just know you'll do great with it.

Thanks for letting me rant, and just wow, great job on such a complex, emotional rollercoaster of a story.

;)

Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Epilogue

Tears, baby, actual tears.  Great, Epi, really perfect ending.

Do your shoulders feel lighter now?  lol.

Great job, so happy that you were able to complete it, a lot of authors never do, and it can be so frustrating, so thank you so much.

Much love, and can't wait to see what happens next with CREATING A MATE.

;x

Summary: Past Featured Story

 stories/12/images/Creating_A_Mate.jpg

Edward has given up ever finding a vampire mate. He's decided on a new strategy-he'll find a human to become his mate. Easier said than done when others are in the way of who he wants.

Banner by Mehek18


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 95461 Read Count: 99055
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2010 Updated: 27 Feb 2014
Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I love how you did this.  Having the Cullens interfere every time Mike tried to make a move.  That is awsome.

I've just re-read this story and I fell in love with it all over again.  Please tell me you haven't forgotten about it, and that you will come back to it soon.  You'll break my heart if you don't.

I also am a huge fan of THE PERFECT WIFE.  I've been reading it since it was on FanFiction and that was a while ago.  It's so intense and I actually had to wait for you to write a few chapters at a time before I would read again because I couldn't stand be left with the cliff hangers you would leave or with a feeling of absolute dread when I would finish reading a new chapter.  (This is good.  I just easily get into a characters mind set, its hard to walk away without taking something like what's been happening to Bella with you when you turn off your computer.)

You are such an awsome writer and I can't wait to see what you'll do next.  But I'm majorly looking forward to CREATING A MATE.  So come back soon.

Thanks for letting me ramble.  ;)



Author's Response:

i promise a chapter for CAM & BTP after I post Esme's secret next week for tpw.  I couldn't leave everyone hanging waiting to see if Edward really hurt Bella or not.  I'm not quite that cruel.  :)

Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Great Chapter, awesome job.  I love how this story is progressing.  I think it's great that Bella automatically knew that she had to calm Edward down.  She just knew.

Thanks so much for coming back to this story.  I don't know if you read my comment on TPW but even if you did, i still want to give you props.  That was an awesome story, very well told.  You are an amazing writer and I can't wait to see what you do next.



Author's Response:

Thanks

Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

YES! YES! YES! YES!

THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU.

Phew.  Okay love it, I saw no errors so that was awesome.

THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU.

Hrmhrrrm.  Sorry.  Anyway, what will your update schedule be like, or is there one, Just curious.  Ok and oh what else was i going to say....

Oh right:

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR COMING BACK, THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU.

When I logged on and checked my favorites i saw a banner i've never seen before and i read the title thinking what is this and then my chair fell backwards because i was jumping up and down squeeling YES! YES! YES!

So Anyway great job bringing us back into the story and great cliffy, even though it is a cliffy and those just give everybody nerves until the next update but still good job.

Thank you so much. again.  I can 't say it enough ;)



Author's Response:

I'm sensing you're pleased with the update?  :)  Honestly, I have no update schedule.  I never have.  I don't plan my stories in advance so I really have no idea what to write next until it hits me.  I know it drives everyone crazy, including myself.  I promise it won't be 3 months before the next update though.  I've got an idea for the next chapter and no other deadlines staring me in the face right now.

Mic

Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

YEAH YEAH YEAH (Im chearing out of my seat, which has fallen back to the floor)

whew, okay i got it out of me, im ok, i might need a new chair if this keeps happening.

Great update.  Keep it coming.

Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Oops i did it again, i knocked over my chair, got lost in the 'YEAH's

Oh Update! Update! Update!

Sorry, ever since that Britney Spears Glee episode i've had Brit on the brain.

Anyway great job, yet again.  Thanks for another update, can't wait for the next.

;)



Author's Response:

Try sitting on the sofa so you can't knock it over.  :)

Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Yes.

Please keep writing, updating, and never ever stop.

Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I'm not a religious person but you have my best wishes and happy thoughts directed at you and Robbie.  Good luck!!

Summary:

Edward is a hostage negotiator with one hell of a night ahead of him. Bella is a hostage trapped inside a mall. They're both relying on each other to bring the ordeal to an end.

SOS-1.jpg picture by AnEndHasAStart


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella, Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 30393 Read Count: 3328
[Report This] Published: 30 Jan 2010 Updated: 22 Apr 2011
Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Yes, Yes, Yes

It was a great chapter thank you and your beta.  I look forward to your next update.  Feel better, be well and thank you for your story.

Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: I Need You

Health problem's huh?  A plausible story...

You know it's funny, just yesterday I was looking through some of the older stories that hadn't been updated in a while and I saw this one and thought 'man I miss that story, I hope they update soon' and then here you are..updating.  (It's true, which makes it both funny and creepy.)

Keep up the...um...updating.  This story is really good.  I haven't seen or read anything like it.

... ;)

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is 17 and tired of being the 'good girl'. Senior year calls for change. She finds it in the arms of 25 yr old Edward. Consequences for her choices cause a ripple effect that even she could never have been prepared for.

New banner made by: mkystich, thanks bb!

 

 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: Bella, Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 67280 Read Count: 89091
[Report This] Published: 07 Feb 2010 Updated: 08 Oct 2010
Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Thanks for another great chapter.  Really appreciate it.  ;)

Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Wow.  Nice job.  I'm really hoping the girls don't take that shit lying down.  I'd take Edwards "short leash" and beat 'em with it. 

Come on Bella, wake up and show Ed who's boss.

;)

Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Wow.  Nice job.  I'm really hoping the girls don't take that shit lying down.  I'd take Edwards "short leash" and beat 'em with it. 

Come on Bella, wake up and show Ed who's boss.

;)

Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

This is my Fav chap.  You did this really well.

About the AN, Rant: GOOD FOR YOU!!!  Don't let anyone bother you about updates or chapter length.  You can't rush your process and you can't force it.  Real life, especially three kids, are priority.  Don't let anybody tell you otherwise.  Your awesome, your story is great, and I thank you for sharing it.

Keep up the good work. ;)

Homecoming by dont_run Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

banner by mehek18 site http://mehek18.tumblr.com/

A troubling childhood has left Bella shy and scared of her own shadow. Her life is turned upside down when she is sent to live with the Dad and brother she never knew at the age of 15. Can Charlie and Emmett along with Edward and the gang help Bella? E/B, A/J Em/? *abuse is discussed*

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella, Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 160653 Read Count: 140729
[Report This] Published: 08 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 May 2012
Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Great Chapter, can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I forgot to ask this in my last comment:  Where did you get the pictures for your banner?  Are they from Eclipse?  Please Let me know.



Author's Response:

Yep they are from Eclipse :0) Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Not Fair, you say "Yep their from Eclipse" but i can't find them anywhere.

:(

Help a RPattz-lover out.

***On Knees pleading***



Author's Response:

I found them on various blogs, Robobessesed, Naugthy Kitty's Twiworld.

Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Great job. Well done. ;)

Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Whoa, great chapter.  Can't wait to see where you take this story.

;)

Summary:

What if a Vampire Singer was not about blood lust instead its involuntary, unpreventable and irrevesable form of true love. What would you do if you waited a century to find it? What would you do to keep it? ANYTHING! AU reg.pair. Re-writting earlier chapters.

 

stories/8628/images/The_Singer_Connection.jpg


Categories: Twilight
Characters: Bella, Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 124314 Read Count: 46045
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 07 Jun 2010
Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Why war with the Volturi?  Great chapter though, very lemony. ;)

Summary:

When Edward first sees Bella, he never suspects that she is different, that she is blind. This is a story of differences, overcoming obstacles, rebuilding relationships, loss and above all; finding love. 

Angel Eyes

 

Blinkie


Categories: Twilight
Characters: Bella, Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 96053 Read Count: 12734
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 25 Sep 2010
Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Typical

Great chapter, loved it.

;)

Victim by tima Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 90]
Summary:

She once lived the life of luxury with her husband, James, but then he became abusive. With the help of an unlikely friend, she escapes James' abuse, becomes Bella Swan, and starts fresh in a new town. She meets a handsome young man named Edward who will help her heal, but will she ever fully get over the abuse she suffered? 

When James gets wind that his wife isn't dead, what lengths will he go to take back what he feels is his?

Rated for future sexy times, some scenes of violence, abuse, and cursing.

(loosely based on Sleeping with the Enemy, but with large differences, and a Twilight twist)


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Esme, James
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 159628 Read Count: 11880
[Report This] Published: 19 Feb 2010 Updated: 31 May 2011
Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 2: A Way Out

Great story so far.  I've read a similar one like this on FF.  Was that yours and you've changed some things?  Let me know.



Author's Response:

sorry about the delay in replying to your review...

I dunno if it was me, because I do have this story on ff.net, but I'm pulling it because of the recent drama about nc-17 ratings...I haven't reworked or changed anything on my story, so perhaps there's someone else out there who had the same sort of idea...

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

~Fatima

Season of the Lie by Anadabyel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 323]
Summary:

 

stories/4485/images/SOtL_for_the_Library.jpg

 Awsome banner above by S is for Psycho, Crap one below is mine.

 

stories/4485/images/Season_of_the_Lie_banner_by_me.jpg

Lonely Edward, Jasper, and Emmett come upon a lovely desperate young woman as she is about to commit suicide. They decide to try and make her their mate by unconventional means.  Dark Cullen Bros.  AU/OOC/AL/AS 

This is my first attempt at Dark. 

Story will contain violence, murder, physical, and psychological abuse.

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 32730 Read Count: 26691
[Report This] Published: 03 Mar 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

loved this chapter too.  I want more, give me more.  ;)

Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Nice job. ;)

Beyond Time by Tkegl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 714]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After the Cullens leave Forks, a twist of fate lands Bella in Chicago in 1918. She thinks it's her second chance... a chance to build a life with a human Edward. But when she finds him, he's not quite what she expected... and Bella has some hurdles to overcome to create the future she's hoping for.

BT Banner


Categories: Twilight
Characters: Bella, Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My all time favorites, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiSup
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 286920 Read Count: 51871
[Report This] Published: 05 Mar 2010 Updated: 04 Jun 2011
Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27: Of Promises and Pleasures

What time of day was the wedding?

I'm just curious, also a little worried about Carlise.

I'm sure you wrote it somewhere, i just forgot.

Great chapter.  How many more chapters do you reckon, again i'm just curious.

Anyway ;)



Author's Response:

The wedding was in early afternoon. :-) I don't think I ever wrote the exact time, but when Edward and Bella were at the Couch Tomb in Chapter 26 it was June 29th and Edward had a little countdown going. ;-)

It looks like the story will be 34 chapters, plus an epilogue.

Glad you enjoyed the chap - thanks for reading!

New Beginnings by jmeb Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 294]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Create your own banner at mybannermaker.com!

A phone call late one night turns Bella’s world upside-down.  She finds herself thrust into the role of single mom while trying to navigate her way through a new city, and dealing with the death of her best friend.  With the help of a few new friends, Bella just might come to see that from tragic endings come new beginnings.  Canon Pairings.

 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Original Character, Rosalie
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 54209 Read Count: 15297
[Report This] Published: 11 Mar 2010 Updated: 21 Jul 2010
Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4- In Which Some Questions Are Answered

Great story.  You really had me crying in this last chapter.  Can't wait to see how the Weber's react.  Keep Going, ;)

Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5- In Which Little Hearts Are Broken

I love this story.  Can't wait to see where it goes. ;)

Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7- In Which Feelings Reach Their Boiling Point

I love this chapter.  L-O-V-E.  Great job with the Webers.  And I like what you did with the chest pain thing, very cute.

Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10- In Which We Make New Friends

Finally one of them knows where the other is.  Very nicely done.  I was so scared that you were going to have him leave Alice and Jaspers without ever having seeing her, and that quite honestly would have driven me nuts.  This was perfect and just the way it was supposed to happen.  Good Job.

;)

Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11- In Which Alice Schemes

Very cool.  New Fav. chap.  Loved it.

Nice job ;)

Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14-In Which No One Expects the Spanish Inquisition

Lol, thanks for not being one of those people with a bunch of excuses.  lol

Anyway i don't care this chapter was great and well worth the wait.

Keep it up, do what feels right, don't force the story.  If it's not coming to you then it's not ready to be written.  You are doing awesome with this, so don't worry about it.

Good going, ;)

FEAR by Truth in the Moon Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 76]
Summary:

When Edward, the son of the rich, multi-billionaire Carlisle Cullen is kidnapped by terrorists,a secret organization puts Agent Bella Swan on the case. It's her job to go rescue him and take down the terrorist group without becoming to involved. Will this mission be too much for her to handle?

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Categories: Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella, Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 23423 Read Count: 4053
[Report This] Published: 14 Mar 2010 Updated: 21 Jul 2010
Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue/Chapter 1

It's good so far, I like it.  Great start, can't wait to see where you take it from here.  ;)

Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Love it.  Keep it coming. ;)

Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Loved the last chapter and love this one too.  Great job. Keep it coming.

;)

Growing Pains by dellia54 Rated: M starstarstarstar [Reviews - 34]
Summary:

Edward and his step-siblings, Rose and Jasper, move back to Forks after a couple years away, hoping to take back their rightful place among the elite. When Edward and the new "it" girl, Bella Swan, are thrown together, sparks fly, but at what cost? AH, AU


Categories: Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Rosalie, Victoria
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 261174 Read Count: 10396
[Report This] Published: 14 Mar 2010 Updated: 03 Apr 2011
Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Out of the Loop

great story.  Love the characters already.  Keep going, can't wait for next chapter. ;)

Saving You by Cullensgirl90 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 230]
Summary:

 

stories/12615/images/Saving_You.jpg

 

 

 

It started off as an innocent party, but it soon turned into our worst nightmare. Bella and her friends are kidnapped by two vampires who plan on selling them as slaves. Will they be able to escape before they are sold? Very dark.

A Bella and Edward story


Categories: Twilight
Characters: Bella
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 66127 Read Count: 28561
[Report This] Published: 15 Mar 2010 Updated: 18 Aug 2011
Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love this story.  I read it on Fanfiction and have been praying for an update.  Please continue this amazing story.  You are an awsome writer and i can't wait to see where you take this. ;)

Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Nathan should absolutely make an appearance.

Great Chap.

Keep it up ;)

Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 07 May 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

You're Back!!!!

Summary:

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College student Bella branches out and decides to take an art class. Edward is looking for a model for his BFA exhibit. What happens when they get a good look at each other?  All human, canon pairings.  Yum Yum!


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella, Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 41812 Read Count: 10357
[Report This] Published: 21 Mar 2010 Updated: 29 Oct 2011
Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Moving Day

Oh man, you can't end it there, that's just cruel.

Love the story. ;)

Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Moving Day

Oh man, you can't end it there, that's just cruel.

Love the story. ;)



Author's Response:

hee hee!  but don't worry, we get towelward's pov in the next chappie!

Bella? Marie? by FriskyKitten Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 495]
Summary:

Bella (22) is trying to create a new future by avoiding her past. She's wary of relationships, yet longs for love and acceptance. She enjoys the feeling of being needed, and works as a live-in nanny to Rosalie's four-year old son.

For months, Bella has been secretly infatuated with Rosalie's ex-husband, Edward (29), but he barely acknowledges Bella during their brief encounters. That is, until one night when she catches his attention at a club. 

However, he doesn't recognize her. 

Afraid for her job, she tells him her name is Marie. 

After one night together, everything will change. 

How will Edward react when he discovers that the confident Marie was really his quiet nanny, Bella?

AH/OOC/MA

*Rated for language, adult situations and sexual content from early chapters. 

 

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 143453 Read Count: 32181
[Report This] Published: 04 Apr 2010 Updated: 30 Sep 2011
Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 10 May 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: Perfection

Oh please, she's more pregnant than that woman who was pregers with 8 babies!!!

Married to the Enemy by Gelix Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1688]
Summary:

After a night of celebration in Vegas, Bella finds herself married to the man who made her life a living hell for seven years. Follow her as she finds true love where she least expected it!

AU/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future lemons.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella, Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 315953 Read Count: 209846
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2010 Updated: 28 Jan 2011
Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Breakdown

I love your story, really i do, but if you or your beta, (do you have one) could work on dialogue that would make a world of difference.  What your saying is great, but if someone were to actually say it out loud in a conversation, it sounds off.  Try saying the dialogue out loud to yourself when writing, that can be a huge help, (I do it all the time.)  Just something to think about, keep in the back of your mind.  Other than that loving the story, awesome characters and idea.

I'm so sorry for your loss, and thank you so much for sharing it with us here.  I know how theraputic (spell check) it can be to write out about hard times, it really helps, I hope it's comforting and helpful to you.

Also, I love how angry Bella was with Alice, I want to see that in other stories on this site because sometimes Alice just needs to be told no, sit, stay, bad.  lol, great job, can't wait for next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you, I love honest critic. I will definitly work on my dialouges : ) I have a beta, but she just works on the grammar and spelling ^^

Thank you for your condolences, I hope it will help to write about it. I've never done that before...

THANK YOU! ;)

xx
Gelix

Cherry Valley by mkystich Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 142]
Summary:

I didn’t want to be here. I didn’t ask for this. I just wanted to be a normal girl with a normal life. But how could I when it came to him. There was no such thing as normal when you were around the Cullens. You know that saying...you can't choose who you fall in love with. Well, I understand that now. More than ever.


Categories: Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, James, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie, Victoria
Genre: Action, Drama, Fantasy, Romance, Supernatural, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 61928 Read Count: 9093
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2010 Updated: 04 Mar 2011
Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2010 Title: Cherry Valley

I totally understand knowing what you want to do with a story but not being able to take what's in your head and putting it on paper.

Do not rush yourself trying to please everybody.  Let it come to you.  The worst thing that can happen to a story is if the author rushes it without taking the time to make sure everything is as it should be.  The story gets ruined and people are left wondering "why is charlie looking at a plate of pancakes, i thought Bella was making cereal?"  It pisses people off.

Good idea of taking a break.  When it happens it happens, you can't force these things.  Take as much time as you need.

Peace ;P

Summary:

 

Edroar the Angry Lion frightens all the girls and boys at Cullen Publishing with his loud roar. Will his new massage therapist Bella Swan run away like all the rest, or can she tame this savage beast?  AH/AU   OOC


Categories: Twilight
Characters: Bella, Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 105230 Read Count: 21309
[Report This] Published: 09 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Jul 2012
Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 THE BOX

Ha ha ha "special Cookies"

they make me laugh.

Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1932]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: Bella, Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 168478
[Report This] Published: 20 Jun 2010 Updated: 03 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

I just wanted to say that if you wanted to post a day early, that would be okay.  No one would think less of you.

nevermind, *kicking floor* I just can't wait to see what happens next or how Bella's going to tell the Cullens especially Edward.  When i first found this story i read right on up until 3am.  I've read two teasers already and i want more.

anyway... can't wait til tomorrow. ;P



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! The next chapter should be up in about 8 hours or so! Don't forget to check out our delicious little teasers, along with a Pic Tease, up on the Parachute Blog!

I have taken to calling you, my readers, "Verucas". A good number of you are so demanding and impatient, even though I update every week! It makes me feel so damned loved and I give you this moniker in adoration! You truly give me chills and warm my heart at the same time with every review you leave me! As you can tell from this message, I respond to every single review that is left for me because you guys rock my socks!

Parachute's 1000th reviewer On FFnet was given the option to choose the subject of one of the outtakes and she deferred the choice to my judgement, so I will continue to listen to ideas and then maybe post a poll to see what you guys as a whole would like to see. The 500th reviewers on Twilighted and here will also be extended the same deal, since I want no one to feel left out!

Oh, and one more thing! An awesome Veruca named Phoebe started Parachute a thread on the Twilighted Forum! The link is up on the blog if you need it! In addition, thanks to many of you, Parachute was named as FanFic Addicts Fic of the Month! Super-freaking-yay!

I love you guys something fierce and I hope this next chapter lives up to your expectations of the first Cullen meeting!

XoXo

Shel


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Esme's gaze went back and forth between Bella and Jack. She could clearly see the love that wound between the two of them and a million questions started to swirl around her.

"How?" she asked, as tears started to trickle from her verdant eyes. "What happened? How did you find him? How long have you known we were his family?"  Both she and Carlisle looked at Bella expectantly.

"It's very long story," Bella chuckled, humorlessly. "Let me start at the beginning."

Bella started to tell the Cullen her tale, starting with finding Jack in the alley and taking him to the police station. She didn't get very far. They were interrupted with the sound of the front door opening and a loud voice calling out of the foyer.

"Mom! We're here!"

Bella felt something tighten in her stomach as she prepared to come face to face with Jack's father. Her nerves were at an all-time high and she briefly wondered if Dr. Cullen could prescribe her something to help prevent an ulcer from forming.

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Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

OHHHHHHH That is cruel.

You can't just stop there then expect for me to wait a whole week, can you?!

I'm going to go nuts.

Great chapter, literaly can't wait for the next one.  I'm shaking.

;P



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! For those of you who are new to the story, I update every Friday and post teasers on Mondays. The latest teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/) as we speak. I know everyone's excited about Edward finally showing up! I am too, lol! I love reading your reactions to the chapter and answering your questions!


<3  Shel

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"I could have left him at that police station and let the damn state take care of it, but I didn't. I stood up and chose to do it. I had to make difficult decisions on a daily basis. Things that I shouldn't have had to worry about, but I did. Because I loved him. For the past five goddamned years, I've loved him and I've made sure that he was fed and clothed and taken care of. I made sure that he had to best education that I could afford and that he knew that he was loved. I've bled, sweat and cried over this child. So screw you, Mr. Cullen, and the horse you rode in on," she seethed in fury.    

Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Great Chapter, yet again.

Keep up the good work.

;)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! For those of you who are new to the story, I update every Friday and post teasers on Mondays. The latest teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/) as we speak, along with some new pictures from this upcoming chapter! We're up to 428 reviews here, so I wanted to remind everyone that the 500th reviewer here will get to pick the subject of one of the Outtakes, just like the 1000th on FFnet and the 500th on Twilighted did. Thank you again for all of your love and support!


XoXo

Shel


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"Wait, you're staying in his house instead of the hotel? Bella, is that really safe? I mean, I know you want to make everyone happy, but you've gotta think about your own safely, seriously!" Alice chastised.

"Calm down, woman. It's his parents house, which is enormous and beautiful. I figured it would be fine, since I was calling you and Dad to let you know where I would be. Just in case you needed somewhere to start looking for the body."

"Bella, do not joke about this! I am going on record as saying that I completely disagree with this decision."

"Duly noted, Alice."

Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

Another great chap.

I loved the Outake you did of when Edward left Vicky.

At a boy Ed!!

Anyway...



Author's Response:

 

Thank you so much for your review! Just in case you're unaware, the story updates every Friday and I post teasers on Mondays. The latest teases are up on the Parachute Blog as we speak! This past weekend was absolutely crazy and hectic for me, so I wouldn't be looking for Parachute to update early this week! Friday around 1:00 PM, EST will more than likely be when it posts! 

I love you guys and I'm always happy to hear your thoughts, whether it's on FB, Twitter, the Blog or the Twilighted thread. You guys rock my world!

<3 Shel


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As Bella yawned and stretched, her hand hit something soft and feathery. She opened her eyes and saw her fingers resting on auburn hair. Warm green eyes smiled happily at her. She sat up quickly and glanced around the room before turning back to the person in her bed.

"What are you doing?" she asked, slightly confused at his presence.     

 

Summary:

An old, dilapidated hospital residing in the outskirts of Forks, Washington, sits untouched - other than being the occasional setting of a teenage party. Everyone knows the rumors, and it's because of those rumors rebellious teens are lured there. They want to be the first to spy the young man who supposedly lives inside its walls, the man who's either a ghost or crazed maniac that murders those courageous enough to enter the building.

No one has ever seen him, or at least no one that's ever lived to tell the tale. But it's all just rumors, right? Well, Bella Swan is about to find out.

 

Rated for subject matter and content. OOC. Canon pairings.

 

 

 

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Gif made by the amazing RoseArcadia

Warning: There is mention of physical abuse in this story.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Jessica, Marcus, Mike, Rosalie, Tyler
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 140521 Read Count: 25135
[Report This] Published: 29 Jun 2010 Updated: 05 Feb 2012
Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 7: The Plan

Im in love with this story.  It is just amazing.

Please continue.

Do you now of any other stories like this?

This is great, i can't wait to see what happens next.

Summary: Past Featured Story

stories/12/images/ForTheLoveOfMyObsession.jpg

He met the girl of his dreams. She met the man of her nightmares. How far would you go for your obsession? AH/AU/OOC

For the BEYOND THE PALE contest-Third Place Voter's Choice Winner

Banner by Mehek18

 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: Bella
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 40133 Read Count: 40025
[Report This] Published: 25 Aug 2010 Updated: 22 Sep 2013
Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like it.

Are you planning on bringing Edward back from the dead or something?

That would be cool, hard but cool.  Anyway... love reading you stuff, always a pleasure.

Thanks.

Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Wow, (i say and think that a lot with your stories, hmm...) Anyway Wow.

Not to sound like a crazy highschool girl but 'like OMG'

This is going to be good, i just know it.  You have yet to write a bad story, (disturbing, bone chilling, stomach knot making, but never ever bad and always worth reading)

I keep getting off track, i think i'm just still realing from this chapter.  It's great really to get Bella's side of things, gosh and she's pregers.  Yikes.

Please let Edward be alive.  (My inner RPattz lover made a request that i say that.  It just seems wrong to kill Edward in the beginning of a story.  At all really.  No one should ever kill Edward, unless it's Carlisle, then that's okay.  I'm rambling, i know)

Keep it coming.  It's always a pleasure to see where you take us next.

Thank you, ;)



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like the story so far.  And hate to burst your bubble, but Edward is going to remain dead in this story. I'm going for unexpected with this one.

Amazing Grace by Cullensgirl90 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 425]
Summary:

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Bella is given to Edward as a birthday present. He promises her that he will love her and never hurt her. Will he be able to keep his promise or will a dark secret tear them apart before their relationship can develop?

 Dark Edward.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: Bella
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185811 Read Count: 63224
[Report This] Published: 02 Sep 2010 Updated: 22 Jun 2011
Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Carlisle better stay dead mister!!

Also your kitten should be named Murphy or George.

Good Chapter, great story, keep it up.

Maybe it's just me but i always thought of Matt as being a big guy.  A little smaller than Emmett but that body type.  Anyway...

 

Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 19 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Ha okay so totally cool that you named the cat Murphy.  That was so fun to read even more so because of your choice.

Anyway my dog is named lucky.  And when we picked him out we (four kids) were lucky to get a dog and now-a-days he's lucky to be alive because mom can't stand him, she loves him, but she can't stand him.  He whines a lot.

Anyway great chapter. Keep it up.  Completely in love with Matt right now.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Professor Cullen wonders if he has found his next submissive in his Human Sexuality class, but she has been right before him for years unnoticed.  When he finally sees her will it be too late?

 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: Bella, Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89699 Read Count: 105151
[Report This] Published: 03 Nov 2010 Updated: 24 Apr 2012
Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Friday

Ohhhhhh....



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading - Beth

Summary:

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Edward is an Incubus, Obsessed with an impending war with the Volturi Coven.  Although he is powerful, he isn't powerful enough to take over their reign by himself. He cultivates a plan secretly using women around the world a to carry his seed, breeding hybrid warriors, that will train and aid him in his quest to over-throw Volterra. The time is comming near to take the vampire community by storm, yet the one thing he can not continue with-out, is a male heir. He will stop at nothing to find a vessel strong enough to bear his son, Unfortunately for Bella.....she just may be the one....

Warning! Contains: Very graffic content.  Sex, Violence, Murder, Blood and Guts,Somnophilia,Biastophilia,Extreme Darkward and other characters, Morbidness.

If you have some sort of hero complex and can't deal with the above issues, don't read this, keep it moving, find another fic.


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe, Canon
Characters: Edward
Genre: Horror
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 23561 Read Count: 12917
[Report This] Published: 05 Jan 2011 Updated: 24 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Of Blood And Ice

Ok, this is what the third time you've put this story up??

I really like this story and can't wait to see what happens with it, but if you could find it in your heart to repost the story where Bella falls for her music director who also happens to be Rosalie's father (and Edward) that would be much appreciated.  I really liked where that one was going.  Plus the Banner was awesome.

Summary:

In an attempt to forget the past, Bella Swan moves to her father's hometown, a place she hasn't seen since the age of three. Yet everything isn't as it seems in the small town. A murder haunts the town's people and an old legend causes Bella to fall deeper and deeper into the darkness. 


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella
Genre: Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 55050 Read Count: 8700
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2011 Updated: 18 Nov 2011
Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 6: The Photos in the Basement

For the first time ever I actually liked the character of Jessica, and what do you do, you kill her...nice.

Anyway great chapter.

Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: The Man in the Middle of the Road

It better not be a J/B story, yuck.

OMG what an amazing first chapter.  This sounds awesome, I love it.

Keep it coming.

Do you have an update schedule?  Just curious.

Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 8: The Two Men in the Living Room

I don't have any, i just can't wait until the next chapter.

This story is sooooo awesome.

Summary:

17 year old Bella Swan had a pretty good life. She had good father, a good best friend, good grades, the works.

But when her best friend's older brother, 22 year old, Edward moves back home after college her life is turned upside down and she's thrown into a whirlwind romance.

But with the odds stacked against them, (her age, her father, his parents, and his crazy, over protective sister, who happens to be her best friend) will their love survive??

E/B!


Rated for lemons and language and dirty teen minds 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4763 Read Count: 1280
[Report This] Published: 12 Mar 2011 Updated: 14 May 2011
Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 15 May 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Damn Hot!!

Love it :)



Author's Response:

Thank you lots!! :) 

Obsessed by step5604 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 65]
Summary:

My banner was made by Mehek18 website mehek18.tumblr.com

Manipulative. Controlling.  Possessive.  These weren't words that friends and family used to describe twenty two year old Edward Cullen, but they were his true colors.  This was the Edward no one knew.  One thing started bringing those traits out, her.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 33076 Read Count: 9749
[Report This] Published: 22 Mar 2011 Updated: 27 May 2011
Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Really great story.  I have one constructive comment and that would be when writing your dialogue to say it out loud.  What you've written doesn't sound like it would actually come out of someone's mouth.  It's very mechanical.  People constantly use don't, aren't, ('s), would've, couldn't, etc.  The words you have are good, but if you were to say them out loud to yourself, it sounds wrong. 

ex:“Oh good Edward, you are here." saying it outloud sounds off.

"Oh good Edward, you're here." sounds like something someone would say.

Other than that great story.  I love where this is going.  I can't wait to see what Bella thinks of the date.



Author's Response:

I'll think about that thanks for reviewing.

Summary:

After five years of marriage, Edward knows all of Bella's deepest, darkest desires.  Now they find themselves alone in the first class cabin with the exception of the sexy stranger who is sleeping across the way.  Bella may finally get one of her most erotic wishes granted. 

 

WARNING: Rated NC-17 for lemons and a threesome.  If that is too much for you, then run along little ones.  You have been warned.

 

 

This gorgeous banner is brought to you by the artistic styling of one MissKinkAtYourService.  I bow to her greatness as she always gives me the most amazing banners.  Check out her blog at

misskingatyourservice.blogspot.com/

 

 

 


Categories: All Human, Twilight
Characters: Bella, Edward, Jasper
Genre: Erotica, One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4432 Read Count: 5289
[Report This] Published: 28 Mar 2011 Updated: 28 Mar 2011
Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- Mid Flight Ménage-à-Trois

OHH i love this, please write a continuation, or another few outakes.  It's so hot and awesome.



Author's Response:

I won't make any promises, but I will try my best. 

Thanks for the love!

Nickey

Awakening by Cullensgirl90 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 134]
Summary:

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Bella falls hard for her brother's slightly controlling best friend, Edward. However, when her friend, Jessica, goes missing she finds herself caught in a web of lies and deceit. Will she escape or will she suffer the same fate as Jessica?

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: Bella
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 111387 Read Count: 14405
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2011 Updated: 17 Sep 2011
Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Ok he's controling obviously.  He doesn't like her wearing make-up, but a lot of guys don't like women wearing make-up, so she might brush that off as nothing.  He pinched her stomach in response to her eating pizza and filling up on cheesy bread. hmm... I really hope he isn't going to be on her about her weight like Micheal's dad from Amazing Grace.  Please don't let him disfigure her like that, it'd be too sad for me to read.

I must admit I adore controling Edward.

Ohh quick question, Did Edward die at the end of Amazing Grace? The way you ended it, it just seemed like he died and the letter was like in his will for her to receive upon his death, or something.  Let me know.

Also will we be seeing more of the rest of the gang (aka Alice/Jasper, Rosalie/Emmett etc.)  That'd be cool, I kind of missed them in Amazing Grace.  In fact if you could to an outake of Amazing Grace through one of their perspectives or just somehow tell us what they were thinking when all hell was breaking loose, about Edward and Bella and Carlisle. 

Anyway Great story so far, I'm loving it so much I keep checking if you've updated every couple of hours.  Do you have an update schedule?

Summary:

When hunting a nomadic gang in America Aro and his guards come across a tantalising scent too hard to ignore, little do they know that the infant who owns that scent will change all their lives forever.  

Excerpt from chapter one:

The room was small and decorated with white furnishings and a purple and pale yellow color scheme. Toys were strewn everywhere and so were a number of baby hygiene products on the change table. Something shiny caught my eye above the crib. What I found was the infants name nailed to the wall with purple and yellow letters made of wood, silver glitter decorating the edges.

Isabella.

The perfect name for a beautiful child such as this.

A perfect Italian name for a beautiful girl.

“Master we should leave now.” Jane said warily, ushering the others out the door and down the stairs.

“Call Katrina and tell her to get a room ready and all the essentials needed to take care of a human baby. Heidi find a bag and take some of her possessions with us.”

I felt, more then saw, everyone freeze. Felt there eyes boring into the side of my head, all of them filled with disbelief and wonder. Though in Jane’s case it would have been more of disgust than wonder. But all I saw was she.

Isabella.

My daughter.  

Eventually this story will be rated NC-17. 

 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: Bella
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6762 Read Count: 1086
[Report This] Published: 14 Sep 2011 Updated: 17 Sep 2011
Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Finding Her

I'm so excited to see what happens next.

Good Luck.

Summary:

banner by IllictWriter

 

The things some people will do for love....

 

Serial Drabble

Rated: NC-17 for gore, violence and graphic hardcore horror 

Genre: Extreme Horror


Categories: Twilight
Characters: Bella, Edward
Genre: Horror
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14160 Read Count: 8842
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2012 Updated: 26 Aug 2012
Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One - Twenty One

Oh thank god I found you here. Freedom fanfic needed time to confirm my account and I need my Durtynelly fix anyway I can get it be it Buried which I've followed for years and am in love with to macabre which is brilliant and gives me happy creepy chills.



Author's Response:

Aww, thanks, doll! :) 

Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Twenty Four

Oh god, creepy!

Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 04 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Twenty Seven

Where are you? The suspense has been going on for months!!! I need my release baby come on! Daisies too what will Edward do to pussy Phil and whory Renee?

Just tell me you will eventually be coming back. Please

Cultward by Millie Clann Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 280]
Summary:

University student Bella Swan is delighted when an old friend offers her an unofficial assignment: infiltrate the Authentic. But the task of assessing whether they're a dangerous cult or merely harmless eccentrics is complicated by her attraction to the leader, Edward Cullen. AU.


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Jessica, Mike, Rosalie
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: One True Thing
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 27134 Read Count: 28465
[Report This] Published: 09 Oct 2012 Updated: 19 Nov 2012
Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Is this like a matrix thing where she'll have to choose between the red pill or the blue pill? 

More Than Life by Tardis19 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 176]
Summary:

Bestselling author, Edward Cullen is newly divorced and sworn off women until Bella Swan comes into his life and turns everything upside down. However, his ex is still pining after him and will do all she can to get him back. Can Edward and Bella have their happily ever after?


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella, Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 85645 Read Count: 29470
[Report This] Published: 22 Dec 2012 Updated: 14 Mar 2013
Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Is it weird that I keep thinking Esme might be behind all this? Idk



Author's Response:

I can promise that she isn't.